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Nitta Emi - Tankyuu Dreaming [Taiko]

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Nardoxyribonucleic
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年3月9日 at 22:48:38

Artist: Nitta Emi
Title: Tankyuu Dreaming
Source: 探偵歌劇 ミルキィホームズ TD
Tags: Taiko Tantei Opera Milky Holmes TD Ending TV Size JUDYDANNY
BPM: 147
Filesize: 1545kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.14 stars, 204 notes)
  2. JuDa's Oni (3.45 stars, 394 notes)
  3. Kantan (1.43 stars, 103 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (2.89 stars, 290 notes)
  5. Oni (3.82 stars, 422 notes)
Download: Nitta Emi - Tankyuu Dreaming
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#11 - Taiko mapset
BG - 100%
Kantan - 100%
Futsuu - 100%
Muzukashii - 100%
Oni - 100%
JuDa's Oni - 100% (by JUDYDANNY)
tina71129
看到我老婆唱的就來留言了
tina71129
我的Mod來了!~

[ Muzukashii]
00:31:908 (55) - d? 讓後面的K更清楚

[ Oni]
00:15:989 (1) - k或者刪除? 因為這裡沒有人聲
00:30:581 (59) - 移到 00:30:785 - ?
00:40:785 (115) - 刪除
00:56:704 (201) - d

我的Mod質量不怎麼高www 祝好運^^
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

-Eternal Love- wrote:

我的Mod來了!~

[ Muzukashii]
00:31:908 (55) - d? 讓後面的K更清楚 It's a good idea. But I would prefer using k for stricter snare consistency.

[ Oni]
00:15:989 (1) - k或者刪除? 因為這裡沒有人聲 d could follow the low-pitched piano there.
00:30:581 (59) - 移到 00:30:785 - ? I think ddk could accompany the vocal in a smoother way.
00:40:785 (115) - 刪除 Retained to map the drum sound there.
00:56:704 (201) - d k would fit the instrument sound in a way better imo.

我的Mod質量不怎麼高www 祝好運^^
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Kunieda
[Kantan]
00:47:010 (37) - K
00:30:683 (18) - k
00:33:540 (23) - remove(?)

[Muzukashii]
00:42:112 (89,90,91,92) - add finish

[Oni]
00:26:398 (42) - k
01:15:989 (303,304) - crtl+g

hmm futsuu seems to be fine, nice bg lol
good luck :D
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Kunieda wrote:

[Kantan]
00:47:010 (37) - K D would be better since the sound is identical to 00:43:744 (35) -
00:30:683 (18) - k As the vocal pitch is lower than 00:29:867 (17) - , d would be fine imo.
00:33:540 (23) - remove(?) I prefer keeping this because of the presence of both snare and vocal.

[Muzukashii]
00:42:112 (89,90,91,92) - add finish fixed

[Oni]
00:26:398 (42) - k d would be better as it has the same vocal pitch as 00:26:602 (43) -
01:15:989 (303,304) - crtl+g k d could maintain a better snare consistency.

hmm futsuu seems to be fine, nice bg lol That's good to hear~
good luck :D
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Nofool
Hey'

Good set, futsuu could be improved imo, i found nothing really important in the other diffs

[Kantan]
- 00:32:316 (21,22) - swap colors ? fits a bit more the vocal/instrumental imo.
any other suggestion would break the diff consistency so... nice diff lol

[Futsuu]
mm you follow the piano rather than the vocal here ?_? it works but im a bit surprised since i was like "it'll prolly fits more the vocal than the kantan does". d at - 00:01:908 (3) - instead of - 00:02:010 - as the first example.
-if you don't wanna read, what i suggest below is :

for the - 00:04:561 - 00:10:479 - section (cursor is at - 00:07:418 -). consider a bit this suggestion pls x_x.
^ explanations
- 00:05:173 (11) - this one follows nothing, would sounds better at - 00:05:377 - imo. Then you have a lot of notes in a row so... maybe del - 00:05:785 (12) - or del - 00:08:234 (18,22) - to leave more breaks after finisher. But then - 00:08:642 (19,20,23,24) - don't sound that good so maybe also move - 00:08:642 (19) - to - 00:08:540 - that fits a bit more the vocal/piano imo (same for - 00:10:275 (23) -).
- 00:16:398 (2,3) - fits the vocal yeah but something like add d at - 00:16:602 - and move - 00:16:806 (3) - to - 00:17:010 - would be more logic since this part still follow more the piano.
- 00:49:255 (76) - forgot the finiser or...?
- mm you applied my second suggestion, move - 01:10:683 (129) - to - 01:10:479 -, same for - 01:12:316 (133) -. <= sounds better this way imo btw.
- 01:23:744 (162) - and - 01:25:377 (166) - ^.

