From my queue. Sorry Kibbleru is a loser.
[General]
[General]
- I'm not sure about the timing at the end... The piano and bells play separately, so I recommend choosing only one of them to map, and set the timing based on that.
- Combo usage could be improved. Try to get your combos starting on downbeats.
- 00:12:471 (1,2) - Just for aesthetic, try to keep their edges a bit further apart: http://puu.sh/jcCDh/0c9762197d.jpg
- 00:43:048 (2) - The sharp curve of this slider will confuse beginner players. Please try to straighten it a bit so the direction is more obvious. My recommendation: http://puu.sh/jcCKN/8e4fbba231.jpg
- 00:51:701 (6) - Clap on end.
- 00:56:317 (1) - Clap on end?
- 00:57:471 (2,3,4) - Flow is quite awkward here. It doesn't play smoothly. I suggest changing the direction of (3) like so: http://puu.sh/jcCRJ/4cd7ed0381.jpg Making (2) and (4) the same shape might look nicer too.
- 01:04:971 (5) - Should have a clap on head to match your hitsound pattern.
- 01:19:971 (2,3,1) - The flow here feels unnatural because the curve of (1) does not follow from the movement of (2,3). Try this for better flow: http://puu.sh/jcDbZ/6a1906cd03.jpg
- 00:03:528 (3) - Hard for the player to anticipate. I recommend doing this instead: http://puu.sh/jcDsq/7524ab1f05.jpg
- 00:06:990 (4) - Unnecessary overmapping. It would be best to keep the rhythm simpler in this relatively calm section of the song.
- 00:31:509 (2) - I recommend spitting this up. It's hard for players at the target level to read this.
- 01:22:566 (1,2) - Refrain from using circles where the player can't predict the speed.
- The map is a bit plain due to excessive use of straight 1/2 beat sliders.
- 00:36:125 (4,5,6) - The overmapped slider ends don't go well with the music. I recommend shortening the sliders by 1/4 beat.
- 01:09:586 - I think it would be nice to put something on this beat to highlight the significant drum beat in the music.
- 01:19:971 (3) - I think it would show the beat emphasis better if you split this into two 1/4 beat sliders and added a circle on the following beat.
- 00:00:644 (2) - I don't think the slider does a good job of emphasizing the downbeat here. It would probably be better to change the rhythm to place a click on the downbeat.
- 00:03:240 (3,4) - Avoid adding extra beats where there are none in the music. They feel out of place.
- 00:13:336 (1,2,1) - Flow is a bit rough. Try curving (2) to allow for smoother cursor movement.
- 00:22:711 (5,1) - The sudden increase in distance doesn't make sense. I think you should keep it consistent with the stream.
- 01:20:548 - Feels really empty here. Add a circle?
- The map feels messy and unstructured because it lacks visual patterns.