[NM]
00:07:124 (7124|2) - move to 4th column
00:07:728 (7728|3) - move to 3rd column
00:07:930 (7930|2) - move to 2nd column
00:08:131 (8131|1) - move to 1st column
00:08:332 (8332|0) - move to 3rd column
actually 00:07:124 (7124|2) - this note has highest sound.
so i think..it is better to move to 4th column
but it's just my idea
00:12:963 (12963|0) - change to LN until 00:14:775 -
00:13:165 (13165|2) - change to normal note (or delete)
actually when i played, i felt little awkward in this part
if u accept this suggestion,
00:14:775 (14775|1) - move to 3rd column
00:15:983 (15983|2) - move to 2nd column
00:17:192 (17192|2,17393|1) - Ctrl+H
just suggestion :3
i think..using alternately hands is better than stair pattern in this part.
00:17:494 (17494|0,17796|1) -
umm..u didn't use LN in this part
but u used LN in 00:19:104 (19104|2,19406|1) - although similar part
for consistency of pattern, u have to choose one of LN or normal note.
00:17:796 (17796|1) - move to 4th column
this note is higher than 00:17:997 (17997|2) -
00:20:614 (20614|1,21017|0) - change to 1/1 LN
hmm...it's just my idea :3
00:21:218 (21218|3) - delete
01:07:728 (67728|0,67728|1) - change to LN until 01:09:138 -
01:07:930 (67930|3) - change to normal note
01:15:983 (75983|0,77594|0) - change to same length for each other
i recommend to change 01:17:594 (77594|0) - like 01:15:983 (75983|0) -
01:16:587 (76587|1) - move to 4th column
01:16:789 (76789|3) - move to 2nd column
01:17:393 (77393|1) - move to 4th column
01:17:594 (77594|3) - move to 3rd column
just my idea :3
01:29:675 (89675|2,90077|1) - Ctrl+H
for pitch
01:31:285 (91285|3,91688|2,92091|1) - Ctrl+H
i think..they are increasing
01:32:494 - add note on 2nd column
i think..this place needs to use chord
01:33:198 (93198|0,93500|2,93702|1) -
01:34:809 (94809|0,95111|2,95312|3) -
each other have similar sound.
so it is better to use same pattern.
but currently pattern is different for each other.
u can change to all LN like 00:19:104 (19104|2,19406|1,19608|3) -
or just using last LN like 00:17:494 (17494|0,17796|1,17997|2) -
but i don't recommend like 01:34:809 (94809|0,95111|2,95312|3) -
it's up to u :3
01:37:326 (97326|0,97326|1,97527|2,97527|3) - Ctrl+H
for pitch
if u accept it, then
01:36:722 (96722|2) - move to 2nd column
01:37:930 (97930|2) - move to 1st column
01:38:131 (98131|0) - move to 3rd column
just suggestion :3
if u're not satisfied with the suggestion, u can reject it
01:44:171 (104171|3,104574|2,104977|1) - Ctrl+H
01:45:379 - add note on 2nd column
same as before
01:48:601 (108601|1,108802|2) - Ctrl+H
01:49:205 (109205|1) - move to 4th column
i think 01:49:205 - it has highest sound. so it is better to move to right column
01:57:057 (117057|3,117460|2,117863|1) - Ctrl+H
for pitch
01:58:467 (118467|3) - change end point until 01:58:970 -
01:58:668 (118668|2,118869|1) - delete
umm...actually im not sure that 01:58:668 (118668|2,118869|1) - there have sound or not.
02:02:494 (122494|3,122494|2) - change to LN until 02:04:306 -
02:02:695 (122695|0) - change to normal note
[HD]
OD,HP - change to 7.5
00:09:138 - add note on 3rd column
00:09:742 (9742|1) - move to 4th column
00:09:943 (9943|3) - move to 3rd column
for pitch
00:10:749 - add note on 2nd column
00:11:353 (11353|2) - move to 1st column
for consistency of pattern.(if you accept opinion above)
00:12:359 - add note on 1st column
00:13:869 (13869|2) - delete
drum roll is started at 00:13:970 -
00:28:869 (28869|0,29272|0) - move to 2nd column
just my suggestion :3
00:39:943 - add note on 1st column
00:48:299 (48299|3) - delete. there has no sound
00:48:400 (48400|0) - move to 3rd column
00:55:044 (55044|0,55044|3) - Ctrl+H
01:09:138 (69138|0) - move to 3rd column
just suggestion
01:37:124 - add note on 2nd column
00:14:020 - 00:28:517 - 00:41:806 - 00:47:846 - 01:08:785 -
01:15:228 - 01:21:671 - 01:44:222 - 01:57:108 - (1/8 snap)
those places have drumbass sound. but u didn't use it.
i guess..because this diff is HD, right? :3
hmm..actually i recommend that u use it.
but if it is ur intention, keep it