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Ipas
Thanks :D
meii18
Here's my mod
asdf - nazi or suggestion
asdf - unrankable issue

General
  1. Where's the background ? Maybe the BG is missed . Open song's folder , take the BG from your map's folder and then insert it in editor
  2. Combo3 is pureblack which is unrankable . Instead use this colour :
    Combo3 : 128,0,0
    and for Combo1 and Combo2 why you not use these colours :
    Combo1 : 0,128,192
    Combo2 : 128,128,192
    It will be more easier to player find objects during FL because the colours are brighter
  3. You have some unused hitsounds . Use them or remove them

Easy
  1. 00:10:879(1)- Move the red gap to x:124 y:128 and then the second grey gap to x:156 y:168 and then the last gery gap to x:196 y:220 for a better flow and cursor movement I guess
  2. 00:24:139(3)- Add NC because there's new vocals then remove NC form next object
  3. 00:25:133(1)- Move the circle to x:340 y:298 to make a blanket with the previous slider if you want . The blanket should be like in this pic
  4. 00:26:459(4)- Instead adding a 1/4 slider , you can replace it with a note to follow the piano rhythm and the vocal
  5. 00:27:454(1)- ~ 00:30:769(4)- Maybe you should remap this part because these sliders don't follow the piano rhythm and vocal very well . Delete all objects from that part and begin that part from 00:26:791()- to follow good the vocal and the piano
  6. 00:45:354(1)- It will be more cooler imo if you move the middle gap to x:288 y:120 and then the last gap to x:324 y:136 for a better cursor movement I guess
  7. 01:02:592(2,1)- Try this to improve the cursor movement
  8. 01:07:896(3)- Can you move the last gap to x:433 y:220 to make a perfect slider ? Ehh just in my opinion
  9. 01:25:133(1,2)- Make these 1/4 sliders more curve and then move (2)- to x:179 y:157 for a good pattern like in this pic

Continue later with Normal and Hard :3
Topic Starter
Ipas
Umm,,,, sorry. I can't reply one per one of your mods. There's something i accept and i don't accept it. But for the general, i accept all of them.

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Here's my mod
asdf - nazi or suggestion
asdf - unrankable issue

General
  1. Where's the background ? Maybe the BG is missed . Open song's folder , take the BG from your map's folder and then insert it in editor
  2. Combo3 is pureblack which is unrankable . Instead use this colour :
    Combo3 : 128,0,0
    and for Combo1 and Combo2 why you not use these colours :
    Combo1 : 0,128,192
    Combo2 : 128,128,192
    It will be more easier to player find objects during FL because the colours are brighter
  3. You have some unused hitsounds . Use them or remove them

Easy
  1. 00:10:879(1)- Move the red gap to x:124 y:128 and then the second grey gap to x:156 y:168 and then the last gery gap to x:196 y:220 for a better flow and cursor movement I guess
  2. 00:24:139(3)- Add NC because there's new vocals then remove NC form next object
  3. 00:25:133(1)- Move the circle to x:340 y:298 to make a blanket with the previous slider if you want . The blanket should be like in this pic
    [box=]
00:26:459(4)- Instead adding a 1/4 slider , you can replace it with a note to follow the piano rhythm and the vocal00:27:454(1)- ~ 00:30:769(4)- Maybe you should remap this part because these sliders don't follow the piano rhythm and vocal very well . Delete all objects from that part and begin that part from 00:26:791()- to follow good the vocal and the piano00:45:354(1)- It will be more cooler imo if you move the middle gap to x:288 y:120 and then the last gap to x:324 y:136 for a better cursor movement I guess01:02:592(2,1)- Try this to improve the cursor movement
01:07:896(3)- Can you move the last gap to x:433 y:220 to make a perfect slider ? Ehh just in my opinion01:25:133(1,2)- Make these 1/4 sliders more curve and then move (2)- to x:179 y:157 for a good pattern like in this pic

Continue later with Normal and Hard :3
[ Shamwow ]
from my queue!

Normal:
+maybe if you changed 00:12:204 (1,2,3) to something like this it would sound better with the song
+if you shorten 00:28:116 (2) enough so that 00:28:945 (3) can be moved to 00:28:779 without the two overlapping it sounds a lot better
+removing 00:55:630 (4) and moving 00:55:961 (1) to 00:55:630 and adding a note at 00:56:624 sounds good, but if you don't want to change this you don't have to!

Hard:
+00:27:287 (2,3) - these dont sound good to me, maybe move 00:27:287 (2) to 00:27:453 and add a circle at 00:27:287, then remove 00:27:784 (3) and add a circle at 00:27:952 and move 00:28:282 (4) up to 00:28:116 and move up the other notes after that accordingly (this sounds really long so if this confuses you heres a screenshot)
+removing 00:47:674 (3,4) and moving 00:47:177 (2) to 00:47:342 sounds better
+removing 00:48:503 (2) and making 00:48:005 (1) a repeat slider sounds better

i couldn't find many real mistakes from this map, only notes that could sound better if they were placed differently. these suggestions are mostly optional but if you apply them, they'll go a lot better with the song overall. good luck!
Topic Starter
Ipas

-Dave Strider- wrote:

from my queue!

