- Ly0572 - wrote:

rank pls xD

Suzuko-P wrote:

Shooting kudosu and rank this!
(I'm old Yui Fc lol)

erlinadewi- wrote:

IRC

13:05 erlinadewi-: hi
13:06 *erlinadewi- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/628107 YUI - Rolling star]
13:06 erlinadewi-: bisa irc ?
13:07 EFP: eee ini kuota 20mb, cukup ga? xD
13:07 erlinadewi-: kalau bentar cukup kali ya wkwkwk
13:07 erlinadewi-: soalnya biar enak klo irc wkwkwk
13:08 EFP: oke
13:08 erlinadewi-: sip deh
13:08 EFP: diff mana?
13:08 erlinadewi-: ez dulu
13:08 *erlinadewi- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/628107 YUI - Rolling star [EZ]]
13:08 *EFP is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/628107 YUI - Rolling star [EZ]]
13:09 erlinadewi-: 00:07:378 - ada snare kecil disini, tambah note?
13:10 EFP: ee ga deh
13:10 erlinadewi-: 00:35:142 (35142|0) - col 2 00:37:378 (37378|1) - col 4
13:10 erlinadewi-: biar enakan flow nya
13:11 erlinadewi-: 00:35:887 (35887|0) - col 2
13:11 erlinadewi-: klo yg atas di apply
13:12 EFP: 00:36:260 (36260|1) - ini?
13:13 erlinadewi-: itu engga
13:13 EFP: applied
13:13 erlinadewi-: lagu jaman sd ini wkwkwk
13:14 EFP: wkkwk iya
13:14 erlinadewi-: 01:48:558 - ada drum roll. add something?
13:15 erlinadewi-: 02:08:682 - add juga?
13:16 EFP: same like 00:36:260 (36260|1) - ?
13:16 EFP: 02:08:682 - added col 4
13:17 erlinadewi-: ez done
13:17 erlinadewi-: nm nya ya sekarang
13:17 EFP: okok
13:17 *EFP is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/625675 YUI - Rolling star [NM]]
13:18 erlinadewi-: 00:29:365 - add? biar tak tak duk tak
13:18 erlinadewi-: wkwkwk
13:19 EFP: nice, col berapa yang pas?
13:19 erlinadewi-: 3 mayble
13:20 erlinadewi-: 01:10:173 (70173|0,70732|2) - move to col 3 4 ?
13:21 erlinadewi-: 01:12:595 - add lagi. biar tak tak duk tak
13:21 EFP: roger
13:21 erlinadewi-: ini map popped ya
13:21 erlinadewi-: pdhl bgus lagunya
13:22 erlinadewi-: 01:33:651 - add something here? drum roll nya kerasa bgt
13:22 EFP: iya, masalah hs kalo gasalah waktu itu
13:22 erlinadewi-: oh gtu
13:23 EFP: 01:33:651 - digimanain, bingung ;w;
13:23 EFP: stream 1/2?
13:24 erlinadewi-: 01:39:241 - ini aja drum roll kamu kasih 1/4 disitu
13:24 erlinadewi-: 1/2 bisa
13:25 erlinadewi-: tapi tak usah gpp
13:25 erlinadewi-: soalnya disini juga gak kamu kasih apa" 02:43:713 -
13:25 EFP: 01:33:651 - added note col 2
13:25 erlinadewi-: kalau misalnya mau kamu tambahin sesuatu. yang selanjutnya yg kira" suaranya sama harus kamu kasih juga biar konsisten
13:26 EFP: okey
13:26 erlinadewi-: 02:43:713 - ini misalnya. sama kek diatas
13:26 EFP: 02:43:713 - added col 3
13:27 erlinadewi-: nm cukup. sekarang hd ya
13:27 EFP: ralat, 01:33:651 - added col 2
13:27 *erlinadewi- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/625673 YUI - Rolling star [HD]]
13:27 erlinadewi-: sip
13:27 EFP: wokeh
13:27 *EFP is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/625673 YUI - Rolling star [HD]]
13:29 erlinadewi-: 00:59:738 - col 3 nya sepi bgt
13:29 erlinadewi-: pindahin lah salah satu biar gak terlalu kosong
13:29 EFP: baru sadar xD
13:29 EFP: siap
13:30 erlinadewi-: 01:36:260 - add? ada suara 'ting'
13:31 EFP: 01:05:608 - sama kayak 00:22:378 - ga?
13:31 erlinadewi-: sama menurutku
13:32 EFP: added
13:32 erlinadewi-: 01:43:154 (103154|2,103341|2,103527|2) - jack 3 apa gak terlalu berat ini di diff HD?
13:32 erlinadewi-: oh ngikut guitar ya
13:33 EFP: ya itu
13:33 EFP: suggest dari nowsmart jgua
13:33 EFP: juga*
13:33 erlinadewi-: iya sama kek mx
13:34 erlinadewi-: done
13:35 erlinadewi-: dah sip
13:35 EFP: berat ga sih ini 03:04:024 (184024|3,184210|3,184397|3,184583|3) - ?
13:38 erlinadewi-: mayan
13:38 erlinadewi-: coba ada yg ditaruh di 3
13:38 erlinadewi-: 03:04:210 (184210|3) - ini ke 3
13:39 EFP: done
13:39 erlinadewi-: aku post ya

