p/4253562 recheck after 10months. Feel free not to kudos this post
[General]
Hitsounds are barely audible in all difficulties, recommend to incrase the sample volume by 15~25%
[Nowsmart's MX]
00:15:018 (15018|2) - it's quite possible to add a double chords here since there's a cymbal sound at this part
00:22:285 (22285|3,22471|1) - a missing 1/4 note for hi-hat like in this part 00:18:558 (18558|0,18651|1,18744|2) -
00:29:179 (29179|2,29365|2) - err yeah this part is a lil bit weird because you hammered something that I can't almost hear. It will make sense if you hammered these two 00:29:365 (29365|2,29552|3) - (same guitar sound)
00:31:788 (31788|1,31974|3) - hammer maybe
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with that ammount of lns in kiai time, maybe you want to reduce your OD a lil bit https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Osu!mania_Ranki ... Guidelines
01:02:533 (62533|1,62720|0) - 01:05:515 (65515|1,65701|0) - missing hi-hat again
01:09:614 (69614|2) - I'm pretty sure this was a double in previous pattern... and yes it was double 00:26:384 (26384|3,26384|2) - not sure why they're different
01:27:968 (87968|3,88061|3) - nothing to emphasis so remove this hammer pls
01:42:409 - sweet jss more lns, OD 6 pls
02:15:623 - try this http://puu.sh/nWJau/37f02cb93d.jpg
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oh cool no lns in last kiai, you can keep your OD 8 I guess :v
03:05:887 (185887|0) - move to 3, double hammer for double snare
[HD]
not bad...
00:26:384 (26384|1) - could be removed idk it feels off with current pattern. just like you did in here 01:09:428 (69428|0,69800|0) -
00:38:682 (38682|2,38869|3) - 01:21:912 (81912|2,82098|3) - 02:26:011 (146011|1,146198|0) - more enjoyable if you add 1/4 note here
00:50:421 (50421|1,50608|1) - break this, kinda weird if you put hammer there
01:54:148 (114148|2,114334|2) - again, misplaced hammer. 01:54:334 (114334|2,114521|3) - try hammering this and feel the difference
[NM EZ]
looks fine.
[General]
Hitsounds are barely audible in all difficulties, recommend to incrase the sample volume by 15~25%
[Nowsmart's MX]
00:15:018 (15018|2) - it's quite possible to add a double chords here since there's a cymbal sound at this part
00:22:285 (22285|3,22471|1) - a missing 1/4 note for hi-hat like in this part 00:18:558 (18558|0,18651|1,18744|2) -
00:29:179 (29179|2,29365|2) - err yeah this part is a lil bit weird because you hammered something that I can't almost hear. It will make sense if you hammered these two 00:29:365 (29365|2,29552|3) - (same guitar sound)
00:31:788 (31788|1,31974|3) - hammer maybe
...
with that ammount of lns in kiai time, maybe you want to reduce your OD a lil bit https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Osu!mania_Ranki ... Guidelines
01:02:533 (62533|1,62720|0) - 01:05:515 (65515|1,65701|0) - missing hi-hat again
01:09:614 (69614|2) - I'm pretty sure this was a double in previous pattern... and yes it was double 00:26:384 (26384|3,26384|2) - not sure why they're different
01:27:968 (87968|3,88061|3) - nothing to emphasis so remove this hammer pls
01:42:409 - sweet jss more lns, OD 6 pls
02:15:623 - try this http://puu.sh/nWJau/37f02cb93d.jpg
...
oh cool no lns in last kiai, you can keep your OD 8 I guess :v
03:05:887 (185887|0) - move to 3, double hammer for double snare
[HD]
not bad...
00:26:384 (26384|1) - could be removed idk it feels off with current pattern. just like you did in here 01:09:428 (69428|0,69800|0) -
00:38:682 (38682|2,38869|3) - 01:21:912 (81912|2,82098|3) - 02:26:011 (146011|1,146198|0) - more enjoyable if you add 1/4 note here
00:50:421 (50421|1,50608|1) - break this, kinda weird if you put hammer there
01:54:148 (114148|2,114334|2) - again, misplaced hammer. 01:54:334 (114334|2,114521|3) - try hammering this and feel the difference
[NM EZ]
looks fine.