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Teras

TheVileOne wrote:

General

Why are there brackets [] in the tags? Nekoo's name. Though I haven't cared to fix what i did wrong when I added it.



Hard

00:12:311 (1,2,3) - Make spacing equal?? (Lag is stopping me from determining a flow issue at the moment) Spacing is strange here. Fixed it.

00:15:692 (1,2,3) - Also isn't the same lengths if that is what you were going for. ^

00:38:297 (2,3,4,5,6) - Doesn't sound right to me. 00:38:403 (3) - is an empty note and I think 00:38:720 (5) - needs to go here 00:38:826 - and 00:38:931 (6) - should go 00:39:142 - . Make those changes so that the beat looks like this.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22196

Keep in mind that 00:38:086 (1) - is on a different beat pattern than the pattern the rest of the combo is trying to replicate. The true start to that pattern is here 00:37:981 - The current I have looks better to me.

00:55:410 (7) - Line this up with note 6 by moving it right 1 unit? Done.

01:20:973 (8) - Make this a part of the combo after it. Aight.



Very well made. Star
Thanks for your mod ;)
braian5234
star 8-)
Hijiri Tezuka
Mashley
Selee's Beginner
Needs more hitsounds.

roflninja's Normal
All good

OB's Trump Card
00:24:142 (1,2,3) - Err, spacing?? Just stack them if you want them like that, but jumps would be much nicer
00:55:199 (8,9) - Spacing
01:05:128 (1) - ^ No need for an antijump here
01:17:171 (6,7) - Spacing
01:18:227 (2,3) - TERRIBLE spacing

Hard
Nice :)

Lucifer
00:40:833 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Get rid of all those new combos >:(
00:43:790 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
00:53:509 (1) - ^
00:54:776 (1) - ^
00:56:255 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ (Though keep one or two of them)
01:14:635 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
01:18:438 (1) - ^
Combo placement seems really random on this difficulty. Please put more thought into it.

Nekoo's Horror
00:40:516 (7) - Move 1/4 later
Louis Cyphre
Selee
Hijiri Tezuka
To All Modders: I remapped "OB's Trump Card"

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [OB's Trump Card].osu
James2250
Some difficulties have a countdown and some don't, make sure they are all the same
New rule, no maps can have more than 2 difficulties to make modding easier :D

Beginner:
AR + 1
Needs more hitsounds still, add some claps in a rhythm or something
What is with all the custom override timing sections when there are no other hitsounds to use, am I missing something

Normal:
Last timing section isn't doing anything

Trump Card:
I downloaded this from the one you posted and it says update...does that mean it hasn't been added yet? (anyway will mod from one you posted)
00:19:072 (2,3) - spacing
00:22:452 (1,2,3) - ^
00:24:142 (5,6,7) - ^
00:36:396 (7) - new combo
00:51:502 (2,3,4) - spacing
00:56:255 (2,3) - ^
01:01:114 (4,5,6) - spacing
01:08:509 (2,3,4) - spacing
Ok I would suggest you go through the map again with distance snap and check AIMod for all spacing mistakes (there are more I just didn't list them all)
Last timing section isn't doing anything

Hard:
01:34:178 (1) - sounds odd on blue tick, move to white tick

Lucifer:
01:01:114 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - why 3 combo in here when the others are 2
01:10:938 (1) - move to white tick
01:41:466 (4) - move further up
alot of new combo's...didn't do full combo check

Nekoo's Horror:
00:24:459 (2,3) - align
01:38:403 (1) - start on white tick (same endpoint)

*star*
Topic Starter
Teras

James2250 wrote:

Hard:
01:34:178 (1) - sounds odd on blue tick, move to white tick Sounds fine to me.
*star*
Thanks for your mod
Selee
Hijiri Tezuka

James2250 wrote:

Trump Card: Not wanting to be rude, but did you look at AIMod and just nitpicked from there?
I downloaded this from the one you posted and it says update...does that mean it hasn't been added yet? (anyway will mod from one you posted)
00:19:072 (2,3) - spacing Fixed to an extent
00:22:452 (1,2,3) - ^ No
00:24:142 (5,6,7) - ^ No
00:36:396 (7) - new combo Done
00:51:502 (2,3,4) - spacing It's ok....
00:56:255 (2,3) - ^ Fixed to an extent...
01:01:114 (4,5,6) - spacing
01:08:509 (2,3,4) - spacing It's ok....
Ok I would suggest you go through the map again with distance snap and check AIMod for all spacing mistakes (there are more I just didn't list them all) So you're saying that all you did was just look at AIMod -.-
Last timing section isn't doing anything Deleted
Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [OB's Trump Card].osu
ShanaTan
James2250
Looking back at old posts no I did not "just look at AIMod"....
They actually seemed like errors to me
/leaves
Max300
Oh well looks good to me, star
Hijiri Tezuka
Name changed my diff, and added a few changes.

