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D(ABE3) - MANIERA [OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
Jinjin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015년 7월 24일 금요일 at 오후 8:15:12

Artist: D(ABE3)
Title: MANIERA
Source: BMS
Tags: jinjin piano tristan97 abe yuta DWMω
BPM: 208
Filesize: 6211kb
Play Time: 01:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab Another - 7Key (6.16 stars, 2457 notes)
  2. Hyper - 7Key (3.11 stars, 1181 notes)
  3. Insane - 7Key (4.56 stars, 1885 notes)
  4. Masterpiece - 7Key (8.04 stars, 2997 notes)
  5. Normal - 7Key (1.94 stars, 654 notes)
Download: D(ABE3) - MANIERA
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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The map that everybody hates (2015 Edition)
Jinjin's Extreme Mania Series #1 (MANIERA) - Test the limits of your jacks and bursts!

Check out the other Extreme Mania Series!
#2 - The Limit Does Not Exist

Original Composer website: http://www.muzie.ne.jp/artist/a044483/
Please note Abe Yuta's statement on the use of all music content here: http://abeyuta.syoyu.net/


Challenge Accepted :v

Current Progress: Ranked!
Bubbled & Rebubbled by Harbyter! <3
Qualified & Requalified by Blocko, the ETest man alive!
Thanks everyone for supporting me through the way ^^

MANIERA - All 7K mapset

Difficulties: (LR2 equivalent / o2jam equivalent)
Normal (☆06 / Lv. 9) - The easiest difficulty catered to those that are pretty new to 7K (but still pretty challenging)
Hyper (☆10 / Lv. 14) - If you can play the most of the 'easier' patterns in 7K comfortably, this difficulty will be just right!
Insane (★01 / Lv. 28) - This will be challenging to the majority of mania players as the difficulty starts to introduce various high speed streams and minijacks
Collab Another (iJinjin + Tristan97) (★07 / Lv. 34) - This collab difficulty is for those who are considered to be very skilled players, as it contains a lot of high level patterning
Masterpiece (★21(?) / Lv. 47) - The baddest and the hardest difficulty of them all. If you can pass this difficulty with an S, you are already one of the top players in mania. Beware of some nasty jacks combined with long notes and ridiculously hard patterns! (Most people will end up playing this difficulty with HT)

Modding Status (Mods applied):
Normal - 11 mods
Hyper - 8 mods
Insane - 7 mods
Collab Another - 6 mods + a lot of self mods
Masterpiece - 9 mods + a lot of self mods
Tristan97
Aww Yeah. *Puts on glasses* Good luck with hitsounds. Do you mind mentioning who's in the collab?
Gomuryuu
Hi~
From my Queue

Here's my little mod as requested

Column |0-6|

Normal
00:02:099 (2099|1,2099|5,2099|3) - Why don't you start here 00:01:667 like this

00:02:821 (2821|3) - and this maybe

00:14:359 (14359|2,14359|0) - remove, i don't hear anything that makes it double note, and
00:14:359 (14359|5) - make it a minijack instead and move them to 1 for balance, i don't want all jack on my right hand
00:15:946 (15946|2) - move to 1
00:16:090 (16090|3,16234|4,16378|5,16523|6) - move them one column to the left so it starts from 2
00:55:753 (55753|2) - move to 4 for balance
00:55:898 (55898|1) - move to 5^
00:56:330 (56330|0,56907|1,57484|2,58061|4) - these and 00:58:638 (58638|0,58926|1,59503|2,60080|3,60657|4) - these LNs feel awkward, why don't you just continue with the pattern
01:18:252 (78252|4) - move to 3, and LN it all the way to 01:18:829
01:35:270 (95270|5) - move to 6 for balance
01:38:155 (98155|6) - move to 0^
Hard
00:03:109 (3109|2) - move to 4, same pattern as 00:01:667 (1667|2,1739|4,1811|2,1955|2)
00:04:263 (4263|1) - move to 5^
00:05:849 (5849|2) - ghost LN, remove
00:05:849 (5849|3) - remove, and here some suggestions

