Mu - Heavenly Kiss

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Loughje
Maybe cut down on the stacks a bit.
Really nice looking beatmap you got.
Honestly, could not find something significant to change, looks really good.
00:46:642 (6) - Delete this.
00:58:739 (1,1,1) - Make these a single combo.
01:02:997 (1,1,1) - ^
01:43:642 (1,1) - ^^
00:06:191 Through 00:06:771 - You could edit in here.
00:13:061 (1,2,3,4,5) - This should be a slider to match the song.
00:22:545 (7) - I think you should delete this and put something else that matching the rhythm.
00:58:739 (1,1,1) - Single combo here.
01:02:997 (1,1,1) - ^ You probably seen this coming again :?
01:43:642 (1,1) - ^^
Hopefully this helps out a little. Also, you should tell me the name of this VN cause looks a bit interesting :D Im also working on a VN soundtrack if you'd want to check that out, up to you!
Topic Starter
A9M

snowsign7 wrote:

大変長らくお待たせいたしました :cry:

Insane

  1. 00:02:416 - Hardと一緒でここSoft C:1にしてホイッスル入れてあげるといい感じになると思います! :oops:  Hardと同じようにホイッスルで統一する形で修正しました
  2. 00:07:642 (3) - ここもハードと一緒でここの音は 00:08:029 - ここと一緒なのでホイッスルかclapで統一したほうがいいと思います! :)
  3. 00:08:416 - ^
  4. 00:09:191 (4) - ^
  5. 00:10:739 (3) - ^ 
  6. 00:11:513 (2) - ^
  7. 00:13:061 (4) - ^
  8. 00:13:836 (2) - ^
  9. 00:14:610 - ^
  10. 00:15:384 - ^
  11. 00:16:932 (3) - ^
  12. 00:17:707 (5) - ^
  13. 00:12:287 - clapつけ忘れ! :D
  14. 00:31:642 (4) - ^
  15. 00:32:416 (5) - ^
  16. 00:46:352 (5) - ホイッスルつけ忘れ! :D
  17. 00:09:965 (2) - finishのほうがあってると思います! ;)
  18. 00:16:158 (1) - ^
  19. 00:18:481 (2) - ^
  20. 00:24:287 (1) - ^
  21. 00:25:061 - ^
  22. 00:32:029 (3) - ^
  23. 00:39:771 - ^
  24. 00:40:545 - ^
  25. 00:41:320 (1) - ^
  26. 00:44:416 (1) - ^
  27. 00:45:965 (4) - ^
  28. 00:56:803 (1) - ^
  29. 01:12:287 (2) - ^
  30. 01:17:707 (3) - ^
  31. 01:21:190 (3) - ^
  32. 01:26:223 (1) - ^
  33. 01:26:997 (5) - ^
  34. 01:30:868 (1) - ^
  35. 01:37:061 (1) - ^
  36. 01:44:803 (1) - ^
  37. 01:46:352 (1) - ^
  38. 00:10:352 (1) - ホイッスルのほうが合うと思います~! : :D
  39. 00:33:578 (15) - ^
  40. 00:54:868 (1) - ^
  41. 01:30:481 (6) - ^
  42. 00:07:449 - finish追加しましょ! :)
  43. 00:11:707 (3) - ^
  44. 00:12:094 - ^
  45. 00:17:320 (4) - ^
  46. 00:32:029 (3) - ^
  47. 00:55:061 - ^
  48. 01:13:642 - ^
  49. 01:15:191 (8) - ^
  50. 01:19:836 (2) - ^
  51. 01:21:384 (5) - ^
  52. 00:54:868 (1) - finish外してclapにしましょー!
  53. 01:30:481 (6) - ^
  54. 01:10:352 (1) - ホイッスル外しましょ~
  55. 00:33:965 (1) - clapのつけ間違い? :?
  56. 01:17:804 (4) - ここ連続してホイッスル使っちゃうのはまずいと思いますここだけ外してあげましょー! :)
  57. 01:46:352 (1) - ここもホイッスル多分いらないと思います...ここはちょっと自信ないです :(
  58. 00:03:384 (4,5,1) - ここの流れが少し悪く感じました~ :o若干ですが位置を調整しました
  59. 00:34:158 (3) - ここにもう一つ音があるように聞こえました! ;)追加しました
  60. 00:34:255 - 逆にここは聞こえないような気がします... :?削除しました
  61. 00:35:707 - ここももう一つ音があるように聞こえます~ :)  
    画像の音取りを採用させていただきました
  62. 00:56:610 (9,1) - こっちから入るのがやりにくく感じたので1のスライダーを柔らかくしてあげましょー!
  63. 01:05:320 (2) - ここ見づらく感じたので手前の単発の位置を変えてこのスライダーの向きをずらしませんか? ;)
  64. 01:08:997 (8,1) - ここも入りづらく感じました~、こんな感じにしませんか! :)
  65. 01:47:707 (4) - ここひとつ伸ばして上げたほうが自然に感じます! :D一応ギターの音を拾いたいのでそのままで
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おまたせしちゃってすみません :cry:
初めてのmodなので至らぬ点が多々あると思います :o
何も書いていないところに関しては全て採用させていただきました 青字のみ不採用という意味です
全難易度ありがとうございます
勘違いしてて遅れてしまいました ごめんなさい M4Mの恋咲くミライ方も後で投稿します
Topic Starter
A9M

