KawaEE wrote:

R'S HD+]00:09:541 (9541|1,9742|0) - Ctrl + G. note relevance. like this 00:10:950 (10950|2,11051|1,11151|0) - fixed[/color'>
00:11:856 (11856|0) - move to 3? or 00:11:856 (11856|0,11957|1) - move right one move to 3
00:14:373 - add at 1. < if u add, can to be more better smooth play.. fixed

SV 00:29:272 - x0.9? intend?
^ i do not recommend this. consider delete this.
this is same streaming. so SV is not suited ×0.9 ×1, and 00:42:158 - SV delete


00:42:057 (42057|2,42158|1) - Ctrl + G for shape. just suggstion. fixed

00:55:044 - this SV, I think this is ok. but i suggestion x0.7 fixed
^SV 0.9 and 1.0, there is no difference

01:05:715 (65715|0,65816|1,65916|2) - move right one 01:05:514 (65514|1,65614|3) - Ctrl+G

01:09:541 - and 01:14:373 - i suggest u. consider once again. about this SV SV delete
01:57:863 - ^same ^


i think this part should same chord
01:44:171 (104171|3,104222|2,104272|1,104373|0,104473|2,104574|1,104574|3) -
01:50:614 (110614|0,110665|1,110715|2,110816|0,110816|3,110916|2,111017|1,111017|3) -
01:57:057 (117057|3,117108|2,117158|1,117259|0,117359|1,117460|0,117460|2) -
△ therefore conclusion is 01:44:373 - add at one note OR 01:50:816 - add one remove
keep. 01:50:816 - same sound as 01:50:212 - and 01:50:413 - [mod thanks ~

KawaEE wrote:

HAI '- ^ Hi Kawa san
col 1/2/3/4
too late.. these days lazy. sorry .-.　신경 안 쓰셔도 돼요

First

1. about "audio preview point set" ▷ u consider change move to "00:55:849 - "
beacuse of the voice part of the song starts from here, I would recommend this place. preview point set all diff change

2. *if do not hit-sounding map, i can not say the exact opinions about problem.　Sorry I will add later hitsound

3. i cosndier mapper style, and suggestion. :3

4. again. my col 1/2/3/4

mod

NM
All the pitches can not be expressed exact
BUT, Possible must be correctly(If you do not use a mirror pattern)
△00:02:494 (2494|1,2695|1,2896|2,2997|3,3299|2,3500|0) - = 00:04:104 (4104|1,4306|1,4507|3,4608|2,4910|1,5111|0) - same pitch.
for example, u can this(this is just example )▽

^if use mirror pattern. or dont use mirror pattern, just u can same pitch pattern.
so, i suggest u this part rearrange
01:10:145 (70145|0,70346|0,70547|2,70648|3,70950|0,71151|1,71755|0,71957|0,72158|2,72259|1,72561|3,72762|0,72762|1) - ^same.

00:07:124 (7124|2,7326|0) - move one right
^consider the following pitch and conflict this 00:06:118 (6118|2,6520|0) -
00:08:332 (8332|2) - move to 4

01:13:064 (73064|3,73366|2) - Ctrl + G pitch relevance
00:02:695 (2695|2) - move to 2
00:03:299 (3299|1,3500|2) - Ctrl + H
00:04:104 (4104|2,4306|3) - move to
pattern change & move done
HD
00:02:695 (2695|2) - move to 2 move
00:03:299 (3299|1,3500|2) - Ctrl + H ok
00:04:104 (4104|2,4306|3,4507|2,4608|1,4910|0,5111|2) - also, u consider arrange repattern

00:13:165 (13165|0,13165|2,13366|1,13567|3,13769|1,13869|2,13970|1,14071|0,14171|1,14272|2) - suggestion ▽

