1. Machi overdose (4.97 stars, 1257 notes)
2. Machi Special (5.72 stars, 1252 notes)

Ninja Bunny wrote:

お、いいですね！！quick mod

Overall Difficulty: 7
HP drain rate: 7
は　どうでしょうか？

01:09:242 (7) - http://puu.sh/hKZG3.jpg

giantzarz wrote:

Hi~ from your M4M queue
Just wanna mod your map first.

[General]
AR 9.4 Too high 9 is enough chang to 9.3
OD and HP Too high maybe 7 is enough will remain.
A lot of overmapping.(Too much spaced objects) regarding this, if the note spacing is not allow, i will change the overall spacing.
Sudden 1/8 some slider fix it to 1/4
Too Difficult for 140 bpm i dont know how to comment this...sorry

[Machi Special]
00:17:171 (1) - This may be unreadable is readable, i will remain
00:20:171 (4,5,6,7) - These stream doesn't look good - this stream is still fine. and at 00:20:492 (7,1) - It's way too jumpy for stream - is very normal small jump, is ok
00:24:563 (7,8) - Place this properly actually place it in same place
00:27:992 (11,12) - ^. actually place it in same place
00:34:742 (3) - Player maybe confused so Ctrl + G - it place it with flow.
00:55:313 (2,3,1) - Not good for triplet i will try to remain
00:57:028 (5) - Slider end must be at 00:57:242
01:01:313 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Feel like it's too big space for stream
01:02:278 (1) - This must be placed at 01:02:242
01:04:528 (1,2) - Note at 01:04:956 (3) - maybe unreadable because of overlap
01:04:956 (3,5,6,7) - Move them together a little bit
01:08:385 (2,3,4) - ^
01:13:313 (2,3,4) - ^
01:15:563 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:16:956 (5) - No need for this 1/8 reversing slider, Just 1/2 reversing slider is enough.
01:22:528 (2,3,4) - Move them together a little bit
01:23:385 (1) - Same issue as 01:16:956 (5)
01:28:742 (4,5,6) - Too much spacing
01:29:385 (2,3,4) - ^
01:30:671 (3) - Same issue as 01:16:956 (5)
01:32:385 (6) - ^
01:33:671 (2,3) - Need more spacing because of 1/2 gap
01:34:528 (2,3) - ^
01:38:170 (2,3,4) - Too much spacing
01:39:885 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:41:385 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:43:099 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:49:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Need a consistent spacing
01:50:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too much spacing
01:52:742 (1,2,3) - ^
01:55:313 (5,6,7) - ^
01:56:171 (3,4,5,2,3,4) - ^
02:00:456 (5) - Ctrl + G
02:01:528 - 02:08:813 - Not consistent spacing
02:09:885 (3,4,5) - Too much spacing
02:12:456 (4,5) - Need more spacing
02:16:742 (2,3,4,6) - So untidy
02:21:242 (1,2,3,4,5) - Overlap cause unreability
02:23:706 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Too much spacing
02:24:671 (1,2,3) - Too big jump, not for soft rhythm
02:27:349 (8,9,10,11) - Too much spacing
02:27:885 (1,2,3) - ^
02:30:456 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:33:028 (13) - Slider must end at 02:33:242
02:33:885 (3) - No need
02:34:742 (6,7,8) - Too much spacing
02:38:278 (2) - ^ ,Consider overlap with 02:38:385 (3)
02:41:171 (4,5,6) - ^
02:44:171 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:47:599 (7,8,9) - ^
02:48:671 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:51:456 (1,2) - ^
02:51:778 (3,4) - ^
02:52:099 (7) - NC
02:54:242 (4,5,6) - Too much spacing
02:56:813 (10,11) - ^
02:58:742 (8,9,10) - ^
03:04:956 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - ^
03:15:028 (12,13,14) - ^
03:17:385 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
03:19:099 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
03:19:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
03:26:171 (11,12) - ^
03:53:171 - Need a note
03:54:671 (4) - Too fast
03:56:331 (1,3,4) - ^
04:25:099 (2,3,4) - Too much spacing
04:25:956 (1) - No need
04:30:242 (3,4,5) - Too much spacing
04:31:313 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1) - ^
04:32:170 (16,17,18,1) - Consider replacing with slider
04:33:242 (5,6) - Too much spacing
04:33:885 (1,2,3) - ^
04:34:956 (7,8) - ^
04:37:313 (7,8,9) - ^
04:39:027 (15,16,17) - ^
04:41:600 (9,10,11) - ^
04:43:956 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
04:45:563 (13,14,15,16,17,1) - ^
04:54:670 (10,11,12,13,14) - ^
04:56:171 (17) - NC here
04:56:385 (1) - No NC
05:00:242 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too much spacing
05:06:456 (14,15,16) - ^
05:06:456 (14,15,16,14,15,16,17) - ^
05:11:385 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
05:13:153 (14,15,16,17) - Unreadable fix
05:14:385 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Too much spacing fix a lltle bit spacing