jloughman14 wrote:

Maybe cut down on the stacks a bit.
Really nice looking beatmap you got.
Honestly, could not find something significant to change, looks really good.
00:46:642 (6) - Delete this. fix
00:58:739 (1,1,1) - Make these a single combo. fix
01:02:997 (1,1,1) - ^
01:43:642 (1,1) - ^^
00:22:545 (7) - I think you should delete this and put something else that matching the rhythm. [/box]
00:58:739 (1,1,1) - Single combo here.Fix
01:02:997 (1,1,1) - ^ You probably seen this coming again :?
01:43:642 (1,1) - ^^[/box]
Hopefully this helps out a little. Also, you should tell me the name of this VN cause looks a bit interesting :D Im also working on a VN soundtrack if you'd want to check that out, up to you!Nocomment,Red=Fix
Thank you modding!!
Thank you for being patient with my English. :)
Little
From my queue.

[General]
  1. Offset is late by ~16ms. I recommend offset 1046.
  2. Source should be: Hyper→Highspeed→Genius


[7ka's Normal]
  1. 00:01:062 (1,3,1) - I think normal-hitfinish will sound better on heads of these sliders.
  2. 00:05:707 (3) - The slider shape is uneven, and doesn't blanket (1) properly. Use a 3-point slider for a perfectly circular curve so you can improve the aesthetic.
  3. 00:09:578 (3) - Better for this to be soft whistle (kick). It matches the song better, and consistent with 00:12:674
  4. 00:36:674 (3) - You can make a nicer curve by setting the third point equidistant from the second and fourth: http://puu.sh/gi77Y/2cd0629b82.jpg
  5. 01:06:094 - In this section your hitsound use is very inconsistent. There seems to be no pattern as to where you use normal-hitnormal versus when you use soft-hitclap. Please revise this to have more consistent hitsound pattern.
  6. 01:13:836 (3) - Same thing about the curve.
  7. 01:33:191 (5) - Change head to soft sampleset + whistle and finish. It fits the song better and matches with 01:39:384 (5) which is the same part of the musical phrase in the next iteration.


