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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 09 de junio de 2016 at 19:10:26

Artist: Yuzuki Yukari
Title: World is mine
Source: Ryo
Tags: Vocaloid cover WildOne94
BPM: 165
Filesize: 6462kb
Play Time: 04:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Platter (2,77 stars, 388 notes)
  2. WildOne94's Salad (2,04 stars, 448 notes)


Download: Yuzuki Yukari - World is mine
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Quiero un té. READY FOR MODS!

Please reDL! 14/12/15 new mp3!
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Hey Quit User :3
here for the m4m

General

This looks to be a very good beatmap :D.
Shame it has only 2 difficults but I can understand it being a 4minute song but a cup would not take so long for beginners.
Also offset seems just a little off. 17,185 sounds better

Platter

00:31:730 (3) - 00:33:185 (1) - Seems to be a bit too many of these sliders showing up near the start. Might I suggest sliders like these instead.


00:35:185 (6,7) - Make (6) into a hyper dash for a jump to (7). Feels better. Something like a distance of this


00:37:548 (6,7,1,2) - I feel like these should have a good jump to them. Space them out a bit more. E.g. space


01:54:094 (6) - Move this note to the right a little to make it a better jump

01:55:356 (2,3) - Too easy. Jump it out a bit

03:27:730 (2,3,4,5) - These seem a bit too easy. Make them into bigger jumps instead for platter

03:40:457 (3,4) - move (3) to x:128 y:128 and (4) to x:432 y:128

04:00:447 - This spinner should start on the previous white tick and end on the next white tick. It fits it better (add a finish too)


Mahi~ (Or Rain as you told me you might change in PM)

The intro is sort of the same like platter. Try changing it a bit and making it a bit harder (Up to first spinner like some little streams at end of some slider notes)
e.g. 00:19:720 (6) - add a triplet note here or something of your choice



00:34:447 (2,3) - space these out more for a jump

00:54:447 (6) - Holy moly. This is kinda cool though. but just needs some hitsounds on it

01:05:356 (5,6) - Move (5) to x:96 y:80 and (6) to x:416 y:80

Between 01:17:902 (3) - and 01:24:084 (2) - it gets a little bit easy here. try harden it up a bit (no sexual joke inteneded)

01:44:084 (5) - move this slider a bit more to the left (suggested x:96 y:192 so next part has a hyper)

02:50:629 (3) - move to x:400 y:208

02:55:720 (6) - Remove this note and have the slider start here (extend so it ends the same place)

03:15:629 (8) - Although this section is meant to be hard I think this last circle note on it is a bit far out to the right. Try moving left a bit (I moved it to x:320 y:80 if that looks okay for you but alter at your own will)

03:24:447 (6) - move this note to x:16 y:192

03:32:084 (7) - Not sure about this suggestion but I would maybe move this to x:96 y:192

Well good luck buddy ^w^
Hope it gets ranked

We had a conversation about you wanting a guest difficult on a salad difficult for you beatmap. I have 2 options if you want me to do one for you.
A: I could start now but I would request maybe you do a GD for me like a platter or rain :3 ( for this beatmap as it's about 4 to 5mins too http://osu.ppy.sh/s/277009 )
B: wait about a week or 2 when I have a bit more freetime and have done other things on osu. Then I will consider
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WildOne94 wrote:

Hey Quit User :3
here for the m4m

General

This looks to be a very good beatmap :D.
Shame it has only 2 difficults but I can understand it being a 4minute song but a cup would not take so long for beginners.
Also offset seems just a little off. 17,185 sounds better

Platter

00:31:730 (3) - 00:33:185 (1) - Seems to be a bit too many of these sliders showing up near the start. Might I suggest sliders like these instead.


00:35:185 (6,7) - Make (6) into a hyper dash for a jump to (7). Feels better. Something like a distance of this


00:37:548 (6,7,1,2) - I feel like these should have a good jump to them. Space them out a bit more. E.g. space


01:54:094 (6) - Move this note to the right a little to make it a better jump

01:55:356 (2,3) - Too easy. Jump it out a bit

03:27:730 (2,3,4,5) - These seem a bit too easy. Make them into bigger jumps instead for platter

03:40:457 (3,4) - move (3) to x:128 y:128 and (4) to x:432 y:128

04:00:447 - This spinner should start on the previous white tick and end on the next white tick. It fits it better (add a finish too)


Mahi~ (Or Rain as you told me you might change in PM)

The intro is sort of the same like platter. Try changing it a bit and making it a bit harder (Up to first spinner like some little streams at end of some slider notes)
e.g. 00:19:720 (6) - add a triplet note here or something of your choice



