You might want to fix the beatmap's post since it's duplicated.
Please remind me to mod this!
何も書いていないところに関しては全て採用させていただきました 青字のみ不採用という意味ですsnowsign7 wrote:
大変長らくお待たせいたしましたおまたせしちゃってすみませんInsane
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- 00:02:416 - Hardと一緒でここSoft C:1にしてホイッスル入れてあげるといい感じになると思います! Hardと同じようにホイッスルで統一する形で修正しました
- 00:07:642 (3) - ここもハードと一緒でここの音は 00:08:029 - ここと一緒なのでホイッスルかclapで統一したほうがいいと思います!
- 00:08:416 - ^
- 00:09:191 (4) - ^
- 00:10:739 (3) - ^
- 00:11:513 (2) - ^
- 00:13:061 (4) - ^
- 00:13:836 (2) - ^
- 00:14:610 - ^
- 00:15:384 - ^
- 00:16:932 (3) - ^
- 00:17:707 (5) - ^
- 00:12:287 - clapつけ忘れ!
- 00:31:642 (4) - ^
- 00:32:416 (5) - ^
- 00:46:352 (5) - ホイッスルつけ忘れ!
- 00:09:965 (2) - finishのほうがあってると思います!
- 00:16:158 (1) - ^
- 00:18:481 (2) - ^
- 00:24:287 (1) - ^
- 00:25:061 - ^
- 00:32:029 (3) - ^
- 00:39:771 - ^
- 00:40:545 - ^
- 00:41:320 (1) - ^
- 00:44:416 (1) - ^
- 00:45:965 (4) - ^
- 00:56:803 (1) - ^
- 01:12:287 (2) - ^
- 01:17:707 (3) - ^
- 01:21:190 (3) - ^
- 01:26:223 (1) - ^
- 01:26:997 (5) - ^
- 01:30:868 (1) - ^
- 01:37:061 (1) - ^
- 01:44:803 (1) - ^
- 01:46:352 (1) - ^
- 00:10:352 (1) - ホイッスルのほうが合うと思います~! :
- 00:33:578 (15) - ^
- 00:54:868 (1) - ^
- 01:30:481 (6) - ^
- 00:07:449 - finish追加しましょ!
- 00:11:707 (3) - ^
- 00:12:094 - ^
- 00:17:320 (4) - ^
- 00:32:029 (3) - ^
- 00:55:061 - ^
- 01:13:642 - ^
- 01:15:191 (8) - ^
- 01:19:836 (2) - ^
- 01:21:384 (5) - ^
- 00:54:868 (1) - finish外してclapにしましょー!
- 01:30:481 (6) - ^
- 01:10:352 (1) - ホイッスル外しましょ~
- 00:33:965 (1) - clapのつけ間違い?
- 01:17:804 (4) - ここ連続してホイッスル使っちゃうのはまずいと思いますここだけ外してあげましょー!
- 01:46:352 (1) - ここもホイッスル多分いらないと思います...ここはちょっと自信ないです
- 00:03:384 (4,5,1) - ここの流れが少し悪く感じました~ 若干ですが位置を調整しました
- 00:34:158 (3) - ここにもう一つ音があるように聞こえました! 追加しました
- 00:34:255 - 逆にここは聞こえないような気がします... 削除しました
- 00:35:707 - ここももう一つ音があるように聞こえます~ 画像の音取りを採用させていただきました
- 00:56:610 (9,1) - こっちから入るのがやりにくく感じたので1のスライダーを柔らかくしてあげましょー!
- 01:05:320 (2) - ここ見づらく感じたので手前の単発の位置を変えてこのスライダーの向きをずらしませんか?
- 01:08:997 (8,1) - ここも入りづらく感じました~、こんな感じにしませんか!
- 01:47:707 (4) - ここひとつ伸ばして上げたほうが自然に感じます! 一応ギターの音を拾いたいのでそのままで
初めてのmodなので至らぬ点が多々あると思います
Nocomment,Red=Fixjloughman14 wrote:
GeneralMaybe cut down on the stacks a bit.
Really nice looking beatmap you got.NormalHonestly, could not find something significant to change, looks really good.Hard00:22:545 (7) - I think you should delete this and put something else that matching the rhythm.^ [/box]00:46:642 (6) - Delete this. fix
00:58:739 (1,1,1) - Make these a single combo. fix
01:02:997 (1,1,1) - ^
01:43:642 (1,1) - ^^
[box=Insane]00:06:191 Through 00:06:771 - You could edit in here.