[Hard]
  1. 00:59:708 - Green line here doesn't change anything. Remove it?
  2. Starting at 00:19:642 there are some green lines are unsnapped by ~1ms, including start of kiai section. Please check all of them and fix it.
  3. 00:01:062 (1,6,4) - I think normal-hitfinish fits better than the soft whistles on the downbeats.
  4. 00:17:320 (4) - Remove finish from end? It doesn't seem to fit the music.
  5. 00:19:255 (5) - Change to clap on head?
  6. 00:30:674 (2) - Change to clap on end?
  7. 00:32:029 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think it's better to increase the distance spacing a bit, so the repeat arrows are more visible: http://puu.sh/giupd/6ab239b4b8.jpg
  8. 00:33:191 (6) - Why is there a finish on the second repeat? It doesn't seem to match the song. Remove it?
  9. 00:40:352 (2,4) - Stack them together?
  10. 00:47:513 (1) - Head feels really empty. Add a whistle?
  11. 01:01:449 - Slider velocity change does nothing here... just set it to 1.00x.
  12. 01:06:094 (1) - After you fix the unsnapped green lines, make sure you resnap this slider too.
  13. 01:19:836 (2) - Finish doesn't fit well here. I'd remove it.
  14. 01:22:739 (1,3) - Try to avoid these touching because it doesn't look good.
  15. 01:30:094 (2,3,1) - Better not to stack these, because it's confusing the read. Just overlap them normally: http://puu.sh/giuKo/7cc40df15b.jpg
  16. 01:36:287 (4,5) - I think it's better for rhythm to be consistent with 01:33:191 (3,4) so choose one, and use the same rhythm on the other.
  17. 01:39:771 (1) - I recommend removing the last repeat, because there's more significant drum sound on the downbeat.


[Insane]
  1. This has the same issues with unsnapped green lines. Please check all of them.
  2. 00:02:416 (3,1) - I think it is better not to overlap these, because it can be confused to 1/4 rhythm. Space it out like this: http://puu.sh/givdh/2c7dda7a3d.jpg
  3. 00:07:932 (5) - Sounds better if you remove the whistle.
  4. 00:24:287 (1) - Change to whistle or finish on head.
  5. 00:54:868 (1,2,3) - The normal-sliderslide are really distracting, and don't fit the song. Did you really intend to use those? Maybe you meant to put normal sampleset on heads and ends of sliders rather than body?
  6. 01:06:094 (1) - Unsnapped slider end.
  7. 01:21:190 (3,5) - Too many finishes here makes it really noisy. I'd recommend removing both, or at least the one on (5).
  8. 01:36:287 (4,5) - Same as in Hard.

Cool song and map.
Topic Starter
A9M

CloudSplash16 wrote:

From my queue.

[General]
  1. Offset is late by ~16ms. I recommend offset 1046.
  2. Source should be: Hyper→Highspeed→Genius


[Hard]
  1. 00:59:708 - Green line here doesn't change anything. Remove it?
  2. Starting at 00:19:642 there are some green lines are unsnapped by ~1ms, including start of kiai section. Please check all of them and fix it.
  3. 00:01:062 (1,6,4) - I think normal-hitfinish fits better than the soft whistles on the downbeats.
  4. 00:17:320 (4) - Remove finish from end? It doesn't seem to fit the music.
  5. 00:19:255 (5) - Change to clap on head?
  6. 00:30:674 (2) - Change to clap on end?
  7. 00:32:029 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think it's better to increase the distance spacing a bit, so the repeat arrows are more visible: http://puu.sh/giupd/6ab239b4b8.jpg
  8. 00:33:191 (6) - Why is there a finish on the second repeat? It doesn't seem to match the song. Remove it?
  9. 00:40:352 (2,4) - Stack them together?
  10. 00:47:513 (1) - Head feels really empty. Add a whistle?
  11. 01:01:449 - Slider velocity change does nothing here... just set it to 1.00x.
  12. 01:06:094 (1) - After you fix the unsnapped green lines, make sure you resnap this slider too.
  13. 01:19:836 (2) - Finish doesn't fit well here. I'd remove it.
  14. 01:22:739 (1,3) - Try to avoid these touching because it doesn't look good.
  15. 01:30:094 (2,3,1) - Better not to stack these, because it's confusing the read. Just overlap them normally: http://puu.sh/giuKo/7cc40df15b.jpg
  16. 01:36:287 (4,5) - I think it's better for rhythm to be consistent with 01:33:191 (3,4) so choose one, and use the same rhythm on the other.
  17. 01:39:771 (1) - I recommend removing the last repeat, because there's more significant drum sound on the downbeat.