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [Oyashiro's Secret Game].osu
kusakabe001
nice map XD
star~
Fabi
Hi Teras! good map, hope it get ranked so you can continue with causal chain :P
Hijiri Tezuka
Bump for life
Saten
Hi |

You got Shana's tag wrong, it should be w/o any space~

Star~


Topic Starter
Teras

Saten-san wrote:

Hi |

You got Shana's tag wrong, it should be w/o any space~

Star~


Added Shana to tags.
TERRAneet
star~ ;)
maal
Ranked.
Topic Starter
Teras

Emaal wrote:

Ranked.
Trap.
Xgor
[All difficulties]
Add Hijiri Tezuka to tags.


[All difficulties (Exept Selee's)]
I think it would be great if you used the hitsounds that Selee used in his/herdifficulty in all difficulties.

[Selee's Beginner]
Lacks Selee in tags (I know it's the difficulty name but it should be in as it's in the other difficulties)

[roflninja's Normal]
Lacks roflninja in tags (I know it's the difficulty name but it should be in as it's in the other difficulties)

[OB's Trump Card]
00:18:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Just keep to one spacing here, this part feels has unfitting spacing and is very hard to follow for no reason
00:51:819 (3,4) - No, just no. don't make the spacing larger to a rhythmically tricky part like this. It just don't work.
Ahh ugh, please just disance snap everything. The only part that I see where different spacing worked on this difficulity was on 01:40:199 (1,2,3). Everything else felt just wrong.
00:53:297 (2,3) - Isn't these supposed to be 1/2 later on the timeline, this sounds very odd right now.
01:38:931 (8,9) - ^


00:39:776 (2) - Make this slider straight please.
00:46:114 (1) - Move one grid up so it's aligned and some grids to the right so it's distance snapped correctly (Also move the beat's after so it's correctly spaced there too)

[Killer Queen]
00:37:452 (6)- Kinda looks like you should space this a bit further away from (5)
00:48:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I somewhat get what everything else is following but this stream is just out of place of the song imo. (Atleast (2) You should at least remove that one)
00:56:995 (5) - I think you should move this 1/4 backwards on the time line and make it 1/4 longer to fit the singing.
01:04:495 (1) - Pretty long spinner for being a hard difficulty (I suggest you end it at 01:06:396 (1) or something and map the parts that come after it)
01:33:227 (6) - Space this please, the jump is out of place
01:34:178 (1) - Please spacing this closer to the rest, kinda breaks the flow with two unfitting mini-jumps.

Also rename this difficulty name due to name change.

[Nekoo's Horror]
I would say it would be more fitting if you changed the 0,5x spacing to 0,75x

So.. some things that needs to be looked over but I give you a star at least.
*star*
Topic Starter
Teras

Xgor wrote:

[All difficulties]
Add Hijiri Tezuka to tags.


[All difficulties (Exept Selee's)]
I think it would be great if you used the hitsounds that Selee used in his/herdifficulty in all difficulties.
Can be straight and say that I don't like these hitsounds when I tried them in my diff. I won't use 'em for my diff.



[Killer Queen]
00:37:452 (6)- Kinda looks like you should space this a bit further away from (5) Yep
00:48:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I somewhat get what everything else is following but this stream is just out of place of the song imo. (Atleast (2) You should at least remove that one) This stream sounds perfectly fine to me, won't do anything to this.
00:56:995 (5) - I think you should move this 1/4 backwards on the time line and make it 1/4 longer to fit the singing. Yep
01:04:495 (1) - Pretty long spinner for being a hard difficulty (I suggest you end it at 01:06:396 (1) or something and map the parts that come after it) Will leave it as it is.
01:33:227 (6) - Space this please, the jump is out of place Fixed
01:34:178 (1) - Please spacing this closer to the rest, kinda breaks the flow with two unfitting mini-jumps. Fixed.

