Midge wrote:

m4m, thaaaaanks. very solid map.

[Insane]

first run and replay

run: https://a.pomf.se/eewcvf.png
replay: https://a.pomf.se/fepisv.osr

00:49:638 (3,4) - blanket properly? https://a.pomf.se/jscaej.png ✔ lol, but someone already poointed out this and I thought I did it xD Anyway, I hope I fixed it this time
00:51:586 (5) - pointed downwards too much, breaks flow a bit. maybe rotate a little https://a.pomf.se/olvepy.png ✘ Actually I want that exact movement because I need that jump. The orientation is due to the next pattern, so I can't change it
00:53:144 (3) - better ctrl+h'd imo https://a.pomf.se/zkhhph.png ✔ Oh, yeah xD
01:41:456 (1,2,3,4) - jumps are too large imo, especially for this part ✘ Well... they're just x2.10 or so and these jumps aren't that big on such a low BPM song imo
02:17:300 (3) - extend repeater by one or add a circle at the red tick. ✔ I forgot about this xD They were supposed to be 3 repeats, lol. Fixed
02:44:962 (3) - ctrl+g ✔ It was as you say in priciple, but I don't remember why I changed it. Looking again to this part convinced me this time, so fixed
02:47:690 (2,3,4) - would be better like this: https://a.pomf.se/dlcuos.png (rotate by 120 degrees for each slider) ≈ It was unpleasant, indeed, but I noticed that the problem was the (3), so I divided this slider into 2 circles and made a new pattern

good map, i was hard pressed to find stuff lol >.< Thanks

[Hard]

00:43:404 (2) - a repeating slider like 1 would sound better imo ✔ Nice catch :3
00:46:521 (2) - try this? https://a.pomf.se/ktbeow.png ✔ *^*
00:51:586 (4) - kinda ugly, the curves are too pointed. try this https://a.pomf.se/kfrxgg.png ✔ Fixed
01:01:326 (1) - would be better like this https://a.pomf.se/gyclet.png ✔ Yessir o7
01:20:417 (1,2,3) - might be too confusing for hard. but w/e, i think it's fine I know, but I can't come up with anything :/ If someone will have a better option I'll surely change it
01:43:794 (1,2) - antijump here may be too confusing for beginning players :S ✔ I watched a couple of testplays and they always missed there so gotta change this
01:49:248 (3) - ctrl+g ✘ There will be a x3.0 jump between them later xD I tried to make a "figure 8" movement here and I think I'll keep it as it is
01:44:573 (3) - same as 00:51:586 (4) - ✔ Fixed :3

[Normal]

00:32:105 (1) - maybe not a good idea. try to stay away from having 2 repeaters, it's especially hard to read for starting players ✔ A lot of modders pointed this out and after looking again and again at this I think you guys are right, so fixed
01:09:508 (1,2) - curved too much imo ✔ Indeed
01:56:261 (1) - same ✔ As I said above already :3

fairly solid map

very nice and clean mapset. good luck. o/

Bonzi wrote:

hey Sergio

Normal
Non male, non ho molto da dire su questa diff, se non per due cosette:

[]01:30:157 (2,3,1,2) - Un ritmo del genere non andrebbe un pò meglio? http://puu.sh/gUqdU/dad284282f.jpg ✔ Good :3
[]01:42:430 (2,3,4) - Sono in dubbio su quanto questo pattern possa essere intuitivo. Voglio dire, é sicuramente uno dei punti più densi, per via del circle(2)-slider(3)-circle(4), quindi che ne diresti di mettere un repeat sullo slider a 01:42:625 (3) - invece di un circle per semplificare un pò le cose? (Guarda, hai già fatto qualcosa di simile su 01:45:742 (5) - !) ✔ lol, no so a cosa stessi pensando xD

Hard

[]00:50:807 (1,2,3) - Non mi piace tanto, forse potresti provare qualcosa del genere? ✔ Meglio :3
[]01:19:833 (4) - non sarebbe meglio fare come hai fatto in 02:22:170 (4) -? plz :>>>> ✔ Ahahaha, dat faccina xD Come posso resisterti xD
[]01:28:209 (1) - Y U NO SLIDERART ✔ 'CAUZE I'M NUB xD
[]03:05:807 (4) - Stessa cosa di 01:19:833 (4) -. ✔ Yep :3

Insane

[]Ho un dubbio molto grande su queste sezioni: 00:33:859 (1,2,3) - ✘ Nope, 1/4 qui , 00:38:631 (6,7) - ✔ Era da 1/6 , 00:40:190 (5,6) - ✘ 1/4 e 00:41:066 (2) - ≈ Questo non son riuscito a capirlo nemmeno io a 25%. Credo aspettero' qualcuno in grado di sentirlo :/ , non riesco a capire lo snap di queste.
Sembrano esserci altri suoni che non facciano parte dello snap 1/4, ma non riesco a capire se sono 1/6 o no... Checkati tutti a 25% e mi son stati chiari, eccetto l'ultimo
[]02:36:781 (1) - Ti consiglio di usare sempre il comando "convert slider to stream", é molto utile per creare streams più beli (q-quindi non intendi fare altro per questi, v-vero?vero?ç.ç) ✘ Sapevo lo avresti detto, ma ho cercato di renderlo un po' "a casaccio" siccome ci sono un sacco di note del violino molto "furiose" (non saprei come dirlo in ogni caso). Lo stream che fa una bella curva non ce lo vedo per nulla in questo punto, sorry xD