00:34:447 (2,3) - space these out more for a jump

00:54:447 (6) - Holy moly. This is kinda cool though. but just needs some hitsounds on it

01:05:356 (5,6) - Move (5) to x:96 y:80 and (6) to x:416 y:80

Between 01:17:902 (3) - and 01:24:084 (2) - it gets a little bit easy here. try harden it up a bit (no sexual joke inteneded)

01:44:084 (5) - move this slider a bit more to the left (suggested x:96 y:192 so next part has a hyper)

02:50:629 (3) - move to x:400 y:208

02:55:720 (6) - Remove this note and have the slider start here (extend so it ends the same place)

03:15:629 (8) - Although this section is meant to be hard I think this last circle note on it is a bit far out to the right. Try moving left a bit (I moved it to x:320 y:80 if that looks okay for you but alter at your own will)

03:24:447 (6) - move this note to x:16 y:192

03:32:084 (7) - Not sure about this suggestion but I would maybe move this to x:96 y:192

Well good luck buddy ^w^
Hope it gets ranked

We had a conversation about you wanting a guest difficult on a salad difficult for you beatmap. I have 2 options if you want me to do one for you.
A: I could start now but I would request maybe you do a GD for me like a platter or rain :3 ( for this beatmap as it's about 4 to 5mins too http://osu.ppy.sh/s/277009 )
B: wait about a week or 2 when I have a bit more freetime and have done other things on osu. Then I will consider
Platter changed all :)
Rain changed all :3

answer: A i will try to, and if my map sucks i will wait lel
posted
Just this second noticed something.
Where are all the hitsounds D: ?
posted

WildOne94 wrote:

Just this second noticed something.
Where are all the hitsounds D: ?
Can you help me with that? :)
posted

Quit user wrote:

WildOne94 wrote:

Just this second noticed something.
Where are all the hitsounds D: ?
Can you help me with that? :)
Will do my best to help out >w< let my try to complete my diff for you firstly though (Or you could try follow the lines along the 20% i have sent you so far)

Talk more in pm owo
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posted

Bensword331 wrote:

Hitsounds request:

http://puu.sh/j38Ul/28edf90863.osu < Platter
http://puu.sh/j38We/fa6c125818.osu < Rain

Good Luck ;)
Thank you!!
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Hi there ! 2nd mod incoming \o/
Please keep in mind that I'm a beginner modder, so I decided that I only mod easier diff's at first. That means that I won't mod Rain for now, sorry.

[Platter]
♫♪ Hitsounds: Generally I think the hitsounds are too heavy over the whole diff, by having too many hitfinishes. Try to reduce the amount of hitfinishes by adding those only on strong beats like on the sliderstart of this 00:31:730 (3) - or this 00:34:639 (5) - for example. Another thing you could do, is adding norma-hitnormal hitsounds on every second white tick. E.g. here 00:29:912 (4) - then here 00:30:639 (7) - then here 00:31:366 (2) - and so on.

  1. To emphasize the stronger beat here, try moving 00:19:366 (6) - to x:400.
  2. Moving 00:33:185 (1) - to x:144, 00:33:548 (2) - to x:336 and 00:34:094 (3) - to x:432 would fit this section better, because I think the distance between 00:32:821 (4,1) - is too much, whereas 00:33:548 (2,3) - are too low. (By the way, you don't have to use the exact values I give to you. You can try out a bit)
  3. Moving 00:38:094 (7) - one or two grids to the left would reduce the chance of missing here, because of that sudden jump.
  4. 00:39:548 (2) - This could be moved to x:288 imo.
  5. 00:40:821 (4) - Here again. Move it a bit to the left.
  6. 00:46:094 (2) - Looks better if moved one grid to left imo.
  7. 01:31:366 (3) - Could be a HDash. (Move it to x:160 ?)
  8. 01:48:821 (4) - I think this is a stronger beat, consider moving it one or two grids to the right.
  9. 01:51:730 (1) - I feel like moving this one grid to the right and 01:52:275 (3) - too plays better.
  10. 03:09:185 (6) - Move one gird to the left.
  11. 03:34:639 (4,5) - (4) should be a lot closer to (5) because it plays weird
  12. 03:38:275 (5) - Was that unsnapped before or did I do that? o Move it one tick back if it's unsnapped.
[WildOne94's Salad]
  1. 00:39:912 (3) - I'd convert that into a circle and add one here 00:40:275 (4) - which follows the music a bit better.
  2. 03:51:366 (2,3) - I think that slider is too far away, it might be troublesome for a beginner to catch. I suggest moving 03:51:003 (1,2) - to x:376
    That's all I can find ><


