1. Shining Gate (6.8 stars, 1548 notes)

Good Bye Mapping

Nozhomi wrote:

Heyo Magic Penguin <3 I'm here(for the worst mod ever).

- General :

1. According to THIS Web site, you can add Supernal Liberty (album name) to tag (and maybe other stuff I don't really know ;w; ).

- Shining Gate :

1. 00:43:664 (1) - CTRl+G no ? Because you'll improve flow with 00:43:239 (1) - and make a triangle pattern with 00:44:088 (2,3) - (also make spacing a little more coherent with the overall DS of this part).
2. 01:26:683 (2,3,4,5,6) - Should be better for flow if keep this clockwise you start with 01:26:117 (4,5,6) - . So CTRL+G 01:26:683 (2,3) - and 01:26:966 (4,6) - (if you like it ofc).
3. 02:03:617 (5) - I know this is your style and don't want to change it, but you just broke too much flow with this shape imo. All other on kiai are good but this one is not. Consider change it.
4. 02:51:941 (4,2) - Not perfectly stacked (not a big problem).
5. 02:39:418 (2) - I would (MAYBE) do a custom stack with 02:39:843 (4) - because I think it would improve flow.
6. 02:41:258 (1) - I know this could break your pattern but CTRL+G is MUCH better for the flow you created with 02:40:834 (4,5,6) - .
7. 02:51:941 (4,2) - Bad stack.
8. 04:06:942 (4,5,5) - ^

Small mod because I'm too bad to mod high difficult map ;w; hope it help you a little.
Mukyu~

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Hey \o/

Here's my mod

asdf - nazi or suggestion
asdf - important

General

1. What the ?! D: Pls disable countdown cuz at the beginning of the song is a spinner and the player will become confused imo
2. You didn't choose Combo Colours yet ;w; Lemme choose for you :
   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 0,128,192
   Combo2 : 0,64,128
   Combo3 : 128,0,255
   Combo4 : 128,0,128

3. The BG size is 1366x766 D: It should be 1366x768

Shining Gate

1. 00:31:069(1)- Why you not try a 2/1 slider and a 1/1 slider rhythm as you did at 00:28:805(1,2)- ? It will follow the instruments much better than before : http://puu.sh/gzGZF/1fcafad5a8.jpg I don't like using same rhythm at same music, becuz it's bored
2. 00:35:598(1,2)- You can improve this pattern like in this pic : http://puu.sh/gzH5Z/51de097679.jpg to improve the cursor movement and the playability.The current one makes the cursor movement having a weird movement D: i don't make bad flow pattern, even unnatural to play things
3. 00:38:428(3,4)- Same try to improve the pattern like here : http://puu.sh/gzHdN/0e50e0ffe8.jpg cuz the current one makes the cursor movement having a weird movement.The one improved will improve the cursor movement and the playability
4. 00:38:994(1,2,3,4,5,6,7)- Here you tried to make an isoscel triangle pattern ? It doesn't look so good imo try this : http://puu.sh/gzHkD/595a335dab.jpg It will looks more better than before and the circles will have the placement equal ;D
5. 00:41:258(1,2,3,4)- Try to improve this quadruplet pattern like here : http://puu.sh/gzHEf/14969717ad.jpg http://puu.sh/gzHG7/eb6309d86f.jpg to improve the cursor movement and the playability.The current one looks weird to me D:
6. 01:00:220(3,4)- Why you not make their placement equal ? Move both notes to 357|73 to make their placement equal and to avoid the overlaps with (1)- and (2)- which they're sliders i never think it's be problem also it doesn't effect anything
7. 01:19:183(4,5)- Try to improve the pattern for a good cursor movement and playability : http://puu.sh/gzHWN/1a547ae30b.jpg <- acute pattern ;D
8. 01:50:315(1)- Why you switched on the NC here ? D: I don't here new vocals so switch off the NC ;3 for readable
9. 01:53:569(1)- I think you should change the slider while slider's tail touch (4)- what means it's a bad overlap it's should be fine at high AR

Continue ~ ~ ~

VINXIS wrote:

lol sorry that my mod was so bad :')

here's a star lol

koreapenguin wrote:

Ohhh i just forgot to check.

