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amazarashi - Kisetsu wa Tsugitsugi Shindeiku -Tokyo Ghoul Ro

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Ipas

farel12345 wrote:

Cieee Ranked
Eh, kok kau tiba" kirim post ><
Anyway, THANKS :3
Shiranai
おめでとう!🎉🎉🎉
[ Mephisto ]
Congrats O/
Gaia
oh hey, congrats on ur first ranked !
Ciyus Miapah
hahahaha greget ini map di HDHR
Atrue
ORZ..
Sorry for the inconvenience, but the romanised title should be "Kisetsu wa Tsugitsugi Shindeiku -Tokyo Ghoul Root A Edit-". You forgot the root on A..

Should be a quick fix, feel free to find BNs to bring it back :D

And congrats on your first ranked mapset in advance~
wendao
orz
Sieg
my bad, all English sources were like Tokyo Ghoul √A

unicode strikes back D: :o:o:o
riffy
Just a few things bfore we'll push it forward. Please note, that you're free to ignore most of it.

[General]
  1. More like a matter of personal preference, but I'd use something less bright.

    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 108,196,217
    Combo2 : 202,84,222
    Combo3 : 95,218,88
    Combo4 : 200,100,100


[Easy]
  1. Consider lowering your OD and HP to 2. 3 feels relatively hard and breaks the balance of the set (the rest of the set has OD and HP settings a little lower than AR).
  2. 00:15:567 (4,2) - minor - is that overlap okay with you? It's quite noticeable while testing.
  3. 00:26:506 (4,2) - (2) appears a little too suddenly. In order to avoid it, you can unstack it to make the pattern a little easier. Example
  4. 00:32:142 (1,2,3) - vocals are pretty similar. So, you might want to keep rhythm mre consistent. example
    Note: if you want, you can have two sliders. That'll be okay, too.

    Great job! :)


[Normal]
  1. 01:21:865 (4) - the clap here sounds quite extra. Probably you should remove this one.
    Note: 01:22:363 - the one at is fine! Keep it!

    Wow, you really did great on this diff!


[Hard]
  1. 00:22:860 (3) - try removing the circle here, as it feels a little extra. while we remove it, we'll have the vcals emphasized in a nice way.
  2. 00:23:689 - and probably you should have a circle here to make this part match with the instruments.
  3. 00:33:136 - just a little weird to me: you have this beat mapped in your Normal, but not here. Any reason for that?
  4. 01:22:031 (2) - same suggestion as on the Normal. Remove the clap?

    Well done!


[Insane]
  1. 00:01:562 (5) - isn't that overmapped? I'd rather remove this.
  2. 00:18:551 (5,6) - it feels quite tricky to have 1/4 and 1/2 stacked in the same combo. Try to unstack the 1/2s here?
  3. 00:26:341 - the beat is mapped in Hard, but ot in Insane (which is supposed to be harder). Agagin, any reason for that?
  4. 00:37:114 - try to increase volume by 5-10%, let's make the circles more audible.
  5. 00:52:694 (3) - just to emphasize the end of this antijump pattern, you might want to have a NC here.
  6. 01:17:888 (3,4,5,6) - is it your intention to lower DS here or is it just DS being a little glitchy?

    Pretty nice. Not much to add. :)


Find me when you check these suggestions.
Topic Starter
Ipas
Ow...
Ahhh
Thanks ><
Topic Starter
Ipas

-Bakari- wrote:

Just a few things bfore we'll push it forward. Please note, that you're free to ignore most of it.

[General]
  1. More like a matter of personal preference, but I'd use something less bright.

    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 108,196,217
    Combo2 : 202,84,222
    Combo3 : 95,218,88
    Combo4 : 200,100,100


[Easy]
  1. Consider lowering your OD and HP to 2. 3 feels relatively hard and breaks the balance of the set (the rest of the set has OD and HP settings a little lower than AR).
  2. 00:15:567 (4,2) - minor - is that overlap okay with you? It's quite noticeable while testing.
  3. 00:26:506 (4,2) - (2) appears a little too suddenly. In order to avoid it, you can unstack it to make the pattern a little easier. Example
  4. 00:32:142 (1,2,3) - vocals are pretty similar. So, you might want to keep rhythm mre consistent. example
    Note: if you want, you can have two sliders. That'll be okay, too.

    Great job! :)


[Normal]
  1. 01:21:865 (4) - the clap here sounds quite extra. Probably you should remove this one.
    Note: 01:22:363 - the one at is fine! Keep it!

    Wow, you really did great on this diff!


[Hard]
  1. 00:22:860 (3) - try removing the circle here, as it feels a little extra. while we remove it, we'll have the vcals emphasized in a nice way.
  2. 00:23:689 - and probably you should have a circle here to make this part match with the instruments.
  3. 00:33:136 - just a little weird to me: you have this beat mapped in your Normal, but not here. Any reason for that?
  4. 01:22:031 (2) - same suggestion as on the Normal. Remove the clap?

    Well done!


[Insane]
  1. 00:01:562 (5) - isn't that overmapped? I'd rather remove this.
  2. 00:18:551 (5,6) - it feels quite tricky to have 1/4 and 1/2 stacked in the same combo. Try to unstack the 1/2s here?
  3. 00:26:341 - the beat is mapped in Hard, but ot in Insane (which is supposed to be harder). Agagin, any reason for that?
  4. 00:37:114 - try to increase volume by 5-10%, let's make the circles more audible.
  5. 00:52:694 (3) - just to emphasize the end of this antijump pattern, you might want to have a NC here.
  6. 01:17:888 (3,4,5,6) - is it your intention to lower DS here or is it just DS being a little glitchy?

    Pretty nice. Not much to add. :)


Find me when you check these suggestions.
Accepted all of them :3
I've accept but i do it as my own opinions *Especially, on Easy :3
And made up some changes at Insane

Please, I can't update now .-.
There is an error with my connection .-.
I will update it tomorrow morning *at mine* ><
riffy
Just a few more things!

[Insane]
  1. 00:21:534 (1,2,3) - spacing feels inconsistent. (it doesn't look like you would do it intentionally, so...)
    Note: 00:35:457 (3,4,5) - same.


Let me know when you're ready. :)

Edit: looks good to me!

Re-Qualified!
Ciyus Miapah
good
Mood Breaker
wah sempet di unrank trnyata. congrats ipas for the first requalified map :>
Topic Starter
Ipas

Mood Breaker wrote:

wah sempet di unrank trnyata. congrats ipas for the first requalified map :>
Yeah ><
DQ nya cuma gara" metadata :3
Tapi jadi makin keren loh xD
Kogum
노래 개졓아 ♡
BDOG
Awesome song, awesome map.
Kamith
Love the song and your Beatmap
Great job man ! ;D
Mio08
Hello guy's :D
Dipp0
it's a Great song! i loved it ;D
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