Also rename this difficulty name due to name change. Wat
Ty
Xgor

Teras wrote:

Xgor wrote:

Also rename this difficulty name due to name change. Wat
Ty
FFFF I meant that one for [OB's Trump Card]
Hijiri Tezuka

Xgor wrote:

[All difficulties]
[OB's Trump Card]
00:18:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Just keep to one spacing here, this part feels has unfitting spacing and is very hard to follow for no reason
00:51:819 (3,4) - No, just no. don't make the spacing larger to a rhythmically tricky part like this. It just don't work.
Ahh ugh, please just disance snap everything. The only part that I see where different spacing worked on this difficulity was on 01:40:199 (1,2,3). Everything else felt just wrong.
00:53:297 (2,3) - Isn't these supposed to be 1/2 later on the timeline, this sounds very odd right now.
01:38:931 (8,9) - ^


00:39:776 (2) - Make this slider straight please.
00:46:114 (1) - Move one grid up so it's aligned and some grids to the right so it's distance snapped correctly (Also move the beat's after so it's correctly spaced there too)
I would fix all that, but Teras forgot to update my map to the most recent one that I did ;___;

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [Hijiri's Secret Game].osu
jerkaman
really great work every one ;)
Hijiri Tezuka
Live damnit!
Topic Starter
Teras

Hijiri Tezuka wrote:

Live damnit!
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Saten
Selee's Beginner
01:34:283 (2) - remove
01:34:707 (1) - ^
01:35:128 (1) - made this slider super symmetric \:D/
216,336,95128,6,0,C|180:248|64:184|176:128|256:16|336:128|448:184|332:248|296:336,1,1000,2|0
01:40:199 (1) - place this right in the middle
01:41:466 (2,3) - 3 grids left
Edit: 01:35:128 (1) - you might wanna move it one grid down :P

roflninja's Normal
00:57:946 (2) - 1 right and 1 up (Grid level 4)

Hijiri's Secret Game
I guess that you'll remap it :P

Killer Queen
01:14:002 (6,7,1,2,3) - stack properly~

Nekoo's Horror
00:42:734 (1) - stack with previous (6)


:>>>
Selee
Seems my earlier maps can't satisfy my own taste now...could you remove my diff?

sorry...sigh...
Topic Starter
Teras

Selee wrote:

Seems my earlier maps can't satisfy my own taste now...could you remove my diff?

sorry...sigh...
Will do
Chiruno_old
nice map! :)
Mythol
Request from queue~
Very old map :O
Sorry for late x.x

[General]
2 red combo colors, change one~
Inconsistent countdown in Nekoo, but I suggest removing countdown for all diffs.

[Normal]
AR +1?
00:24:142 (1,2,3) - I think unstacking is easier to read, like 01:40:199 (1,2,3)
01:34:706 (1) - How about 1/1 repeat slider instead?

01:41:466 (4) - Clap on start?
Very linear... but nothing wrong ><

[Hijiri]
Circle size +1..
00:23:086 (2) - Spacing..
00:23:931 (4) - ^
00:52:030 (4) - NC here, and remove NC on 00:52:664 (1), to help read better
00:53:403 (2) - NC, if you used ^
00:57:523 (5,6,7,8) - Use consistent spacing (x0.9)
01:03:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Must use consistent spacing, very hard to read otherwise.
01:09:142 (4) - Spacing
01:11:889 (4,5,6) - ^
01:16:537 (4,5) - ^
01:18:650 (3,4) - ^
01:30:692 (7,8) - ^
01:33:227 (4) - ^
01:37:664 (6) - ^
01:38:931 (8,1) - 8 should start 01:39:142, and 1 should start 01:39:354.
Many spacing issues.. orz

[Killer Queen]
OD -1

[Nekoo]
OD -1
Maybe drain +1..
01:05:551 (4) - NC?
Many finishes missing~
00:19:072 (1) - Finish
00:25:410 (1) - Finish on end
00:39:354 (1) - Finish
00:52:875 (3) - Finish on beginning
00:59:635 (2) - ^
01:01:326 (7) - ^
01:07:875 (1) - Finish on end
01:14:847 (1) - Finish
01:21:607 (1) - Finish on beginning
01:28:368 (1) - Finish

I think mapset still needs some work~
Topic Starter
Teras

Mythol wrote:

Request from queue~
Very old map :O
Sorry for late x.x

[General]
2 red combo colors, change one~
Inconsistent countdown in Nekoo, but I suggest removing countdown for all diffs.

