Ikeda Ayako - Prism (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
KoromoAmae
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, June 05, 2010 at 12:39:38 PM

Artist: Ikeda Ayako
Title: Prism (TV Size)
Source: Dennou Coil
Tags: MADHOUSE
BPM: 110
Filesize: 7836kb
Play Time: 01:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Fumie (3.24 stars, 101 notes)
  2. Isako (4.85 stars, 189 notes)
  3. Kyoko (1.81 stars, 86 notes)


Download: Ikeda Ayako - Prism (TV Size)
Download: Ikeda Ayako - Prism (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This is my first beatmap.

Most recent update: added a few hitsounds on easy.
Sakura
Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, but you dont have to
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion
[General]
Offset = 10499
64 BR mp3 is too low quality, you need at least 128 BR mp3
Your map set needs an [Easy] that is 3 star or less
Use Lv 3 grid

[Normal]
Preview point is not set
CircleSize +1 (that means bigger), Hp Drain rate -3, OD-2
00:01:227 (1,2) - Theese notes are really awkward right here, dont think there's a reason to map this small section specially with only 2 notes.
00:19:499 (3,4) - - Spacing
00:20:590 (4,5) - Spacing
00:22:772 (1,2,3) - Spacing
00:27:409 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing
00:36:136 (2) - Shorten this slider to: 00:36:680 and fill the rest with notes
00:39:954 (1) - Remove this note (dont forget to set 2 to new combo after)
00:44:318 (1) - This slider looks kind of ugly
00:48:954 (8) - Out of bounds
01:02:863 (3,4) - Spacing
01:06:136 (2,3) - Spacing
01:07:772 (7,8) - Spacing
01:12:136 (2,3) - Spacing

[Hard]
Preview point is not set
00:27:409 (1,2) - Spacing
00:53:590 (1,2) - Spacing
00:53:795 (3) - Not snapped.
00:56:590 (3,4) - Spacing
01:03:409 (9,10) - Spacing
01:08:590 (11) - New combo
01:15:681 (3,4) - Spacing
01:18:613 (1,3) - Not snapped
Leorda
Hi

[General]
1) Tags?
2) I suggest you to use Grid Level 3 to make map easier

[File]
1) Your bg (dennou-coil) need to resize to 800x600 or 640x480 OR find the better bg (current 500x496)
2) Delete the .osb and full submit

[Timing]
The BPM is fine, but offset is wrong. Set the Offset to 9.954

[Easy]
Check AIMod (Ctrl+Shift+A), fix the spacing and make sure the distance snap is on
00:31:772 (2) - Ugly slider, make it curve?
00:54:681 (3) - New combo, since the combo is too long for easy diff


[Normal]
Check AIMod (Ctrl+Shift+A), fix the spacing and make sure the distance snap is on
00:18:681 (2) - New combo
00:47:863 (6) - Make symetric?
01:10:772 (1) - Make curve?

[Hard]
Check AIMod (Ctrl+Shift+A), fix the spacing and make sure the distance snap is on

Fix this and Sakura's Mod, and I recheck it
Nice song
STAR
Arusha Shuna
Request Accepted

Easy
inconsistent mapping, try to use level3 grid (most precise and then snap the notes)
01:16:227 (1) - spinner ends in 01:18:681 it sounds better IMO
Normal
inconsistent mapping, try to use level3 grid (most precise and then snap the notes)
00:22:772 (1) - even though its new combo, it looks ugly with the spacing, make it further from the previous note
00:47:863 (6) - new combo
00:57:136 (4) - spacing issue
01:05:863 (1,2,3) - ^
Hard
00:30:409 (5) - spacing issue
00:53:999 (5,6,7,8,9) - fast notes with this spacing? no, fix this
01:00:954 (1) - spinner end in the next blue tick, sounds better IMO
01:16:227 (1) - spinner ends in the previous blue tick
01:18:613 (1,2,3) - ...ugly, just delete (1,3)

not bad, but lets face it...
star anyways...
Topic Starter
KoromoAmae
I took care of Sakura's advice a few days ago but I PMed instead of posting about it since I wasn't sure what to do.
Leorda and Arusha Shuna's mods are also addressed at this time. I thought I could handle spacing without using the automatic spacing tool, but maybe not for my first time. The AIMod is only pointing out the note snapped to 1/8th on hard(I have it set to 1/4th because only that single note is on 1/8th timeline), and the 4-corners combo, so I believe all spacing issues have been fixed.

