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Blooming Lily
80 posts
Joined July 2014
Blooming Lily
以前没做完的时候感觉不怎么样，现在做完一打....教练，我也要学作图
Lavender
886 posts
Joined January 2014
Lavender
ingame irc with mapper
chatlog
00:02 imoutosan: 你好~有空摸个短图吗 星低diff少
00:02 Lavender: ingame
00:02 Lavender: irc
00:02 Lavender: 来link
00:03 imoutosan: 稍等一下
00:03 *imoutosan is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/627879 meto - unknown]
00:03 imoutosan: 差点找不着图了 嘿呀
00:04 Lavender: .
00:04 Lavender: 这个我好像有老版的
00:05 imoutosan: 好像没啥改动 我加了个视频
00:05 Lavender: .
00:05 Lavender: 你居然不静音sliderslide
00:05 Lavender: 天理难容
00:06 imoutosan: 咦 没静音吗
00:06 imoutosan: 哪里 我看一下
00:06 Lavender: 00:10:415 (3,1,2,3) - 
00:06 imoutosan: 哎哟真是
00:07 Lavender: 00:35:094 (2,1) - 
00:07 Lavender: 空了一拍倒是没什么
00:07 Lavender: 这个间距是要杀人啊
00:08 imoutosan: ?
00:08 Lavender: 很容易就误读了
00:09 imoutosan: 猴 改好了
00:09 Lavender: 后面没啥可以说的
00:10 Lavender: 感觉
00:10 Lavender: 不是timing大师也感觉不出offset
00:10 imoutosan: 00:17:390 -
00:10 imoutosan: 这我想静音 不知道是不是rankable的
00:11 Lavender: 0%是不行的
00:11 Lavender: 10%是可以的
00:11 Lavender: 好像这一条很模糊
00:11 Lavender: 比较主管
00:11 Lavender: 主观*
00:11 imoutosan: 然而5%依然清晰可辨
00:12 imoutosan: 认输了
00:12 Lavender: 01:43:005 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 
00:12 Lavender: 不太好吧
00:12 imoutosan: 好像是有一点
00:13 Lavender: 只有钢琴啊
00:13 imoutosan: 但是我不知道放个啥好
00:13 Lavender: 听了听钢琴是off的
00:13 Lavender: 建议就放两个滑条跟钢琴
00:13 Lavender: 可能要加红线
00:14 Lavender: 滑条头没有对应的音的话基本是必死的
00:14 imoutosan: 我研究一下
00:14 imoutosan: 倒是没必要非下个串
00:15 imoutosan: 直接一个滑条下到01:45:404 - 是不是也可以
00:15 imoutosan: 感觉timing不好做也没啥必要
00:16 Lavender: 可以啊
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
这种排列风格没太多可说的，主难度就主观写点

[General]
  1. 01:06:228 - 这红线应该晚得挺明显的，包括01:06:813 - 01:07:398 - 都听得很明显．那里提琴音不好听offset可以听钢琴．参考：offset: 66120 bpm: 99.100
  2. 到01:20:028 - 之前这段我觉得可以都加一下音效，调高一下音量．我觉得feedback稍多一点更舒服，另外就是有音效也更能使得timing的微差不容易被听出来
  3. 其实后面timing好像也有不太准的啊啊啊好累 不仔细听了
[Normal]
  1. 00:24:594 (3) - 碰血条
  2. 00:48:400 (2) - 还是少一次折返吧，感觉没必要那样，其实真的还是挺容易读错的，尤其前面这么多一样的全是一次折返．00:49:851 - 这里不跟，然后break从这里开始就好
  3. 01:27:144 (2) - 报ds了，上移一个，连着后面一起
[主]
  1. 00:01:844 (1,2) - 00:04:722 (1,2) -
  2. 00:18:020 - 之后这一大段，节奏听着不是3+3，应该是4+2啊（比如重音不在00:18:677 - ，在00:18:896 - ）
  3. 00:29:849 (2) - 这个变速感觉有点夸张，音乐感觉没有那么大变化，而且好像全曲只有一个这样的？．我倒觉得要变的话这整段都变大更好（从00:28:538 - 开始）
GL~
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Pata-Mon wrote:

这种排列风格没太多可说的，主难度就主观写点

[General]
我看看有没有timing check 自己有点不太想搞这种东西 太懒

[Normal]
  1. 00:24:594 (3) - 碰血条 碰了就碰了吧
  2. 00:48:400 (2) - 还是少一次折返吧，感觉没必要那样，其实真的还是挺容易读错的，尤其前面这么多一样的全是一次折返．00:49:851 - 这里不跟，然后break从这里开始就好 没理由用note 这里这么弱的音 新手应该能读
  3. 01:27:144 (2) - 报ds了，上移一个，连着后面一起 fixed
[主]
  1. 00:01:844 (1,2) - 00:04:722 (1,2) - ?
  2. 00:18:020 - 之后这一大段，节奏听着不是3+3，应该是4+2啊（比如重音不在00:18:677 - ，在00:18:896 - ） 那不是重音 是另一条轨……
  3. 00:29:849 (2) - 这个变速感觉有点夸张，音乐感觉没有那么大变化，而且好像全曲只有一个这样的？．我倒觉得要变的话这整段都变大更好（从00:28:538 - 开始）还行 不怎么快 我觉得么问题
GL~
谢谢mod！
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
主难度re过了？
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Adol Christin wrote:

主难度re过了？
re啥re 就换了个bg timing倒是有可能要re
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
  1. 01:16:561 (2) - 這個note感覺比較偏向在1/8線(鋼琴聲)，也有可能要紅線
  2. 01:17:111 - 這裡有音不跟嗎
  3. 01:29:178 - 音好像更早一點，maybe紅線
本來想幫忙找metadata結果根本找不到，跳樓謝罪
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Flask wrote:

  1. 01:16:561 (2) - 這個note感覺比較偏向在1/8線(鋼琴聲)，也有可能要紅線 是个装饰音 考虑了一下搞了个1/8滑条
  2. 01:17:111 - 這裡有音不跟嗎 有点尴尬 加了的话前后两个音分不出轻重缓急 这段显得就很平
  3. 01:29:178 - 音好像更早一點，maybe紅線 加了
本來想幫忙找metadata結果根本找不到，跳樓謝罪
meta挺麻烦的 我再翻翻吧 谢谢~！
Wing My Way
186 posts
Joined September 2013
Wing My Way
摸不动 只能水

[Normal]
00:48:400 (2) - 总感觉这种折返不太友好
01:57:125 - 这条绿线和前面重了

[Phantom Crystal]
00:27:223 (1) - normal里面这个音效是渐强的，这个clap反而变成了强>弱>强，要不要换成whistle
00:35:968 (1,2) - 这个要不要摆开一点 感觉音调变的挺明显的
00:48:400 (1,2,3) - 结尾的drum不消掉？
01:17:662 (3) - NC一下吧

gl~
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Wing My Way wrote:

摸不动 只能水

[Normal]
00:48:400 (2) - 总感觉这种折返不太友好 凑合吧 扔个圈也不合适
01:57:125 - 这条绿线和前面重了 删了

[Phantom Crystal]
00:27:223 (1) - normal里面这个音效是渐强的，这个clap反而变成了强>弱>强，要不要换成whistle 有道理 直接删了
00:35:968 (1,2) - 这个要不要摆开一点 感觉音调变的挺明显的 好
00:48:400 (1,2,3) - 结尾的drum不消掉？消了
01:17:662 (3) - NC一下吧 好

gl~
谢谢！
Misure
951 posts
Joined September 2012
Misure
你是个严肃的麻婆 从不干色情bg引诱玩家的勾当
改了点细节
Codesu
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Bonsai
1,212 posts
Joined July 2011
Bonsai
You've asked me for a timing-check so here I am :D
holy shit those voices are a pain when you try to concentrate on hearing xdddd
Everything seems very fine except that slider at 01:06:228 (1) which is audibly off and also wrongly snapped - Just move that timing section to 01:06:127 and change the BPM to 99,0 and you're good to go!

The highest diff looks very beautiful, good luck with this map :3
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Bonsai wrote:

You've asked me for a timing-check so here I am :D
holy shit those voices are a pain when you try to concentrate on hearing xdddd
Everything seems very fine except that slider at 01:06:228 (1) which is audibly off and also wrongly snapped - Just move that timing section to 01:06:127 and change the BPM to 99,0 and you're good to go!

