>_<

做得不錯~
nice song nice map~

無意中翻到這首 那就來隨便mod下<3

All

tags里寫上其他mapper的ID ( 按F4 )

Hard

00:06:481 (2) - 沒放準(沒完全移到白線上)
00:16:538 (3) - 移到左邊紅線
00:16:884 - add a note
00:17:057 - ^
00:17:232 (4) - 如果以上改了的話 這個就new combo
00:22:261 (1) - 從右邊的大白線上開始 (空掉的部份插入點note
00:27:290 (5,11) - new combo
00:56:075 (1) - 結束在左邊的大白線上 (空掉的部份用2組3連? 00:57:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
01:15:151 (5,6,7) - 間距?
01:22:086 (1) - 從右邊的大白線上開始 結束在01:23:647

Normal

00:06:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 間距!!!
00:27:290 (5,11) - new combo
00:43:590 (1) - 結束在左邊大白線上(要不然和後面一個note太近了 對於normal
00:56:076 (1) - 結束在00:57:982(之前hard也可以這樣)
01:09:948 (11) - new combo
01:13:070 (17,1) - 交換new combo
01:22:433 (1) - 結束在01:23:647

其他幾個難度 晚點來看 (改好后PM我也行

General~
-There are alot of combo inconsistency in every difficuilty except for TerisKey's Hard that need to be looked on, I didn't mention it all but I think that you see a pattern here =P.
-Add TerisKey to the tags.
-Add (TV Size) to the title.

Easy~
00:24:688 (6) - New combo?
00:27:289 (4) - New combo?
00:29:716 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:30:063 (2) - New combo?
00:42:029 (4) - Extend it by 1/2 tick
00:46:884 (3) - New combo?
00:54:688 (7) - New combo?
00:58:849 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:09:774 (1) - New combo?

Normal~
00:11:335 (8) - New combo?
00:13:937 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:14:457 (6) - New combo?
00:16:190 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:16:884 (3) - New combo?
00:20:005 (7) - New combo?
00:27:290 (5) - New combo?
00:30:064 (7) - New combo?
00:38:388 (7) - New combo?
00:47:057 (5) - New combo?
01:01:624 (7) - New combo?
01:04:052 (5) - New combo?
01:04:745 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:06:826 (6) - New combo?
01:09:948 (7) - New combo?

Hard~
00:11:683 (5) - New combo?
00:13:937 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:14:457 (3) - New combo?
00:17:232 (4) - New combo?
00:27:290 (5) - New combo?
00:30:064 (7) - New combo?
00:38:388 (9) - New combo?
00:51:914 (6) - New combo?

Insane~
00:27:288 (12) - New combo? Having a 21 combo is way too long =P
00:31:277 (7) - New combo?
00:33:705 (18) - New combo?
00:35:612 (23) - New combo?
00:38:040 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:38:387 (3) - New combo?
00:41:162 (16) - New combo?
00:50:005 (19) - New combo?
00:51:913 (1) - New combo?
00:54:688 (10) - New combo?
01:01:451 (10) - New combo?
01:21:045 (1,1,1,1) - Why all the new combos?

TerisKey's Hard~
00:32:491 (1) - Unrankable spinner
00:34:919 (1) - Unrankable spinner
00:37:693 (11,12) - Why the sudden spacing change? Fix?
00:42:029 (4) - New combo?
00:43:589 (1) - Unrankable spinner
00:57:982 (3,4) - New combo or fix the spacing?
01:12:375 (1) - Unrankable spinner

Give me a PM if you decide to fix this and I'll come back.

thanks ， Nekoo、 Honey

顶图 给星~

中间拿点有一段感觉用单独的notes不妥~

[Easy]
01:01:277 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏违和感。。想办法改

[Normal]
01:03:706 (10) - 改2分1拍（没说错0.0?）重叠9
01:08:907 (5) - 这滑条设半速（始点：add, 0.5x, use current time, ok 终点：next, add, prev, use current time, ok
01:09:601 (6) - 删掉
01:09:948 (7) - 新组
01:10:641 (1) - 新组