[Insane]
  1. This has the same issues with unsnapped green lines. Please check all of them.
  2. 00:02:416 (3,1) - I think it is better not to overlap these, because it can be confused to 1/4 rhythm. Space it out like this: http://puu.sh/givdh/2c7dda7a3d.jpg
  3. 00:07:932 (5) - Sounds better if you remove the whistle.
  4. 00:24:287 (1) - Change to whistle or finish on head.
  5. 00:54:868 (1,2,3) - The normal-sliderslide are really distracting, and don't fit the song. Did you really intend to use those? Maybe you meant to put normal sampleset on heads and ends of sliders rather than body?
  6. 01:06:094 (1) - Unsnapped slider end.
  7. 01:21:190 (3,5) - Too many finishes here makes it really noisy. I'd recommend removing both, or at least the one on (5).
  8. 01:36:287 (4,5) - Same as in Hard.

Cool song and map.
Thank you modding!!
All fixed
If there is another opportunity, please offer your support again.
-Nanaka-

CloudSplash16 wrote:

From my queue.

[7ka's Normal]
  1. 00:01:062 (1,3,1) - I think normal-hitfinish will sound better on heads of these sliders. Nope,I do not fit it ... too strong
  2. 00:05:707 (3) - The slider shape is uneven, and doesn't blanket (1) properly. Use a 3-point slider for a perfectly circular curve so you can improve the aesthetic. hm...Okey Fix,Other forms
  3. 00:09:578 (3) - Better for this to be soft whistle (kick). It matches the song better, and consistent with 00:12:674 sure
  4. 00:36:674 (3) - You can make a nicer curve by setting the third point equidistant from the second and fourth: http://puu.sh/gi77Y/2cd0629b82.jpg k
  5. 01:06:094 - In this section your hitsound use is very inconsistent. There seems to be no pattern as to where you use normal-hitnormal versus when you use soft-hitclap. Please revise this to have more consistent hitsound pattern. omg....Fix it
  6. 01:13:836 (3) - Same thing about the curve. ^
  7. 01:33:191 (5) - Change head to soft sampleset + whistle and finish. It fits the song better and matches with 01:39:384 (5) which is the same part of the musical phrase in the next iteration. k



Cool song and map.
Thank you for Modding :)
-Maruk-
request from my queue

[Insane]

  • 00:01:046 (1) - Finish
    00:02:400 (3) - 終端Finish
    00:03:949 (3) - ^
    00:07:239 (3) - 終端Finish外して先端Finish
    00:23:400 (3) - サークル追加
    00:44:400 (1) - 分かりにくいので若干下にずらしたほうがいいと思います
    01:13:433 (1) - 終端のFinish外して01:13:820 (2) - にFinish追加
    01:15:175 (8) - ^
    01:19:820 (2) - ^
    01:18:078 (6) - Finish外してClap
    01:39:949 (2) - なんか変な感じしますね。音取りの提案だけしときます。
    01:47:110 (1,2,3,4) - 先端と終端全部Clapでいいと思います


nice songです
Good luck~ :)
Niko-nyan

hi from my queue

General
i'm not sure maybe need someone to check metadata

Insane~
01:04:529 - the cymbal in here doesn't fit well because there doesn't have any sound
01:11:884 - the cymbal looks bad in here and doesn't fit also
01:13:626 - unknown cymbal hitsound again (you can remove the finish)
01:15:175 - ^
01:16:916 - ^
01:17:691 - ^
01:18:078 - ^
01:19:820 - ^
01:26:981 - ^
01:42:465 - ^
01:43:626 (1,2) - change to whistle is better