00:14:215 (14215|6) - move to 4 for minijack
00:28:061 (28061|1,28133|2,28205|3,28277|4) - Ctrl+J and move one column to the right, so it starts from 5 for balance
00:37:869 (37869|1) - remove for balance
01:59:429 (119429|4) - ghost note, remove
01:59:537 (119537|2) - move to 4

Great map! sorry that i can't mod full mapset i can barely survive the Hard diff
Topic Starter
Jinjin

Gomuryuu wrote:

Hi~
From my Queue

Here's my little mod as requested

Column |0-6|

Normal
00:02:099 (2099|1,2099|5,2099|3) - Why don't you start here 00:01:667 like this
Applied your suggestion
00:02:821 (2821|3) - and this maybe
Applied your suggestion
00:14:359 (14359|2,14359|0) - remove, i don't hear anything that makes it double note, and Deleted the double note
00:14:359 (14359|5) - make it a minijack instead and move them to 1 for balance, i don't want all jack on my right hand Applied
00:15:946 (15946|2) - move to 1 Applied
00:16:090 (16090|3,16234|4,16378|5,16523|6) - move them one column to the left so it starts from 2 Applied all
00:55:753 (55753|2) - move to 4 for balance
00:55:898 (55898|1) - move to 5^ Applied with the previous suggestion, fixed some patterns before that too
00:56:330 (56330|0,56907|1,57484|2,58061|4) - these and 00:58:638 (58638|0,58926|1,59503|2,60080|3,60657|4) - these LNs feel awkward, why don't you just continue with the pattern Changed with a different pattern
01:18:252 (78252|4) - move to 3, and LN it all the way to 01:18:829 Applied
01:35:270 (95270|5) - move to 6 for balance Applied
01:38:155 (98155|6) - move to 0^ Changed pattern a little bit
Hard
00:03:109 (3109|2) - move to 4, same pattern as 00:01:667 (1667|2,1739|4,1811|2,1955|2) Applied
00:04:263 (4263|1) - move to 5^ Applied
00:05:849 (5849|2) - ghost LN, remove Removed and changed the ln pattern that follows accordingly
00:05:849 (5849|3) - remove, and here some suggestions
Used my own pattern for this, but thanks for the suggestion
00:14:215 (14215|6) - move to 4 for minijack Applied
00:28:061 (28061|1,28133|2,28205|3,28277|4) - Ctrl+J and move one column to the right, so it starts from 5 for balance Remapped with my own pattern
00:37:869 (37869|1) - remove for balance Removed
01:59:429 (119429|4) - ghost note, remove Hear it in a slower speed here (25/50%), there is an audible queue here
01:59:537 (119537|2) - move to 4 Because I am keeping the previous note, I will keep the pattern here.

Great map! sorry that i can't mod full mapset i can barely survive the Hard diff
Thanks for the awesome mod! :D
PANDAAAAAAAA
Marked (will edit this)
bbu2
nice map :) :)
Topic Starter
Jinjin

bbu2 wrote:

nice map :) :)
:) :) thanks~
PANDAAAAAAAA
hi M4M req :D
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Normal]
Normal > Normal+ ? i think it's too hard for Normal lol
00:03:974 - same this? 00:01:667 >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2996594
00:04:696 (4696|4,4696|3) - if you change 00:03:974 same with 00:01:667 so try this >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2996606
00:13:638 - delete 2 ( i think double note is enough )
00:13:926 (13926|2) - move to 4 ? ( strong piano sound )
00:14:792 - 00:15:946 - i think this jack is too hard for normal. try this? >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2996645
i'm focus on low and high note (low note put on left column and high note put on right column, like when we play tje real piano)
00:17:099 (17099|1,17244|2,17388|3) - move to 123
00:17:532 (17532|4) - move to 7
00:18:253 - 00:19:407 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2996710
00:19:407 (19407|4,19407|2) - move to 2 and 6
00:20:561 (20561|1,20561|0) - ctrl + h
00:20:561 - 00:21:715 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2996719
00:21:715 - 00:22:869 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2996736
00:22:869 - 00:24:023 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2996726
anyway it's just my opinion, you can ignore this :D
00:38:446 - 00:40:032 - i think it's too hard for Normal
00:51:282 (51282|1) - move to 6
00:51:426 (51426|2) - move to 5
00:51:715 (51715|4) - move to 3
00:54:023 - 00:56:330 - really hard for Normal , highly recommend to make this part more easy than this.
01:01:234 (61234|6,61234|4) - move to 1 and 4
01:01:523 (61523|3) - move to 1
01:01:811 (61811|2) - move to 1
01:01:523 (61523|5,61811|4) - delete
01:07:290 (67290|4) - move to 4
01:07:435 (67435|5) - move to 5
01:07:579 (67579|4) - move to 6
01:10:175 (70175|4,70175|2) - move to 1 and 7
01:55:462 (115462|4,115462|2) - move to 6 and 7
01:55:751 (115751|2,116039|2,116328|2) - delete
01:55:751 (115751|4) - move to 3
01:56:039 (116039|4) - move to 4
01:56:328 (116328|4) - move to 5
01:56:616 (116616|3) - delete
01:56:616 (116616|1,116616|5) - move to 1 and 2
01:56:905 (116905|4,117193|3,117482|2) - move to 765
01:57:770 (117770|1) - move to 4

