1. Shining Gate (6.8 stars, 1548 notes)

Good Bye Mapping

Nozhomi wrote:

Heyo Magic Penguin <3 I'm here(for the worst mod ever).

- General :

1. According to THIS Web site, you can add Supernal Liberty (album name) to tag (and maybe other stuff I don't really know ;w; ).

- Shining Gate :

1. 00:43:664 (1) - CTRl+G no ? Because you'll improve flow with 00:43:239 (1) - and make a triangle pattern with 00:44:088 (2,3) - (also make spacing a little more coherent with the overall DS of this part).
2. 01:26:683 (2,3,4,5,6) - Should be better for flow if keep this clockwise you start with 01:26:117 (4,5,6) - . So CTRL+G 01:26:683 (2,3) - and 01:26:966 (4,6) - (if you like it ofc).
3. 02:03:617 (5) - I know this is your style and don't want to change it, but you just broke too much flow with this shape imo. All other on kiai are good but this one is not. Consider change it.
4. 02:51:941 (4,2) - Not perfectly stacked (not a big problem).
5. 02:39:418 (2) - I would (MAYBE) do a custom stack with 02:39:843 (4) - because I think it would improve flow.
6. 02:41:258 (1) - I know this could break your pattern but CTRL+G is MUCH better for the flow you created with 02:40:834 (4,5,6) - .
7. 02:51:941 (4,2) - Bad stack.
8. 04:06:942 (4,5,5) - ^

Small mod because I'm too bad to mod high difficult map ;w; hope it help you a little.
Mukyu~

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Hey \o/

Here's my mod

asdf - nazi or suggestion
asdf - important

General

1. What the ?! D: Pls disable countdown cuz at the beginning of the song is a spinner and the player will become confused imo
2. You didn't choose Combo Colours yet ;w; Lemme choose for you :
   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 0,128,192
   Combo2 : 0,64,128
   Combo3 : 128,0,255
   Combo4 : 128,0,128

3. The BG size is 1366x766 D: It should be 1366x768

Shining Gate

1. 00:31:069(1)- Why you not try a 2/1 slider and a 1/1 slider rhythm as you did at 00:28:805(1,2)- ? It will follow the instruments much better than before : http://puu.sh/gzGZF/1fcafad5a8.jpg I don't like using same rhythm at same music, becuz it's bored
2. 00:35:598(1,2)- You can improve this pattern like in this pic : http://puu.sh/gzH5Z/51de097679.jpg to improve the cursor movement and the playability.The current one makes the cursor movement having a weird movement D: i don't make bad flow pattern, even unnatural to play things
3. 00:38:428(3,4)- Same try to improve the pattern like here : http://puu.sh/gzHdN/0e50e0ffe8.jpg cuz the current one makes the cursor movement having a weird movement.The one improved will improve the cursor movement and the playability
4. 00:38:994(1,2,3,4,5,6,7)- Here you tried to make an isoscel triangle pattern ? It doesn't look so good imo try this : http://puu.sh/gzHkD/595a335dab.jpg It will looks more better than before and the circles will have the placement equal ;D
5. 00:41:258(1,2,3,4)- Try to improve this quadruplet pattern like here : http://puu.sh/gzHEf/14969717ad.jpg http://puu.sh/gzHG7/eb6309d86f.jpg to improve the cursor movement and the playability.The current one looks weird to me D:
6. 01:00:220(3,4)- Why you not make their placement equal ? Move both notes to 357|73 to make their placement equal and to avoid the overlaps with (1)- and (2)- which they're sliders i never think it's be problem also it doesn't effect anything
7. 01:19:183(4,5)- Try to improve the pattern for a good cursor movement and playability : http://puu.sh/gzHWN/1a547ae30b.jpg <- acute pattern ;D
8. 01:50:315(1)- Why you switched on the NC here ? D: I don't here new vocals so switch off the NC ;3 for readable
9. 01:53:569(1)- I think you should change the slider while slider's tail touch (4)- what means it's a bad overlap it's should be fine at high AR

Continue ~ ~ ~

VINXIS wrote:

lol sorry that my mod was so bad :')

here's a star lol

koreapenguin wrote:

Ohhh i just forgot to check.

