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roflninja
Hi,
everything is fine for me, so just a few suggestions

[shikai]
00:08:395 (1) - no new combo?

[bankai]
00:23:304 (6) - new combo?
00:48:031 (7) - ^
01:16:758 (7) - stack with (6)'s end a bit better?

awsome map, go get this ranked :)
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

roflninja wrote:

Hi,
everything is fine for me, so just a few suggestions

[shikai]
00:08:395 (1) - no new combo? nah :D

[bankai]
00:23:304 (6) - new combo? aye
00:48:031 (7) - ^ nah, think it's better this way to follow the rythm and have a new combo here when rythm changes (00:50:576)
01:16:758 (7) - stack with (6)'s end a bit better? done^^

awsome map, go get this ranked :)
thanks for mods and star :D
Sakura
[osz File Scan!]
Your missing Approach Circle for the hit circles.

[Hollow]
00:00:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think it'd be better if you followed the lyrics here rather than the instruments.
00:18:576 (1) - Dont see what's this following

[Bankai]
Fine

[Shikai]
Fine

[Kuro Shikai]
Fine

Ok looks good, have a star
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

Sakura301 wrote:

[osz File Scan!]
Your missing Approach Circle for the hit circles. oh, you mean for the skinning part? i don't want to change it^^

[Hollow]
00:00:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think it'd be better if you followed the lyrics here rather than the instruments. oh nues :s
00:18:576 (1) - Dont see what's this following it's just some kind of a small 'intro' for the rythm ^^

[Bankai]
Fine

[Shikai]
Fine

[Kuro Shikai]
Fine

Ok looks good, have a star

Thanks <3
Hellzero
Kuro Shikai
00:31:849 -circle?
Shikai
00:45:304 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing
Bankai
00:07:667 (4,6) - 1 gird down
00:05:849 (6) - spacing
00:41:122 (4,5,6,7) - 1 gird right

00:54:758 (1) - 2 gird left?
Hollow
Fine

Star~
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

Hellzero wrote:

Shikai
00:45:304 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing ---fixed
Bankai
00:07:667 (4,6) - 1 gird down
00:05:849 (6) - spacing ---nah, that little pixels won't disturb while playing ;)
00:41:122 (4,5,6,7) - 1 gird right[/color] ---fixed
00:54:758 (1) - 2 gird left? ---fixed
Hollow
Fine

Star~
Thankies <3
Leorda
HEI

[Kuro Shikai]
THE BG IS KAWAII DESU YO!!!!!!!

00:20:940 (5) - New combo, it's long for new combo
00:31:304 (1) - This slider is too short for easy diff
00:41:122 (4) - New combo, it's long for new combo
00:43:304 (B) - The break are too short, remove it?
01:12:758 (B) - ^
01:16:031 (5) - New combo, it's long for new combo


[Shikai]
00:07:667 (2) - Move 1 grid up?
01:02:940 (5) - New combo?

[Bankai]
Banzaiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!

00:24:758 (6) - Add finish at end?
00:48:031 (7) - New combo?
00:55:667 (6) - ^

[Hollow]
Those BG are very scary, like Kecco

00:55:667 (6) - New combo?
01:11:667 (1) - Move forward to red tick and cut short?
01:17:122 (1) - ^

Good song
STAR
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

Leorda wrote:

[Shikai]
00:07:667 (2) - Move 1 grid up? aye~
01:02:940 (5) - New combo? aye~

[Bankai]
Banzaiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!

00:24:758 (6) - Add finish at end? nah
00:48:031 (7) - New combo? aye~
00:55:667 (6) - ^ nah

[Hollow]
Those BG are very scary, like Kecco

00:55:667 (6) - New combo? nah
01:11:667 (1) - Move forward to red tick and cut short? aye~
01:17:122 (1) - ^ aye~

Good song
STAR
Thx for mod -^.^-
lovhin456
Hi ~

General;
- Bleach ~ I like this song (:
- Ehhh...your BGs look very random, like first you have rukia, then kon, then urahara ?? and well ichigo-hollow is the only in my opinion that fits the diff name...
- Make spinner approach circle other color ??
- The colors you use for the circles (except for the third color) are a bit too light and soft...make them a bit darker ??