[Masterpiece]
omg 7.5 stars
00:06:282 (6282|2,6330|3,6378|4) - this note is 1/8 like this >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2996791
00:06:390 - add to 6 (beat snap 1/8)
00:06:426 (6426|5) - move to 3
00:06:462 (6462|2) - move to 4
00:06:499 (6499|3) - move to 5
00:06:535 (6535|4) - move to 6
00:06:571 (6571|5) - move to 3
00:10:176 - there's another piano sound
00:17:749 - there's hihat sound
00:24:744 - there's pock sound (i don't know how to call this sound)
00:24:888 - ^
00:25:032 - ^
00:39:672 - hihat sound
00:48:325 - piano sound
01:03:542 - add note ( strong sound )
01:05:056 - hihat sound
01:08:949 - drum sound
01:09:093 - ^
01:14:935 (74935|5) - move to 5
01:15:079 (75079|3) - move to 5
(make triple jack for make more harder)
01:15:367 (75367|4,75584|4) - move to 6
01:16:161 (76161|2) - move to 2
01:16:233 (76233|3) - move to 2
(same reason)

[Collab Another]
00:07:580 - 00:08:638 - single note is enough because 00:09:023 is single note
nice! i like this diff.

nice piano song and beautiful pattern. i think it's good for now, need some mods and ready for qualify.
good job ijinjin :D
Topic Starter
Jinjin

nowsmart wrote:

hi M4M req :D
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Normal]
Normal > Normal+ ? i think it's too hard for Normal lol Haha I agree, fixed~
00:03:974 - same this? 00:01:667 >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2996594 Oh yup, fixed
00:04:696 (4696|4,4696|3) - if you change 00:03:974 same with 00:01:667 so try this >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2996606 Applied
00:13:638 - delete 2 ( i think double note is enough ) Deleted another note instead
00:13:926 (13926|2) - move to 4 ? ( strong piano sound ) I put it on the left hand because that part is played on the left hand only on the piano xP
00:14:792 - 00:15:946 - i think this jack is too hard for normal. try this? >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2996645 Fixed to another pattern
i'm focus on low and high note (low note put on left column and high note put on right column, like when we play tje real piano)
00:17:099 (17099|1,17244|2,17388|3) - move to 123 Applied
00:17:532 (17532|4) - move to 7 Applied
00:18:253 - 00:19:407 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2996710 Changed to another pattern
00:19:407 (19407|4,19407|2) - move to 2 and 6 Applied
00:20:561 (20561|1,20561|0) - ctrl + h Moved them separately
00:20:561 - 00:21:715 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2996719
00:21:715 - 00:22:869 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2996736
00:22:869 - 00:24:023 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2996726 Remapped this part~
anyway it's just my opinion, you can ignore this :D
00:38:446 - 00:40:032 - i think it's too hard for Normal Removed the jacks
00:51:282 (51282|1) - move to 6 Applied
00:51:426 (51426|2) - move to 5 ^
00:51:715 (51715|4) - move to 3 ^
00:54:023 - 00:56:330 - really hard for Normal , highly recommend to make this part more easy than this. Made it into easier pattern
01:01:234 (61234|6,61234|4) - move to 1 and 4 Applied
01:01:523 (61523|3) - move to 1 ^
01:01:811 (61811|2) - move to 1 ^
01:01:523 (61523|5,61811|4) - delete ^ (I like these suggestions :))
01:07:290 (67290|4) - move to 4 Applied
01:07:435 (67435|5) - move to 5 ^
01:07:579 (67579|4) - move to 6 ^
01:10:175 (70175|4,70175|2) - move to 1 and 7 Applied
01:55:462 (115462|4,115462|2) - move to 6 and 7
01:55:751 (115751|2,116039|2,116328|2) - delete
01:55:751 (115751|4) - move to 3
01:56:039 (116039|4) - move to 4
01:56:328 (116328|4) - move to 5
01:56:616 (116616|3) - delete
01:56:616 (116616|1,116616|5) - move to 1 and 2
01:56:905 (116905|4,117193|3,117482|2) - move to 765
01:57:770 (117770|1) - move to 4 Applied all of the above

