dististik wrote:

Hey~ I'm from my modding queue that died forever ago, sorry that it took so long to get this mod out, but I hope I can still help!

Easy

1. 01:14:739 (3) - I feel like an NC would fit well here. -> NC
2. 01:41:816 (1) - This might be too soon after the spinner for an Easy map. There's a good chance I'm wrong, though, so don't worry about it unless other people point out the same problem.-> BN is admit that

Normal

1. 00:47:662 (2,3,4) - The way this is placed on the grid feels a little awkward. I suggest moving (4) so that it and (3) don't stack.

Hard

1. 00:35:047 (6,7,8,9) - This section feels awkward while playing. I replayed the map several times and even when knowing when the notes are supposed to be hit the map felt off in that area.
2. 01:10:585 (3) - The delay between (2) and (3) makes this slider awkward and it breaks the flow of the map. I suggest putting something in between them so that the flow stays consistent.
3. 02:14:585 (3,4) - The DS between these notes makes playing them awkward. -
4. 02:22:278 (4) - Leaves rankable mapping area.->Up
5. 02:46:431 (2,3) - There needs to be a note in between these two. The flow shatters into a billion pieces when this section arrives.

Insane

1. Ahem
2. 00:27:047 (2,3,4,5,6) - While this is an Insane map and you're free to make jumps like that, remember that this is an Insane under 5 stars. These jumps threw me off because I wasn't expecting them to be in this kind of difficulty.
3. 01:00:432 (2,3,4,5) - Make this a more recognisable pattern.
4. 01:06:893 (2,1,2) - The jumps before this were fine, but this section was something that broke the flow horribly.
5. 01:15:047 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make this a star. The pattern you currently have is frustrating to read. - > done
6. 01:50:739 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Remap.
7. 02:40:585 (2,3) - Delete these and replace it with a stream leading off of the previous slider.
8. 02:50:431 (4,5,6,7) - Remap this to be a stream, where you have them now makes no sense. - > 5,7 littel pull right
9. 03:09:201 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Remap, so that everything is readable. The overlapping at this ending is god awful and quite frankly how its mapped now is unrankable. - > 03:09:816 (1) - move under 03:09:662 (4) - here

I can't do Expert difficulties because I'm too noob for that. Sorry if anything I said was rude, I didn't mean to discourage you in any way. Good luck with getting approved!

Rohit6 wrote:

Another reply because the previous post was too long!

Ill list some shortcuts to make some remapping easier.
Ctrl+ H - flips object horizontally
Ctrl+ J - flips objecct vertically
Ctrl+ G - switches the sliderstart and sliderend

Really fun to play
Just needs some twerks here and there to make it look more visually appealing

SPOILER

[Insane]
00:14:279 (1,2) - Fix blanket
00:15:586 (6) - Put it at the end of the previous slider so it feels more snappy
00:17:201 (2,3) - Fix blanket
00:23:508 (2) - X:128 Y:260 - > done
00:24:585 (2) - Fix Distance snap
00:24:893 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - This plays waaay betterhttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3295913
00:28:893 (4) - X:156 Y:240 - > Done
00:30:432 (1,2) - Rotate slider to make to vertical and blanket the circle to the right of the slider
00:34:124 (1) - X:472 Y:204 - >Done
00:34:585 (2,3,4,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3295934
00:59:508 (4,5,6) - Really awkward to play . I suggest making it parallel to the next stack.
01:14:585 (1,2) - Fix blanket -> move littel
01:26:739 (5,1) - Overlap is looking ugly here - > move littel
01:28:124 (1,2) - Very high Distance snap
01:43:355 (2) - X:20 Y:160
01:50:739 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - osu.ppy.sh/ss/3296044
01:53:355 (2) - X:96 Y:280 - >Done
01:55:047 (4,1) - Fix blanket
02:06:124 (8,1) - Blanket the sliders
02:08:893 (1,2,3,4) - osu.ppy.sh/ss/3296044
02:10:432 (2,5) - Possible blanket
02:19:816 (1) - X:368 Y:280 - >Done
02:22:278 (1) - Crumple this slider a bit at the start
02:28:585 (1,2,3,4) - You should really use shortcuts to copy and paste sliders since its looking ugly
02:29:816 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:40:893 (1) - Make this a wave slider - >Done
02:48:278 (1) - Blanket the slider with the previous one and turn it into a wave slider as well
02:53:047 (1,2) - Blanket the two sliders
02:54:278 (1,3) - ^
03:00:585 (1) - Kiai turned off for no reason - > off
03:00:585 (1) - X:80 Y: 224 - >Done
03:09:816 (1,2) - Place the first circle between first and second sliderstart and the second circle between third and fourth sliderstart

-------
Hello!