1. 01:01:211 (4,5) - make them parallel like this will be more playable.
2. 01:21:164 (2) - I should say that this is really hard to read that it is 3/4 because the spacing is really like 1/2.
3. 01:22:437 (1,1) - I suggest to move this slider toward from the previous note, something like this because when I played, after I hit the note, my cursor move a bit toward so I think if you put that slider toward from note, player won't need to move forward to hit the slider? maybe the natural of human ?_?
4. 02:54:560 (6) - what about move to 80|80 or elsewhere? spacing is too big for calm part imo, strong begin at 02:54:701 (7).
5. 03:12:107 (2) - add finish.
6. 03:22:437 (3) - ^
7. 03:22:862 (5) - ^
8. 03:23:145 (1) - tail ^
9. 03:23:711 (4) - ^
10. 03:25:126 (5) - head ^
11. 03:25:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - need some NC to make them different imo, 03:25:409 (1,2,3,4) with 1/2 spacing and 03:26:259 (5,6) normal 1/2.
12. 03:26:966 (3,4) - add finish
13. 03:57:107 (4) - spread to two slider to emphasis the vocal?
14. 04:17:494 (1) - add finish.
15. 04:18:060 (3) - ^ ? somehow it fits.
16. 04:43:638 (2,3,4,5) - should snap to 1/8 imo.
17. 04:44:664 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - hmmm I think this is also wrong snap but I don't know the correct one? D: maybe my ears broke.
18. 05:00:796 (3,4) - what about stack these at somewhere else such as 452|340 to emphasis the strong beat on 05:01:079 (5,6) ?
19. 05:29:381 (3,4) - hmm is this a trap? I misread this at first >_> add some NC to make it looks different from 05:28:814 (1,2) ?

Chaoslitz wrote:

as requested, lets try, the first time I mod a app map ;~;

1. 00:32:201 (1) - flow should be better if you put this note more to the right seem already it's fine good
2. 00:40:126 (1,4) - not stacked completely
3. 00:43:664 (1) - try ctrl+g?
4. 00:49:890 (4,5) - ctrl+g this, flow will work better
5. 00:53:711 (1,2) - spacing here can be increased
6. 01:18:617 (1,2) - try a jump like 01:18:192 (1,2)? oh... yea i tried but it would be hard D: really so will keep for now
7. 01:38:286 - Add a note here, it feels empty in my opinion there is haven't anysounds
8. 02:19:607 (1,2) - you map the slider which make a leftward movement at the tail but you place the note on he right hand side, fix the flow
9. 02:36:164 (3,4) - ^
10. 02:38:994 (1,2) - ^, really not suggest this flow
11. 02:46:918 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it is not necessary to have a larger ds than 02:45:786 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) in this stream eh... why D: i followed song's up down so it should be fine
12. 02:54:418 (5,6) - decreasing the spacing here, as the vocal is soft here listen carefully the piano's fit
13. 03:21:447 (7) - NC
14. 03:33:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the movement is this jump is not really good, try switching 7 and 8, then 03:34:466 (1,2,3,4) - swtich 1,2 and 3,4
15. 03:46:352 (1,2) - try this:
16. 03:58:805 (5,6) - same as before
17. 04:11:683 (1,2) - ^
18. 04:21:173 (2) - use 1/2 instead
19. 05:29:381 (3,4) - decreasing spacing here, as it may mislead players for a similar ds as 05:28:814 (1,2)

shoot star o/
I hope it helps ;w;

Xinely wrote:

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  Shining Gate

1. personally i feel AR 9,5 a little bit fast but im not sure 100% since you know i cant play Extra, hmm how about try 9,3 or 9,4 instead? 9.5 is fit up at this song and even patterns
2. well since you mapped the first time with spinner, imo this break is too long and i was like "aaaa so long to wait" to wait the next spinner, how about map 00:17:485 - until 00:21:871 - with weak rhythm and normal spacing for this? imo it will reduce the feel of boring here
3. 00:25:692 (1,2,3,4) - in side of modder i feel this stream's flow feels smoother if you curve these circles a little bit curvy to follow how the curve for the next circles, well im not sure 100% again since i cant play Extra but i'd say try http://puu.sh/gCCEA.jpg i think it's fine already
4. 00:28:664 (9,10) - since the previous triplet have the movements (spacing) here, i'd say to stack these circles on 00:28:805 (1) - 's head to played better but i guess this is my taste again :/
5. 00:30:786 (10) - NC this circle for the increase spacing on stream? also i feel the combo is kinda long it's fine too
6. 00:31:494 (2,4) - nazi, it'd be neater if you stack them lol current more readable
7. 00:32:626 (5) - hmm since the 00:32:768 (6) - violin's sound is loud and imo it needs jump to emphasize it, how about move (5) circle to 152,352 for it?
8. 00:33:758 (2,3) - sorry if im wrong but i hear the drums sound at 1/3 instead of 1/2 here (00:33:711 - and 00:33:805 - )
9. 00:36:588 (6) - nazi, how about to make better triangle for 00:36:588 (6,1,2) - with move (6) to 328,128? it looks better imo >< it's same i think fine
10. 00:43:664 (1) - actually according the 00:42:390 (1,1) - 's pattern, i'd say to ctrl+G this slider to keep the consistent flow movement, if you agree so you can move 00:44:088 (2) - to 248,360
11. 00:52:579 (1,2,3) - just notice to you if you follow the drums, so 1/2 is right for this time but if you want to follow piano instead, it snapped on 1/3. i'd say to follow piano more since it sounds quite strong in this time but that's up to you ~
12. 00:53:499 (6) - somehow i feel overmapped here since i cant hear music on blue tick, how about remove this?
13. 01:01:352 (5) - im sure i hear a cymbal music even it's weak here, how about add finish to emphasize it?
14. 01:02:697 (9) - same as 00:53:499 (6) -
15. 01:03:900 (6) - imo the jump on (1) should be higher than (5) to (6) because the cymbal, for that how about move this circle to 128,152?
16. 01:15:079 (1) - same as 01:01:352 (5) -
17. 01:18:687 (2) - on 01:18:834 - it has a weak drum sound, how about shorter this slider until that blue tick and add note on next whitetick? it would be make harder for extra diff imo xD
18. 01:22:154 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - skystar?! lol
19. 01:37:154 (2) - tbh since the circle placed on (3)'s left and the flow is moving to rightward after this circle, the flow feels not really natural for me, how about move this circle to 500,336 instead? at least feels better for me hum, it's too already good flow
20. 01:44:654 (1) - since the cymbal sounds at redtick, you have to map it with circle imo to emphasize how the cymbal sounds strong, so replace this slider with 2 circles?
21. 01:51:541 (2,3) - somehow i cant hear any music on them too, probably remove them? they look kinda overmapped in my sight
22. 01:53:286 (3) - somehow i feel this jump is overjumping here, hmm probably nerf this a bit with stack on 01:52:201 (3) - ?
23. 01:55:834 (8) - the cymbal sounds so strong at this time so how about make the jump a little bit higher again? i guess move 392,296 feels nicely here
24. 01:58:168 (3) - same as 01:51:541 (2,3) -
25. 02:02:201 (2) - if you follow the vocal, the slider should be end in blue tick 02:02:414 - , somehow end in whitetick feels weird for me
26. 02:19:607 (1) - somehow the head feels so empty w/o any hitsound here, how about add finish or whistle for this one?
27. 02:47:909 (3) - ^
28. 02:48:334 (1) - finish on head? somehow i hear a cymbal sound even weak cymbal here, just like 01:09:418 (1) -
29. 03:14:654 (3,4) - somehow if i try to play i'd read the flow from (3) was going to downward instead of leftward, hmm how about tweak 03:14:654 (3,4,5,6) - become https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2896319 ?
30. 03:36:164 (5) - how about NC this to give the warn of 1/4 jump? displaying follow point is better
31. 04:37:871 (4) - hmm i hear nothing in blue tick (or i'd say vocal breathe only) and i hear the vocal on 04:38:154 - actually.. , better to end the slider at whitetick imo
32. 04:45:135 (3) - same as 01:51:541 (2,3) -
33. 04:51:456 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i hope you can reduce the spacings since tbh i dont feel the different relax part's jumps between jumps on 04:52:588 (1,2,3) - (strong music part) already jumps are clam, i guess
34. 05:29:381 (3,4) - you should decrease the spacing on this or incerase spacing of 05:29:522 (4,5) - since 3 to 4 and 4 to 5 have different gap (1/2 with 1/1) that spacings look quite make missread for the first players ><
35. 05:31:362 (4) - i hear nothing in blue tick and i hear piano on 05:31:786 - so better to end the slider at redtick imo

