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judgment light wrote:

2015-02-12 17:32 judgment light: irc mod如何
2015-02-12 17:32 judgment light: 实在凑数无能。。
2015-02-12 17:33 ZZHBOY: 这个不错
2015-02-12 17:33 judgment light: 00:12:246 (1,3) -
2015-02-12 17:33 judgment light: 00:15:037 (1,2) -
2015-02-12 17:33 judgment light: 这些滑条头试试加点音效?
2015-02-12 17:33 judgment light: 比如哨声
2015-02-12 17:34 ZZHBOY: 00:12:246 - 加finish了
2015-02-12 17:34 ZZHBOY: 其他没加不然听着乱,..
2015-02-12 17:34 ZZHBOY: 我顺便把其他diff这里也加了
2015-02-12 17:35 judgment light: 00:19:746 (2,3,4) - 这三个打的时候被坑..感觉间距不太合适 要么就空拍 要么就间距弄好点
2015-02-12 17:35 judgment light: 现在这样也不算特别美观
2015-02-12 17:35 judgment light: 嗯
2015-02-12 17:35 ZZHBOY: 这里故意的...
2015-02-12 17:36 judgment light: 反正我打起来觉得不太好
2015-02-12 17:36 judgment light: 这图怎么打起来这么飞球风
2015-02-12 17:36 ZZHBOY: 我考...
2015-02-12 17:37 judgment light: 还真没什么好挑的啊这种跳图..
2015-02-12 17:38 ZZHBOY: 对,,,
2015-02-12 17:38 judgment light: 01:16:432 (1) -
2015-02-12 17:39 judgment light: 这个滑条头也加个finish吧
2015-02-12 17:39 judgment light: 01:18:177 (2) -
2015-02-12 17:39 judgment light: 漏了clap
2015-02-12 17:39 ZZHBOY: 好
2015-02-12 17:40 judgment light: 01:18:525 (3) - 这个也漏了
2015-02-12 17:40 judgment light: 大概也只能挑这类错误了..
2015-02-12 17:42 judgment light: 01:58:990 (3,4,5) - 00:54:979 (5,6,7) - 诸如这类
2015-02-12 17:42 judgment light: 试一下用normal音
2015-02-12 17:43 ZZHBOY: 好
2015-02-12 17:43 ZZHBOY: 加了
2015-02-12 17:44 judgment light: 02:41:113 (2,3) - 还有前面的滑条尾巴也换normal音?
2015-02-12 17:45 ZZHBOY: 唔 这个还是先不加 不然打着奇怪...
2015-02-12 17:45 ZZHBOY: 明明没按的地方有个强音效
2015-02-12 17:45 ZZHBOY: 你掉线惹
2015-02-12 17:45 judgment light: 输入法离奇卡死。。
2015-02-12 17:46 judgment light: 我再看看还有没有别的遗漏之类的
2015-02-12 17:46 ZZHBOY: 好
2015-02-12 17:47 judgment light: 02:45:037 (4) - 你看看加一个finish效果如何
2015-02-12 17:47 ZZHBOY: 加了
2015-02-12 17:47 judgment light: 02:54:804 (4) - 这里为什么突然换成了normal..
2015-02-12 17:48 judgment light: 感觉这个可以去掉
2015-02-12 17:49 ZZHBOY: 因为最后一段了嘛音效弄激情一些=.=
2015-02-12 17:49 ZZHBOY: 我也是瞎加的orz
2015-02-12 17:49 judgment light: 03:00:037 (2) - 那就这个头和尾都加个finish
2015-02-12 17:49 judgment light: 感觉效果不错
2015-02-12 17:49 judgment light: orz感觉那个normal可以去掉
2015-02-12 17:50 ZZHBOY: 有道理
2015-02-12 17:50 ZZHBOY: normal先放哪吧我把finish加了
2015-02-12 17:50 judgment light: 嗯
2015-02-12 17:50 judgment light: 03:06:665 (1) - 还有这个finish..
2015-02-12 17:51 judgment light: 然后没惹orz
2015-02-12 17:52 ZZHBOY: 好

GGFFQQ55 wrote:

来摸啦

Mystery

  1. letter box during breaks 可以关掉吧?不太清楚 我去问问
  2. 有些跳的间距不太统一。。。
  3. 00:18:351 (2,3,4,5) - 这里空拍有点坑,顺便前后间距可以统一一下
  4. 00:19:921 (3,4,5) - 这里间距完全可以统一的吧insane弄有趣一点嘛
  5. 00:26:897 (3,4,5,6,1) - 这里跳的太乱了,稍微整理一下比较好
  6. 00:40:153 (1,2,3) - 摆个正三角形不好么。。。
  7. 01:08:060 (1,2,3) - 摆成等腰三角形比较好看吧