[Masterpiece]
omg 7.5 stars
00:06:282 (6282|2,6330|3,6378|4) - this note is 1/8 like this >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2996791 whoops, fixed xD
00:06:390 - add to 6 (beat snap 1/8)
00:06:426 (6426|5) - move to 3
00:06:462 (6462|2) - move to 4
00:06:499 (6499|3) - move to 5
00:06:535 (6535|4) - move to 6
00:06:571 (6571|5) - move to 3 Applied all of the above
00:10:176 - there's another piano sound Ah, applied to the right hand
00:17:749 - there's hihat sound Added
00:24:744 - there's pock sound (i don't know how to call this sound) I think you're talking about the cowbell xD added
00:24:888 - ^ ^
00:25:032 - ^ ^
00:39:672 - hihat sound Added
00:48:325 - piano sound Barely audible, but added
01:03:542 - add note ( strong sound ) Added
01:05:056 - hihat sound Added
01:08:949 - drum sound Added
01:09:093 - ^ ^
01:14:935 (74935|5) - move to 5
01:15:079 (75079|3) - move to 5
(make triple jack for make more harder) Applied the suggestion
01:15:367 (75367|4,75584|4) - move to 6
01:16:161 (76161|2) - move to 2
01:16:233 (76233|3) - move to 2
(same reason) Moved to 3 instead

[Collab Another]
00:07:580 - 00:08:638 - single note is enough because 00:09:023 is single note Changed the pattern a little bit
nice! i like this diff. Thanks :)

nice piano song and beautiful pattern. i think it's good for now, need some mods and ready for qualify.
good job ijinjin :D

Thanks for the great mod, nowsmart :D it was very helpful~
Nivrad00
osu!maniera P:

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
[Normal+]
00:58:638 - can't figure out why this LN ends early .u.
01:13:060 and 01:13:636 - maybe add notes for snares
01:31:233 - should be 1/3 snap like on Insane
[Hard]
00:10:176 - I think it's a little unintuitive for this pattern to switch from the right hand to the left hand on an offbeat?
00:09:888 - also here, since there's an accented note too
00:58:638 - are you charting the percussion in the right hand? it doesn't seem to fit but maybe I'm not hearing something :c
01:31:233 - should be 1/3 snap
[Insane]
00:32:099 - ooooooo i like this
00:40:176 - wo interesting pattern .o.
01:06:137 - not sure if these jacks fit in this section
01:07:795 and 01:08:949 - I think these might be 1/6 snap
01:17:386 - maybe spread this pattern out, it's kinda biased towards the right
01:17:675 and 01:17:867 - I suggest placing these two notes on the same lane to make the triplet more intuitive
01:41:616 - maybe look over this section? I found the jack patterns really awkward compared to the rest of the map
[Collab Another]
00:09:888 - can I suggest putting the three-note jacks on alternating hands (like 1-1-1-7-7-7-2-2-2-6-6-6) so that it doesn't feel so much harder than the rest of the triplet section?
01:17:771 - using jacks here is a cool idea but the space jacks feel really uncomfortable in the middle of the stream
01:31:233 - I think jacks would fit nicely here since it sounds like a climax!
[Masterpiece]
00:06:715 and 01:41:616 - in my opinion these jacks are already hard enough without being squished into three lanes by the LN
00:14:936 and 00:15:513 and 00:24:744 - in this part of the map, all three 1/4 snap three-note jacks are in the right hand x:
01:07:795 and 01:08:949 - again, might be 1/6 snap
01:18:252 - LMAO vibro while holding down spacebar