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:46:278 (3,4,5) - I suggest doing this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3295689
00:49:508 (6,7) - This flows better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3295697 - > Fixed
01:03:970 (3,1) - Increase Distance snap here since it seems like its half a beat away
01:04:893 (3) - End the slider on the white tick and put a circle on the red tick
01:07:047 (9) - Shift to X:248 Y:242 - > Done
01:09:201 (4) - Increase Distance snap
01:15:355 (3) - Convert to half slider and add circle on the white tick
01:17:047 (9) - Add a circle here to finish the pattern
01:17:201 (1) - This slider is too long and tiring . Consider starting from 01:19:662
01:22:893 (2) - Circle on red tick
01:28:585 (2,3,1) - This looks ugly and hard to read in a Hard diff
01:29:355 (1,2) - Fix the blanket
01:31:970 (1) - Add circles on the white and red tick to finish the pattern - >add white tick
01:33:508 (5) - Shift to X:200 Y:236 - >Done
01:36:893 (1) - Spinner is too long and doesn't fit to the song imo
01:51:201 (1,2,3) - Higher Distance snap to emphasize the notes ->Done
01:57:816 (5) - Curve it a bit and move to X:230 Y:311 - > done
02:01:508 (1,2) - Make it a 2 beat slider to fit the song
02:03:047 (5) - Distance snap too high
02:07:970 (6) - NC here
02:11:970 (3) - Curve it in the opposite direction
02:15:970 (1,2) - Fix the blanket
02:18:431 (1) - 2 beat slider to match the song
02:19:355 (2,3) - Remove the circle and shift the slider to the red tick - >Done
02:22:739 (5,6) - This looks ugly
02:26:431 (1) - Spinner too long and tiring . Consider starting from 02:29:816
02:31:662 (3,5) - Overlap looks really ugly here
02:36:585 (3,4) - Fix Distance Snap between these sliders
02:42:431 (2) - Curve this slider
02:44:431 (1,2,3) - Fix the blankets here
02:49:508 (1) - No need for NC here
02:50:585 (3,4) - Stack the circles
03:01:662 (1,2) - Fix the blanket here
03:03:355 (2) - Curve this for better flow
03:07:970 (1) - Put this in the center
Overall I liked the flow of the diff but you need to fix the blankets and the bad overlaps.
Hitsounds seem fine to me.

K i R a wrote:

Hi, some modding for a miku song ~

[Easy]
Combos are perfect, spacing is perfect and nothing confusing, also the hitsounds are right, nothing to change here ~

[Normal]
01:08:585 (3) - Snap the circle.
02:13:508 (4) - New combo -> NC
02:40:278 (4) - You didnt use the whistle in the whole map, this feels weird, remove the whistle - > I put to emphasize the vocal

[Hard]
00:40:124 (7) - Stack it with the previous slider end, seems more natural with your "jumps".
01:04:585 (1,2,3) - This is confusing, stack them or make a jump like you did with the other circles.
02:05:508 (5,6) - if you start these circles on the end of this slider: 02:05:047 (4) - seems to be more fluid - > i move here http://puu.sh/iGNkI/42312da872.jpg
02:09:508 (4) - New combo
02:40:278 (6) - Same as in normal, sounds weird because you didnt use whistle on the whole song. - > Same

[Insane]
00:05:202 (7) - Add a whistle to avoid confusion
The first part seems to have a lack of hitsounds, maybe you should put more whistles- > Done
00:31:970 (1,1) - Remove those new combo, doesnt make sense at all ->Remove
00:48:893 (1) - Remove new combo -00:49:508 (3) - Start new combo here ->Done
01:01:508 (1,1) - Same as before, doesnt make sense those new combo->Remove
01:15:508 (5,1) - No stack?
01:31:047 (1,1) - Same as before, maybe you wanted to do something? :/ Just to explain it, there are a lot of new combos in a row, just one slider and then another slider, remember new combos starts at musical phrases and they are played by a different player in TAG mode.->Eh...Remove..
01:41:355 (2,1) - Stack -> Done
01:51:201 (1,2,3) - Just my opinion but I think this would be easier to read if they were streams of two.
02:00:585 (1,1) - You know, combos ->ok.. done
02:39:970 (1,1) - ^ ^
02:50:739 (1) - This is not an error, look in the other difficulties the only use you did with whistle and now this, you started using whistle in this end-kiai and it works pretty well, you should do the same in the other difficulties.
02:59:662 (1,1) - Combos ->done
03:09:816 (1,2) - This is confusing, change places or dont stack them. ->Done

