I edited OB's Trump Card by fixing something I didn't like.

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [OB's Trump Card].osu

I accept guest diffs depending on how fast you map.. I want this ranked

May i make it? ;; )

But i think i must do easy diff, because there are only 3 insane and 1 normal =/

for now only star.

Louis Cyphre wrote:

I accept guest diffs depending on how fast you map.. I want this ranked

May i make it? ;; )

But i think i must do easy diff, because there are only 3 insane and 1 normal =/

for now only star.

Feel free to ;-)

Also. Oyashiro's diff and mine are I but they are Hard diffs. So I think you can make a harder diff if you want to.

Here my evil diff :: )

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [Lucifer].osu

LOL 3 insanes, 1 Hard, and 1 normal XD

Oyashiro Beatrice wrote:

LOL 3 insanes, 1 Hard, and 1 normal XD

Mine is counted as a hard. The I shit is whatever.

Teras wrote:

Oyashiro Beatrice wrote:

LOL 3 insanes, 1 Hard, and 1 normal XD

Mine is counted as a hard. The I shit is whatever.

Tru dat.

I have to ask though, why on earth use a black combo color? Looks ugly and sometimes the approach circle is extremely if not totally hidden >.< and is that a 1/8 steam I see at 00:54:354 (1,2,3,4,5) ? @Louis diff

Lol, finally finished.

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [Selee's Beginner].osu

Download: 15743 YuNa - Secret Game.rar

General~
-Add the tag Louis Cyphre to Selee's Beginner
-Add Selee to the tags

Selee's Beginner~
-Uhm I'm guessing that there should be some custom hitsounds here which I didn't get when I downloaded, ethier add 'em or remove all the unnecessary Inherited sections =P
00:18:227 (2) - New combo?
00:19:072 (3) - New combo?
00:22:452 (5) - New combo?

roflninja's Normal~
I'm not sure if this was intentional or not but at 01:01:326 (5) - 01:06:396 (5) you've switched and put the claps before the large white tick etc and I'm just wondering if this was a misstake or if it's supposed to be like that =P
00:18:227 (1) - Stack it better with 00:17:171 (3)?
00:19:072 (3) - New combo?
00:22:452 (7) - New combo?
00:45:481 (4) - Stack it better with 00:44:424 (3)? (You can do that by just deleting 00:45:481 (4) and readd it)
01:06:396 (5) - New combo?
01:21:185 (1) - Replace the clap with a finish because of 01:07:241 (7), 01:14:847 (1) and 01:28:368 (1)?
01:11:466 (1) - Missed a clap at the beginning of the slider?

OB's Trump Card~
00:18:227 (5) - New combo?
00:19:283 - 00:23:931 - Why have you left this part unmapped? =P
00:35:551 (6) - Switch this slider to two notes instead and make a new combo at 00:35:973 (7) (Just adding the new combo on the slider works aswell but that feels wrong =P)
00:49:072 (1) - How about doing the same thing here? or you can just apply the new combo on the 00:35:551 (6) slider as you did here =P
00:51:185 (4) - New combo?
00:57:734 (5) - New combo?
01:00:692 (4) - New combo?
01:17:804 (8) - Here you have the same problem as 00:35:551 (6) and 00:49:072, a new combo should start at the end of the slider, ethier add a new combo to the slider or replace it with notes.
01:17:171 (6,7) - I would increase the spacing by a bit between these 2 notes and the slider that is before and after to avoid confusion.
01:18:438 (9,10) - Same thing here, the spacing needs to be fixed =P
01:31:326 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:31:537 (1) - New combo?
01:34:283 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:34:706 (2) - New combo?