good luck ya

Ibrahim wrote:

hai m4m here, sorry for long delay.

Hard

00:03:279 - 00:04:769 - dll , kenapa ga di add note seperti ini 00:05:887 (5887|2) - kick disini, sisanya ngikut gitar
00:05:887 (5887|2,18558|2,18651|3,18931|3) - ini terlalu berat di kiri lagian part nya aga kalem juga, suggest pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6336465 itu timming link nya salah?
00:21:539 (21539|2,21726|0,21912|2,22098|0,22285|2) - disini PR nya masih sama dengan ini 00:20:980 (20980|0,21167|1,21353|0) - jadi lebih baik di ubah sama sesuai PR nya fixed
01:07:378 (67378|1,67751|1,68123|1) - suggest untuk ubah ke kolom 3 (col 1 2 3 4) karena PR nya berbeda dengan ini 01:04:210 (64210|3,64397|1,64583|3,64769|1) - ^
01:13:527 - add no, thanks
01:34:210 (94210|2) - pindah ke 2 dan 01:34:397 (94397|1) - pindah ke 3 fixed
02:20:235 - add note lagi karena pas buat masuk part kiai oke
03:05:701 - add note lagi buat emphasize note ini 03:05:887 (185887|1,185887|2) -oke

oke segitu aja sorry amd Good luck!

DixonBlackwing wrote:

some irc

23:19 *DixonBlackwing is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/628107 YUI - Rolling star]
23:22 DixonBlackwing: 00:32:347 (32347|1) - ini note buat gitar kan? ga tmbh buat 00:31:788 - 00:31:974 - jg?
23:23 DixonBlackwing: 00:35:887 - jack untuk?
23:24 EFP: ini diff sebenernya sebagian dikerjain sama nowsmart
23:24 EFP: ada sebagian yang gua gatau jadinya
23:24 EFP: itu yang jack gatau
23:24 EFP: itu iya buat gitar
23:24 DixonBlackwing: wa lmyn ykin pattern buat ez ny lbi konsisten sblmny
23:25 EFP: 00:31:788 - col 2, 00:31:974 - col 3
23:26 EFP: 00:36:260 (36260|1) - pindah ke 1 ajaya?
23:27 DixonBlackwing: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6646341
23:28 EFP: diff hd?
23:28 DixonBlackwing: itu ga sngaja buka diff laen jg
23:28 DixonBlackwing: yg kiri yg sugesti pattern ane
23:30 DixonBlackwing: 01:15:018 - 01:15:204 - jgn lupa add jg
23:30 DixonBlackwing: 01:18:372 - ini mnding jgn wlaupun intended, wait
23:31 EFP: oh oke
23:31 EFP: udah
23:31 EFP: wut
23:32 DixonBlackwing: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6646370
23:33 EFP: lanjut
23:33 DixonBlackwing: 01:39:241 - tambah LN 
23:33 DixonBlackwing: klo ga , ga konsisten ama 02:50:794 - 
23:34 DixonBlackwing: jgn lupa tmbh normal-hitclapny jg
23:34 EFP: done
23:35 DixonBlackwing: td di col 1 kan LN nya? brarti 01:39:987 (99987|1) - pindah ke col 3
23:35 EFP: iya, sip
23:35 DixonBlackwing: 01:48:372 - ln lg di col 3
23:36 EFP: donw
23:36 EFP: e
23:37 DixonBlackwing: 02:15:763 (135763|0,136136|1,136508|2,136881|3) - ilang smua normal hit-clapny :o
23:38 EFP: disengaja itu kayaknya
23:38 EFP: 02:18:744 (138744|3) - ganti ke ln ajaya?
23:39 DixonBlackwing: cma di easy doank itu hs ilang, dan ga ngkut instrumen laen slaen roll drum kykny
23:39 EFP: kasih 40% semua?
23:39 DixonBlackwing: samain ama volume HS laenny
23:40 DixonBlackwing: yg 2:18 keep dlu ja, buat pattern gap ma nopis
23:40 DixonBlackwing: eh mabok dah wa
23:40 EFP: okeh
23:41 EFP: ngomong ape coba
23:42 DixonBlackwing: 2:18 ttp pake LN , nnti nopisny wa cba rearrange
23:43 EFP: tetep pake ln? disitu note biasa
23:43 EFP: maksudnya ganti aja ke ln?
23:43 DixonBlackwing: 02:18:931 - yg ini mksd wa, kan roll drumny bru mulai disini
23:44 EFP: awkward jadinya
23:45 DixonBlackwing: klo liat di diff HD jg streamny mulai dr sana
23:45 EFP: kalo narik dari 02:18:744 - sampe 02:19:303 -  ?
23:46 DixonBlackwing: dia jg keep consistent ama 02:50:794 - , they're almost the same
23:46 DixonBlackwing: iya ampe situ
23:47 DixonBlackwing: itu ja sih hrsny
23:47 EFP: oh oke
23:48 *DixonBlackwing is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/625675 YUI - Rolling star [NM]]
23:49 DixonBlackwing: 00:00:856 (856|3,949|1,1042|3,1136|1) - smua 1/4 di NM ubah jd 1/2 note dah, wa ga ykin stream NM pass qualif
23:49 DixonBlackwing: patternny jg lbi ssh ini drpd HD..
23:51 EFP: http://puu.sh/st55V/36fce446b3.jpg ?
23:52 DixonBlackwing: iya, apply di smua 1/4 part
23:54 EFP: 01:39:241 - dijadiin gimana enaknya ini part?
23:54 DixonBlackwing: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6646567
23:56 EFP: ini 02:58:154 (178154|0) - gua keep gapapa kan?
23:56 DixonBlackwing: gpp yg itu
23:59 DixonBlackwing: 02:18:744 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6646604
00:00 DixonBlackwing: 03:06:074 (186074|3,186074|2,186260|1,186260|0) - Ctrl+H
00:01 EFP: done
00:03 DixonBlackwing: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6646625
00:03 DixonBlackwing: 01:17:254 - 
00:04 DixonBlackwing: itu ja
00:05 EFP: okeoke
00:06 *DixonBlackwing is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/625673 YUI - Rolling star [HD]]
00:09 DixonBlackwing: lmao ga bs nge ss, rip
00:10 DixonBlackwing: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6646667 udah bs
00:11 EFP: lanjut
00:11 EFP: pattern di akhir udah enak blm?
00:11 EFP: 00:07:192 (7192|1) -
00:12 DixonBlackwing: hrsny udh enak yg di ss ane
00:12 DixonBlackwing: rip ss, ssh amet kluarny
00:12 EFP: gapake puush?
00:13 DixonBlackwing: mslh inet kykny, pke puush jg ssh
00:13 EFP: rip