OKAY go get ranked
Topic Starter
Jinjin

Nivrad00 wrote:

osu!maniera P:

I replied back with everything but they are gone for some reason... o.o dammit osu forums
c: = applied

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
[Normal+]
00:58:638 - can't figure out why this LN ends early .u. Whoops how did this happen o.o fixed
01:13:060 and 01:13:636 - maybe add notes for snares c:
01:31:233 - should be 1/3 snap like on Insane c:
[Hard]
00:10:176 - I think it's a little unintuitive for this pattern to switch from the right hand to the left hand on an offbeat? fixed xP
00:09:888 - also here, since there's an accented note too ^
00:58:638 - are you charting the percussion in the right hand? it doesn't seem to fit but maybe I'm not hearing something :c Whoops, some parts are a bit off, fixed it c:
01:31:233 - should be 1/3 snap c:
[Insane]
00:32:099 - ooooooo i like this c:
00:40:176 - wo interesting pattern .o. ccc:
01:06:137 - not sure if these jacks fit in this section Fixed xD
01:07:795 and 01:08:949 - I think these might be 1/6 snap Checked the original bms chart, it is 1/4 haha
01:17:386 - maybe spread this pattern out, it's kinda biased towards the right c:
01:17:675 and 01:17:867 - I suggest placing these two notes on the same lane to make the triplet more intuitive c:
01:41:616 - maybe look over this section? I found the jack patterns really awkward compared to the rest of the map Definitely feels so to me too. I dunno what i was thinking xD fixed
[Collab Another]
00:09:888 - can I suggest putting the three-note jacks on alternating hands (like 1-1-1-7-7-7-2-2-2-6-6-6) so that it doesn't feel so much harder than the rest of the triplet section? Good idea! fixed
01:17:771 - using jacks here is a cool idea but the space jacks feel really uncomfortable in the middle of the stream Good point. Fixed
01:31:233 - I think jacks would fit nicely here since it sounds like a climax! Jaaaaacks c:
[Masterpiece]
00:06:715 and 01:41:616 - in my opinion these jacks are already hard enough without being squished into three lanes by the LN I mean, it's supposed to be a 7.5* diff, so might as well make it challenging enough c:
00:14:936 and 00:15:513 and 00:24:744 - in this part of the map, all three 1/4 snap three-note jacks are in the right hand x: Fixed
01:07:795 and 01:08:949 - again, might be 1/6 snap Checked bms chart
01:18:252 - LMAO vibro while holding down spacebar ;c but the ln is mapped to the guitar so it fits well~

OKAY go get ranked
Thanks for the beautiful mod, niv c:
Reba
모딩큐에서 리퀘를 받아 모딩하러 왔습니다~
동의 하지 않으시는 부분을 바꾸지 않으셔도 됩니다

Columns: 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6

노멀은 개인적으로 괜찮다고 봅니다...

Hyper
00:25:393 (25393|3) - to 2
00:25:465 (25465|2) - to 4
00:25:970 (25970|3) - to 4
00:26:042 (26042|4) - to 2
01:21:281 여기에 소리가 있으므로 노트를 넣으시는것을 추천합니다
01:21:858 ^

Insane
00:17:749 (17749|5) - 소리가 있습니다, 노트추가
00:54:023 드럼으로 탁 치는 소리가 없음에도 불구하고 노트가 3개 입니다, 수정하시는것을 추천.
00:55:176 ^

Collab Another 과 Masterpiece 는 모딩을 도저히 못하겠어서 하지 않았습니다...죄송합니다
랭크 화이팅~
Topic Starter
Jinjin

- R e b a - wrote:

모딩큐에서 리퀘를 받아 모딩하러 왔습니다~
동의 하지 않으시는 부분을 바꾸지 않으셔도 됩니다

Columns: 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6

노멀은 개인적으로 괜찮다고 봅니다...

