This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年5月15日 at 22:32:25

Artist: AKINO with bless4
Title: Jet Coaster Ride
Source: Amagi Brilliant Park
Tags: 甘城ブリリアントパーク
BPM: 165
Filesize: 7020kb
Play Time: 04:03
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (3.19 stars, 490 notes)
2. Insane (4.53 stars, 673 notes)
3. Normal (1.87 stars, 241 notes)

Download: AKINO with bless4 - Jet Coaster Ride
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I'll be there for you

another AKINO with bless4 lol

[General]

1. 背景图裁下弄成1024x768
2. 取消wildscreen support和letterbox
3. 全图就少数地方用了哨音00:21:328 - 00:39:328 - 若果成体统会比较好听，少数还是不用吧

[Insane]

1. 00:30:964 (5) - 换到右边怎样呢http://puu.sh/gx1Rr.jpg
2. 02:52:055 (4,5,6) - 这样试试http://puu.sh/gx21f.jpg

[Hard]

1. 02:35:510 (4) - 不加nc吗
2. 03:19:874 (5) - move down 4 pixels
3. 03:28:237 (3,4) - 没叠好
4. 03:54:237 (2) - 头部折一下，跟后面对应

[Normal]

1. ar+1 od+1
2. 重复的绿线不用管的吗

果然没什么可挑呢

shoot star~

Boom

stars

General
Consider Adding Kiai Times from 01:29:510 to 01:41:328, from 02:36:419 to 02:48:237, and from 03:20:055 to 03:31:874.

Normal
1. 02:58:419 (1) - This spinner is too long.

Hard
1. Change AR into 7.5, OD into 6 or 6.5, HP into 5 or 5.5.
2. 01:12:783 (2,1) - Bad overlap
3. 01:18:055 (1,1) - ^
4. 03:01:419 (1) - This spinner is too long.

Insane
1. Change OD into 7 or 7.5, HP into 6.5 or 7.
2. 01:41:146 (6,1) - This is hard to read.

M4M~:D

[General]
*Widescreen Support and Letterbox during brecks unnecessary (insane why you didnt?)
*You might need Easy and hyper(light insane, guest map) (your hard,insane star gap so big)
*You need KIAI time setting
*Normal AR+1 OD,HP+1(?)
Hard OD,HP-1
Insane OD,HP-1

[Normal]

01:13:328 (4,1) -blanket?
02:02:419 (5,1) - blanket
02:15:874 (2,1) - stack
02:27:510 (2,4) - stack X257 Y269
02:27:874 (3,4) - blanket
02:29:328 (1,2) - blanket
02:56:601 (3,4) - ^
03:25:328 (4,1) - ^

[Hard]

00:26:055 (2,3) -blanket

00:37:328 (5) - NC
01:07:510 (2,2,5) - stack
03:01:328 (1) - why you did it?
03:01:419 (1) - spin appearance so fast (03:01:510 (1) - )

[Insane]

00:26:055 (2,3,4) - stack X106 Y222
00:35:874 (1,3) - blanket
00:42:419 (3,5,2) - stack
01:39:328 (3,1) - blanket

Hi M4M

Okay Ends Of The Mods
Good Luck Kawaii BN

hi, from m4m
wwwwwwww

Hi m4m.

[Insane]

[Preferences]

00:32:055 (2,3) - I misread these two, as not having a new rhythm. NC?
01:47:510 (1,2) - This is awfully strange for me, it probably just me, but wanted to have that here.
02:22:055 (1,2,3,4,5) - I didn't really expect this, but ok.

[Objective]

03:01:328 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is really hard for me to read since the first 4 is a backwards thing, and then keeps going. I don't really know how to explain it well, but I think this could do with a change.
03:07:146 (2) - Change to a spinner.

Other than that, awesome!

