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Ipas
Hello~
M4M :3

[7ka's Normal]
  1. 00:01:046 (1,3) - Fix blanket?
  2. 01:43:239 - Please remove Kiai at here for consistency. It would be nice without kiai at this :>


[Hard]
  1. 00:02:304 (5) - Remove this. It's doesn't explain anything at this part
  2. 00:27:368 (1) - Remove NC and add NC to the next note
  3. 00:50:400 (1,2) - Swap NC
  4. 00:51:949 (1,2) - Swap NC
  5. 00:54:852 (1,2) - Swap too
  6. 01:20:594 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 01:30:078 (2,3,1) - Just a suggestion. Prefer to change this flow. It looks a bit weird
  8. 01:32:787 (2,3,4) - I'd prefer not to overlap this. Looks weird


[Insane]
  1. 00:05:691 (5) - Fix DS for consistency

    I think there's too many NC issues at 00:07:239 ~ 00:19:239
    I think it's Overmapped too

  2. 00:43:626 (3,1) - Don't overlap this. I think it must be separated
  3. 01:01:433 (1,2) - Blanket this?
  4. 01:29:304 (7,2,3,4,5) - Overlap seems to be BAD
  5. 01:30:852 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think it seems to be Bad pattern or it just for myself :>
  6. 01:33:949 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Bad Flow
  7. 01:39:949 (2,3) - It seems to be bad pattern :3 Change? I think this would be fit with the song but it looks like too ugly :>

I think your Insane is too overmapped ><
But, I can only do this for now :3
Good Luck :3
Topic Starter
A9M

NewIpas wrote:

Hello~
M4M :3
  1. 00:02:304 (5) - Remove this. It's doesn't explain anything at this part No
  2. 00:27:368 (1) - Remove NC and add NC to the next note
  3. 00:50:400 (1,2) - Swap NC
  4. 00:51:949 (1,2) - Swap NC
  5. 00:54:852 (1,2) - Swap too
  6. 01:20:594 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 01:30:078 (2,3,1) - Just a suggestion. Prefer to change this flow. It looks a bit weird No
  8. 01:32:787 (2,3,4) - I'd prefer not to overlap this. Looks weird
  1. 00:05:691 (5) - Fix DS for consistency

    I think there's too many NC issues at 00:07:239 ~ 00:19:239
    I think it's Overmapped too

  2. 00:43:626 (3,1) - Don't overlap this. I think it must be separated
  3. 01:01:433 (1,2) - Blanket this?
  4. 01:29:304 (7,2,3,4,5) - Overlap seems to be BAD
  5. 01:30:852 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think it seems to be Bad pattern or it just for myself :>No
  6. 01:33:949 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Bad Flow
  7. 01:39:949 (2,3) - It seems to be bad pattern :3 Change? I think this would be fit with the song but it looks like too ugly :>
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I think your Insane is too overmapped ><
But, I can only do this for now :3
Good Luck :3
Nocomment=fix
Thank you
Hitorikko
yo ~ from my Queue.

00:02:207 (2,3) - fix blanket.
00:02:594 (3,1) - sliderbow not symmetric. make it symmetric like this
move the end node of 00:04:142 (1) - to x:220 y:316 and move the 1st node of 00:02:594 (3) - to x:380 y:248 to fix the blanket.
00:07:239 (1,2) - bad flow
00:15:755 (5,1,2) - bad flow. maybe like this .
00:19:626 (1,2,3,1) - fix blankets.
00:23:304 (3) - middle node x:92 y:256, third node x:32 y:236 looks better
00:42:465 (3,1) - fix blanket
00:44:400 (3,4) - ^
00:47:497 (1,2) - ^
01:29:304 (1) - move 4th node to x:288 y:144
01:44:013 (3) - move slider to x:268 y:312 for better flow
CS too small IMO maybe 3-3.5
00:10:142 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:10:336 (1,2,1) - fix distance spacing
00:18:271 (2,3) - ^
00:18:465 (3,5) - line them ?
00:25:626 (4,3) - overlap looks bad
00:37:433 (4,5) - fix blanket
00:37:045 (2,6) - stack properly
00:39:368 (5,3) - over lap
00:43:239 (2,4) - stack properly
00:57:175 (2) - make this slider curve to the left
01:02:981 (1,2,3) - increase distance spacing
01:08:594 (6,7) - fix blanket
01:17:691 (3,1) - overlap
01:23:691 (4,4) - stack
01:36:271 (4,5) - looks bad IMO
00:01:046 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not perfect triangle
00:02:787 (1,2,3) - ^
00:04:336 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:05:304 (1,2,3,4,5) - curve this ?
00:16:916 (3,4) - make them adjacent
00:19:626 (6,1) - fix blanket
00:41:304 (1) - point this directly towards 00:41:691 (2) -
00:41:884 (3) - move to x:428 y:308
00:46:723 (7) - slider looks weird
01:08:400 (5,6,7,8) - fix spacing
01:13:433 (1) - point directly towards next note
01:14:594 (6,1) - fix blanket
01:44:787 (1,2,3,4,1) - not perfect triangle . this one looks perfect tho 01:45:562 (1,2,3) -

thumbs up
Gudluck with your map. :)

-Nanaka-

Hitorikko wrote:

yo ~ from my Queue.