Very short mod, but I can't do better D:
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Wait! The rain is in progress.
posted
Here's all I could come up with:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Yuzuki YukariWorld Is Mine.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 66265
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 28447,66629,91356,140811,161175,166084,181356,198993,204811,230993,240447,242629
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:World is mine
TitleUnicode:World is mine
Artist:Yuzuki Yukari
ArtistUnicode:Yuzuki Yukari
Creator:Quit user
Version:Dylan's Rain
Source:Hatsune Miku
Tags:Vocaloid cover WildOne94 Hatsune Miku
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6.7
CircleSize:3.7
OverallDifficulty:10
ApproachRate:8.1
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Yuzuki.Yukari.full.1620947.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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54447,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0
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161175,-100,4,3,0,75,0,0
204811,-100,4,2,0,75,0,1
228084,-100,4,3,0,75,0,0


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posted

Dyl-Byl wrote:

Here's all I could come up with:
osu file format v14

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[Metadata]
Title:World is mine
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Artist:Yuzuki Yukari
ArtistUnicode:Yuzuki Yukari
Creator:Quit user
Version:Dylan's Rain
Source:Hatsune Miku
Tags:Vocaloid cover WildOne94 Hatsune Miku
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336,96,36811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,36993,2,0,L|112:96,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,208,37356,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,37447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,256,37538,1,4,0:0:0:0:
272,112,37720,6,0,L|208:112,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,112,38084,5,0,0:0:0:0:
80,144,38175,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,38265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,38447,6,0,L|240:192,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,112,38811,2,0,L|128:112,1,50,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,48,39175,6,0,L|176:64,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,208,39538,6,0,L|240:208,1,25
160,192,39720,2,0,L|192:176,1,25
272,144,39902,2,0,L|240:144,1,25
160,144,40084,2,0,L|192:128,1,25,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,96,40265,2,0,L|240:96,1,25
112,96,40447,1,4,0:0:0:0:
272,96,40629,6,0,L|208:96,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,40993,2,0,L|128:160,1,50
288,160,41356,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,41447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,224,41538,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,160,41720,5,0,0:0:0:0:
64,96,41902,2,0,L|128:96,1,50,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,42265,5,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,42447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,96,42629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,42811,2,0,L|224:96,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,96,43175,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,43356,1,4,0:0:0:0:
400,96,43538,5,0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,43629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,160,43720,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,160,43902,6,0,L|256:160,1,50
128,80,44265,2,0,L|176:96,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,176,44629,2,0,L|128:144,1,50,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,64,45175,5,4,0:0:0:0:
80,192,45538,6,0,L|112:224,1,25,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,256,45720,2,0,L|132:236,1,25
112,160,45902,2,0,L|144:176,1,25,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,46084,2,0,L|224:160,2,25,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,128,46629,5,8,0:0:0:0:
224,48,46811,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,46902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,112,46993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,96,47175,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,47356,2,0,L|176:160,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,160,47720,5,4,0:0:0:0:
208,160,47902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,160,48084,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,160,48265,6,0,L|204:160,1,50
384,160,48629,2,0,L|352:160,2,25,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,48,48993,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,49084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,49175,1,4,0:0:0:0:
432,160,49356,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,49538,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,128,49720,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,49811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,112,49902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,50084,6,0,L|160:176,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,144,50447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,144,50629,1,4,0:0:0:0:
416,160,50993,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,128,51175,6,0,L|288:112,1,25
224,144,51356,2,0,L|192:160,1,25
224,96,51538,2,0,L|256:80,1,25
208,112,51720,2,0,L|176:128,1,25,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,51902,2,0,L|112:128,2,25,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,224,52265,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,52447,2,0,L|288:192,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,144,52811,5,0,0:0:0:0:
336,144,52993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,53175,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,80,53356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,53538,6,0,L|288:96,1,50,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,48,53902,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,96,54084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,160,54265,2,0,L|128:144,1,50
336,176,54629,6,0,B|368:144|320:128|320:160|272:160,1,99.9999999999999,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,160,55175,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,144,55356,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,128,55538,2,0,L|16:128,2,50
256,128,56084,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,128,56265,6,0,L|336:128,1,50,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,144,56629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,64,56811,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,48,56993,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,80,57084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,112,57175,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,160,57356,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,240,57538,2,0,L|160:240,2,50,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,244,58265,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,128,58629,6,0,L|288:96,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,80,59175,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,59356,2,0,P|240:256|208:240,2,50,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,59902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,60084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,96,60265,5,0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,60356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,144,60447,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,144,60629,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,160,60811,6,0,B|400:160|288:160,1,99.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,61356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,61538,2,0,L|192:160|240:160,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,64,62084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,80,62265,6,0,L|272:32,1,50,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,80,62629,2,0,P|384:48|400:48,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,16,62993,2,0,L|352:16,1,50
256,96,63356,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,128,63538,2,0,L|336:128|368:128,1,50,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,288,63902,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,272,63993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,224,64084,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,208,64265,6,0,L|224:208,1,50
368,64,64629,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,64720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,128,64811,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,128,64993,6,0,L|192:128,1,50,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,128,65356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,65538,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,128,65720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,128,65902,2,0,L|160:128,1,50
32,96,66265,6,0,L|0:112,1,25,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,80,66447,2,0,L|32:64,1,25
160,80,66629,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,80,66811,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,80,66993,2,0,L|240:80,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,128,67356,5,0,0:0:0:0:
400,160,67447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,176,67538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,96,67720,2,0,L|400:96,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,68084,5,4,0:0:0:0:
352,96,68265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,68447,2,0,L|144:80,1,50
288,160,68811,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,68993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,64,69175,2,0,L|272:96,1,50
144,128,69538,5,4,0:0:0:0:
272,208,69720,2,0,L|208:176,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,176,70084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,70265,5,0,0:0:0:0:
400,144,70447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,128,70629,2,0,L|288:128,2,50,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,71175,5,0,0:0:0:0:
80,144,71265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,71356,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,96,71538,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,128,71629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,71720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,71902,6,0,L|64:64,2,25,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,72265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,64,72447,1,4,0:0:0:0:
208,112,72629,6,0,L|144:96,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,32,72993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,32,73175,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,96,73356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,32,73538,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,144,73720,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,176,73811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,73902,1,4,0:0:0:0:
480,192,74084,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,74265,2,0,L|416:160,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,74629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,74811,5,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,74902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,64,74993,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,64,75175,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,64,75356,6,0,L|240:64|272:64,1,50,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,64,75720,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,64,75902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,64,76084,2,0,B|432:64|432:64|496:64,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,64,76629,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,64,76811,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,96,76902,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,76993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,160,77175,5,8,0:0:0:0:
464,192,77265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,77356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,144,77538,6,0,B|272:144|208:144|208:144|256:144,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,78084,5,0,0:0:0:0:
400,96,78175,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,112,78265,1,4,0:0:0:0:
I changed the mp3 please check your diff! D:
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From #ctb, let's see if I'm helpful enough to earn kudos. Also, only give kudos if helpful since it's a good idea to take my mods with a grain of salt.