[Muzukashii]
- 00:03:642 (8,9) - sounds a bit weird since (8) follows the vocal and (9) suddenly focus on the piano, dunnoh what to suggest here tho :c
- 00:22:724 - mm it would definitely sounds better with a d here but maybe too much notes, idk.
- 00:24:357 - ^.
- 00:49:255 (110) - ok still no finisher so it was on purpose, the instrumental isn't as high as for - the previous finishers but it would more consistent with another here imo.
- 01:07:214 - add something here and del - 01:07:826 (169) - ? just like at - 01:03:949 -.
- 01:12:724 (188) - del ? drums yeah but you dodged it at - 01:11:091 -. it could emphasize more the ddd.
- 01:20:275 - mm i can't really suggest to ad something here 'cause xx xxx.... maybe it is ok but im not sure so i won't suggest anything, but if you applied the other similar suggest idk ;_;.

[Oni]
- 00:35:683 - add something ? fits more the xx xx rythm you use for this section, and looks cooler to play imo.
- 00:37:316 - ^.
- 01:14:153 (296,297,298) - swap colors ? fits more th vocal.
- 01:21:193 (333,334,335) - ^.
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'
bananannian
Hi! From my forum NM/M4M taiko queue.
I am pretty thorough, so don't feel bad if I point out a lot of issues. A lot of times they are just my opinions, so feel free to object to them. :3
After looking through my mod, would you mind taking the time to check out my taiko set? <3

Btw, I don't know how to make bpm/offset/scroll speed changes, so don't ask me those pls. XD

d = don
k = katsu
D = big don
K = big katsu


[General]
Your music file cuts off at the end, is that intentional?

Good difficulty curve, but Kantan could be easier, and Oni harder.
Below 1.5: Easy/Kantan
Below 2.25: Normal/Futsuu
Below 3.75: Hard/Muzukashii
Below 5.25: Insane/Oni
Above 5.25: Expert/Inner Oni

Your song has a lot of offbeat patterns in the vocals... It would be hard for beginners to follow the note patterns in Kantan and Futsuu. They're ok for Muzukashii and Oni only.

Adding some timing changes could make the map more interesting to play, just a suggestion ^_~

[Kantan]
Consider reducing the HP drain rate and overall difficulty, and reducing overall number of notes placed on the offbeat.

00:11:704 (9,10,11,12) - offbeat pattern is too harsh for kantan difficulty. Suggest recomposing.
00:24:153 (10,11) - change to dk, maintain previous pattern
00:27:214 (14) - move to 00:27:418, offbeat pattern is too harsh for kantan difficulty.
00:32:928 (22) - change to k
00:54:969 (46) - move to 00:55:173, offbeat pattern is too harsh for kantan difficulty.
00:58:234 (51) - move to 00:58:438, ^
01:01:500 (54) - move to 01:01:704, ^
01:11:500 (68) - change to K, follow pattern
01:13:744 (71,72,73) - offbeat pattern is too harsh for kantan difficulty. Suggest recomposing.
01:24:562 (87) - change to K, follow pattern
01:26:806 (90,91,92,93) - offbeat pattern is too harsh for kantan difficulty. Suggest recomposing.

[Futsuu]
00:09:459 (21) - change to D, follow previous pattern
00:28:642 (27) - change to K, highlight piano glissando
00:32:928 (39) - change to D, accentuate beat
00:40:887 - add d
00:51:908 (83) - change to d, onbeat
01:01:908 (107,108) - change to DD, follow previous D
01:11:500 (131) - change to d, follow previous pattern
01:24:562 (164) - change to d, ^

[Muzukashii]
Good muzukashii! Could be harder, 3 stars would be ideal.

00:11:091 (33,34,35,36) - change to kdkk, vocals are pretty high pitched, should be k instead of d
00:21:295 (19) - move to 00:21:193 , follow vocals
00:23:949 (28) - change to k
00:49:255 (110) - change to K, follow previous pattern
00:50:275 (112) - change to d, this is the start of a rising sequence of 3, onbeat should not be accentuated
01:01:908 (150,151) - change to DD, same as Futsuu
01:19:255 (211) - change to d
01:26:193 (242,243,244,245) - change to kdkk, vocals are pretty high pitched, should be k instead of d

[Oni]
Oni is overall pretty easy, 4 stars would be ideal for your curve.

00:11:091 (45,48,49) - change to k, vocals are pretty high pitched, should be k instead of d
00:15:989 (1) - remove this note, does not follow anything in the music
00:28:234 - you can add a 1/4 note run here
00:36:500 (90) - change to d, accentuate previous note
00:36:704 (91,92) - change to kd, vocals are k according to your pattern.
00:40:683 (114,115,116) - change to kdk, ^
00:49:255 (164) - change to K, follow previous pattern
01:01:500 (228) - change to k, high pitched strings
01:08:234 (264) - change to k, high pitched vocals
01:17:622 (311) - change to d
01:26:193 (363,366,367) - change to k, vocals are pretty high pitched, should be k instead of d


There you go! Nice beatmap overall. Hope you find this mod helpful, and good luck beatmapping! :3
mintong89
Hi M4M!