Hey M4M !
Insane :
00:30:964 (5) - I like the way you have it but maybe CTRL + G the slider and do this ? http://puu.sh/gOpTn/30fc4d8a52.jpg
00:42:601 (4) - Blanket this note with this slider? 00:41:692 (1) -
00:41:692 (1) - Un select grid snap because the tail isnt properly stacked with 00:42:783 (5) -
00:57:692 (1,3) - Lower these two just a bit? I just don't like linear flow that much xD http://puu.sh/gOqmh/0b926270f5.jpg
01:09:692 (2,2) - Stack these two properly?
01:10:601 (4,4) - Same thing ^ (Super Nazi i'm so sorry :k )
01:21:328 (2,3) - Move 3 closer to the previous slider? http://puu.sh/gOqvs/0ea4de6947.jpg
01:28:055 (3) - x:452 y:280 ?
01:28:964 (2,3,4) - Into a triangle shape ? I just don't like linear flow :l Maybe ? http://puu.sh/gOqAe/710528ada7.jpg
01:35:328 (5,6,1) - Move this down a bit ? http://puu.sh/gOqCN/d2144be68a.jpg
01:39:874 (1) - CTRL + G ?
01:39:874 (1) - I would do something like this instead : http://puu.sh/gOqFW/3c871760e7.jpg
02:00:601 (2,3,5) - Spread these out ? Seems like a bit tight here http://puu.sh/gOqJY/65c9d56652.jpg ( This looks nice 02:39:510 (1,2,3,4) - )
02:20:964 (2,3,4) - Increase distance just a bit here ?
02:26:237 - Add a note here ? Placement : http://puu.sh/gOqQ9/38afae3ace.jpg / After you can blanket it with this slider ! 02:27:510 (2) -
02:31:328 (2,1,2,3) - Since earlier you stacked it , why not do the same here ? 01:24:419 (2,1,2,3) -
02:34:419 (3) - A stream instead of this slider?
02:42:237 (5) - Whistle ?
02:45:146 (6,7) - ^
02:59:874 (1,2,3) - Suggestion : http://puu.sh/gOr3I/31053cfdaa.jpg
03:04:237 (1) - Spinner here instead?
03:47:146 - Steam here maybe ? Its fine with what you have right now though.
03:58:783 (3,4,5,6) - Spread it out just a tiny bit ? http://puu.sh/gOrak/f67f257ba1.jpg

Hard :
00:48:237 (3,4) - Something like this ?http://puu.sh/gOrhE/f30471eb50.jpg
00:52:601 (4,5,6) - I would make it go from bottom to top flow : http://puu.sh/gOrk7/05774e6a5e.jpg
01:07:874 (1) - CTRL + G because I think the vocal is going from lower to higher voice , so it makes sense (to me atleast) for the note to end at the top quadrants.
01:27:874 (2,3) - More distance between these two ?
01:28:601 (1,2) - This looks nice to me : http://puu.sh/gOrs6/170e62d3c9.jpg
02:34:783 (2,3) - More distance here ?
02:39:510 (1,2,3,4) - Back and forth pattern ? It fits for the vocals !
02:42:419 (1) - Should have more distance here !
02:54:055 (1) - ^
03:20:055 (1) - More distance to emphasize the beat ? Maybe : http://puu.sh/gOrEd/57108e3608.jpg
03:28:237 (3,4) - Fix this stack !!

Normal :
00:28:601 (1,3) - Make one of these with the same shape ?
00:36:237 - Add a note or make this 00:35:874 (1) - into a slider
00:36:964 (4) - Change this? It ended on a white tick =w=
00:50:783 - Note here?
01:12:237 (3) - Move this to the right side a bit : http://puu.sh/gOrTv/c6d534cdfe.jpg
01:13:328 (4,1) - Try to blanket? I know it might ruin the distance though ;w; Or make it that it doesn't look like the slider's blanketing it ( new shape for it )
02:03:146 (1) - Whistle ?
02:27:510 (2,4) - Take grid snap off and re stack these ! ( Super Nazi )
02:52:601 (1) - Whistle ?
02:54:055 (2) - ^
03:55:146 (3) - ^
03:56:601 (4) - ^


Love your maps <3 ! + star !

liangv587 wrote:

[General]

1. 背景图裁下弄成1024x768
2. 取消wildscreen support和letterbox
3. 全图就少数地方用了哨音00:21:328 - 00:39:328 - 若果成体统会比较好听，少数还是不用吧

[Insane]

1. 00:30:964 (5) - 换到右边怎样呢http://puu.sh/gx1Rr.jpg flow
2. 02:52:055 (4,5,6) - 这样试试http://puu.sh/gx21f.jpg

不了

[Hard]

