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Normal
+check AI mod
+00:13:846 (4) - doesnt go well with the song, maybe split it into multiple sliders like this
+00:23:446 (2) - this is too close to 00:22:646 (1), some players might hit 00:23:446 (2) too early because of it
+01:47:446 (6,1) - these are too far from each other
+01:51:846 (7) - add NC here?
+making 02:56:646 (8) and 02:57:046 (9) a tick longer sounds better
Hard:
+check AI mod, your kiai's aren't snapped
+move 00:16:546 (4) two ticks to the left ( 00:16:446 )
+00:44:196 (3,4,5) - don't sound good w/ the song
+01:10:796 (5,1) - overlaps like this probably aren't rankable
+01:40:046 (3,4) - don't go with the song
+01:42:046 (1) - doesn't go with the song (try to split it into more sliders/circles)
+01:49:446 (5) - you don't need this note here
+01:49:846 (1) - doesn't go with the song (split it into multiple sliders/circles)
+01:51:646 (4,5,6) - ^
+you can end the kiai at 03:03:046 since there aren't any more notes after it
good luck!
Normal
+check AI mod
+00:13:846 (4) - doesnt go well with the song, maybe split it into multiple sliders like this
+00:23:446 (2) - this is too close to 00:22:646 (1), some players might hit 00:23:446 (2) too early because of it
+01:47:446 (6,1) - these are too far from each other
+01:51:846 (7) - add NC here?
+making 02:56:646 (8) and 02:57:046 (9) a tick longer sounds better
Hard:
+check AI mod, your kiai's aren't snapped
+move 00:16:546 (4) two ticks to the left ( 00:16:446 )
+00:44:196 (3,4,5) - don't sound good w/ the song
+01:10:796 (5,1) - overlaps like this probably aren't rankable
+01:40:046 (3,4) - don't go with the song
+01:42:046 (1) - doesn't go with the song (try to split it into more sliders/circles)
+01:49:446 (5) - you don't need this note here
+01:49:846 (1) - doesn't go with the song (split it into multiple sliders/circles)
+01:51:646 (4,5,6) - ^
+you can end the kiai at 03:03:046 since there aren't any more notes after it
good luck!
Topic Starter
from my queueHi!
Normal
+check AI mod
+00:13:846 (4) - doesnt go well with the song, maybe split it into multiple sliders like this
+00:23:446 (2) - this is too close to 00:22:646 (1), some players might hit 00:23:446 (2) too early because of it
+01:47:446 (6,1) - these are too far from each other
+01:51:846 (7) - add NC here?
+making 02:56:646 (8) and 02:57:046 (9) a tick longer sounds better
Hard:
+check AI mod, your kiai's aren't snapped
+move 00:16:546 (4) two ticks to the left ( 00:16:446 )
+00:44:196 (3,4,5) - don't sound good w/ the song
+01:10:796 (5,1) - overlaps like this probably aren't rankable
+01:40:046 (3,4) - don't go with the song
+01:42:046 (1) - doesn't go with the song (try to split it into more sliders/circles)
+01:49:446 (5) - you don't need this note here
+01:49:846 (1) - doesn't go with the song (split it into multiple sliders/circles)
+01:51:646 (4,5,6) - ^
+you can end the kiai at 03:03:046 since there aren't any more notes after it
good luck!
I totally appreciate your mod
I've already updated the beatmap with all your changes + corrected some issues I noticed!
Thank you really much!
nokd
5454 funktioniert fuer mich besser als offset
Ich bin eigentlich nur hier weil mir langweilig ist und du den gleichen diffname benutzt wie ich: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/251663
Der ganze song scheint auf 1/3 zu snappen die ganzen 3/8 rhythms sind quasi falsch lol.
ein beispiel was durch den ganzen song anwendbar waere: 01:13:846 (4,5,6,1) - http://puu.sh/fYj5D/98e4bf3b2f.jpg
ItaloBrothers scheinen 1/3 rhythms zu moegen
uhh ja happy resnapping??
