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MEGAtive

Hi Lasu-san~
Mod per requested on my queue and PM

[General]
Metadate: Fine
Timing: Fine
Hitsound: Better you had the mapset Hitsounded


[NM]
Mods
Looks Good, and it nearly reach 2 star. Great Job indeed.

[HD]
Mods
00:14:775 - Felt awkward to play something like that over soft instrument. Try this. http://puu.sh/gvCFA/6b75d4e387.png
01:43:567 - I think single note would fit perfectly here.
01:44:171 - Rather than this, try http://puu.sh/gvCP8/7a18a6a844.png
01:45:178 - Single note. I think it fit well.
01:48:802 to 01:51:218 - I think Triple notes felt too much. Try use single or double notes.
02:01:084 - ^
02:05:816 - You can add more note here. Since the instrument still sounding here.

[R.Scarlet's HD+]
Mods
Good Job, Rube~

[AILK's MX]
Mods
00:02:997 - You can add note here.
00:04:608 - ^
00:06:722 - Extend the LN to 00:08:332
00:06:923 - Add a note here. In the previous pattern you add a note here.
00:07:124 (7124|1) - I suggest you to change the LN into a normal note.
00:07:326 - Add note here. The previous pattern uses that.
00:07:527 (7527|0) - Delete the LN. It felt unecessary placed there.
00:07:728 - Add note here. The previous pattern uses that.
00:07:930 (7930|2) - Delete the LN. Felt awkward there....
00:08:131 - Add note here. Previous pattern uses a note too.
00:08:332 - If you take my mod so far, you can use triple notes. LN is up to you.
00:09:440 - You can add note on 2. But first, you should move 00:09:339 (9339|1) to 3 or 4.
00:11:051 - You can add note on 1.
00:13:165 to 00:13:769 - What's with the LN ended at 1/8? I know you're trying to follow the Kick distort, but the distort ended on 00:13:366. Extend the LN to there, or simply change the LNs to normal notes.
00:13:869 - Add note here. There's a sound you can follow here.
00:13:970 to 00:14:071 - No, the right snapping is 1/8.
00:14:272 - Now, back with 1/4 snapping. Add note here. There's clearly a sound here.
00:21:822 - Delete a note. It didn't fit for 2 note since it only has a hihat (Or if you did a vocal mapping But that's discouraged).
00:22:225 - Delete 2 notes. It only has a hihat. Even a Vocal Mapping shouldn't grant a triple notes.
00:22:426 to 00:22:628 - Delete one note each triplets. Just two note is fitting for a kick.
00:35:010 to 00:35:614 - What's with the 1/4 stairs? Better you delete those 1/4, did 00:35:111 to 00:35:312 just like the pattern before, and add double notes on 00:35:514
00:35:916 to 00:36:520 - Um, you use the LN for the vocal, am I correct? Then your snapping isn't right. Those vocal started and ended on white and red lines.
00:37:527 to 00:38:131 - ^
00:41:151 - Suggest you delete the LN, and Add Double note here.
00:41:353 to 00:41:755 - 1/4 isn't right. Delete the one on blue lines, and make the Red line into Double.
00:41:755 to 00:41:856 - The correct snap is 1/8. Fix it.
00:47:796 to 00:47:896 - The snap is 1/8. Better fix it.
00:55:849 and next if you met one again - LN release and a started vocal don't sync so well. In fact, it would make player felt uneasy. Better you start an LN every a vocal starts.
01:15:178 to 01:15:581 - The pattern felt bland and didn't sync so well. How about this? http://puu.sh/gvC1H/892abda5cc.png
01:28:869 to 01:30:077 - Why the pattern like this? Better you change the doubles to singles.
01:37:527 (97527|1) - The LN ends on 01:37:930 and Delete 01:37:728 (97728|2).
01:50:413 - ^
02:02:695 to the end of LN - The notes in the center didn't fit well. Delete them, or refer to Rube's HD+ for a good base.

Yeah, moimoi~
Good Luck for Ranked owo
Shooting a star~
Topic Starter
-LASU-

MEGAtive wrote:


Hi Lasu-san~
Mod per requested on my queue and PM

[General]
Metadate: Fine
Timing: Fine
Hitsound: Better you had the mapset Hitsounded

mod
[NM]
Looks Good, and it nearly reach 2 star. Great Job indeed.

[HD]
00:14:775 - Felt awkward to play something like that over soft instrument. Try this. http://puu.sh/gvCFA/6b75d4e387.png
01:43:567 - I think single note would fit perfectly here.
01:44:171 - Rather than this, try http://puu.sh/gvCP8/7a18a6a844.png
01:45:178 - Single note. I think it fit well.
01:48:802 to 01:51:218 - I think Triple notes felt too much. Try use single or double notes.
02:01:084 - ^
02:05:816 - You can add more note here. Since the instrument still sounding here.

Yeah, moimoi~
Good Luck for Ranked owo
Shooting a star~
mod thx ;)
Ginshu
=w=)/

My Column :
1|2|3|4


NM
• 01:32:494 - add note 3
• 01:43:769 - add note 4 for cymbal
• 01:45:379 - add note 3
• 01:51:822 - add note 1
• 01:53:433 - add note 4

HD
• 00:42:963 - ~ 00:43:769 - , 00:44:574 - ~ 00:45:379 - i don't understand, why 1/4 ?
• 01:23:232 - ~ 01:24:037 - , 01:24:843 - ~ 01:25:648 - ^same

HD+
• 00:42:661 (42661|2) - delete, no sound
• 00:44:272 (44272|2) - ^
• 01:15:681 (75681|2) - ^
• 02:01:084 - ~ 02:01:889 - you can make 1/4 if you follow bass sound

MX
• 00:14:020 - add note (1/8)
• 00:14:272 - add note
• 00:28:517 - add note (1/8)
• 00:28:970 (28970|1) - delete, no sound
• 00:35:312 - & 00:35:514 - add note for bass
• 00:41:353 (41353|0,41453|1,41554|2,41655|3) - stairs is not fit with the sound, my suggest


• 00:41:806 - add note (1/8)
• 00:42:057 (42057|3) - move to 2
• 00:51:822 - ~ 00:53:232 - change like this


• 01:01:889 - ~ 01:03:098 - i think, it is overmap, why put 3 or 4 note ? i don't hear loud sound :(
• 01:08:785 - add note (1/8)
• 01:15:228 - ^
• 01:37:326 - ~ 01:38:534 - same as 01:01:889 - ~ 01:03:098 -
• 01:44:222 - add note (1/8)
• 01:50:212 - ~ 01:51:420 - same as 01:01:889 - ~ 01:03:098 -
• 01:57:108 - add note (1/8
• 01:57:561 (117561|1) - delete, no sound

good luck :D
RuberusuScarlet

LNP- wrote:

=w=)/

My Column :
1|2|3|4


[box=HD+]• 00:42:661 (42661|2) - delete, no sound
• 00:44:272 (44272|2) - ^
• 01:15:681 (75681|2) - ^
• 02:01:084 - ~ 02:01:889 - you can make 1/4 if you follow bass sound all fixed
mod thanks >w<
Topic Starter
-LASU-

LNP- wrote:

=w=)/

My Column :
1|2|3|4


mod
NM
• 01:32:494 - add note 3 no thanks(not follow sound)
• 01:43:769 - add note 4 for cymbal ^
• 01:45:379 - add note 3 ^
• 01:51:822 - add note 1 ^
• 01:53:433 - add note 4 ^

HD
• 00:42:963 - ~ 00:43:769 - , 00:44:574 - ~ 00:45:379 - i don't understand, why 1/4 ?
• 01:23:232 - ~ 01:24:037 - , 01:24:843 - ~ 01:25:648 - ^same
Because NM,HD difficulty difference not spread
good luck :D
mod thx ;)
RuberusuScarlet

-LASU- wrote:

PiraTom wrote:

最初に、NMとHDの難易度が大きく離れすぎているのではないかと思います。
NMはとても簡単すぎて、HDが難しすぎるのが原因だと思われます。
現在のNMをEZとして新しくNMを作るか、HDを大きく易化させるかをするべきでしょう。
最近のRanked,Qualifiedの譜面を観てみると、そんなに難易度差が開いてるとは思いません。(NM,HD差が1.00超えてるのもあります。)
差がギリ1.00(ingame)以下なので、大丈夫かと思います
確かに難易度の差は大きいのですが基準?としてはSD差1.5ぐらいまでとされてます(BPMやキー数によって更に大きく離れてしまうものもありますが)
AILK

Verniy_Chan wrote:

4K = |1|2|3|4|


AILK's MX
00:02:997 add note stair sound?
00:04:608 ^
done.
and 00:01:890 to 00:05:111 repattern.