1. 02:35:510 (4) - 不加nc吗
2. 03:19:874 (5) - move down 4 pixels
3. 03:28:237 (3,4) - 没叠好 nazi不搞
4. 03:54:237 (2) - 头部折一下，跟后面对应

[Normal]

1. ar+1 od+1
2. 重复的绿线不用管的吗

果然没什么可挑呢

Chaoslitz wrote:

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[Normal]

1. 00:31:146 (4,5) - Try this:
2. 00:35:874 (1) - 試slider? 00:36:237 有drum 故意的
3. 00:48:601 (2,3) - exchange in timezone np
4. 01:12:237 (3) - place around x:372|y:196, 因為放係01:11:874 (2)正上有d怪 應該唔會
5. 01:15:146 (2) - try 2 sliders np
6. 01:22:419 (1,2,3,4) - try this? 不了
   
7. 02:29:328 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
8. 02:35:510 (3) - NC?因為01:28:601 (1)都NC
9. 03:52:237 (1,2,3) - 用slider?個rhythm係normal黎講有d難 應該都ok

[Hard]

1. 搵唔到野mod o3o

[Insane]

1. 00:42:237 (2) - 擺右少少
2. 00:42:783 (5,6) - 試下ctrl+g
3. 01:15:692 (4,5,6,7) - exchange in timezone,我覺得好好多:DD 鼓
4. 02:10:964 (3,4) - ctrl+g
5. 02:11:874 (1) - ^ 鼓
6. 02:22:601 (6,7,8,9) - exchange in timezone
7. 03:04:055 (2,1) - try this?
   
   

shoot star~

zhengyuanhang wrote:

General
Consider Adding Kiai Times from 01:29:510 to 01:41:328, from 02:36:419 to 02:48:237, and from 03:20:055 to 03:31:874.

Normal
1. 02:58:419 (1) - This spinner is too long. i don't think so

Hard
1. Change AR into 7.5, OD into 6 or 6.5, HP into 5 or 5.5.
2. 01:12:783 (2,1) - Bad overlap
3. 01:18:055 (1,1) - ^
4. 03:01:419 (1) - This spinner is too long. same

Insane
1. Change OD into 7 or 7.5, HP into 6.5 or 7.
2. 01:41:146 (6,1) - This is hard to read. same

Taeyang wrote:

M4M~:D

[General]
*Widescreen Support and Letterbox during brecks unnecessary (insane why you didnt?)
*You might need Easy and hyper(light insane, guest map) (your hard,insane star gap so big)
*You need KIAI time setting
*Normal AR+1 OD,HP+1(?)
Hard OD,HP-1
Insane OD,HP-1

[Normal]

01:13:328 (4,1) -blanket?

ex

02:02:419 (5,1) - blanket
02:15:874 (2,1) - stack
02:27:510 (2,4) - stack X257 Y269
02:27:874 (3,4) - blanket
02:29:328 (1,2) - blanket

ex

02:56:601 (3,4) - ^

ex

03:25:328 (4,1) - ^

ex

[Hard]

00:26:055 (2,3) -blanket

ex

00:37:328 (5) - NC
01:07:510 (2,2,5) - stack
03:01:328 (1) - why you did it?
03:01:419 (1) - spin appearance so fast (03:01:510 (1) - )

[Insane]

00:26:055 (2,3,4) - stack X106 Y222
00:35:874 (1,3) - blanket
00:42:419 (3,5,2) - stack
01:39:328 (3,1) - blanket

Haruto_Aizawa wrote:

Hi M4M

[General]
* Uncheck Widescreen Support
* 甘城ブリリアントパーク Use this For Source Name and Replace "Amagi Brilliant Park" to Tags
* Are you not Using some Kiai Time?