Spacing = HW

Good Luck!

[-Deemo-] wrote:

From my modding queue:

[General]
Kind of absurd to have a 140 bpm song be 5.9~ stars don't you think? may be yes, but i dont think so. BPM is not a measure to limit the difficulty
Overall I think this should be a relatively easy song, but the patterns you have put and spacing makes it an Extra. Overmapping regarding this, i will see for a while, if cant allow i will change overall spacing. remove some note it isnt need.

[Machi Special]
00:11:813 (3) - Doesn't follow anything. Maybe change it to start at 00:12:028, it will end on the four, you can get rid of that fix slider start at 00:12:028
00:12:885 (5) - NC? Put an inherited point here to make the volume louder to go along with the music fix
00:15:028 (3,4,5) - Might consider changing pattern here i cant get the point..so, i will keep this pattern.if have any reason or something, i wiil more easy to figure out wat pattern i have to use..
00:16:528 (1) - NC get rid of NC at 00:17:171 (1) - fix
00:17:171 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Change up the pattern here fix a bit pattern, for the rest i will remain.
00:19:528 (1,2,3) - Maybe not have this straight? fix to triangle.
It's really symmetrical once the vocals start, consider changing up the patterns to not be like each other (For example 00:23:385 (4,5,6,7,8) - is symmetrical) not going to change the pattern, i would like to keep DS around 1.3 at the beginning
00:20:171 (4,5,6) - 00:20:813 (1,2,3) - Reduce DS remain, due DS 1.3, fix for even.
00:24:242 (6,7,8) - For these patterns, I suggest keeping it consistent, either pick this style (I wouldn't recommend) or the other style like 00:37:956 (4,5,6) - but if you do the latter, reduce the DS and make is touch fix it to consistent, DS i wil not change, keep it around 1.3
00:33:028 (7,8,9) - Reduce DS remain for 1.3
00:33:885 (11,12,1) - Reduce DS so this flows more smoothly, at least have them touch at an un-awkward angle try to keep DS 1.3, so i will remain.
00:37:956 (4,5,6) - ^ ^
00:41:385 (4,5,6) - ^ ^, fix for even the DS
00:43:635 (7,8) - Remove, doesn't follow vocals may be can follow the cymbals?
00:43:956 (9) - If you remove ^, NC
00:46:313 (4,5,6) - 00:46:956 (2,3,4) - Reduce DS remain DS 1.3
00:47:599 (2,3,4) - Don't do this, doesn't flow very well may be. but i would like to accent the 00:48:028 (1,2)
00:55:313 (2,3,1) - ^ fix
00:57:028 (5) - Reduce length by one tick fix
00:59:171 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Extremely symmetrical well, for only once
01:01:313 (3,4,5) - 01:01:742 (1,2,3,4) - Confusing to read, reduce DS fix DS to 1.3
01:04:742 (2) - Get rid of this, make 01:04:528 (1) - one tick longer fix
01:05:385 (5,6,7) - Reduce DS to touch fix to DS 1.3
01:08:171 (1,2,3) - Reduce DS fix to DS 1.3
01:13:313 (2,3,4) - Reduce DS fix
01:15:563 (1,2,3,4) - Change remain
01:22:528 (2,3,4) - Reduce DS keep DS around 1.24~1.26
01:23:813 (2,3,4,5) - Extremely symmetrical .....remain..
01:28:742 (4,5,6) - 01:29:385 (2,3,4) - Reduce DS fix it DS to even
01:38:170 (2,3,4) - Reduce DS remain
01:39:885 (4,5,6) - Change it remain
01:41:385 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:40:849 (7,8) - Reduce DS remain, 01:41:385 (1,2,3,4,5) this was changed for follow the slider speed
01:43:099 (3,4,5,6,7) - Very unexpected change from the velocity going from x.5 to x1.75 for takiing out the sound speed.
01:50:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Improve the spacing fix it even
01:52:742 (1,2,3) - Reduce DS remain to 1.4 seem previous is 1.45.
01:55:313 (5,6,7) - ^ keep DS 1.4
01:56:171 (3,4,5) - ^ remain ^
01:56:813 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
02:21:242 (1,2,3) - Hard to read, clumped up and the four can be pressed by mistake due to note positioning fix
02:23:706 (5,6,7,8) - Unplayable, consecutive notes with in-consecutive spacing remain, playable, a little bit accent for drum
02:24:242 (1,2,3) - Reduce DS remain
02:27:349 (11,12,13,14) - ^ fix except last note
02:27:885 (1,2,3) - ^ fix it even
02:30:456 (1,2,3) - ^ reduce to DS 1.45
02:31:313 (6,7,8) - ^ ^
02:34:742 (6,7,8) - ^ ^
02:44:171 (2,3,4,5) - ^ improve for 2,3,4 ^
02:47:599 (7,8,9) - ^ ^
02:49:313 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
02:50:599 (1) - NC fix