^ for example 00:13:869 - this streaming is dont need.
no thanks
00:15:581 - one note remove. and 00:15:581 -add one note
^ 00:15:983 - crash, 00:15:581 - and no bass
remove and added
00:40:145 (40145|2) - delete delete
00:43:769 (43769|3) - move to 1 move

00:47:192 - delete one and 00:47:393 - add one ^^^same reason.
done
00:59:071 (59071|1,59272|0) - Ctrl + G for note shape ok
01:01:386 (61386|3) - move to 2 and 01:01:487 (61487|0) - move to 4 move
01:09:339 (69339|3,69541|2) - Ctrl + G ok

01:15:178 (75178|0,75178|3,75279|2,75379|3,75480|0,75581|1,75581|3) - suggestion ▽
no thanks

Kruzon wrote:

Hi, my 4K column format is as usual: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

HD

SPOILER

Suggestion:
00:13:165 (13165|0,13165|2) - I think you can put 1 more note here on 4, signifying ending of the starting part. Granted, if you agreed then you may move
00:12:963 (12963|3) - to 2
repattern
00:43:970 (43970|2) - Add note to 3 no thanks
00:44:373 (44373|2) - Add note to 3 ^
00:54:641 (54641|0) - deserve 1 more note ^
01:08:735 (68735|1,68735|0,68836|2) - I think 1/8 snap divisor fit wells here, perhaps re-pattern　I know 1/8 but it's too hard I have been unified in 1/4
01:11:151 (71151|3) - move to 1, i suggest to not overused jack notes but instead follow this sequence 01:12:561 (72561|2,72561|3,72762|0,72762|1) -
keep
01:24:037 (84037|0) - Add note to 2 and 01:24:440 (84440|1) - move to 3 ^
01:32:091 (92091|2) - Add single note to 3 because 01:31:285 (91285|2,91688|0,91688|3,91688|1,92091|2) - notes should represents vocal: ku-ra-e
add note 3
01:32:494 (92494|2,92594|1) - Press Ctrl + H

01:34:205 (94205|0) - move to 2, better flow in my opinion hand balance
01:34:910 (94910|3,95111|3,95312|3,95514|3) - excessive jacks, add more variety to pattern- How about:
01:35:111 (95111|3) - move to 1
01:35:514 (95514|3) - move to 3, repeat sequences 01:35:514 (95514|2,95614|1,95916|2,96017|1,96319|2,96420|1) -

01:45:379 (105379|1,105379|3,105379|0) - has the loudest sound: Vocal + Drum + loud chime, i recommend you should put 4 notes on this line, and
01:45:480 (105480|2,105581|1) - you may delete them keep

- Mod Ends -


Good luck with your map c:

Kruzon wrote:

Ruberusu's HD+

00:02:896 (2896|2,3098|1) - this feels kinda off, 00:03:098 (3098|1) - should be on the blue line 00:02:997 (2997|1) -
00:04:708 (4708|2) - the same for this, move to blue line no change. it's piano sound note

00:16:185 (16185|3) - this has no meaning at all, I'm aware you need it for the LN patterning though.. And also 00:15:983 (15983|0) - has poor notes
base despite the loudness- at least 2 notes should be added here.
So my recommendation is: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2885400 fixed

00:17:494 (17494|0,17594|1,17594|2,17695|0,17796|3,17896|1,17997|0,17997|2,18098|1) - Feels kinda randomly plotted, the vibe doesn't match with the song. I suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2885415 Also, inputting ascending dual notes gives meaning to the current part of the song
00:17:192 (17192|0,17192|1,17594|1,17594|2,17997|3,17997|2) - fixed

00:18:400 (18400|3) - move to 1 for better flow fixed
00:18:500 (18500|0) - move to 4 fixed
00:19:205 (19205|0) - suggest move to 3 and 00:19:306 (19306|2) - move to 2 for pattern fixed

