1. AILK's MX - 4Key (3.21 stars, 1198 notes)
2. HD - 4Key (2.88 stars, 1082 notes)
3. NM - 4Key (1.9 stars, 500 notes)
4. R.Scarlet's HD+ - 4Key (3.07 stars, 1177 notes)

-Y U E- wrote:

こんにちわ

ルベルスさんに頼まれたのでmodしたものを書きに来ました

|1|2|3|4|

R.Scarlet's MX

00:15:613 (15613|1,15814|2) - 終わりを00:16:015 - まで 00:15:581 (15581|1) - のみ変更

00:26:083 - 00:27:693 - ほかの場所のSVと違っていくらか足りないような気がします 確かに足りなかった。修正

01:36:955 - 3か4を削除 3を削除

good luckです

-Y U E- wrote:

こんにちわ

ルベルスさんに頼まれたのでmodしたものを書きに来ました

|1|2|3|4|

NM

大部分は歌に合わせているのでしょうか・・・？　はい NMはvocal mappingです
そう思った上でmodします

00:17:324 (17324|1) - 単発に変えたほうがいいです。normalではこの短さのロングノート、タイミングは難しいと思われます。

00:19:136 (19136|2) - 終わりを00:19:438 - まで

00:19:640 (19640|3) - ^00:20:042 -

00:20:244 (20244|2) - ^00:20:646 -

00:25:479 (25479|2) - 2に移動

00:25:579 (25579|3) - 終わりを00:25:881 - まで

00:38:163 (38163|3) - ^00:38:465 -

00:38:465 (38465|0) - ^00:38:767 -

00:42:995 (42995|3) - ^00:43:297 -

00:43:297 (43297|1) - ^00:43:599 -

01:06:955 (66955|1,67156|1) - 3に移動

01:12:190 - 01:13:599 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2833119

01:24:875 (84875|1) - 終わりを01:25:177 - まで

01:25:177 (85177|2) - ^01:25:479 -

01:33:029 (93029|1) - 単発に変更。

01:42:089 (102089|1) - 3に移動

01:58:499 - 01:59:304 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2833145　これが正しい歌のタイミングだと思われます。
SSの参考にして配置変更しました。https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2833700
ALL done

HD

00:08:364 - 3に追加（小さいシンバルサウンド） add

00:23:264 (23264|0) - 削除 remove

00:24:472 - 1に追加 add

01:01:519 - 3に追加^

01:03:130 - 01:06:351 - ここは00:56:687 - 01:01:519 - みたいに白線1つあけて同時押しにしたほうがいいです※ 了解です

01:07:760 - ここだけ2ノーツは不自然かと思われます　add

01:14:606 - 2に追加。ドラムの音です　ここのドラムの音はあえてとってないです

01:15:009 - 2か3に追加。同じくドラムの音です　同じ

01:22:056 - 1つノートを削除　keep

01:38:566 - 01:40:177 - ここも※と同じくです ok

01:56:284 - 3に追加 add


HD全体を見て
00:28:499 - のように1/8を使ってるところがありますが00:47:828 - みたいに使ってないところがあったりなどで少し混乱がありました。
私的にはHDでは1/4で統一したほうがいいかと思われます。修正しました

good luckです

Sky_Demon wrote:

Mod by PM request

key: 1|2|3|4|

Color

Red - Serious mistake

Green - Reason

Blue - Proposal


00:10:145 (10145|2) - move to 2 fixed
01:07:527 - add note no change. it's three note pattern
01:18:802 - add 2 note missing no change. 01:18:400 (78400|2,78400|3,78702|1,78702|2,79004|1,79004|0) - is mainsound
01:24:037 - add note Heavy sound add 3
01:42:963 - add missing no change
01:44:574 - add Heavy sound add 4
01:49:406 - add 2 note Because it is the same sound. → 01:48:601 (108601|0,108601|1,108601|3) - fixed
01:57:460 - add add 3

Mod end

Sorry late

Good luck

_S u w a k o_ wrote:

Metadataは良いと思いますが、ローマ字アーティストの部分が曖昧だと思います.

MP3曲の情報ではこのように記載されているんだ. MP3の情報変更

tagは少し追加してもいいと思います. Morinaga Mayumiとか. 追加しました

BGは変えたほうがいいと思います. サイズとかUnrankableですよね、( 確信はありませんが、小さいのは確かです.)　BG変更(1366*768)

曲のコンセプトとも似合わないかも.