Hard
01:03:368 - remove NC
and fix the cymbal hitsound D: feel bad

Normal
few cymbal doesn't fit well D: but overally i like your pattern :)
Topic Starter
A9M

-Maruk- wrote:

request from my queue

00:01:046 (1) - Finish finish多用するのは好きではないのでごめんなさい
00:02:400 (3) - 終端Finish ^
00:03:949 (3) - ^ 
00:07:239 (3) - 終端Finish外して先端Finish 入れ替えました
00:23:400 (3) - サークル追加 追加しました
00:44:400 (1) - 分かりにくいので若干下にずらしたほうがいいと思います そのままで
01:13:433 (1) - 終端のFinish外して01:13:820 (2) - にFinish追加 finishの音が尻尾にあるように聞こえるのでそのままで
01:15:175 (8) - ^ ^
01:19:820 (2) - ^ ^
01:18:078 (6) - Finish外してClap 
01:39:949 (2) - なんか変な感じしますね。音取りの提案だけしときます。 しっくりこなかったのでそのままで
http://puu.sh/gowi8/24ddef3e00.png[/img:1337]
01:47:110 (1,2,3,4) - 先端と終端全部Clapでいいと思います 音がうるさすぎるように感じたので変えませんでした
nice songです
Good luck~ :)青字 変更無し
赤、コメント無し 変更有
modありがとうございました :)
Topic Starter
A9M
[quote="Niko-nyan"]
hi from my queue
General
i'm not sure maybe need someone to check metadata

01:04:529 - the cymbal in here doesn't fit well because there doesn't have any sound sorry I think fit
01:11:884 - the cymbal looks bad in here and doesn't fit also
01:13:626 - unknown cymbal hitsound again (you can remove the finish) fix
01:15:175 - ^
01:16:916 - ^ sorry I think fit
01:17:691 - ^ ^
01:18:078 - ^ ^
01:19:820 - ^
01:26:981 - ^ fix
01:42:465 - ^ sorry I think fit
01:43:626 (1,2) - change to whistle is better ^
01:03:368 - remove NC fix
and fix the cymbal hitsound D: feel bad
thank you modding
Ciyus Miapah
hello from mod q

Insane:
00:02:207 (1,2,3) - yeah i see your patterning in here, its like triplets, but im sure your patterning isnt right. because its clearly that song you maps needs to be mapped 5/4 streams (because 00:02:594 - is very strong notes, and i think you should circle or slider there and maybe you can new combo that thing.
00:05:691 (5,6,1) - why change pattern in here? its like same patterning from your previous pattern
00:18:078 (1,2,2,3) - i think you can make same spacing placement here
00:32:787 (7) - new combo? (indicates long stream)
00:43:626 (3) - confusing but okay
00:47:207 - should add circle here
00:47:497 (10) - need NC this instead of 00:47:691 (1) - (that NC isnt necessary imo)
~im too lazy to fix NC in here, you need people who want to nazi NC mod your map lmao
01:05:304 (2,3) - feels overmap and overlap makes it very hard to get
01:47:884 - you should add circle here, yep last notes

overall your map is overmapped at patterning especially of triplets, you need consider this thing for rank. just saying this

good luck!
Topic Starter
A9M

Fort wrote:

hello from mod q
00:02:207 (1,2,3) - yeah i see your patterning in here, its like triplets, but im sure your patterning isnt right. because its clearly that song you maps needs to be mapped 5/4 streams (because 00:02:594 - is very strong notes, and i think you should circle or slider there and maybe you can new combo that thing.Sorry now is like
00:05:691 (5,6,1) - why change pattern in here? its like same patterning from your previous pattern Because intro an end.I think not have to change.
00:18:078 (1,2,2,3) - i think you can make same spacing placement hereNo
00:32:787 (7) - new combo? (indicates long stream) OK nice idea
00:43:626 (3) - confusing but okay change conspicuous
00:47:207 - should add circle here No
00:47:497 (10) - need NC this instead of 00:47:691 (1) - (that NC isnt necessary imo)
~im too lazy to fix NC in here, you need people who want to nazi NC mod your map lmao
01:05:304 (2,3) - feels overmap and overlap makes it very hard to get Fix
01:47:884 - you should add circle here, yep last notes Fit guitar sound to note
overall your map is overmapped at patterning especially of triplets, you need consider this thing for rank. just saying this
good luck!
Thank you modding
JudgeTheDude
Hi, from my queue

Unrankable issue
Suggestion

[General]
  1. 7ka's Normal's Preview Point is different from the two other diffs
  2. Kiai time in inconsistent. 7ka's Normal has a different Kiai
[7ka's Normal]
  1. Preview Point is different from the two other diffs
  2. Kiai Time is different from the two other diffs
[Hard]
  1. Nothing to say here, it's pretty good
-Nanaka-

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my queue

Unrankable issue
Suggestion

[General]
  1. 7ka's Normal's Preview Point is different from the two other diffs
  2. Kiai time in inconsistent. 7ka's Normal has a different Kiai
[7ka's Normal]
  1. Preview Point is different from the two other diffs ???
  2. Kiai Time is different from the two other diffs Not Unrankable
    [quote="Ranking Criteria":1337]
    Kiai should be consistent throughout difficulties of your mapset (especially since it is shown on the main menu). If you have a guest difficulty from another mapper that uses different kiai, then it's fine as long as it still makes sense.
Topic Starter
A9M

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my queue

Unrankable issue
Suggestion

[General]
  1. 7ka's Normal's Preview Point is different from the two other diffs
  2. Kiai time in inconsistent. 7ka's Normal has a different Kiai
[7ka's Normal]
  1. Preview Point is different from the two other diffs
  2. Kiai Time is different from the two other diffs
[Hard]
  1. Nothing to say here, it's pretty good

Please post from seeing a decent Map
Chaoslitz


[7ka's Normal]
  1. 00:01:046 (1) - finish in head?
  2. 00:28:723 - I suggest you to add a note here
  3. 00:39:755 (1) - not parallel? owo


[Hard]
  1. 00:03:755 (4) - try to use same hitsound as 00:02:207 (4,5,6)
  2. 00:12:465 (2) - keep same distance between 00:12:078 (1,3)
  3. 00:33:562 (1) - NC
  4. 01:03:368 (2) - place at x:288|y:136 instead?
  5. 01:12:658 (3) - rotate 10 anticlockwise and place it in x:88|y:88
  6. 01:32:787 (2,4) - it is difficult to read since they are stacked
  7. 01:39:755 (5) - clap in head
  8. 01:44:787 (1) - the spinner is following the vocal, so 01:43:626 (1,2) is better to move to 01:43:239 (1,2) instead


[Insane]
  1. 00:02:207 (1,2,3) - stream of 5 notes suit more in here
  2. 00:03:755 (1,2,3) - ^
  3. 00:43:626 (3,1) - remove stack since it is difficult to read
  4. 01:08:594 (6) - place it at x:452|y:252 to keep DS the same

nice mapset xD

PS:Different kiai time is acceptable if the diffs are mapped by different mappers
Topic Starter
A9M

Chaoslitz wrote:

00:03:755 (4) - try to use same hitsound as 00:02:207 (4,5,6)
00:12:465 (2) - keep same distance between 00:12:078 (1,3) OK
00:33:562 (1) - NC
01:03:368 (2) - place at x:288|y:136 instead? Sorry now is like
01:12:658 (3) - rotate 10 anticlockwise and place it in x:88|y:88 Nice idea
01:32:787 (2,4) - it is difficult to read since they are stacked Displace
01:39:755 (5) - clap in head OK
01:44:787 (1) - the spinner is following the vocal, so 01:43:626 (1,2) is better to move to 01:43:239 (1,2) instead Sorry.want to following drum
00:02:207 (1,2,3) - stream of 5 notes suit more in here I think too hard
00:03:755 (1,2,3) - ^
00:43:626 (3,1) - remove stack since it is difficult to read Displace
01:08:594 (6) - place it at x:452|y:252 to keep DS the sameI think jump is better
nice mapset xD