5454 funktioniert fuer mich besser als offset
Ich bin eigentlich nur hier weil mir langweilig ist und du den gleichen diffname benutzt wie ich: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/251663
Der ganze song scheint auf 1/3 zu snappen die ganzen 3/8 rhythms sind quasi falsch lol.
ein beispiel was durch den ganzen song anwendbar waere: 01:13:846 (4,5,6,1) - http://puu.sh/fYj5D/98e4bf3b2f.jpg
ItaloBrothers scheinen 1/3 rhythms zu moegen
uhh ja happy resnapping??
Topic Starter
HahaOkoratu wrote:
nokd
5454 funktioniert fuer mich besser als offset
Ich bin eigentlich nur hier weil mir langweilig ist und du den gleichen diffname benutzt wie ich: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/251663
Der ganze song scheint auf 1/3 zu snappen die ganzen 3/8 rhythms sind quasi falsch lol.
ein beispiel was durch den ganzen song anwendbar waere: 01:13:846 (4,5,6,1) - http://puu.sh/fYj5D/98e4bf3b2f.jpg
ItaloBrothers scheinen 1/3 rhythms zu moegen
uhh ja happy resnapping??
vielen dank für den mod!!! (mal auf deutsch ^^)omg ich wusste iwas stimmt nich mit dem snapping^^ ich bin nur (kA warum) nie auf 1/3 gekommen ._.
aber super dass du das rausgefunden hast!
das mit dem offset war auch etwas besser als vorher
danke nochmal!
btw das mit dem gleichen diffname find ich einfach nur herrlich xDD
~Changes~
updated and resnapped all difficulties (except easy ->not necessary)
+ corrected offset
+ improved colours and designs
+ corrected offset
+ improved colours and designs
would appreciate more mods :3
thanks in advance!
hi just random here
[General]
[General]
- Title: Pandora 2012 (Video Edit)
- Artist: Italobrothers
https://itunes.apple.com/gb/album/pando ... =514331271 - Tags: italobrothers italo brothers pandora 2012 nazu nazusan should be all removed because is title artist and username wich re searchable already without tags
- Source: remove your source
Only use the Source field if the song comes from or was made famous by a video game, movie, or series. Website names are not an acceptable Artist nor Source.
- you have some conflicts in the diffs check AiMod
- BG looks a bit NSFW
Topic Starter
Thanks for your mod!Lally wrote:
hi just random here
[General]those are all unrankable things wich you should fix o3o/ gl
- Title: Pandora 2012 (Video Edit)
- Artist: Italobrothers
https://itunes.apple.com/gb/album/pando ... =514331271- Tags: italobrothers italo brothers pandora 2012 nazu nazusan should be all removed because is title artist and username wich re searchable already without tags
- Source: remove your source
Only use the Source field if the song comes from or was made famous by a video game, movie, or series. Website names are not an acceptable Artist nor Source.- you have some conflicts in the diffs check AiMod
- BG looks a bit NSFW
I've updated the beatmaps and changed everything you criticised
Would be nice if more mods take a look at my map
Thanks in advance!
irc mod~!
17:14 NazuSan: no problem 
17:17 Thomasz: alright so
17:17 Thomasz: first of all
17:17 Thomasz: I really do not recommend having 1/3 on insane
17:17 Thomasz: it will divide your bpm into 3
17:18 Thomasz: and it does work for some songs which are low bpm
17:18 Thomasz: but do have like a quick guitar riff etc
17:18 Thomasz: however I wouldn't use it
17:18 Thomasz: 1/4 is a lot better for the song
17:18 Thomasz: 2nd
17:18 Thomasz: you shouldn't map the song by the singers voice
17:19 Thomasz: you want to have the circles going in rhythm with the beat, not the singers voice
17:19 Thomasz: this dont apply with vocaloid, cause it is made by computer so it's alright to map then for a voice
17:20 Thomasz: 00:09:054 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) -
17:20 Thomasz: this part is a bit meh
17:20 Thomasz: a hitcircle on blue tick isn't that wise unless you know what youre doing
17:20 Thomasz: + then theres a big white tick after which could have been used for the rhythm