00:07:326 add note
00:07:527 (7527|2) - move to 00:07:326
00:07:728 and 00:08:131 add note.
00:07:930 (7930|3) - move 2


00:16:386 add note high pitch + Kiai
add note 2.

00:35:312 add note follow beat sound like 00:34:910
00:35:514 ^
done.

00:47:393 add note? beat sound?
done.(repattern)

00:47:896 - 00:48:098 it will be nice if you make stair patter this
Sorry. This sound is match, stair pattern can not make.

00:56:655 add note + Kiai
add note 3

01:15:178 (75178|1,75279|0) Ctrl + G
done.
and 01:14:574 to 01:14:977 repattern.


01:20:816 add note for beat sound?
add note 2,3.
01:21:218 add note 3.


01:29:876 try like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2867966
done.(but from 01:29:675 )

01:59:473 add note?
No thanks.

02:05:816 ^
done.

Good~
[/notice]
huehue~ I like this song (。♥‿♥。)

Good Luck -nya~ (づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ

PiraTom wrote:

AILK's MX
まず、全体で曲を聴いてノートを置いていない箇所が非常に多すぎます。
サビの部分等、譜面の再構成を提案します。

00:13:165 (13165|0,13366|1,13567|2,13769|3) - 何の音を拾っているのですか?小さすぎるLongNoteはUnranked対象です。
00:13:165 to 00:14:171 repattern.

00:22:829 - ノートを一つ追加してください。
done.

00:28:970 (28970|1) - No Soundです、削除してください。
done.

00:51:822 ~ 00:53:232 曲を聴いて再配置してください。
done.

00:55:849 - ボーカル音としてLongNoteを置いてください(00:56:252まで)
00:56:252 - ^(00:56:655まで)
done.

01:01:889 (61889|1,61889|2,62091|1,62292|3,62292|0,62494|2,62494|3)
01:02:695 ~ 01:03:098までの部分を強調するためにノートを減らしましょう。
01:50:212 (110212|1,110212|2,110413|1,110413|0,110614|3,110614|0,110816|2,110816|3) -
ここも同様です。
done.

01:30:883 (90883|2) - LongNoteとして取れる音がありません、削除するかノートに変えてください。
音自体はあるので、LNの長さを変更。
01:32:091 - ボーカル音としてLongNoteを置いてください(01:32:494まで
一例を挙げておきます。https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2868416
done.

01:36:923 (96923|3) - ノートに置き換えてください。
done.

01:44:675 (104675|2) - No Soundです、削除してください。
done.

01:56:252 - ドラム音でノートを一つか二つ追加してください。
done.

01:57:561 (117561|1) - No Soundです、削除してください。
done.

Rankedには非常に遠い譜面だと感じましたが、これからも頑張ってください。
GOOD LUCK

Brian_Ex wrote:


4K = |1|2|3|4|


AILK's MX
from 01:25:648 - to 01:27:259 - i suggest you add SV in here, like ruberusu did

01:32:091 - add SV x2 then at 01:32:192 - add SV x0,10 and feel the difference =w=)b
umm.... I was consideration of SV. :shock:
But, many people hate it. :(
I want to add When also there is a demand from other people. :idea:


Lovely streams again <3
thanks ;)

MEGAtive wrote:

[AILK's MX]
Mods
00:02:997 - You can add note here.
00:04:608 - ^
done.

00:06:722 - Extend the LN to 00:08:332
done.

00:06:923 - Add a note here. In the previous pattern you add a note here.
no thanks.

00:07:124 (7124|1) - I suggest you to change the LN into a normal note.
00:07:326 - Add note here. The previous pattern uses that.
00:07:527 (7527|0) - Delete the LN. It felt unecessary placed there.
00:07:728 - Add note here. The previous pattern uses that.
00:07:930 (7930|2) - Delete the LN. Felt awkward there....
00:08:131 - Add note here. Previous pattern uses a note too.
all done.

00:08:332 - If you take my mod so far, you can use triple notes. LN is up to you.
done.

00:09:440 - You can add note on 2. But first, you should move 00:09:339 (9339|1) to 3 or 4.
00:11:051 - You can add note on 1.
done.

00:13:165 to 00:13:769 - What's with the LN ended at 1/8? I know you're trying to follow the Kick distort, but the distort ended on 00:13:366. Extend the LN to there, or simply change the LNs to normal notes.
00:13:869 - Add note here. There's a sound you can follow here.
00:13:970 to 00:14:071 - No, the right snapping is 1/8.
00:14:272 - Now, back with 1/4 snapping. Add note here. There's clearly a sound here.
all done.

00:21:822 - Delete a note. It didn't fit for 2 note since it only has a hihat (Or if you did a vocal mapping But that's discouraged).
00:22:225 - Delete 2 notes. It only has a hihat. Even a Vocal Mapping shouldn't grant a triple notes.
00:22:426 to 00:22:628 - Delete one note each triplets. Just two note is fitting for a kick.
done.

00:35:010 to 00:35:614 - What's with the 1/4 stairs? Better you delete those 1/4, did 00:35:111 to 00:35:312 just like the pattern before, and add double notes on 00:35:514
done.

00:35:916 to 00:36:520 - Um, you use the LN for the vocal, am I correct? Then your snapping isn't right. Those vocal started and ended on white and red lines.
00:37:527 to 00:38:131 - ^
This LN is no vocal. piano? Synthesizer? sound.
And I'm sorry difficult to understand picking up a lot of sound. :|


00:41:151 - Suggest you delete the LN, and Add Double note here.
done.

00:41:353 to 00:41:755 - 1/4 isn't right. Delete the one on blue lines, and make the Red line into Double.
00:41:755 to 00:41:856 - The correct snap is 1/8. Fix it.
00:47:796 to 00:47:896 - The snap is 1/8. Better fix it.
done.

00:55:849 and next if you met one again - LN release and a started vocal don't sync so well. In fact, it would make player felt uneasy. Better you start an LN every a vocal starts.
done.

01:15:178 to 01:15:581 - The pattern felt bland and didn't sync so well. How about this? http://puu.sh/gvC1H/892abda5cc.png
done.

01:28:869 to 01:30:077 - Why the pattern like this? Better you change the doubles to singles.
Fix. Please point out if there is yet problem.

01:37:527 (97527|1) - The LN ends on 01:37:930 and Delete 01:37:728 (97728|2).
01:50:413 - ^
done.

02:02:695 to the end of LN - The notes in the center didn't fit well. Delete them, or refer to Rube's HD+ for a good base.
done.

LNP- wrote:

=w=)/

My Column :
1|2|3|4


MX
• 00:14:020 - add note (1/8)
• 00:14:272 - add note
• 00:28:517 - add note (1/8)
• 00:28:970 (28970|1) - delete, no sound
• 00:35:312 - & 00:35:514 - add note for bass
• 00:41:353 (41353|0,41453|1,41554|2,41655|3) - stairs is not fit with the sound, my suggest


• 00:41:806 - add note (1/8)
• 00:42:057 (42057|3) - move to 2
• 00:51:822 - ~ 00:53:232 - change like this


• 01:01:889 - ~ 01:03:098 - i think, it is overmap, why put 3 or 4 note ? i don't hear loud sound :(
• 01:08:785 - add note (1/8)
• 01:15:228 - ^
• 01:37:326 - ~ 01:38:534 - same as 01:01:889 - ~ 01:03:098 -
• 01:44:222 - add note (1/8)
• 01:50:212 - ~ 01:51:420 - same as 01:01:889 - ~ 01:03:098 -
• 01:57:108 - add note (1/8
• 01:57:561 (117561|1) - delete, no sound
all done.

good luck :D
Everyone modding thanks! :)
Kawawa
HAI '- ^
col 1/2/3/4
too late.. these days lazy. sorry .-.
First
1. about "audio preview point set" ▷ u consider change move to "00:55:849 - "
beacuse of the voice part of the song starts from here, I would recommend this place.

2. *if do not hit-sounding map, i can not say the exact opinions about problem.

3. i cosndier mapper style, and suggestion. :3

4. again. my col 1/2/3/4

NM
All the pitches can not be expressed exact
BUT, Possible must be correctly(If you do not use a mirror pattern)
△00:02:494 (2494|1,2695|1,2896|2,2997|3,3299|2,3500|0) - = 00:04:104 (4104|1,4306|1,4507|3,4608|2,4910|1,5111|0) - same pitch.
for example, u can this(this is just example )▽

^if use mirror pattern. or dont use mirror pattern, just u can same pitch pattern.
so, i suggest u this part rearrange
01:10:145 (70145|0,70346|0,70547|2,70648|3,70950|0,71151|1,71755|0,71957|0,72158|2,72259|1,72561|3,72762|0,72762|1) - ^same.