Normal:
+maybe if you changed 00:12:204 (1,2,3) to something like this it would sound better with the song - fixed
+if you shorten 00:28:116 (2) enough so that 00:28:945 (3) can be moved to 00:28:779 without the two overlapping it sounds a lot better - fixed
+removing 00:55:630 (4) and moving 00:55:961 (1) to 00:55:630 and adding a note at 00:56:624 sounds good, but if you don't want to change this you don't have to! - yes, i don't have to change this :3

Hard:
+00:27:287 (2,3) - these dont sound good to me, maybe move 00:27:287 (2) to 00:27:453 and add a circle at 00:27:287, then remove 00:27:784 (3) and add a circle at 00:27:952 and move 00:28:282 (4) up to 00:28:116 and move up the other notes after that accordingly (this sounds really long so if this confuses you heres a screenshot) - fixed in another way :3
+removing 00:47:674 (3,4) and moving 00:47:177 (2) to 00:47:342 sounds better - fixed
+removing 00:48:503 (2) and making 00:48:005 (1) a repeat slider sounds better - fixed

i couldn't find many real mistakes from this map, only notes that could sound better if they were placed differently. these suggestions are mostly optional but if you apply them, they'll go a lot better with the song overall. good luck! THANKS :D
Thanks for modding :3
RzHr
General
  1. Ubah nama file BGnya ke yang tulisan biasa aja, soalnya dibeberapa komputer (mungkin) hurufnya ga bisa muncul gitu & hapus 1 BG yang ga kepake :> http://puu.sh/fG5hF/5dbeeb7f99.jpg
  2. Centang "Letterbox during breaks"
  3. Mungkin nama karakter yang ada di BG bisa ditambahin ke tag ?
  4. Cuma saran sih :> Combo Coloursnya, coba ganti warna salah satu Combo 1 atopun Combo 2, soalnya hampir sama warnanya. Sama tambahin warna lagi, paling engga sampe Combo 4?


Easy :
  1. 00:45:353 (1) - Mungkin sudutnya agak diturunin dikit ?
  2. 01:06:569 (1,2) - mungkin entah gimana caranya... agak arahin kekanan gitu, soalnya combo 3nya ada disebelah kanan


Normal :
  1. 00:02:922 (1,2,3) - bad flow, ubah arahnya
  2. 00:26:790 (1,2) - ganti bentuk slidernya mungkin ? bentuknya ga ngejelasin suara apapun
  3. 00:43:364 (2,3) - perbaiki blanketnya
  4. 00:53:309 (1) - mungkin agak dibikin melengkung ke arah combo selanjutnya ?
  5. 00:55:630 (3,1) - perbaiki blanketnya
  6. 01:03:917 (1,2) - ^


Hard :
  1. 00:03:585 (2,3) - perbaiki blanketnya
  2. 00:29:276 (4,5) - ^
  3. 00:55:630 (4,5,1) - mungkin dibuat blanket ? :D
  4. 00:48:834 (2,3,4) - geser kekiri dikit, http://puu.sh/fG84p/a82e6ab4dd.jpg


Insane :
  1. 00:15:851 (5,1) - perbaiki blanketnya
  2. 01:27:784 (1,2) - ganti spinner aja, buat nyamain semua diffnya
  3. 01:00:933 (1,2,3,4) - overmapped menurutku, dan ga terlalu cocok disini
  4. 01:13:862 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^... cuma saran, mungkin 01:13:862 (1,2,3,4,5) - diganti jadi 1 slider aja


GL :D semoga membantu
Topic Starter
Ipas

RzHr wrote:

General
  1. Ubah nama file BGnya ke yang tulisan biasa aja, soalnya dibeberapa komputer (mungkin) hurufnya ga bisa muncul gitu & hapus 1 BG yang ga kepake :> http://puu.sh/fG5hF/5dbeeb7f99.jpg - di tempat aku cuma ada satu BG kok. hapus aja itu BG yg lama, yang tulisannya gak kebaca
  2. Centang "Letterbox during breaks" - okay
  3. Mungkin nama karakter yang ada di BG bisa ditambahin ke tag ? - yes
  4. Cuma saran sih :> Combo Coloursnya, coba ganti warna salah satu Combo 1 atopun Combo 2, soalnya hampir sama warnanya. Sama tambahin warna lagi, paling engga sampe Combo 4? - changed to gray and added one combocolour


Easy :
  1. 00:45:353 (1) - Mungkin sudutnya agak diturunin dikit ? - gatau ke fix atau nggak, ck ulang mungkin :3
  2. 01:06:569 (1,2) - mungkin entah gimana caranya... agak arahin kekanan gitu, soalnya combo 3nya ada disebelah kanan - Tiada cara untuk melakukannya ._.