Hard~
00:25:410 (4) - New combo?
00:52:664 (6) - New combo?
00:53:509 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:17:171 (1) - Remove new combo? (To follow the same combo pattern like you did 01:08:509 - 01:14:635 (1)
01:18:016 (12) - New combo?
01:20:973 (1) - Remove new combo? (Same as above)
01:21:396 (1) - New combo?
01:23:931 (1) - Remove new combo? (Same as above)
01:27:734 (1) - Remove new combo? (Same as above)
01:28:157 (4) - New combo?
01:29:002 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:36:819 (4) - New combo?

Lucifer~
-Black combo color? Remove it and just use the same combo colors as everyone else.
-I'm asking you to go through the whole map and fix the combo inconsistency cause seriously, there are new combos a little everywhere which makes no sense, I'm not gonna combo mod cause there are way too much irregularities here so I don't even know where to start.
-Anyone told you that you had to map with only 1/4 x 3 beats all the time? (A cheap shot but seriously they're everywhere and that's just lazy)
-Any reason to have the slider tick rate on 4? I would lower it to 1 =P
-I would increase the circle size by 2 but please increase it with atleast 1 >.<
00:54:354 (1,2,3,4,5) - Yeaaaaaaah, why put a 1/8 stream randomly here? Change it
01:10:938 (1) - Why is this place on the blue tick?
01:34:706 (3) after this slider to the end everything is mapped on the blue tick which doesn't fit at all, I would end the 01:34:706 (3) slider on the large white tick and then move the whole section after forward so that 01:35:340 (1) starts on the red tick after the slider (Leave the 01:41:361 (4) as it is)

Nekoo[] wrote:

roflninja's Normal~
I'm not sure if this was intentional or not but at 01:01:326 (5) - 01:06:396 (5) you've switched and put the claps before the large white tick etc and I'm just wondering if this was a misstake or if it's supposed to be like that =P
00:18:227 (1) - Stack it better with 00:17:171 (3)? fixed
00:19:072 (3) - New combo? alright
00:22:452 (7) - New combo? ^
00:45:481 (4) - Stack it better with 00:44:424 (3)? (You can do that by just deleting 00:45:481 (4) and readd it) ^
01:06:396 (5) - New combo? ^
01:21:185 (1) - Replace the clap with a finish because of 01:07:241 (7), 01:14:847 (1) and 01:28:368 (1)? ^
01:11:466 (1) - Missed a clap at the beginning of the slider? ^

Thanks for the mod

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [roflninja's Normal].osu

Nekoo[] wrote:

General~
Selee's Beginner~
-Uhm I'm guessing that there should be some custom hitsounds here which I didn't get when I downloaded, ethier add 'em or remove all the unnecessary Inherited sections =P
00:18:227 (2) - New combo?
00:19:072 (3) - New combo?
00:22:452 (5) - New combo?
01:34:706 (2) - New combo? no..@_@ ?

=w= fixed

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [Selee's Beginner].osu

Fixed Nekoo's suggestions for my diff. Updated Selee's and roflninja's diffs and added Selee to tags. Waiting for Oyashiro's update and Louis' update.

Nekoo[] wrote:

OB's Trump Card~
00:18:227 (5) - New combo? Done
00:19:283 - 00:23:931 - Why have you left this part unmapped? =P Mapped a bit of it, but not all of it
00:35:551 (6) - Switch this slider to two notes instead and make a new combo at 00:35:973 (7) (Just adding the new combo on the slider works aswell but that feels wrong =P) Done
00:49:072 (1) - How about doing the same thing here? or you can just apply the new combo on the 00:35:551 (6) slider as you did here =P Fixed
00:51:185 (4) - New combo? Done
00:57:734 (5) - New combo? Doneth
01:00:692 (4) - New combo? Done
01:17:804 (8) - Here you have the same problem as 00:35:551 (6) and 00:49:072, a new combo should start at the end of the slider, ethier add a new combo to the slider or replace it with notes. New Combo'ed
01:17:171 (6,7) - I would increase the spacing by a bit between these 2 notes and the slider that is before and after to avoid confusion. Seperated just a bit, tell me if spacing should increase
01:18:438 (9,10) - Same thing here, the spacing needs to be fixed =P Seems ok to me
01:31:326 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:31:537 (1) - New combo?
01:34:283 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:34:706 (2) - New combo? Done, done, done, and done