00:07:124 (7124|2,7326|0) - move one right
^consider the following pitch and conflict this 00:06:118 (6118|2,6520|0) -
00:08:332 (8332|2) - move to 4

01:13:064 (73064|3,73366|2) - Ctrl + G pitch relevance
00:02:695 (2695|2) - move to 2
00:03:299 (3299|1,3500|2) - Ctrl + H
00:04:104 (4104|2,4306|3) - move to

HD
00:02:695 (2695|2) - move to 2
00:03:299 (3299|1,3500|2) - Ctrl + H
00:04:104 (4104|2,4306|3,4507|2,4608|1,4910|0,5111|2) - also, u consider arrange

00:13:165 (13165|0,13165|2,13366|1,13567|3,13769|1,13869|2,13970|1,14071|0,14171|1,14272|2) - suggestion ▽

^ for example 00:13:869 - this streaming is dont need.

00:15:581 - one note remove. and 00:15:983 - add one note
^ 00:15:983 - crash, 00:15:581 - and no bass

00:40:145 (40145|2) - delete
00:43:769 (43769|3) - move to 1

00:47:192 - delete one and 00:47:393 - add one ^^^same reason.

00:59:071 (59071|1,59272|0) - Ctrl + G for note shape
01:01:386 (61386|3) - move to 2 and 01:01:487 (61487|0) - move to 4
01:09:339 (69339|3,69541|2) - Ctrl + G

01:15:178 (75178|0,75178|3,75279|2,75379|3,75480|0,75581|1,75581|3) - suggestion ▽

R'S HD+
00:09:541 (9541|1,9742|0) - Ctrl + G. note relevance. like this 00:10:950 (10950|2,11051|1,11151|0) -
00:11:856 (11856|0) - move to 3? or 00:11:856 (11856|0,11957|1) - move right one
00:14:373 - add at 1. < if u add, can to be more better smooth play..

SV 00:29:272 - x0.9? intend?
^ i do not recommend this. consider delete this.
this is same streaming. so SV is not suited


00:42:057 (42057|2,42158|1) - Ctrl + G for shape. just suggstion.

00:55:044 - this SV, I think this is ok. but i suggestion x0.7
^SV 0.9 and 1.0, there is no difference

01:05:715 (65715|0,65816|1,65916|2) - move right one

01:09:541 - and 01:14:373 - i suggest u. consider once again. about this SV
01:57:863 - ^same


i think this part should same chord
01:44:171 (104171|3,104222|2,104272|1,104373|0,104473|2,104574|1,104574|3) -
01:50:614 (110614|0,110665|1,110715|2,110816|0,110816|3,110916|2,111017|1,111017|3) -
01:57:057 (117057|3,117108|2,117158|1,117259|0,117359|1,117460|0,117460|2) -
△ therefore conclusion is 01:44:373 - add at one note OR 01:50:816 - add one remove

AIL's MX
00:14:071 (14071|0) - delete or? If you are using two chord here, I suggest this. ▽

^13:970 ~ 14:171

00:44:272 (44272|3,44373|1) - Ctrl + G?, just suggestion. for note shape
00:58:366 (58366|0,58467|1) - Ctrl+ G
01:10:547 (70547|2,70648|1) - Ctrl + H
RuberusuScarlet

KawaEE wrote:

[box=R'S HD+]00:09:541 (9541|1,9742|0) - Ctrl + G. note relevance. like this 00:10:950 (10950|2,11051|1,11151|0) - fixed
00:11:856 (11856|0) - move to 3? or 00:11:856 (11856|0,11957|1) - move right one move to 3
00:14:373 - add at 1. < if u add, can to be more better smooth play.. fixed

SV 00:29:272 - x0.9? intend?
^ i do not recommend this. consider delete this.
this is same streaming. so SV is not suited ×0.9 :arrow: ×1, and 00:42:158 - SV delete


00:42:057 (42057|2,42158|1) - Ctrl + G for shape. just suggstion. fixed

00:55:044 - this SV, I think this is ok. but i suggestion x0.7 fixed
^SV 0.9 and 1.0, there is no difference

01:05:715 (65715|0,65816|1,65916|2) - move right one 01:05:514 (65514|1,65614|3) - Ctrl+G

01:09:541 - and 01:14:373 - i suggest u. consider once again. about this SV SV delete
01:57:863 - ^same ^


i think this part should same chord
01:44:171 (104171|3,104222|2,104272|1,104373|0,104473|2,104574|1,104574|3) -
01:50:614 (110614|0,110665|1,110715|2,110816|0,110816|3,110916|2,111017|1,111017|3) -
01:57:057 (117057|3,117108|2,117158|1,117259|0,117359|1,117460|0,117460|2) -
△ therefore conclusion is 01:44:373 - add at one note OR 01:50:816 - add one remove
keep. 01:50:816 - same sound as 01:50:212 - and 01:50:413 - [
mod thanks ~
Topic Starter
-LASU-

KawaEE wrote:

HAI '- ^ Hi Kawa san
col 1/2/3/4
too late.. these days lazy. sorry .-. 신경 안 쓰셔도 돼요
First
1. about "audio preview point set" ▷ u consider change move to "00:55:849 - "
beacuse of the voice part of the song starts from here, I would recommend this place. preview point set all diff change

2. *if do not hit-sounding map, i can not say the exact opinions about problem. Sorry I will add later hitsound

3. i cosndier mapper style, and suggestion. :3

4. again. my col 1/2/3/4

mod
NM
All the pitches can not be expressed exact
BUT, Possible must be correctly(If you do not use a mirror pattern)
△00:02:494 (2494|1,2695|1,2896|2,2997|3,3299|2,3500|0) - = 00:04:104 (4104|1,4306|1,4507|3,4608|2,4910|1,5111|0) - same pitch.
for example, u can this(this is just example )▽

^if use mirror pattern. or dont use mirror pattern, just u can same pitch pattern.
so, i suggest u this part rearrange
01:10:145 (70145|0,70346|0,70547|2,70648|3,70950|0,71151|1,71755|0,71957|0,72158|2,72259|1,72561|3,72762|0,72762|1) - ^same.

00:07:124 (7124|2,7326|0) - move one right
^consider the following pitch and conflict this 00:06:118 (6118|2,6520|0) -
00:08:332 (8332|2) - move to 4

01:13:064 (73064|3,73366|2) - Ctrl + G pitch relevance
00:02:695 (2695|2) - move to 2
00:03:299 (3299|1,3500|2) - Ctrl + H
00:04:104 (4104|2,4306|3) - move to
pattern change & move done
HD
00:02:695 (2695|2) - move to 2 move
00:03:299 (3299|1,3500|2) - Ctrl + H ok
00:04:104 (4104|2,4306|3,4507|2,4608|1,4910|0,5111|2) - also, u consider arrange repattern

00:13:165 (13165|0,13165|2,13366|1,13567|3,13769|1,13869|2,13970|1,14071|0,14171|1,14272|2) - suggestion ▽

^ for example 00:13:869 - this streaming is dont need.
no thanks
00:15:581 - one note remove. and 00:15:581 -add one note
^ 00:15:983 - crash, 00:15:581 - and no bass
remove and added
00:40:145 (40145|2) - delete delete
00:43:769 (43769|3) - move to 1 move

00:47:192 - delete one and 00:47:393 - add one ^^^same reason.
done
00:59:071 (59071|1,59272|0) - Ctrl + G for note shape ok
01:01:386 (61386|3) - move to 2 and 01:01:487 (61487|0) - move to 4 move
01:09:339 (69339|3,69541|2) - Ctrl + G ok

01:15:178 (75178|0,75178|3,75279|2,75379|3,75480|0,75581|1,75581|3) - suggestion ▽
no thanks
nice mod~ mod thx(^ω^)
Kruzon


Hi, my 4K column format is as usual: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

HD

SPOILER
Suggestion:
00:13:165 (13165|0,13165|2) - I think you can put 1 more note here on 4, signifying ending of the starting part. Granted, if you agreed then you may move
00:12:963 (12963|3) - to 2

00:43:970 (43970|2) - Add note to 3
00:44:373 (44373|2) - Add note to 3
00:54:641 (54641|0) - deserve 1 more note
01:08:735 (68735|1,68735|0,68836|2) - I think 1/8 snap divisor fit wells here, perhaps re-pattern
01:11:151 (71151|3) - move to 1, i suggest to not overused jack notes but instead follow this sequence 01:12:561 (72561|2,72561|3,72762|0,72762|1) -

01:24:037 (84037|0) - Add note to 2 and 01:24:440 (84440|1) - move to 3
01:32:091 (92091|2) - Add single note to 3 because 01:31:285 (91285|2,91688|0,91688|3,91688|1,92091|2) - notes should represents vocal: ku-ra-e
01:32:494 (92494|2,92594|1) - Press Ctrl + H

