farel12345 wrote:

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1. More like a matter of personal preference, but I'd use something less bright.
   
   Example

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 108,196,217
   Combo2 : 202,84,222
   Combo3 : 95,218,88
   Combo4 : 200,100,100

1. Consider lowering your OD and HP to 2. 3 feels relatively hard and breaks the balance of the set (the rest of the set has OD and HP settings a little lower than AR).
2. 00:15:567 (4,2) - minor - is that overlap okay with you? It's quite noticeable while testing.
3. 00:26:506 (4,2) - (2) appears a little too suddenly. In order to avoid it, you can unstack it to make the pattern a little easier. Example
4. 00:32:142 (1,2,3) - vocals are pretty similar. So, you might want to keep rhythm mre consistent. example
   Note: if you want, you can have two sliders. That'll be okay, too.
   
   Great job!

1. 01:21:865 (4) - the clap here sounds quite extra. Probably you should remove this one.
   Note: 01:22:363 - the one at is fine! Keep it!
   
   Wow, you really did great on this diff!

1. 00:22:860 (3) - try removing the circle here, as it feels a little extra. while we remove it, we'll have the vcals emphasized in a nice way.
2. 00:23:689 - and probably you should have a circle here to make this part match with the instruments.
3. 00:33:136 - just a little weird to me: you have this beat mapped in your Normal, but not here. Any reason for that?
4. 01:22:031 (2) - same suggestion as on the Normal. Remove the clap?
   
   Well done!

1. 00:01:562 (5) - isn't that overmapped? I'd rather remove this.
2. 00:18:551 (5,6) - it feels quite tricky to have 1/4 and 1/2 stacked in the same combo. Try to unstack the 1/2s here?
3. 00:26:341 - the beat is mapped in Hard, but ot in Insane (which is supposed to be harder). Agagin, any reason for that?
4. 00:37:114 - try to increase volume by 5-10%, let's make the circles more audible.
5. 00:52:694 (3) - just to emphasize the end of this antijump pattern, you might want to have a NC here.
6. 01:17:888 (3,4,5,6) - is it your intention to lower DS here or is it just DS being a little glitchy?
   
   Pretty nice. Not much to add.

-Bakari- wrote:

Just a few things bfore we'll push it forward. Please note, that you're free to ignore most of it.

[General]

1. More like a matter of personal preference, but I'd use something less bright.
   
   Example

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 108,196,217
   Combo2 : 202,84,222
   Combo3 : 95,218,88
   Combo4 : 200,100,100

[Easy]

1. Consider lowering your OD and HP to 2. 3 feels relatively hard and breaks the balance of the set (the rest of the set has OD and HP settings a little lower than AR).
2. 00:15:567 (4,2) - minor - is that overlap okay with you? It's quite noticeable while testing.
3. 00:26:506 (4,2) - (2) appears a little too suddenly. In order to avoid it, you can unstack it to make the pattern a little easier. Example
4. 00:32:142 (1,2,3) - vocals are pretty similar. So, you might want to keep rhythm mre consistent. example
   Note: if you want, you can have two sliders. That'll be okay, too.
   
   Great job!

[Normal]

1. 01:21:865 (4) - the clap here sounds quite extra. Probably you should remove this one.
   Note: 01:22:363 - the one at is fine! Keep it!
   
   Wow, you really did great on this diff!

[Hard]

1. 00:22:860 (3) - try removing the circle here, as it feels a little extra. while we remove it, we'll have the vcals emphasized in a nice way.
2. 00:23:689 - and probably you should have a circle here to make this part match with the instruments.
3. 00:33:136 - just a little weird to me: you have this beat mapped in your Normal, but not here. Any reason for that?
4. 01:22:031 (2) - same suggestion as on the Normal. Remove the clap?
   
   Well done!

[Insane]

1. 00:01:562 (5) - isn't that overmapped? I'd rather remove this.
2. 00:18:551 (5,6) - it feels quite tricky to have 1/4 and 1/2 stacked in the same combo. Try to unstack the 1/2s here?
3. 00:26:341 - the beat is mapped in Hard, but ot in Insane (which is supposed to be harder). Agagin, any reason for that?
4. 00:37:114 - try to increase volume by 5-10%, let's make the circles more audible.
5. 00:52:694 (3) - just to emphasize the end of this antijump pattern, you might want to have a NC here.
6. 01:17:888 (3,4,5,6) - is it your intention to lower DS here or is it just DS being a little glitchy?
   
   Pretty nice. Not much to add.

Find me when you check these suggestions.

1. 00:21:534 (1,2,3) - spacing feels inconsistent. (it doesn't look like you would do it intentionally, so...)
   Note: 00:35:457 (3,4,5) - same.

Re-Qualified!

Mood Breaker wrote:

wah sempet di unrank trnyata. congrats ipas for the first requalified map :>