00:13:061 (1,2,3,4,5) - This should be a slider to match the song. sorry now is like
00:58:739 (1,1,1) - Single combo here.Fix
01:02:997 (1,1,1) - ^ You probably seen this coming again
01:43:642 (1,1) - ^^[/box]
Hopefully this helps out a little. Also, you should tell me the name of this VN cause looks a bit interesting Im also working on a VN soundtrack if you'd want to check that out, up to you!
CloudSplash16 wrote:
From my queue.
[General][Hard]
- Offset is late by ~16ms. I recommend offset 1046.
- Source should be: Hyper→Highspeed→Genius
[Insane]
- 00:59:708 - Green line here doesn't change anything. Remove it?
- Starting at 00:19:642 there are some green lines are unsnapped by ~1ms, including start of kiai section. Please check all of them and fix it.
- 00:01:062 (1,6,4) - I think normal-hitfinish fits better than the soft whistles on the downbeats.
- 00:17:320 (4) - Remove finish from end? It doesn't seem to fit the music.
- 00:19:255 (5) - Change to clap on head?
- 00:30:674 (2) - Change to clap on end?
- 00:32:029 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think it's better to increase the distance spacing a bit, so the repeat arrows are more visible: http://puu.sh/giupd/6ab239b4b8.jpg
- 00:33:191 (6) - Why is there a finish on the second repeat? It doesn't seem to match the song. Remove it?
- 00:40:352 (2,4) - Stack them together?
- 00:47:513 (1) - Head feels really empty. Add a whistle?
- 01:01:449 - Slider velocity change does nothing here... just set it to 1.00x.
- 01:06:094 (1) - After you fix the unsnapped green lines, make sure you resnap this slider too.
- 01:19:836 (2) - Finish doesn't fit well here. I'd remove it.
- 01:22:739 (1,3) - Try to avoid these touching because it doesn't look good.
- 01:30:094 (2,3,1) - Better not to stack these, because it's confusing the read. Just overlap them normally: http://puu.sh/giuKo/7cc40df15b.jpg
- 01:36:287 (4,5) - I think it's better for rhythm to be consistent with 01:33:191 (3,4) so choose one, and use the same rhythm on the other.
- 01:39:771 (1) - I recommend removing the last repeat, because there's more significant drum sound on the downbeat.
Cool song and map.
- This has the same issues with unsnapped green lines. Please check all of them.
- 00:02:416 (3,1) - I think it is better not to overlap these, because it can be confused to 1/4 rhythm. Space it out like this: http://puu.sh/givdh/2c7dda7a3d.jpg
- 00:07:932 (5) - Sounds better if you remove the whistle.
- 00:24:287 (1) - Change to whistle or finish on head.
- 00:54:868 (1,2,3) - The normal-sliderslide are really distracting, and don't fit the song. Did you really intend to use those? Maybe you meant to put normal sampleset on heads and ends of sliders rather than body?
- 01:06:094 (1) - Unsnapped slider end.
- 01:21:190 (3,5) - Too many finishes here makes it really noisy. I'd recommend removing both, or at least the one on (5).
- 01:36:287 (4,5) - Same as in Hard.
Thank you for ModdingCloudSplash16 wrote:
From my queue.
[7ka's Normal]
- 00:01:062 (1,3,1) - I think normal-hitfinish will sound better on heads of these sliders. Nope,I do not fit it ... too strong
- 00:05:707 (3) - The slider shape is uneven, and doesn't blanket (1) properly. Use a 3-point slider for a perfectly circular curve so you can improve the aesthetic. hm...Okey Fix,Other forms
- 00:09:578 (3) - Better for this to be soft whistle (kick). It matches the song better, and consistent with 00:12:674 sure
- 00:36:674 (3) - You can make a nicer curve by setting the third point equidistant from the second and fourth: http://puu.sh/gi77Y/2cd0629b82.jpg k
- 01:06:094 - In this section your hitsound use is very inconsistent. There seems to be no pattern as to where you use normal-hitnormal versus when you use soft-hitclap. Please revise this to have more consistent hitsound pattern. omg....Fix it
- 01:13:836 (3) - Same thing about the curve. ^
- 01:33:191 (5) - Change head to soft sampleset + whistle and finish. It fits the song better and matches with 01:39:384 (5) which is the same part of the musical phrase in the next iteration. k
Cool song and map.