17:21 Thomasz: if one isn't an experienced mapper
17:21 Thomasz: you should use white ticks for sliders and circles
17:21 Thomasz: and red ticks for sliders and circles
17:21 Thomasz: blues if the song requires it
17:21 Thomasz: 00:13:320 (3,4,5,6) -
17:21 Thomasz: same here
17:21 Thomasz: 00:15:454 (1,2) -
17:22 Thomasz: latter could be on the white tick
17:22 Thomasz: 00:19:454 (1,2) -
17:22 Thomasz: thats really hard to hit
17:22 Thomasz: abit annoying to
17:22 Thomasz: 00:24:920 (1,2,3) -
17:23 Thomasz: no dont do that
17:23 Thomasz: not really following the rhythm
17:23 Thomasz: only the singers voice again
17:23 Thomasz: 00:25:720 (4) -
17:23 Thomasz: dont start on red tick
17:23 Thomasz: put a hitcircle, much better
17:23 Thomasz: 00:26:120 (1,2) -
17:23 Thomasz: nope,
17:23 Thomasz: on red tick
17:24 Thomasz: and yeah, you have to make this 1/4 if you want red ticks to be used
17:24 Thomasz: 00:28:387 (1,2) - not going with rhyhtm
17:24 Thomasz: 00:29:320 (3) -
17:24 Thomasz: start on white tick
17:25 Thomasz: 00:33:754 (4) - move tored
17:25 Thomasz: 00:35:720 (4,5) -
17:25 Thomasz: not on rhyhtm
17:25 Thomasz: 00:36:520 (6,7,8) - fix it so that it's readable + on par with rhythm
17:26 Thomasz: 00:38:654 (2,3) - move 3 to white tick
17:26 Thomasz: 00:40:520 (3) - start on white tick
17:26 Thomasz: 00:44:254 (2,3,4) - fix that so thats its on par with rhythm
17:26 Thomasz: remember 1/4!
17:26 Thomasz: 00:50:654 (2,3,4) -
17:27 Thomasz: nope, not on rhythm
17:27 Thomasz: white and red ticks dude!
17:27 Thomasz: and 1/4!!
17:27 Thomasz: 01:07:320 (6,7,8,9) - you could move 8 9
17:27 Thomasz: not under the 6
17:27 Thomasz: and 7
17:28 Thomasz: 01:12:254 (7,8,9) -
17:28 Thomasz: same here
17:28 Thomasz: 01:18:520 (6,7,8,9) - ^
17:28 Thomasz: 01:38:654 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this isnt tag 4 lol
17:29 Thomasz: make it readable
17:29 Thomasz: 01:39:720 (1) - start on white tick
17:29 Thomasz: 01:42:254 (2,3) -
17:29 Thomasz: white tick for slider
17:30 Thomasz: 01:44:120 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) -
17:30 Thomasz: you could make this whole pattern way easier
17:30 Thomasz: it's pretty calm, so it shouldnt be that spaced out
17:30 Thomasz: 01:46:120 (16) - start on white
17:30 Thomasz: 01:51:320 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
17:30 Thomasz: woah there
17:31 Thomasz: 01:53:854 (12,13,14,15) - not going with rhythm
17:31 Thomasz: 01:58:920 (5) -
17:31 Thomasz: not with rhyhm
17:32 Thomasz: 02:24:120 (6,7,8,9) - make it again so that 8 & 9 will continue the stream
17:32 Thomasz: 02:39:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing changes all the time
17:33 Thomasz: make it even
17:33 Thomasz: 02:42:520 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - like here
17:33 Thomasz: 02:46:520 (4,5,6,7,1) - kind of ugly in my opinion, you could make it clearer + easier to read
17:33 Thomasz: 02:47:320 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
17:33 Thomasz: again spacing issues
17:34 Thomasz: 02:52:920 (5,6,7,8) - 02:54:654 (4,5,6,7) - you gotta use same snap distance
17:35 Thomasz: 03:00:120 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - distance snap issuese
17:35 Thomasz: alright so
17:35 Thomasz: TL;DR
17:35 Thomasz: cause you cant really fix these before you do the basic changes
17:35 Thomasz: make the difficult 1/4
17:36 Thomasz: use the same distance snap in different parts
17:36 Thomasz: like in the beginning its calm
17:36 Thomasz: so use low distance snap
17:36 Thomasz: but when beat drops
17:36 Thomasz: you can higher it
17:36 Thomasz: BUT
17:36 Thomasz: keep it same, don't change pattern spacing, make them the same distance from eachother
17:36 Thomasz: it'll better the rhythm and outlook
17:37 Thomasz: I know this is prettty basic suggestion but, Blanket!! blanket blanket!!
