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Dao Ba Loc - Ngay Xuan Long Phung Sum Vay

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Zejky
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, February 12, 2015 at 9:26:45 AM

Artist: Dao Ba Loc
Title: Ngay Xuan Long Phung Sum Vay
BPM: 98
Filesize: 2479kb
Play Time: 01:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.42 stars, 140 notes)
  2. Insane (2.77 stars, 181 notes)
  3. Normal (0.98 stars, 42 notes)


Download: Dao Ba Loc - Ngay Xuan Long Phung Sum Vay
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Lunar
Ranger
yay


[General]

recommend to decide note behind.


[Normal]

00:06:345 (2) - how about just make pattern like this?

00:11:243 (2) - ^
00:16:141 (2) - ^
00:44:304 (1) - improve spinner to 00:47:330. it`s more mix the music.
00:49:202 (1) - add finish here (at front).
00:54:100 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:11:855 (5) - make this slider more crook. cause improve blanket of 00:12:774 (1).
00:23:488 (2,3,4) - how about make triangle of that?
01:05:733 (7,1,2) - recommend spread distance more

[Insane]

00:17:365 (1) - how about move to front at 1/4 and add circle was there?

00:18:590 (5) - remove clap at the end.
00:19:814 (1,2) - change whistle to finish like other diffs.
00:28:386 (3,4,5,6) - how about spread distance more? cause that`s insane diff.
01:03:896 (1,2) - ^^
01:04:508 (4,5) - improve blanket here.

such a relaxing song~
good luck for the Rank~ :)
batwoman3
Hello Zejky. M4M from my queue. This is my mod for you. (PS. very nice song.)

General

Overall, open AImod and fix your errors from there. Below are my further mods

Normal

You might want to place circles too, not just sliders
00:33:284 (3) - can remove finish. It doesn't suit to the song for me
not much to say. It's a good diff

Hard

00:00:835 (2) - blanket this around (1)
00:08:794 (3) - don't overlap this with (2)
00:39:406 (1) - shorten this by 1/4 beat
00:40:631 (4) - ^
00:47:059 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this should be placed in Insane instead of hard
00:57:161 (2) - if you're using DS, move the middle point of the slider to x:234 y:157

Insane

00:08:794 (5) - move to x:395 y:132 (disable Grid Snap)
00:17:212 (1,2) - remove NC at (1) and place NC at (2)
00:19:814 (1) - Set this to finish
00:30:223 (2) - Don't overlap these slider. Imo, place it farther. As for (1), shorten it by 1/4 beat. It doesn't match with the song
00:44:610 (2,3,4) - DS this farther. Overlapping those isn't a good idea. Same for the rest
01:03:896 (1) - Set this to finish
01:04:508 (4,5) - maybe you can blanket this better (so that (4) surrounds (5) in an almost perfect circle)
01:06:192 - Can add note here
01:06:957 (3) - shorten this by 1/4 beat (let the slider end at the red tick)

Good luck with this awesome map.
Topic Starter
Zejky

Ranger wrote:

yay


[General]

recommend to decide note behind.


[Normal]

00:06:345 (2) - how about just make pattern like this? | I know what you want. but patten curent will easy more :D

00:11:243 (2) - ^
00:16:141 (2) - ^
00:44:304 (1) - improve spinner to 00:47:330. it`s more mix the music. | 00:47:978 - Here are highlights of the hit finish
00:49:202 (1) - add finish here (at front). | sound in alone
00:54:100 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:11:855 (5) - make this slider more crook. cause improve blanket of 00:12:774 (1). | this is can what you want, but I did not towards that perfection
00:23:488 (2,3,4) - how about make triangle of that? | ok. i fix it
01:05:733 (7,1,2) - recommend spread distance more

[Insane]

00:17:365 (1) - how about move to front at 1/4 and add circle was there? [url]=http://puu.sh/fpdA9/2cb00908f6.jpg| this is my diff[/url]


00:18:590 (5) - remove clap at the end. | it is interesting in sound
00:19:814 (1,2) - change whistle to finish like other diffs. | it is interesting in sound
00:28:386 (3,4,5,6) - how about spread distance more? cause that`s insane diff. | i like slowly :D ignore the principles
01:03:896 (1,2) - ^^ | ^^
01:04:508 (4,5) - improve blanket here. | ok

such a relaxing song~
good luck for the Rank~ :)

batwoman3 wrote:

Hello Zejky. M4M from my queue. This is my mod for you. (PS. very nice song.)