1. 01:01:211 (4,5) - make them parallel like this will be more playable.
2. 01:21:164 (2) - I should say that this is really hard to read that it is 3/4 because the spacing is really like 1/2.
3. 01:22:437 (1,1) - I suggest to move this slider toward from the previous note, something like this because when I played, after I hit the note, my cursor move a bit toward so I think if you put that slider toward from note, player won't need to move forward to hit the slider? maybe the natural of human ?_?
4. 02:54:560 (6) - what about move to 80|80 or elsewhere? spacing is too big for calm part imo, strong begin at 02:54:701 (7).
5. 03:12:107 (2) - add finish.
6. 03:22:437 (3) - ^
7. 03:22:862 (5) - ^
8. 03:23:145 (1) - tail ^
9. 03:23:711 (4) - ^
10. 03:25:126 (5) - head ^
11. 03:25:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - need some NC to make them different imo, 03:25:409 (1,2,3,4) with 1/2 spacing and 03:26:259 (5,6) normal 1/2.
12. 03:26:966 (3,4) - add finish
13. 03:57:107 (4) - spread to two slider to emphasis the vocal?
14. 04:17:494 (1) - add finish.
15. 04:18:060 (3) - ^ ? somehow it fits.
16. 04:43:638 (2,3,4,5) - should snap to 1/8 imo.
17. 04:44:664 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - hmmm I think this is also wrong snap but I don't know the correct one? D: maybe my ears broke.
18. 05:00:796 (3,4) - what about stack these at somewhere else such as 452|340 to emphasis the strong beat on 05:01:079 (5,6) ?
19. 05:29:381 (3,4) - hmm is this a trap? I misread this at first >_> add some NC to make it looks different from 05:28:814 (1,2) ?

Chaoslitz wrote:

as requested, lets try, the first time I mod a app map ;~;

1. 00:32:201 (1) - flow should be better if you put this note more to the right seem already it's fine good
2. 00:40:126 (1,4) - not stacked completely
3. 00:43:664 (1) - try ctrl+g?
4. 00:49:890 (4,5) - ctrl+g this, flow will work better
5. 00:53:711 (1,2) - spacing here can be increased
6. 01:18:617 (1,2) - try a jump like 01:18:192 (1,2)? oh... yea i tried but it would be hard D: really so will keep for now
7. 01:38:286 - Add a note here, it feels empty in my opinion there is haven't anysounds
8. 02:19:607 (1,2) - you map the slider which make a leftward movement at the tail but you place the note on he right hand side, fix the flow
9. 02:36:164 (3,4) - ^
10. 02:38:994 (1,2) - ^, really not suggest this flow
11. 02:46:918 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it is not necessary to have a larger ds than 02:45:786 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) in this stream eh... why D: i followed song's up down so it should be fine
12. 02:54:418 (5,6) - decreasing the spacing here, as the vocal is soft here listen carefully the piano's fit
13. 03:21:447 (7) - NC
14. 03:33:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the movement is this jump is not really good, try switching 7 and 8, then 03:34:466 (1,2,3,4) - swtich 1,2 and 3,4
15. 03:46:352 (1,2) - try this:
16. 03:58:805 (5,6) - same as before
17. 04:11:683 (1,2) - ^
18. 04:21:173 (2) - use 1/2 instead
19. 05:29:381 (3,4) - decreasing spacing here, as it may mislead players for a similar ds as 05:28:814 (1,2)

shoot star o/
I hope it helps ;w;

Xinely wrote:

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  Shining Gate

1. personally i feel AR 9,5 a little bit fast but im not sure 100% since you know i cant play Extra, hmm how about try 9,3 or 9,4 instead? 9.5 is fit up at this song and even patterns
2. well since you mapped the first time with spinner, imo this break is too long and i was like "aaaa so long to wait" to wait the next spinner, how about map 00:17:485 - until 00:21:871 - with weak rhythm and normal spacing for this? imo it will reduce the feel of boring here
3. 00:25:692 (1,2,3,4) - in side of modder i feel this stream's flow feels smoother if you curve these circles a little bit curvy to follow how the curve for the next circles, well im not sure 100% again since i cant play Extra but i'd say try http://puu.sh/gCCEA.jpg i think it's fine already
4. 00:28:664 (9,10) - since the previous triplet have the movements (spacing) here, i'd say to stack these circles on 00:28:805 (1) - 's head to played better but i guess this is my taste again :/
5. 00:30:786 (10) - NC this circle for the increase spacing on stream? also i feel the combo is kinda long it's fine too
6. 00:31:494 (2,4) - nazi, it'd be neater if you stack them lol current more readable
7. 00:32:626 (5) - hmm since the 00:32:768 (6) - violin's sound is loud and imo it needs jump to emphasize it, how about move (5) circle to 152,352 for it?
8. 00:33:758 (2,3) - sorry if im wrong but i hear the drums sound at 1/3 instead of 1/2 here (00:33:711 - and 00:33:805 - )
9. 00:36:588 (6) - nazi, how about to make better triangle for 00:36:588 (6,1,2) - with move (6) to 328,128? it looks better imo >< it's same i think fine
10. 00:43:664 (1) - actually according the 00:42:390 (1,1) - 's pattern, i'd say to ctrl+G this slider to keep the consistent flow movement, if you agree so you can move 00:44:088 (2) - to 248,360
11. 00:52:579 (1,2,3) - just notice to you if you follow the drums, so 1/2 is right for this time but if you want to follow piano instead, it snapped on 1/3. i'd say to follow piano more since it sounds quite strong in this time but that's up to you ~
12. 00:53:499 (6) - somehow i feel overmapped here since i cant hear music on blue tick, how about remove this?
13. 01:01:352 (5) - im sure i hear a cymbal music even it's weak here, how about add finish to emphasize it?
14. 01:02:697 (9) - same as 00:53:499 (6) -
15. 01:03:900 (6) - imo the jump on (1) should be higher than (5) to (6) because the cymbal, for that how about move this circle to 128,152?
16. 01:15:079 (1) - same as 01:01:352 (5) -
17. 01:18:687 (2) - on 01:18:834 - it has a weak drum sound, how about shorter this slider until that blue tick and add note on next whitetick? it would be make harder for extra diff imo xD
18. 01:22:154 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - skystar?! lol
19. 01:37:154 (2) - tbh since the circle placed on (3)'s left and the flow is moving to rightward after this circle, the flow feels not really natural for me, how about move this circle to 500,336 instead? at least feels better for me hum, it's too already good flow
20. 01:44:654 (1) - since the cymbal sounds at redtick, you have to map it with circle imo to emphasize how the cymbal sounds strong, so replace this slider with 2 circles?
21. 01:51:541 (2,3) - somehow i cant hear any music on them too, probably remove them? they look kinda overmapped in my sight
22. 01:53:286 (3) - somehow i feel this jump is overjumping here, hmm probably nerf this a bit with stack on 01:52:201 (3) - ?
23. 01:55:834 (8) - the cymbal sounds so strong at this time so how about make the jump a little bit higher again? i guess move 392,296 feels nicely here
24. 01:58:168 (3) - same as 01:51:541 (2,3) -
25. 02:02:201 (2) - if you follow the vocal, the slider should be end in blue tick 02:02:414 - , somehow end in whitetick feels weird for me
26. 02:19:607 (1) - somehow the head feels so empty w/o any hitsound here, how about add finish or whistle for this one?
27. 02:47:909 (3) - ^
28. 02:48:334 (1) - finish on head? somehow i hear a cymbal sound even weak cymbal here, just like 01:09:418 (1) -
29. 03:14:654 (3,4) - somehow if i try to play i'd read the flow from (3) was going to downward instead of leftward, hmm how about tweak 03:14:654 (3,4,5,6) - become https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2896319 ?
30. 03:36:164 (5) - how about NC this to give the warn of 1/4 jump? displaying follow point is better
31. 04:37:871 (4) - hmm i hear nothing in blue tick (or i'd say vocal breathe only) and i hear the vocal on 04:38:154 - actually.. , better to end the slider at whitetick imo
32. 04:45:135 (3) - same as 01:51:541 (2,3) -
33. 04:51:456 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i hope you can reduce the spacings since tbh i dont feel the different relax part's jumps between jumps on 04:52:588 (1,2,3) - (strong music part) already jumps are clam, i guess
34. 05:29:381 (3,4) - you should decrease the spacing on this or incerase spacing of 05:29:522 (4,5) - since 3 to 4 and 4 to 5 have different gap (1/2 with 1/1) that spacings look quite make missread for the first players ><
35. 05:31:362 (4) - i hear nothing in blue tick and i hear piano on 05:31:786 - so better to end the slider at redtick imo

great evil map!
good luck moepenguin <3

Edit : 500th kudosu www

P A N wrote:

XINELY NINJA'D ME

I will mention the thing that different with xinely then >_>

1. 01:01:211 (4,5) - make them parallel like this will be more playable. actually it's playable
2. 01:21:164 (2) - I should say that this is really hard to read that it is 3/4 because the spacing is really like 1/2.
3. 01:22:437 (1,1) - I suggest to move this slider toward from the previous note, something like this because when I played, after I hit the note, my cursor move a bit toward so I think if you put that slider toward from note, player won't need to move forward to hit the slider? maybe the natural of human ?_? it would be fine, becuz app map :3
4. 02:54:560 (6) - what about move to 80|80 or elsewhere? spacing is too big for calm part imo, strong begin at 02:54:701 (7). i followed piano's up, down
5. 03:12:107 (2) - add finish.
6. 03:22:437 (3) - ^
7. 03:22:862 (5) - ^
8. 03:23:145 (1) - tail ^
9. 03:23:711 (4) - ^
10. 03:25:126 (5) - head ^
11. 03:25:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - need some NC to make them different imo, 03:25:409 (1,2,3,4) with 1/2 spacing and 03:26:259 (5,6) normal 1/2.
12. 03:26:966 (3,4) - add finish
13. 03:57:107 (4) - spread to two slider to emphasis the vocal?
14. 04:17:494 (1) - add finish.
15. 04:18:060 (3) - ^ ? somehow it fits.
16. 04:43:638 (2,3,4,5) - should snap to 1/8 imo. Good you're right
17. 04:44:664 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - hmmm I think this is also wrong snap but I don't know the correct one? D: maybe my ears broke.
18. 05:00:796 (3,4) - what about stack these at somewhere else such as 452|340 to emphasis the strong beat on 05:01:079 (5,6) ?
19. 05:29:381 (3,4) - hmm is this a trap? I misread this at first >_> add some NC to make it looks different from 05:28:814 (1,2) ?

Good Luck D

Chaoslitz wrote:

please at least respond to my mod

:<

1. 00:26:258 (1) - 여기도 뉴콤?
2. 00:43:664 (1) - ctrl+g 하는게 더 좋아보이는데
3. 01:38:286 - 보컬 들리는데 노트 비우는것보단 채우는게 더 좋다고 생각해요.
4. 01:38:994 (1) - 이거 테일 01:37:862 (1) - 이거 헤드랑 스텍 잘 안된거같음
5. 02:03:900 (1) - 위랑 똑같이 테일 02:03:334 (3) - 이거랑 조금 엇나간거같음
6. 04:08:145 (5) - 여놈도 스텍

Wing My Way wrote:

My English is so poor >,<
[Shining Gate]
01:16:918 (5) - NC
01:21:164 (2) - I think in this position is not good it's actually readable
00:49:890 (4) - If I were you, I'll make some nearly 4 from 3, 5 away from some why D:
00:50:881 (3) - ^ Far from some 4
01:18:192 (1) - sv*0.5 would be more fun i don't want make extreme velocity
01:21:871 (6,1) - Exchange NC eh D:
01:27:390 (9) - NC
01:36:588 (5,6,1) - Overmap is not good
02:04:466 (3) - So that it is parallel with the 2, so the playability will be higher
02:04:749 (5,1) - The convergence of these two sliders are not on good
02:50:881 (3) - not stacked completely
02:55:268 (3,4) - I think they should be directed to the previous 02:54:843 (1,2) - be similar
02:56:541 (5) - NC
03:01:069 (4) - I think it becomes more appropriate stream
04:04:749 (7,8,9,10,1) - I feelthis will be more beautiful stream bend some https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2903740
05:19:758 (1) - I feel now this position is not very suitable, the best is farther or consistent with the previous DS

KP's style sugoi \o/
good luck penguin /w\~~~

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ koreapenguin

Shining Gate

1. 00:27:532 (3,1) - 뉴콤 스왑 왜해야되는지 모르겠
2. 00:49:112 (6) - 1번 슬라이더의 시작과 겹쳐주세요. 의도한바가아니기때문에 No
3. 00:54:277 (5) - 뉴콤 추가
4. 01:24:206 (5) - 1번에 겹쳐주세요.
5. 01:33:900 (4) - 뉴콤 추가
6. 01:44:867 (2) - 1번에 겹쳐주세요.
7. 02:32:343 (2) - 이부분 사진처럼 해주시는게 더 좋을것같아요. 간격이 너무 큰듯해요.
   02:33:334 (1) - 뉴콤 해제. 02:33:900 (6) - 여기서부터 뉴콤이 맞는것같아요.
8. 02:48:263 (4) - 흐름은 차라리 이게 더 좋지 않을까 생각하는데요...
9. 03:35:810 (2) - 3번 슬라앞에 겹치기 의도한바와 다름
10. 03:36:022 (4) - Ctrl + G 너무 동선지켜놔서 이렇게라도 뿌셔놔야 될꺼같
11. 05:14:310 (2,3) - 솔찍히 말씀드려서.. 02:32:343 부분이랑 여기에 있는 2 3 번 비슷한것들이 좀 많이 어려운것같아요. 저뿐만아니라 이맵난이도 비례 플레이어대부분들은 다 칠수있는부분
12. 05:35:995 (1) - 서클말고 여기서부터 스피너 시작으로 하는게 더 나을것같아요. 스피너로 임펙트를 내기에는 소리가 강해서 서클로둠