00:14 DixonBlackwing: 00:12:036 - dbkinny mirip2 ama 00:05:701 - 
00:16 EFP: done
00:19 EFP: belom bsia juga tuh ss?
00:19 DixonBlackwing: rip ;3
00:20 EFP: ;w;
00:20 DixonBlackwing: 01:48:372 - disamakan pls ma 01:39:241 - D:
00:20 DixonBlackwing: BG ny tbh wa ga ykin.. kykny msti pke yg dr bleach
00:21 EFP: beda suaranya tapi
00:21 EFP: yang diubah yang mana>
00:22 EFP: ntar gua cari bg nya
00:22 DixonBlackwing: 2-2ny ja pke normal hit-clap, dah psti sama drumny :v
00:23 DixonBlackwing: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6646757 
00:23 EFP: yang di ubah ini 01:48:372 - atau 01:39:241 -
00:23 DixonBlackwing: dah bs yay
00:23 DixonBlackwing: yg jumptrill yg diubah
00:24 DixonBlackwing: 01:58:900 - missing note buat string
00:24 DixonBlackwing: 02:01:881 (121881|1) - ghost note
00:26 EFP: lanjut
00:27 EFP: 01:48:372 - dibuat stairs ajaya?\
00:27 DixonBlackwing: 02:04:024 - underwhelming wkwk
00:27 DixonBlackwing: stairs bole
00:27 DixonBlackwing: add jg di red lineny ja
00:28 EFP: coba ss bagian 01:58:806 - dah
00:28 DixonBlackwing: 01:58:620 (118620|3) - move ja ini ke col 1 , lalu 01:58:900 - add di col.2 done
00:29 EFP: engga, ini tiba tiba ada note mepet begini
00:29 EFP: http://puu.sh/st77H/bafe93af03.jpg
00:30 DixonBlackwing: dapuk https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6646792
00:31 EFP: oalah wkwk
00:32 EFP: 01:58:993 (118993|3) - apus?
00:33 DixonBlackwing: knp diapus? ad suarany itu
00:33 EFP: jumptrill nya
00:33 DixonBlackwing: 02:02:533 - delete biar konsisten ama jeda red line kyk 01:58:061 - 
00:34 DixonBlackwing: ikt yg ss ane ja biar cpt
00:34 EFP: mana ss nya?
00:34 DixonBlackwing: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6646792 yg ane ksih tadi
00:35 EFP: part ini 02:02:533 - ?
00:36 EFP: disamain?
00:36 DixonBlackwing: delete yg itu
00:36 DixonBlackwing: biar konsisten jedanya
00:36 EFP: "ikt yg ss ane ja biar cpt"
00:37 DixonBlackwing: itu kan yg 1:58
00:37 DixonBlackwing: bkn 2:02
00:37 EFP: iya 1:58
00:38 EFP: terus? "ikt yg ss ane" itu ngikut yang mane?wkkwk
00:38 EFP: mabok
00:38 EFP: padahal gua tadi nanya jumptrill nya wkkwk
00:38 DixonBlackwing: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6646792 ikt ss yg ini loo, ane dah ksih 3 x orz
00:39 DixonBlackwing: kan tdi ditnyany 1:58 soalny ad noteny nyundul
00:39 EFP: dafuk salah link ternyata gua
00:39 EFP: wkwk
00:39 DixonBlackwing: 01:48:372 - jumptrill kan yg dsini :/
00:41 EFP: 01:48:372 - itu kan dijadiin stairs tadi
00:41 EFP: 02:50:794 - nah yang ini juga samain?
00:41 DixonBlackwing: iya bener wkwk
00:41 EFP: kmprt
00:42 DixonBlackwing: ga msti bner2 stairs, yg pnting streamny ngeflow ja
00:42 DixonBlackwing: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6646876
00:43 DixonBlackwing: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6646894
00:44 EFP: lanjut
00:45 DixonBlackwing: 02:17:440 - 02:17:626 - 02:17:999 - 02:18:185 - add note smua
00:45 DixonBlackwing: col 2, col 3, col 3, col 2
00:46 EFP: done
00:46 DixonBlackwing: 02:34:583 (154583|2) - kok tba2 ad "C" :o
00:47 EFP: di nm juga ada
00:47 DixonBlackwing: dsini smuany pke sample import, tba2 ad default HS masuk
00:47 DixonBlackwing: orz, dan di diff nowsmart pure import smua
00:48 EFP: unrankable?
00:48 DixonBlackwing: affect di quality, tktny dipoint out klo dh quali
00:49 DixonBlackwing: samain ja, klo mmg mw keep C ny, diff nowsmart pake jg
00:50 EFP: gua apus aja
00:52 DixonBlackwing: hsny wa agk bgg, di tmpt nowsmart dispam smua normal-hitnormalny...
00:53 DixonBlackwing: hs ny wa blkngan ja dah, udh jam sgini..
00:53 DixonBlackwing: itu dlu , diff nowsmart di forum ja nnti
00:54 EFP: yaudah lanjut kapan kapan lagi
00:54 EFP: itu pattern yang akhirnya gimana
00:54 DixonBlackwing: klo bsok ol jg bs mlemny, soalny udh blik ke jkarta
00:54 EFP: 03:01:974 -
00:55 EFP: ya besok gua kerja juga balik malem
00:55 DixonBlackwing: col 3 nya ngeanchor sih, tp ane udh mager ksih sugesti wkkw
00:55 DixonBlackwing: 03:05:142 (185142|0,185328|0) - delete suarany pelan
00:56 EFP: wkwk yodeh
00:59 DixonBlackwing: revive ja abis itu update