[Taiko Oni]

00:15:989 - => 00:18:336 - I'd like to recommend you to reduce some note at here. Yes you follow the vocal, but the rhythm at here is soft and this is far away to chorus.
00:19:255 (15) - k? the vocal tone at here is higher than previous one, and dk dk pattern seem great too.
00:21:908 - Add a note? The piano doesn't stop here. (If you say follow vocal it will be more weird too because you follow piano at 00:21:500 (24,25) - these note.)
00:25:377 - Add a k at here? It's quite far between the previous and next note imo.
00:27:622 (47) - k? I think dk kd is more near with song tone.
01:01:500 (229) - K? the tone at here is quite high too.
01:07:622 (261,262,263) - kkd? ddd sound dull here.
01:13:030 (292) - How about delete this and 01:13:132 (293) - big note because I hear the drum cymbal at here is quite loud.

[Taiko Muzukashii]

00:19:051 (11,12,13,14) - Same to Oni.
00:51:500 (117) - How about k here? It will more fit between vocal and drum snare imo.
And I suggest reduce some dd note at chorus lol, it sound too much for Muzukashii player.

[Taiko Futsuu]

Fine to me.

[Taiko Kantan]

Fine to me too.

That's all I think.
Good Luck! :)
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Nofool wrote:

Hey'

Good set, futsuu could be improved imo, i found nothing really important in the other diffs

[Kantan]
- 00:32:316 (21,22) - swap colors ? fits a bit more the vocal/instrumental imo. As the vocal pitch is decreasing, K d would be better.
any other suggestion would break the diff consistency so... nice diff lol

[Futsuu]
mm you follow the piano rather than the vocal here ?_? it works but im a bit surprised since i was like "it'll prolly fits more the vocal than the kantan does". d at - 00:01:908 (3) - instead of - 00:02:010 - as the first example. I did not put the note at 00:02:010 - because 3/4 notes are too hard for Futsuu.
-if you don't wanna read, what i suggest below is :

for the - 00:04:561 - 00:10:479 - section (cursor is at - 00:07:418 -). consider a bit this suggestion pls x_x. fixed partially.
^ explanations
- 00:05:173 (11) - this one follows nothing, would sounds better at - 00:05:377 - imo. Then you have a lot of notes in a row so... maybe del - 00:05:785 (12) - or del - 00:08:234 (18,22) - to leave more breaks after finisher. But then - 00:08:642 (19,20,23,24) - don't sound that good so maybe also move - 00:08:642 (19) - to - 00:08:540 - that fits a bit more the vocal/piano imo (same for - 00:10:275 (23) -).
- 00:16:398 (2,3) - fits the vocal yeah but something like add d at - 00:16:602 - and move - 00:16:806 (3) - to - 00:17:010 - would be more logic since this part still follow more the piano. The current pattern could follow the vocal in a simpler way.
- 00:49:255 (76) - forgot the finiser or...? I don't put finish here since the sound is not strong enough compared to the previous ones.
- mm you applied my second suggestion, move - 01:10:683 (129) - to - 01:10:479 -, same for - 01:12:316 (133) -. <= sounds better this way imo btw. fixed
- 01:23:744 (162) - and - 01:25:377 (166) - ^. ^

[Muzukashii]
- 00:03:642 (8,9) - sounds a bit weird since (8) follows the vocal and (9) suddenly focus on the piano, dunnoh what to suggest here tho :c swapped the notes at 00:03:949 (9,10) - to make the flow smoother.
- 00:22:724 - mm it would definitely sounds better with a d here but maybe too much notes, idk. As the music is relatively calm in this part, I would prefer a lower note density.
- 00:24:357 - ^. ^
- 00:49:255 (110) - ok still no finisher so it was on purpose, the instrumental isn't as high as for - the previous finishers but it would more consistent with another here imo. refer to the explanation in Futsuu.
- 01:07:214 - add something here and del - 01:07:826 (169) - ? just like at - 01:03:949 -. It's a good idea, but I'm afraid that there would be too much 1/4 duplets there.
- 01:12:724 (188) - del ? drums yeah but you dodged it at - 01:11:091 -. it could emphasize more the ddd. Retained since 01:25:785 - also has a note.
- 01:20:275 - mm i can't really suggest to ad something here 'cause xx xxx.... maybe it is ok but im not sure so i won't suggest anything, but if you applied the other similar suggest idk ;_;. It would be too hard for Muzukashii.

[Oni]
- 00:35:683 - add something ? fits more the xx xx rythm you use for this section, and looks cooler to play imo. I think it would be better to make a longer halt for the vocal there.
- 00:37:316 - ^. ^
- 01:14:153 (296,297,298) - swap colors ? fits more th vocal. Retained for pattern consistency across the diffs.
- 01:21:193 (333,334,335) - ^. The vocal at 01:21:500 (335) - is higher-pitched than 01:21:295 (334) - , so the current pattern would be better.
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

bananannian wrote:

Hi! From my forum NM/M4M taiko queue.
I am pretty thorough, so don't feel bad if I point out a lot of issues. A lot of times they are just my opinions, so feel free to object to them. :3
After looking through my mod, would you mind taking the time to check out my taiko set? <3

Btw, I don't know how to make bpm/offset/scroll speed changes, so don't ask me those pls. XD

d = don
k = katsu
D = big don
K = big katsu


[General]
Your music file cuts off at the end, is that intentional? That is the same as the one in anime.