Kuro Shikai;
- Is a guest diff right ?? I think the name should be Kuro's Shikai
- 00:11:122 >> should start at 00:10:940 but end at the same spot
- 00:19:485 (1-7) >> select all notes, then move (1) to 00:19:667, the other notes should move when you move (1) too, like this:


Also new combo to (5) because 7 notes in a row of the same combo is too much for easy
- 00:22:031 >> move to 00:22:213 and remove a repeat
- 00:24:031 >> remove a repeat
- 00:31:304 >> end at 00:31:667
- 00:41:485 >> new combo
- 01:08:758 (1)(2) >> curve this better
- 01:16:031 >> new combo
- 01:17:485 >> new combo
- 01:23:485 >> delete this spinner ??

Shikai;
- Is okk ~

* Sorry I can't really mod hard or insane :(
* Star ~
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi ~

General;
- Bleach ~ I like this song (:
- Ehhh...your BGs look very random, like first you have rukia, then kon, then urahara ?? and well ichigo-hollow is the only in my opinion that fits the diff name... BGs got nothin' to do with the diff names^^
- Make spinner approach circle other color ?? nope
- The colors you use for the circles (except for the third color) are a bit too light and soft...make them a bit darker ?? ^

Kuro Shikai;
- Is a guest diff right ?? I think the name should be Kuro's Shikai named by himself. so...
thx 4 mods^^

so, looks like Kuro is on holiday or something. I checked your suggestions for him:

- 00:11:122 >> should start at 00:10:940 but end at the same spot nah
- 00:19:485 (1-7) >> select all notes, then move (1) to 00:19:667, the other notes should move when you move (1) too, like this[...]
Also new combo to (5) because 7 notes in a row of the same combo is too much for easy nah, I think he just wants to start with a separate rythm based on the vocals instead of the original rythm.
- 00:22:031 >> move to 00:22:213 and remove a repeat nah, sounds ugly
- 00:24:031 >> remove a repeat nah, doesn't fit the vocals which this one is following then
- 00:31:304 >> end at 00:31:667 nah, I think he wants to follow the vocals
- 00:41:485 >> new combo nah, thats 1 vocal stream. it's irritating with 2 combos here.
- 01:08:758 (1)(2) >> curve this better *leave it to Kuro when he's back again*
- 01:16:031 >> new combo nah, again this is 1 vocal stream.
- 01:17:485 >> new combo ^
- 01:23:485 >> delete this spinner ?? *leave it to Kuro when he's back again*
Derekku
[General]
*Please add an approachcircle to the folder (even if it's the default one).
*I always recommend placing the preview point slightly before where you want it to account for the song selection fade-in. The red tick before the chorus (54031ms) should sound better.
*It's a bit strange that each diff uses the same slider velocity... (usually the velocity gets faster as the difficulties get harder) But it's fine, I suppose.

[Kuro Shikai]
*Perhaps raise the Overall Difficulty/Drain a tick or two each?
*Try to avoid mapping primarily on the red ticks for the easiest difficulty. They can be very unpredictable/confusing to newbies. Having said that...
00:19:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make these sliders or map on the white ticks.
00:30:031 (4,5) - perhaps make this a slider as well
*I really would have liked more sliders throughout this diff. It's a fast paced song, so following the lyrics near-100% is a bit too crazy for the easiest difficulty...

[Shikai]
*Same difficulty settings as the easiest diff? Raise OD/Drain at least a few ticks each...

[Bankai]
*Raise the OD like... 4 ticks. =x

[Hollow]
01:05:122 (1) - I suggest starting this on the previous blue tick and extending to give the player more time to react (since it's a short spinner and it caught me off-guard while testing)
01:17:122 - expected a note here

Not bad for one of your first maps, but you'll get better with time. (:
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

Derekku wrote:

[General]
*Please add an approachcircle to the folder (even if it's the default one). added one
*I always recommend placing the preview point slightly before where you want it to account for the song selection fade-in. The red tick before the chorus (54031ms) should sound better. chAngEd
*It's a bit strange that each diff uses the same slider velocity... (usually the velocity gets faster as the difficulties get harder) But it's fine, I suppose. left it as it is

[Kuro Shikai]
*Perhaps raise the Overall Difficulty/Drain a tick or two each? left it as it is
*Try to avoid mapping primarily on the red ticks for the easiest difficulty. They can be very unpredictable/confusing to newbies. Having said that...
00:19:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make these sliders or map on the white ticks. placed on white ticks now ^^
00:30:031 (4,5) - perhaps make this a slider as well left it as it is
*I really would have liked more sliders throughout this diff. It's a fast paced song, so following the lyrics near-100% is a bit too crazy for the easiest difficulty...