01:34:205 (94205|0) - move to 2, better flow in my opinion
01:34:910 (94910|3,95111|3,95312|3,95514|3) - excessive jacks, add more variety to pattern- How about:
01:35:111 (95111|3) - move to 1
01:35:514 (95514|3) - move to 3, repeat sequences 01:35:514 (95514|2,95614|1,95916|2,96017|1,96319|2,96420|1) -

01:45:379 (105379|1,105379|3,105379|0) - has the loudest sound: Vocal + Drum + loud chime, i recommend you should put 4 notes on this line, and
01:45:480 (105480|2,105581|1) - you may delete them

--

Ruberusu's HD+

SPOILER
00:02:896 (2896|2,3098|1) - this feels kinda off, 00:03:098 (3098|1) - should be on the blue line 00:02:997 (2997|1) -
00:04:708 (4708|2) - the same for this, move to blue line

00:16:185 (16185|3) - this has no meaning at all, I'm aware you need it for the LN patterning though.. And also 00:15:983 (15983|0) - has poor notes
base despite the loudness- at least 2 notes should be added here.
So my recommendation is: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2885400

00:17:494 (17494|0,17594|1,17594|2,17695|0,17796|3,17896|1,17997|0,17997|2,18098|1) - Feels kinda randomly plotted, the vibe doesn't match with the song. I suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2885415 Also, inputting ascending dual notes gives meaning to the current part of the song
00:17:192 (17192|0,17192|1,17594|1,17594|2,17997|3,17997|2) -

00:18:400 (18400|3) - move to 1 for better flow
00:18:500 (18500|0) - move to 4
00:19:205 (19205|0) - suggest move to 3 and 00:19:306 (19306|2) - move to 2 for pattern

00:22:426 (22426|0,22628|0,22829|0) - This is correct and fitting with the current part of the song, but this 00:23:232 (23232|0,23433|0,23634|0) - is definitely not. try to listen deeply and see why i said so- In any case, I think you should re-arrange this 00:23:232 (23232|0,23433|0,23634|0) -
My suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2885455

* On the side note, this 00:23:836 (23836|1) - should be moved to 1 for flow and pattern repetition 00:23:232 (23232|3,23433|3,23836|0,24037|0) -

00:42:561 (42561|1,42762|1) - feels awkward, how about Ctrl + H this 00:42:762 (42762|1,42863|2) -
00:48:198 (48198|1,48400|1,48601|1) - omega good job
00:59:775 (59775|2) - move to 4 more comfortable + chain patterns 00:59:272 (59272|0,59473|0,59574|3,59775|3,59876|0,60077|0) -

01:01:084 (61084|0,61285|0,61487|0) - something feels wrong here owo i think this jack notes 01:01:084 (61084|0,61285|0,61487|0) - should
start on the red line 01:00:883 (60883|0) - for fitting along the vocal sound ku-ka-ko. (This will break pattern, so If you decided to change it, then I leave re-patterning in your hands)

01:04:708 (64708|1,64708|0) - Add 1 more note, considerably louder sound here

- Mod Ends -


Good luck with your map c:
Topic Starter
-LASU-

Kruzon wrote:



Hi, my 4K column format is as usual: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

HD

SPOILER
Suggestion:
00:13:165 (13165|0,13165|2) - I think you can put 1 more note here on 4, signifying ending of the starting part. Granted, if you agreed then you may move
00:12:963 (12963|3) - to 2
repattern
00:43:970 (43970|2) - Add note to 3 no thanks
00:44:373 (44373|2) - Add note to 3 ^
00:54:641 (54641|0) - deserve 1 more note ^
01:08:735 (68735|1,68735|0,68836|2) - I think 1/8 snap divisor fit wells here, perhaps re-pattern I know 1/8 but it's too hard I have been unified in 1/4
01:11:151 (71151|3) - move to 1, i suggest to not overused jack notes but instead follow this sequence 01:12:561 (72561|2,72561|3,72762|0,72762|1) -
keep
01:24:037 (84037|0) - Add note to 2 and 01:24:440 (84440|1) - move to 3 ^
01:32:091 (92091|2) - Add single note to 3 because 01:31:285 (91285|2,91688|0,91688|3,91688|1,92091|2) - notes should represents vocal: ku-ra-e
add note 3
01:32:494 (92494|2,92594|1) - Press Ctrl + H

01:34:205 (94205|0) - move to 2, better flow in my opinion hand balance
01:34:910 (94910|3,95111|3,95312|3,95514|3) - excessive jacks, add more variety to pattern- How about:
01:35:111 (95111|3) - move to 1
01:35:514 (95514|3) - move to 3, repeat sequences 01:35:514 (95514|2,95614|1,95916|2,96017|1,96319|2,96420|1) -

01:45:379 (105379|1,105379|3,105379|0) - has the loudest sound: Vocal + Drum + loud chime, i recommend you should put 4 notes on this line, and
01:45:480 (105480|2,105581|1) - you may delete them keep

- Mod Ends -


Good luck with your map c:
mod thx ;)
RuberusuScarlet

Kruzon wrote:


Ruberusu's HD+

00:02:896 (2896|2,3098|1) - this feels kinda off, 00:03:098 (3098|1) - should be on the blue line 00:02:997 (2997|1) -
00:04:708 (4708|2) - the same for this, move to blue line no change. it's piano sound note

00:16:185 (16185|3) - this has no meaning at all, I'm aware you need it for the LN patterning though.. And also 00:15:983 (15983|0) - has poor notes
base despite the loudness- at least 2 notes should be added here.
So my recommendation is: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2885400 fixed

00:17:494 (17494|0,17594|1,17594|2,17695|0,17796|3,17896|1,17997|0,17997|2,18098|1) - Feels kinda randomly plotted, the vibe doesn't match with the song. I suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2885415 Also, inputting ascending dual notes gives meaning to the current part of the song
00:17:192 (17192|0,17192|1,17594|1,17594|2,17997|3,17997|2) - fixed

00:18:400 (18400|3) - move to 1 for better flow fixed
00:18:500 (18500|0) - move to 4 fixed
00:19:205 (19205|0) - suggest move to 3 and 00:19:306 (19306|2) - move to 2 for pattern fixed

00:22:426 (22426|0,22628|0,22829|0) - This is correct and fitting with the current part of the song, but this 00:23:232 (23232|0,23433|0,23634|0) - is definitely not. try to listen deeply and see why i said so- In any case, I think you should re-arrange this 00:23:232 (23232|0,23433|0,23634|0) -
My suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2885455 fixed

* On the side note, this 00:23:836 (23836|1) - should be moved to 1 for flow and pattern repetition 00:23:232 (23232|3,23433|3,23836|0,24037|0) - fixed

00:42:561 (42561|1,42762|1) - feels awkward, how about Ctrl + H this 00:42:762 (42762|1,42863|2) - fixed
00:48:198 (48198|1,48400|1,48601|1) - omega good job >w<
00:59:775 (59775|2) - move to 4 more comfortable + chain patterns 00:59:272 (59272|0,59473|0,59574|3,59775|3,59876|0,60077|0) - fixed

01:01:084 (61084|0,61285|0,61487|0) - something feels wrong here owo i think this jack notes 01:01:084 (61084|0,61285|0,61487|0) - should
start on the red line 01:00:883 (60883|0) - for fitting along the vocal sound ku-ka-ko. (This will break pattern, so If you decided to change it, then I leave re-patterning in your hands) no change

01:04:708 (64708|1,64708|0) - Add 1 more note, considerably louder sound here add 4
mod thanks ~
Aeven
Modのやりかたわかりますぇん!( ´◔ ‸◔`)
プレーしてみて気になったところだけ書いてます('、3_ヽ)_

NM
02:04:608と02:05:816にノート1個ずつ置いていいかも?

AILK's MX
01:21:621 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2890888 こんな配置はどうでしょう。曲は1/8だけど1/4で置いてあったので修正してみてはどうでしょうか。個人的にはここは1/8で取ったほうが好きです :)
02:04:608 ノート1個追加

Ranked待ってます(ง ˙ω˙)วGL
Topic Starter
-LASU-

Aeven wrote:

Modのやりかたわかりますぇん!( ´◔ ‸◔`)
プレーしてみて気になったところだけ書いてます('、3_ヽ)_

NM→HD
02:04:608と02:05:816にノート1個ずつ置いていいかも?
両方とも追加しました。

Ranked待ってます(ง ˙ω˙)วGL
modどうもでした(^ω^)
momogon3
NM

00:14:775 (14775|1) -
00:15:983 (15983|2) - ここでLNを切ったほうが曲的にいいかなと思います!

00:37:124 (37124|3) - これがLNなら
00:38:735 (38735|3) - これもLNにしたほうがわかりやすいかも!