Mkay I'll stop there, basically you need to change the spacing for most of the triplets, I get that you're trying to make it a hard song, but in the end you're just over-mapping in order to add on those extra stars. I'm pretty sure at most, this should be like a 4-5 star song and no greater. may be you are right but, im not mapping in order to add those star.

UltraRik wrote:

Hello from my queue! ^^

Machi Special

In General
I'd prefer it if you lowered CS, maybe to 4 - i will remain 4.5
Imo, OD should be equal or lower than HP. Just a prefrence tho. is ok, OD and HP will not change for now.
Try to avoid robotic movements, such as staright up/down triples. i will think more, and see wait i can change
Also placing beats in a square-like fashion. i will try ><
Feels really odd. ...um...i dont know how to comment this...ーー||

Modding
00:08:171 (2) - Move up a bit - i fix the slider path, move up a bit.
00:13:528 (3) - Further from 00:13:099 (2) - means?
00:17:813 (6) - Move left, and a tiny bit down - remain, want to place it in to same line with nexe note
00:21:671 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - A bit more spacing and rotate in opposite direction? - 00:22:099 (1,2) - changed to opposite direction, make it more simple from beginning
00:24:563 - There is no beat here. No need to place beats on empty blue ticks. - fix
00:27:242 (9) - Reposition and change direction - remain for next flow
00:27:992 - This one works, but also no beat here - fix
00:29:813 (7) - Feels unnatural to pause movement here - consistent with previous pattern, so i pause it there.
00:32:171 (4) - Create a square with previous jumps?It would work here imo - fix
00:35:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Add jump patterns? Circular spaced clicks feel weird in general. - it still feel ok. remain
00:39:670 (5,6) - Direct jumps upwards - it feel weird..remain.
00:40:099 (1) - Unnatural movement pause - same as previous you mentioned, it is following the vocal
00:46:313 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - These look and feel weird, randomize placements a bit to implement some flow here? - fix it to make a bit curve.
00:57:671 (1,2,3,1) - This jumps need way more spacing the spacing is same as next pattern, i would keep it even
01:01:313 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - I actually like this lol
01:03:028 (3,4,5) - This has no flow whatsoever, add some patterns - fix, bend a little
01:03:885 (7) - Further from 6 nothing i need to add more spacing...so i remain.
01:04:956 (2) - Unnatural movement pause - fix to slider, and change some placement.
01:18:671 (6,7) - Space theese and make them face each other? - it will feel weird,not going to make hard in the first chorus, remain
01:19:528 (1,2) - The flow would go in the opposite direction - fix 01:19:956 (2) - move to the slider place.
01:23:813 (7,8,9,10) - A square doesn't work here imo - follow the keyboard sound, do a jump to contrast the sound
02:09:242 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I really like this
02:12:242 (3) - Closer to slider 1 - fix and change some pattern
02:39:885 (7) - You need only 3 slider points to make this slider look like that. - fix
02:52:028 (6,1) - Don't curve to the right here, keep placing towards up-right corner - the flow may bad, remain.
03:02:385 (10) - You need only 3 slider points to make a slider look like that. - fix
03:03:671 (3) - This looks odd - main purpose is want the cursor turn a small circle here..
03:04:956 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - The stream curves way too hard. I suggest this - remain, the way i put already fixed when i test
03:27:885 (2,3,4,5,6) - Feels weird - fix
03:50:171 (18,19) - 18 down, 19 up - will bad flow with next note, remain
04:10:313 - Ignoring vocals - following Drum
04:56:385 (3) - weird - is ok, i think it didnt make the flow bad at it..