Good luck :>
e scusa per la mod piuttosto corta, ma le mie abilità di modding non sono granche ;_;

• 01:09:508 (1) - I think it would be better to take out the whistle
  I just noticed you put them on every 2 beats.
  Maybe it would be better to have the whsitle on 01:09:508 (1,2,3) and leave 01:11:846 (4,5) blank and then repeat the pattern?
  Having alot of whistles can make it sound jarring.
  01:26:651 (1) - Maybe reshape it this way?
  SPOILER

  
  02:04:053 (1) - Move this to (147x, 150y) so it sits properly under 02:02:495 (2)
  02:14:768 - Maybe add or note here?
  02:36:781 (1,1,1) - I would turn it into 1 at this difficulty. Also I dont think a kiai time is necessary at this section

• 00:39:898 (1,4) - These sliders would look better curved a bit more outwards imo
  00:43:404 (2) - ctrl+G?
  01:46:716 (4) - stack this with 01:46:911 (1) instead
  01:51:391 (1) - stack this wth 01:51:586 (2)
  02:01:716 (3) - I think you should curve this out like your other 2 sliders to make it prettier. Like this
  SPOILER

  
  02:24:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You should space these out abit more like you did with 02:25:872 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
  02:47:495 (5) - stack this with 02:47:690 (1)
  02:54:118 (2) - it would look better if wasnt overlapped by 02:53:534 (7) imo. Maybe move some stuff around

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

Hi from my m4m queue p/4003832/

Normal

• 01:09:508 (1) - I think it would be better to take out the whistle ✔ Yep
  I just noticed you put them on every 2 beats. Yes, this is due to the program I used to copy my hitsounds. (I used the Insane as the reference so it took all hitsounds from there :/) I'll check for these
  Maybe it would be better to have the whsitle on 01:09:508 (1,2,3) and leave 01:11:846 (4,5) blank and then repeat the pattern?
  Having alot of whistles can make it sound jarring.
  01:26:651 (1) - Maybe reshape it this way? ✘ I should change also the other similar slider I made, but this shape doesn't really express the rhythm I want :/
  SPOILER

  
  02:04:053 (1) - Move this to (147x, 150y) so it sits properly under 02:02:495 (2) ✔ Fixed, even if nobody will ever notice that while playing xD
  02:14:768 - Maybe add or note here? ✘ I think it will be too hard doing that s I'll leave it as it is
  02:36:781 (1,1,1) - I would turn it into 1 at this difficulty. ✔ It was indeed ugly Also I dont think a kiai time is necessary at this section ✘ Kiai times have to be consistent on all the diffs. Check the other diffs and you'll notice that there has to be a kiai time there

Hard

• 00:39:898 (1,4) - These sliders would look better curved a bit more outwards imo ✘ Nope, this curve gives the movement I wanted. Curving it more will ruin the blanket too :/
  00:43:404 (2) - ctrl+G? ✔ Why not
  01:46:716 (4) - stack this with 01:46:911 (1) instead ✔ Looks nice
  01:51:391 (1) - stack this wth 01:51:586 (2) ✔ ^ But keep in mind that this is more like your style, not mine. I changed these just because the pattern looked repetitive
  02:01:716 (3) - I think you should curve this out like your other 2 sliders to make it prettier. Like this ✔ Fixed. They were ugly >.<
  SPOILER

  
  02:24:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You should space these out abit more like you did with 02:25:872 (1,2,3,4,5,6) ✘ The reason I did this is because there's a clear change into the sound which I think you can hear too
  02:47:495 (5) - stack this with 02:47:690 (1) ✔ As above
  02:54:118 (2) - it would look better if wasnt overlapped by 02:53:534 (7) imo. Maybe move some stuff around ✔ Changed pattern

I hope this mod was useful
Gl getting it ranked

monstrata wrote:

Hi~ From my queue (m4m)

[Insane]

00:21:196 (5) - NC (& remove from next note)
00:24:313 (7) - ^
00:33:664 (5) - ^
00:37:949 (1) - Remove NC
00:38:339 (5) - NC here
00:39:118 (1) - Remove NC
00:39:898 (4) - NC
00:40:677 (1) - Remove NC
00:45:937 (1) - Remove NC
00:46:131 (2) - NC
00:47:300 (1) - Remove NC
00:47:690 (2) - NC

Okay I hope you get the pattern now. NC based on the rhythm of the song, not based on how your patterns connect to one another . Of course, there are exceptions like during your kick-slider spam, but remember to keep a consistent NC rhythm. ✔ Some of those NCs were indeed without reason