00:02:207 (2,3) - fix blanket. Looks fine
00:02:594 (3,1) - sliderbow not symmetric. make it symmetric like this Sure,But 1 only fixes
move the end node of 00:04:142 (1) - to x:220 y:316 and move the 1st node of 00:02:594 (3) - to x:380 y:248 to fix the blanket.
00:07:239 (1,2) - bad flow I do not think so...
00:15:755 (5,1,2) - bad flow. maybe like this . fm...Okey
00:19:626 (1,2,3,1) - fix blankets. I got off blankets because lol
00:23:304 (3) - middle node x:92 y:256, third node x:32 y:236 looks better Ctrl+C fix
00:42:465 (3,1) - fix blanket k
00:44:400 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:47:497 (1,2) - ^ Looks fine imo
01:29:304 (1) - move 4th node to x:288 y:144 Okey
01:44:013 (3) - move slider to x:268 y:312 for better flow Nope.


thumbs up
Gudluck with your map. :)

ur nice Modders. Thank you for watching finely :oops:
Shurelia
おっす!やったよ!

Sorry for the very late mod ;w;



~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~


[General]
- Add "-Nanaka-" to the tags. Because GD.
- Change "ハイパー ハイスピード ジーニアス" into "ハイパーハイスピードジーニアス" at the tags and change "Hyper Highspeed Genius" to "Hyper→Highspeed→Genius" ,that's the original name.
- You may want to add "Eroge" to the tags.

[7ka's Normal]
  1. 00:22:723 - Add circle at here, because it will feels really empty if there's no object at here.
  2. 01:40:142 (1,2) - i recommend this to be stacked, it plays better for me.
  3. 00:14:207 (2,3,4) - I suggest to make a better Triangle at here.
  4. 00:39:755 (1) - Add finish on the tail

[Hard]
  1. 00:02:207 (4,5,6) - This is kinda hard to play even on hard diff, either you unstack it or make a new pattern, it's all up to you.
  2. 00:05:304 (4,5,6) - ^^
  3. 00:57:949 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - This is very confusing if you put this pattern on Hard diff. it'll make hard players got confused. I suggest to change the pattern to make it more readable.
  4. 01:39:368 (3,5) - Add finish , (On the slider's head for (5))
  5. 01:40:239 - feels empty, maybe add a circle at here?

[Insane]
  1. 00:05:691 (5,7) - It has the same combo colour but different SV which is make this unrankable. Please fix this.
  2. 00:32:013 (1,2,3,4) - This is kinda overmapped for me. I prefer this to be change into a long slider or just a normal rhythm.
  3. 00:41:304 (1) - Add Whistle on the Head and tail.
  4. 00:19:626 (6) - ^^
  5. 00:22:916 (1) - ^^
  6. 00:25:820 (1) - ^^ on the repeat.
  7. 00:55:239 (2,4) - Add Finish (on the head for (2))
  8. 01:02:981 (1,2,3,1) - Add Whistle.
  9. 01:40:239 - Add Circle at here. It feels really empty.

That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!
-Nanaka-

Shurelia wrote:

おっす!やったよ!

Sorry for the very late mod ;w;



~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~


[General]
- Add "-Nanaka-" to the tags. Because GD.
- Change "ハイパー ハイスピード ジーニアス" into "ハイパーハイスピードジーニアス" at the tags and change "Hyper Highspeed Genius" to "Hyper→Highspeed→Genius" ,that's the original name.
- You may want to add "Eroge" to the tags.

[7ka's Normal]
  1. 00:22:723 - Add circle at here, because it will feels really empty if there's no object at here. Sure.00:28:142 - change same rhythm
  2. 01:40:142 (1,2) - i recommend this to be stacked, it plays better for me. Nope.I want to because it is the lowest degree of difficulty Stack Avoid
  3. 00:14:207 (2,3,4) - I suggest to make a better Triangle at here. No.not need
  4. 00:39:755 (1) - Add finish on the tail ^ The noisy for Note is less


That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!
Shureliaちゃんありがとう :)
-Aura-
From my queue!

Normal

-Hi there! I literally could not find anything wrong with this map! Everything is timed perfectly! No unsnapped notes, no notes blending in, No odd slider movements or hitsounds colliding! This was a fun map! I hope for the very best for it! :)
-Nanaka-

Aura893 wrote:

From my queue!

Normal

-Hi there! I literally could not find anything wrong with this map! Everything is timed perfectly! No unsnapped notes, no notes blending in, No odd slider movements or hitsounds colliding! This was a fun map! I hope for the very best for it! :)
Thank you Very much :oops:
Blizs
Hi hi :3 ~~~~

[General]
  1. add "-Nanaka-" on the tags since -Nanaka- Have a GD here
  2. different Kiai between Normal diff and other diffs. Please make it same. And I think kiai at 01:43:239 - in 7ka's Normal was unnecessary.