剩下不多书了,都是差不多的问题感觉

Hard

  1. 感觉hard还是偏难了点,spread稍有点问题
  2. 00:09:979 (2,3,4) - Hard的话间距还是统一比较好有道理 改了
  3. 01:20:444 (4,5) - 前面都没有stack。。。这里突然stack还是有点奇怪移开了
  4. 01:49:746 (6,7,1) - 这里以及后面的三连可以酌情删掉一些,毕竟在此之前都完全没有三连


Normal

  1. 01:03:525 (3,4) - blanket?
  2. 02:02:479 (4,1) - 这里的flow有点不好,试试把4左右翻一下方向
  3. 02:08:060 (4) - blanket?

大概这样,good luck


thx for mod .-.
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[General]
  1. 你写了SB by ar3 就把ar3放进TAG

[Easy]
  1. 00:09:107 - 加个note,为了clap.-.前面那一个clap好孤单
  2. 00:14:688 - ^
  3. 03:03:525 - ^
  4. 03:09:107 - ^
  5. 01:08:235 - 这么长应该break的吧
  6. 02:12:421 - ^
  7. 02:58:467 - ^

[Normal]
  1. 01:26:200 (4,1) - 不要碰到吧
  2. 01:33:176 (1,5) - ^
  3. 02:03:874 (1,5) - ^

[Hard]
  1. 01:27:072 (7) - 这个为何不clap,前面一样的地方clap的

[Mystery]
  1. 02:25:677 (6) - 放在239,62左右好看,02:25:851 (7) - ctrl+G,然后02:26:200 (1) - 对应移个位置,比如
  2. 01:48:526 (5) - 这往左一点,跟左边两个overlap程度一样吧
  3. 02:28:118 (4,1) - stack (凑
混kd
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Kagamine Ren wrote:

[General]
  1. 你写了SB by ar3 就把ar3放进TAG

[Easy]
  1. 00:09:107 - 加个note,为了clap.-.前面那一个clap好孤单easy嘛节奏尽量弄空了点
  2. 00:14:688 - ^
  3. 03:03:525 - ^
  4. 03:09:107 - ^
  5. 01:08:235 - 这么长应该break的吧vocal这里还有呢 没break了
  6. 02:12:421 - ^
  7. 02:58:467 - ^

[Normal]
  1. 01:26:200 (4,1) - 不要碰到吧嘛...
  2. 01:33:176 (1,5) - ^
  3. 02:03:874 (1,5) - ^

[Hard]
  1. 01:27:072 (7) - 这个为何不clap,前面一样的地方clap的有道理 加了

[Mystery]
  1. 02:25:677 (6) - 放在239,62左右好看,02:25:851 (7) - ctrl+G,然后02:26:200 (1) - 对应移个位置,比如
  2. 01:48:526 (5) - 这往左一点,跟左边两个overlap程度一样吧
  3. 02:28:118 (4,1) - stack (凑好 有道理
混kd


thx for mod :3
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[Mystery]
00:56:723 - 空着不爽
02:00:909 - ^
01:40:502 (2) - Ctrl+G 因为你上一组也是反过来的
02:12:421 (2) - 跳小了点,叠在后边的5上面不错
02:33:525 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 上面AR3说的那样跳
03:02:304 (5) - Ctrl+G

[Hard]
可以用AR8
02:45:211 - 空着不爽..
02:46:956 - ^

让我偷偷懒,就这样吧_(:з」∠)_
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JJburstOwO wrote:

[Mystery]
00:56:723 - 空着不爽
02:00:909 - ^
01:40:502 (2) - Ctrl+G 因为你上一组也是反过来的
02:12:421 (2) - 跳小了点,叠在后边的5上面不错
02:33:525 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 上面AR3说的那样跳
03:02:304 (5) - Ctrl+G

[Hard]
可以用AR8
02:45:211 - 空着不爽..
02:46:956 - ^

让我偷偷懒,就这样吧_(:з」∠)_


fixed some, thx for mod :3
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wocao发错地方了,吗的
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As requested.
-【General】-
我总觉得这个曲子和其他ll曲子曲风有很大不同,诡异风格。
摸了一半突然更新,提了
-【Easy】-
Why use tick rate 2?
00:32:828 (3,4,1) - 正三角一下?http://puu.sh/fQP9r/61dcf3e520.jpg
00:58:293 (2,3,4) - 也3/2吧
后面的大致和这个都差不多