00:23:144 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try positioning them like this instead. Flows better imo and makes it easier to read because the overlap occurs later in the combo. ≈ If you suggested to break down the slider (2), then no, it is awkward. I changed pattern anyway
00:25:677 (4) - There is nothing mapped to this note. ✔ Removed and changed the previous pattern
00:36:196 (4) - Ctrl+G ✘ Does this even matter o.O? Anyway...it doesn't look the same way as I wanted, so no change here
00:37:949 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda overmapped imo... Also at 00:38:144 (3) - The note is held in the song, there is no note at 00:38:242 - . So this pattern should be a triplet not a 5-stream. ✔ Fixed
00:54:313 (2,3) - This spacing is really deceptive. It appears like a 1/2 spaced note but it's actually 1/4... ✘ This is my personal pattern, sorry
01:20:222 (3,1) - Also really deceptive spacing. But i guess i can understand since time it's exiting a kick-slider instead of entering into a kick slider. Still, u sure you don't want to just make this a stream and put a note at 01:20:320 - ? ✘ Actually, that was the first option and after some thought it came out more natural to do it this way :/
02:01:326 (3,1) - Not good to overlap like this imo. Its fine for circles, but try and avoid this if you can for kicksliders. ✔ Fixed
02:06:001 (3,4) - This doesn't flow well... Like maybe Ctrl+G 4 and reposition the next slider after? 4 should be just like 2 in terms of direction. ✔ It was ugly indeed
02:46:131 (3,4) - This rhythm isn't right. It should look like this ✔ Yep
03:06:391 (1,2,3) - Space these out more. The way you space them makes it seem like they are 1/2 apart. ✔ Yep

[Hard]

00:25:872 (1,2,3) - This kind of rhythm is too difficult for "Hard" imo... Why not just use 00:27:430 (1,2) - . This plays out much better. ✔ Yeah...
01:23:534 (5,1,2) - ^ ✔
01:30:060 (1,2) - ^ ✔
01:48:469 (1,3) - Stack ✔ Fixed
02:10:677 (3,4,5) - This doesn't flow well. ✔ Somehow fixed I guess
02:18:859 (3,5) - Stacks. ✔
02:22:755 (1,2,3,1) - You need to space this further so players can tell its 3/4 not 1/2. Compare with 02:23:339 (3,1) - . ✔ Changed pattern
02:51:196 (2) - Ctrl+G Better flow ✘ Sorry, it gives me the opposite feeling :/

There are a lot of NC inconsistencies on this map... Make sure you NC on every large white-tick (beginning of each measure) since that seems to be your pattern for the majority of the map. Both Insane and Hard have a looot of NC inconsistencies. I went back a gave a list on the Insane, apply that NC pattern to your other diffs too. I noticed, thanks for pointing this out. I'll do it on this diff (and the others) too

I'm going to skip the Normal, since I don't like modding low-diff maps, feel free to mod only a section of my map when you return the M4M~ Any section is fine with me. No problem :3

Good luck~

• [Harby's HD]
  01:09:118 - (SV Audio)55% 40%
  02:11:456 - ^
  
  01:30:109 - add 3 ? (snap 1/8)
  01:41:066 - ^4 (sampleset drum and add whistle)
  01:41:846 - ^1 (^)
  
  02:16:521 (136521|1) - move to 4 ?
  
  02:20:222 (140222|1,140417|3) - CTRL+G (pattern 02:13:404 (133404|1,133599|1,133794|1,133891|1,133988|0,134183|2) - )
  
  02:28:794 (148794|0) - move to 2
  02:34:346 (154346|2) - ^2
  
  
  [Harby's NM]
  HD 7
  OD 7 or 7.5
  00:30:937 (30937|1) - move to 1
  
  02:41:456 - add 1 (sampleset normal and add finish)
  02:42:235 - ^4 (^)

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

ruberusu's Normal modding (mania mapset)

from osu!chat (by Harbyter)
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• [Harby's HD]
  01:09:118 - (SV Audio)55% 40% ok
  02:11:456 - ^ ok
  
  01:30:109 - add 3 ? (snap 1/8) ok
  01:41:066 - ^4 (sampleset drum and add whistle) empty on purpose
  01:41:846 - ^1 (^) same here
  
  02:16:521 (136521|1) - move to 4 ? keep
  
  02:20:222 (140222|1,140417|3) - CTRL+G (pattern 02:13:404 (133404|1,133599|1,133794|1,133891|1,133988|0,134183|2) - ) uhm at first that pattern was like that but it felt strange when playing so i changed ,so keep
  
  02:28:794 (148794|0) - move to 2 ok
  02:34:346 (154346|2) - ^2 rearranged
  
  
  [Harby's NM]
  HD 7
  OD 7 or 7.5
  00:30:937 (30937|1) - move to 1
  
  02:41:456 - add 1 (sampleset normal and add finish)
  02:42:235 - ^4 (^)

all applied
good luck

bilqiscutee wrote:

Harby's NM

01:02:495 (62495|0) - move to 4 oky
bello o.o

Harby's HD

02:07:657 (127657|0) - no sound there is ,so keep >.<
01:38:534 add keep only one note for those
01:40:872 add
01:48:664 add the sound same here 01:48:469 ^
01:55:677 (115677|3) - move to 2 oky
01:59:768 from here, are you sure with the jack and stairs harby, i think its very hard but maybe its just me ._. it's easy xd
02:33:469 (153469|3) - move to 2? ok
02:43:794 why not add a note?
02:44:183 ^ ignore if you want playing violin with the LNs xD violin xD

nice song, and map tho
good luck

Takane6 wrote:

hi o/
em... doing some irc mod with harby :3

#BlameMyMod ><

Some Blah~ Blah~ with Harby :3

07:05 Harbyter: ene
07:05 Harbyter: e.e
07:05 Takane6: yes!?
07:06 Harbyter: https://i.ppy.sh/9c59d2ae9ac0bdedda409a47ae49d91fae62245a/687474703a2f2f6d2e6d656d6567656e2e636f6d2f3136753171682e6a7067
07:06 Harbyter: xD
07:07 Takane6: em.......  
07:08 Takane6: waiting... for....
07:08 Takane6: i forget... what should i do?
07:08 Harbyter: D:
07:09 *Harbyter is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/628637 Kurousa-P - Senbonzakura (cover by Lindsey Stirling)]
07:09 Takane6: oooohhh!!! right!! xD
07:09 Harbyter: y u do this
07:09 Harbyter: orz
07:09 *Takane6 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/671989 Kurousa-P - Senbonzakura (cover by Lindsey Stirling) [Harby's HD]]
07:09 Harbyter: well not now..
07:09 Harbyter: take youre time
07:09 Harbyter: xd
07:09 Takane6: wut? :3
07:11 Takane6: i can do now... :p
07:12 Harbyter: ok c,c
07:12 Takane6: :p
07:12 *Takane6 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/671989 Kurousa-P - Senbonzakura (cover by Lindsey Stirling) [Harby's HD]]
07:12 Harbyter: anyway did you apply for bn
07:12 Harbyter: ?
07:12 Takane6: wut? for BN?
07:12 Harbyter: i think today you will get answer from loctav
07:12 Harbyter: if you applied
07:13 Takane6: nope... i think i cant be BN now... 
07:13 Takane6: but maybe this last week of this april...
07:13 Harbyter: oh
07:14 Takane6: 01:46:911 - 3 note?
07:17 Harbyter: yep
07:17 Takane6: 02:17:446 (137446|2,137544|1) - 1/8 but 02:17:365 (137365|3) - 1/6?
07:17 Harbyter: yep
07:18 Takane6: im a bit confused in that 1/6 and 1/8 :v
07:18 Harbyter: is correct xD
07:18 Takane6: 02:43:014 - until 02:52:365 - only the.. what is it... violin?
07:18 Harbyter: that violin play isn't a 1/6
07:18 Harbyter: yes
07:19 Takane6: hm~ my mod is useless in here xD
07:19 Takane6: everything looks nice :3
07:19 Harbyter: lol
07:19 Harbyter: NM?
07:19 Takane6: wait
07:22 Takane6: 01:41:846 - 01:42:040 - i know its faint... but there is a bass sound here
07:22 Harbyter: i know but keep only violin there
07:23 Takane6: oke :3 damn.... so hard ><
07:23 Harbyter: if you notice all bass ignored
07:25 *Takane6 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/671990 Kurousa-P - Senbonzakura (cover by Lindsey Stirling) [Harby's NM]]
07:25 Takane6: looks like will be harder here :3
07:26 Harbyter: lol
07:29 Takane6: 01:01:424 - add note
07:30 Takane6: because 01:01:326 (61326|3,61521|0,61716|1,61813|2,61911|3,62105|2,62203|1,62300|0) - same with02:03:664 (123664|0,123761|1,123859|2,124053|3,124151|2,124248|1,124443|0,124540|1,124638|2) - 
07:30 Harbyter: err
07:30 Harbyter: where
07:30 Harbyter: osu crashed
07:30 Harbyter: lol
07:30 Takane6: waw
07:30 Takane6: 01:01:424 - add note
07:31 Takane6: because 01:01:326 (61326|3,61521|0,61716|1,61813|2,61911|3,62105|2,62203|1,62300|0) - same with02:03:664 (123664|0,123761|1,123859|2,124053|3,124151|2,124248|1,124443|0,124540|1,124638|2) - 
07:31 Takane6: or do otherwise..
07:32 Harbyter: oh
07:32 Harbyter: oky xd
07:32 Takane6: yay at last i found something xD
07:32 Harbyter: no wait
07:32 Harbyter: didn't added
07:32 Takane6: wut..?
07:33 Takane6: lol...
07:33 Harbyter: feel strange with the rythm