Hyper
00:25:393 (25393|3) - to 2 Applied
00:25:465 (25465|2) - to 4 ^
00:25:970 (25970|3) - to 4 약간 다르게 수정해봤습니다
00:26:042 (26042|4) - to 2 ^
01:21:281 여기에 소리가 있으므로 노트를 넣으시는것을 추천합니다 제가 이곳은 드럼 위주로 노트를 넣어서 피아노 소리가 있긴 하지만 안넣겠습니다.
01:21:858 ^
^

Insane
00:17:749 (17749|5) - 소리가 있습니다, 노트추가 이부분도 snare drum은 강조하지만 그 hihat 소리는 그냥 두고 싶네요 ^^ (대신 collab another 랑 masterpiece 난이도에는 이 소리에 노트가 추가되었습니다.)
00:54:023 드럼으로 탁 치는 소리가 없음에도 불구하고 노트가 3개 입니다, 수정하시는것을 추천. 수정했습니다
00:55:176 ^ ^

Collab Another 과 Masterpiece 는 모딩을 도저히 못하겠어서 하지 않았습니다...죄송합니다
랭크 화이팅~
고맙습니다~ ^^
schwarzvgrune
Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue

Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


Icon Bibliography
No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)? = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~

General : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴
Mapset : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ the difficulty ladder is unrankable, the difficulty between each diff should not exceed 1.5 star rating from each diff. (your HD to insane exceeded that, and also the 7.5 star has 2.5 star diff with the next lower diff)
Metadata : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ no tags? and also you should only write the source if it's from anime if i remember it correctly, i'm not sure about BMS.
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio : o(≧v≦)o~~
Background : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : o(≧v≦)o~~


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In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( )
Hand Balancing : ( )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( )
Ghost Note : ( )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( )



NM
00:04:407 (4407|3,4407|5,4407|1,4984|2,5561|3) - they are all of the same chord strength and phase, why 3 notes, then 1 and 1? emphasis seems random to me
and limit your use of 3 notes for NM diffs, currently you use a lot of 3 notes for NM. it should be NM+ instead, or delete those overused 3note chord if you want to keep it as NM
decrease OD to 6.5 for NM

01:28:060 (88060|2,88636|4,89213|1,89790|5) - 4 especially is a no no i think, for normal.

other diffs are fine, just need minor polishing <3


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O
Topic Starter
Jinjin

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue

Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


Icon Bibliography
No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)? = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~

General : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴
Mapset : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ the difficulty ladder is unrankable, the difficulty between each diff should not exceed 1.5 star rating from each diff. (your HD to insane exceeded that, and also the 7.5 star has 2.5 star diff with the next lower diff) After the talk with BNS / QATs, I learned that the 1.5* diff gap isn't actually a rule, but more of a guideline to follow. In other words, it isn't mandatory to follow. I have thought about making a separate difficulty between Hyper and Insane, but the music makes it vague to make patterns that would fit in between the two difficulties. The gap between Masterpiece and Collab Another difficulties is also expected, and it is definitely okay to deviate from the guidelines on the X diffs (Ex: See AiAe and AXION)
Metadata : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ no tags? and also you should only write the source if it's from anime if i remember it correctly, i'm not sure about BMS. Haven't added tags yet. Will do soon~
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio : o(≧v≦)o~~
Background : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : o(≧v≦)o~~


|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10|


In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( )
Hand Balancing : ( )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( )
Ghost Note : ( )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( )



NM
00:04:407 (4407|3,4407|5,4407|1,4984|2,5561|3) - they are all of the same chord strength and phase, why 3 notes, then 1 and 1? emphasis seems random to me mmm good catch, fixed~
and limit your use of 3 notes for NM diffs, currently you use a lot of 3 notes for NM. it should be NM+ instead, or delete those overused 3note chord if you want to keep it as NM I removed most of the 3 note chords
decrease OD to 6.5 for NM Applied

01:28:060 (88060|2,88636|4,89213|1,89790|5) - 4 especially is a no no i think, for normal. Fixed the lns

other diffs are fine, just need minor polishing <3


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O
Thanks for the mod ^-^/
x M e l
Hey :3 mod for req via queue (hi page 2)

columns: 1|2|3|4|5|6|7


I don't mod the hyper because, for me, is perfect :cry: (?