[Shikai]
*Same difficulty settings as the easiest diff? Raise OD/Drain at least a few ticks each... chAngEd :D

[Bankai]
*Raise the OD like... 4 ticks. =x chAngEd :D

[Hollow]
01:05:122 (1) - I suggest starting this on the previous blue tick and extending to give the player more time to react (since it's a short spinner and it caught me off-guard while testing) chAngEd
01:17:122 - expected a note here just your imagination *chAngEd

Not bad for one of your first maps, but you'll get better with time. (: thankies :3
Updated~!
Kuroneko-sHerald
Sorry for the delay, but I was on holiday :P

Hellzero wrote:

Kuro Shikai
00:31:849 -circle? No.

Leorda wrote:

[Kuro Shikai]
THE BG IS KAWAII DESU YO!!!!!!!

00:20:940 (5) - New combo, it's long for new combo Follows the vocal, so I prefer to not change.
00:31:304 (1) - This slider is too short for easy diff Nah...
00:41:122 (4) - New combo, it's long for new combo Follows the vocal, so I prefer to not change.
00:43:304 (B) - The break are too short, remove it? No.
01:12:758 (B) - ^ No.
01:16:031 (5) - New combo, it's long for new combo Follows the vocal, so I prefer to not change.

lovhin456 wrote:

Kuro Shikai;
- 00:11:122 >> should start at 00:10:940 but end at the same spot No.
- 00:19:485 (1-7) >> select all notes, then move (1) to 00:19:667, the other notes should move when you move (1) too. No, because in that way it doesn't follow the vocal.
Also new combo to (5) because 7 notes in a row of the same combo is too much for easy. I prefer to not change it.
- 00:22:031 >> move to 00:22:213 and remove a repeat No.
- 00:24:031 >> remove a repeat No.
- 00:31:304 >> end at 00:31:667 No.
- 00:41:485 >> new combo No.
- 01:08:758 (1)(2) >> curve this better Done.
- 01:16:031 >> new combo No.
- 01:17:485 >> new combo No.
- 01:23:485 >> delete this spinner ?? No.

Derekku wrote:

[Kuro Shikai]
*Perhaps raise the Overall Difficulty/Drain a tick or two each? No, as stated by Sekuyi.
*Try to avoid mapping primarily on the red ticks for the easiest difficulty. They can be very unpredictable/confusing to newbies. Having said that... Usually I map in the way you say, but for this song I've prefer to map in this other way.
00:19:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make these sliders or map on the white ticks. Made sliders.
00:30:031 (4,5) - perhaps make this a slider as well No.
*I really would have liked more sliders throughout this diff. It's a fast paced song, so following the lyrics near-100% is a bit too crazy for the easiest difficulty... Think that "Shikai" was the easiest diff before :P
Download: miwa - chAngE (TV Size) (Sekuyi) [Kuro Shikai].osu
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
Changed :3
Kuroneko-sHerald
I've made some pattern change. Please update it and sorry for the bother :(

Download: miwa - chAngE (TV Size) (Sekuyi) [Kuro Shikai].osu
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
Nevermind, changed it ^^
deepsea
._.
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
:3 I got a response, nice ~^.^~
<3 ya
Hitsugaya936
star
La Cataline
*shoots a star* (:
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
bubble gone ._. ?
Kuroneko-sHerald

Sekuyi wrote:

bubble gone ._. ?
Did you edit the first post of this thread or updated the map after the bubble?
Otherwise it's strange :o
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
I downloaded osu on my notebook and couldn't download this beatmap without getting an error "Cannot import beatmap" or something like that. So I reupped the files and then it worked.

Also, there were strange squares in my 1st post yesterday, so I deleted them and wrote "Meow..." instead.

Does this pop bubbles?...no way man... ._. I didn't change even one 1 to 0 or 0 to 1 in the files >.<
Kuroneko-sHerald

Sekuyi wrote:

I downloaded osu on my notebook and couldn't download this beatmap without getting an error "Cannot import beatmap" or something like that. So I reupped the files and then it worked.

Also, there were strange squares in my 1st post yesterday, so I deleted them and wrote "Meow..." instead.

