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Memme - Starving Days

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Gamu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015?10?26? at 21:09:48

Artist: Memme
Title: Starving Days
Source: O2Jam U
Tags: Drumstep Electronic ParkMemme
BPM: 185
Filesize: 4272kb
Play Time: 02:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another (4.68 stars, 644 notes)
  2. Beginner (1.86 stars, 179 notes)
  3. Extra (5.49 stars, 784 notes)
  4. Hyper (3.41 stars, 439 notes)
  5. Standard (2.19 stars, 278 notes)
Download: Memme - Starving Days
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 18th Ranked map.

https://soundcloud.com/parkmemme/starving-days

Beginner: 100%
Standard: 100%
Hyper: 100%
Another: 100%
Extra: 100%
Skystar
SO SICK
Topic Starter
Gamu

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

SO SICK
:o
Musty
monster
Xilver15
.
Broccoly
very cool
Topic Starter
Gamu
thank you everyone *-*
-Atri-
GD plz...maybe?
Topic Starter
Gamu

KuranteMelodii wrote:

GD plz...maybe?
Sorry I don't accept gd ;w;
I'm going to create all diffs!
-Atri-

Gamu wrote:

Sorry I don't accept gd ;w;
I'm going to create all diffs!
Haha, It's fine, good luck anyways :D
Asahina Momoko
:) :) :) :) :)
Topic Starter
Gamu

Asahina Momoko wrote:

:) :) :) :) :)
:) :) :) :) :)
Nathan
\:D/
Topic Starter
Gamu

sukiNathan wrote:

\:D/
✧*。٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧*。
Aleycks
This map is too fucking good, please push for ranked *-*
Topic Starter
Gamu

Aleycks wrote:

This map is too fucking good, please push for ranked *-*
Thank you!
I'm going to complete all diffs as soon as possible :3
-Shizuru
I know you can do this T^T
Laroete
perfect
Topic Starter
Gamu

Superkian5 wrote:

I know you can do this T^T
Yeah, my work is going well =w=

Zyckser wrote:

perfect
thanks :3
Nathan
yayyyyyy gogo!!! ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
Topic Starter
Gamu

sukiNathan wrote:

yayyyyyy gogo!!! ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
\\\\٩( 'ω' )و ////

Thank you <3
Asphyxia
Hey!

[General]
  1. I'd use OD7 on Hyper instead, OD8 on Another and finally OD 8,5 on Extra, seems to be more fitting if you ask me.
[Extra]
  1. 00:11:836 (1) - This is just my personal preference kicking in here, but this could be less curved if you would want to. That way the slider could be more fitting with 00:12:323 (2) - .
  2. 00:24:809 (1,2) - If you want to, blanket could be a little bit better.
  3. 01:43:620 (6,1) - This is most likely intentional, but these could be perfectly parallel, they're a little off right now.
  4. 01:45:890 (6,7,8,9,10) - In my opinion, it would play a little smoother if the curve of the stream was more round, or curved more to the left instead of almost a straight line. I'd try this instead, but it's just personal preference again, nothing wrong with your current one either.
  5. 02:02:917 (7,8) - Maybe intentional again, but they aren't perfectly parallel either. If you decided to fix the earlier one, you should fix it here too.
[Another]
  1. 02:07:296 (1) - I'd move this to x:300 y:330 because that way the pattern looks more equal visually and much better!
[Beginner]
  1. 00:37:782 (1) - I get your idea behind the slider, but wouldn't it make it more sense if it had 1 repeat less, or even 2? Considering it is the build-up section, I think it'd be better for you to cover as much beats as possible despite the difficulty aimed for newbies.
素晴らしい!あなたは神mapperです。Call me back after few mods~ (•̀ᴗ•́)و
Topic Starter
Gamu

Asphyxia wrote:

Hey!

[General]
  1. I'd use OD7 on Hyper instead, OD8 on Another and finally OD 8,5 on Extra, seems to be more fitting if you ask me. :arrow: I prefer the current difficulty settings (Hyper:OD6, Another:OD7, Extra:OD8) :3 But it might change someday.
[Extra]
  1. 00:11:836 (1) - This is just my personal preference kicking in here, but this could be less curved if you would want to. That way the slider could be more fitting with 00:12:323 (2) - .
  2. 00:24:809 (1,2) - If you want to, blanket could be a little bit better.
  3. 01:43:620 (6,1) - This is most likely intentional, but these could be perfectly parallel, they're a little off right now.
  4. 01:45:890 (6,7,8,9,10) - In my opinion, it would play a little smoother if the curve of the stream was more round, or curved more to the left instead of almost a straight line. I'd try this instead, but it's just personal preference again, nothing wrong with your current one either. :arrow: I think the flow is good now, so it will keep. Placement of the stream is a little hard to me lol
  5. 02:02:917 (7,8) - Maybe intentional again, but they aren't perfectly parallel either. If you decided to fix the earlier one, you should fix it here too.
[Another]
  1. 02:07:296 (1) - I'd move this to x:300 y:330 because that way the pattern looks more equal visually and much better!
[Beginner]
  1. 00:37:782 (1) - I get your idea behind the slider, but wouldn't it make it more sense if it had 1 repeat less, or even 2? Considering it is the build-up section, I think it'd be better for you to cover as much beats as possible despite the difficulty aimed for newbies.
素晴らしい!あなたは神mapperです。Call me back after few mods~ (•̀ᴗ•́)و :arrow: okay ٩(๑'ᴗ'๑)۶
No comments = Fixed

Thank you <33
Sonnyc
[Beginner]
  1. 00:09:728 - Weird rhythm selection here. I believe you can found a way to map this out.
  2. 01:02:593 (3) - Another weird rhythm selection. Making 01:02:755 clickable insteaed the current spot feels more natural.
  3. 01:44:106 (3) - Similar as above. Making 01:44:269 clickable instead the current spot will work more natural.
  4. 01:49:133 (4) - This sharp slider didn't felt cool enough compared to your overall slider usage.
[Standard]
  1. 00:29:998 (1,3) - Maybe a symmetry in shape would worked more cool?
  2. 01:16:052 (5) - Starting 1/2 earlier would fit the song better than now.
  3. 00:42:647 (4) - 01:34:539 (4,1) - Inconsistent rhythm setting. Personally I prefer the later, since it gives an emphasize by ending at 01:34:539 and constructs a lower density, making a difference before the kiai start. Oh, also you can start the kiai with a new combo this way.
[Hyper]
  1. 02:09:728 (1,3) - Not a cool slider overlap if you ask me. I recommend you to at least make the tail of (3) have a higher visibility than the current status. What you've done at 01:59:512 (1,3) will be enough.
[Another]
  1. 01:02:593 (2) - Consider moving 1 grid right to make the follow point invisible, for a higher intuitive readability.
[Extra]
  1. 01:21:242 (5,6,7,8) - Personally this spacing felt a little random. Mind adding an NC for (5) and (7) respectfully for random leniency?
  2. 01:36:485 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - In my personal feeling, (5,6,7) having a larger spacing than (2,3,4) would be more logical to emphasize the whistle sounds better.
  3. 01:38:431 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - Similar opinion here.
  4. 01:41:350 (12) - This is similar with the following, 01:36:160 (12) - 01:46:539 (12) - 01:51:728 (12) - but unlike these, since this was appearing after no 1/4 rhythm before, it only makes me feel that you are not following the major beat you were following in the stream. Double true a beat exists in 01:41:350, but I highly doubt if it's something worth mapping even by inserting a big jump. Btw, I'd personally suggest removing all those (12)s to make your rhythm selection more clear ;w;
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