mekadon95 wrote:

Sorry for late mod

SPOILER

[Shikai]
00:02:576 (4) - Align with (2) done
00:08:395 (1) - Align with (2) done
00:29:849 (5) - New combo
00:37:849 (3,5) - Doesn't look uniform, change the patterns
00:40:758 (3,5) - ^
00:45:304 (1) - 1st and 2nd slider point isn't same as the others check with the vocals. it's fine ^^
00:57:122 (1,6) - Align together
00:58:576 (5) - New combo
01:02:940 (5) - ^
01:07:304 (2) - Maybe..... make it 90-degree cclockwise than the prev. one.
[Bankai]
General-Change the colors, it seems hard to read, like Bad Apple!! hard to read like Bad Apple? you mean Ephemeral's? it's perfect to read with black & white in perfect contrast.
00:45:304 (1) - same as [Shinkai] (see Shikai)
00:58:576 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Ugly patterns
[Hollow]
00:01:485 (7,1) - Align different combo, so it has to be played different by the player. so, no.
00:01:667 (8,2) - ^ ^
00:51:849 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Add jumpsi'm not a fan of jumps in combos. i only use them for the beginning of new combos.

mekadon95 wrote:

[Kuro Shikai]
00:19:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Change hitsounds in some parts of it. Suggestion: Normal, clap, normal, clap, etc. Done.
00:40:031 (1~8) - Combo is too long. New combo at 00:41:485 (5) No.
All kiai time- 2x speed seems better tbh It's easy, so I won't change it.

Slanox wrote:

Hello,

[Shikai]

- 00:06:213(1) : Spacing. distance snap is active and placed it there. should be ok?
- 00:07:667(2) : ^ ^
- 00:08:395(1) : ^ ^
- 00:08:758(2) : ^ ^
- 00:09:849(3) : New combo ? ok~
- 01:00:031 to 01:04:576 : Spacing. distance snap is active and placed it there. should be ok?
- 01:07:304(2) : ^ ^

[Bankai]

- 01:25:667 to 01:28:758 : Spacing. distance snap is active and placed it there. should be ok?

[Hollow]

Good !


Good map & song !
Get my star !

roflninja wrote:

Hi,
everything is fine for me, so just a few suggestions

[shikai]
00:08:395 (1) - no new combo? nah

[bankai]
00:23:304 (6) - new combo? aye
00:48:031 (7) - ^ nah, think it's better this way to follow the rythm and have a new combo here when rythm changes (00:50:576)
01:16:758 (7) - stack with (6)'s end a bit better? done^^

awsome map, go get this ranked

Sakura301 wrote:

[osz File Scan!]
Your missing Approach Circle for the hit circles. oh, you mean for the skinning part? i don't want to change it^^

[Hollow]
00:00:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think it'd be better if you followed the lyrics here rather than the instruments. oh nues :s
00:18:576 (1) - Dont see what's this following it's just some kind of a small 'intro' for the rythm ^^

[Bankai]
Fine

[Shikai]
Fine

[Kuro Shikai]
Fine

Ok looks good, have a star

Hellzero wrote:

Shikai
00:45:304 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing ---fixed
Bankai
00:07:667 (4,6) - 1 gird down
00:05:849 (6) - spacing ---nah, that little pixels won't disturb while playing
00:41:122 (4,5,6,7) - 1 gird right[/color] ---fixed
00:54:758 (1) - 2 gird left? ---fixed
Hollow
Fine

Star~

Leorda wrote:

[Shikai]
00:07:667 (2) - Move 1 grid up? aye~
01:02:940 (5) - New combo? aye~

[Bankai]
Banzaiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!

00:24:758 (6) - Add finish at end? nah
00:48:031 (7) - New combo? aye~
00:55:667 (6) - ^ nah

[Hollow]
Those BG are very scary, like Kecco

00:55:667 (6) - New combo? nah
01:11:667 (1) - Move forward to red tick and cut short? aye~
01:17:122 (1) - ^ aye~

Good song
STAR

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi ~

General;
- Bleach ~ I like this song (:
- Ehhh...your BGs look very random, like first you have rukia, then kon, then urahara ?? and well ichigo-hollow is the only in my opinion that fits the diff name... BGs got nothin' to do with the diff names^^
- Make spinner approach circle other color ?? nope
- The colors you use for the circles (except for the third color) are a bit too light and soft...make them a bit darker ?? ^

Kuro Shikai;
- Is a guest diff right ?? I think the name should be Kuro's Shikai named by himself. so...

- 00:11:122 >> should start at 00:10:940 but end at the same spot nah
- 00:19:485 (1-7) >> select all notes, then move (1) to 00:19:667, the other notes should move when you move (1) too, like this[...]
Also new combo to (5) because 7 notes in a row of the same combo is too much for easy nah, I think he just wants to start with a separate rythm based on the vocals instead of the original rythm.
- 00:22:031 >> move to 00:22:213 and remove a repeat nah, sounds ugly
- 00:24:031 >> remove a repeat nah, doesn't fit the vocals which this one is following then
- 00:31:304 >> end at 00:31:667 nah, I think he wants to follow the vocals
- 00:41:485 >> new combo nah, thats 1 vocal stream. it's irritating with 2 combos here.
- 01:08:758 (1)(2) >> curve this better *leave it to Kuro when he's back again*
- 01:16:031 >> new combo nah, again this is 1 vocal stream.
- 01:17:485 >> new combo ^
- 01:23:485 >> delete this spinner ?? *leave it to Kuro when he's back again*