青字 変更無し-Maruk- wrote:
request from my queueInsane01:47:110 (1,2,3,4) - 先端と終端全部Clapでいいと思います 音がうるさすぎるように感じたので変えませんでした00:01:046 (1) - Finish finish多用するのは好きではないのでごめんなさい
00:02:400 (3) - 終端Finish ^
00:03:949 (3) - ^ ^
00:07:239 (3) - 終端Finish外して先端Finish 入れ替えました
00:23:400 (3) - サークル追加 追加しました
00:44:400 (1) - 分かりにくいので若干下にずらしたほうがいいと思います そのままで
01:13:433 (1) - 終端のFinish外して01:13:820 (2) - にFinish追加 finishの音が尻尾にあるように聞こえるのでそのままで
01:15:175 (8) - ^ ^
01:19:820 (2) - ^ ^
01:18:078 (6) - Finish外してClap
01:39:949 (2) - なんか変な感じしますね。音取りの提案だけしときます。 しっくりこなかったのでそのままで
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nice songです
Good luck~
Thank you moddingFort wrote:
hello from mod qInsaneoverall your map is overmapped at patterning especially of triplets, you need consider this thing for rank. just saying this00:02:207 (1,2,3) - yeah i see your patterning in here, its like triplets, but im sure your patterning isnt right. because its clearly that song you maps needs to be mapped 5/4 streams (because 00:02:594 - is very strong notes, and i think you should circle or slider there and maybe you can new combo that thing.Sorry now is like
00:05:691 (5,6,1) - why change pattern in here? its like same patterning from your previous pattern Because intro an end.I think not have to change.
00:18:078 (1,2,2,3) - i think you can make same spacing placement hereNo
00:32:787 (7) - new combo? (indicates long stream) OK nice idea
00:43:626 (3) - confusing but okay change conspicuous
00:47:207 - should add circle here No
00:47:497 (10) - need NC this instead of 00:47:691 (1) - (that NC isnt necessary imo)
~im too lazy to fix NC in here, you need people who want to nazi NC mod your map lmao
01:05:304 (2,3) - feels overmap and overlap makes it very hard to get Fix
01:47:884 - you should add circle here, yep last notes Fit guitar sound to note
good luck!
JudgeTheDude wrote:
Hi, from my queue
Unrankable issue
Suggestion[General]
- 7ka's Normal's Preview Point is different from the two other diffs
- Kiai time in inconsistent. 7ka's Normal has a different Kiai
[7ka's Normal]
- Preview Point is different from the two other diffs ???
- Kiai Time is different from the two other diffs Not Unrankable
[quote="Ranking Criteria":1337]
Kiai should be consistent throughout difficulties of your mapset (especially since it is shown on the main menu). If you have a guest difficulty from another mapper that uses different kiai, then it's fine as long as it still makes sense.
JudgeTheDude wrote:
Hi, from my queueUnrankable issue
Suggestion[General]
- 7ka's Normal's Preview Point is different from the two other diffs
- Kiai time in inconsistent. 7ka's Normal has a different Kiai
[7ka's Normal]
- Preview Point is different from the two other diffs
- Kiai Time is different from the two other diffs
[Hard]
- Nothing to say here, it's pretty good
Please post from seeing a decent Map
No comment and Pink=FixChaoslitz wrote:
Hard00:03:755 (4) - try to use same hitsound as 00:02:207 (4,5,6)
00:12:465 (2) - keep same distance between 00:12:078 (1,3) OK
00:33:562 (1) - NC
01:03:368 (2) - place at x:288|y:136 instead? Sorry now is like
01:12:658 (3) - rotate 10 anticlockwise and place it in x:88|y:88 Nice idea
01:32:787 (2,4) - it is difficult to read since they are stacked Displace
01:39:755 (5) - clap in head OK
01:44:787 (1) - the spinner is following the vocal, so 01:43:626 (1,2) is better to move to 01:43:239 (1,2) instead Sorry.want to following drumInsanenice mapset xD00:02:207 (1,2,3) - stream of 5 notes suit more in here I think too hard
00:03:755 (1,2,3) - ^
00:43:626 (3,1) - remove stack since it is difficult to read Displace
01:08:594 (6) - place it at x:452|y:252 to keep DS the sameI think jump is better
PS:Different kiai time is acceptable if the diffs are mapped by different mappers
Thank you for ModdingChaoslitz wrote:
[notice][7ka's Normal]
- 00:01:046 (1) - finish in head? Nope,Is lost sound balance...