Good difficulty curve, but Kantan could be easier, and Oni harder.
Below 1.5: Easy/Kantan
Below 2.25: Normal/Futsuu
Below 3.75: Hard/Muzukashii
Below 5.25: Insane/Oni
Above 5.25: Expert/Inner Oni

Your song has a lot of offbeat patterns in the vocals... It would be hard for beginners to follow the note patterns in Kantan and Futsuu. They're ok for Muzukashii and Oni only.

Adding some timing changes could make the map more interesting to play, just a suggestion ^_~

[Kantan]
Consider reducing the HP drain rate and overall difficulty, and reducing overall number of notes placed on the offbeat. The current difficulty settings are fine imo.

00:11:704 (9,10,11,12) - offbeat pattern is too harsh for kantan difficulty. Suggest recomposing. I followed both the stressed sounds and the vocal there, and they are consistent to all other difficulties.
00:24:153 (10,11) - change to dk, maintain previous pattern As the vocal pitch is decreasing, k d would be better.
00:27:214 (14) - move to 00:27:418, offbeat pattern is too harsh for kantan difficulty. There is no beat at that point.
00:32:928 (22) - change to k d could fit the pitch drop there.
00:54:969 (46) - move to 00:55:173, offbeat pattern is too harsh for kantan difficulty. same as 00:27:214 (14) -
00:58:234 (51) - move to 00:58:438, ^ ^
01:01:500 (54) - move to 01:01:704, ^ ^
01:11:500 (68) - change to K, follow pattern Nope, the beat there is not strong.
01:13:744 (71,72,73) - offbeat pattern is too harsh for kantan difficulty. Suggest recomposing. same as 00:11:704 (9,10,11,12) -
01:24:562 (87) - change to K, follow pattern same as 01:11:500 (68) -
01:26:806 (90,91,92,93) - offbeat pattern is too harsh for kantan difficulty. Suggest recomposing. same as 00:11:704 (9,10,11,12) -

[Futsuu]
00:09:459 (21) - change to D, follow previous pattern The vocal is higher-pitched than 00:07:826 (17) - , so K would fit well.
00:28:642 (27) - change to K, highlight piano glissando k would be better for an ordinary snare.
00:32:928 (39) - change to D, accentuate beat Umm... Neither the beat nor vocal needs emphasis.
00:40:887 - add d I prefer a similar break pattern like 00:32:724 -
00:51:908 (83) - change to d, onbeat k would be better for the vocal.
01:01:908 (107,108) - change to DD, follow previous D K K would emphasize the end of the pre-kiai in a way better.
01:11:500 (131) - change to d, follow previous pattern k would be better since the vocal is higher-pitched than 01:09:867 -
01:24:562 (164) - change to d, ^ same as ^

[Muzukashii]
Good muzukashii! Could be harder, 3 stars would be ideal. Considering the relatively low song BPM, the current difficulty would be high enough for a Muzukashii.

00:11:091 (33,34,35,36) - change to kdkk, vocals are pretty high pitched, should be k instead of d The highest-pitched vocal occurs at 00:11:500 - , so the current pattern could fit well.
00:21:295 (19) - move to 00:21:193 , follow vocals It sounds legit. However, I would prefer using 3/4 notes at 00:22:520 - because of the change in music.
00:23:949 (28) - change to k d could maintain a better consistency of vocal pattern.
00:49:255 (110) - change to K, follow previous pattern The beat is not strong enough.
00:50:275 (112) - change to d, this is the start of a rising sequence of 3, onbeat should not be accentuated Nope, D here could mark the start of the next session.
01:01:908 (150,151) - change to DD, same as Futsuu same as Futsuu
01:19:255 (211) - change to d I followed the snare there.
01:26:193 (242,243,244,245) - change to kdkk, vocals are pretty high pitched, should be k instead of d same as 00:11:091 (33,34,35,36) -

[Oni]
Oni is overall pretty easy, 4 stars would be ideal for your curve. Similar to Muzukashii.

00:11:091 (45,48,49) - change to k, vocals are pretty high pitched, should be k instead of d ^
00:15:989 (1) - remove this note, does not follow anything in the music I think you missed the piano there.
00:28:234 - you can add a 1/4 note run here I prefer keeping the part simpler than the next one.
00:36:500 (90) - change to d, accentuate previous note k is also fine imo.
00:36:704 (91,92) - change to kd, vocals are k according to your pattern. The vocal here has a lower pitch, so dk would be better.
00:40:683 (114,115,116) - change to kdk, ^ The vocal at 00:41:091 (117,118) - is higher-pitched, so ddd would be fine.
00:49:255 (164) - change to K, follow previous pattern same as Muzukashii
01:01:500 (228) - change to k, high pitched strings D could maintain pattern consistency as Muzukashii.
01:08:234 (264) - change to k, high pitched vocals Increased pitch occurs at the next note, that's why I put d here.
01:17:622 (311) - change to d Retained for snare consistency.
01:26:193 (363,366,367) - change to k, vocals are pretty high pitched, should be k instead of d same as 00:11:091 (45,48,49) -


There you go! Nice beatmap overall. Hope you find this mod helpful, and good luck beatmapping! :3
Thanks for your mod~ :)

mintong89 wrote:

Hi M4M!