노래 미친듯이좋고 맵 몇몇빼고 좋으니까 쿠도스나 받으셈!!

1. 어째서인지 BG 사이즈 세로 크기가 2 모자라네요. 1366x768이 16:9입니다.

1. 00:52:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 이 파트는 1 / 3음이 강한데, 한번 고려는 해보셨으면 하네요
2. 01:09:135 (2,3) - 이거 두개 사이의 거리가 살짝 먼듯한 느낌이 듭니다
3. 01:22:154 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - 진짜로 이거 리딩이 너무 힘듭니다
4. 01:22:296 (3,2) - 클랩 넣어주는것도 나쁘진 않을듯 하네요
5. 01:27:956 (1) - 여기에 뉴콤보 넣을꺼면 그냥 01:28:239 (5)에 넣는게 낫지 않나 싶네요
6. 01:28:664 (8) - 72, 328로 이동하는편이 흐름은 더 좋다고 생각합니다.
7. 01:41:258 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 제가 못하는건지는 모르겠는데, 일단 이 삼각형 패턴 흐름이 좋지 않습니다. 흐름 바꿔보려고요 여러방향으로 시도해보긴 했는데, 아무래도 이부분은 다시 찍는편이 나을것 같습니다.
8. 02:02:201 (2,3) - 이거 잘 들어보시면 보컬이 1 / 3입니다.
9. 02:09:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 제가 보기엔 살짝 흐름이 꼬인듯 한데, 어찌 설명해야할지를 모르겠네요.
10. 02:54:843 - 뉴콤보 사이클이 살짝 이상한데, 음악 따라서 뉴콤보 넣어주세요
11. 03:25:787 (3) - 거리가 좀 짧아서 어색한데 210, 158로 옮기는건 어떤가요?
12. 03:36:022 (4) - 방향을 반대로 하는편이 더 치기 편할것 같습니다.
13. 03:45:220 (5,6,7) - 이런식으로 배치하는편이 흐름이 좋을듯 합니다.
14. 03:51:730 (3,4) - 위치를 바꿔보는건 어떤가요?
15. 04:24:852 (4) - 일관성을 위해 뉴콤보!
16. 04:37:871 (4) - 뉴콤보 잊어버리신듯 합니다
17. 04:43:638 (2) - 1 / 3 부분이니 뉴콤보, 사실 일관성을 위해서라면 추가하는편이 낫기도 하고요.
18. 05:01:928 (2,3) - 서로 위치를 바꾸는 편이 흐름이 좋습니다
19. 05:20:890 (1) - 휘슬하고 피니쉬 추가해주세요.

Underflow wrote:

Just quick look :3

[General]

1. 어째서인지 BG 사이즈 세로 크기가 2 모자라네요. 1366x768이 16:9입니다.

님이 2픽셀 갉아먹은거다암 ㅡㅡ

[Shining Gate]