i will be back here

Protastic101 wrote:

oki, about a month late, but Im here to help with an old bubble \o/

euhjlow;.dnrabgv,z

General

1. Would consider replacing the normal-hitwhistle since you can barely hear it tbh. Might try this one instead http://puu.sh/t0wA1.wav
2. Might consider bringing up the HP of HD to 7.5 or so since 7 is really too forgiving at the moment. all fixed, thanks~!

Diffs

[EZ]00:14:645 - 00:15:018 - Might consider adding another note at these places to make them into jumps for the crashes, and also because it signals the start and end of a new section. it's kinda weird for adding note there
00:20:421 - 00:20:794 - I might consider adding a note in 2 and 4 respectively to represent the guitar there. It also acts a bit like a transition too.
00:32:533 (32533|3) - Might be a cool idea to turn this into a 1/1 LN to act as a transition into the next sentence like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6898242
00:38:869 - to 00:42:223 - You've ignored column 3 D: I'd consider moving some notes like 00:40:359 (40359|1) - to 3
01:15:763 (75763|0) - Similar to how I mentioned that 1/1 LN a while ago, I'd apply it here too
01:48:372 (108372|2,108931|0) - I might consider swapping the columns here, so that the LN is in 1 and the short note in 3 since the cap at 01:48:931 (108931|0,108931|3) - is uncomfortable to hit on weaker fingers like the middle finger (talking about the note in 4 mostly)
02:45:949 - to 02:48:558 - Stop ignoring columns :< I'd consider moving 02:47:813 (167813|0) - to restore balance.

[NM]00:13:713 - 00:14:272 - I can't really understand why you wouldn't have notes here for the drum kicks like at 00:11:291 (11291|0,11477|1) - for example.
01:03:651 - 01:04:024 - Why not add notes for the guitar like you did at 00:20:421 (20421|2,20794|3) - ? i just follow kick sounds here
01:22:844 - Column 3 feels a little left out, maybe try something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6903536
02:37:751 - 02:37:937 - Add notes here for the snare, because the sound is similar to 02:31:788 (151788|1,151974|2,152161|0) - i just added here 02:37:751 - like 02:43:713 -

[HD]00:27:502 (27502|1,27502|0,28061|0,28434|0,28434|3) - I'd consider arranging the notes like this since it's easier to play this way in my opinion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6903588
01:48:372 (108372|3,108465|2,108558|1,108651|0,108744|1,108838|2) - More just my personal opinion, but I'm not a really big fan of how this stair plays. Maybe try something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6903617

Hitsounds

[EZ]00:26:943 (26943|1) - Add whistle

[NM]dunno if Im just bad at checking hitsounds or if you're a really good hitsounder, but no inconsistencies here eek theres many people who help me for this