Normal :
  1. 00:02:922 (1,2,3) - bad flow, ubah arahnya - okay
  2. 00:26:790 (1,2) - ganti bentuk slidernya mungkin ? bentuknya ga ngejelasin suara apapun - NOPE! Aku sengaja bikin ini slider, capek tau >_<
  3. 00:43:364 (2,3) - perbaiki blanketnya - okay
  4. 00:53:309 (1) - mungkin agak dibikin melengkung ke arah combo selanjutnya ? gatau ke fix apa nggak
  5. 00:55:630 (3,1) - perbaiki blanketnya - yes
  6. 01:03:917 (1,2) - ^ - :3


Hard :
  1. 00:03:585 (2,3) - perbaiki blanketnya - okeyy
  2. 00:29:276 (4,5) - ^ - fixed in another way :3
  3. 00:55:630 (4,5,1) - mungkin dibuat blanket ? :D - fixed in another way
  4. 00:48:834 (2,3,4) - geser kekiri dikit, http://puu.sh/fG84p/a82e6ab4dd.jpg - fixed


Insane :
  1. 00:15:851 (5,1) - perbaiki blanketnya - okay
  2. 01:27:784 (1,2) - ganti spinner aja, buat nyamain semua diffnya - :3
  3. 01:00:933 (1,2,3,4) - overmapped menurutku, dan ga terlalu cocok disini - everything has changed
  4. 01:13:862 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^... cuma saran, mungkin 01:13:862 (1,2,3,4,5) - diganti jadi 1 slider aja - noooo


GL :D semoga membantu - THANKS!
Thanks for mod
Iceskulls
[General]
  1. I can't see any bg in editor it might because you use special symbol for bg's name in song folder consider changing "tokyo ghoul •A" to "BG" or what you what it to be named and also change it in .osu notepad too
  2. Uncheck widescreen support
  3. The usage of hitsound is pretty low consider make use of hitsounds


[Insane]
  1. 00:02:922 (1) - Ctrl+G for better flow ?
  2. 00:22:978 (3,4) - How about make it like this so it can flow better ?
  3. 00:31:431 (4,5) - This should snap 1/4 , I guess
  4. 00:43:696 (5,1) - I don't see any reason to use jumps here
  5. 00:52:812 (4) - NC for change in spacing ?
  6. 00:53:972 - This beat can be emphasized more , it play better if you make this beat clickable
  7. 01:02:259 (4,5) - Ctrl+G rhythm here and it flow better imo
  8. 01:07:232 (1) - Ctrl+G for better flow ?
  9. 01:22:480 (1,2) - Bad overlap imo


[Hard]
  1. 00:08:061 (7) - x=196 for perfect square shape here 00:07:563 (4,5,6,7) -
  2. 00:19:166 (5) - NC ?
  3. 00:28:779 (3,4) - The jumps here may be a bit too sudden for hard
  4. 00:55:961 (1) - Ctrl+G for better flow ?


[Normal]
  1. 00:01:596 (4) - This sound better I guess


[Easy]
  • SV=0.85x? so that there is a bit different between normal and easy
  1. 00:25:795 (2,3) - Blanket ?


Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Ipas

CelsiusLK wrote:

[General]
  1. I can't see any bg in editor it might because you use special symbol for bg's name in song folder consider changing "tokyo ghoul •A" to "BG" or what you what it to be named and also change it in .osu notepad too - fixed, so re-download it
  2. Uncheck widescreen support - unchecked
  3. The usage of hitsound is pretty low consider make use of hitsounds - consider this, if any modders commented this again, so i will search the hitsounds


[Insane]
  1. 00:02:922 (1) - Ctrl+G for better flow ? - OK
  2. 00:22:978 (3,4) - How about make it like this so it can flow better ? - OK
  3. 00:31:431 (4,5) - This should snap 1/4 , I guess - fixed in another way i think
  4. 00:43:696 (5,1) - I don't see any reason to use jumps here - No changes, this is good
  5. 00:52:812 (4) - NC for change in spacing ? - OK
  6. 00:53:972 - This beat can be emphasized more , it play better if you make this beat clickable - ok
  7. 01:02:259 (4,5) - Ctrl+G rhythm here and it flow better imo - ok
  8. 01:07:232 (1) - Ctrl+G for better flow ? - ok
  9. 01:22:480 (1,2) - Bad overlap imo - ok


[Hard]
  1. 00:08:061 (7) - x=196 for perfect square shape here 00:07:563 (4,5,6,7) - ok
  2. 00:19:166 (5) - NC ? - ok
  3. 00:28:779 (3,4) - The jumps here may be a bit too sudden for hard - ok
  4. 00:55:961 (1) - Ctrl+G for better flow ? - ok, but it's more harder then :3


[Normal]
  1. 00:01:596 (4) - This sound better I guess - ok


[Easy]
  • SV=0.85x? so that there is a bit different between normal and easy - tired to changes this, but it has been changed
  1. 00:25:795 (2,3) - Blanket ? - i think this is good. No blanket


Good luck :) - THANKS! :3
THANKS FOR YOUR MODS!
Sky Trias
Hi! From -[Trias's STD Modding Queue]-

( Special Mods! Indonesian Player ;) )