残りは良いと思います. MXをHD+に変更するとかような個人的な提案くらい？

[NM]

nyan

• 
  
  * 00:02:695 (2695|0) - move to 2, 00:02:494（2494|1） - と音程が一致します. move
  
  * 00:04:104 (4104|1,4306|0) - ^ ^
  
  * 00:09:138 (9138|0) - move to 4 ^ ^
  
  * 00:10:547 (10547|3) - move to 1 ^ ^
  
  * 00:14:775 - 1に追加する場合、00:13:165 (13165|3) - と整合性がありますね. 00:13:165 (13165|3) - 消去しました。
  
  * 00:17:292 (17292|1) - ボーカル音に従えば、00:17:393 - ここですね　ok
  
  * 00:19:708 - http://puu.sh/giN6f/19a72e4888.png keep
  
  * 00:26:856 (26856|1,26856|0) - move to 34 ok
  
  * 00:33:299 (33299|2,33601|3,34104|0,34406|2) - autoconvertような感じだとゆうか.. まあ、意図は知っていますが。
  
  * 00:36:520 (36520|2,36822|3,37124|0) - 個人的には 00:38:131 (38131|3,38433|0,38735|3) - このようなパターンがより良いと思います
  00:36:520 (36520|2,36822|3,37124|0) -ここの配置変更しました。　https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2840947
  * 00:40:849 (40849|0) - move to 4 for pattern balance ok
  
  * 00:47:594 (47594|3) - 何を表現しているか分からないですね、曖昧だと言うか ボーカル取ってるのが中途半端なのでLNの終点を変更しました
  
  * 00:50:010 (50010|1) - move to 1 00:50:212 (50212|0) - move to 2 ok
  
  * 00:55:044 (55044|1) - 特に長いサウンドだと思いかからないのでshort noteがよいと思います. add 1 too short&add note
  
  * 00:59:675 (59675|1) - 00:59:675 - と 00:59:775 - はピッチが違うので、ロングノートより2ノートに表現しても大丈夫と思います ここは押しやすさ考慮してのLNです
  
  * 01:02:494 (62494|3,62494|1,62695|2,62695|0) - ctrl g ok
  
  * 01:06:923 - http://puu.sh/giPEt/bb7ab5c8f9.png ^
  
  * 01:13:366 (73366|2,73567|2) - you can move one of note since the sound pitch is different compared to each others.
  01:13:567 (73567|2) - move to 1に変更
  
  * 01:14:373 (74373|3) - 音の延長線という感じで 01:15:983 - ここまで?　ok
  
  * 01:20:312 (80312|2,80614|3) - ctrl g? ^
  
  * 01:25:447 (85447|3) - 「キー」のボーカル音が短くのでshort noteがよいと思います change short note
  
  * 01:29:675 - http://puu.sh/giQca/6726990f3f.png　ok
  
  * 01:32:997 (92997|1) - same ^
  
  * 01:41:151 (101151|2) - move to 1 01:41:252 (101252|0) - move to 2 move
  
  * 01:49:608 (109608|2,109608|3) - move to 12 ^
  
  * 01:58:769 (118769|2,118970|0) - ここのボーカル間違っていると思います 変更
  
  全体的なLNがボーカルの音に続くことは知っていますが、
  
  プレイする立場ではautoconvert見たいという感じがあっています.まあ、NMだし大丈夫かな....

後でまたみます-　了解です

Sky_Demon wrote:

Mod by PM request

key: 1|2|3|4|

Color

Red - Serious mistake

Green - Reason

Blue - Proposal

NM

00:10:950 (10950|1,11051|2) - Ctrl + G　
00:13:165 (13165|3) - Remove Not heavy sound
00:14:775 (14775|0,15581|3) - remove In NM, I think not.
00:16:386 - add note
00:41:353 (41353|0,41353|2) - remove
00:43:769 - add Because there are added →00:42:158 (42158|0) -
01:05:312 (65312|3,65514|2) - Ctrl + G
01:07:930 (67930|3) - End 01:08:936 -
01:14:373 (74373|0) - remove
01:15:983 - add note
01:32:091 (92091|1) - end 01:33:299 - LN=follow voice
01:44:977 (104977|1) - end 01:45:581 - same
no reply = fixed

HD

00:09:943 - add Because there are added →00:08:332 (8332|3,8332|2,8332|0) -
00:11:554 - ^
00:15:178 - add Heavy sound
00:16:185 (16185|0,16185|2) - remove
01:08:332 - add note
01:08:735 - add to 4
01:14:775 - add note
02:01:084 (121084|1) - remove
02:02:192 (122192|1,122494|2) - Ctrl + g
almost done

Mod end

Sorry late

Good luck

AILK wrote:

key:|1|2|3|4|

NM

とても押し易く作られてました。気になったのが 00:23:936 (23936|1) のようなLNがちらほらある事です。
個人的には、次のノーツ手前で終点になるのは難易度が高いと思います。
わざとこうしてるので無いのでしたら、直した方がプレイヤーに易しい配置になります。
修正しました。

HD

00:11:554 (11554) - 00:12:963 (12963) この間が少し違和感ある（特に00:12:661 (12661|2,12762|3,12762|0)）ので、この後曲が盛り上がっていくのも踏まえてこれくらいはっちゃけても良いと思います。提案.1
よくDDRにある感じの、どの音も取ってないけど曲に合ってる追加リズムみたいな感じです。　keep