[Taiko Oni]

00:15:989 - => 00:18:336 - I'd like to recommend you to reduce some note at here. Yes you follow the vocal, but the rhythm at here is soft and this is far away to chorus. fixed
00:19:255 (15) - k? the vocal tone at here is higher than previous one, and dk dk pattern seem great too. fixed
00:21:908 - Add a note? The piano doesn't stop here. (If you say follow vocal it will be more weird too because you follow piano at 00:21:500 (24,25) - these note.) I see your point. But I would prefer following only the more obvious piano like 00:21:500 (23,24,25) -
00:25:377 - Add a k at here? It's quite far between the previous and next note imo. I think keeping the break pattern similar to 00:23:744 - sounds better.
00:27:622 (47) - k? I think dk kd is more near with song tone. d would be fine since the vocal pitch is the same as 00:27:826 (46) -
01:01:500 (229) - K? the tone at here is quite high too. It's a good idea. But I think that D here would result in a smoother flow.
01:07:622 (261,262,263) - kkd? ddd sound dull here. ddd would be okay since the vocal pitch is constant.
01:13:030 (292) - How about delete this and 01:13:132 (293) - big note because I hear the drum cymbal at here is quite loud. I would prefer making it similar to 01:26:193 - for consistency.

[Taiko Muzukashii]

00:19:051 (11,12,13,14) - Same to Oni. fixed
00:51:500 (117) - How about k here? It will more fit between vocal and drum snare imo. d would follow the downtrend of vocal in a way better, though the snare is sacrificed.
And I suggest reduce some dd note at chorus lol, it sound too much for Muzukashii player. I'll keep it in mind. Currently I would like to keep them as they are.

[Taiko Futsuu]

Fine to me.

[Taiko Kantan]

Fine to me too.

That's all I think.
Good Luck! :)
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Charlotte
hi~.from game-in req

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is big don note
  4. K is big kat note
[ General]


  • Good~
[ Kantan]


  • 00:45:995 - add note. because,Futsuu=dkd (1/2). so I think add note? (option)

    00:49:266 - ^
[ Futsuu]


  • 00:58:245 - add finish or change to k
[ Muzukashii]


  • 00:21:289 - move to 00:21:188 - ?

    00:53:949 - move to 00:53:845 -

    00:54:157 - add k.
[ Oni]


  • 00:53:949 - move to 00:53:845 -

    01:03:048 - add k. (option)
Nice map Good luck :)
Gemu-
Hi Nardoxyribonucleic :oops:, from Game's Queue~ Sorry for the delay...:c

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)


[kantan]

00:45:173 - Change to K to follow the pattern,
01:00:071 - ^

[Futsuu]

00:04:153 - Change to k for kd dk.
00:11:091 - Change to K? is better.
00:26:398 - Change to k? for dk kd.
00:58:234 - Change to k?
01:08:438 - Change to d?

[Muzukashii]

00:26:398 - Change to k?
00:27:826 - ^
01:27:214 - Change to K and here 01:27:622 - Change to D.

[Oni]

00:05:785 - Change to k?
00:26:398 - Change to k for the pattern in this part.
00:27:622 - ^
00:46:704 - Change to d.
01:27:214 - Change to K and here 01:27:622 - Change to D.


Great Beatmap! I hope my mod has been helpful, good luck~
Niko-nyan
Hi Nardo :3 M4M from ingame

  • Oni
    00:06:806 (28,29) - maybe you can try kd in here
    00:26:398 (41) - how about k in here?
    00:27:826 (46) - ^[ the pitch in here a bit high ]
    01:13:135 (291) - ^
  • Muzukashii
    00:19:051 (11,12) - how about swap this note?
    00:26:398 (35) - how about k in here?
    00:27:826 (40) - ^ [ the pitch in here a bit high ]
    00:58:847 (142) - i'm not sure with this D but it's better with K
    01:22:520 (225,226,227) - i didn't hear any triple sound in here maybe you can delete 226
  • Futsuu
    00:26:398 (23) - how about k in here?
    00:27:826 ( 27) - ^ [ the pitch in here a bit high ]
    00:52:520 (86) - how about d ? because the sound a bit low in here
  • Kantan
    00:52:316 (42) - how about try d in here ?
I like the song so much omg <3 hope it's ranked soon
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Charlotte wrote:

hi~.from game-in req

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is big don note
  4. K is big kat note
[ General]


  • Good~
[ Kantan]


  • 00:45:995 - add note. because,Futsuu=dkd (1/2). so I think add note? (option) Retained for simplicity since it will be a red-line note.