  • [General]
  1. Tags : kaneki-kun rize-chan touka-chan ( just : kaneki rize touka ) no need kun / chan ;)
  2. Background : bg.jpg is 1365x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1366x768 / 1024x768.
  3. Title : Should add ( TV Size ) but since you put tv size in tags so no problem about the title ;)
  4. Extra : Where's the hitsound ?
  • [ Easy]
  1. Where's the hitsound ?
  2. 00:57:287 (2,3) - Blanked
  3. 00:32:094 - 00:41:375 - you can mapped over here cause this is TV Size ;)
  4. 00:58:613 (1,2) - Swap NC
  • [ Normal]
  1. 00:02:922 (1,2,3) - Straighten
  2. 00:32:094 - 00:41:375 - same as easy .. please mapped this part ;)
  3. 01:04:580 (2,3,4) - fix the flow please
  • [ Hard]
  1. 00:32:094 - 00:41:375 - same as easy .. please mapped this part ;)
  2. 00:46:514 (4,1) - blanked
  3. 01:07:895 (5,6) - ^
  4. 01:09:221 (1) - remove NC here . NC should start at 01:09:552 (2)
  • [ Insane]
  1. 00:05:491 - add not here
  2. 00:32:094 - 00:41:375 - same as easy .. please mapped this part ;)
  3. 00:58:199 - ^
  4. 01:22:149 (5) - Ctrl+G
  5. 01:24:469 (6) - ^


Sorry short modding .. :o
GL! NewIpas :D
Topic Starter
Ipas

Sky Trias wrote:

Hi! From -[Trias's STD Modding Queue]-

( Special Mods! Indonesian Player ;) )

  • [General]
  1. Tags : kaneki-kun rize-chan touka-chan ( just : kaneki rize touka ) no need kun / chan ;)ok
  2. Background : bg.jpg is 1365x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1366x768 / 1024x768. fixed
  3. Title : Should add ( TV Size ) but since you put tv size in tags so no problem about the title ;):3
  4. Extra : Where's the hitsound ?
will search for this. NOTE: I just use normal-htinormal for hitsounding now

  • [ Easy]
  1. Where's the hitsound ? will search for this
  2. 00:57:287 (2,3) - Blanked no
  3. 00:32:094 - 00:41:375 - you can mapped over here cause this is TV Size ;)no. I has mapped here before, but, it's not too balance with the song because the sound at this part is too low
  4. 00:58:613 (1,2) - Swap NC ok
  • [ Normal]
  1. 00:02:922 (1,2,3) - Straighten dunno if this fixed or not
  2. 00:32:094 - 00:41:375 - same as easy .. please mapped this part ;)same as easy
  3. 01:04:580 (2,3,4) - fix the flow please dunno how to fix it
  • [ Hard]
  1. 00:32:094 - 00:41:375 - same as easy .. please mapped this part ;)same as easy
  2. 00:46:514 (4,1) - blanked no
  3. 01:07:895 (5,6) - ^ no
  4. 01:09:221 (1) - remove NC here . NC should start at 01:09:552 (2) ok
  • [ Insane]
  1. 00:05:491 - add not here ok
  2. 00:32:094 - 00:41:375 - same as easy .. please mapped this part ;)same as easy
  3. 00:58:199 - ^ ok
  4. 01:22:149 (5) - Ctrl+G ok
  5. 01:24:469 (6) - ^ ok


Sorry short modding .. :oNo problem
GL! NewIpas :DTHANKS! :D
mrturtle99
Hi from my modding queue~
00:55:961 (1) - maybe take off NC here and put NC on 00:57:287 (2) - to match when singer switches phrases
00:26:458 (4) - I think there should be a clap here to match the HS rhythm
00:32:094 (6) - I think there should be a NC here
00:04:580 (1,2,3) - here I think the NC should start on 00:04:911 (3) - , not on 00:04:580 (1) -
00:32:094 (5) - I think this should be a NC
Sorry for short mod, but map looks nice, hope this gets ranked soon
Topic Starter
Ipas

mrturtle99 wrote:

Hi from my modding queue~
00:55:961 (1) - maybe take off NC here and put NC on 00:57:287 (2) - to match when singer switches phrases ok
00:26:458 (4) - I think there should be a clap here to match the HS rhythm thanks
00:32:094 (6) - I think there should be a NC here ok
00:04:580 (1,2,3) - here I think the NC should start on 00:04:911 (3) - , not on 00:04:580 (1) - no changes
00:32:094 (5) - I think this should be a NC ok
Sorry for short mod (no problem), but map looks nice (thanks), hope this gets ranked soon (THANKS!)
Thanks for your modding :3 Also thanks for the STAR! :3
SoGa

[General]

  1. Consider to add a normal-slide1
  2. Add Audio lead-in to 1500 or 2000

[Easy]

  1. Maybe change it to AR3.5 or AR4 ?
  2. as general mentioned , i would add a normal-slide1 tho
  3. 00:03:585 (2,3,4) - get a hit-whistle for this one
  4. 00:05:574 (1) - Try to add a Finish here
  5. 00:10:878 (1,2,1) - u can try to add a finish on the slider-head
  6. 00:18:503 (3) - Delete this one , or just delete the clap .
  7. 00:17:177 if here has no note , why would u add a note here ?00:18:503 (3) - just for consistency , add on both side , or delete for both side
  8. 00:23:144 (2) - Maybe add a note here ?
  9. 00:29:110 Add a note here or just put this into a slider 00:28:779 (3) -
  10. 00:25:132 (1,2) - Swap NC here
  11. 00:27:453 (1,2) - Swap NC again
  12. 00:45:353 (1) - Finish on slider-head
  13. 00:53:309 (1) - Add a Finish on slider-head and just turn this slider in to a 1/2 slider
  14. 00:54:635 (2) - Finish
  15. 00:58:613 (3) - ^
  16. 00:59:276 (1,2) - Swap NC
  17. 01:01:265 (1) - Finish on slider-head
  18. 01:09:221 (1) - ^
  19. 01:11:873 (1) - ^
  20. 01:27:784 (1) - Maybe start at the red tick ? 01:27:619