HD

01:44:574 (104574|0) - ここだけ単発なのが変だと思うので1個たして同時押しにしたほうが綺麗かな
Topic Starter
-LASU-

momogon3 wrote:

mod
NM
00:14:775 (14775|1) -
00:15:983 (15983|2) - ここでLNを切ったほうが曲的にいいかなと思います!
00:37:124 (37124|3) - これがLNなら
00:38:735 (38735|3) - これもLNにしたほうがわかりやすいかも!
all done
HD
01:44:574 (104574|0) - ここだけ単発なのが変だと思うので1個たして同時押しにしたほうが綺麗かな ここらへん再配置しました。
mod thx! ;)
AILK

KawaEE wrote:

AIL's MX
00:14:071 (14071|0) - delete or? If you are using two chord here, I suggest this. ▽

^13:970 ~ 14:171
fix.

00:44:272 (44272|3,44373|1) - Ctrl + G?, just suggestion. for note shape
done.

00:58:366 (58366|0,58467|1) - Ctrl+ G
done.

01:10:547 (70547|2,70648|1) - Ctrl + H
done.

Aeven wrote:

AILK's MX
01:21:621 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2890888 こんな配置はどうでしょう。曲は1/8だけど1/4で置いてあったので修正してみてはどうでしょうか。個人的にはここは1/8で取ったほうが好きです :)
done.
その手前も修正した為、提案とは若干配置変わってます。


02:04:608 ノート1個追加
done.

00:22:225 (22225|0) - LN -> normal note.
00:42:158 to 00:47:622 fix.
00:49:406 to 00:50:212 and, 00:51:017 to 00:53:232 fix.
01:19:205 to 01:21:420 fix.


Thankyou all :)
x M e l
Hi Lasu :D mod for req via pm

columns: 1|2|3|4

NM
I recommend don't follow vocal so much, follow the rythm is better
00:22:628 - delete one note
01:01:048 (61084|1) - move to 4
01:02:896 - delete one note

HD
don't put doubles where aren't stronger sounds
00:55:044 - why two lns?
01:41:755 - add note?

R.Scarlet's HD+
00:47:896 (47896|2) - move to 4 for balance
01:49:406 - add note
01:51:420 - why triple?

that's all :D nice map, good luck
Topic Starter
-LASU-

Meiko Senpai wrote:

Hi Lasu :D mod for req via pm Hi

columns: 1|2|3|4

NM
I recommend don't follow vocal so much, follow the rythm is better
00:22:628 - delete one note 00:21:621 - 00:22:628 - melody+vocal note
01:01:048 (61084|1) - move to 4 move
01:02:896 - delete one note same

HD
don't put doubles where aren't stronger sounds
00:55:044 - why two lns? delete LN 1 notes
01:41:755 - add note? no thanks

that's all :D nice map, good luck
mod thx~
RuberusuScarlet

Meiko Senpai wrote:

Hi Lasu :D mod for req via pm

columns: 1|2|3|4

[R.Scarlet's HD+]00:47:896 (47896|2) - move to 4 for balance no change
01:49:406 - add note add 4
01:51:420 - why triple? strong sound

that's all :D nice map, good luck
mod thanks ~
Fubukicat
Hi there nyan~ -LASU- mod request from ✿Nekoworks
hope it will help :3

Ma mi mu me mod
Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4
[Opinion]
Really fun streamy map , even with my not that good skill that's a good map to practice accu on 1/4 :3
SV's are kawaii *w*
[AILK's MX]
nyahllo~ AILK
00:11:453 (11453|1) - there is a melody sound here ( should add imo)
00:48:500 (48500|2) - I think a drum roll would be cool here , like previous part 01:09:339 (69339|1,69440|2,69541|1,69541|3) - , (up to you )
01:01:688 (61688|1) - add on 2 ( drum sound here )
00:28:869 (28869|0) - add one more note , ( you did that for next parts exemple here : 01:09:138 (69138|3,69138|0) - )
01:44:574 (104574|3) - add on 2 or 4 ^ same reason
01:57:460 (117460|0) - add on 1 ^
funny MX :3
[R.Scarlet's HD+]
nyaho~ Rubei ~
if following instru (piano+ the other sound )
add here
00:02:997 (2997|0) -
00:04:608 (4608|3) -
( tbh At first play I didn't catch up the rythm since instinctively you'll play the both instrument so brain gotta be confuse :3)
everything else seems fine to me , nice diff
[HD]
00:04:910 (4910|1,5111|2) - Ctrl+J , for pitch relevancy
00:48:198 (48198|2) - if the chords follow vocal drum , wich seems to be the case here , you should add one note on 3
Pretty good flows here :3
[NM]
00:04:910 (4910|1,5111|2) - Ctrl+J same reason as HD diff
01:07:930 (67930|2) - add note in 1/1 until here : 01:09:541 (69541|3,69541|0) - should look like this this
01:14:373 (74373|0) - add on 1 for cymbal sound
01:17:594 (77594|3) - ^ same
01:22:426 (82426|3) - ^ add
01:24:037 (84037|1) - add on 2 ^ (optional )

Good mappu~ >w< , Good Luck , have a nice day ^^/
Take my stawwy :3
Topic Starter
-LASU-

Eternalie wrote:

Hi there nyan~ -LASU- mod request from ✿Nekoworks
hope it will help :3 Hi Eternalie san~

Ma mi mu me mod
Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4
[Opinion]
Really fun streamy map , even with my not that good skill that's a good map to practice accu on 1/4 :3
SV's are kawaii *w*
[HD]
00:04:910 (4910|1,5111|2) - Ctrl+J , for pitch relevancy ok
00:48:198 (48198|2) - if the chords follow vocal drum , wich seems to be the case here , you should add one note on 3 add note
Pretty good flows here :3
[NM]
00:04:910 (4910|1,5111|2) - Ctrl+J same reason as HD diff ok
01:07:930 (67930|2) - add note in 1/1 until here : 01:09:541 (69541|3,69541|0) - should look like this this
no thanks(like pattern)
01:14:373 (74373|0) - add on 1 for cymbal sound add note
01:17:594 (77594|3) - ^ same add note 4
01:22:426 (82426|3) - ^ add ^
01:24:037 (84037|1) - add on 2 ^ (optional ) no thanks

Good mappu~ >w< , Good Luck , have a nice day ^^/
Take my stawwy :3
mod thanks~>ω<
RuberusuScarlet

Eternalie wrote:

]Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4

[R.Scarlet's HD+]
nyaho~ Rubei ~
if following instru (piano+ the other sound )
add here
00:02:997 (2997|0) -
00:04:608 (4608|3) - all no change , 00:01:890 - to 00:08:332 - following bass piano and high note piano
( tbh At first play I didn't catch up the rythm since instinctively you'll play the both instrument so brain gotta be confuse :3)
everything else seems fine to me , nice diff
mod thanks
Critical_Star
Hi~ mod req from pm
below are just suggestion lol

NM
00:21:218 - suggest to add a note at column 4 :)
00:38:131 (38131|3,38433|0,38735|3) - CTRL+H
inverse LN pattern from 00:36:520 (36520|3,36822|0,37124|3)
if applied ^ , 00:38:936 (38936|1,38936|0) - move to 3 and 4 , 00:39:238 (39238|2,39238|3) - move to 2 and 3
01:04:708 - add note at 4?
01:05:111 - there is a kick here, add a note at 2?
02:02:695 (122695|0) - end till 02:05:916

HD
00:45:581 - i think there is no need for double note here(not very strong sound),better remove 1 note)
if applied ^ 00:45:581 remove the note at column 4 then add a note at column 4 in 00:45:681 ( since NM has a note at this sound)
00:46:386 (46386|1,46386|2) - same as above ^ remove a note at column 2 then add a note at column 2 in 00:46:487 (NM has a note for this sound)
00:54:641 - add a note here?
00:55:849 - in NM here have LN, better add a note or LN for pattern consistancy
00:56:252 - ^
01:15:379 (75379|3) - move to column 2? (make a stair)
01:19:406 (79406|1,79406|0,79809|2,79809|3,80212|0,80212|1) - better make it single note (soft sound)
01:24:445 - add a note here? like you do at 01:22:829 (82829|0,82829|1)
01:27:259 till 01:28:869 - suggest to add note follow the strong beat :3
Example: 01:27:661 , 01:27:863 , 01:28:165 , 01:28:265 , 01:28:467 , 01:28:668 - here you can add a note for the beats
01:43:567 - remove a note? (soft sound)
01:56:655 - add a note? (loud sound)
01:59:473 - add a note? (should have higher impact here :D)