[Normal]
Check AiMod First
00:30:055 (3,4) - Make Blanket
00:31:146 (4) - Make it Curve First
00:32:783 - Add Spinner? Ends Here 00:35:874 -
00:36:237 - Add Note Here
00:44:601 - to 00:46:783 - Could You Make it Like This?
00:58:055 (2,3) - its Overlapping
02:41:692 (4,1) - This Can Be Blanket but, Fix this first 02:41:692 (4,3) - This is Overlapping
02:58:419 (1) - This Spinner Can Ends Here 03:00:964 - and Add Again Spinner at 03:01:328 - and Ends Here 03:04:237 -
03:25:328 (4,1) - Blanket it ?
03:47:874 (1) - Missing Whistle on the Slider Tail?
03:49:328 (3) - Why Dont Make it 1/1 Slider? and Add Note at here 03:50:419 - With Clap Sound
03:50:783 (5) - Same ^ Add note here 03:51:874 -
03:55:146 (3) - 1/1 Slider? Note Here 03:56:237 -
03:56:601 (5) - ^ Note Here 03:57:692 -

[Hard]
01:12:783 (2,1) - Overlapped and Looks Ugly
01:18:055 (1,1) - Same ^
There's So Much Sliders and Circles that Have to be Blanket
You're a BN, you can Improve That by Your Own

Okay Ends Of The Mods
Good Luck Kawaii BN

AIR wrote:

hi, from m4m

SPOILER

[Normal]

1. 01:24:237 (3) - add nc
2. 02:35:510 (3) - ^
3. 03:58:055 (5) - ^
4. 02:42:419 (1) - http://puu.sh/gM8pE/b204a302c8.png

[Hard]

1. 00:24:964 (3) - 略微有点停顿感http://puu.sh/gM8Qi/a931ad94b3.png
2. 00:33:146 (3) - add nc
3. 00:37:328 (5) - ^
4. 00:48:237 (3) - 我觉得还是4点两下好些http://puu.sh/gM8ZU/848669d26b.png 有點怪
5. 03:00:783 (3,4,5,1) - 拉开些？ ^

[Insane]

1. 00:32:692 - circle? 不了
2. 00:39:328 (2,3,4,5) - ctrl+j 挪124,267 ^
3. 02:55:328 (6) - http://puu.sh/gM9EV/f62de2ab38.png ^
4. 03:17:328 (1,2,3,4) - 拉开些？^
5. 美丽

wwwwwwww

Osuology wrote:

Hi m4m.

[Insane]

[Preferences]

00:32:055 (2,3) - I misread these two, as not having a new rhythm. NC? new 1/1
01:47:510 (1,2) - This is awfully strange for me, it probably just me, but wanted to have that here.
02:22:055 (1,2,3,4,5) - I didn't really expect this, but ok.

[Objective]

03:01:328 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is really hard for me to read since the first 4 is a backwards thing, and then keeps going. I don't really know how to explain it well, but I think this could do with a change. fixed
03:07:146 (2) - Change to a spinner.

Other than that, awesome!

Aerous wrote:

Hey M4M !
Insane :
00:30:964 (5) - I like the way you have it but maybe CTRL + G the slider and do this ? http://puu.sh/gOpTn/30fc4d8a52.jpg
00:42:601 (4) - Blanket this note with this slider? 00:41:692 (1) -
00:41:692 (1) - Un select grid snap because the tail isnt properly stacked with 00:42:783 (5) -
00:57:692 (1,3) - Lower these two just a bit? I just don't like linear flow that much xD http://puu.sh/gOqmh/0b926270f5.jpg
01:09:692 (2,2) - Stack these two properly?
01:10:601 (4,4) - Same thing ^ (Super Nazi i'm so sorry :k )
01:21:328 (2,3) - Move 3 closer to the previous slider? http://puu.sh/gOqvs/0ea4de6947.jpg
01:28:055 (3) - x:452 y:280 ?
01:28:964 (2,3,4) - Into a triangle shape ? I just don't like linear flow :l Maybe ? http://puu.sh/gOqAe/710528ada7.jpg
01:35:328 (5,6,1) - Move this down a bit ? http://puu.sh/gOqCN/d2144be68a.jpg
01:39:874 (1) - CTRL + G ?
01:39:874 (1) - I would do something like this instead : http://puu.sh/gOqFW/3c871760e7.jpg
02:00:601 (2,3,5) - Spread these out ? Seems like a bit tight here http://puu.sh/gOqJY/65c9d56652.jpg ( This looks nice 02:39:510 (1,2,3,4) - )
02:20:964 (2,3,4) - Increase distance just a bit here ?
02:26:237 - Add a note here ? Placement : http://puu.sh/gOqQ9/38afae3ace.jpg / After you can blanket it with this slider ! 02:27:510 (2) -
02:31:328 (2,1,2,3) - Since earlier you stacked it , why not do the same here ? 01:24:419 (2,1,2,3) -
02:34:419 (3) - A stream instead of this slider?
02:42:237 (5) - Whistle ?
02:45:146 (6,7) - ^
02:59:874 (1,2,3) - Suggestion : http://puu.sh/gOr3I/31053cfdaa.jpg
03:04:237 (1) - Spinner here instead?
03:47:146 - Steam here maybe ? Its fine with what you have right now though.
03:58:783 (3,4,5,6) - Spread it out just a tiny bit ? http://puu.sh/gOrak/f67f257ba1.jpg