    00:49:266 - ^ ^
[ Futsuu]


  • 00:58:245 - add finish or change to k I think it would be a bit overemphasized to use D. Also, d would be fine since the vocal pitch is the same as 00:58:030 -
[ Muzukashii]


  • 00:21:289 - move to 00:21:188 - ? The current placement could fit the noticeable piano there. I would prefer using 3/4 notes at 00:22:520 - because of the slight change in music.

    00:53:949 - move to 00:53:845 - Following the main beat here would be smoother imo.

    00:54:157 - add k. Keeping this blank could show a better emphasis to the previous five 1/2 patterns used.
[ Oni]


  • 00:53:949 - move to 00:53:845 - same as Muzukashii

    01:03:048 - add k. (option) Retained for pattern consistency as 01:16:091 -
Nice map Good luck :)
Thanks for your mod and star~ :)

game rock wrote:

Hi Nardoxyribonucleic :oops:, from Game's Queue~ Sorry for the delay...:c

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)


[kantan]

00:45:173 - Change to K to follow the pattern, D would be better since the vocal pitch is lower than 00:48:438 -
01:00:071 - ^ similar reason as ^

[Futsuu]

00:04:153 - Change to k for kd dk. The piano pitch is decreasing across 00:03:949 (8,9) - , so d would fit.
00:11:091 - Change to K? is better. Nope, the vocal pitch is the same as 00:11:704 (26) -
00:26:398 - Change to k? for dk kd. d would be better since the vocal pitch is the same as 00:26:602 (24) -
00:58:234 - Change to k? same as ^
01:08:438 - Change to d? k would mark the pitch increase of the vocal there.

[Muzukashii]

00:26:398 - Change to k? same as Futsuu
00:27:826 - ^ same reason as ^
01:27:214 - Change to K and here 01:27:622 - Change to D. D K would be better because of the increasing vocal pitch.

[Oni]

00:05:785 - Change to k? d would be fine as the vocal pitch is the same as 00:05:581 (22) -
00:26:398 - Change to k for the pattern in this part. same as Futsuu
00:27:622 - ^ same reason as ^
00:46:704 - Change to d. The current pattern has a smoother flow imo.
01:27:214 - Change to K and here 01:27:622 - Change to D. same as Muzukashii


Great Beatmap! I hope my mod has been helpful, good luck~
Thanks for your mod~ :)

Niko-nyan wrote:

Hi Nardo :3 M4M from ingame

  • Oni
    00:06:806 (28,29) - maybe you can try kd in here I see your point, but since the vocal pitch there is much lower comparing to 00:06:398 (26,27) - , dd would be fine.
    00:26:398 (41) - how about k in here? d would be better since the vocal pitch is the same as 00:26:602 (42) -
    00:27:826 (46) - ^[ the pitch in here a bit high ] similar reason as ^
    01:13:135 (291) - ^ Retained for hitsound consistency as 01:26:193 (362) -
  • Muzukashii
    00:19:051 (11,12) - how about swap this note? d k would be better as the vocal pitch is increasing.
    00:26:398 (35) - how about k in here? same as Oni
    00:27:826 (40) - ^ [ the pitch in here a bit high ] ^
    00:58:847 (142) - i'm not sure with this D but it's better with K D would be fine because of the pitch drop of vocal.
    01:22:520 (225,226,227) - i didn't hear any triple sound in here maybe you can delete 226 There is a noticeable sound at 01:22:622 -
  • Futsuu
    00:26:398 (23) - how about k in here? same as Oni
    00:27:826 ( 27) - ^ [ the pitch in here a bit high ] ^
    00:52:520 (86) - how about d ? because the sound a bit low in here Umm... As the vocal has constant pitch, k would be fine as well.
  • Kantan
    00:52:316 (42) - how about try d in here ? I followed the snare there.
I like the song so much omg <3 hope it's ranked soon
Thanks for your mod and star~ :)
JUDYDANNY
Hello Nardo~~ :3:3:3 Here's a Taiko Mod ~.
Very nice song :D :D and , you've already mapped to clean. 8-) 8-)
So, I will suggest to mod as just only my opinion.
My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
D and K are finisher .
No Comment is already explained or opinion.
“+ ?” is opinion.(※example→ add? , remove?)
Big text is strong suggestion.
Brown Big is Serious problem. Maybe you must change to something.