R.Scarlet HD+
00:35:715 - add a note? (crash sound)
00:44:071 - suggest to add a note here. (here have loud sound)
00:54:641 00:54:843 - add a note like u do at 00:54:037 (54037|3,54037|1,54440|0,54440|2)?
01:10:346 - add a note here? (main sound)
01:10:648 - ^
01:11:151 - ^
01:11:957 - ^
01:12:259 - ^
01:53:433 - add a note? (crash sound)

AILK MX
00:01:084 - add a note? (high pitch sound)
00:01:487 - ^
01:10:648 - add a note? (main sound)
01:12:259 - ^
01:13:064 - ^
01:13:869 - ^
01:30:480 - add a note?
01:31:487 - add a LN at column 1 like in HD+?, (there is a long sound here too)
01:41:755 - add a note? (loud impact sound)
01:42:057 - ^
01:42:359 - ^
01:42:561 - ^
01:42:863 - ^
01:43:165 - ^
01:43:769 - ^
01:43:970 (103970|3,103970|2) - soft sound here, better remove 1 note
01:45:379 - add a note here? (here should have higher impact)
01:48:198 - ^
01:48:601 - ^
01:49:406 - ^
01:51:822 - ^
01:53:433 - ^
01:54:641 - ^
01:54:943 - ^
01:55:245 - ^
01:55:447 - ^
01:55:749 - ^
01:56:051 - ^
01:56:252 - ^
01:59:473 - ^
02:02:695 - ^


Nice song~ ^w^/,have a lucky star~ XD
RuberusuScarlet

Critical_Star wrote:

R.Scarlet HD+
00:35:715 - add a note? (crash sound) add 2
00:44:071 - suggest to add a note here. (here have loud sound) no change
00:54:641 00:54:843 - add a note like u do at 00:54:037 (54037|3,54037|1,54440|0,54440|2)? no change
01:10:346 - add a note here? (main sound) no change
01:10:648 - ^no change
01:11:151 - ^no change
01:11:957 - ^no change
01:12:259 - ^no change
01:53:433 - add a note? (crash sound) fixed
mod thanks
Topic Starter
-LASU-

Critical_Star wrote:

Hi~ mod req from pm
below are just suggestion lol

mod
NM
00:21:218 - suggest to add a note at column 4 :) add note
00:38:131 (38131|3,38433|0,38735|3) - CTRL+H
inverse LN pattern from 00:36:520 (36520|3,36822|0,37124|3)
if applied ^ , 00:38:936 (38936|1,38936|0) - move to 3 and 4 , 00:39:238 (39238|2,39238|3) - move to 2 and 3 no thanks
01:04:708 - add note at 4? ^
01:05:111 - there is a kick here, add a note at 2? ^
02:02:695 (122695|0) - end till 02:05:916 follow vocal

HD
00:45:581 - i think there is no need for double note here(not very strong sound),better remove 1 note)
if applied ^ 00:45:581 remove the note at column 4 then add a note at column 4 in 00:45:681 ( since NM has a note at this sound)
00:46:386 (46386|1,46386|2) - same as above ^ remove a note at column 2 then add a note at column 2 in 00:46:487 (NM has a note for this sound)
00:54:641 - add a note here?
00:55:849 - in NM here have LN, better add a note or LN for pattern consistancy LN NM follow vocal HD not follow vocal
00:56:252 - ^ ^
01:15:379 (75379|3) - move to column 2? (make a stair)
01:19:406 (79406|1,79406|0,79809|2,79809|3,80212|0,80212|1) - better make it single note (soft sound)
01:24:445 - add a note here? like you do at 01:22:829 (82829|0,82829|1)
01:27:259 till 01:28:869 - suggest to add note follow the strong beat :3
Example: 01:27:661 , 01:27:863 , 01:28:165 , 01:28:265 , 01:28:467 , 01:28:668 - here you can add a note for the beats
01:43:567 - remove a note? (soft sound)
01:56:655 - add a note? (loud sound)
01:59:473 - add a note? (should have higher impact here :D)

Nice song~ ^w^/,have a lucky star~ XD
mod thx~ ^w^
Julie
Sorry took me a while LOL
[HD]

00:12:762 (12762|1,12762|0) - not sure why suddendly 2 note here? XD

00:19:306 (19306|0) - delete no new sound

00:20:916 (20916|0) - ^

01:49:809 - hmm not mapping this sound with a whistle? XD

02:04:205 - hmm missing this sound?


[R.Scarlet's HD+]

Feel like the kiai part is really overmap, nearly always same rhythm while some part sound really low or nearly no sound xD. Probably reason also why it has more note then MX
Have like as much rhythmn as MX ><

00:59:574 (59574|3) - delete no new sound

01:28:869 (88869|0) - add clap

01:35:816 (95816|3) - delete no new sound

01:36:621 (96621|2) - ^


[AILK's MX]

00:12:963 (12963|0,12963|3,13165|3,13165|0) - Shouldn't be same column xD

00:39:943 (39943|2) - isn't this supose to be 2 normal note at 00:39:943 - and 00:40:044 -

00:44:171 - forgot clap here?

00:51:420 (51420|2) - ^

00:59:574 (59574|2) - delete no sound XD

01:06:017 (66017|2) - delete no new sound

01:08:332 (68332|1,68534|2) - add whistle?

01:11:453 - add a note, follow the piano since you mapped this 01:11:353 (71353|0,71554|1) - , should feel like triplet, piano here is easy to hear

01:18:802 (78802|2) - add clap

01:26:051 - want to add a note on 4 with whistle, that sound pretty easy to hear, and is a bit different from this part 01:26:252 - + XD

01:35:413 (95413|1) - delete no new sound

01:36:621 (96621|2) - ^

01:37:728 - forgot clap? Actually dont mind none here, but maybe add one for consistent? XD

01:38:332 - add clap, hear bass here too

01:41:655 (101655|0) - whistle here :D!!?

01:47:091 (107091|3) - delete no new sound

01:50:614 - just suggestion to keep consistent, no 1/8 triplet here with clap? and here 01:51:319 - no clap note? XD

02:03:098 (123098|2) - this sound your trying to map with whistle is here 02:02:997 - lolol

Nice MX, look pretty hard to map it XD

Actually pretty nice O.O... This is not an easy song to map, so gj. kudo~ :)

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Topic Starter
-LASU-

Julie wrote:

Sorry took me a while LOL
[HD]

00:12:762 (12762|1,12762|0) - not sure why suddendly 2 note here? XD 00:12:762 (12762|1) - delete

00:19:306 (19306|0) - delete no new sound no thanks

00:20:916 (20916|0) - ^ ^

01:49:809 - hmm not mapping this sound with a whistle? XD 01:48:601 - ~ 01:51:420 - I'm fit the vocal and 01:49:809 - not follow sound

02:04:205 - hmm missing this sound? add note 4

Actually pretty nice O.O... This is not an easy song to map, so gj. kudo~ :) (^ω^)b

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mod thx =w=
RuberusuScarlet

Julie wrote:

[R.Scarlet's HD+]

Feel like the kiai part is really overmap, nearly always same rhythm while some part sound really low or nearly no sound xD. Probably reason also why it has more note then MX
Have like as much rhythmn as MX ><

00:59:574 (59574|3) - delete no new sound

01:28:869 (88869|0) - add clap

01:35:816 (95816|3) - delete no new sound

01:36:621 (96621|2) - ^
sorry, all no change

mod thanks ~
AILK

Eternalie wrote:

AILK's MX
nyahllo~ AILK
00:11:453 (11453|1) - there is a melody sound here ( should add imo)
no thanks.

00:48:500 (48500|2) - I think a drum roll would be cool here , like previous part
done.

01:09:339 (69339|1,69440|2,69541|1,69541|3) - , (up to you )
In this state.

01:01:688 (61688|1) - add on 2 ( drum sound here )
done.
and, 01:37:326 add note 3


00:28:869 (28869|0) - add one more note , ( you did that for next parts exemple here : 01:09:138 (69138|3,69138|0) - )
add note 1
and, 00:29:272 (29272|0) - move 1 to 3


01:44:574 (104574|3) - add on 2 or 4 ^ same reason
add note 4

01:57:460 (117460|0) - add on 1 ^
done.

funny MX :3
Thanks >w<

Good mappu~ >w< , Good Luck , have a nice day ^^/
Take my stawwy :3

Critical_Star wrote:

AILK MX
00:01:084 - add a note? (high pitch sound)
00:01:487 - ^
umm... This sound is single tone. :?
In this state. :|


01:10:648 - add a note? (main sound)
done.
and, 01:10:749 (70749|0) - move 4 to 1


01:12:259 - ^
done.
and, 01:12:359 (72359|3) - move 2 to 4


01:13:064 - ^
01:13:869 - ^
01:12:762 to 01:14:171 delete LN. and fix.

01:30:480 - add a note?
no thanks.