00:22:426 (22426|0,22628|0,22829|0) - This is correct and fitting with the current part of the song, but this 00:23:232 (23232|0,23433|0,23634|0) - is definitely not. try to listen deeply and see why i said so- In any case, I think you should re-arrange this 00:23:232 (23232|0,23433|0,23634|0) -
My suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2885455 fixed

* On the side note, this 00:23:836 (23836|1) - should be moved to 1 for flow and pattern repetition 00:23:232 (23232|3,23433|3,23836|0,24037|0) - fixed

00:42:561 (42561|1,42762|1) - feels awkward, how about Ctrl + H this 00:42:762 (42762|1,42863|2) - fixed
00:48:198 (48198|1,48400|1,48601|1) - omega good job >w<
00:59:775 (59775|2) - move to 4 more comfortable + chain patterns 00:59:272 (59272|0,59473|0,59574|3,59775|3,59876|0,60077|0) - fixed

01:01:084 (61084|0,61285|0,61487|0) - something feels wrong here owo i think this jack notes 01:01:084 (61084|0,61285|0,61487|0) - should
start on the red line 01:00:883 (60883|0) - for fitting along the vocal sound ku-ka-ko. (This will break pattern, so If you decided to change it, then I leave re-patterning in your hands) no change

01:04:708 (64708|1,64708|0) - Add 1 more note, considerably louder sound here add 4

Aeven wrote:

Modのやりかたわかりますぇん！( ´◔ ‸◔`)
プレーしてみて気になったところだけ書いてます('､3_ヽ)_

NM→HD

02:04:608と02:05:816にノート1個ずつ置いていいかも？
両方とも追加しました。

Ranked待ってます(ง ˙ω˙)วGL

momogon3 wrote:

mod

NM
00:14:775 (14775|1) -
00:15:983 (15983|2) - ここでLNを切ったほうが曲的にいいかなと思います！
00:37:124 (37124|3) - これがLNなら
00:38:735 (38735|3) - これもLNにしたほうがわかりやすいかも！
all done
HD
01:44:574 (104574|0) - ここだけ単発なのが変だと思うので１個たして同時押しにしたほうが綺麗かな　ここらへん再配置しました。

mod thx!

KawaEE wrote:

AIL's MX

00:14:071 (14071|0) - delete or? If you are using two chord here, I suggest this. ▽

^13:970 ~ 14:171
fix.

00:44:272 (44272|3,44373|1) - Ctrl + G?, just suggestion. for note shape
done.

00:58:366 (58366|0,58467|1) - Ctrl+ G
done.

01:10:547 (70547|2,70648|1) - Ctrl + H
done.

Aeven wrote:

AILK's MX

01:21:621　https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2890888　こんな配置はどうでしょう。曲は1/8だけど1/4で置いてあったので修正してみてはどうでしょうか。個人的にはここは1/8で取ったほうが好きです
done.
その手前も修正した為、提案とは若干配置変わってます。

02:04:608 ノート1個追加
done.

Meiko Senpai wrote:

Hi Lasu mod for req via pm Hi

columns: 1|2|3|4

NM

I recommend don't follow vocal so much, follow the rythm is better
00:22:628 - delete one note 00:21:621 - 00:22:628 - melody+vocal note
01:01:048 (61084|1) - move to 4 move
01:02:896 - delete one note same

HD

don't put doubles where aren't stronger sounds
00:55:044 - why two lns? delete LN 1 notes
01:41:755 - add note? no thanks

that's all nice map, good luck

Meiko Senpai wrote:

Hi Lasu mod for req via pm

columns: 1|2|3|4

[R.Scarlet's HD+]00:47:896 (47896|2) - move to 4 for balance no change
01:49:406 - add note add 4
01:51:420 - why triple? strong sound

that's all nice map, good luck

Eternalie wrote:

Hi there nyan~ -LASU- mod request from ✿Nekoworks
hope it will help :3 Hi Eternalie san~