Mod
[Kantan]
  1. 00:20:479 (6) - .delete? rhythm is good but,,,, I think it sounds not loud.Removing is better imo.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:05:785 (12) – delete? for bass sounds flow. (00:04:561 - ~~~00:07:418 -).
  2. add a finisher? sounds good as an accent, and easing of uncomfortable at 00:41:193 – hits as you know.
  3. 00:39:255 (56,57,58,59) – kd-dk?
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:28:234 (41) - k? for piano and dat sounds up something since 00:27:826 -.
  2. Either?
    A.00:31:704 (55) – add don? *- for violin flow, if you put 00:31:198 - k.
    B. 00:30:887 (51) – change to don? * - for vocal makes more pure…?
  3. 00:22:112 (22) – change to k…? for piano. I guess it can also follow the vocal…?
  4. 01:07:214 (167) – add note … k? for vocal, same as before part.
  5. 01:20:275 (216) -^
[Oni]
  1. 00:22:112 (25) - k? same as Muzukashii.
  2. 00:29:765 (54) – put k here? I guess it’s good to make an enhance as vocal.
  3. 00:50:581 (172) – delete…? and 00:51:091 (1,3) – change to (d,k) ?
    * 1- 00:49:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – I felt this 5-3 stream made over power. So , I suggest you to decrease the density.
    * 2 –if delete 1/4-triplet, I guess it’s little boring dkdk…? so change color is for avoid to that.
Good Luck! :D
( ・∀・)ノ ---===≡≡≡ ★☆★☆
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hello Nardo~~ :3:3:3 Here's a Taiko Mod ~.
Very nice song :D :D and , you've already mapped to clean. 8-) 8-)
So, I will suggest to mod as just only my opinion.
My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
D and K are finisher .
No Comment is already explained or opinion.
“+ ?” is opinion.(※example→ add? , remove?)
Big text is strong suggestion.
Brown Big is Serious problem. Maybe you must change to something.


Mod
[Kantan]
  1. 00:20:479 (6) - .delete? rhythm is good but,,,, I think it sounds not loud.Removing is better imo. fixed
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:05:785 (12) – delete? for bass sounds flow. (00:04:561 - ~~~00:07:418 -). fixed
  2. add a finisher? sounds good as an accent, and easing of uncomfortable at 00:41:193 – hits as you know. It's a good idea~ :3
  3. 00:39:255 (56,57,58,59) – kd-dk? I see your point to follow the snares, but dk-kd could match the vocal in a way better.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:28:234 (41) - k? for piano and dat sounds up something since 00:27:826 -. fixed
  2. Either?
    A.00:31:704 (55) – add don? *- for violin flow, if you put 00:31:198 - k. Nice, but I think it'd be better to have a longer break here for simplicity so players will not get confused after hitting the 1/4 dd pattern.
    B. 00:30:887 (51) – change to don? * - for vocal makes more pure…? k would be better since the vocal pitch becomes higher.
  3. 00:22:112 (22) – change to k…? for piano. I guess it can also follow the vocal…? As the pitch of the piano is the same as 00:21:295 (19) - , it would be better to use d as well for consistency.
  4. 01:07:214 (167) – add note … k? for vocal, same as before part. A bit hard for Muzukashii because there will be too many 1/4 notes.
  5. 01:20:275 (216) -^ ^
[Oni]
  1. 00:22:112 (25) - k? same as Muzukashii. refer to the explanation in Muzukashii
  2. 00:29:765 (54) – put k here? I guess it’s good to make an enhance as vocal. I think it would be better to use d for consistency with Muzukashii and Futsuu.
  3. 00:50:581 (172) – delete…? and 00:51:091 (1,3) – change to (d,k) ? Deletion is not that good because the vocal pattern is similar to 00:52:214 - , so it would be fine to keep the ddk triplet.
    * 1- 00:49:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – I felt this 5-3 stream made over power. So , I suggest you to decrease the density. I think such a pattern constellation could reflect the music there appropriately.
    * 2 –if delete 1/4-triplet, I guess it’s little boring dkdk…? so change color is for avoid to that. That's why I placed the 1/4 notes there ;)
Good Luck! :D
( ・∀・)ノ ---===≡≡≡ ★☆★☆
Thanks for your mod and stars JuDa~ :)
Added JuDa's Oni.
Racoon-
Sorry to late ㅠㅠ :(

[Warning]
My Mapping Style is following vocal first and mix with back melody.
My Mod Quality is bad.
And...............
My English is poor........................ :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(

[Kantan]
00:09:459 (7) - D? - Same rhythm and tone as 00:07:826 (6)
01:08:234 (62,63) - Ctrl+G? - Follow drum rhythm
01:11:500 (67) - K? - I think this pattern mate with 01:09:867 (65)
01:21:296 (81,82) - Ctrl+G? - ^ [01:08:234 (62,63)]
01:24:562 (86) - K? - ^ [01:11:500 (67)]

[Futsuu]
00:03:949 (8) - k? - Follow melody
00:09:459 (20) - Same as Kantan
00:27:010 (25) - Add d? - Follow Vocal - I think you follow melody
00:49:255 (77) - K? - I think this pattern mate with 00:45:989 (71)
00:51:908 (84) - K? - ^ [00:50:275 (79)]
01:11:500 (132) - K? - ^ [01:11:500 (132)]
01:24:562 (165) - K? - ^ [01:22:929 (161)]

[Muzukashii]
Good!
01:01:295 (148,149) - d K?

I am poor at Oni Mod... Sorry :(
[JuDa's Oni]
00:20:275 (4,5) - Ctrl+G? - Follow vocal
01:06:398 (1,2,3) - d d k? - ^
01:07:214 (5,6,7) - ^
01:11:500 (32) - k? - ^
01:12:316 (36) - k? - ^
01:16:295 (4) - Delete? / 01:16:398 (1) - D? - I think it's emphasized part
01:23:744 (5,10,14) - k? - Follow vocal

[Oni]
Good!