General

Metadata looks okay, I don't know anything about vocaloid to give suggestions on tags or anything.
Check Ai Mod, your tags in the maps conflict with each other and the audio previews are conflicting. Make sure they're the same on both maps.

WildOne94's Salad

Nothing I can identify wrong. Seems good to me.

Platter

The patterns in the kiai you're using are really bothering me.
00:44:548 (1) – How this slider appears when playing makes the player be forced to slow down rather aburptly after a jump due to the curve. I wouldn't do that since the vocal has some empasis on this slider.
01:07:639 (1,2) – These feel really boring to play and don't feel in beat to the song to me. I feel you should somehow add emphasis to “de” note in he “sekai de” part there.
01:13:457 (3) – I must not be hearing the middle beat because a long slider seems better here.
01:17:821 (5) – Okay, I hear the middle beat on this one but I don't think curving the slider puts enough emphasis the long vocal. I think the curve is a bit too harsh.
01:19:275 (1) – Hard to read and doesn't follow the song well. It would be better as a long slider until 01:20:003 and then another shorter slider at 01:20:366 where it's the “shi yo” part of the lyrics to give it a bit of flair. That's my suggestion to make it better but my main point it the long reverse slider just doesn't work here.
01:25:094 (2) – Same as at 01:17:821 but it's actually not harsh, just the lack of movement makes it boring to play.
02:21:821 (1,2) – Same as 01:07:639
02:36:730 (1,2,3,4,5,1) – This whole sections lack of movement is boring to play. Especially (3) and (4) before (5,1).
02:40:730 (3) – Same as 01:13:457
03:25:821 (1,2) – Same as 01:07:639
03:43:275 (2) – Bit of a harsh curve and hard to read as you play. These kind of vertical sliders in general suck, imo. It's rare that they actually fit in a song.
03:58:275 – The inherited point right before there needs to be snapped.
03:59:821 (4,5,6,1) – Unrankable, the notes are stacks upon each other. Like, bruh... Absolutely fix this.