01:21:822 (81822) - 3へ単発追加（キック音の取得漏れ？） add note 3

01:27:259 (87259|1,87259|3) - LNへ変更（終点は01:28:869） 01:27:259 (87259|3) - ここのみLNに変更しました。

modding end. がんばって

AILK wrote:

key:|1|2|3|4|

]00:34:910 (34910|2) - 4へ移動。
00:35:111 (35111|3) - 削除。
00:35:212 (35212) - 3にノート追加。
00:35:312 (35312|2) - 4へ移動
拾える音もありますし、このような場合はストリームを繋いだ方が押し易くなります。
All fixed

modding end. がんばって

Zan - wrote:

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

only mod pattern.

ye

[NM]

00:01:084 (1084|3,1487|2,1890|1) - ctrl + H | pitch ok
00:03:299 (3299|1,3500|0) - ^ keep hand balance

00:30:077 (30077|2) - LN till 00:30:279 - Sorry keep I think that it is easy to push it when I played
00:30:379 (30379|1) - LN till 00:30:581 -

00:31:688 (31688|1) - LN till 00:31:889 -
00:31:990 (31990|0) - LN till 00:32:192 -

00:33:601 (33601|3) - LN till 00:33:903 -
00:34:406 (34406|2) - LN till 00:34:708 -

00:36:520 (36520|3) - end at 00:36:722 -
00:36:822 (36822|0) - end at 00:37:024 -

00:40:145 (40145|2,40145|0,40346|1,40346|3,40547|0,40547|2,40849|1,40849|3,41151|1,41151|3) - ctrl + H ok

00:45:379 (45379|3) - LN till 00:45:681 -
00:45:681 (45681|0) - LN till 00:45:983 -
00:46:185 (46185|0) - LN till 00:46:487 -
00:46:487 (46487|3) - LN till 00:46:789 -

00:47:594 - http://puu.sh/gnrRq/2474a7cae3.jpg ok

00:49:406 (49406|1) - LN till 00:49:708 -
00:49:708 (49708|2) - LN till 00:50:010 -

00:51:017 (51017|0) - LN till 00:51:319 -
00:51:319 (51319|1) - LN till 00:51:621 -

01:01:889 (61889|1,61889|3,62091|2,62091|0,62494|2,62494|0,62695|1,62695|3) - ctrl + H ok
01:10:547 (70547|3,70648|2) - ctrl + G ^
01:10:950 (70950|1,71151|0) - ^ ^

01:16:789 (76789|3) - LN till 01:17:091 -
01:17:091 (77091|2) - LN till 01:17:393 -

01:18:400 (78400|2) - LN till 01:18:702 -
01:18:702 (78702|1) - LN till 01:19:004 -

01:19:205 (79205|0) - LN till 01:19:507 -
01:19:507 (79507|2) - LN till 01:19:809 -

01:20:010 (80010|0) - LN till 01:20:312 -
01:20:312 (80312|2) - LN till 01:20:614 -

01:21:420 (81420|3,81520|2,81621|1) - ctrl + H keep 01:19:205 (79205|1,79205|0,79507|2,79809|3,80010|1,80010|0,80312|2,80614|3) - left→right pattern
01:21:420 (81420|3,81520|2,81621|1) - right→left pattern


01:23:232 (83232|0) - LN till 01:23:534 -
01:23:534 (83534|2) - LN till 01:23:836 -

01:29:675 - http://puu.sh/gnsj7/321929b913.jpg ok

01:35:312 (95312|3) - LN till 01:35:715 -
01:35:916 (95916|1) - LN till 01:36:319 -

[HD]

00:16:185 (16185|0,16185|2) - remove ok

00:15:983 (15983|1) - LN till 00:16:386 - no thanks

00:29:272 - ~ 00:38:936 - red line is not double imo, the correct is red line is single then white is double (kick)

00:39:742 - add note | kick, see 00:40:346 - it's double
00:41:353 (41353|0) - I put it together here
00:41:353 - http://puu.sh/gnsE8/27c0653ac7.jpg not follow sound

good luck~

1. 00:15:581 (15581|3) - remove? ないほうが後の00:15:983 (15983|2) - をより感じられて楽しいかもしれません。
2. 00:30:077 (30077|2,30379|1) - こっちをLNにしたほうが曲にのれるきがします
3. 00:30:681 (30681|0) - こっちを単発に
4. 00:31:688 (31688|1,31990|0,32292|3) - ＾
5. 01:00:480 (60480|1) - を01:00:883 まで延長したほうがたたきやすいかも？
6. 01:03:098 (63098|3) - LNに変更？
7. 01:19:205 (79205|0) - 01:19:608　へ移動？
8. 01:20:010 (80010|0) - 01:20:413 ＾
9. 01:51:822 - add a note?

1. 00:12:158 (12158|0) - 00:11:957へ移動？　もしくは
2. 00:12:762 (12762|0) - 00:12:963 の２へ移動？
3. 00:54:238 (54238|3) - ノートひとつ削除？

1. 01:13:869 - add a note?