[Extreme]
00:03:663 (1) - Remove new combo
00:04:279 (2,3) - This is confusing, there is a stream in the song isnt it? Most people know this song so they may fail at this.
00:11:048 (1) - Remove new combo
00:30:124 (1) - If you follow the vocals, remove this new combo - > Done
00:30:431 (3) - And start it here
00:36:816 (1) - Remove new combo
00:49:816 (2,3,1) - Wait, this is really confusing, i dont see any flow here, even if they are jumping streams they are not natural, you can switch to 1/2 instead of the stream.
00:51:970 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - Feels weird, too much stack suddenly. - > stack (6) to 00:51:047 (4)
01:06:432 (1) - Remove new combo
01:06:893 (1) - Remove new combo
01:08:585 (1) - ^
01:16:585 (1) - ^
01:52:432 (1) - ^
01:52:893 (4) - New combo
01:53:355 (1) - Remove new combo
02:10:278 (1) - ^
02:10:893 (1) - ^
02:15:355 (1) - ^
02:16:893 (4) - New combo - > Done
02:17:201 (1) - Remove new combo > Done
02:19:662 (3) - New combo > Done
02:20:278 (1) - Remove new combo > Done
02:20:585 (1) - ^ ^
02:31:508 (5,6) - Unpredictable :/
02:32:893 (1) - Remove new combo > Done
02:44:124 (1) - ^ ^
02:59:662 (1,1) - Remove those new combo > Done

Thats all I think, too much difficulties xD, fix those little things and you are a steap closer to rank it

Good luck!

-BlueSun- wrote:

M4M ^^
I'm not the best at this but i hope its somewhat useful ;-;

[Easy]
-Very good, barely found any problems
01:18:431 (2,3) - doesn't look great
02:03:970 (4,5,1) - Bad overlap
02:43:355 (1) - Make it a straight slider

[Normal]
00:35:355 (1,2,3) - I dont like the way this looks for some reason.
00:47:047 (1) - Make it like this http://puu.sh/iRegv/f667e723e2.jpg - > Done
00:49:508 (4,1) - Blanket properly.
01:08:585 (3) - isn't placed correctly on slider (2)'s end.
01:33:816 (4) - Make it a straight slider?
02:19:970 (3) - Move to x:452 y:200
02:21:816 (2) - Make it a straight slider?
02:31:047 (1,2,3) - I dont like this, i dont know how you should change it though
02:40:278 (4) - Awkward pause, maybe add another note at the next white tick
02:47:047 (2) - move to x:304 y:24

[Hard]
00:43:662 (3,4) - Blanket?
01:10:431 - Add a note here.
01:28:893 (3,1) - Why so close?
02:54:739 (2,3,1) - In my opinion this doesnt flow well.
03:07:970 (1) - Move to x:412 y:144 - >Done

[Insane]
-umm is this too hard for an insane?
00:05:202 (7) - I dont think this note is necessary
00:12:894 (8,9,10,11) - rip small sliders D:
00:32:585 (2) - ctrl G? - > Fixed
01:27:047 (1) - Move to x:512 y:224 - > Fixed
01:28:124 (1,2) - Way too far apart.
01:35:970 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Confusing
01:50:739 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ouch ;(
02:15:047 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - It's a bit repetitive
02:29:816 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ouch again ;(
02:36:585 (3,4,1,2) - you did this twice in a row?

Good luck

1. I think your skin's hitx.png files are a bit too big, mostly for the Extreme diff, where the CS is smaller
2. Your hitcircle from the skin is too dark, which makes all combo colors look alike, try to make it whiter

1. 00:10:509 (4) - I don't mind the stream, but there's no audible sound on this note, which makes it overmapping
2. 00:30:124 (5,6,7,8,1) - the spacing is a bit confusing to play, maybe increase it a little bit
3. 00:31:355 (6) - move to around ~x:72 y:292 to improve flow, and adjust 00:31:662 (7) - if you change it
4. 00:35:201 (1,2) - you should increase the spacing here
5. 00:51:970 (6) - start new combo here instead of 00:52:278 (1) -
6. 01:03:662 (6,7) - increase spacing
7. 01:21:201 (1,2) - this is too close, I thought I had to click earlier then I should due to the spacing
8. 01:27:047 (1,2) - improve blanket
9. 01:34:585 (2) - start new combo here instead of 01:34:278 (1) -
10. 01:41:816 (1) - why do you have 3 timing points near this note? are they all necessary?
11. 02:25:508 (3,4,5) - not sure about this flow, maybe try to change 4 and 5 positions?
12. 02:32:124 (1,2) - blanket can be improved
13. 02:52:278 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this is almost impossible to play x.x I think you should change the first slider

