[MOD]
column -1-2-3-4-
i will focus on pattern consistency ,amount of notes for each sound and some placement with this mod
[HD]
00:09:771 (9771|1) - suggest to delete,here there aren-t clap or drum like the other pattern where you put 2 notes
suggest to remove those 00:10:800 (10800|2,11142|1) - , i think 4 notes here is too much ,sound isn't so strong at all
00:11:485 - add another note here ,same sound like the previous two
00:12:342 - suggest to add 1 4 then removing this 00:12:514 (12514|0) - and moving this 00:12:514 (12514|3) - in col 3 ,for a balanced pattern
00:12:685 (12685|2,12857|1) - move those 1 col on right and add 2 here 00:13:028 -
00:14:057 - add 4
00:15:428 - add 2
00:16:285 (16285|0) - move this here 00:16:114 - on col 4
00:16:971 (16971|1) - move here 00:16:800 - in col 1 and move 00:16:800 (16800|2) - in col 4
00:17:228 - delete one note,no drum here
00:17:828 - you can add a note 2 here,sound is the same like here 00:19:200 -
00:24:342 - add note 1
00:27:600 - 00:27:942 - 00:28:285 - i think that three notes for those sound are a little too much ,remove one on them?
maybe i will keep this sorry 00:29:657 (29657|0) - move here 00:29:485 -
00:31:371 (31371|1) - move this note here in col 1 00:31:200 -
you can also add one notes here 00:32:571 - in col 1 and here 00:32:742 - in col 4
00:34:114 (34114|2,34114|1) - suggest to move here 00:33:942 -
00:37:028 - remove one note
01:16:628 (76628|2) - suggest to remove, you didn't put 3 notes 01:16:114 - that had the same amount of sound,
01:25:885 - mmm ,wrong here xD
okay fixed xDanother double note should be here 01:26:057 - where you can hear the drum ,try like this?
01:26:657 (86657|2,86657|3,86828|1,86828|0,87085|2,87085|1,87085|0,87085|3,87342|0,87342|1,87514|2,87514|3) - i strong reccomand you to don't use this pattern here, drums are way intense respect of those sound where you put the notes , apply a simple 1/2 beat and then a stream ,something like this -->
01:30:000 (90000|0) - move this note here 01:30:171 -
01:33:428 - 01:33:771 - 01:34:114 - like in the previous suggestion ,try to remove one note on them
keep01:35:485 (95485|0) - move here 01:35:314 -
01:45:000 (105000|2,105085|1,105171|2) - move here 01:44:914 - and move this01:44:742 (104742|2) - in col 2
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that's all,there are a lot of other stuff but you have to work more on the pattern consistency ,try to focus more beat on the drums, they are the principal beat of the song , hope i'll be helpfull
PS: can i make a MX??
sure xD