PS:Different kiai time is acceptable if the diffs are mapped by different mappers
No comment and Pink=Fix
Thank you!!
-Nanaka-

Chaoslitz wrote:



[notice][7ka's Normal]
  1. 00:01:046 (1) - finish in head? Nope,Is lost sound balance...
  2. 00:28:723 - I suggest you to add a note here hm,1/2 slider x2 change to pattern
  3. 00:39:755 (1) - not parallel? owo sure



nice mapset xD

PS:Different kiai time is acceptable if the diffs are mapped by different mappers
Thank you for Modding :)
Ipas
Hello~
M4M :3

[7ka's Normal]
  1. 00:01:046 (1,3) - Fix blanket?
  2. 01:43:239 - Please remove Kiai at here for consistency. It would be nice without kiai at this :>


[Hard]
  1. 00:02:304 (5) - Remove this. It's doesn't explain anything at this part
  2. 00:27:368 (1) - Remove NC and add NC to the next note
  3. 00:50:400 (1,2) - Swap NC
  4. 00:51:949 (1,2) - Swap NC
  5. 00:54:852 (1,2) - Swap too
  6. 01:20:594 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 01:30:078 (2,3,1) - Just a suggestion. Prefer to change this flow. It looks a bit weird
  8. 01:32:787 (2,3,4) - I'd prefer not to overlap this. Looks weird


[Insane]
  1. 00:05:691 (5) - Fix DS for consistency

    I think there's too many NC issues at 00:07:239 ~ 00:19:239
    I think it's Overmapped too

  2. 00:43:626 (3,1) - Don't overlap this. I think it must be separated
  3. 01:01:433 (1,2) - Blanket this?
  4. 01:29:304 (7,2,3,4,5) - Overlap seems to be BAD
  5. 01:30:852 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think it seems to be Bad pattern or it just for myself :>
  6. 01:33:949 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Bad Flow
  7. 01:39:949 (2,3) - It seems to be bad pattern :3 Change? I think this would be fit with the song but it looks like too ugly :>

I think your Insane is too overmapped ><
But, I can only do this for now :3
Good Luck :3
Topic Starter
A9M

NewIpas wrote:

Hello~
M4M :3
  1. 00:02:304 (5) - Remove this. It's doesn't explain anything at this part No
  2. 00:27:368 (1) - Remove NC and add NC to the next note
  3. 00:50:400 (1,2) - Swap NC
  4. 00:51:949 (1,2) - Swap NC
  5. 00:54:852 (1,2) - Swap too
  6. 01:20:594 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 01:30:078 (2,3,1) - Just a suggestion. Prefer to change this flow. It looks a bit weird No
  8. 01:32:787 (2,3,4) - I'd prefer not to overlap this. Looks weird
  1. 00:05:691 (5) - Fix DS for consistency

    I think there's too many NC issues at 00:07:239 ~ 00:19:239
    I think it's Overmapped too

  2. 00:43:626 (3,1) - Don't overlap this. I think it must be separated
  3. 01:01:433 (1,2) - Blanket this?
  4. 01:29:304 (7,2,3,4,5) - Overlap seems to be BAD
  5. 01:30:852 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think it seems to be Bad pattern or it just for myself :>No
  6. 01:33:949 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Bad Flow
  7. 01:39:949 (2,3) - It seems to be bad pattern :3 Change? I think this would be fit with the song but it looks like too ugly :>
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I think your Insane is too overmapped ><
But, I can only do this for now :3
Good Luck :3
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Thank you
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