1. 私からは特にありません

dosyeru wrote:

Col: 1 2 3 4

mod

[NM]

1. 00:15:581 (15581|3) - remove? ないほうが後の00:15:983 (15983|2) - をより感じられて楽しいかもしれません。removeしました。
2. 00:30:077 (30077|2,30379|1) - こっちをLNにしたほうが曲にのれるきがします
3. 00:30:681 (30681|0) - こっちを単発に
4. 00:31:688 (31688|1,31990|0,32292|3) - ＾
   しっくりきましたので変更
5. 01:00:480 (60480|1) - を01:00:883 まで延長したほうがたたきやすいかも？
   テストプレイしたら押しやすくなりました。change
6. 01:03:098 (63098|3) - LNに変更？　changeLN
7. 01:19:205 (79205|0) - 01:19:608　へ移動？そこの音は取ってないのでキープで
8. 01:20:010 (80010|0) - 01:20:413 ＾　同じく
9. 01:51:822 - add a note?　add note 4 忘れてました

[HD]

1. 00:12:158 (12158|0) - 00:11:957へ移動？　もしくは
2. 00:12:762 (12762|0) - 00:12:963 の２へ移動？
   前者の方にしました
3. 00:54:238 (54238|3) - ノートひとつ削除？
   ok

GL

dosyeru wrote:

Col: 1 2 3 4
[R.Scarlet's HD+]

1. 01:13:869 - add a note? add 2

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Lasu-San >.<)/ Hi Verniy_Chan
Mod as Request in PM

General : ( √ )
Mapset : ( √ )
Metadata : ( ? ) Artist : movies (moimoi×Xceon×Dai.) whereas Romanised Artist : movies (moimoi Xceon Dai.) i can't understand
Romanised Artist is × can't be displayed
Timing : ( √ )
Audio : ( X ) you must use hitsound Sure
Background : ( √ )

huehue~ I like this song (｡♥‿♥｡)

Good Luck -nya~ (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ

PiraTom wrote:

Hi~ -LASU- Mod for request

･Japanese
･Line Column : 1 2 3 4

最初に、NMとHDの難易度が大きく離れすぎているのではないかと思います。
NMはとても簡単すぎて、HDが難しすぎるのが原因だと思われます。
現在のNMをEZとして新しくNMを作るか、HDを大きく易化させるかをするべきでしょう。
最近のRanked,Qualifiedの譜面を観てみると、そんなに難易度差が開いてるとは思いません。(NM,HD差が1.00超えてるのもあります。)
差がギリ1.00(ingame)以下なので、大丈夫かと思います

mod

[NM]
特に指摘したい箇所、大きな問題点はありませんでした。

[HD]
00:29:473 ~ 00:38:735 - 赤線ではなく白線にノートを2つ置くべきではないでしょうか？ 変更

00:41:353 - もう一つノートを置いてもいいと思います。

00:53:836 ~ 00:54:843 -ドラム音をよく聴いてノートを配置してください。
00:54:037 , 00:54:440 , 00:54:843 ここにノートを2つ置いてください。他は1つです。
変更しました。

00:55:849 - ボーカル音としてLongNoteをに置きましょう（00:56:252まで）
00:56:252 - ^（00:56:655まで）
keep

01:09:541 - ノートを1つか2つ減らしましょう。　1notes減らしました

Rankedには非常に遠い譜面だと感じましたが、これからも頑張ってください。
GOOD LUCK

Verniy_Chan wrote:

00:05:312 (5312|0,5514|1) it will be nice if you Ctrl + G fixed
00:05:715 (5715|0) move to 2 fixed
00:28:970 add note to 3 no change
01:18:802 add note for beat sound? no change
01:30:480 add note pitch sound fixed
01:32:091 add something this part maybe note or LN? fixed
Nice patter~ ^^b thanks >w</

PiraTom wrote:

[R.Scarlet's HD+]
00:29:473 ~ 00:34:910 赤線ではなく白線にノートを2つ置くべきではないでしょうか？fixed

00:39:238 - 00:38:936と違いドラム音がないのでノートを1つ2つ減らしましょう。1列目を削除
00:39:238 - ^　00:39:541 - かな…？同じく1列目削除

00:53:836 - ドラム音がないのでノートを1つ減らしましょう。3を削除

01:09:238 (69238|0) - No Soundです、削除してください。delete

01:19:205 - ドラム音がないのでノートを1つ減らしてしましょう。 2を削除
01:20:010 - ^^

01:30:480 - ノートを一つ置いてもいいかもしれません、お任せします。

01:32:091 - ボーカル音としてLine3にLongNoteを置いてください（01:32:494まで）

01:51:118 (111118|2) - No Soundです、削除してください。削除
01:57:561 (117561|3) - ^ ^

02:02:896 , 02:04:708 - 音があります、意図的にノートを置いていないかもしれないですが、ノートがあったほうが押しやすくなります。add 多分聞き逃しです

Brian_Ex wrote:

Hi Lasu Hi Brian_Ex
From PM request

4K = |1|2|3|4|

NM

00:03:299 (3299|1) - move to 3 (pitch)
00:07:930 (7930|1) - ^
00:08:131 (8131|3) - move to 2 (pitch)
00:11:353 (11353|3,11554|0) - Ctrl + H (pitch)
00:12:158 (12158|1) - move to 4 (pitch)
00:12:359 (12359|3) - move to 2 (pitch)
00:12:963 (12963|1) - move to 1 (pitch)
all done