Thank you for modding this, it's coming together much more nicely.

Edit: I'm not sure what to put in the Tags for this.

Another edit: Maybe I should keep the background image for people who choose to play without video? I'll put it back in the next upload.
Leorda
Recheck time~

[Easy]
00:12:135 (5) - Move 1 grid right?
00:18:681 (4) - Remove new combo?
01:14:044 (6,7) - Spacing error
01:16:363 (1) - Move backward to red tick and extend?

[Normal]
00:41:317 (4) - Move 1 grid down?
01:02:863 (3,1) - Too far

[Hard]
Fine~

Nice job
Topic Starter
KoromoAmae

Leorda wrote:

Recheck time~

[Easy]
00:12:135 (5) - Move 1 grid right? - fixed
00:18:681 (4) - Remove new combo? - put combo back in, dunno why I removed it in the first place
01:14:044 (6,7) - Spacing error - fixed
01:16:363 (1) - Move backward to red tick and extend? - fixed

[Normal]
00:41:317 (4) - Move 1 grid down? - fixed
01:02:863 (3,1) - Too far - intentional jump, that's why I put a new combo here at Sakura's advice. originally it was part of the same combo.

[Hard]
Fine~

Nice job
Thanks for the recheck. I put the background back in, but it's not resizable to 640x480 or any other 4:3 scale because its base resolution doesn't match up with that (it's almost 1:1). Irfanview won't even let me do it if I try. Tags are in and difficulty names are changed to reflect characters from the show and their relative strength.
Cyril Scarlet
Brown : just my suggestion

Overall

 ● Not need to write Ikeda Ayako in Tag. it's already write on Title :3
 ● you don't set combo colors ? :3


kyoko

 00:55:499 (3) - Move down 1 Grid Lv3. ?



Isako

 00:12:681 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Move up 1 Grid Lv3.
 00:53:590 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - It's okay but it's hard to see rhythm ^^"



ヾ(≧∇≦*)
Topic Starter
KoromoAmae

S i R i R u wrote:

Brown : just my suggestion

Overall

 ● Not need to write Ikeda Ayako in Tag. it's already write on Title :3 - I still don't know what to put for tags on this song, but I removed Ikeda Ayano from it.
 ● you don't set combo colors ? :3 - I've been looking for this option and I couldn't find it until I did a blanket forum search just now. The FAQ doesn't even mention it, but I found it and switched some colors up to make it look nicer. I hated that silver default anyway.


kyoko

 00:55:499 (3) - Move down 1 Grid Lv3. ? - the distance snap wouldn't let me, so I moved the rest of the line and everything subsequently aligned to it up 1 grid instead.



Isako

 00:12:681 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Move up 1 Grid Lv3. - done
 00:53:590 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - It's okay but it's hard to see rhythm ^^"
- adjusted so the 32nd notes will stand out more. I really like the drum beat here so I want to make sure people notice it.


ヾ(≧∇≦*)
Thanks for posting this, I had completely forgotten to look up how to change combo colors until I saw that. I think the 32nd notes will be much easier to recognize now also.
wmfchris
(Oh I see your avatar from ISML XDDDDDD)

[Isako]
0:36:953 (6) suggestion: down 1 grid?
0:40:499 (4,5) up 1 grid?
0:53:726 (2,3,4) spacing + 1 grid
0:55:499 (1) right 1 grid?
1:10:635 (1) spacing

[Fumie] Regard this as normal, increase OA,HP drain rate?
1:05:044 (2,3) Suggestion: take away grid snap and move them left 1 bit so that (1,2,3) are on a stright line?

Star~
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