great evil map!
good luck moepenguin <3

Edit : 500th kudosu www

P A N wrote:

XINELY NINJA'D ME

I will mention the thing that different with xinely then >_>

1. 01:01:211 (4,5) - make them parallel like this will be more playable. actually it's playable
2. 01:21:164 (2) - I should say that this is really hard to read that it is 3/4 because the spacing is really like 1/2.
3. 01:22:437 (1,1) - I suggest to move this slider toward from the previous note, something like this because when I played, after I hit the note, my cursor move a bit toward so I think if you put that slider toward from note, player won't need to move forward to hit the slider? maybe the natural of human ?_? it would be fine, becuz app map :3
4. 02:54:560 (6) - what about move to 80|80 or elsewhere? spacing is too big for calm part imo, strong begin at 02:54:701 (7). i followed piano's up, down
5. 03:12:107 (2) - add finish.
6. 03:22:437 (3) - ^
7. 03:22:862 (5) - ^
8. 03:23:145 (1) - tail ^
9. 03:23:711 (4) - ^
10. 03:25:126 (5) - head ^
11. 03:25:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - need some NC to make them different imo, 03:25:409 (1,2,3,4) with 1/2 spacing and 03:26:259 (5,6) normal 1/2.
12. 03:26:966 (3,4) - add finish
13. 03:57:107 (4) - spread to two slider to emphasis the vocal?
14. 04:17:494 (1) - add finish.
15. 04:18:060 (3) - ^ ? somehow it fits.
16. 04:43:638 (2,3,4,5) - should snap to 1/8 imo. Good you're right
17. 04:44:664 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - hmmm I think this is also wrong snap but I don't know the correct one? D: maybe my ears broke.
18. 05:00:796 (3,4) - what about stack these at somewhere else such as 452|340 to emphasis the strong beat on 05:01:079 (5,6) ?
19. 05:29:381 (3,4) - hmm is this a trap? I misread this at first >_> add some NC to make it looks different from 05:28:814 (1,2) ?

Good Luck D

Chaoslitz wrote:

please at least respond to my mod

:<

1. 00:26:258 (1) - 여기도 뉴콤?
2. 00:43:664 (1) - ctrl+g 하는게 더 좋아보이는데
3. 01:38:286 - 보컬 들리는데 노트 비우는것보단 채우는게 더 좋다고 생각해요.
4. 01:38:994 (1) - 이거 테일 01:37:862 (1) - 이거 헤드랑 스텍 잘 안된거같음
5. 02:03:900 (1) - 위랑 똑같이 테일 02:03:334 (3) - 이거랑 조금 엇나간거같음
6. 04:08:145 (5) - 여놈도 스텍