HD

00:35:514 - add note? (loud beat) add note and repattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2874684
00:41:554 - add note? (i hear a beat there) add note 3
01:28:869 - make like the picture below (i'm focus on the pitch here) no thanks
http://puu.sh/gvvr3/e82a1dc806.jpg
Lovely streams <3

ahh lasu you make me love this song >w<
i love trance song >w<

Here's your reward >w<)/

MOD DONE!
GOOD LUCK

Brian_Ex wrote:

Hi Lasu
From PM request

4K = |1|2|3|4|

01:28:869 - make it like the picture below (i'm focus on the pitch here)　Partial modification
http://puu.sh/gvvTz/bd1fc0b09a.jpg
hear it on playback rate 50%

Nice pattern rube chan >w< thanks >w<

MEGAtive wrote:

Hi Lasu-san~
Mod per requested on my queue and PM

[General]
Metadate: Fine
Timing: Fine
Hitsound: Better you had the mapset Hitsounded

mod

[NM]
Looks Good, and it nearly reach 2 star. Great Job indeed.

[HD]
00:14:775 - Felt awkward to play something like that over soft instrument. Try this. http://puu.sh/gvCFA/6b75d4e387.png
01:43:567 - I think single note would fit perfectly here.
01:44:171 - Rather than this, try http://puu.sh/gvCP8/7a18a6a844.png
01:45:178 - Single note. I think it fit well.
01:48:802 to 01:51:218 - I think Triple notes felt too much. Try use single or double notes.
02:01:084 - ^
02:05:816 - You can add more note here. Since the instrument still sounding here.

Yeah, moimoi~
Good Luck for Ranked owo
Shooting a star~

LNP- wrote:

=w=)/

My Column :
1|2|3|4

[box=HD+]• 00:42:661 (42661|2) - delete, no sound
• 00:44:272 (44272|2) - ^
• 01:15:681 (75681|2) - ^
• 02:01:084 - ~ 02:01:889 - you can make 1/4 if you follow bass sound all fixed

LNP- wrote:

=w=)/

My Column :
1|2|3|4

mod

NM
• 01:32:494 - add note 3　no thanks(not follow sound)
• 01:43:769 - add note 4 for cymbal ^
• 01:45:379 - add note 3 ^
• 01:51:822 - add note 1 ^
• 01:53:433 - add note 4 ^

HD
• 00:42:963 - ~ 00:43:769 - , 00:44:574 - ~ 00:45:379 - i don't understand, why 1/4 ?
• 01:23:232 - ~ 01:24:037 - , 01:24:843 - ~ 01:25:648 - ^same
Because NM,HD difficulty difference not spread

good luck

-LASU- wrote:

PiraTom wrote:

最初に、NMとHDの難易度が大きく離れすぎているのではないかと思います。
NMはとても簡単すぎて、HDが難しすぎるのが原因だと思われます。
現在のNMをEZとして新しくNMを作るか、HDを大きく易化させるかをするべきでしょう。
最近のRanked,Qualifiedの譜面を観てみると、そんなに難易度差が開いてるとは思いません。(NM,HD差が1.00超えてるのもあります。)
差がギリ1.00(ingame)以下なので、大丈夫かと思います

Verniy_Chan wrote:

4K = |1|2|3|4|

AILK's MX

00:02:997 add note stair sound?
00:04:608 ^
done.
and 00:01:890 to 00:05:111 repattern.

00:07:326 add note
00:07:527 (7527|2) - move to 00:07:326
00:07:728 and 00:08:131 add note.
00:07:930 (7930|3) - move 2

00:16:386 add note high pitch + Kiai
add note 2.

00:35:312 add note follow beat sound like 00:34:910
00:35:514 ^
done.

00:47:393 add note? beat sound?
done.(repattern)

00:47:896 - 00:48:098 it will be nice if you make stair patter this
Sorry. This sound is match, stair pattern can not make.

00:56:655 add note + Kiai
add note 3

01:15:178 (75178|1,75279|0) Ctrl + G
done.
and 01:14:574 to 01:14:977 repattern.

01:20:816 add note for beat sound?
add note 2,3.
01:21:218 add note 3.

01:29:876 try like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2867966
done.(but from 01:29:675 )

01:59:473 add note?
No thanks.

02:05:816 ^
done.

Good~

[/notice]
huehue~ I like this song (｡♥‿♥｡)

Good Luck -nya~ (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ

PiraTom wrote:

AILK's MX

まず、全体で曲を聴いてノートを置いていない箇所が非常に多すぎます。
サビの部分等、譜面の再構成を提案します。

00:13:165 (13165|0,13366|1,13567|2,13769|3) - 何の音を拾っているのですか？小さすぎるLongNoteはUnranked対象です。
00:13:165 to 00:14:171 repattern.

00:22:829 - ノートを一つ追加してください。
done.

00:28:970 (28970|1) - No Soundです、削除してください。
done.

00:51:822 ~ 00:53:232 曲を聴いて再配置してください。
done.