    Actually from the Kiai time u can use 2/4 claps tho

[Normal]

  1. 00:05:574 (1) - Finish
  2. 00:10:878 (1) - ^
  3. 00:12:204 (1) - ^
  4. 00:13:530 (1) - Whistle on repeat and maybe change the additions to drum
  5. 00:16:182 (1) - Finish
  6. 00:16:845 (2) - i would put this slider to a opposite way instead
  7. 00:18:503 (3) - Move this one blanket with 00:16:182 (1) - and then stack this two 00:18:503 (3,2) -
  8. 00:22:480 (2) - Whistle on slider-head
  9. 00:23:475 (3) - Whistle
  10. 00:25:132 (2) - ^
  11. 00:28:779 (3) - Maybe u can change this slider to 2 notes
  12. 00:29:442 (4) - NC
  13. 00:32:094 Can i ask for what is this inherited Points working ? if it doesn't work dat much , pls delete it
  14. 00:43:364 (2,3) - Blanket it and then blanket this one 00:44:690 (4,1) - u will get such pattern
  15. 00:50:657 (1) - Maybe add a finish here
  16. 00:53:309 (1) - ^
  17. 00:56:956 (2) - Delete this slider and add a note here 00:57:121 (2) -
  18. 00:57:287 (3) - Finish
  19. 00:58:613 (5) - Finish and NC
  20. 01:13:862 Add a 1/1 slider or maybe just add 2 notes 01:14:193
  21. 01:25:132 (1) - Finish

[Hard]

  1. Why don't u just start using 2/4 claps at the begin
  2. 00:04:248 (3,2) - Just stack these two in
  3. 00:07:563 (4,5,6,7) - I prefer this instead a square
  4. 00:45:188 (7) - Nazi , put this a little up
  5. 00:52:978 (3,4) - Why is this 2 stacked ? spread it out .
  6. 00:58:282 (4) - Clap on head and Finish on tail
  7. 01:03:585 (1) - It's a bit weird starting 2/4 clap lmao ,why don't u just start from the kiai lol
  8. 01:27:784 Maybe just change the sample set to Soft ?

[Insane]

  1. 00:02:094 (1,2) - Actually u don't have to jump here . Maybe is just too sudden for a begin
  2. 00:14:856 (1,2,3,4) - Since these set add clap , why don't u do the same thing to 00:16:679 (2,3,4,2,3,4) - ?
  3. 00:52:812 (1,2) - Don't stack this 2 , if u didn't stack this one 00:53:143 (3) - ,there is a cymbal sounds tho
  4. 00:55:298 (3) - Use this rhythm ? 00:54:635 (1,2) -
  5. 01:00:602 (4) - Maybe Ctrl + G this one

End , good map and good song tho , i wanted to do this but seems like someone do it >_>

Good luck ;w;
Topic Starter
Ipas

SoGa wrote:

[General]

  1. Consider to add a normal-slide1
  2. Add Audio lead-in to 1500 or 2000

[Easy]

  1. Maybe change it to AR3.5 or AR4 ?
  2. as general mentioned , i would add a normal-slide1 tho
  3. 00:03:585 (2,3,4) - get a hit-whistle for this one
  4. 00:05:574 (1) - Try to add a Finish here
  5. 00:10:878 (1,2,1) - u can try to add a finish on the slider-head
  6. 00:18:503 (3) - Delete this one , or just delete the clap .
  7. 00:17:177 if here has no note , why would u add a note here ?00:18:503 (3) - just for consistency , add on both side , or delete for both side
  8. 00:23:144 (2) - Maybe add a note here ?
  9. 00:29:110 Add a note here or just put this into a slider 00:28:779 (3) -
  10. 00:25:132 (1,2) - Swap NC here
  11. 00:27:453 (1,2) - Swap NC again
  12. 00:45:353 (1) - Finish on slider-head
  13. 00:53:309 (1) - Add a Finish on slider-head and just turn this slider in to a 1/2 slider
  14. 00:54:635 (2) - Finish
  15. 00:58:613 (3) - ^
  16. 00:59:276 (1,2) - Swap NC
  17. 01:01:265 (1) - Finish on slider-head
  18. 01:09:221 (1) - ^
  19. 01:11:873 (1) - ^
  20. 01:27:784 (1) - Maybe start at the red tick ? 01:27:619

    Actually from the Kiai time u can use 2/4 claps tho

[Normal]