General

Overall, open AImod and fix your errors from there. Below are my further mods

Normal

You might want to place circles too, not just sliders
00:33:284 (3) - can remove finish. It doesn't suit to the song for me | but thí normal, do not easy :D
not much to say. It's a good diff

Hard

00:00:835 (2) - blanket this around (1) | this all do not need overlap
00:08:794 (3) - don't overlap this with (2)
00:39:406 (1) - shorten this by 1/4 beat
00:40:631 (4) - ^
00:47:059 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this should be placed in Insane instead of hard | ok, fix distance
00:57:161 (2) - if you're using DS, move the middle point of the slider to x:234 y:157 | no. i was want it as :D

Insane

00:08:794 (5) - move to x:395 y:132 (disable Grid Snap)
00:17:212 (1,2) - remove NC at (1) and place NC at (2)
00:19:814 (1) - Set this to finish
00:30:223 (2) - Don't overlap these slider. Imo, place it farther. As for (1), shorten it by 1/4 beat. It doesn't match with the song
00:44:610 (2,3,4) - DS this farther. Overlapping those isn't a good idea. Same for the rest
01:03:896 (1) - Set this to finish | i can't add this, because make it anlone sound
01:04:508 (4,5) - maybe you can blanket this better (so that (4) surrounds (5) in an almost perfect circle)
01:06:192 - Can add note here
01:06:957 (3) - shorten this by 1/4 beat (let the slider end at the red tick)
about distance and 1/3 + 4 it is good for insane :D
Good luck with this awesome map.
Thank batwoman and Rangervery much
Update!!!
crabovan
Hello, this is part of our m4m.

General

Your mp3 is too long, you need to cut it a bit more. I've done it for you, there are proper file. http://puu.sh/fpKIL/5697373399.mp3
You need some tags: pop, vietnamese? etc.
Face of this girl are kinda creepy.

Insane

Insane with 2.78 star rating are nonsence, try to make this map harder (at least to ~3.5-3.8).

00:01:447 (4) - add NC
00:03:896 (4) - add NC
00:04:202 (5) - move to x:336 y:296
00:04:508 (6) - move to x:340 y:172
There are much moment, when you can make or update blanket, I'll just list them.
00:00:223 (1,3) - circle with slider
00:01:447 (4,6) - circle with slider
00:01:447 (4,1) - start of 4 with 6 slider
00:08:182 (3,4) - start of 3 with 4 slider
00:08:794 (4,1) - circle with slider
00:17:671 (1,4) - start of 1 with 4 slider
00:25:325 (2,4) - end of 2 with 4 slider and end of 4 with 2 slider
00:34:202 (7,1) - circle with slider
00:58:998 (1,2) - circle with slider
00:58:998 (1,3) - start of 1 with 3 slider
00:58:386 (3,5) - make copy of 3 after this^
00:59:610 (3,7) - start of 3 with 7 slider
01:00:835 (7,1) - start of 1 with 7 slider
01:01:753 (1,3) - start of 1 with 3 slider

Hard

00:28:080 - add note.
00:56:243 (5,6,1) - move away from 00:57:161 (2) . (overlap)
Again, blankets:
00:03:284 (2,3) - slider with note
00:09:712 (4,4) - slider with note
00:11:855 (5,1) - slider with note
00:11:855 (5,2) - start of 5 with 2 slider
00:14:916 (1,2) - start of 1 with 2 slider
00:34:508 (1,3) - start of 1 with 3 slider
00:52:263 (3,4) - start of 3 with 4 slider
00:56:549 (1,2) - start of 2 with 1 slider
00:44:610 (2,4,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 2 kick sliders and then stream? Make this http://puu.sh/fpRCR/33afffb7fc.jpg

Normal

Again issues with star rating. 1 star is pure easy. Seems you need to remap Insane (or make new diff), and make Normal (keep this and rename to Easy).

Hitsounding at sliderticks is nice, but need to make this hitsounds quietly than normal HS. There, change ur hitsound to this one http://puu.sh/fpS4V/3034be23f9.wav
Topic Starter
Zejky

crabovan wrote:

Hello, this is part of our m4m.

General

Your mp3 is too long, you need to cut it a bit more. I've done it for you, there are proper file. http://puu.sh/fpKIL/5697373399.mp3
You need some tags: pop, vietnamese? etc.
Face of this girl are kinda creepy.

Insane

Insane with 2.78 star rating are nonsence, try to make this map harder (at least to ~3.5-3.8).