The highest diff looks very beautiful, good luck with this map :3
Fixed the timing and note. Thank you very much!
Lilyanna
1,918 posts
Joined March 2016
Lilyanna
Hi from my queue

General :

00:51:787 - can drag the break fade to start from here in normal

Normal :

01:06:127 (1,2) - i think it would look lot neat if u blanket these like this
img
01:35:149 (3) - think u need to nc here to stay consistent

Misure's Hard :

00:00:405 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - feels like u can mape to that piano sound in bg just to little variate also if this a hard then i dont see why u skip them and simplify the rythm
01:33:692 (1,2) - this could be mapped like this 01:32:235 (1,2,3,4) - they sound same to me

Insane seem fine

thats all sorry Good luck!
Misure
951 posts
Joined September 2012
Misure

Lilyanna wrote:

Hi from my queue

Misure's Hard :

00:00:405 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - feels like u can mape to that piano sound in bg just to little variate also if this a hard then i dont see why u skip them and simplify the rythm
:arrow: just to control gap to Normal, also I'd like to make it quiet for the beginning
01:33:692 (1,2) - this could be mapped like this 01:32:235 (1,2,3,4) - they sound same to me
:arrow: ok fixed this

thats all sorry Good luck!
thanks for your modding! :)

Codesu
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TitleUnicode:Unknown Title
Artist:Meto
ArtistUnicode:めと
Creator:imoutosan
Version:Misure's Hard
Source:紙の上の魔法使い
Tags:Metomate ウグイスカグラ visual novel eroge
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呃星数高了0.01 控星的话回头我再微调
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Lilyanna wrote:

Hi from my queue
All fixed. Thanks for modding!
Garden
Nomination Assessment Team
1,343 posts
Joined June 2013
Garden
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General
  1. 加点tag kami no ue no mahoutsukai uguisukagura 什么的 (大概没拼错? 哦还有gder gder 我考试的时候就忘了这回事;;
  2. S:C1也加个空的sliderslide，有的地方听着很不舒服啊
Normal
  1. arodhp都可以降点
  2. 00:18:018 - 01:32:235 - 绿线删了kiai加红线上，其他难度同
  3. 01:04:282 - 看主难度大概应该break结束拉到这（额 25%听怎么那一声还不在白线上的.. 可能还要看下timing?
  4. 01:06:127 - 红绿线音量/音效组冲突，其他难度同
  5. 01:55:350 - unsnapped绿线，其他难度同
  6. 01:55:250 - +whistle? 对应 01:52:250 - 同一个音

    前面一段感觉少了点whistle clap啥的比如 00:24:594 - 你自己再看看
Misure's Hard
  1. 00:44:229 (1,2,3) - 00:46:960 (1,2,3) - 这里我的话会想让每个音的变化都能点到，用两个1/2滑条+一个圈听上去更合曲
  2. 01:04:282 - 同normal
  3. 01:06:127 (1,2,3) - 和后面那组一样用2.0 spacing?
Insane
  1. 00:33:345 (3) - 短头长头换一下？这个好容易断滑条啊
  2. 00:42:928 (4,5,6) - 这里音调往上跑，考虑ctrlg 456顺序，还有考虑4+nc
  3. 00:39:030 - 01:42:526 - 红绿线设置
这metadata要怎么确认（（ 顺便期待一下新作
Misure
951 posts
Joined September 2012
Misure
第一个我感觉和前面那组突出一下变化就ok了 就不改了(其实有点懒改排版)
第三个改了
谢花园;w;

妹桑帮忙修一下break meta 绿线啥的 多谢啦

纸模好精彩啊 我也期待一波新作（
以及我这个BG真是太赞了

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Fushimi Rio
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Fushimi Rio

Garden wrote:

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  1. 加点tag kami no ue no mahoutsukai uguisukagura 什么的 (大概没拼错? 哦还有gder gder 我考试的时候就忘了这回事;; 我去看看加点别的 没什么可靠的英文翻译（vndb的不太敢用）先这样吧
  2. S:C1也加个空的sliderslide，有的地方听着很不舒服啊 我记得是用来防止滑条slide和结尾同时静音来着 具体用在哪我都忘了 还是不动安全点 哎去他的 我还是改了吧 改了改几条线的c1和c2
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  1. 01:04:282 - 看主难度大概应该break结束拉到这（额 25%听怎么那一声还不在白线上的.. 可能还要看下timing? 没啥必要吧 效果也不好 主难度大概是手滑了……
  2. 01:55:250 - +whistle? 对应 01:52:250 - 同一个音 这里感觉应该比前面弱 加了有点不合适