Derekku wrote:

[General]
*Please add an approachcircle to the folder (even if it's the default one). added one
*I always recommend placing the preview point slightly before where you want it to account for the song selection fade-in. The red tick before the chorus (54031ms) should sound better. chAngEd
*It's a bit strange that each diff uses the same slider velocity... (usually the velocity gets faster as the difficulties get harder) But it's fine, I suppose. left it as it is

[Kuro Shikai]
*Perhaps raise the Overall Difficulty/Drain a tick or two each? left it as it is
*Try to avoid mapping primarily on the red ticks for the easiest difficulty. They can be very unpredictable/confusing to newbies. Having said that...
00:19:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make these sliders or map on the white ticks. placed on white ticks now ^^
00:30:031 (4,5) - perhaps make this a slider as well left it as it is
*I really would have liked more sliders throughout this diff. It's a fast paced song, so following the lyrics near-100% is a bit too crazy for the easiest difficulty...

[Shikai]
*Same difficulty settings as the easiest diff? Raise OD/Drain at least a few ticks each... chAngEd

[Bankai]
*Raise the OD like... 4 ticks. =x chAngEd

[Hollow]
01:05:122 (1) - I suggest starting this on the previous blue tick and extending to give the player more time to react (since it's a short spinner and it caught me off-guard while testing) chAngEd
01:17:122 - expected a note here just your imagination *chAngEd

Not bad for one of your first maps, but you'll get better with time. (: thankies :3

Hellzero wrote:

Kuro Shikai
00:31:849 -circle? No.

Leorda wrote:

[Kuro Shikai]
THE BG IS KAWAII DESU YO!!!!!!!

00:20:940 (5) - New combo, it's long for new combo Follows the vocal, so I prefer to not change.
00:31:304 (1) - This slider is too short for easy diff Nah...
00:41:122 (4) - New combo, it's long for new combo Follows the vocal, so I prefer to not change.
00:43:304 (B) - The break are too short, remove it? No.
01:12:758 (B) - ^ No.
01:16:031 (5) - New combo, it's long for new combo Follows the vocal, so I prefer to not change.

lovhin456 wrote:

Kuro Shikai;
- 00:11:122 >> should start at 00:10:940 but end at the same spot No.
- 00:19:485 (1-7) >> select all notes, then move (1) to 00:19:667, the other notes should move when you move (1) too. No, because in that way it doesn't follow the vocal.
Also new combo to (5) because 7 notes in a row of the same combo is too much for easy. I prefer to not change it.
- 00:22:031 >> move to 00:22:213 and remove a repeat No.
- 00:24:031 >> remove a repeat No.
- 00:31:304 >> end at 00:31:667 No.
- 00:41:485 >> new combo No.
- 01:08:758 (1)(2) >> curve this better Done.
- 01:16:031 >> new combo No.
- 01:17:485 >> new combo No.
- 01:23:485 >> delete this spinner ?? No.

Derekku wrote:

[Kuro Shikai]
*Perhaps raise the Overall Difficulty/Drain a tick or two each? No, as stated by Sekuyi.
*Try to avoid mapping primarily on the red ticks for the easiest difficulty. They can be very unpredictable/confusing to newbies. Having said that... Usually I map in the way you say, but for this song I've prefer to map in this other way.
00:19:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make these sliders or map on the white ticks. Made sliders.
00:30:031 (4,5) - perhaps make this a slider as well No.
*I really would have liked more sliders throughout this diff. It's a fast paced song, so following the lyrics near-100% is a bit too crazy for the easiest difficulty... Think that "Shikai" was the easiest diff before

Sekuyi wrote:

bubble gone ._. ?

Sekuyi wrote:

I downloaded osu on my notebook and couldn't download this beatmap without getting an error "Cannot import beatmap" or something like that. So I reupped the files and then it worked.

Also, there were strange squares in my 1st post yesterday, so I deleted them and wrote "Meow..." instead.

Does this pop bubbles?...no way man... ._. I didn't change even one 1 to 0 or 0 to 1 in the files >.<

James2250 wrote:

Seeing as it isn't bubbled currently I will mod it
Source is in caps for a reason right? ye, was in discussion and we left it in caps then

-Kiai time should be the same on every difficulty
-Odd having every difficulty have the same velocity

Kuro Shikai:
AR/Overall Diff + 1
End the kiai time on the white tick at 00:59:667 like all the other difficulties, not a blue tick

Shikai:
AR/Overall Diff +1 at least changed
00:24:395 (3) - new combo to match others nah
00:28:758 (3) - ^
00:36:758 (8) - I would align this with 6, looks odd atm nah, only the score is visible on the left when playing
01:00:031 (1,2) - endpoints could be stacked better changed

Bankai:
00:28:395 (4) - new combo to match others changed
00:33:849 (8) - stack on 4? nope
00:36:758 (8) - align with 6 nope, as stated before, you'll only see the score and not the note when playing. you'll still see it when editing... use play mode instead of edit mode
00:40:031 (1,3) - align fixed

Hollow:
looks good

*star*

James2250 wrote:

Kuro Shikai:
AR/Overall Diff + 1 AR no, OD yes.
End the kiai time on the white tick at 00:59:667 like all the other difficulties, not a blue tick I don't think that someone will ever notice it during play. Btw, I can put it at the white tick at 01:00:031 - , that is the end of the kiai in all the other difficulties.