07:33 Takane6: i just using ur own pattern in the kiai :3
07:33 Harbyter: i know
07:34 Harbyter: but in the secondo part
07:34 Harbyter: rhytm is different
07:34 Takane6: oke.. :3
07:34 Harbyter: with the 1/4
07:34 Harbyter: 01:59:670 -  notice here
07:34 Harbyter: 02:00:255 - 02:00:644 -
07:34 Harbyter: those too
07:34 Takane6: o
07:34 Takane6: :3
07:35 Harbyter: a little harden
07:35 Harbyter: in the HD too
07:35 Harbyter: every 1/1 secondo part all jacks
07:35 Takane6: hm~
07:35 Harbyter: in the first part some normal stream without jack
07:35 Takane6: oke :#
07:35 Takane6: :D
07:35 Takane6: 02:41:456 - add note...cymbal? 
07:36 Harbyter: triple?
07:36 Harbyter: :V
07:36 Harbyter: keep double xD
07:36 Harbyter: in the HD too double there
07:36 Takane6: wut... it just 1 note here :3
07:37 Harbyter: did you update
07:37 Takane6: w-wait... maybe i didnt upload this yet?
07:37 Harbyter: ?
07:37 *Takane6 hit her face in the keyboard
07:37 Takane6: i didnt upload it xD
07:37 Harbyter: xD
07:37 Harbyter: 00:57:040 -
07:37 Takane6: * i mean update
07:37 Harbyter: recheck the rhytm then
07:38 Harbyter: then here too 01:59:378 -
07:38 Harbyter: recheck
07:38 Harbyter: see xD
07:40 Takane6: im more confused with this kiai :3 thats why i still need a training... become BN will make me a new trouble :3
07:40 Harbyter: lol
07:40 Harbyter: that part
07:40 Harbyter: is hard to explain
07:40 Harbyter: since it is a full 1/4
07:40 Harbyter: with the violin
07:40 Harbyter: i make my own rhytm with that part
07:40 Harbyter: xD
07:41 Takane6: well... i think make 2 note for every snare... instead of make it 1/4 
07:41 Takane6: 00:57:430 -  00:58:209 - 
07:42 Harbyter: mmm
07:42 Harbyter: no
07:43 Takane6: or the use the 1/4 pattern for every 2/1
07:43 Takane6: *or use the
07:44 Takane6: 00:57:040 - http://puu.sh/gZrvW/253ef80a4a.jpg
07:44 Harbyter: mmm
07:46 Harbyter: can be good for this part
07:46 Harbyter: let me repattern
07:46 Harbyter: xD
07:46 Takane6: yay^^ at last i really found something xD
07:52 Harbyter: ok
07:52 Harbyter: done
07:52 Harbyter: something else?
07:52 Takane6: em... wait :p
07:53 Takane6: from 02:43:014 - until 02:52:365 - in NM and HD... both of these pattern almost the same... 
07:53 Takane6: ^maybe make a little harder in HD?
07:53 Takane6: add bass... snare... etc etc
07:54 Harbyter: no
07:54 Harbyter: intended
07:54 Harbyter: just keep violin
07:54 Harbyter: this part is calm
07:54 Takane6: hm... okeoke :v
07:54 Harbyter: xD
07:55 Takane6: 01:40:677 - i think 2 note will okay... 
07:55 Takane6: ^ quite strong bass
07:56 Harbyter: keep only violin
07:56 Harbyter: x.x
07:56 Takane6: oke... i guess its enough for me xD 
07:56 Takane6: no need kudo... this mod is bad :v
07:57 Harbyter: nah
07:57 Harbyter: you helped me about that
07:57 Harbyter: xd
07:58 Harbyter: 00:27:690 (27690|2) -
07:58 Harbyter: what doi you think this violin
07:58 Harbyter: is strange
07:58 Harbyter: other are all in 1/3
07:58 Harbyter: but this is 1/4
07:59 Takane6: i heard by 25% playback... its somewhere between 1/4 and 1/3
07:59 Takane6: but its more closer to 1/4
07:59 Harbyter: should i snap in 1/4?
07:59 Harbyter: lolol
08:00 Harbyter: i let this in 1/3 on purpose
08:00 Harbyter: but old mod didn't noticed this..
08:00 Harbyter: xD
08:00 Takane6: hm
08:00 Takane6: i make pause the playback at 00:23:440 - but the violin still not come out
08:01 Harbyter: 00:27:722 -
08:01 Harbyter: maybe herE?
08:01 Harbyter: xd
08:02 Takane6: er.... fullerene good at this... :v
08:02 Harbyter: i think that is a 1/4
08:02 Harbyter: only that part
08:03 Takane6: yes... that part is more closer to 1/4... 
08:03 Harbyter: cause that part is different
08:03 Harbyter: cause violin play is high pitch
08:04 Harbyter: other start with low pitch of violin
08:04 Harbyter: artist play different
08:05 Takane6: blame the artist xD LOL
08:05 Takane6: but overall its good~