Does this pop bubbles?...no way man... ._. I didn't change even one 1 to 0 or 0 to 1 in the files >.<
Any changes to anything will pop your bubble, both if you edit your post or if you reupload your map (even if you didn't change a thing) :o
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
Can I read that somewhere? Also some other info which might happen if I do anything to a bubbled/ranked map?
It actually would suck pretty much if it gets ranked, when one kind person bubble it again, I'd change something in the first post and *bang* begone from ranking and back to pending oO I understand why it is this way, but please, sticky it somewhere so new mappers'll know it :?
sebaviteh
Nice beatmap
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
Thanks.
Changed the speed of approach circle and deleted an unnecessary note in [Hollow].
James2250
Seeing as it isn't bubbled currently I will mod it
Source is in caps for a reason right?

-Kiai time should be the same on every difficulty
-Odd having every difficulty have the same velocity

Kuro Shikai:
AR/Overall Diff + 1
End the kiai time on the white tick at 00:59:667 like all the other difficulties, not a blue tick

Shikai:
AR/Overall Diff +1 at least
00:24:395 (3) - new combo to match others
00:28:758 (3) - ^
00:36:758 (8) - I would align this with 6, looks odd atm
01:00:031 (1,2) - endpoints could be stacked better

Bankai:
00:28:395 (4) - new combo to match others
00:33:849 (8) - stack on 4?
00:36:758 (8) - align with 6
00:40:031 (1,3) - align

Hollow:
looks good

*star*
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

James2250 wrote:

Seeing as it isn't bubbled currently I will mod it
Source is in caps for a reason right? ye, was in discussion and we left it in caps then

-Kiai time should be the same on every difficulty
-Odd having every difficulty have the same velocity

Kuro Shikai:
AR/Overall Diff + 1
End the kiai time on the white tick at 00:59:667 like all the other difficulties, not a blue tick

Shikai:
AR/Overall Diff +1 at least changed
00:24:395 (3) - new combo to match others nah
00:28:758 (3) - ^
00:36:758 (8) - I would align this with 6, looks odd atm nah, only the score is visible on the left when playing
01:00:031 (1,2) - endpoints could be stacked better changed

Bankai:
00:28:395 (4) - new combo to match others changed
00:33:849 (8) - stack on 4? nope
00:36:758 (8) - align with 6 nope, as stated before, you'll only see the score and not the note when playing. you'll still see it when editing... use play mode instead of edit mode ;)
00:40:031 (1,3) - align fixed

Hollow:
looks good

*star*
thanks for mod. just waiting for neko's response to upload the changed maps.

//edit:
the kiai is ok in kuro's map. it's better to place it right after the last note in kiai than place the kiai end exactly on the last note. as you can see in my diffs, i placed the kiai ends right on the first note of the new combo. so kiai ends exactly when the new combo starts.
regarding the OA diff: it's an easy map and should stay this way. so i don't think he'll change.

uploaded~
Kuroneko-sHerald

James2250 wrote:

Kuro Shikai:
AR/Overall Diff + 1 AR no, OD yes.
End the kiai time on the white tick at 00:59:667 like all the other difficulties, not a blue tick I don't think that someone will ever notice it during play. Btw, I can put it at the white tick at 01:00:031 - , that is the end of the kiai in all the other difficulties.
Download: miwa - chAngE (TV Size) (Sekuyi) [Kuro Shikai].osu
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
uploaded~
ElecoR
star☆~~
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
Waiting for further modding...
Nose, I are waiting for BAT <.<'
Joorgeee
Good map
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
6 months later, a new opening is already out. Guess what, I really had the idea to create some maps for the new one. But seeing this maps here after 6 months still in pending makes me sad and immediately changes my opinion... :|
Becca
this map rawkz.
Mesme
Why this map doesn't ranked that it is over 40SP !? :(
Star for you.
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
:|

No smiley sleeping? Hm...
deepsea
I am still the only bat checked this or did I miss something?>_>

EDIT:James2250 reminds 320 kbps mp3 ahhhhhhh
Fix this and contact me.
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

deepsea wrote:

I am still the only bat checked this or did I miss something?>_>
looks like it... I also wrote 4 other BATs a pm in the last 7 months - no response. Won't name them to not blame them...
But it kinda really su....

deepsea wrote:

EDIT:James2250 reminds 320 kbps mp3 ahhhhhhh
Fix this and contact me.
fixed! and you've got a pm :)

cheers,
~Sekuyi
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