I hope this helped,
Good luck! ^^

KuroSenpai112 wrote:

Hi there from queue! Sorry for the wait!

Note: I'm not good at modding expert maps, but I'll try my best >.< I will not mention spacing since other modders may have already did. I don't want to repeat everything they say.

[Machi Special]
01:17:599 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't know if this is supposed to be a star, but if is its, the shape can be improved. - is a star but not going to make it all even.
01:26:385 (3) - blanket can be improved - fix
02:27:456 (12,13,14) - can be hard to read - is ok
03:51:242 to 04:04:956 should be a break. This is a pretty long map after all. is a very simple part, almost is a break
04:28:956 (12) - blanket can be improved means the shape?
For the triplets throughout the map you should probably change the spacing and how it's laid out. It could be pretty difficult to hit for some of them.remain, i know is pretty difficult to hit them,i will put it with the way of flow, to make it more comfortable as i can><

Sorry if this seems little for a mod, but previous modders have already mentioned things about flow and such

Good luck!

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Hi! From my queue! I'm sorry for modding your map so late, but I was trying to pass the semester. - is fine.

General

Overall its a pretty nice map. So congratulations! :3/ Here I'm gonna point at some thing that you should keep in mind while you're mapping. - thanks!

1. Your audio bitrate exceeds the limit allowed. Please use this mp3. file and replace it for the old you have to fix this problem. - fix
2. 01:16:956 (5,6) Fix this timeline problem before the modding please.

- good catch! Fix

Machi Special

First at all, what a nice song you have mapped! (´・ω・)っ由 Here you deserve my star. But please, Don't give up at this project. \(o.o)/ i wont give up..thanks><

File Organization

1. First, what you worte in source shouldn't be the same of the tags Here I privde a minor list of what should be in tags.
   ハナヤマタ, Yosakoi Song Series, beat, intrumental

- fix

Spacing

1. 00:12:885 (1,2) Why do you set this jump knowing thta the SV has decreased? Please, put them closer to each other. the drum here have strong beat, so i set it to jump.
2. 00:32:385 (5) Put this slider exactly in the place of this circle 00:31:956 (3) to make a symmetric pattern. remain, i set a jump to accent the vocal of "wo", if i put at the 00:31:956 - it will loss it effect.
3. 00:52:099 (3) ^ 00:51:671 (1) - Fix
4. 03:04:956 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) Reduce the DX of this part.

- DS will not change for now.