[Hard]
00:56:075 (1) - 左退2拍
00:58:156 (4,5,6) - 感觉不合适，把4删掉或改成回滚放3旁边或……

[Insane]
00:24:513 (1) - 我建议你重新考虑这之后的所有节奏编排

[TerisKey's Hard]
难度名改TerisKey's Insane

chocolate thanks for star

sato thank you , 最后一句在吐槽吗 >A</

先加星

OFFEST=560，试试
绿线加在note的前面，一般来说加在前面的红线或白线上（在后面也一样），或者在蓝线上


Easy

E难度最好间距不要有变化。。我提出一些不太合理的，你看看要不要改

[00:11:335] (1,2) 这里是不是间距近了
[00:25:901] 向右一格，向下一格
[00:29:716] (3,4) 远了
[00:39:081] (1,2) 这两个弄平行
[00:47:751] (1,2,3,4,5,6) 间距不对，而且不美观
[00;53:127] 向右一格
[01:07:520] (1,2) 让他们平行

Normal

[00:11;355] new combo？
[00:29:023] (4,5) 间距太近
[00:38:387] new combo (还有这两个间距太近了)
[00:59:890] (3,4) 这两个向右一格

Hard

[00:51:046] 向下两格？
[01:04:399] 这里new combo
[01:05:092] 这里不要new combo
[01:07:520] new combo?
[01:09:254] 这里不nc
[01:09:984] 这里new combo
[01:11:682] 不new combo
[01:12:029] nc

Insane

not bad

TerisKey's Difficulty

[00:44:803] 这里会不知道往哪里转，加个提示吧

~

thanks lks OFFEST还是觉得584比较有感觉？ XD

[General]:

1. Title: Honjitsu, Mankai Watashi iro! (TV Size) 也就是一个逗号、一个感叹号和括号之前的空格.
2. 注意更改之后不要保存直接上传 然后再打开其他难度逐个更改上传（同样不要保存）

[Easy]:

1. 实话说不够Easy... 比如intro的间距就过大了
2. 01:19:485 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这段按照严格spacing来
3. 01:22:433 (1) - 加finish

[Normal]:

1. 00:39:082 (2,3) - spacing
2. 01:04:052 (1) - 这个slider不如换一个note 时间上位置是slider首尾夹着的红线
3. 01:22:433 (1) - 01:23:647结束 加finish

[Hard]:

1. Slider Velocity太低了...建议增加到至少1.4然后重新校正slider长度以及note间距（差不多就是重新map一次了）
2. 01:22:433 (1) - 加finish

[TerisKey's Difficulty]:

1. 00:33:531 (1,2,3) - 几乎看不到approching circle 看看能不能在前面的段落里加个newcombo 然后这里就是粉色了会好一点
2. 01:13:242 (1) - 呃 同样的问题
3. 01:22:433 (1) - 加finish

把Easy改简单点 可以把circle改大点

Hard的slider速度调整下 最终难度不改是因为慢速slider在非固定spacing（特别是有跳）上难度比告诉难

其实自己多打几遍依你的Rank已经可以看出来哪里不太舒服了 :D

SAMSUNG!

飘~=w=

^ ^我喜欢这个

thanks for star 谢谢你喜欢我的map

•Overall•
Resnap All Notes on all diffs.

•TerisKey's insane•
00:31:277 (2) - 2 grids down? (lv3)
00:34:052 (5) - 1 grid left?
00:34:745 (7) - 2 grids right?
01:00:930 (9) - New combo and 1 grid up and 2 right?
01:12:029 (1) - Eeh? Better if you switch it with some notes and sliders.

•Hard•
00:16:363 (3) - Add a clap on the end of this slider.
00:16:884 (4) - Add a clap.
00:22:259 (4,5) - ^
00:45:670 (1) - 4 grids left?
00:54:688 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make those this way? ---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11763
00:57:808 (1,2) - Pleace these in the grid-centre?
01:03:878 (?) - Add a circle with clap?
01:04:052 (?) - ^

•Normal•
00:08:907 (5) - New combo.
00:21:394 (5) - Prolong this slider to the following red tick?
00:24:515 (1) - This following note after the spinner is too far from the centre for being a normal diff.
00:41:162 (1,2) - 1 grid up?
00:45:670 (1,2) - A normal diff with jumps? Blergh.
01:19:139 (1,2,3) - Wrong spacing.