  1. 00:05:574 (1) - Finish
  2. 00:10:878 (1) - ^
  3. 00:12:204 (1) - ^
  4. 00:13:530 (1) - Whistle on repeat and maybe change the additions to drum
  5. 00:16:182 (1) - Finish
  6. 00:16:845 (2) - i would put this slider to a opposite way instead
  7. 00:18:503 (3) - Move this one blanket with 00:16:182 (1) - and then stack this two 00:18:503 (3,2) -
  8. 00:22:480 (2) - Whistle on slider-head
  9. 00:23:475 (3) - Whistle
  10. 00:25:132 (2) - ^
  11. 00:28:779 (3) - Maybe u can change this slider to 2 notes
  12. 00:29:442 (4) - NC
  13. 00:32:094 Can i ask for what is this inherited Points working ? if it doesn't work dat much , pls delete it
  14. 00:43:364 (2,3) - Blanket it and then blanket this one 00:44:690 (4,1) - u will get such pattern
  15. 00:50:657 (1) - Maybe add a finish here
  16. 00:53:309 (1) - ^
  17. 00:56:956 (2) - Delete this slider and add a note here 00:57:121 (2) -
  18. 00:57:287 (3) - Finish
  19. 00:58:613 (5) - Finish and NC
  20. 01:13:862 Add a 1/1 slider or maybe just add 2 notes 01:14:193
  21. 01:25:132 (1) - Finish

[Hard]

  1. Why don't u just start using 2/4 claps at the begin
  2. 00:04:248 (3,2) - Just stack these two in
  3. 00:07:563 (4,5,6,7) - I prefer this instead a square
  4. 00:45:188 (7) - Nazi , put this a little up
  5. 00:52:978 (3,4) - Why is this 2 stacked ? spread it out .
  6. 00:58:282 (4) - Clap on head and Finish on tail
  7. 01:03:585 (1) - It's a bit weird starting 2/4 clap lmao ,why don't u just start from the kiai lol
  8. 01:27:784 Maybe just change the sample set to Soft ?

[Insane]

  1. 00:02:094 (1,2) - Actually u don't have to jump here . Maybe is just too sudden for a begin
  2. 00:14:856 (1,2,3,4) - Since these set add clap , why don't u do the same thing to 00:16:679 (2,3,4,2,3,4) - ?
  3. 00:52:812 (1,2) - Don't stack this 2 , if u didn't stack this one 00:53:143 (3) - ,there is a cymbal sounds tho
  4. 00:55:298 (3) - Use this rhythm ? 00:54:635 (1,2) -
  5. 01:00:602 (4) - Maybe Ctrl + G this one

End , good map and good song tho , i wanted to do this but seems like someone do it >_>

Good luck ;w;
I'm sorry, i can't reply your mods. But, you can take a look what i accept and i don't accept
Monstrata
soooo late lol~ From my queue :3 Good luck! Nice song.

[General]

00:32:094 - 00:41:375 - Why is there a break here... You don't need a break on a TV-Size...
01:17:177 - 01:25:132 - Again Why are there breaks? Especially on the Easy and Normal, it feels weird to have another 8 second break only to have to play another 3 notes on Easy. Don't be lazy and map these out :P.

[Insane]

00:06:237 (1,2) - This is really undermapped compared to the rest of your intro in the section... Really consider making these two 1/1 sliders 1/2 sliders etc... more consistent with the rest of your rhythmic pattern.
00:32:094 - This is already a TV-size, you don't need to have a 10 second break. Please map this out, even if it's with a simpler rhythm.
00:51:983 (1,2,3) - These aren't evenly spaced. Scale them out and you'll see.
01:00:933 (5) - Ctrl+G bettter flow into 1 too.
01:03:088 (2) - Why not take slider 1 and Ctrl+J instead? It would flow better.
01:14:856 - Map a slider here too? And shorten 01:14:525 (9) - ? You can use two 1/2 sliders instead of a 1/1 slider, so there isn't such an awkward gap before going into 01:15:188 (1) -

[Hard]

00:10:215 (4,5) - Check stacks.
00:15:519 (1,2,3,4) - Why not make 3, 4, parallel to 1, 2?
00:46:016 (3,4) - This plays kind of awkwardly... You should shorten 00:46:016 (3) - to a 1/2 slider and begin the next slider at 00:46:348 - . That way you can map 00:46:679 - . Which begins on the next measure instead of mapping it to a slider-end.
01:26:458 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe this arrangement might look better. Up to you~

[Normal]

00:26:790 (1,2) - Why wiggle sliders on a Normal? It's basically the same as a change in SV which isn't recommended on Normal. Also, you don't use these wiggle sliders for the same melody in 00:16:182 (1,2) - . So this creates an inconsistency that you should also consider.
00:55:630 (3,1) - Wouldn't hurt to blanket them
00:58:613 (1) - Remove NC.
01:13:199 (5,6) - Check blanket.

[Easy]

00:15:519 (3,1) - Fix blanket.
00:17:508 (2,1) - ^
01:25:795 (2,3) - ^

Not much wrong rhythmically on Easy, nice.
Setsurei
sorry for the delay!
[General]
normal-hitwhistle's hit-hat cymbals sounds too loud,
especially on the intro (00:04:746 - to 00:05:409 - ) and (00:10:381 - to 00:10:712 - )
also these part:
00:31:596 - 00:31:762 -
00:52:646 - 00:53:143 -
mind reducing the volume?