New Combos

1. 00:17:813 (6) - Fix
2. 00:29:813 (7) - remain for same part
3. 00:26:385 (7) - ^
4. 00:29:813 (7) - ^
5. 00:33:028 (7) - Fix
6. 00:43:313 (6) - remain for same part
7. 01:23:385 (6) - Fix
8. 02:10:099 (5) - remain for same part, may be it will change due for reading
9. 02:26:385 (8) - Fix
10. 02:31:528 (8) - Fix
11. 02:46:956 (6) - Fix

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Yo, M4M from my modding Q~
Here's my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/322414
Mod whichever diff you want (and can mod well)

Nice song \(^ ^)/
Let's start~

[Machi Special]

1. Since you only have one diff, I'll put general mod here too.
2. First, you don't need to put ハナヤマタ on the tag again because you already put it on source. Add Hanayamata instead. And you don't need to put commas on tag. So this is how it should look like : Hanayamata Yosakoi Song Series - Fix
3. And for the artist, write it like this : 常盤 真智 (CV: 沼倉 愛美) and for the romaji : Tokiwa Machi (CV: Numakura Manami) - Fix
4. Song setup -> Design -> no need to check the "Letterbox during break" option, uncheck it. - Fix
5. The combo colors seems to be to stand out for the dim blue background. Try to use shade of blue color. Example : http://puu.sh/iuyX8/ccde098c24.png - Fix
6. Okay, enough for general stuff, let's start on the map.
7. 00:15:028 (3,4,5) - Starting slider on red tick sounds weird. Try swapping the place with 00:14:813 (2) - Like this http://puu.sh/iuz3Q/cb33077abe.jpg would sounds better. - i know wat you want to say, but it will failed to followig the guitar, so i will remain
8. 00:20:813 (1,2,3) - Is this supposed to be this hard to read? - no, is quite simple to read
9. 00:20:385 (6,4) - Stack for cleaner looks. - Fix
10. 00:25:099 (1,6) - ^ - Fix
11. 00:34:742 (3,4) - Maybe making them perfectly parallel would look better... - want to turn back the direction, so that make it opposite direction.not going to make it pefectly parallel
12. 01:24:671 (6) - Place it perfectly on the center for a nice symmetry. - it will break the DS i set, not going to move it center
13. 01:25:528 (1,3) - Blanket would looks better tho. not going to make a blanket.if make the slider will stop at weird place. remain
14. 01:57:885 (1,2,3,4,5) - I can't really tell what you follow on this part. Maybe just follow the vocal to read it easier. - Fix
15. 02:51:778 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe keep them with the same distance so it would be easier to read. This looks nice tho http://puu.sh/iuzkq/5e15d3c3fa.jpg - is look nice, but actually is not in same timing, if change, it will consider it is same timing. so is look difference DS
16. 02:58:956 (10,1) - Stack o-o - Fix
17. 03:18:242 (12) - NC because of SV change so it would be easier to read. - Fix
18. 03:34:099 (8) - NC here so the combo would not be too long maybe (20 is pretty long okay) - Fix
19. 03:47:813 (8) - ^ - Fix
20. 03:53:063 (2) - I believe the sound is here 03:53:171 not here 03:53:063 that is vocal, but im not following vocal is piano
21. 03:51:242 Actually here would be a nice place to break. Extra map needs break too. yeah,not going to put a break now, if the break is really need, i will put
22. Even if you want to map that part I think the hitsound is too loud maybe reduce it to 30 or 25 - Fix
23. 04:08:385 (9) - Actually it would be nice if you NC here where you put finish. Which mean NC here 04:10:099 (7) - here 04:11:813 (7) - and so on. - Fix
24. When I think about it... The big white tick seems to miss the downbeat near the end... I wonder where it went wrong....
25. Oh, I think I found it. Add uninherited timing point here (red line) to reset the bpm so the big white tick would fall on downbeat. - timing cant resnap, so i remain it, didnt reset.
26. Okay continue. 04:27:242 (6) - Put it perfectly on the middle - it will break the DS i set, not going to move it center
27. 04:44:814 (12) - NC because of SV change - Fix
28. 05:12:242 (13) - ^ - Fix
29. 04:58:099 (11) - NC here so the combo wouldn't be too long - Fix it 04:57:885 (1)
30. 05:15:242 add a note here to support the big sound because spinner don't really support it. - Fix

That's all. Sorry I couldn't mod it that well. I'm not a big fans of modding this kind of map
It's enjoyable to watch, but not to mod nor play xD
But anyway good luck~
I demand my mod I hope you can mod my map soon :3