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [OB's Trump Card].osu

Updated after last time failed >_>

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [OB's Trump Card].osu

-Black combo color? Remove it and just use the same combo colors as everyone else. <--- It's okey, bcz BG is not black

-I'm asking you to go through the whole map and fix the combo inconsistency cause seriously, there are new combos a little everywhere which makes no sense, I'm not gonna combo mod cause there are way too much irregularities here so I don't even know where to start.
For Example? Show me please where is spam of new combo?

-Anyone told you that you had to map with only 1/4 x 3 beats all the time? (A cheap shot but seriously they're everywhere and that's just lazy)
It's okey for me.

-Any reason to have the slider tick rate on 4? I would lower it to 1 =P
Hmm. You are right. Now. It's 2.

-I would increase the circle size by 2 but please increase it with atleast 1 >.<
Ok)

00:54:354 (1,2,3,4,5) - Yeaaaaaaah, why put a 1/8 stream randomly here? Change it
ok

01:10:938 (1) - Why is this place on the blue tick?<--- Because.

01:34:706 (3) after this slider to the end everything is mapped on the blue tick which doesn't fit at all, I would end the 01:34:706 (3) slider on the large white tick and then move the whole section after forward so that 01:35:340 (1) starts on the red tick after the slider (Leave the 01:41:361 (4) as it is) Yes

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [Lucifer].osu

I forgot about this map, sorry 3:

Hey! Lol roflninja sent meh here to mod (lol because of the guest diff)... Lol nice kudosu stars by rofl! xD

[Selee's Beginner]
00:46:114 (1) - i dont like how this slider looks...kinda ugly
Seems fine.

[roflninja's Normal]
00:17:171 (3) - shorten this slider to end on the white tick at 00:17:804
Seems fine.

[OB's Trump Card]
HP Drain Rate: -1
Double check spacing...Some parts are off
Seems fine.

[Hard]
Seems fine.

[Lucifer]
Why does this diff have its own colors? I'd make all the diffs have the same.
01:40:304 (1,2,3) - move these notes back 1 tick.
Honestly...I think this diff is overmapped...I'd reccommned deleting it.

[Nekoo's Horror]
Well done map! I like this diff!

Overall...Its a nice song...With Nekoo's Horror Diff, I'd TOTALLY reccomend deleting Lucifer Diff...Its just overmapped...and not needed!

~STAR (GOOD LUCK!...Thank roflninja for sending me here )

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

Hey! Lol roflninja sent meh here to mod (lol because of the guest diff)... Lol nice kudosu stars by rofl! xD

[Selee's Beginner]
00:46:114 (1) - i dont like how this slider looks...kinda ugly
Seems fine.

[roflninja's Normal]
00:17:171 (3) - shorten this slider to end on the white tick at 00:17:804
Seems fine.

[OB's Trump Card]
HP Drain Rate: -1
Double check spacing...Some parts are off
Seems fine.

[Hard]
Seems fine.

[Lucifer]
Why does this diff have its own colors? I'd make all the diffs have the same.
01:40:304 (1,2,3) - move these notes back 1 tick.
Honestly...I think this diff is overmapped...I'd reccommned deleting it.

[Nekoo's Horror]
Well done map! I like this diff!

Overall...Its a nice song...With Nekoo's Horror Diff, I'd TOTALLY reccomend deleting Lucifer Diff...Its just overmapped...and not needed!

~STAR (GOOD LUCK!...Thank roflninja for sending me here )

Thanks for your mods. But I wn't delete a diff unless it's really necessary or that the maker of it decides to stop do any changes.