Hard :
00:48:237 (3,4) - Something like this ?http://puu.sh/gOrhE/f30471eb50.jpg
00:52:601 (4,5,6) - I would make it go from bottom to top flow : http://puu.sh/gOrk7/05774e6a5e.jpg
01:07:874 (1) - CTRL + G because I think the vocal is going from lower to higher voice , so it makes sense (to me atleast) for the note to end at the top quadrants.
01:27:874 (2,3) - More distance between these two ?
01:28:601 (1,2) - This looks nice to me : http://puu.sh/gOrs6/170e62d3c9.jpg
02:34:783 (2,3) - More distance here ?
02:39:510 (1,2,3,4) - Back and forth pattern ? It fits for the vocals !
02:42:419 (1) - Should have more distance here !
02:54:055 (1) - ^
03:20:055 (1) - More distance to emphasize the beat ? Maybe : http://puu.sh/gOrEd/57108e3608.jpg
03:28:237 (3,4) - Fix this stack !!

Normal :
00:28:601 (1,3) - Make one of these with the same shape ?
00:36:237 - Add a note or make this 00:35:874 (1) - into a slider
00:36:964 (4) - Change this? It ended on a white tick =w=
00:50:783 - Note here?
01:12:237 (3) - Move this to the right side a bit : http://puu.sh/gOrTv/c6d534cdfe.jpg
01:13:328 (4,1) - Try to blanket? I know it might ruin the distance though ;w; Or make it that it doesn't look like the slider's blanketing it ( new shape for it )
02:03:146 (1) - Whistle ?
02:27:510 (2,4) - Take grid snap off and re stack these ! ( Super Nazi )
02:52:601 (1) - Whistle ?
02:54:055 (2) - ^
03:55:146 (3) - ^
03:56:601 (4) - ^


Love your maps <3 ! + star !

thanks you guys for mod
i didn't changed anything about blanket stack and hitsound

[General]

[Insnae]

[Hard]

[Normal]


I think diff spread little strong x_x
Especially Normal~Hard

Normal和hard差的有点大 你考虑把hard的cs调成3.5 ar调成7-7.5你看如何
Normal里有好几个stack我觉得移开可能会好点
另外Normal你也可以考虑要不要调成ar5
其他好像没啥orz
搞好和我说吧 实力水2kd

ZZHBOY wrote:

Normal和hard差的有点大 你考虑把hard的cs调成3.5 ar调成7-7.5你看如何
Normal里有好几个stack我觉得移开可能会好点
另外Normal你也可以考虑要不要调成ar5
其他好像没啥orz
搞好和我说吧 实力水2kd

nm, hard的cs和ar不想調 因為我覺得調了會變得不合適
另外nm1/2 stack我覺得沒什麼太大問題

eINess wrote:

[General]

• BG size 1366x768 better :3

[Insnae]

1. 00:26:964 (1) - nice follow vocals but add finished on head make more emphasis on the vocals I think. like hard diff owo still want follow vocal
2. 00:29:874 (1) - little miss blanket, I think fix better.
3. 00:32:601 (1) -well.. remove this note better I think. Rather awkward? feeling.
4. 00:35:874 (1) - little miss blanket too, I think fix better.
5. 00:43:874 (2) - same above with 00:42:783 (5) -
6. 00:39:328 (2,3) - feel loud x_x I think custum whistle enough. default
7. 00:47:510 (1) - little miss blanket with 00:46:601 (2) -
8. 01:10:783 (1) - I think you miss finish
9. 01:28:055 (3) - Too difficult compared to the Insnae diff try compared with 02:34:964 (3) -
10. 01:32:601 (1) - I guess add finish make better sound :3
11. 01:36:783 (1,2,3) - I think this rhythem better. photo dead
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 02:01:510 (1) - yea, nice follow vocals but add finished on head make more emphasis on the vocals I think.
13. 02:03:146 (1) - add finish on head like 00:44:601 (1) -
14. 02:07:328 (1) - same reason like 02:01:510 (1) -
15. 02:08:964 (1) - add finish on head and tail like 00:50:419 (1) -
16. 02:17:692 (1) - um.. missing clap? I think add bettter xD
17. 02:21:874 (7) - To reduce the distance better.
18. 02:33:692 (1) - add finish on head like 01:26:783 (1) -
19. 02:39:510 (1) - I guess add finish make better sound :3
20. 02:49:510 (4) - ctrl + G ?
21. 03:23:146 (1) - add finish better

