Easy00:10:878 (1) - the shape of this just feels a bit..odd uwu
00:12:287 (2) - you could try moving this down a tiny bit as it might improve the flow
00:17:508 (2) - the overlap between this and 00:18:834 (1) - this is off by a bit ><
00:19:829 (2) - you could try moving it down a little since it almost aligns with the slider's end. Not sure if that's intended, I guess I just like things to be more 'round'
00:29:442 (1) - I'd move this up a tiiiiinnny bit c:
00:30:436 (2,3,1) - I'm not too sure about this as there is loooots of stacking going on. This + the fact that one of the sliders actually starts on a red tick might make it too confusing for an Easy Diff
00:42:701 (1) - I'd like it more if this would be shaped and placed in a way that I'd make 2 continue it's movement (bad explanation ><) this is
personal preference though, your way of mapping this seems fine owo00:48:005 (1) - copy pasting this feels a bit odd as you put a lot of emphasize on this with the finish hitsound. you could reshape wiithout breaking up any patterns too c:
00:59:939 (1,1) - not sure about this one, but try this rythm
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2836038 and see for yourself c:
01:04:580 (2) - would move this up a little. doesn't neccessarily have to align, I just think placing below the slider like that looks sort of odd
01:12:536 (2) - ~.~ I like this one!
01:13:530 (3,4) - not sure if blanketing like this is a good idea, might make it look too crowded
01:19:166 (3,1) - hmm I think I'd rather have those two align
Normal00:02:922 (1,2,3) - try moving this down a bit so it starts above the straight slider. it might improve the flow a bit c:
00:10:878 (1,2,3) - try moving this down and to the left a bit like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/283606300:17:508 (2) - I feel like this should be a clickable note instead of the repeat >< just a suggestion though, no need ot break up everything
00:26:790 (1,2,3) - not sure about this, but try moving it up a tiiiiiny bit to make the angle between the circle and this pattern a bit less sharp
00:30:768 (3) - Suggestion: try moving it to the left a little
00:35:409 (2,3,4,5,6) - try using this rythm:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2836072 I feel like the big white tick should be a clickable note >< you can achieve this with a different rythm too though, this is jsut something I came up with in a few seconds so ignoreing this and going for something different is absolutely fine too
00:44:690 (4) - you could try moving this up a tiny bit
00:57:287 (2,3,1) - try something like this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2836082 ?c:
01:05:243 (4,5) - blanket is off a bit
01:10:215 (2) - try deleting this and instead extending the next slider to follow the vocals
01:20:491 (1) - not sure if I like how this is shaped :/ I think it's the only slider in the diff that's shaped like this too
01:25:795 (2) - again, I feel like this big white tick should be clickable (not too fond of the shape either as it might confuse new players ><)
Hard00:00:270 (1) - I'd consider curving this to match the next slider
00:02:922 (1) - maybe try moving this to the left a little?
00:10:215 (4,5) - the movement the player has to do between these two might feel a bit weird >< It looks pretty neat though so keeping it should be fine
00:13:530 (1) - could move this a liiiiitle bit to the right to have it perfectly parallel to the 1/2 before
00:16:182 (1) - Suggestion: have this curve in the other direction to make it flow better into the next pattern c:
00:18:668 (5) - this white tick feels like it should have something clickable on it
00:22:480 (2,3,4) - I know what you're going for with these sliders, I'm just not sure if it'll end up looking good >< not saying you should change them though, I kind of like your idea
00:25:132 (2,3,4) - not sure why there's only one 'special-shaped' slider here though as they represent the same sound as before. The pattern looks good, I guess I'd just be more consistent to have them both the 'special'
00:26:790 (1,2,3) - not sure if stacking this is a good idea. not sure how it'll play
00:36:072 (4,5,6) - try this rythm ?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2836126You could also try using a slower SV for the slow part as changing the SV is fine during a hard diff
00:38:724 (3) - not sure if those three circles will be too out of place. I mean maybe it's just me but I just can't figure out what you're following with these ;w;
00:51:652 (4) - would try curving this a little to match the sliders before
00:51:983 (5,6,1) - loots of stacking. this looks neat, but I'm not sure about how this'll play ><
00:54:635 (1) - try moving it a tiiiiny bit to the left
00:56:458 (2,3,4,5,1) - could try making this a star if you're unhappy about the current pattern :3
00:59:939 (2,3,4,5) - this is probably just me, but I feel as though this looks a bit odd
01:06:237 (4) - could try moving this to the left to have it continue the movement of the oddly shaped slider
01:13:862 (4) - try just making this a repeat and then leaving out the next one?
01:20:491 (1,2) - blanket seems off a bit
01:21:486 (3) - could maaaybe try and have it blanket with the slider before, not too sure if that'd look to forced though
01:22:480 (1,2) - I like those!
01:25:132 (1,2) - those are not supposed to blanket right?
Insane00:02:425 (3,4) - not sure if you're trying a bit too hard to stack things with this. Might want to try and just place 4 below 3 c:
00:04:580 (1,2) - are these so close to each other on purpose? this might be a bit confusing while playing
00:16:845 (4) - could MAYBE just MAYBE try and curve it to make it blanket with the head of 1
00:28:447 (2,3,4) - is this intentional?
00:18:005 (2,3,4) - could try moving this down and to the right a little bit to improve the flow
00:31:431 (4) - I'd maybe move this down a bit and then have it face in the direction of the next circle
I'm really not too experienced when it comes to modding insanes, but it seems like you might be trying a bit too hard to stack things. That probably comes down to personal preference though c:.00:50:823 (6,7) - try having these start on the white ticks, it feels nicer to me c:
00:54:635 (1,2) - not sure if this overlap will play nice since the slider curves to the right and then you suddenly have to move your cursor to the left a bit >< maybe try moving two a little to change this?
01:00:602 (4) - this stack is off a tiny bit c:
01:01:265 (1,2) - this might just be me, but I feel as though this looks sort of odd. maybe try curving 1 a little?
01:12:536 (4,5,6) - try this rythm
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2836240 instead? I just feel as though the big white tick should have something clickable on it
01:15:519 (5,6) - the stack is off bit a bit
01:18:503 (1) - try making this a curved one instead? so that it makes for a nice and round-ish movement between the two jumps c:
I'm kind of unexperienced when it comes to modding insanes, so you should not break up any patterns you like over any suggestions that I've made!