Ma mi mu me mod

Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4
[Opinion]
Really fun streamy map , even with my not that good skill that's a good map to practice accu on 1/4 :3
SV's are kawaii *w*
[HD]
00:04:910 (4910|1,5111|2) - Ctrl+J , for pitch relevancy ok
00:48:198 (48198|2) - if the chords follow vocal drum , wich seems to be the case here , you should add one note on 3 add note
Pretty good flows here :3
[NM]
00:04:910 (4910|1,5111|2) - Ctrl+J same reason as HD diff ok
01:07:930 (67930|2) - add note in 1/1 until here : 01:09:541 (69541|3,69541|0) - should look like this this
no thanks(like pattern)
01:14:373 (74373|0) - add on 1 for cymbal sound add note
01:17:594 (77594|3) - ^ same add note 4
01:22:426 (82426|3) - ^ add ^
01:24:037 (84037|1) - add on 2 ^ (optional ) no thanks

Good mappu~ >w< , Good Luck , have a nice day ^^/
Take my stawwy :3

Eternalie wrote:

]Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4

[R.Scarlet's HD+]
nyaho~ Rubei ~
if following instru (piano+ the other sound )
add here
00:02:997 (2997|0) -
00:04:608 (4608|3) - all no change , 00:01:890 - to 00:08:332 - following bass piano and high note piano
( tbh At first play I didn't catch up the rythm since instinctively you'll play the both instrument so brain gotta be confuse :3)
everything else seems fine to me , nice diff

Critical_Star wrote:

R.Scarlet HD+
00:35:715 - add a note? (crash sound) add 2
00:44:071 - suggest to add a note here. (here have loud sound) no change
00:54:641 00:54:843 - add a note like u do at 00:54:037 (54037|3,54037|1,54440|0,54440|2)? no change
01:10:346 - add a note here? (main sound) no change
01:10:648 - ^no change
01:11:151 - ^no change
01:11:957 - ^no change
01:12:259 - ^no change
01:53:433 - add a note? (crash sound) fixed

Critical_Star wrote:

Hi~ mod req from pm
below are just suggestion lol

mod

NM
00:21:218 - suggest to add a note at column 4 add note
00:38:131 (38131|3,38433|0,38735|3) - CTRL+H
inverse LN pattern from 00:36:520 (36520|3,36822|0,37124|3)
if applied ^ , 00:38:936 (38936|1,38936|0) - move to 3 and 4 , 00:39:238 (39238|2,39238|3) - move to 2 and 3 no thanks
01:04:708 - add note at 4? ^
01:05:111 - there is a kick here, add a note at 2? ^
02:02:695 (122695|0) - end till 02:05:916 follow vocal

HD
00:45:581 - i think there is no need for double note here(not very strong sound),better remove 1 note)
if applied ^ 00:45:581 remove the note at column 4 then add a note at column 4 in 00:45:681 ( since NM has a note at this sound)
00:46:386 (46386|1,46386|2) - same as above ^ remove a note at column 2 then add a note at column 2 in 00:46:487 (NM has a note for this sound)
00:54:641 - add a note here?
00:55:849 - in NM here have LN, better add a note or LN for pattern consistancy LN NM follow vocal HD not follow vocal
00:56:252 - ^ ^
01:15:379 (75379|3) - move to column 2? (make a stair)
01:19:406 (79406|1,79406|0,79809|2,79809|3,80212|0,80212|1) - better make it single note (soft sound)
01:24:445 - add a note here? like you do at 01:22:829 (82829|0,82829|1)
01:27:259 till 01:28:869 - suggest to add note follow the strong beat :3
Example: 01:27:661 , 01:27:863 , 01:28:165 , 01:28:265 , 01:28:467 , 01:28:668 - here you can add a note for the beats
01:43:567 - remove a note? (soft sound)
01:56:655 - add a note? (loud sound)
01:59:473 - add a note? (should have higher impact here )

Nice song~ ^w^/,have a lucky star~ XD