Kyousuke- wrote:

Mod Request

Hi harby xd here's the mod~Take note that my mods mostly contains suggestion~ so feel free to reject ^^

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General

1. Uncheck the widescreen support on Harby's NM

Harby's NM

just a little check lol =w=

02:43:014 - 02:55:092 - just noticed this is same with Harby's HD lol, let's we make more easier and little different lol. suggestion~ (same with HD's suggest too lol)

1. 02:46:131 (166131|1,166424|1) - just make it one LN in NM lol keep with two LN, felling of staccato and shield xd
2. 02:49:248 (169248|3,169540|1) - same, make one LN on col 4, but ends at 02:49:833 - since the piano sound stars here keep ,following violin only
3. 02:49:735 (169735|3) - this LN should start at 02:49:833 - on col 3 starts here 02:49:735 - don't let the drum confus you xD
4. 02:52:949 (172949|1,173047|3) - delete, you only focus on piano. violin~
5. 02:52:949 - add LN at col 1, ends 02:53:144 - here since previous suggestion rejected this too
6. 02:54:118 (174118|1,174216|3) - delete, you only focus on piano ^
7. 02:54:118 - add LN at col 4, ends 02:54:313 - here ^

Harby's HD

i dunno why i'm like to make long post mods

00:23:924 (23924|1,24118|2) - hmm move 1 col to right, and 00:24:313 (24313|3) - move to 2. since the pitch is quite different though this way the pr isn't good,keep
00:38:566 - add note at here (1/12 snap) at 2 for piano, you miss it D: and 00:38:534 (38534|1) - delete this, since the sound is not too dominant oh you noticed this xD fixed in 00:38:583 - 1/8 and 00:38:664 - 1/6
00:40:872 (40872|2) - move to 1, for balance? coz it's looks heavy on the right side if moved in col 1 isn't balanced, cause you have to hold the LN and hit then note with the left hand

00:43:794 (43794|3) - this LN should be end at 00:44:086 - oky
00:44:183 (44183|2,44378|1) - hmm move this 1 col to left? and 00:44:573 (44573|0) - move this to 2. coz the pitch is really different with 00:43:794 -
00:46:131 (46131|1,46131|0,46326|0,46521|2,46521|3,46521|1,46716|1) - hmm wrong pitch, make same with this 00:52:365 (52365|0,52365|3,52560|3,52755|1,52755|0,52755|2,52949|1,53144|0,53144|2,53339|2) -

00:54:605 - add note at 2 for piano, since there have a piano sound
00:55:677 (55677|1) - move to 1, and 00:55:774 - add a note at 2. there have a piano sound~ ^ not following the violin ,just drum/kick/tick
01:06:196 (66196|1,66294|0) - wrong pitch D: suggestion~

1. 01:06:099 (66099|0,66196|1,66294|0) - switch col, 01:06:391 (66391|1) - and at 1~ just make same with the previous pattern :U ok

01:06:391 - 01:07:949 - whai same pattern lol, suggestion~

1. 01:06:878 (66878|3) - move to 1, and 01:07:657 (67657|3) - move to 1 too, following the pitch and more balance imo. but might break your pattern stairs :U yea ,keep this pattern xD

01:09:898 - 01:10:677 - 01:11:456 - 01:13:014 - 01:13:794 - 01:16:131 - 01:16:911 - 01:17:690 - no need 3-noters imo, since this is HD diff. and the note is not suitable for jack, coz the pitch is always get higher than the 3-noters. just delete the jack notes on 3-noters~ and more comfortable to play =w= ehh keep 3 notes for the kick

1. 01:12:235 - 01:14:573 - 01:15:352 - just like this~ no need 3-noters ^

01:18:079 (78079|2,78339|2) - eggpain lol, just 01:18:079 (78079|1,78079|2) - ctrl + h this~ oky
01:20:027 (80027|3,80125|3) - not suitable for jack, coz the pitch get lower. suggestion~

1. 01:20:125 (80125|3) - move to 3, 01:20:222 (80222|2) - move to 1, for pitch~ reject,the current pattern for pr is more suitable

01:21:196 - hmm add a LN until 01:21:586 - here coz the long piano sound would be better? note for drum and cymbal so no LN,otherside i should put other LN for the previous triples
01:22:170 (82170|2,82268|1) - ctrl + h for pitch
01:23:144 (83144|3) - move to 3, coz 01:23:339 - this pitch is higher than before (this might break your jack pattern)
01:24:898 (84898|0) - move to 2, coz this pitch is higher than before (this might break your jack pattern) ^ breaking pattern
01:25:092 - 01:25:482 - suggestion~

1. 01:25:190 (85190|0) - move to 2, 01:25:287 (85287|1) - move to 1, 01:25:385 (85385|2) - move to 2, better pattern for repeating sound =w= oky

01:30:157 - 01:31:326 - suggestion for pattern and pitch, since the pitch seems wrong http://puu.sh/gZO0q/45929f28d5.jpg mmm keep current pattern
01:58:988 (118988|1) - are this LN necessary? better to remove since there's doesn't have anything sound violin lol
01:59:962 (119962|2,120060|1,120742|1,120839|2) - ctrl + h for pitch, coz this sound 01:59:573 - is same pitch as 01:59:962 - and this sound 02:00:352 - is same pitch as 02:00:742 -

02:08:729 - 02:10:287 - same like before suggestion :U

1. 02:09:216 (129216|3) - move to 1, 02:09:995 (129995|3) - move to 1, since the pitch is different, and more balance imo^Actually if following 100% pitch those should be all 1/4 jacks ,keep

02:10:969 (130969|2,131066|1,131261|1) - ctrl + h for pitch~ last two notes are for the tick ,check the hitsound so you can understand what are those notes
02:35:222 - 02:36:781 - http://puu.sh/gZQm3/757c5461c4.jpg recommended to change like this, for pattern and comfortability~ this broke my pattern in those section ,keep
02:49:248 - 02:50:807 - there's some errors, suggestion~ (the SS if you're confused lol) like in the NM,violin not drum

1. 02:49:248 (169248|3,169540|1) - hmm make like this 02:46:131 (166131|1,166424|1) -
   ^ 02:49:248 (169248|3) - shorten the LN until 02:49:443 - here and 02:49:540 (169540|1) - this LN should be end at 02:49:833 - at 4 for same col and pitch
2. 02:49:735 (169735|3) - wrong snap, should start at 02:49:833 - on col 3
3. 02:50:417 (170417|1) - this LN should start at 02:50:612 - for piano sound