17:37 Thomasz: it'll make it look more nice
17:37 Thomasz: + easier to read
17:37 Thomasz: you have to do quite alot of work to get it proper
17:38 Thomasz: 01:12:654 (1) -
17:38 Thomasz: http://puu.sh/geYMs/ecef67a01a.jpg
17:38 Thomasz: you want to keep the prev and next about the same length in the different spots
17:38 Thomasz: this is the
17:38 Thomasz: drop part so you should have them pretty much the same
17:38 Thomasz: not saying you should have both 2,81 unless you really want to, I woont suggest it
17:39 Thomasz: lower than 2,8 but not as low as 0,64
17:39 Thomasz: something in the middle!
17:39 Thomasz: for every note in the drop section!
17:39 Thomasz: when it drops, change distance snap to a smaller size and then repeat!
17:39 Thomasz: 1/4, you really want to make it 1/4
17:39 Thomasz: if you feel like some of the parts can be made 1/3, you can try
17:39 Thomasz: but it means you really have to know what you're doing
17:40 Thomasz: these rules I just said applies for basically every single difficulty
17:40 Thomasz: the former suggestions were for insane difficulties
17:40 Thomasz: Just TL;DR. distance snap properly, 1/4, red for hitcircle and white for sliders and hitcircles if it requires so
17:41 Thomasz: use blue ticks with knowledge
17:41 Thomasz: Hope this helps!
17:17 Thomasz: alright so
17:17 Thomasz: first of all
17:17 Thomasz: I really do not recommend having 1/3 on insane
17:17 Thomasz: it will divide your bpm into 3
17:18 Thomasz: and it does work for some songs which are low bpm
17:18 Thomasz: but do have like a quick guitar riff etc
17:18 Thomasz: however I wouldn't use it
17:18 Thomasz: 1/4 is a lot better for the song
17:18 Thomasz: 2nd
17:18 Thomasz: you shouldn't map the song by the singers voice
17:19 Thomasz: you want to have the circles going in rhythm with the beat, not the singers voice
17:19 Thomasz: this dont apply with vocaloid, cause it is made by computer so it's alright to map then for a voice
17:20 Thomasz: 00:09:054 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) -
17:20 Thomasz: this part is a bit meh
17:20 Thomasz: a hitcircle on blue tick isn't that wise unless you know what youre doing
17:20 Thomasz: + then theres a big white tick after which could have been used for the rhythm
17:21 Thomasz: if one isn't an experienced mapper
17:21 Thomasz: you should use white ticks for sliders and circles
17:21 Thomasz: and red ticks for sliders and circles
17:21 Thomasz: blues if the song requires it
17:21 Thomasz: 00:13:320 (3,4,5,6) -
17:21 Thomasz: same here
17:21 Thomasz: 00:15:454 (1,2) -
17:22 Thomasz: latter could be on the white tick
17:22 Thomasz: 00:19:454 (1,2) -
17:22 Thomasz: thats really hard to hit
17:22 Thomasz: abit annoying to
17:22 Thomasz: 00:24:920 (1,2,3) -
17:23 Thomasz: no dont do that
17:23 Thomasz: not really following the rhythm
17:23 Thomasz: only the singers voice again
17:23 Thomasz: 00:25:720 (4) -
17:23 Thomasz: dont start on red tick
17:23 Thomasz: put a hitcircle, much better
17:23 Thomasz: 00:26:120 (1,2) -
17:23 Thomasz: nope,
17:23 Thomasz: on red tick
17:24 Thomasz: and yeah, you have to make this 1/4 if you want red ticks to be used
17:24 Thomasz: 00:28:387 (1,2) - not going with rhyhtm
17:24 Thomasz: 00:29:320 (3) -
17:24 Thomasz: start on white tick
17:25 Thomasz: 00:33:754 (4) - move tored
17:25 Thomasz: 00:35:720 (4,5) -
17:25 Thomasz: not on rhyhtm
17:25 Thomasz: 00:36:520 (6,7,8) - fix it so that it's readable + on par with rhythm
17:26 Thomasz: 00:38:654 (2,3) - move 3 to white tick
17:26 Thomasz: 00:40:520 (3) - start on white tick
17:26 Thomasz: 00:44:254 (2,3,4) - fix that so thats its on par with rhythm
17:26 Thomasz: remember 1/4!