00:31:431 - inconsistency hitsound on this part (H & I)
[Easy]
00:00:271 (1) - you can make something awesome on this long slider (slider art)
00:16:182 (1) - fix the blanket well
00:17:508 (2) - ^
00:18:834 (1) - ^
00:24:138 (3) - ^
00:25:795 (1,2) - ^
01:26:458 (3) - fix the pararel blanket
[Normal]
00:00:271 (1,2,3) - rearrange all these, so 00:01:596 (4) - can be moved to the right, to flow better with 00:02:259 (5) -
00:26:790 (1,2) - this kind of slider is unrankable right now, as the speed is different (I just know it when I rank Liar Mask)
00:42:701 (1) - it is better to curve this up, to blanket paralel with 00:43:364 (2) -
00:50:326 (4) - delete? overmap
[Hard]
00:18:005 (2,3,4) - strong beats are on the white tick, please refrain on using the end slider
00:10:878 (1) - fix blanket
00:29:442 (5) - ^
00:30:436 (1) - ^
00:49:000 (3,4) - stack tail properly like what you did at the front
00:55:961 (1) - fix blanket
01:26:790 (3) - 348|108; 01:26:956 (4) - 264|116
[Insane]
00:45:353 (1,2,3,4,5) - I know you want to make this symmetry, so move this instead 00:45:188 (5) - at 312|220 so it flows better
00:47:508 (6,7) - ctrl G? gives jump to the incoming 00:47:840 (1) -
01:27:287 (1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped, delete 01:27:287 (1,2,4) -

much nazi mod
good luck
Topic Starter
Ipas

monstrata wrote:

soooo late lol~ From my queue :3 Good luck! Nice song.

[General]

00:32:094 - 00:41:375 - Why is there a break here... You don't need a break on a TV-Size... ok
01:17:177 - 01:25:132 - Again Why are there breaks? Especially on the Easy and Normal, it feels weird to have another 8 second break only to have to play another 3 notes on Easy. Don't be lazy and map these out :P. lol. ok

[Insane]

00:06:237 (1,2) - This is really undermapped compared to the rest of your intro in the section... Really consider making these two 1/1 sliders 1/2 sliders etc... more consistent with the rest of your rhythmic pattern. i don't know how to fix this. would you take look what i've changed at this?
00:32:094 - This is already a TV-size, you don't need to have a 10 second break. Please map this out, even if it's with a simpler rhythm. ok
00:51:983 (1,2,3) - These aren't evenly spaced. Scale them out and you'll see. yeah. i fixed it by DS
01:00:933 (5) - Ctrl+G bettter flow into 1 too. ok
01:03:088 (2) - Why not take slider 1 and Ctrl+J instead? It would flow better. ok
01:14:856 - Map a slider here too? And shorten 01:14:525 (9) - ? You can use two 1/2 sliders instead of a 1/1 slider, so there isn't such an awkward gap before going into 01:15:188 (1) - yes. i tried to map like this and this is looks good

[Hard]

00:10:215 (4,5) - Check stacks. it has been stacked properly
00:15:519 (1,2,3,4) - Why not make 3, 4, parallel to 1, 2? ok
00:46:016 (3,4) - This plays kind of awkwardly... You should shorten 00:46:016 (3) - to a 1/2 slider and begin the next slider at 00:46:348 - . That way you can map 00:46:679 - . Which begins on the next measure instead of mapping it to a slider-end. okay
01:26:458 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe this arrangement might look better. Up to you~ i've changed some notes at this part. would you take a look?

[Normal]

00:26:790 (1,2) - Why wiggle sliders on a Normal? It's basically the same as a change in SV which isn't recommended on Normal. Also, you don't use these wiggle sliders for the same melody in 00:16:182 (1,2) - . So this creates an inconsistency that you should also consider. okay
00:55:630 (3,1) - Wouldn't hurt to blanket them yeah
00:58:613 (1) - Remove NC. ok
01:13:199 (5,6) - Check blanket. it has been blanket properly

[Easy]

00:15:519 (3,1) - Fix blanket. i don't think what i've changes is fixed the blanket. would you take a look?
00:17:508 (2,1) - ^ i don't think what i've changes is fixed the blanket. would you take a look?
01:25:795 (2,3) - ^ changed the last slider placement to fix

Not much wrong rhythmically on Easy, nice. THANKS
Thanks! Updated
Topic Starter
Ipas

Setsurei wrote:

sorry for the delay!
[General]
normal-hitwhistle's hit-hat cymbals sounds too loud,
especially on the intro (00:04:746 - to 00:05:409 - ) and (00:10:381 - to 00:10:712 - )
also these part:
00:31:596 - 00:31:762 -
00:52:646 - 00:53:143 -
mind reducing the volume?