I hope I was helpful, good luck with your map. (I'll mod your other map after Ascendance is done with it.)
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RoseusJaeger wrote:

From #ctb, let's see if I'm helpful enough to earn kudos. Also, only give kudos if helpful since it's a good idea to take my mods with a grain of salt.

General

Metadata looks okay, I don't know anything about vocaloid to give suggestions on tags or anything.
Check Ai Mod, your tags in the maps conflict with each other and the audio previews are conflicting. Make sure they're the same on both maps.

WildOne94's Salad

Nothing I can identify wrong. Seems good to me.

Platter

The patterns in the kiai you're using are really bothering me.
00:44:548 (1) – How this slider appears when playing makes the player be forced to slow down rather aburptly after a jump due to the curve. I wouldn't do that since the vocal has some empasis on this slider.
01:07:639 (1,2) – These feel really boring to play and don't feel in beat to the song to me. I feel you should somehow add emphasis to “de” note in he “sekai de” part there.
01:13:457 (3) – I must not be hearing the middle beat because a long slider seems better here.
01:17:821 (5) – Okay, I hear the middle beat on this one but I don't think curving the slider puts enough emphasis the long vocal. I think the curve is a bit too harsh.
01:19:275 (1) – Hard to read and doesn't follow the song well. It would be better as a long slider until 01:20:003 and then another shorter slider at 01:20:366 where it's the “shi yo” part of the lyrics to give it a bit of flair. That's my suggestion to make it better but my main point it the long reverse slider just doesn't work here.
01:25:094 (2) – Same as at 01:17:821 but it's actually not harsh, just the lack of movement makes it boring to play.
02:21:821 (1,2) – Same as 01:07:639
02:36:730 (1,2,3,4,5,1) – This whole sections lack of movement is boring to play. Especially (3) and (4) before (5,1).
02:40:730 (3) – Same as 01:13:457
03:25:821 (1,2) – Same as 01:07:639
03:43:275 (2) – Bit of a harsh curve and hard to read as you play. These kind of vertical sliders in general suck, imo. It's rare that they actually fit in a song.
03:58:275 – The inherited point right before there needs to be snapped.
03:59:821 (4,5,6,1) – Unrankable, the notes are stacks upon each other. Like, bruh... Absolutely fix this.

I hope I was helpful, good luck with your map. (I'll mod your other map after Ascendance is done with it.)
Thanks for the mod! i changed most of your mod, and since i did it yesterday i dont remember which i didnt accepted but it was like 1 or 2, and didnt rejected at all i changed a bit
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00:32:366 (2) - move this a bit farther from 00:32:003 (1) - cause platters have to be fun, am I rite
00:38:003 (4) - move this farther from 00:37:639 (3) - because i've seen that pattern in maps to many times (or just in general mix it up a bit)
00:38:548 (6) - because I notice you have more decorative sliders, try making the slider look like this:
01:07:639 (1) - bit of a simplistic slider, why not spice it up a bit?:
01:17:821 (5) - spice up this slider too please :d (and any other boring sliders please ;;)
01:32:003 (2) - flip this one to point to the left instead of the right, cause thats fun
01:44:548 (3,4,5) - these three, mix up their directions a bit man
01:57:821 (6,7) - maybe could use more spread, I don't know :u
to lazy to loop the map another 7 times to give more opinions, hope you consider my thoughts :d
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Dahcreeper wrote:

00:32:366 (2) - move this a bit farther from 00:32:003 (1) - cause platters have to be fun, am I rite
00:38:003 (4) - move this farther from 00:37:639 (3) - because i've seen that pattern in maps to many times (or just in general mix it up a bit)
00:38:548 (6) - because I notice you have more decorative sliders, try making the slider look like this:
01:07:639 (1) - bit of a simplistic slider, why not spice it up a bit?:
01:17:821 (5) - spice up this slider too please :d (and any other boring sliders please ;;)
01:32:003 (2) - flip this one to point to the left instead of the right, cause thats fun
01:44:548 (3,4,5) - these three, mix up their directions a bit man
01:57:821 (6,7) - maybe could use more spread, I don't know :u
to lazy to loop the map another 7 times to give more opinions, hope you consider my thoughts :d
I considered your thoughts :^), thanks!

mostly changed, too lazy for green or red your mod <3
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