^
03:00:937 (180937|3) - delete, since you didn't put double notes on this part, like 02:57:820 - until 02:58:404 - and 03:04:053 - until 03:04:638 -
^ if done, 03:01:001 (181001|2) - move this to 4, for pitch and comfortability~ drum and kick xD

nice mapset! this reminds me with miku lol
awsome cover violin ver <33 /shoot/

osu_gangster wrote:

Use 千本桜 (cover by Lindsey Stirling) as title, and 黒うさP as artist. The ones you are using now are the Romanized title and artist.

no kudos, just some quick metadata check x3~ cause I want this to be ranked~

baraatje123 wrote:

Random mod cuz I like the song a lot

[Normal]
00:21:586 (2,1) - Blanket needs improvement, move (1) to 204,184 ✔ Yep
00:23:144 (2,1) - Blanket these 2 better, try this ✔ Fixed

SPOILER

00:26:261 (2) - Goes up too high -> Hits HPbar --> Unrankable Is it touching? o.O
00:32:885 (2,4) - These 2 are slightly overlapping, move (4) a bit to the right ✔ I had to move more than jsut tht note tho, but it's fixed now xD
00:34:833 (5,1) - Try to blanket them ✔
00:47:300 (2,1) - Try to blanket them, move (1) to 320:286 for example ✔
00:56:261 (3) - Might be too wiggly, which is unrankable, I recommend to change it, just to be on the safe side ✔ Removed half of those anchor points. I guess it should be safe now
01:21:196 (2) - Try to make the shape a little better, it seems to not end nicely Fixed in a different way, but fixed :3

SPOILER

01:30:157 (2) - Try to make the slider tick exactly at the top of the slider, put the red node at around 163:47 ✔
01:32:105 (2) - Slider looks ugly, being so curvy. Try to make it more curvy with grey nodes, instead of (ugly) red ones ✘ Sorry, but I have to disagree here because red ones give the exact feeilng I wanted to reach. It follows the violin perfectly imo
01:42:430 (2) - You are better off deleting this note, because this part is really calm, and the 1/2 after the 4/1 feels just overdone I fixed t his in my own way :3
01:45:547 (4) - ^^ ✘ It isn't really difficult to do and it would break all my pattern, so no change here o3o
01:52:365 (3) - You can better make this 1/1 instead of 3/2 to emphasize the strong beat ✘ I already have 5 objects at 1/2 from each other. What you suggest will cluster things up even more so I'll have to avoid doing this
02:02:495 (2,3) - Consider making (2) grey-noded instead of red-noded to make a blanket ✘ You can make blankets even with anchor points :3
02:24:313 (1,2) - Try to make the red nodes be on the same place as the slider ticks, to make it emphasize the beat better ✔ Ops, fixed
02:33:664 (1,2) - Improve blanket, make (1) a little less curvy (tilt end a little to the right) and then move (2) so it fits ✔
02:45:742 (2,2) - This overlap looks a little ugly, move the second (2) a little to the right, so it doesn't overlap anymore Fixed in my own way :3
03:06:391 (1,2) - Feels weird for a normal, just make it a reverse 3/4 slider with a circle at the end ✔ Yeah. Removed (2) and added a repeat to (1). It should be fine now

[Hard]
00:39:118 (4,5) - Blanket needs slight improvement, move (4) to 99:92 ✔
00:44:573 (2) - NC, because it is the start of the kiai, and the strong beat starts here as well ✔ Hm...looks better this way, fixed
00:49:053 (6) - Move to 232:170 to improve blanket o.O
00:50:612 (4) - Move to 80:100 to improve blanket ✔
01:10:287 (3,4) - Improve blanket, move (4) to 337:143 I moved (3) instead :3
01:27:625 (4,5,6) - Improve the blankets What? xD Probably you have to update my map because the (6) in the screen is an old one version of it xD

SPOILER

01:55:482 (3,4) - You can try to make these 2 blanket, but it isn't neccessary considering you use the tail of (3) for other purposes ✘ Exactly :3
02:03:079 (3,4) - Try to blanket these 2 ✔ Fixed
02:22:170 (4,5,6,1) - Feels a little overdone, maybe make it a little less strong (remove a reverse for example) ✘ lol, you didn't see this part how it was before ahahahah
02:29:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Might be a little too hard for hard, I recommend making it 1/2 circles ✘ ^ And actually this is the most energetic part of the song so why not pumping it up as bit :3
02:30:547 (1,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part has really complex timing. You mapped it well, but it's way to hard, considering most of the music is off-beat here, which make it really hard to follow. I strongly recommend making this part easier, as most people will probably break their combo here What can I do if this part has blue polarity? xD I tried to make it as easier as possible and I ensure you that it was even messier before. I hope someone comes up with something because for now I can't think of anything else :/