17:26 Thomasz: 00:50:654 (2,3,4) -
17:27 Thomasz: nope, not on rhythm
17:27 Thomasz: white and red ticks dude!
17:27 Thomasz: and 1/4!!
17:27 Thomasz: 01:07:320 (6,7,8,9) - you could move 8 9
17:27 Thomasz: not under the 6
17:27 Thomasz: and 7
17:28 Thomasz: 01:12:254 (7,8,9) -
17:28 Thomasz: same here
17:28 Thomasz: 01:18:520 (6,7,8,9) - ^
17:28 Thomasz: 01:38:654 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this isnt tag 4 lol
17:29 Thomasz: make it readable
17:29 Thomasz: 01:39:720 (1) - start on white tick
17:29 Thomasz: 01:42:254 (2,3) -
17:29 Thomasz: white tick for slider
17:30 Thomasz: 01:44:120 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) -
17:30 Thomasz: you could make this whole pattern way easier
17:30 Thomasz: it's pretty calm, so it shouldnt be that spaced out
17:30 Thomasz: 01:46:120 (16) - start on white
17:30 Thomasz: 01:51:320 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
17:30 Thomasz: woah there
17:31 Thomasz: 01:53:854 (12,13,14,15) - not going with rhythm
17:31 Thomasz: 01:58:920 (5) -
17:31 Thomasz: not with rhyhm
17:32 Thomasz: 02:24:120 (6,7,8,9) - make it again so that 8 & 9 will continue the stream
17:32 Thomasz: 02:39:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing changes all the time
17:33 Thomasz: make it even
17:33 Thomasz: 02:42:520 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - like here
17:33 Thomasz: 02:46:520 (4,5,6,7,1) - kind of ugly in my opinion, you could make it clearer + easier to read
17:33 Thomasz: 02:47:320 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
17:33 Thomasz: again spacing issues
17:34 Thomasz: 02:52:920 (5,6,7,8) - 02:54:654 (4,5,6,7) - you gotta use same snap distance
17:35 Thomasz: 03:00:120 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - distance snap issuese
17:35 Thomasz: alright so
17:35 Thomasz: TL;DR
17:35 Thomasz: cause you cant really fix these before you do the basic changes
17:35 Thomasz: make the difficult 1/4
17:36 Thomasz: use the same distance snap in different parts
17:36 Thomasz: like in the beginning its calm
17:36 Thomasz: so use low distance snap
17:36 Thomasz: but when beat drops
17:36 Thomasz: you can higher it
17:36 Thomasz: BUT
17:36 Thomasz: keep it same, don't change pattern spacing, make them the same distance from eachother
17:36 Thomasz: it'll better the rhythm and outlook
17:37 Thomasz: I know this is prettty basic suggestion but, Blanket!! blanket blanket!!
17:37 Thomasz: it'll make it look more nice
17:37 Thomasz: + easier to read
17:37 Thomasz: you have to do quite alot of work to get it proper
17:38 Thomasz: 01:12:654 (1) -
17:38 Thomasz: http://puu.sh/geYMs/ecef67a01a.jpg
17:38 Thomasz: you want to keep the prev and next about the same length in the different spots
17:38 Thomasz: this is the
17:38 Thomasz: drop part so you should have them pretty much the same
17:38 Thomasz: not saying you should have both 2,81 unless you really want to, I woont suggest it
17:39 Thomasz: lower than 2,8 but not as low as 0,64
17:39 Thomasz: something in the middle!
17:39 Thomasz: for every note in the drop section!
17:39 Thomasz: when it drops, change distance snap to a smaller size and then repeat!
17:39 Thomasz: 1/4, you really want to make it 1/4
17:39 Thomasz: if you feel like some of the parts can be made 1/3, you can try
17:39 Thomasz: but it means you really have to know what you're doing
17:40 Thomasz: these rules I just said applies for basically every single difficulty
17:40 Thomasz: the former suggestions were for insane difficulties
17:40 Thomasz: Just TL;DR. distance snap properly, 1/4, red for hitcircle and white for sliders and hitcircles if it requires so
17:41 Thomasz: use blue ticks with knowledge
17:41 Thomasz: Hope this helps!