Little Slider fix

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [Selee's Beginner].osu

Terasss! star~

Qrool wrote:

Terasss! star~

Thanks ^^

Making a note. Everyone that doesn't do their changes will get their diff deleted. I'm going to get this ranked. And if people decides to stop do the fixes I will delete them. I will let everyone know if there has been any mods. But for now. I'll leave this here.

Selee's
ok
roflninja's
00:18:227 (1) remove new combo? or add finish (1,2)
OB's
00:16:748 (3,4) spacing
00:30:058 (2) 1 grid right? (grid lv3)
00:37:664 (4) 1 grid up?
00:38:931 (6) 2 grid right?
00:52:452 (5,1,2) spacing
00:54:354 (6,7) spacing a bit close
01:03:438 (2) 1 grid down?
01:10:199 (3) 1 grid down?
01:14:635 (1) 2 grid right?
01:18:227 (2,3) 1 grid up?
01:20:762 (8) 1 grid down?
01:22:664 (3) 1 grid right?
01:24:988 (1,2) 1 grid up?
01:27:100 (5) ^
01:30:481 (5) 4 grid right & 1 grid up?
Hard
00:32:171 (8) 1 grid down?
00:38:720 (5,6) 1 grid up?
01:10:410 (6,7,8,9) 1 grid up
01:24:776 (1) 1 grid right?
Lucifer
00:13:790 (4) 1 grid left
00:53:509 (1) remove new combo?
00:54:776 (1) ^
01:33:650 (1) ^
01:34:706 (3) new combo?
01:36:185 (1) remove new combo?
01:40:304 (1,2,3) no blue tick. Slide the white tick this previous
01:41:889 (n) I think better add note...
Nekoo's
00:20:762 (7) new combo?
00:22:030 (11) 1 grid left?
00:40:621 (n) add note?
01:05:551 (4) new combo?
01:07:452 (6) ^
01:21:185 (3) No whistle & clap ;_;

overal nicemap!

banvi wrote:

Selee's
ok
roflninja's
00:18:227 (1) remove new combo? or add finish (1,2)
OB's
00:16:748 (3,4) spacing
00:30:058 (2) 1 grid right? (grid lv3)
00:37:664 (4) 1 grid up?
00:38:931 (6) 2 grid right?
00:52:452 (5,1,2) spacing
00:54:354 (6,7) spacing a bit close
01:03:438 (2) 1 grid down?
01:10:199 (3) 1 grid down?
01:14:635 (1) 2 grid right?
01:18:227 (2,3) 1 grid up?
01:20:762 (8) 1 grid down?
01:22:664 (3) 1 grid right?
01:24:988 (1,2) 1 grid up?
01:27:100 (5) ^
01:30:481 (5) 4 grid right & 1 grid up?
Hard
00:32:171 (8) 1 grid down?
00:38:720 (5,6) 1 grid up?
01:10:410 (6,7,8,9) 1 grid up
01:24:776 (1) 1 grid right?
Lucifer
00:13:790 (4) 1 grid left
00:53:509 (1) remove new combo?
00:54:776 (1) ^
01:33:650 (1) ^
01:34:706 (3) new combo?
01:36:185 (1) remove new combo?
01:40:304 (1,2,3) no blue tick. Slide the white tick this previous
01:41:889 (n) I think better add note...
Nekoo's
00:20:762 (7) new combo?
00:22:030 (11) 1 grid left?
00:40:621 (n) add note?
01:05:551 (4) new combo?
01:07:452 (6) ^
01:21:185 (3) No whistle & clap ;_;

overal nicemap!

Whoah. Thanks for the mod Banvi ^^ I will let the others know about this mod.

banvi wrote:

Nekoo's
00:20:762 (7) new combo? No
00:22:030 (11) 1 grid left? Fixed
00:40:621 (n) add note? Fixed
01:05:551 (4) new combo? I honestly can't see any reason to put a new combo here.
01:07:452 (6) ^ ^
01:21:185 (3) No whistle & clap ;_; Removed the clap.