    前面一段感觉少了点whistle clap啥的比如 00:24:594 - 你自己再看看 加了点 两年前的想法真是看不懂...
Insane
  1. 00:33:345 (3) - 短头长头换一下？这个好容易断滑条啊 试了好几种改法 总觉得不如这个好看...
这metadata要怎么确认（（ 顺便期待一下新作 我也很期待 图都做好就等op放出了
metadata我觉得我都找不到 应该是没人能找到了
no reply=fix, thanks a lot!

Misure wrote:

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你又没加video 哎
Garden
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Pentori
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i cant concentrate when listening to stereo anime grils
[Normal]
00:48:400 (2) - i would advise against this since all of 00:39:030 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - has only 1 repeat. u could just remove a repeat and add a note at 00:49:851

[Misure's Hard]
00:18:020 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - way too long of a 1/2 rhythm chain, normal only uses 1/1s here. try use some more 1/1 gaps or sliders

[Insane]
00:28:538 (1) - looks pretty bad, try moving the 2nd slider point down http://puu.sh/tFun4/1a567a7ec2.jpg
00:29:849 (2) - sv change doesn't feel very intuitive. 1.7 sv just feels too fast and random, i would stick with 1.5 here
00:37:279 (4) - nc? this combo lasts a lot longer than others
01:48:815 (2) - 01:51:759 (2) - previously you didn't include these notes at 00:02:803 . the melody picks up on the red ticks 01:49:061 - so u can probably remove those notes on the white tick 01:48:815 (2) - 01:51:759 (2)

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Fushimi Rio
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Fushimi Rio

Pentori wrote:

i cant concentrate when listening to stereo anime grils
[Normal]
00:48:400 (2) - i would advise against this since all of 00:39:030 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - has only 1 repeat. u could just remove a repeat and add a note at 00:49:851 actually there's nearly not sound at 00:49:851 - , using a circle is too strong here imo

[Insane]
00:28:538 (1) - looks pretty bad, try moving the 2nd slider point down http://puu.sh/tFun4/1a567a7ec2.jpg moved a bit down
00:29:849 (2) - sv change doesn't feel very intuitive. 1.7 sv just feels too fast and random, i would stick with 1.5 here 1.7 fits the song better imo. 1.5 still looks a little slow compared with the following notes

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no reply = fixed. Thanks for modding!
Misure
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Misure

Pentori wrote:

i cant concentrate when listening to stereo anime grils
I tried to change rhythm to 1/1 slider + circle + 1/2 slider instead of 1/2 + 1/2 +1/2, but feels weired anyway.
If possible I'd like to keep it since music here is really exciting for me :o


Thanks for your modding!
Pentori
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Pentori

Misure wrote:

Pentori wrote:

i cant concentrate when listening to stereo anime grils
I tried to change rhythm to 1/1 slider + circle + 1/2 slider instead of 1/2 + 1/2 +1/2, but feels weired anyway.
If possible I'd like to keep it since music here is really exciting for me :o


Thanks for your modding!
i dont really think it's acceptable, u can try replacing some 1/2 sliders with a single circle like 00:20:210 (3)
u could also try following the background piano closely 00:18:020 - 00:18:896 - 00:19:334 - 00:20:649 - 00:21:526 - 00:21:964 - to achieve a lower density

spamming 1/2 sliders to follow the strings doesnt make much sense since ur ignoring it from 00:25:908 - onwards to follow the melody
Fushimi Rio
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Fushimi Rio
Changed the rhythm in Misure's Hard.
Pentori
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Fushimi Rio
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Fushimi Rio
Thank you everyone! :) <333
Pururut
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流石妹桑，两年飞图团。
Fushimi Rio
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Fushimi Rio

Pururut wrote:

流石妹桑，两年飞图团。
还有三个要飞 团员身份稳了
Gaia
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哇好棒

恭喜^^/
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還真的是unknown title
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