1. 00:17:201 (2,3) - try to blanket 3 with 2
2. 00:37:816 (1,2) - you can blanket this ^^
3. 00:57:201 (5,1) - imo these should be perfectly stacked
4. 01:51:355 (2,3) - these should be further away from the previous pattern, the overlap makes it hard to read
5. 02:01:355 (2,1) - give a bit more space, try to make it the same spacing as between 02:01:201 (1) - slider end and 02:01:355 (2) - slider start
6. 02:02:432 (10) - NC here?
7. 02:07:355 (4,5) - why not blanket this?
8. 03:02:893 (1,2) - almost overlapping, could be avoided
9. I like this diff, it's pretty solid!

- Milhofo - wrote:

Hi, from my queue ^^

[General]

1. I think your skin's hitx.png files are a bit too big, mostly for the Extreme diff, where the CS is smaller
2. Your hitcircle from the skin is too dark, which makes all combo colors look alike, try to make it whiter

[Extreme]

1. 00:10:509 (4) - I don't mind the stream, but there's no audible sound on this note, which makes it overmapping - > Remove (4)
2. 00:30:124 (5,6,7,8,1) - the spacing is a bit confusing to play, maybe increase it a little bit
3. 00:31:355 (6) - move to around ~x:72 y:292 to improve flow, and adjust 00:31:662 (7) - if you change it - > Done
4. 00:35:201 (1,2) - you should increase the spacing here - >Done
5. 00:51:970 (6) - start new combo here instead of 00:52:278 (1) -
6. 01:03:662 (6,7) - increase spacing
7. 01:21:201 (1,2) - this is too close, I thought I had to click earlier then I should due to the spacing - > Done
8. 01:27:047 (1,2) - improve blanket - >Done
9. 01:34:585 (2) - start new combo here instead of 01:34:278 (1) -
10. 01:41:816 (1) - why do you have 3 timing points near this note? are they all necessary? - >remove 2 greenline
11. 02:25:508 (3,4,5) - not sure about this flow, maybe try to change 4 and 5 positions? - > change
12. 02:32:124 (1,2) - blanket can be improved
13. 02:52:278 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this is almost impossible to play x.x I think you should change the first sliderchange

[Insane]

1. 00:17:201 (2,3) - try to blanket 3 with 2
2. 00:37:816 (1,2) - you can blanket this ^^
3. 00:57:201 (5,1) - imo these should be perfectly stacked
4. 01:51:355 (2,3) - these should be further away from the previous pattern, the overlap makes it hard to read-> i move slider little pull side
5. 02:01:355 (2,1) - give a bit more space, try to make it the same spacing as between 02:01:201 (1) - slider end and 02:01:355 (2) - slider start -> X1.50 -> X1.97
6. 02:02:432 (10) - NC here? - > NC
7. 02:07:355 (4,5) - why not blanket this? ->eh.. done
8. 03:02:893 (1,2) - almost overlapping, could be avoided
9. I like this diff, it's pretty solid!

I thought I'd have more time to mod but I need to go and don't have time to mod the hard diff I'm sorry! Anyway, the map is pretty good and polished, good luck

Thx for mod ~~

Crimmi wrote:

Thank you for applying at the #modreqsea. Feel free to ignore or reject any parts of your map that you deem unfit and vice versa.

Sorry for the lateness. . .I will do my best.

General (Metadata/Timing, etc.)

1. Put "е54иапяпапAkiakane" & "Nico Nico Douga" into the tags since NND is kind of like Youtube in a sense, shouldn't be a source.

Easy

1. (Sliderend) 00:42:739 (1) - Remove the finish, it didn't fit there imo.
2. 01:07:355 (1) - Maybe stack this under 01:05:508 (2).
3. 02:03:355 (3) - I suggest you replace this with a note, this pattern feels more Normal-ish than it felt like an Easy.
4. 02:51:355 (2) - Maybe delete this note and extend (1) towards this point.
5. I Don't want to tuch Easy

Normal

1. 00:42:739 (1) - (Slider repeat) - Again, I don't see this finish fitting. - > REmove
2. 00:49:201 (x) - Maybe place a note here?
3. 00:49:508 (4) - Maybe remove the clap from the slider start and place it into the slider end. ->Done
4. 00:49:508 (4,1) - Suggestion ->Done.
5. 01:25:508 (2) - Suggestion.
6. 01:28:278 (2) - Move this down to x:156|y:120. ->Done
7. 02:13:508 (1) - Suggestion for a blanket.