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [Nekoo's Horror].osu

Here's my mod! ^^
these are just suggestions

normal:
01:40:199 (1,2,3,4):I would prefer this to be stacked ^^

OB's trumpcard:
for a guest diff the spacing here really confuses me
00:16:326 (2,3,4): not evenly spaced
00:23:297: a bit close to the next combo...move it a bit farther?
00:38:931: not evenly spaced between the sliders >_<
00:52:452 (5,1,2): stack?
00:54:565: not even
00:55:199: ^
01:04:706:^
01:17:382: ^
01:18:227: ^
01:24:988: ^
01:28:157: ^
01:40:199: ^
I'm sorry... i know its a guest diff but if it's like this then the map might be rated lower than it could be

Lucifer
WHY IS THERE BLACK!? (sorry it kind of blends into the backround so i don't like it )
01:40:199 (1,2,3): move one tick <---that way

nekoo's horror:
the map is perfect, but the colours make it hard for me to see the notes right

I love your hard diff's~ star

[Lucifer]
Why does this diff have its own colors? I'd make all the diffs have the same.
01:40:304 (1,2,3) - move these notes back 1 tick.
Honestly...I think this diff is overmapped...I'd reccommned deleting it.

I recomend you to delete yourself, thanks for modding.

Lucifer
00:13:790 (4) 1 grid left
00:53:509 (1) remove new combo?
00:54:776 (1) ^
01:33:650 (1) ^
01:34:706 (3) new combo?
01:36:185 (1) remove new combo?
01:40:304 (1,2,3) no blue tick. Slide the white tick this previous
01:41:889 (n) I think better add note...

thanks for modding

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [Lucifer].osu

Finished.....

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [OB's Trump Card].osu

General

Why are there brackets [] in the tags?

Selee's Beginner

01:21:185 - I expected a note here :/

roflninja's Normal

Fine.

OB's Trump Card

00:22:241 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - Move down 1 unit?

00:36:396 (2) - Move right 1 unit (Spacing isn't equal)

00:51:185 (1,2,3,4) - Choose a nicer looking pattern??

00:54:565 (7,8,9) - Inconsistant spacing?? Fix??

01:35:973 (3) - Center this properly between the notes.

01:38:086 (3) - Move up 1 unit.

Hard

00:12:311 (1,2,3) - Make spacing equal?? (Lag is stopping me from determining a flow issue at the moment)

00:15:692 (1,2,3) - Also isn't the same lengths if that is what you were going for.

00:38:297 (2,3,4,5,6) - Doesn't sound right to me. 00:38:403 (3) - is an empty note and I think 00:38:720 (5) - needs to go here 00:38:826 - and 00:38:931 (6) - should go 00:39:142 - . Make those changes so that the beat looks like this.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22196

Keep in mind that 00:38:086 (1) - is on a different beat pattern than the pattern the rest of the combo is trying to replicate. The true start to that pattern is here 00:37:981 -

00:55:410 (7) - Line this up with note 6 by moving it right 1 unit?

01:20:973 (8) - Make this a part of the combo after it.

Lucifer

Fine

Neko's Horror

Fine


Very well made. Star

Hmm...

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [Selee's Beginner].osu

TheVileOne wrote:

General

Why are there brackets [] in the tags? Nekoo's name. Though I haven't cared to fix what i did wrong when I added it.



Hard

00:12:311 (1,2,3) - Make spacing equal?? (Lag is stopping me from determining a flow issue at the moment) Spacing is strange here. Fixed it.

00:15:692 (1,2,3) - Also isn't the same lengths if that is what you were going for. ^

00:38:297 (2,3,4,5,6) - Doesn't sound right to me. 00:38:403 (3) - is an empty note and I think 00:38:720 (5) - needs to go here 00:38:826 - and 00:38:931 (6) - should go 00:39:142 - . Make those changes so that the beat looks like this.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22196

Keep in mind that 00:38:086 (1) - is on a different beat pattern than the pattern the rest of the combo is trying to replicate. The true start to that pattern is here 00:37:981 - The current I have looks better to me.