01:31:487 - add a LN at column 1 like in HD+?, (there is a long sound here too)
add LN 4

01:41:755 - add a note? (loud impact sound)
01:42:057 - ^
01:42:359 - ^
01:42:561 - ^
01:42:863 - ^
01:43:165 - ^
01:43:769 - ^
01:43:970 (103970|3,103970|2) - soft sound here, better remove 1 note
all done.

01:45:379 - add a note here? (here should have higher impact)
done.

01:48:198 - ^
no thanks.

01:48:601 - ^
01:49:406 - ^
done.

01:51:822 - ^
01:53:433 - ^
01:54:641 - ^
01:54:943 - ^
01:55:245 - ^
01:55:447 - ^
01:55:749 - ^
01:56:051 - ^
01:56:252 - ^
all done.

01:59:473 - ^
add note 3

02:02:695 - ^
add note 3
Nice song~ ^w^/,have a lucky star~ XD

Julie wrote:

AILK's MX
00:12:963 (12963|0,12963|3,13165|3,13165|0) - Shouldn't be same column xD
fix.

00:39:943 (39943|2) - isn't this supose to be 2 normal note at 00:39:943 - and 00:40:044 -
00:39:943 - add note 1
00:40:044 - add note 3


00:44:171 - forgot clap here?
00:42:158 , 00:42:561 , 00:43:769 , 00:44:171 add one note. and fix.

00:51:420 (51420|2) - ^
00:49:809 , 00:51:420 add one note. and fix.

00:59:574 (59574|2) - delete no sound XD
done.

01:06:017 (66017|2) - delete no new sound
done.

01:08:332 (68332|1,68534|2) - add whistle?
done.

01:11:453 - add a note, follow the piano since you mapped this 01:11:353 (71353|0,71554|1) - , should feel like triplet, piano here is easy to hear
done.

01:18:802 (78802|2) - add clap
done.

01:26:051 - want to add a note on 4 with whistle, that sound pretty easy to hear, and is a bit different from this part 01:26:252 - + XD
done.

01:35:413 (95413|1) - delete no new sound
01:36:621 (96621|2) - ^
done.

01:37:728 - forgot clap? Actually dont mind none here, but maybe add one for consistent? XD
done.

01:38:332 - add clap, hear bass here too
done.

01:41:655 (101655|0) - whistle here :D!!?
done.

01:47:091 (107091|3) - delete no new sound
done.

01:50:614 - just suggestion to keep consistent, no 1/8 triplet here with clap? and here 01:51:319 - no clap note? XD
done.

02:03:098 (123098|2) - this sound your trying to map with whistle is here 02:02:997 - lolol
done.

Nice MX, look pretty hard to map it XD
thanks XD

Actually pretty nice O.O... This is not an easy song to map, so gj. kudo~ :)

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Thanks mod :oops:
Topic Starter
-LASU-
please re-download
Romanised Artist movies (moimoi Xceon Dai.)→movies (moimoixXceonxDai.) and HP,OD,vol.change
pporse
hi LASU :3 from pm

nice song :3

i suggested some patterns in this mod.
it's just suggestion :3 if u're not satisfied with the suggestion, u can reject it

column set
1 2 3 4

Go!
[NM]
00:07:124 (7124|2) - move to 4th column
00:07:728 (7728|3) - move to 3rd column
00:07:930 (7930|2) - move to 2nd column
00:08:131 (8131|1) - move to 1st column
00:08:332 (8332|0) - move to 3rd column
actually 00:07:124 (7124|2) - this note has highest sound.
so i think..it is better to move to 4th column
but it's just my idea :)

00:12:963 (12963|0) - change to LN until 00:14:775 -
00:13:165 (13165|2) - change to normal note (or delete)
actually when i played, i felt little awkward in this part
if u accept this suggestion,
00:14:775 (14775|1) - move to 3rd column
00:15:983 (15983|2) - move to 2nd column

00:17:192 (17192|2,17393|1) - Ctrl+H
just suggestion :3
i think..using alternately hands is better than stair pattern in this part.

00:17:494 (17494|0,17796|1) -
umm..u didn't use LN in this part
but u used LN in 00:19:104 (19104|2,19406|1) - although similar part
for consistency of pattern, u have to choose one of LN or normal note.

00:17:796 (17796|1) - move to 4th column
this note is higher than 00:17:997 (17997|2) -

00:20:614 (20614|1,21017|0) - change to 1/1 LN
hmm...it's just my idea :3

00:21:218 (21218|3) - delete

01:07:728 (67728|0,67728|1) - change to LN until 01:09:138 -
01:07:930 (67930|3) - change to normal note

01:15:983 (75983|0,77594|0) - change to same length for each other
i recommend to change 01:17:594 (77594|0) - like 01:15:983 (75983|0) -

01:16:587 (76587|1) - move to 4th column
01:16:789 (76789|3) - move to 2nd column
01:17:393 (77393|1) - move to 4th column
01:17:594 (77594|3) - move to 3rd column
just my idea :3

01:29:675 (89675|2,90077|1) - Ctrl+H
for pitch

01:31:285 (91285|3,91688|2,92091|1) - Ctrl+H
i think..they are increasing

01:32:494 - add note on 2nd column
i think..this place needs to use chord

01:33:198 (93198|0,93500|2,93702|1) -
01:34:809 (94809|0,95111|2,95312|3) -
each other have similar sound.
so it is better to use same pattern.
but currently pattern is different for each other.
u can change to all LN like 00:19:104 (19104|2,19406|1,19608|3) -
or just using last LN like 00:17:494 (17494|0,17796|1,17997|2) -
but i don't recommend like 01:34:809 (94809|0,95111|2,95312|3) -
it's up to u :3

01:37:326 (97326|0,97326|1,97527|2,97527|3) - Ctrl+H
for pitch
if u accept it, then
01:36:722 (96722|2) - move to 2nd column
01:37:930 (97930|2) - move to 1st column
01:38:131 (98131|0) - move to 3rd column
just suggestion :3
if u're not satisfied with the suggestion, u can reject it :)

01:44:171 (104171|3,104574|2,104977|1) - Ctrl+H
01:45:379 - add note on 2nd column
same as before

01:48:601 (108601|1,108802|2) - Ctrl+H
01:49:205 (109205|1) - move to 4th column
i think 01:49:205 - it has highest sound. so it is better to move to right column

01:57:057 (117057|3,117460|2,117863|1) - Ctrl+H
for pitch

01:58:467 (118467|3) - change end point until 01:58:970 -
01:58:668 (118668|2,118869|1) - delete
umm...actually im not sure that 01:58:668 (118668|2,118869|1) - there have sound or not.

02:02:494 (122494|3,122494|2) - change to LN until 02:04:306 -
02:02:695 (122695|0) - change to normal note

[HD]
OD,HP - change to 7.5

00:09:138 - add note on 3rd column

00:09:742 (9742|1) - move to 4th column
00:09:943 (9943|3) - move to 3rd column
for pitch

00:10:749 - add note on 2nd column

00:11:353 (11353|2) - move to 1st column
for consistency of pattern.(if you accept opinion above)

00:12:359 - add note on 1st column

00:13:869 (13869|2) - delete
drum roll is started at 00:13:970 -

00:28:869 (28869|0,29272|0) - move to 2nd column
just my suggestion :3

00:39:943 - add note on 1st column

00:48:299 (48299|3) - delete. there has no sound

00:48:400 (48400|0) - move to 3rd column
00:55:044 (55044|0,55044|3) - Ctrl+H
01:09:138 (69138|0) - move to 3rd column
just suggestion :)

01:37:124 - add note on 2nd column

00:14:020 - 00:28:517 - 00:41:806 - 00:47:846 - 01:08:785 -
01:15:228 - 01:21:671 - 01:44:222 - 01:57:108 - (1/8 snap)
those places have drumbass sound. but u didn't use it.
i guess..because this diff is HD, right? :3
hmm..actually i recommend that u use it.
but if it is ur intention, keep it :)

sry, recently im little busy ;_;
next time, i'll mod HD+ and MX
plz wait for my mod :)
Topic Starter
-LASU-

pporse wrote:

hi LASU :3 from pm hi pporse

nice song :3

i suggested some patterns in this mod.
it's just suggestion :3 if u're not satisfied with the suggestion, u can reject it

column set
1 2 3 4

Go!
[NM]
00:07:124 (7124|2) - move to 4th column
00:07:728 (7728|3) - move to 3rd column
00:07:930 (7930|2) - move to 2nd column
00:08:131 (8131|1) - move to 1st column
00:08:332 (8332|0) - move to 3rd column
actually 00:07:124 (7124|2) - this note has highest sound.
so i think..it is better to move to 4th column
but it's just my idea :)

00:12:963 (12963|0) - change to LN until 00:14:775 -
00:13:165 (13165|2) - change to normal note (or delete)
actually when i played, i felt little awkward in this part
if u accept this suggestion,
00:14:775 (14775|1) - move to 3rd column
00:15:983 (15983|2) - move to 2nd column

00:17:192 (17192|2,17393|1) - Ctrl+H Nice ok
just suggestion :3
i think..using alternately hands is better than stair pattern in this part.