Excelent map~ and sorry for the short mod u.u so, star :3 good luck!
Topic Starter
Jinjin

Meiko Senpai wrote:

Hey :3 mod for req via queue (hi page 2)

columns: 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

Normal
00:11:619 - http://puu.sh/hl83L/c1c85b27f4.png change for this? → http://puu.sh/hl84m/99ec6ce961.png Fixed, and changed some patterns after that
01:05:128 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3037028 I think these mini-jacks are hards for Normal, idk I agree, made them into non jack patterns
01:09:021 - http://puu.sh/hl8dh/6dd91c440e.png change for this? → http://puu.sh/hl8ew/35758cd7b9.png Good idea!
01:18:252 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3037034https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3037038 ^ ? Changed

I don't mod the hyper because, for me, is perfect :cry: (?

Excelent map~ and sorry for the short mod u.u so, star :3 good luck!
Thanks for the mod and the star :)~
schwarzvgrune
ah, so its only a guideline! thanks for your clarification <3

good luck with the map XD
Yuzeyun
incoming 1,000pp scores :^)
Topic Starter
Jinjin

_Gezo_ wrote:

incoming 1,000pp scores :^)
:^)
DrawdeX
Hello! :)
M4M as promised :)
I only focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance
7K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
Everything modded
[Normal]
OD +0.5
• 00:06:426 (6426|2) - Move to 4 or 6, for hand balance
• 00:15:946 (15946|0) - Move to 6 or 7, ^ also for pattern balance from 00:14:792 -
• 00:29:503 (29503|6) - Move to 1 or 3, for hand balance
• 01:10:752 (70752|1,70896|2) - Ctrl+J? to follow up on 01:11:040 -
• 01:52:001 - Add a note, for strong beat

[Hyper]
• 00:09:023 - Add a note? I hear a strong beat here
• 00:20:561 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:25:465 - 00:26:042 - Add a note, since you made 00:26:330 - three notes for the strong beat
• 00:27:773 - 00:28:349 - ^
• 01:12:483 (72483|2) - Move to 2, for pattern balance on 01:11:329 - 01:11:906 -

[Insane]
• 00:20:561 - Add a note? Strong beat
• 01:14:213 - ^
• 01:26:329 - Add a note, since you made 01:25:752 - three notes
• 01:26:906 - ^
• 01:27:483 - ^

[Collab Another]
• 00:32:965 - Add a note, for the strong beat
• 01:23:444 - ^, for the cymbal sound
• 01:25:752 - ^
• 01:26:329 - ^
• 01:26:906 - ^

[Masterpiece]
• 00:19:984 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:20:561 - ^
• 00:37:869 (37869|6) - Move to 00:37:893 - ? It still has the piano sound
• 00:44:215 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:10:175 - ^
• 01:19:983 - ^

Sorry, I can mod only a little on streams. :?
Good luck~! :)
Also, here's the M4M. https://osu.ppy.sh/s/303649 :D
Topic Starter
Jinjin

DrawdeX wrote:

Hello! :)
M4M as promised :)
I only focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance
7K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
Everything modded
[Normal]
OD +0.5
• 00:06:426 (6426|2) - Move to 4 or 6, for hand balance Applied to 6
• 00:15:946 (15946|0) - Move to 6 or 7, ^ also for pattern balance from 00:14:792 - Applied to 7
• 00:29:503 (29503|6) - Move to 1 or 3, for hand balance Applied
• 01:10:752 (70752|1,70896|2) - Ctrl+J? to follow up on 01:11:040 - I kept as is for the pitch
• 01:52:001 - Add a note, for strong beat Added