00:55:849 - ボーカル音としてLongNoteを置いてください（00:56:252まで）
00:56:252 - ^（00:56:655まで）
done.

01:01:889 (61889|1,61889|2,62091|1,62292|3,62292|0,62494|2,62494|3)
01:02:695 ~ 01:03:098までの部分を強調するためにノートを減らしましょう。
01:50:212 (110212|1,110212|2,110413|1,110413|0,110614|3,110614|0,110816|2,110816|3) -
ここも同様です。
done.

01:30:883 (90883|2) - LongNoteとして取れる音がありません、削除するかノートに変えてください。
音自体はあるので、LNの長さを変更。
01:32:091 - ボーカル音としてLongNoteを置いてください（01:32:494まで
一例を挙げておきます。https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2868416
done.

01:36:923 (96923|3) - ノートに置き換えてください。
done.

01:44:675 (104675|2) - No Soundです、削除してください。
done.

01:56:252 - ドラム音でノートを一つか二つ追加してください。
done.

01:57:561 (117561|1) - No Soundです、削除してください。
done.

Rankedには非常に遠い譜面だと感じましたが、これからも頑張ってください。
GOOD LUCK

Brian_Ex wrote:

4K = |1|2|3|4|

AILK's MX

from 01:25:648 - to 01:27:259 - i suggest you add SV in here, like ruberusu did

01:32:091 - add SV x2 then at 01:32:192 - add SV x0,10 and feel the difference =w=)b
umm.... I was consideration of SV.
But, many people hate it.
I want to add When also there is a demand from other people.

Lovely streams again <3
thanks

MEGAtive wrote:

[AILK's MX]

Mods

00:02:997 - You can add note here.
00:04:608 - ^
done.

00:06:722 - Extend the LN to 00:08:332
done.

00:06:923 - Add a note here. In the previous pattern you add a note here.
no thanks.

00:07:124 (7124|1) - I suggest you to change the LN into a normal note.
00:07:326 - Add note here. The previous pattern uses that.
00:07:527 (7527|0) - Delete the LN. It felt unecessary placed there.
00:07:728 - Add note here. The previous pattern uses that.
00:07:930 (7930|2) - Delete the LN. Felt awkward there....
00:08:131 - Add note here. Previous pattern uses a note too.
all done.

00:08:332 - If you take my mod so far, you can use triple notes. LN is up to you.
done.

00:09:440 - You can add note on 2. But first, you should move 00:09:339 (9339|1) to 3 or 4.
00:11:051 - You can add note on 1.
done.

00:13:165 to 00:13:769 - What's with the LN ended at 1/8? I know you're trying to follow the Kick distort, but the distort ended on 00:13:366. Extend the LN to there, or simply change the LNs to normal notes.
00:13:869 - Add note here. There's a sound you can follow here.
00:13:970 to 00:14:071 - No, the right snapping is 1/8.
00:14:272 - Now, back with 1/4 snapping. Add note here. There's clearly a sound here.
all done.

00:21:822 - Delete a note. It didn't fit for 2 note since it only has a hihat (Or if you did a vocal mapping But that's discouraged).
00:22:225 - Delete 2 notes. It only has a hihat. Even a Vocal Mapping shouldn't grant a triple notes.
00:22:426 to 00:22:628 - Delete one note each triplets. Just two note is fitting for a kick.
done.

00:35:010 to 00:35:614 - What's with the 1/4 stairs? Better you delete those 1/4, did 00:35:111 to 00:35:312 just like the pattern before, and add double notes on 00:35:514
done.

00:35:916 to 00:36:520 - Um, you use the LN for the vocal, am I correct? Then your snapping isn't right. Those vocal started and ended on white and red lines.
00:37:527 to 00:38:131 - ^
This LN is no vocal. piano? Synthesizer? sound.
And I'm sorry difficult to understand picking up a lot of sound.

00:41:151 - Suggest you delete the LN, and Add Double note here.
done.

00:41:353 to 00:41:755 - 1/4 isn't right. Delete the one on blue lines, and make the Red line into Double.
00:41:755 to 00:41:856 - The correct snap is 1/8. Fix it.
00:47:796 to 00:47:896 - The snap is 1/8. Better fix it.
done.

00:55:849 and next if you met one again - LN release and a started vocal don't sync so well. In fact, it would make player felt uneasy. Better you start an LN every a vocal starts.
done.

01:15:178 to 01:15:581 - The pattern felt bland and didn't sync so well. How about this? http://puu.sh/gvC1H/892abda5cc.png
done.

01:28:869 to 01:30:077 - Why the pattern like this? Better you change the doubles to singles.
Fix. Please point out if there is yet problem.

01:37:527 (97527|1) - The LN ends on 01:37:930 and Delete 01:37:728 (97728|2).
01:50:413 - ^
done.

02:02:695 to the end of LN - The notes in the center didn't fit well. Delete them, or refer to Rube's HD+ for a good base.
done.