1. 00:52:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 이 파트는 1 / 3음이 강한데, 한번 고려는 해보셨으면 하네요 1/3으로 직접 놔보시면 제가 왜그랬나 이해하실꺼같
2. 01:09:135 (2,3) - 이거 두개 사이의 거리가 살짝 먼듯한 느낌이 듭니다 No
3. 01:22:154 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - 진짜로 이거 리딩이 너무 힘듭니다 ^
4. 01:22:296 (3,2) - 클랩 넣어주는것도 나쁘진 않을듯 하네요 이미드가있
5. 01:27:956 (1) - 여기에 뉴콤보 넣을꺼면 그냥 01:28:239 (5)에 넣는게 낫지 않나 싶네요
6. 01:28:664 (8) - 72, 328로 이동하는편이 흐름은 더 좋다고 생각합니다. 엑스트라매직꼴나는거같아서 이번은 동선좀 부셔봤으요.
7. 01:41:258 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 제가 못하는건지는 모르겠는데, 일단 이 삼각형 패턴 흐름이 좋지 않습니다. 흐름 바꿔보려고요 여러방향으로 시도해보긴 했는데, 아무래도 이부분은 다시 찍는편이 나을것 같습니다. 마찬가지
8. 02:02:201 (2,3) - 이거 잘 들어보시면 보컬이 1 / 3입니다.
9. 02:09:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 제가 보기엔 살짝 흐름이 꼬인듯 한데, 어찌 설명해야할지를 모르겠네요.
10. 02:54:843 - 뉴콤보 사이클이 살짝 이상한데, 음악 따라서 뉴콤보 넣어주세요
11. 03:25:787 (3) - 거리가 좀 짧아서 어색한데 210, 158로 옮기는건 어떤가요?
12. 03:36:022 (4) - 방향을 반대로 하는편이 더 치기 편할것 같습니다. No, 동선
13. 03:45:220 (5,6,7) - 이런식으로 배치하는편이 흐름이 좋을듯 합니다.
14. 03:51:730 (3,4) - 위치를 바꿔보는건 어떤가요?
15. 04:24:852 (4) - 일관성을 위해 뉴콤보!
16. 04:37:871 (4) - 뉴콤보 잊어버리신듯 합니다
17. 04:43:638 (2) - 1 / 3 부분이니 뉴콤보, 사실 일관성을 위해서라면 추가하는편이 낫기도 하고요.
18. 05:01:928 (2,3) - 서로 위치를 바꾸는 편이 흐름이 좋습니다
19. 05:20:890 (1) - 휘슬하고 피니쉬 추가해주세요.

koreapenguin wrote:

님이 2픽셀 갉아먹은거다암 ㅡㅡ

1. ㅁㅊ AR 존나높네요 -2하셈 ㅡㅡ
2. 01:33:900 (4) - 여기 연타시작이니까 뉴콤 넣으세요
3. 01:44:867 (2) - 배치 제안해봅니다. 너무 갑작스러운 느낌도 있어서 위쪽에 배치하는편이 더 좋아요
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:55:904 (1) - 피아노 소리인데 드럼은 너무 안어울리는듯 그냥 소프트로 대체
5. 02:06:588 - 그래도 키아이타임인데 리듬따라서 여기도 노트 추가가 좋을듯요
6. 02:20:880 (1) - ㅁㅊ 자꾸 저기에서 미쓰뜨네요 재배치하셈 ㅡㅡ
7. 02:33:900 (6) - NC 이유는 스트림 시작이여서임
8. 05:19:758 (1) - 이것도 재배치하셈 ㅡㅡ

HabiHolic wrote:

아 개구찮다.

[Shining Gate]

1. ㅁㅊ AR 존나높네요 -2하셈 ㅡㅡ 플레이어들이랑 몇몇 BN들한테 물어봤는데 9.5가 딱 맵이랑 패턴, 곡등 고려해서 딱 알맞음
2. 01:33:900 (4) - 여기 연타시작이니까 뉴콤 넣으세요 팔로우포인트보이는게 먼거리에서 치기 좋음
3. 01:44:867 (2) - 배치 제안해봅니다. 너무 갑작스러운 느낌도 있어서 위쪽에 배치하는편이 더 좋아요 해봤는데 개인적으로 더 치기불편해지는거같, 시계방향으로 내려와서 다시 시계방향으로 꺾어 치는 지금이 훨좋음
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:55:904 (1) - 피아노 소리인데 드럼은 너무 안어울리는듯 그냥 소프트로 대체 ㅇㅋ
5. 02:06:588 - 그래도 키아이타임인데 리듬따라서 여기도 노트 추가가 좋을듯요 저기 아무소리도없 orz
6. 02:20:880 (1) - ㅁㅊ 자꾸 저기에서 미쓰뜨네요 재배치하셈 ㅡㅡ 곡의 피트하고 스트림 동선고려했을때 딱 좋음 미스뜨는건 ㅅㄾ
7. 02:33:900 (6) - NC 이유는 스트림 시작이여서임 여기도마찬가지 팔로우포인트보이는게좋음
8. 05:19:758 (1) - 이것도 재배치하셈 ㅡㅡ ㅡㅡ 위에하고 마찬가지

콜미백 ㅡㅡ

Sonnyc wrote:

ㅇ