[Hyper]
• 00:09:023 - Add a note? I hear a strong beat here Added
• 00:20:561 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound Added
• 00:25:465 - 00:26:042 - Add a note, since you made 00:26:330 - three notes for the strong beat Applied
• 00:27:773 - 00:28:349 - ^ ^
• 01:12:483 (72483|2) - Move to 2, for pattern balance on 01:11:329 - 01:11:906 - Applied

[Insane]
• 00:20:561 - Add a note? Strong beat Applied
• 01:14:213 - ^ ^
• 01:26:329 - Add a note, since you made 01:25:752 - three notes Added
• 01:26:906 - ^ ^
• 01:27:483 - ^ ^

[Collab Another]
• 00:32:965 - Add a note, for the strong beat Added
• 01:23:444 - ^, for the cymbal sound ^
• 01:25:752 - ^ ^
• 01:26:329 - ^ ^
• 01:26:906 - ^ Don't think it's necessary here because it's soft

[Masterpiece]
• 00:19:984 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound Added
• 00:20:561 - ^ ^
• 00:37:869 (37869|6) - Move to 00:37:893 - ? It still has the piano sound Fixed
• 00:44:215 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound Added
• 01:10:175 - ^ Added
• 01:19:983 - ^

Sorry, I can mod only a little on streams. :?
Good luck~! :)
Also, here's the M4M. https://osu.ppy.sh/s/303649 :D
Thanks for the helpful mod! I'll get to the M4M req when I am free ^^
Frim4503
this map still WIP ?
Topic Starter
Jinjin

Frim4503 wrote:

this map still WIP ?
Chart is finished, just wip Cuz of hitsounds
Julie
Sorry took me a while ><...I got lazy =w=

From modqueue
1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[Normal]

00:40:898 (40898|6,41042|5,41186|4) - you been following the chord a lots, till here lolol, do the same here? :D

00:43:061 (43061|5,43205|3) - ctrl+g? Shouldn't be the same as 00:42:484 (42484|6,42628|4,42773|2,42917|1) -

00:44:936 (44936|1,45080|2,45224|1,45369|6,45513|5,45657|4,45801|5) - um follow the chord, also feel a bit to one handed from one size and another xD. This 00:44:936 (44936|1,45224|1) - and this 00:45:513 (45513|5,45801|5) - shouldn't be in same column. While these 00:45:369 (45369|6,45657|4) - should be xD. Maybe something like this http://puu.sh/hpaeB.jpg ?

00:48:253 (48253|0,48542|2) - shouldn't LN start here 00:48:398 - like you did on your hyper

00:49:407 - to 00:54:023 - try keep piano consistent here ><, feel like losing rhythmn in some part.

00:57:773 (57773|2,57917|4,58061|6,58205|2,58349|6,58494|4) - maybe try follow the chord for this part 00:58:061 (58061|6,58205|2,58349|6,58494|4) - like you did before? http://puu.sh/hpaFQ.png

01:09:021 (69021|0,69165|2,69310|4,69454|6) - this shouldn't be a stair xD. Should be something like this http://puu.sh/hpaV7.jpg ><

01:37:289 (97289|2) - delete, the only sound there is the 1/6 sound that your not mapping for your normal.

01:38:443 - delete a note and make one jack with this 01:38:732 - like you did here 01:33:828 - :D. Keep it consistent for that part.

01:39:309 (99309|0,99597|0,99885|0,100174|0) - not sure if all these should be same column? not the same sound ><

[Hyper]

00:11:907 - 00:12:484 - delete a note, shouldn't be 3 note like this 00:13:061 - and this 00:11:330 -

01:15:511 - a LN should start here?

[Insane]

00:13:926 (13926|0,13926|2) - This part really don't feel much piano impact , mostly same number of note and same column then this 00:14:359 (14359|2,14359|0) - ><

00:14:792 (14792|4,14936|4) - don't put them same column, not the same chords.

00:39:744 (39744|4,39816|5) - shouldn't this be jack? xD

00:47:676 - add a note at 4 ? should have at least 3 notes like this 00:47:099 - and this 00:48:253 - for the cymbal xD

Really nice mapset O.O!! This is way to amazing *stars* XD
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