-【Normal】-
00:06:665 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/fQPOT/da74d6f375.jpg
00:42:770 (1) - 转盘尾巴加个音效这里
01:06:665 (4,5) - blanket
02:10:851 (4,5) - ^
02:35:967 (1,1) - 叠好

-【Hard】-
00:25:502 (8) - 折返加Clap
00:49:049 挺违和的 加一个note吧
00:55:502 (5,6) - 1/1滑条。没vocal放两个note有点多余,一个滑条带过多好。
01:00:386 (4,5,6) - 建议用和 00:59:688 (1,2,3) - 一样的节奏。 vocal的分布相似。
01:01:084 (6,7) - 1/1滑条
01:01:956 这个音还是不要漏比较好
01:14:688 加一个note带Clap
01:47:304 加一个note?不然01:46:956 (1,2) - 之间隔了一排半,怪怪的。
01:49:223 (5) - 怎么从这里开始开始放三连了?
01:55:415 (10) - 这个感觉三连加的有点勉强
02:20:618 (1,2,3) - 听音应该是12变成滑条,3变成两个单点吧。。。
02:41:374 加一个note
02:44:339 (1,2,3) - 跟vocal感觉好一些
02:50:444 加一个note

-【Mystery】-
00:19:223 (1) - 有点出界,还是别冒险比较好
01:10:851 (1,2) - 布兰凯特
01:44:339 (1,2,3) - antijump或者三角?
02:00:909 加一个note?
02:37:363 (1,2,3,4) - 旋转百分之八度顺逆皆可
03:02:828 (6,7) - blanket

每水一次摸我的良心就受到了一次谴责,哭哭
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Regraz wrote:

As requested.
-【General】-
我总觉得这个曲子和其他ll曲子曲风有很大不同,诡异风格。
摸了一半突然更新,提了
-【Easy】-
Why use tick rate 2?
00:32:828 (3,4,1) - 正三角一下?http://puu.sh/fQP9r/61dcf3e520.jpg
00:58:293 (2,3,4) - 也3/2吧
后面的大致和这个都差不多

-【Normal】-
00:06:665 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/fQPOT/da74d6f375.jpg
00:42:770 (1) - 转盘尾巴加个音效这里
01:06:665 (4,5) - blanket
02:10:851 (4,5) - ^
02:35:967 (1,1) - 叠好

-【Hard】-
00:25:502 (8) - 折返加Clap
00:49:049 挺违和的 加一个note吧
00:55:502 (5,6) - 1/1滑条。没vocal放两个note有点多余,一个滑条带过多好。
01:00:386 (4,5,6) - 建议用和 00:59:688 (1,2,3) - 一样的节奏。 vocal的分布相似。
01:01:084 (6,7) - 1/1滑条
01:01:956 这个音还是不要漏比较好
01:14:688 加一个note带Clap
01:47:304 加一个note?不然01:46:956 (1,2) - 之间隔了一排半,怪怪的。
01:49:223 (5) - 怎么从这里开始开始放三连了?
01:55:415 (10) - 这个感觉三连加的有点勉强
02:20:618 (1,2,3) - 听音应该是12变成滑条,3变成两个单点吧。。。
02:41:374 加一个note
02:44:339 (1,2,3) - 跟vocal感觉好一些
02:50:444 加一个note

-【Mystery】-
00:19:223 (1) - 有点出界,还是别冒险比较好
01:10:851 (1,2) - 布兰凯特
01:44:339 (1,2,3) - antijump或者三角?
02:00:909 加一个note?
02:37:363 (1,2,3,4) - 旋转百分之八度顺逆皆可
03:02:828 (6,7) - blanket

每水一次摸我的良心就受到了一次谴责,哭哭

Fixed some thx for mod
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Looks good. Nominated.
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Flower wrote:

Looks good. Nominated.
升花
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泡了就不摸啦 XD
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两天没打回来看看就泡了, 这么快
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[General]

  1. Change source to Love Live! School idol project, currently the I and P in the title need to be lowercase. Official site has it like that. http://www.lovelive-anime.jp/
  2. You must add ラブライブ! to the tags, as it is the Japanese name of the anime.
  3. All volume lines need to have 30%+ volume, they're too quiet right now. do same volumes as hard and insane, they fit more orz.



Slowly editing.... zzzZzz


Could you increase the drain and OD on Hard to 6?

Otherwise, maps are awesome. Good job man.
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Tari wrote:

[General]

  1. Change source to Love Live! School idol project, currently the I and P in the title need to be lowercase. Official site has it like that. http://www.lovelive-anime.jp/
  2. You must add ラブライブ! to the tags, as it is the Japanese name of the anime.
  3. All volume lines need to have 30%+ volume, they're too quiet right now. do same volumes as hard and insane, they fit more orz.