Here is

Good Luck !!!
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

- Racoon - wrote:

Sorry to late ㅠㅠ :(

[Warning]
My Mapping Style is following vocal first and mix with back melody.
My Mod Quality is bad.
And...............
My English is poor........................ :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(

[Kantan]
00:09:459 (7) - D? - Same rhythm and tone as 00:07:826 (6) K would be better as vocal pitch increases.
01:08:234 (62,63) - Ctrl+G? - Follow drum rhythm d k could accompany the pitch increase of the music there.
01:11:500 (67) - K? - I think this pattern mate with 01:09:867 (65) This would be a bit overemphasized as the sound is not very strong.
01:21:296 (81,82) - Ctrl+G? - ^ [01:08:234 (62,63)] same as 01:08:234 (62,63) -
01:24:562 (86) - K? - ^ [01:11:500 (67)] same as 01:11:500 (67) -

[Futsuu]
00:03:949 (8) - k? - Follow melody d would be fine since the piano is lower-pitched than 00:03:540 (7) -
00:09:459 (20) - Same as Kantan refer to the explanation in Kantan
00:27:010 (25) - Add d? - Follow Vocal - I think you follow melody I would prefer a similar break pattern as 00:26:193 - for simplicity.
00:49:255 (77) - K? - I think this pattern mate with 00:45:989 (71) This would be a bit overemphasized as the sound is not very strong.
00:51:908 (84) - K? - ^ [00:50:275 (79)] ^
01:11:500 (132) - K? - ^ [01:11:500 (132)] refer to the explanation in Kantan
01:24:562 (165) - K? - ^ [01:22:929 (161)] ^

[Muzukashii]
Good!
01:01:295 (148,149) - d K? k D would result in a sharper contrast to 01:01:908 (150,151) -

I am poor at Oni Mod... Sorry :(

[Oni]
Good!

Here is

Good Luck !!!
Thanks for your mod and star~ :)
JUDYDANNY
"- Racoon -"
[JuDa's Oni]
00:20:275 (4,5) - Ctrl+G? - Follow vocal :arrow: For emphasized 01:06:193 (9) - , 01:07:010 (4) - snare. if put k, these makes vagueness a little for bass sounds .
01:06:398 (1,2,3) - d d k? - ^ :arrow: Same. Snare flow.
01:07:214 (5,6,7) - ^ :arrow: Same.
01:11:500 (32) - k? - ^ :arrow: Same.
01:12:316 (36) - k? - ^ :arrow: Same.
01:16:295 (4) - Delete? / 01:16:398 (1) - D? - I think it's emphasized part :arrow: Not loud like an accent and before Part doesn't put a finisher as you know.
01:23:744 (5,10,14) - k? - Follow vocal :arrow: Same as previous Part.

Here is

Good Luck !!!
Thanks for mod :)
rew0825
Hi from rew0825's Modding Queue

[Kantan]
  1. 00:24:153 (9) - change to d
  2. 00:33:540 (22) - Delete ?
  3. 00:52:724 (41) - change to d
  4. 01:07:418 (60,61,62,63) - change to d kdk
  5. 01:20:480 (79,80,81,82) - ^^^

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:01:908 (3,9) - Delete ?
  2. 00:09:459 (18) - change to D
  3. 00:24:561 (18,19,20) - change to kdk
  4. 01:11:908 (133,134,135) - change to dk d ?
  5. 01:24:970 (166,167,168) - ^^^

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:00:887 (3) - change to d
  2. 00:01:704 (2,3,4) - change to d k d
  3. 00:05:785 (16) - change to k
  4. 00:09:867 (29,30,31,32) - change to d kk d
  5. 00:23:949 (28,29,30,31,32) - change to kd k dk
  6. 00:36:398 (70,71,72,73,74,75,76) - change to k k dk d kd
  7. 00:40:275 (83,84,85) - change to kDk
  8. 01:04:765 (157,158,159,160,161,162) - change to d k k d kk
  9. 01:11:295 (182,183,184,185,186,187) - change to dk d kk k
  10. 01:17:826 (205,206,207,208,209,210) - change to d k k d kk
  11. 01:24:356 (233,234,235,236,237) - change to d k d kk

[JuDa's Oni]
  1. 00:17:010 (4) - change to d
  2. 00:19:255 (1) - change to k
  3. 00:21:500 (3,4) - change to d
  4. 00:46:398 (12,13,14,15) - change to d kkd

[Oni]
  1. 00:00:887 (4) - change to d
  2. 00:17:418 (7,9) - ctrl+g
  3. 00:20:479 (18) - change to d
  4. 00:31:091 (61) - change to d
  5. 00:44:969 (143) - change to k
  6. 00:47:010 (152,153,154,155,156) - change to K kkd K
  7. 00:48:030 (157,158) - change to k
  8. 01:03:132 (235) - change to k
  9. 01:16:193 (303) - change to k

Good luck :)
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