•Easy•
I think that in the final part of this diff there are many jumps that can be avoided, especially for the easy diffs.
00:08:907 (4) - New combo.
00:11:682 (4) - ^
00:14:456 (4) - ^
00:22:607 (1) - I think this spinner is too quick for a Easy diff. Prolong it to [00:24:167]?
00:24:514 (1) - If you follow ↑ passage I think you should move this slider closer to the grid-centre.
00:24:514 (Timing Section) - Why this diff, on the contrary of the other ones, has this timing section with Normal sound? I think it should be Soft like the other diffs.
00:49:486 (5) - New combo
00:51:913 (1) - ^
01:01:624 (3) - ^
01:04:399 (3) - ^
01:07:173 (3) - ^
01:09:948 (3) - ^
01:11:162 (2) - 2 grids up?
01:12:722 (3) - New combo.
01:13:936 (4) - 2 grids up?
01:20:005 (3) - Prolong this slider to the following white tick.
01:21:046 (4) - Move this slider on the previous white tick.

Cool map~
Pretty song~
Star~

thanks for mod~

观光团特地对你实行惨无人道的围观
星~

[General]

- Add tags [Hayate no Gotoku] [Anime]

[Easy]

00:29:023 (2) - remove whistle

[Normal]

Good.

[Hard]

01:19:138 (5) - add finish end (01:19:485 - )
01:20:699 (2) - add whistle

[TerisKey's insane]

01:19:485 (3) - add fnish


Fun map~

+Star

(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ~☆

Nice job, love this song

Wish I had gotten around to finishing my version now D:

Normal:
00:10:294 (3,1,2) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11958
00:12:375 (3,4) - Spacing.
Hmm.. actually you should shorten the spacing from 00:10:294 (3) to 00:15:844 (5) - , it is a bit far from behind.

And..some sort of complain about that your map doesn't have custom comboburst :/

谢谢 comboburst done.

<Easy>
00:24:861 (1,2,1,2) - they don`t sound really sweet for my ears i sugeest you can use pattern like the picyures
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11984 yours
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11985 example one
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11986 example two
00:38:387 (1,2,3) - claps don`t sound really good here
00:46:711 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - use 50~60% volume for this part
00:54:688 (1,2,3,4) - i suggest use normal hitsounds with 65% -->75% -->80%
00:58:849 (1) - making it end on white tick sounds better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11987
01:01:624 (1) - ^
01:09:948 (1) - ^
01:12:722 (1) - ^

<Normal>
01:22:433 (1) - end on 01:23:64

<Hard>
00:29:370 (5) - remove this clap

About Normal and Hard`s Hitsounds
If you listen to the music carefully,you can find that BGM claps are on 2 4 6 8..... divisors
Like the picture

Usually. we add claps on those beats
In your case, you pick soft-whistle as clap in Normal and hard
Try to add soft-whistles on 2 4 6.... beats

<Insane>
01:18:271 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - maybe you can make this oart louder XD

the mapset is getting bette, good job

done. 谢谢老师的mod

<Easy>
00:38:387 (1,2,3) - 這幾個clap不打算移掉嗎??

<Normal>
00:38:388 (1) - 補上whistle

hard跟normal的音量可以調整成一樣, 80%~85%滿理想的 100%在前半段有點太大聲

再次感谢

[Easy]

Remove all unused green lines sections.

00:27:636 (5) - New combo.
00:38:387 (1,2,3) - Like Alace said, this claps sounds weird. Remove them.
01:19:138 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Normal]

00:33:532 (5) - New combo.
00:49:485 (8) - ^
01:10:641 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:19:139 (1) - ^

[Hard]

00:18:618 (5) - New combo.
00:37:867 (7) - Place it correctly under 00:37:347 (6).
01:19:138 (5) - Why starting from here the volume is so low? Increase it a bit.

[TerisKey's insane]

Capitalize "insane" to "Insane".

00:17:404 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:00:930 (9) - New combo due to jump.
01:20:005 (1) - Same as Hard. Volume is too low, increase it a bit.

Not bad for a first map.

thanks done.

Looks better now ^_^

Bubbled~

thanks again ><

Reference for my map's fan~ (?)

P.S: This diff is not for submit so everybody you can ignore this diff except Suzuka Asahina~ lol


Download: Itou Shizuka - Honjitsu, Mankai Watashi iro! (TV Size) (Suzuka Asahina) [Ver.Reference].osu

泡泡了麽 那算了...

Ranked.

thanks all

WoW 明天（今天）的考试要好好加油哦 :3