[Hard]

1. 00:39:328 (2,3) - same Insane custom whistle better I think

[Normal]

1. 02:54:055 (2) - Nagi >_<
   
   SPOILER

   

I think diff spread little strong x_x
Especially Normal~Hard

other hitsound blanket are fixed
thanks for mod!!!

打爆撸狗

The main issue i have with this map is the diff spread, I prefer if you could make the density of notes more heavy in normal, by having more 1/2. It lacks many 1/2, and creates a big gap to hard which has all 1/2 and some 1/4. In addition, you can also decrease the density of notes in hard.

Do not make the normal too hard and hard too easy

Please consider that and if so I'd love to recheck this map!

Tari wrote:

The main issue i have with this map is the diff spread, I prefer if you could make the density of notes more heavy in normal, by having more 1/2. It lacks many 1/2, and creates a big gap to hard which has all 1/2 and some 1/4. In addition, you can also decrease the density of notes in hard.

Do not make the normal too hard and hard too easy

Please consider that and if so I'd love to recheck this map!

i try change some rhythm and pattern on normal and hard
make them more hard and easy

Unsnap note in hard, Please fix.

[Normal]

1. 02:34:783 (2) - Replace with two circles.
2. 02:40:783 (3) - Move slider to white tick and add a note on red tick+ stack.
3. 01:40:419 - Add a note.
4. 03:32:237 - ^
5. 00:48:601 (2) - Shorten to red tick, add note at white tick.
6. 02:56:237 (2) - ^
7. 00:41:510 - Add a note.
8. 00:56:055 - ^

Normal still needs to be a bit harder.

P.S : Find a 1366x768 BG or resize it? its preferred.

Tari wrote:

Unsnap note in hard, Please fix.

[Normal]

1. 02:34:783 (2) - Replace with two circles.
2. 02:40:783 (3) - Move slider to white tick and add a note on red tick+ stack.
3. 01:40:419 - Add a note.
4. 03:32:237 - ^
5. 00:48:601 (2) - Shorten to red tick, add note at white tick.
6. 02:56:237 (2) - ^
7. 00:41:510 - Add a note.
8. 00:56:055 - ^

Normal still needs to be a bit harder.

P.S : Find a 1366x768 BG or resize it? its preferred.

apply all
also updated the bg size

missed some things,

[Normal]

1. 01:27:874 (2) - Forgot about it, must do this for consistency
2. 02:17:510 - Note? there's an transisiton
3. 02:45:146 - Same.
4. 02:52:419 - Same

[Hard]

1. 03:01:510 (1) - Spinner ending is wrong, look at normal diff, should end at 03:04:237 -

Looks good after that, sorry for trouble.

EDIT : After gathering some more opinions, I feel 03:02:783 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - should get toned just a bit, I love the pattern yeah. but it doesn't work. it creates a huge gap.

Tari wrote:

missed some things,

[Normal]

1. 01:27:874 (2) - Forgot about it, must do this for consistency
2. 02:17:510 - Note? there's an transisiton
3. 02:45:146 - Same.
4. 02:52:419 - Same

[Hard]

1. 03:01:510 (1) - Spinner ending is wrong, look at normal diff, should end at 03:04:237 -

Looks good after that, sorry for trouble.

EDIT : After gathering some more opinions, I feel 03:02:783 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - should get toned just a bit, I love the pattern yeah. but it doesn't work. it creates a huge gap.

apply all ><
thanks again

Qualified!

Tari showed me this map the other day, and now its ranked xD.

Grats~