00:17:494 (17494|0,17796|1) -
umm..u didn't use LN in this part
but u used LN in 00:19:104 (19104|2,19406|1) - although similar part
for consistency of pattern, u have to choose one of LN or normal note. 00:17:494 (17494|0,17796|1) - change LN

00:17:796 (17796|1) - move to 4th column
this note is higher than 00:17:997 (17997|2) -

00:20:614 (20614|1,21017|0) - change to 1/1 LN
hmm...it's just my idea :3

00:21:218 (21218|3) - delete

01:07:728 (67728|0,67728|1) - change to LN until 01:09:138 -
01:07:930 (67930|3) - change to normal note

01:15:983 (75983|0,77594|0) - change to same length for each other
i recommend to change 01:17:594 (77594|0) - like 01:15:983 (75983|0) -

01:16:587 (76587|1) - move to 4th column
01:16:789 (76789|3) - move to 2nd column
01:17:393 (77393|1) - move to 4th column
01:17:594 (77594|3) - move to 3rd column
just my idea :3

01:29:675 (89675|2,90077|1) - Ctrl+H
for pitch

01:31:285 (91285|3,91688|2,92091|1) - Ctrl+H
i think..they are increasing

01:32:494 - add note on 2nd column
i think..this place needs to use chord

01:33:198 (93198|0,93500|2,93702|1) -
01:34:809 (94809|0,95111|2,95312|3) -
each other have similar sound.
so it is better to use same pattern.
but currently pattern is different for each other.
u can change to all LN like 00:19:104 (19104|2,19406|1,19608|3) -
or just using last LN like 00:17:494 (17494|0,17796|1,17997|2) -
but i don't recommend like 01:34:809 (94809|0,95111|2,95312|3) -
it's up to u :3

01:37:326 (97326|0,97326|1,97527|2,97527|3) - Ctrl+H
for pitch
if u accept it, then
01:36:722 (96722|2) - move to 2nd column
01:37:930 (97930|2) - move to 1st column
01:38:131 (98131|0) - move to 3rd column
just suggestion :3
if u're not satisfied with the suggestion, u can reject it :)

01:44:171 (104171|3,104574|2,104977|1) - Ctrl+H
01:45:379 - add note on 2nd column
same as before

01:48:601 (108601|1,108802|2) - Ctrl+H
01:49:205 (109205|1) - move to 4th column
i think 01:49:205 - it has highest sound. so it is better to move to right column

01:57:057 (117057|3,117460|2,117863|1) - Ctrl+H
for pitch

01:58:467 (118467|3) - change end point until 01:58:970 -
01:58:668 (118668|2,118869|1) - delete
umm...actually im not sure that 01:58:668 (118668|2,118869|1) - there have sound or not. follow vocal notes

02:02:494 (122494|3,122494|2) - change to LN until 02:04:306 -
02:02:695 (122695|0) - change to normal note
no reply = no thanks
[HD]
OD,HP - change to 7.5 Keep There are few LN

00:09:138 - add note on 3rd column

00:09:742 (9742|1) - move to 4th column
00:09:943 (9943|3) - move to 3rd column
for pitch

00:10:749 - add note on 2nd column

00:11:353 (11353|2) - move to 1st column
for consistency of pattern.(if you accept opinion above)

00:12:359 - add note on 1st column

00:13:869 (13869|2) - delete
drum roll is started at 00:13:970 -

00:28:869 (28869|0,29272|0) - move to 2nd column
just my suggestion :3

00:39:943 - add note on 1st column

00:48:299 (48299|3) - delete. there has no sound

00:48:400 (48400|0) - move to 3rd column
00:55:044 (55044|0,55044|3) - Ctrl+H
01:09:138 (69138|0) - move to 3rd column
just suggestion :)

01:37:124 - add note on 2nd column

00:14:020 - 00:28:517 - 00:41:806 - 00:47:846 - 01:08:785 -
01:15:228 - 01:21:671 - 01:44:222 - 01:57:108 - (1/8 snap)
those places have drumbass sound. but u didn't use it.
i guess..because this diff is HD, right? :3
hmm..actually i recommend that u use it.
but if it is ur intention, keep it :)
Because NM,HD difficulty difference not spread

sry, recently im little busy ;_;
next time, i'll mod HD+ and MX
plz wait for my mod :) Sure
mod thx ;)
-[ AmiShici ]-
M4M

4k = 1|2|3|4

NM
00:04:910 (4910|2,5111|1) - ctrl + H
00:59:272 (59272|3) - move to 3?
HD
00:52:426 - add note?
00:53:232 - ^
01:31:688 - why triple?
HD+
00:17:997 - add note?
00:19:608 - ^
00:21:218 - ^
00:24:440 - ^
00:21:621 - ^
00:21:822 - ^
01:01:889 - ^
01:02:091 - ^
01:19:205 - Add note?
01:20:010 - ^

I think just it. i hope that is helpful

Good Luck ^w^)b
RuberusuScarlet

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

M4M

4k = 1|2|3|4

[box=HD+]00:17:997 - add note?
00:19:608 - ^
00:21:218 - ^
00:24:440 - ^
00:21:621 - ^
00:21:822 - ^
01:01:889 - ^
01:02:091 - ^
01:19:205 - Add note?
01:20:010 - ^
sorry, all no change

I think just it. i hope that is helpful

Good Luck ^w^)b
mod thanks ~
Topic Starter
-LASU-

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

M4M

4k = 1|2|3|4

NM
00:04:910 (4910|2,5111|1) - ctrl + H
00:59:272 (59272|3) - move to 3?
HD
00:52:426 - add note?
00:53:232 - ^
01:31:688 - why triple? 01:30:883 (90883|1,90883|3) - + vocal notes


I think just it. i hope that is helpful

Good Luck ^w^)b
mod thx-
Feerum
Hello o/

From Feru's Mania Modding

I'm so sorry for the delay >_<

Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

Like requestet i'll mod the MX

AILK's MX

00:06:923 - Maybe Add here one? I mean this sound was mapped previously than you should take this one too.
00:22:024 - Add here for Drum. I suggest on 4. Reason: 00:26:353 - Here you take the Drum while LN too
00:43:265 - Move one fron here to the next White Line. You Mapped the Drums with 2 Chord. Maybe it was only a little mistake?
Oh i see.. when it's for Vocal.. it should be right.. or? I heard this Part now 4 Times.. and i dont understand the Chords. Check them please :D
00:47:997 - Add for Drum?
00:48:500 - Here too
01:02:292 - Here maybe too for the Drum
01:06:118 (66118|1,66218|0) - Move booth one Col to the Right. think theres a Stairsound and the Jack is not good.
01:18:802 - Add at 1 for Drum
01:37:930 - Here i sugget to delete one. The sound is not so strong like the next two
02:04:004 - Add for Similarity
02:05:614 - here too

Hope it helps. It's a nice song. Good luck!
AILK

Feerum wrote:

Hello o/

From Feru's Mania Modding

I'm so sorry for the delay >_<

Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

Like requestet i'll mod the MX

AILK's MX

00:06:923 - Maybe Add here one? I mean this sound was mapped previously than you should take this one too.
no thanks.
I want as possible match the sound.


00:22:024 - Add here for Drum. I suggest on 4. Reason: 00:26:353 - Here you take the Drum while LN too
add note 4. and, hit sound.

00:43:265 - Move one fron here to the next White Line. You Mapped the Drums with 2 Chord. Maybe it was only a little mistake?
Oh i see.. when it's for Vocal.. it should be right.. or? I heard this Part now 4 Times.. and i dont understand the Chords. Check them please :D
It is not fun by just hard to pattern... 01:15:983 I was the same length as the here.

00:47:997 - Add for Drum?
00:48:500 - Here too
add note.

01:02:292 - Here maybe too for the Drum
add note.

01:06:118 (66118|1,66218|0) - Move booth one Col to the Right. think theres a Stairsound and the Jack is not good.
fix.

01:18:802 - Add at 1 for Drum
add note. but not there.

01:37:930 - Here i sugget to delete one. The sound is not so strong like the next two
delete 2.

02:04:004 - Add for Similarity
02:05:614 - here too
add note.

Hope it helps. It's a nice song. Good luck!
mod thanks :)
Rinzler
Hi Lasu!, i'm sorry for the delay,i can't mod some request, i've been really busy with RL stuffs, take my star ~

good luck for getting ranked ;)
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