[Normal]
AR +1?
00:24:142 (1,2,3) - I think unstacking is easier to read, like 01:40:199 (1,2,3)
01:34:706 (1) - How about 1/1 repeat slider instead?

01:41:466 (4) - Clap on start?
Very linear... but nothing wrong ><

[Hijiri]
Circle size +1..
00:23:086 (2) - Spacing..
00:23:931 (4) - ^
00:52:030 (4) - NC here, and remove NC on 00:52:664 (1), to help read better
00:53:403 (2) - NC, if you used ^
00:57:523 (5,6,7,8) - Use consistent spacing (x0.9)
01:03:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Must use consistent spacing, very hard to read otherwise.
01:09:142 (4) - Spacing
01:11:889 (4,5,6) - ^
01:16:537 (4,5) - ^
01:18:650 (3,4) - ^
01:30:692 (7,8) - ^
01:33:227 (4) - ^
01:37:664 (6) - ^
01:38:931 (8,1) - 8 should start 01:39:142, and 1 should start 01:39:354.
Many spacing issues.. orz

[Killer Queen]
OD -1

[Nekoo]
OD -1
Maybe drain +1..
01:05:551 (4) - NC?
Many finishes missing~
00:19:072 (1) - Finish
00:25:410 (1) - Finish on end
00:39:354 (1) - Finish
00:52:875 (3) - Finish on beginning
00:59:635 (2) - ^
01:01:326 (7) - ^
01:07:875 (1) - Finish on end
01:14:847 (1) - Finish
01:21:607 (1) - Finish on beginning
01:28:368 (1) - Finish

I think mapset still needs some work~
Thanks for the mod, I'll fix what needs ti be fixed once I get my osu working again :-)
roflninja

Mythol wrote:

Request from queue~
Very old map :O
Sorry for late x.x

[Normal]
AR +1?
00:24:142 (1,2,3) - I think unstacking is easier to read, like 01:40:199 (1,2,3)
01:34:706 (1) - How about 1/1 repeat slider instead?

01:41:466 (4) - Clap on start?
Very linear... but nothing wrong ><
All done!

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [roflninja's Normal].osu
wmfchris
killer queen : D

source: SecretGame -KILLER QUEEN-

- custome hitsound unused in the map, delete them and full submit

[Killer Queen]
00:37:452 (6,7) - putting 1/4 duplets like this doesn't look so good. You can consider stacking them together or reduce their spacing, you applied both of them before.
00:40:833 (6) - remove finish at the end? There's no accent in the music.
00:52:347 (4) - remove finish, having finish on (3) is enough for the 3/4 beating.
01:09:142 (3) - spacing which you can simply fix by down 1 grid

[Secret Game]
00:20:551 (4,5,6,7) - seriously they can be put in a more regular shape...
00:22:452 (1,2,3) - misleading spacing
00:53:403 (2,3) - pretty much out of vocal...
01:05:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I don't see the reason to make the spacing gradually smaller...with heeavier beats gradually larger spacing makes more sense

Assuming this is a normal+ - hard diff you should really apply unique spacing for every combo.

In overall the 2 diffs mentioned above may need some improvements, but some good ideas are shown in other diffs.
Topic Starter
Teras

wmfchris wrote:

killer queen : D

source: SecretGame -KILLER QUEEN-

- custome hitsound unused in the map, delete them and full submit

[Killer Queen]
00:37:452 (6,7) - putting 1/4 duplets like this doesn't look so good. You can consider stacking them together or reduce their spacing, you applied both of them before.
00:40:833 (6) - remove finish at the end? There's no accent in the music.
00:52:347 (4) - remove finish, having finish on (3) is enough for the 3/4 beating.
01:09:142 (3) - spacing which you can simply fix by down 1 grid

[Secret Game]
00:20:551 (4,5,6,7) - seriously they can be put in a more regular shape...
00:22:452 (1,2,3) - misleading spacing
00:53:403 (2,3) - pretty much out of vocal...
01:05:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I don't see the reason to make the spacing gradually smaller...with heeavier beats gradually larger spacing makes more sense

Assuming this is a normal+ - hard diff you should really apply unique spacing for every combo.

In overall the 2 diffs mentioned above may need some improvements, but some good ideas are shown in other diffs.
Thanks for the mod, and sure they do. Although I want to keep the style i mapped this the same, considering how it have been pending for about 2 years now :-) I will overlook what you said though and fix what I think should be fixed
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