[HD]00:17:813 (17813|3) - Dunno why you needed to apply the hitnormal to this note when it automatically plays if there's no assigned hitsound lol my bad
01:41:105 (101105|0,101477|2,101850|1) - Add finishes
01:42:223 (102223|0,102595|0) - ^
01:43:341 (103341|1,103713|1,104086|1,104459|1,104831|0,105204|0) - ^
01:46:322 (106322|0,106695|0,107067|0,107440|0,107813|0,108185|0) - ^

Protastic101 wrote:

oki, about a month late, but Im here to help with an old bubble \o/

euhjlow;.dnrabgv,z

General

1. Would consider replacing the normal-hitwhistle since you can barely hear it tbh. Might try this one instead http://puu.sh/t0wA1.wav
2. Might consider bringing up the HP of HD to 7.5 or so since 7 is really too forgiving at the moment.

Diffs

[Nowsmart's MX]00:37:564 (37564|0) - I'd consider moving this to 3 since hitting a ministack in 1 while holding an LN in 2 is pretty uncomfortable imo
00:59:412 (59412|1) - Why. Remove this note, there's literally no reason for it to be here cause you already have a double at 00:59:365 - and there's no delay to the sound
01:15:018 (75018|3,75018|2,75204|3,75763|3) - Imo, might be easier to play this if you swapped columns, so like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6904055
01:43:713 (103713|0) - Consider moving this to 3 since I think it's easier to hit that way when the LNs are only on the left hand and everything else on the right.

Hitsounds

[Nowsmart's MX]01:39:055 (99055|1) - You have 2 hitfinishes here. Replace this one with a hitclap for the snare

- Ly0572 - wrote:

grats ed o// woooooh

nowsmart wrote:

Rank it now

Maxus wrote:

Qualify Check
Will make this quick since this is already great.
No kudosu since i already mod this a while ago.

Reminder: Please take care all of your Hitsound while applying my suggestion.
[EZ]
00:28:993 (28993|2) - this should be at col.4 to avoid too much stacking at 00:27:875 (27875|2,28434|2,28993|2,29552|2) - i know you did it consistently on part after this, but better make it balance.
00:32:906 (32906|1,33279|2) - switch column here to avoid stacking at col.2.
01:12:223 (72223|0) - move to col.2
01:16:136 (76136|2,76508|1) - switch column , samer reason as before.
01:24:334 (84334|0) - better move to col.2 for balance.
01:48:185 (108185|3,108931|2) - move to the left 1 time. the jack at 01:48:931 (108931|2,109303|2) - doesn't fit the song..
02:22:471 (142471|3) - move to col.3 so you get smoother transition towards next pattern.
02:28:434 (148434|0) - move to col.2 same reason as above.

[NM]
01:34:024 - add one more note to be consistent with 02:44:086 -
02:25:825 (145825|1,146198|3,146570|1) - i would make these col 4-2-4 to avoid the pattern being the same as 02:22:844 - .

[HD]
00:54:334 - http://puu.sh/t4mng/59af589f8e.png try this, your jacking at col 3 is too much, this will balance it out.
01:42:595 - i personally think the way it conveys the jack a bit weird, i think you can make it fitting better for guitar: http://puu.sh/t4mHg/c2f6d655fc.png

[Nowsmart's MX]
01:43:341 - delete one note? i don't see why it has to be double with such weak sound here.
02:05:142 - just want to say that 02:05:328 - 02:05:701 - 02:06:074 - are the same cymbal sound, better make them the same column, like http://puu.sh/t4nke/253a8727af.png
02:26:384 (146384|1) - try move this to col 3 so the left hand doesn't get pressured after hitting 02:26:011 (146011|0,146105|1,146198|0) -
03:04:676 - just curious, is this intentionally made empty when HD have full stream? because there isn't any space to add more notes

Reply to the mod, and i will qualify it afterwards

nowsmart wrote:

Finally!

Syadow- wrote:

Wew finally :v gratz >w<

AchsanLovers wrote:

grats ~

erlinadewi- wrote:

Lagu fav jaman SD owo)b

Gratz on qualified

Amiichii wrote:

Gratz ET~

-Troke- wrote:

wih udah ranked nih ye gratz EFP