[7ka's Normal]
  1. 00:19:626 (1,2) - it looks hard to see the pattern transition from white ticks to many red ticks by just this 1/2 slider maybe you can use this pattern as transition http://puu.sh/gGclM/56e48e779c.jpg
  2. 00:22:723 - please don't ignore this part since it was used at 00:19:626 -
  3. 00:38:594 (2) - you can stack it with 00:36:658 (3) - 's tail. It looks like a bad overlap.
  4. 00:55:626 (4) - umm... why finish ?
  5. 01:34:723 (3) - the way it curved looks not flowing well with previous note. you can rotate it like http://puu.sh/gGdf8/b7b761ce2b.jpg or move and blanket it like http://puu.sh/gGdjX/c93908154e.jpg . Same to 01:37:820 (3) -
    This diff is great. The flow and pattern is looks good. And i think this diff meets Ranking Criteria ;)


[Hard]
  1. 00:11:691 (5) - finish on the head will fit with high effect in the music
  2. 00:13:433 (1,2,3) - it isn't triangle right ? and it make 00:13:433 (1,3,4) - looks not tidy
  3. 00:14:400 (4,5,1) - There's nothing special in the song, so different spacing looks unreasonable.
  4. 00:14:981 (1,2,3,4) - I think you miss the pattern here. A clicks should be at 00:14:981 - , 00:15:368 - , 00:15:755 - since the effect up in the song is at those part. But 00:15:755 - was a slider tail. I suggest to change the pattern to http://puu.sh/gGeNc/d6f05cbaaa.jpg
  5. 00:25:045 (3,4,1) - unreasonable different spacing again.
  6. 00:33:949 (2,3) - people (especially me) won't see that circle came. I prefer to not using this hided circle in Hard diff (exception if it was extended)
  7. 00:40:336 (2,4) - stack them properly
  8. 00:56:013 (3) - move it down 2 times and right 1 time to make it's tail stack with 00:55:239 (1) - 's 00:55:239 (1) -
  9. 00:58:336 (6,3) - stack them properly
  10. 01:00:949 (2,3) - ctrl+g on them. It'll make a CW flow.
  11. 01:20:013 (3,4,5,6) - this pattern looks awkward. I think slider 01:20:594 (5) - should be started at white ticks, so I can assume that you follow the vocal. try this pattern http://puu.sh/gGhSw/193281b2a6.jpg
  12. 01:25:045 (4,1,2,3) - same as above, pattern looks awkard. Why ? because i don't know what the sliders follow. Is vocal ? not because there was a slider click not referring to vocal. Try this pattern http://puu.sh/gGiop/fb022b4bd7.jpg
  13. 01:30:465 (3,1) - this SV change looks weird if it's decreased so suddenly. Or maybe the kiai was too fast.
    This diff looks have some misplaced NC... Please check it


[Insane]
  1. 00:07:142 - There's something in the song here. So make 00:06:852 (7) - extended isn't a bad idea I thought
  2. 00:43:626 (3) - I think you miss to put the red tick here. did you want to me the red tick fit to 00:42:852 (1) - 's head ?
  3. 01:24:465 (1,2,3) - this is really no tidy. at least make they have same distance
  4. 01:29:884 (1) - I think you wrong to put this circle. It flows awkward. I suggest to move it to stack with 01:28:529 (3) - 's head and you'll get a CW flow.
    That's all for this diff. I think some jump is OK sinc this is Insane ;) and the pattern looks better in this diff ;);)


Okay that's all I can mod :3
I'm sorry if my mod sounds a bit harsh T.T
Good luck for this mapset ;);)
Niko-nyan
well checked again the map :< the gap between 7ka's normal to Hard really far (1,5+ star) owo it can be unrankable btw
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Niko-nyan wrote:

well checked again the map :< the gap between 7ka's Normal to Hard really far (1,5+ star) owo it can be unrankable btw
I agree with this.. the difficulty spread is a bit concerning.
7ka's Normal contains many long sliders with mostly 1/1 beat spacing (not much 1/2), while Hard consists of mostly 1/2 beat slider, and contains 1/4 triples.
It makes a big gap between Normal and Hard, which could be unrankable.

Possible ways to fix this:
1. Make Hard a bit easier, by using some more 1/1 sliders and fewer 1/4 beat rhythms. It's okay for Hard to be a bit easier in this set since Insane is not very hard either. Making Hard a bit easier would make the difficulty spread more even.

or

2. Make 7ka's Normal easier and add a new Normal difficulty. 7ka's Normal is very easy compared to common Normal difficulties since you have a 3-difficulty spread. Slider velocity and rhythm density is already very low, so it would be easy to convert this into an Easy difficulty. Then you'd just have to add a Normal difficulty to fill the gap as appropriate.

or

3. Make 7ka's Normal harder and add an Easy difficulty. I don't recommend this, as it would most likely require a remap of the Normal to make it harder.

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I recommend the first option, as it is the easiest way.
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