00:55:410 (7) - Line this up with note 6 by moving it right 1 unit? Done.

01:20:973 (8) - Make this a part of the combo after it. Aight.



Very well made. Star

Thanks for your mod

star

Did my mod~

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [OB's Trump Card].osu

Selee's Beginner
Needs more hitsounds.

roflninja's Normal
All good

OB's Trump Card
00:24:142 (1,2,3) - Err, spacing?? Just stack them if you want them like that, but jumps would be much nicer
00:55:199 (8,9) - Spacing
01:05:128 (1) - ^ No need for an antijump here
01:17:171 (6,7) - Spacing
01:18:227 (2,3) - TERRIBLE spacing

Hard
Nice

Lucifer
00:40:833 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Get rid of all those new combos
00:43:790 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
00:53:509 (1) - ^
00:54:776 (1) - ^
00:56:255 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ (Though keep one or two of them)
01:14:635 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
01:18:438 (1) - ^
Combo placement seems really random on this difficulty. Please put more thought into it.

Nekoo's Horror
00:40:516 (7) - Move 1/4 later

Yay~

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [Lucifer].osu

o.O

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [Selee's Beginner].osu

To All Modders: I remapped "OB's Trump Card"

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [OB's Trump Card].osu

Some difficulties have a countdown and some don't, make sure they are all the same
New rule, no maps can have more than 2 difficulties to make modding easier

Beginner:
AR + 1
Needs more hitsounds still, add some claps in a rhythm or something
What is with all the custom override timing sections when there are no other hitsounds to use, am I missing something

Normal:
Last timing section isn't doing anything

Trump Card:
I downloaded this from the one you posted and it says update...does that mean it hasn't been added yet? (anyway will mod from one you posted)
00:19:072 (2,3) - spacing
00:22:452 (1,2,3) - ^
00:24:142 (5,6,7) - ^
00:36:396 (7) - new combo
00:51:502 (2,3,4) - spacing
00:56:255 (2,3) - ^
01:01:114 (4,5,6) - spacing
01:08:509 (2,3,4) - spacing
Ok I would suggest you go through the map again with distance snap and check AIMod for all spacing mistakes (there are more I just didn't list them all)
Last timing section isn't doing anything

Hard:
01:34:178 (1) - sounds odd on blue tick, move to white tick

Lucifer:
01:01:114 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - why 3 combo in here when the others are 2
01:10:938 (1) - move to white tick
01:41:466 (4) - move further up
alot of new combo's...didn't do full combo check

Nekoo's Horror:
00:24:459 (2,3) - align
01:38:403 (1) - start on white tick (same endpoint)

*star*

James2250 wrote:

Hard:
01:34:178 (1) - sounds odd on blue tick, move to white tick Sounds fine to me.
*star*

Thanks for your mod

._.

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [Selee's Beginner].osu

Download: 15743 YuNa - Secret Game.rar

James2250 wrote:

Trump Card: Not wanting to be rude, but did you look at AIMod and just nitpicked from there?
I downloaded this from the one you posted and it says update...does that mean it hasn't been added yet? (anyway will mod from one you posted)
00:19:072 (2,3) - spacing Fixed to an extent
00:22:452 (1,2,3) - ^ No
00:24:142 (5,6,7) - ^ No
00:36:396 (7) - new combo Done
00:51:502 (2,3,4) - spacing It's ok....
00:56:255 (2,3) - ^ Fixed to an extent...
01:01:114 (4,5,6) - spacing
01:08:509 (2,3,4) - spacing It's ok....
Ok I would suggest you go through the map again with distance snap and check AIMod for all spacing mistakes (there are more I just didn't list them all) So you're saying that all you did was just look at AIMod -.-
Last timing section isn't doing anything Deleted

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [OB's Trump Card].osu