[Insane]
00:43:794 (1) - Please change this slider. AFAIK, Wiggles like this are unrankable, and you also have a slow-down, which already happens due to the wiggles. I strongly recommend changing the shape of this ✘ I never heard about this and I asked a couple of BNs to check this already and they said nothing about it o.O
00:54:313 (2,3,4) - This plays very badly, Ctrl G (2) and make (3) 2 circles, 1/6 at 154 BPm isn't that fast I agree on those 1/6 notes, but this is kinda my special pattern so I won't change it
01:11:846 (1,2,3) - ^^, w/o the Ctrl G of (2) ✘ ^
01:11:066 (11) - NC, the combo starts to get really long here, and as here is a strong beat, I recommend you to change it ✘ I did this after another mod which explained me how combo should work properly so this is fine as it is
01:14:962 (5) - Come on, be a nice guy and make this a set of circles ✘ Placing 4 1/6 notes out of the blue here is a bit too much imo. There is a whole part before this with just jumps and it will feel weird I guess...
01:18:079 (1,2,3) - Make (2) into circles, but you will need to change this a little, so it looks nice, or it will be a strange triangle) ✔ Fixed
01:33:664 (1) - Make it curvy as well, to bland in with the previous sliders ✔ Looks nicer
01:48:469 (1,2,3) - These sliders look better if they have grey nodes, instead of red ones (01:51:586 (1,2) - Like these for example) They are a little overnoded now ✔ Indeed
01:56:846 (5) - Come on, be a nice guy and make this a set of circles ✘ Same reasoning as for 01:14:962 (5) -
01:58:079 (2) - ^^ ✔
02:14:378 (2) - ^^ ✘
02:17:300 (3) - ^^ ✘
02:20:612 (2) - ^^ ✘
02:28:696 - Add a note? There is a strong violin here, and it makes sense, due to previous patterns At first I used just a similar pattern to the previous one but after a bit of thought I found another good pattern fitting your suggestion
02:44:962 (3) - Either stack this with the end of 02:43:794 (3) - or blanket it with 02:44:573 (2). It feels really random now, and it makes no sense to me
You then probably want to move 02:45:937 (2) - as well ✘ Trying to blanket this part doesn't make sense to me tho, because I tried to make a good flow to be played here
02:49:540 (4) - Delete, this is a quiet part, so you should not want to overmap, do you? ✘ There's a clear violin sound there tho, so I don't think it's overmapped at all
02:50:612 (8) - Move to 208:236 for a better blanket ✘ If I have to move this note just vertically it means that there's already a blanket which I already see clearly so I think it's a bit pointless to move it just a bit to have the same result
02:53:014 (3) - Come on, be a nice guy and make this a set of circles ✔
02:54:216 - Add a note, it fits in with the strong violin ✘ I'm not following the violin here 02:53:924 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
02:58:014 (2) - Come on, be a nice guy and make this a set of circles ✘
03:00:937 (5) - ^^ ✘
03:04:248 (2) - ^^ ✘ Same as I already explained above
03:07:170 (1) - Silence the tail maybe, it sounds really loud, but it might be unrankable, as there is no sliderslide audible. Your choice Let's use something safer like a circle :3

I really like this map (so this mod is really picky) I love picky mods >.< Thanks a lot :3
Good luck on getting this ranked, you deserve a star as well :3 >.< Arigatou~
Mutual me please MrAwesomemapper

[ C r a c k ] wrote:

Hi Sergio & Harby
Modderino-desu per le o!m diffs (richiesto in chat)

General:

Click Me!

BPM: 154 ✓
Offest:? credo sia piu' preciso 933 (per il mod ho lasciato l'offset che ho trovato :3) Yes sir o7
.mp3 file:? con 128kbps si sta tranquilli ma consiglio di utilizzare un file .mp3 con qualità di 192kbps
Sfondo: 1366x768 ✓
Difficoltà:? mancherebbe la 6K NM Lavoro di Harby semmai ~ :33333333

Bene, questo è tutto. Spero siano di aiuto i miei suggerimenti.
Sbrigatevi a rankare questa mappa pls Non mi cagano ;w;
Bye~

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

Mania spread not rankable
you need another 6K diff

baraatje123 wrote:

Why did he make 4K NM, 4K HD and 6K MX?
You're better off having 4K MX instead of 6K

osu_gangster wrote:

Use 千本桜 (cover by Lindsey Stirling) as title, and 黒うさP as artist. The ones you are using now are the Romanized title and artist.

no kudos, just some quick metadata check x3~ cause I want this to be ranked~

Pappy wrote:

Metadata check

Use Lindsey Stirling as artist. Since this is cover, Kurousa-P only composed the rhytm, but the whole song is made by Lindsey Stirling.

Also title should be just "Senbonzakura" (without unicode!)

If you apply this, leave Kurousa-P in tags.

Kama wrote:

osu_gangster wrote:

Use 千本桜 (cover by Lindsey Stirling) as title, and 黒うさP as artist. The ones you are using now are the Romanized title and artist.

no kudos, just some quick metadata check x3~ cause I want this to be ranked~

Pappy wrote:

Metadata check

Use Lindsey Stirling as artist. Since this is cover, Kurousa-P only composed the rhytm, but the whole song is made by Lindsey Stirling.

Also title should be just "Senbonzakura" (without unicode!)

If you apply this, leave Kurousa-P in tags.

I'M CONFUSED
Like Sergio now lolw-.