- 00:28:723 - I suggest you to add a note here hm,1/2 slider x2 change to pattern
- 00:39:755 (1) - not parallel? owo sure
nice mapset xD
PS:Different kiai time is acceptable if the diffs are mapped by different mappers
Nocomment=fixNewIpas wrote:
Hello~
M4M :3Hard
- 00:02:304 (5) - Remove this. It's doesn't explain anything at this part No
- 00:27:368 (1) - Remove NC and add NC to the next note
- 00:50:400 (1,2) - Swap NC
- 00:51:949 (1,2) - Swap NC
- 00:54:852 (1,2) - Swap too
- 01:20:594 (1) - Remove NC
- 01:30:078 (2,3,1) - Just a suggestion. Prefer to change this flow. It looks a bit weird No
- 01:32:787 (2,3,4) - I'd prefer not to overlap this. Looks weird
Insane[/notice]
- 00:05:691 (5) - Fix DS for consistency
I think there's too many NC issues at 00:07:239 ~ 00:19:239
I think it's Overmapped too- 00:43:626 (3,1) - Don't overlap this. I think it must be separated
- 01:01:433 (1,2) - Blanket this?
- 01:29:304 (7,2,3,4,5) - Overlap seems to be BAD
- 01:30:852 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think it seems to be Bad pattern or it just for myself :>No
- 01:33:949 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Bad Flow
- 01:39:949 (2,3) - It seems to be bad pattern :3 Change? I think this would be fit with the song but it looks like too ugly :>
I think your Insane is too overmapped ><
But, I can only do this for now :3
Good Luck :3
ur nice Modders. Thank you for watching finelyHitorikko wrote:
yo ~ from my Queue.Normal00:02:207 (2,3) - fix blanket. Looks fine
00:02:594 (3,1) - sliderbow not symmetric. make it symmetric like this Sure,But 1 only fixes
move the end node of 00:04:142 (1) - to x:220 y:316 and move the 1st node of 00:02:594 (3) - to x:380 y:248 to fix the blanket.
00:07:239 (1,2) - bad flow I do not think so...
00:15:755 (5,1,2) - bad flow. maybe like this . fm...Okey
00:19:626 (1,2,3,1) - fix blankets. I got off blankets because lol
00:23:304 (3) - middle node x:92 y:256, third node x:32 y:236 looks better Ctrl+C fix
00:42:465 (3,1) - fix blanket k
00:44:400 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:47:497 (1,2) - ^ Looks fine imo
01:29:304 (1) - move 4th node to x:288 y:144 Okey
01:44:013 (3) - move slider to x:268 y:312 for better flow Nope.
thumbs up
Gudluck with your map.
ShureliaちゃんありがとうShurelia wrote:
おっす!やったよ!
Sorry for the very late mod ;w;~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~
[General]- Add "-Nanaka-" to the tags. Because GD.
- Change "ハイパー ハイスピード ジーニアス" into "ハイパーハイスピードジーニアス" at the tags and change "Hyper Highspeed Genius" to "Hyper→Highspeed→Genius" ,that's the original name.
- You may want to add "Eroge" to the tags.
[7ka's Normal]
- 00:22:723 - Add circle at here, because it will feels really empty if there's no object at here. Sure.00:28:142 - change same rhythm
- 01:40:142 (1,2) - i recommend this to be stacked, it plays better for me. Nope.I want to because it is the lowest degree of difficulty Stack Avoid
- 00:14:207 (2,3,4) - I suggest to make a better Triangle at here. No.not need
- 00:39:755 (1) - Add finish on the tail ^ The noisy for Note is less
That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!
Thank you Very muchAura893 wrote:
From my queue!
Normal
-Hi there! I literally could not find anything wrong with this map! Everything is timed perfectly! No unsnapped notes, no notes blending in, No odd slider movements or hitsounds colliding! This was a fun map! I hope for the very best for it!
I agree with this.. the difficulty spread is a bit concerning.Niko-nyan wrote:
well checked again the map :< the gap between 7ka's Normal to Hard really far (1,5+ star) owo it can be unrankable btw