00:01:447 (4) - add NC | because i use 1/1 NC
00:03:896 (4) - add NC | ^
00:04:202 (5) - move to x:336 y:296 | | ok
00:04:508 (6) - move to x:340 y:172 | ok
There are much moment, when you can make or update blanket, I'll just list them. | That is why this is insane
00:00:223 (1,3) - circle with slider
00:01:447 (4,6) - circle with slider
00:01:447 (4,1) - start of 4 with 6 slider
00:08:182 (3,4) - start of 3 with 4 slider
00:08:794 (4,1) - circle with slider
00:17:671 (1,4) - start of 1 with 4 slider
00:25:325 (2,4) - end of 2 with 4 slider and end of 4 with 2 slider
00:34:202 (7,1) - circle with slider
00:58:998 (1,2) - circle with slider
00:58:998 (1,3) - start of 1 with 3 slider
00:58:386 (3,5) - make copy of 3 after this^
00:59:610 (3,7) - start of 3 with 7 slider
01:00:835 (7,1) - start of 1 with 7 slider
01:01:753 (1,3) - start of 1 with 3 slider

Hard

00:28:080 - add note. | it is not necessary
00:56:243 (5,6,1) - move away from 00:57:161 (2) . (overlap) | i was want it as so
Again, blankets:
00:03:284 (2,3) - slider with note
00:09:712 (4,4) - slider with note
00:11:855 (5,1) - slider with note
00:11:855 (5,2) - start of 5 with 2 slider
00:14:916 (1,2) - start of 1 with 2 slider
00:34:508 (1,3) - start of 1 with 3 slider
00:52:263 (3,4) - start of 3 with 4 slider
00:56:549 (1,2) - start of 2 with 1 slider
00:44:610 (2,4,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 2 kick sliders and then stream? Make this http://puu.sh/fpRCR/33afffb7fc.jpg | ok, this so good

Normal

Again issues with star rating. 1 star is pure easy. Seems you need to remap Insane (or make new diff), and make Normal (keep this and rename to Easy). | i think this no problem, because this slowy bpm :D

Hitsounding at sliderticks is nice, but need to make this hitsounds quietly than normal HS. There, change ur hitsound to this one http://puu.sh/fpS4V/3034be23f9.wav
thank you very. crabovan
update
Fushimi Rio
From queue

[General]

Add a note at 01:08:794 - ?

I think there is a bit too much kiai. 00:05:120 - - 00:23:488 - don't need a kiai imo.
in fact I don't think this song needs kiai
And if you keep the kiai, the second kiai should stop at 00:24:712 - . Also the last kiai stop at 01:08:794 - .

[Normal]

none. Maybe you can try some various slider shapes?

[Hard]

00:02:671 (1,2) - looks a bit awkward compared with other patterns. blanket isn't always the best solution. try something like this?
00:06:345 (3) - try not stacking? it's better to keep players moving here (and stop at 4) imo.
00:24:100 (4) - x292 y179 for better triangle
01:09:253 (6) - ^, x358 y139
00:28:080 - add a note? to follow the vocal
00:56:243 (5,6,1,2) - move downward to avoid staking? since you used similar pattern without stacking sliders

[Insane]

00:44:610 (2,3,4) - move 3,4 a bit away? just a personal suggestion
00:45:835 (2,3,4) - ^

Nice diff. star~
Topic Starter
Zejky

imoutosan wrote:

From queue

[General]

Add a note at 01:08:794 - ?

I think there is a bit too much kiai. 00:05:120 - - 00:23:488 - don't need a kiai imo.
in fact I don't think this song needs kiai
And if you keep the kiai, the second kiai should stop at 00:24:712 - . Also the last kiai stop at 01:08:794 - .

[Normal]

none. Maybe you can try some various slider shapes?

[Hard]

00:02:671 (1,2) - looks a bit awkward compared with other patterns. blanket isn't always the best solution. try something like this?
00:06:345 (3) - try not stacking? it's better to keep players moving here (and stop at 4) imo. | fix
00:24:100 (4) - x292 y179 for better triangle | fix follow my styly :D
01:09:253 (6) - ^, x358 y139
00:28:080 - add a note? to follow the vocal
00:56:243 (5,6,1,2) - move downward to avoid staking? since you used similar pattern without stacking sliders | ok fix

[Insane]

00:44:610 (2,3,4) - move 3,4 a bit away? just a personal suggestion
00:45:835 (2,3,4) - ^

Nice diff. star~
that's all
thank you for mod imoutosan, but my style other should i can't fix more :D
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