Hard

1. 00:50:124 (2) - Maybe curve this around (2) for a blanket. - > blanket
2. 01:04:431 (1,2) - Maybe bring these back a bit shown here, try and i'll bet it'll sound better.
3. 01:10:431 (x) - Maybe add a note here, to be consistent with 01:11:508 (6,7).
4. 02:19:355 (x) - Maybe add a note here?
5. 03:09:816 (1) - This is a bit off, it should be a 1/4, not a 1/8, bring that back to the red tick.

Insane

1. Clear.

Extreme

1. Clear.

익스트림

eoehd1ek wrote:

초보티 엄청나는 모딩이니까
보고 맘에 안들면 넘어가셈

익스트림

00:05:817 (3) - 다음꺼랑 팔로우 포인트 이어지지도 않고 다음 노트도 뉴콤인데 왜 여기에 뉴콤넣음ㅋㅋㅋ 풀으셈 - > playback rate 를 25%로 마춰 놓고 들으면 뉴콤보 해야 되는
00:07:356 (1) - 컨트롤 G 눌러서 방향만 바꾸셈 흐름이 이게 더 나음http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509144 - > change
00:08:586 (2) - 뉴폼 풀어주는게 나는 보기 더 좋은데... - > playback rate 를 25%로 마춰 놓고 들으면 뉴콤보 해야 되는
00:10:585 (1,2,3) - 00:10:279 (1,2,3) - 이거 복사해서 디스턴스 1.3으로 이쯤에 넣어보셈 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509151
원래 힛사로 바꾸는거 잊지말고~ -> 원래 상태가 좋은거 같음
00:18:124 (1) - 컨트롤G 눌러서 방향만 바꿔주면 다음 노트랑 흐름 비슷해서 좋을듯- > change
00:19:355 (6) - 이걸 3연타로 바꿔서 00:18:739 (3,4,5) - 여기에 3개 맞춘다음 컨트롤 H 눌러서 좌우 방향 바꿔보셈~~
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509186 여기서 컨트롤 H 해서 이렇게 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509196
00:20:124 (1,2,3) - 앞쪽에는 다 3연타인데 여기는 1/4 슬라이더 이상함 3연타로 바꾸셈 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509219 ->change
00:24:124 (8) - 곡선으로 만들어주셈~~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509234 ->change
00:26:124 (3) - 이거 복사해서 00:26:431 (4) - 여기에 붙어넣어 이정도쯤으로 거리 만들어주셈 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509255
00:27:355 (1,2,3) - 5연타에서 2번4번 노트 지우고 이전 점프처럼 흐름 이어지게 놓아두셈 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509270
00:27:662 (3) - 슬라이더는 이전 노트에 겹치고 1번 노트방향으로 놓아주셈 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509281
00:27:970 (4) - 이거 뉴콤보로 바꾸셈 ->change
00:28:970 (7) - 이 노트 지우셈
지우고 나서 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509293 이렇게끔 놓아주셈 (사각점프처럼)
00:29:355 (1,2,3) - 이걸 삼각점프로 만드셈 추천 디스턴트는 1.7 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509299
00:30:508 (8) - 이거 지우셈
00:30:585 (1) - 이걸 디스턴드스0.8로 삼각점프로 만드셈 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509304
00:30:585 (1,2,3) - 이 노트들도 디스턴스 0.8로 흘러가는것처럼 해주셈 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509314
00:31:047 (4) - 이것도 디스턴스 0.8로 3각점프로 만드셈 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509322
00:31:662 (7) - 이걸 복사해서 00:31:355 (6) - 여기 부분에 붙여넣고 컨트롤 H 컨트롤J 컨트롤G 해서 디스턴스 0.8로 이어주셈 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509328이렇게끔??
00:31:355 (6) - 이거 복사해서 00:31:662 (7) - 여기부분에 붙여넣고 컨트롤 H 컨트롤 J 하고 디스턴스 1.5로 놓으셈 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509345
00:35:816 (3) - 좀더 대칭되도록 놓아주셈 00:35:047 (2) - 여기랑 겹치면 될듯
00:36:124 (4) - 디스턴스 1로 아무데나놓으셈
00:38:124 (2) - 스냅되게 그냥 겹치셈 - Done
00:43:047 (2) - 컨트롤 G 하고 디스턴스 1.3으로 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509374이렇게끔 만드셈


나중에 더 해드림 밤11시반이라 너무 피곤해서...

UnLock- wrote:

Simple Modding (No kds)
하드와 인센 차이가 너무 큽니다, 사이에 하나 채우던지 간격을 좁히던지 해주세요
쿠도스 ㄴㄴ

Eh.. i make new diff?