00:31:431 - inconsistency hitsound on this part (H & I) - Fix this all later
[Easy]
00:00:271 (1) - you can make something awesome on this long slider (slider art) - TAKE A LOOK PLEASE! :3
00:16:182 (1) - fix the blanket well
00:17:508 (2) - ^
00:18:834 (1) - ^
00:24:138 (3) - ^
00:25:795 (1,2) - ^
01:26:458 (3) - fix the pararel blanket
[Normal]
00:00:271 (1,2,3) - rearrange all these, so 00:01:596 (4) - can be moved to the right, to flow better with 00:02:259 (5) - OK
00:26:790 (1,2) - this kind of slider is unrankable right now, as the speed is different (I just know it when I rank Liar Mask)
00:42:701 (1) - it is better to curve this up, to blanket paralel with 00:43:364 (2) - idk if this fixed or not
00:50:326 (4) - delete? overmap ok
[Hard]
00:18:005 (2,3,4) - strong beats are on the white tick, please refrain on using the end slider changed to circle *this is what do you want right? i got a mapping tech again xD
00:10:878 (1) - fix blanket
00:29:442 (5) - ^
00:30:436 (1) - ^
00:49:000 (3,4) - stack tail properly like what you did at the front check? idk if this fixed or not
00:55:961 (1) - fix blanket
01:26:790 (3) - 348|108; 01:26:956 (4) - 264|116 this pattern has been changed because the previous modder. take a look?
[Insane]
00:45:353 (1,2,3,4,5) - I know you want to make this symmetry, so move this instead 00:45:188 (5) - at 312|220 so it flows better ahahaha. ok
00:47:508 (6,7) - ctrl G? gives jump to the incoming 00:47:840 (1) - ok
01:27:287 (1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped, delete 01:27:287 (1,2,4) - deleted and changed to slider

much nazi mod lol
good luck - THANKS

NOTE: I don't reply your blanket's Mods beacuse i don't know it's fixed or not and i don't know how to fix it properly. I think you must take a look?
Thanks! Updated
wendao
General
Combo Colour baru? (nyamain kemeja karakter di awal video xD)
[Colours]
Combo1 : 60,180,120
Combo2 : 180,180,180
Combo3 : 220,60,220
Combo4 : 220,220,60
Combo5 : 160,80,40
Combo6 : 150,240,30
Combo7 : 30,240,160
Combo8 : 240,140,60

Easy
00:00:271 (1,2,3,4) - gw lebih doyan kayak gini (1-2-3 lebih membentuk segi lima)

00:13:530 (1) - flow saat pindah ke (2) nya ga nyaman deh, especially ini diff Easy

00:18:834 (1) - gimana kalo ekor slidernya di stack sama (2)? kayak gini

00:28:779 (2) - gimana kalo kayak gini (copas dari (1), terus rotate -65°, pindahin ke 64,280)

00:30:768 - dibiarin kosong kayaknya ga menarik deh

00:35:409 (2) - node merah mundurin sekotak (336,80) biar keliatan simetris

00:43:364 (2,3,4) - biar flownya bagus, sebaiknya ketiga objek ini jangan dibikin lurus, sedikit 'curve' lebih baik

00:49:663 (2) - blanket, node kedua 76,196.. node ketiga 72,256

01:02:591 (2,1) - another bad flow, dibikin kayak gini

-atau-


01:12:536 (2,3,4) - dibikin kayak gini

`-` ini susah kalo satu per satu, langsung code aja ya

148,132,72536,2,0,B|140:161|143:187|162:213|162:213|143:239|140:265|148:294,1,170
228,266,73530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
258,344,73862,2,0,P|288:322|310:280,1,85

note: hitsound hilang, pasang lagi D':

01:25:132 (1,2,3) - biar flownya bagus, slider (1) mending dibikin mengarah keatas, objek selanjutnya bisa dipikirin sendiri xD

Normal
00:18:834 (1) - coba deh ditata lagi slidernya biar keliatan cantik >w<

00:43:364 (2) - blanket - node terakhir pindahin 1 kotak ke atas (360,20)

00:55:961 (1) - blanket - node pertama pindahin 1 kotak ke bawah (216,96) || node kedua pindahin 1 kotak ke kiri (300,48)

01:05:243 (4) - blanket - node kedua pindahin ke 252,332 || node terakhir pindahin ke 312,260

01:13:862 (6) - blanket - node kedua pindahin ke 276,104 || node terakhir pindahin ke 244,152

01:18:503 (1) - blanket - copas dari 01:13:862 (6) - terus pindahin ke 292,196

Hard
00:04:248 (3) - blanket - 2nd 276,128 || 3rd 264,200

00:10:878 (1) - blanket - 2nd 308,352 || 3rd 388,320

00:29:442 (5) - blanket - 2nd 200,344 || 3rd 248,308

00:30:436 (1) - blanket - 3rd 328,340

00:34:083 (5) - moore blanket - 3rd 432,272

00:34:746 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - terlalu spam 1/2 banget, padahal lagunya masih soft disini

00:46:679 (5,1) - mending dibikin slider repeat buat slider (1)


00:49:663 (1) - blanket - 2nd 1 grid ke atas

00:55:961 (1) - blanket - 1st 268,196 || 2nd 312,132 || 3rd 404,140

00:59:276 (1,2,3) - not recommended, numpuk banget

01:08:392 (6) - blanket - 2nd 96,104 || 3rd 136,192

01:20:823 (2,3) - hindari slider 3/4, bukannya bikin diff semakin menantang, malah keliatan jelek

Insane
00:00:602 (2) - pindahin ke 308,144, 2nd node 320,116, 3rd node 316,56

... seharusnya udah ngerti fix blanket :3 dicoba-coba terus aja

well mapped diff, seriously udah bagus banget

terlalu clap spammy (apalagi di awal-awal)

01:09:552 (1,2,3,4,5) - non-sense stream `-`

ntah kenapa mod cuma blanket doang... udah ga bisa modding :^(
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