Slowly editing.... zzzZzz


Could you increase the drain and OD on Hard to 6?

Otherwise, maps are awesome. Good job man.
all fixed and uploeaded .-.
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sorry for late, but here I am :3
[General]
  1. 02:36:490 - this would be a better place to end your kiai imo. since this is where the sound actually ends
    02:37:886 - same as above
[Mystery]
  1. 00:17:130 (1) - consider 5% volume on the tail. it's too loud
  2. 00:18:874 (4,5,1) - I think something like this would flow better with the circular flow you have next
  3. 00:42:072 (4) - combo difference 01:46:258 (1) -
  4. 03:13:118 (5) - adding NC here would create a better effect imo
[Hard]
  • Tari wrote:

    Could you increase the drain and OD on Hard to 6?
  1. consider HP5 since your combos are really really long.
  2. 00:44:339 - I would add a circle here instead of slider reverse. would work better with the cymbal crash. same goes to 01:48:525 -
  3. 00:45:037 (6) - funny how you have this here and not in insane
  4. 00:49:049 - leaving here empty while the vocal and guitar is still on-going really makes things awkward to play. please add a note
  5. 01:47:304 - add a circle here. it's not intuitive to play and also inconsistent with 00:43:118 (2) -
  6. 02:24:804 (1) - this isn't a very fitting sound for a spinner. also having this 02:26:200 (1) - at the top makes things hard.
    either map the spinner, or move the next circles more closer to the center.
  7. 02:41:374 - you should really map this vocal
  8. 03:11:549 (7,8,9,10) - this is really awkward to play because you ignored this 03:11:636 - and had a triple. I recommend this
[Normal]
  1. 00:51:316 (1,2) - this would work better with the guitar and vocal imo. also lets you map the clap
  2. 01:55:502 (1,2) - same here. well you copy pasted
[Easy]
  1. 00:12:770 -
    01:16:956 - why would you not map this "hey" it's really heavy
I think that's about it.

since Tari modded it, I guess ask him for recheck.

good luck~
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No Dap wrote:

sorry for late, but here I am :3
[General]
  1. 02:36:490 - this would be a better place to end your kiai imo. since this is where the sound actually ends
    02:37:886 - same as above
[Mystery]
  1. 00:17:130 (1) - consider 5% volume on the tail. it's too loud
  2. 00:18:874 (4,5,1) - I think something like this would flow better with the circular flow you have nextchanged here in my way
  3. 00:42:072 (4) - combo difference 01:46:258 (1) -
  4. 03:13:118 (5) - adding NC here would create a better effect imo
[Hard]
  • Tari wrote:

    Could you increase the drain and OD on Hard to 6?
  1. consider HP5 since your combos are really really long.decreased to 5.5
  2. 00:44:339 - I would add a circle here instead of slider reverse. would work better with the cymbal crash. same goes to 01:48:525 -
  3. 00:45:037 (6) - funny how you have this here and not in insanewant to mostly follow drum sound in Insane diff .-.
  4. 00:49:049 - leaving here empty while the vocal and guitar is still on-going really makes things awkward to play. please add a note
  5. 01:47:304 - add a circle here. it's not intuitive to play and also inconsistent with 00:43:118 (2) -
  6. 02:24:804 (1) - this isn't a very fitting sound for a spinner. also having this 02:26:200 (1) - at the top makes things hard.
    either map the spinner, or move the next circles more closer to the center.
  7. 02:41:374 - you should really map this vocalempty to stress the start of the kiai part
  8. 03:11:549 (7,8,9,10) - this is really awkward to play because you ignored this 03:11:636 - and had a triple. I recommend thisfine...
[Normal]
  1. 00:51:316 (1,2) - this would work better with the guitar and vocal imo. also lets you map the clapnope...i just want to follow vocal here.-.
  2. 01:55:502 (1,2) - same here. well you copy pasted^
[Easy]
  1. 00:12:770 -
    01:16:956 - why would you not map this "hey" it's really heavy3/2 gap will be hard for new players imo
I think that's about it.

since Tari modded it, I guess ask him for recheck.

good luck~


no reply = fixed
thx for mod :3
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One last thing on Easy : 02:35:967 (1,1,1) - Stack them all together or turn them into sliders, spacing at 02:37:363 (1,1) - is really confusing, almost looks like you space them out like these rhythms 02:26:200 (1,2) -

Please change that :3
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This reminds me of this map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/112211 :D

hi tari
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ZZHBOY wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:12:770 -
    01:16:956 - why would you not map this "hey" it's really heavy3/2 gap will be hard for new players imo
that's what 3/2 sliders are for.


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Alright, Here you go.
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