LNP- wrote:

=w=)/

My Column :
1|2|3|4

MX

• 00:14:020 - add note (1/8)
• 00:14:272 - add note
• 00:28:517 - add note (1/8)
• 00:28:970 (28970|1) - delete, no sound
• 00:35:312 - & 00:35:514 - add note for bass
• 00:41:353 (41353|0,41453|1,41554|2,41655|3) - stairs is not fit with the sound, my suggest


• 00:41:806 - add note (1/8)
• 00:42:057 (42057|3) - move to 2
• 00:51:822 - ~ 00:53:232 - change like this


• 01:01:889 - ~ 01:03:098 - i think, it is overmap, why put 3 or 4 note ? i don't hear loud sound
• 01:08:785 - add note (1/8)
• 01:15:228 - ^
• 01:37:326 - ~ 01:38:534 - same as 01:01:889 - ~ 01:03:098 -
• 01:44:222 - add note (1/8)
• 01:50:212 - ~ 01:51:420 - same as 01:01:889 - ~ 01:03:098 -
• 01:57:108 - add note (1/8
• 01:57:561 (117561|1) - delete, no sound
all done.

good luck

KawaEE wrote:

[box=R'S HD+]00:09:541 (9541|1,9742|0) - Ctrl + G. note relevance. like this 00:10:950 (10950|2,11051|1,11151|0) - fixed
00:11:856 (11856|0) - move to 3? or 00:11:856 (11856|0,11957|1) - move right one move to 3
00:14:373 - add at 1. < if u add, can to be more better smooth play.. fixed

SV 00:29:272 - x0.9? intend?
^ i do not recommend this. consider delete this.
this is same streaming. so SV is not suited ×0.9 ×1, and 00:42:158 - SV delete


00:42:057 (42057|2,42158|1) - Ctrl + G for shape. just suggstion. fixed

00:55:044 - this SV, I think this is ok. but i suggestion x0.7 fixed
^SV 0.9 and 1.0, there is no difference

01:05:715 (65715|0,65816|1,65916|2) - move right one 01:05:514 (65514|1,65614|3) - Ctrl+G

01:09:541 - and 01:14:373 - i suggest u. consider once again. about this SV SV delete
01:57:863 - ^same ^


i think this part should same chord
01:44:171 (104171|3,104222|2,104272|1,104373|0,104473|2,104574|1,104574|3) -
01:50:614 (110614|0,110665|1,110715|2,110816|0,110816|3,110916|2,111017|1,111017|3) -
01:57:057 (117057|3,117108|2,117158|1,117259|0,117359|1,117460|0,117460|2) -
△ therefore conclusion is 01:44:373 - add at one note OR 01:50:816 - add one remove
keep. 01:50:816 - same sound as 01:50:212 - and 01:50:413 - [

KawaEE wrote:

HAI '- ^ Hi Kawa san
col 1/2/3/4
too late.. these days lazy. sorry .-.　신경 안 쓰셔도 돼요

First

1. about "audio preview point set" ▷ u consider change move to "00:55:849 - "
beacuse of the voice part of the song starts from here, I would recommend this place. preview point set all diff change

2. *if do not hit-sounding map, i can not say the exact opinions about problem.　Sorry I will add later hitsound

3. i cosndier mapper style, and suggestion. :3

4. again. my col 1/2/3/4

mod

NM
All the pitches can not be expressed exact
BUT, Possible must be correctly(If you do not use a mirror pattern)
△00:02:494 (2494|1,2695|1,2896|2,2997|3,3299|2,3500|0) - = 00:04:104 (4104|1,4306|1,4507|3,4608|2,4910|1,5111|0) - same pitch.
for example, u can this(this is just example )▽

^if use mirror pattern. or dont use mirror pattern, just u can same pitch pattern.
so, i suggest u this part rearrange
01:10:145 (70145|0,70346|0,70547|2,70648|3,70950|0,71151|1,71755|0,71957|0,72158|2,72259|1,72561|3,72762|0,72762|1) - ^same.

00:07:124 (7124|2,7326|0) - move one right
^consider the following pitch and conflict this 00:06:118 (6118|2,6520|0) -
00:08:332 (8332|2) - move to 4

01:13:064 (73064|3,73366|2) - Ctrl + G pitch relevance
00:02:695 (2695|2) - move to 2
00:03:299 (3299|1,3500|2) - Ctrl + H
00:04:104 (4104|2,4306|3) - move to
pattern change & move done
HD
00:02:695 (2695|2) - move to 2 move
00:03:299 (3299|1,3500|2) - Ctrl + H ok
00:04:104 (4104|2,4306|3,4507|2,4608|1,4910|0,5111|2) - also, u consider arrange repattern

00:13:165 (13165|0,13165|2,13366|1,13567|3,13769|1,13869|2,13970|1,14071|0,14171|1,14272|2) - suggestion ▽

^ for example 00:13:869 - this streaming is dont need.
no thanks
00:15:581 - one note remove. and 00:15:581 -add one note
^ 00:15:983 - crash, 00:15:581 - and no bass
remove and added
00:40:145 (40145|2) - delete delete
00:43:769 (43769|3) - move to 1 move

00:47:192 - delete one and 00:47:393 - add one ^^^same reason.
done
00:59:071 (59071|1,59272|0) - Ctrl + G for note shape ok
01:01:386 (61386|3) - move to 2 and 01:01:487 (61487|0) - move to 4 move
01:09:339 (69339|3,69541|2) - Ctrl + G ok

01:15:178 (75178|0,75178|3,75279|2,75379|3,75480|0,75581|1,75581|3) - suggestion ▽
no thanks

Kruzon wrote:

Hi, my 4K column format is as usual: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

HD

SPOILER

Suggestion:
00:13:165 (13165|0,13165|2) - I think you can put 1 more note here on 4, signifying ending of the starting part. Granted, if you agreed then you may move
00:12:963 (12963|3) - to 2
repattern
00:43:970 (43970|2) - Add note to 3 no thanks
00:44:373 (44373|2) - Add note to 3 ^
00:54:641 (54641|0) - deserve 1 more note ^
01:08:735 (68735|1,68735|0,68836|2) - I think 1/8 snap divisor fit wells here, perhaps re-pattern　I know 1/8 but it's too hard I have been unified in 1/4
01:11:151 (71151|3) - move to 1, i suggest to not overused jack notes but instead follow this sequence 01:12:561 (72561|2,72561|3,72762|0,72762|1) -
keep
01:24:037 (84037|0) - Add note to 2 and 01:24:440 (84440|1) - move to 3 ^
01:32:091 (92091|2) - Add single note to 3 because 01:31:285 (91285|2,91688|0,91688|3,91688|1,92091|2) - notes should represents vocal: ku-ra-e
add note 3
01:32:494 (92494|2,92594|1) - Press Ctrl + H

01:34:205 (94205|0) - move to 2, better flow in my opinion hand balance
01:34:910 (94910|3,95111|3,95312|3,95514|3) - excessive jacks, add more variety to pattern- How about:
01:35:111 (95111|3) - move to 1
01:35:514 (95514|3) - move to 3, repeat sequences 01:35:514 (95514|2,95614|1,95916|2,96017|1,96319|2,96420|1) -

01:45:379 (105379|1,105379|3,105379|0) - has the loudest sound: Vocal + Drum + loud chime, i recommend you should put 4 notes on this line, and
01:45:480 (105480|2,105581|1) - you may delete them keep

- Mod Ends -


Good luck with your map c:

Kruzon wrote:

Ruberusu's HD+

00:02:896 (2896|2,3098|1) - this feels kinda off, 00:03:098 (3098|1) - should be on the blue line 00:02:997 (2997|1) -
00:04:708 (4708|2) - the same for this, move to blue line no change. it's piano sound note

00:16:185 (16185|3) - this has no meaning at all, I'm aware you need it for the LN patterning though.. And also 00:15:983 (15983|0) - has poor notes
base despite the loudness- at least 2 notes should be added here.
So my recommendation is: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2885400 fixed

00:17:494 (17494|0,17594|1,17594|2,17695|0,17796|3,17896|1,17997|0,17997|2,18098|1) - Feels kinda randomly plotted, the vibe doesn't match with the song. I suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2885415 Also, inputting ascending dual notes gives meaning to the current part of the song
00:17:192 (17192|0,17192|1,17594|1,17594|2,17997|3,17997|2) - fixed

00:18:400 (18400|3) - move to 1 for better flow fixed
00:18:500 (18500|0) - move to 4 fixed
00:19:205 (19205|0) - suggest move to 3 and 00:19:306 (19306|2) - move to 2 for pattern fixed

00:22:426 (22426|0,22628|0,22829|0) - This is correct and fitting with the current part of the song, but this 00:23:232 (23232|0,23433|0,23634|0) - is definitely not. try to listen deeply and see why i said so- In any case, I think you should re-arrange this 00:23:232 (23232|0,23433|0,23634|0) -
My suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2885455 fixed

* On the side note, this 00:23:836 (23836|1) - should be moved to 1 for flow and pattern repetition 00:23:232 (23232|3,23433|3,23836|0,24037|0) - fixed

00:42:561 (42561|1,42762|1) - feels awkward, how about Ctrl + H this 00:42:762 (42762|1,42863|2) - fixed
00:48:198 (48198|1,48400|1,48601|1) - omega good job >w<
00:59:775 (59775|2) - move to 4 more comfortable + chain patterns 00:59:272 (59272|0,59473|0,59574|3,59775|3,59876|0,60077|0) - fixed

01:01:084 (61084|0,61285|0,61487|0) - something feels wrong here owo i think this jack notes 01:01:084 (61084|0,61285|0,61487|0) - should
start on the red line 01:00:883 (60883|0) - for fitting along the vocal sound ku-ka-ko. (This will break pattern, so If you decided to change it, then I leave re-patterning in your hands) no change

01:04:708 (64708|1,64708|0) - Add 1 more note, considerably louder sound here add 4

Aeven wrote:

Modのやりかたわかりますぇん！( ´◔ ‸◔`)
プレーしてみて気になったところだけ書いてます('､3_ヽ)_

NM→HD

02:04:608と02:05:816にノート1個ずつ置いていいかも？
両方とも追加しました。

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