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walaowey
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, December 4, 2015 at 6:30:00 AM

Artist: Yuuki Aoi
Title: Cupid Review
Source: 彼女がフラグをおられたら
Tags: gaworare anime Kyle Y Flag wo Oraretara [Sc4v4ng3r]
BPM: 137
Filesize: 18394kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (3.62 stars, 272 notes)
  2. Ky's Hard (2.96 stars, 225 notes)
  3. Sc4's Normal (1.74 stars, 144 notes)


Download: Yuuki Aoi - Cupid Review
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Kanojo ga Flag wo Oraretara OP
Cupid Review by Yuuki Aoi

Hope everyone enjoy this map >w</

Normal by [Sc4v4ng3r]
Ky's Hard by Kyle Y
Insane by Me

TH's Muzukashii
TH's Oni
Try out the taiko diffs by -TheHateD- >w<
Sorry for removing the taiko diffs from the mapset ><
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] Faelthas [
Kyle Y
-TheHateD-
batwoman3
leminine
VINXIS
Sgord1
monstrata
BAldoTridentE
Avishay
pkhg
Kibbleru
EdamaMe411 for modding taiko difficulty >w</
Rakuen
imaikiseta
Jone for modding taiko difficulty >w</
game rock for modding taiko difficulty >w</
DahplA
Surono for modding taiko difficulty >w</
intoon
Jason X for modding taiko difficulty >w</
God Faelthas
Hiii, i'm here to make your map look better.

Insane Diff.

From 00:49:876 - 00:50:314 - you should put slider with i think 0.80 SV.
Same here 01:02:795 - 01:03:233 - , but there is no need to be 0.80 SV, you can put it on 1.00.
Put one more bpm ( bpm 137 / offset 0 )

Hard Diff.

From 01:22:065 - 01:22:284 - Add 3 circle stream, it should sound better.
From 01:24:254 - 01:27:211 - I think that you should map that part, it's a waste or if you don't, move slider 01:27:320 - there.
Same set one more bpm and offset ( bpm 137 / 0 )

Normal Diff.

From 00:44:182 - 00:44:401 - You should add 2 more circles for that voice :D and one more here 00:44:620 - , also here 00:54:474 - 00:54:693 - two more circles.
Same goes for bpm/offset

This is my personal thoughts so, you can listen to me or not, your call, however you like :D, i just think that the map would be better with this changes. Map is pretty good tho, every diff. :)
Topic Starter
walaowey

] Faelthas [ wrote:

Hiii, i'm here to make your map look better.

Insane Diff.

From 00:49:876 - 00:50:314 - you should put slider with i think 0.80 SV. not so sure about it ;)
Same here 01:02:795 - 01:03:233 - , but there is no need to be 0.80 SV, you can put it on 1.00.fixed
Put one more bpm ( bpm 137 / offset 0 )

Hard Diff.

From 01:22:065 - 01:22:284 - Add 3 circle stream, it should sound better.fixed
From 01:24:254 - 01:27:211 - I think that you should map that part, it's a waste or if you don't, move slider 01:27:320 - there.fixed
Same set one more bpm and offset ( bpm 137 / 0 )

Normal Diff.

From 00:44:182 - 00:44:401 - You should add 2 more circles for that voice :D and one more here 00:44:620 - , also here 00:54:474 - 00:54:693 - two more circles.fixed
Same goes for bpm/offset

This is my personal thoughts so, you can listen to me or not, your call, however you like :D, i just think that the map would be better with this changes. Map is pretty good tho, every diff. :)
Thanks for modding xD :D
Kyle Y
General
I think the offset should be 10484 instead of 10460
The lowest diff should be <2 star
Please read Ranking Criteria

Better not to use such large amount of circles (?)

Sliders not beautiful enough
Please read common sliders

Consider about the flowing
flowing

Normal
You must use the distance snap, I suggest you use 1.0 ds
00:23:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - all change it into 1/2 beat sliders
00:30:168 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2597815 redraw it after reading the common sliders above.
00:31:481 (1,2,3,4) - Players are not metronome
00:36:737 - I think you should map here, don't be lazy.
00:49:876 (6,7) - you better blanket it, like this one
00:49:000 (5) - new combo (nc)
00:50:751 (8) - slider
00:59:292 (1) - circle and 1/2 slider start at 00:59:511

Use the distance snap and modify it again.

Hard
Most of the problem and same with normal diff
For hard, ds also need for easier hard. usually, x1.1-1.5
For harder hard, I think most of them should follow ds and only few of them consider as jumping
For your hard, I think your slider it too long, you can shorter it by increasing the slider velocity, say, 1.80, but you need to snap the sliders one by one and time- killing.

00:28:416 (4,5) - blanket it
00:38:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - metronome again
01:03:452 (5) - Blanket it
00:49:000 (7) - nc

Insane

I think a little bit overmapped?
00:19:904 (1,2,3) - use silders
00:20:342 (4,5,6) - ^
00:23:188 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make it as a circle, by using Ctrl+shift+D

For the whole mapset, I do not read it very detail.
Please reply for further modding.


Ailmod
ailmod: ctrl+shift+A
and it talk about 3 problems
1)
about the audio
the solution is to output the song once more through Audacity and replace the original one, then the problem solved.

2)
about the uninherited timing points
You should have same timing point (red one) even it is different diff.

3)
about the mapset
as I mentioned before, you should have a <2 stars map.
I suggest you change part of the circles in normal and follow the distance snap (I suggest 0.8~1.2), then I think it can be below 2 stars.
Yaminoma
Hello.
First of all, this is my first time modding osu! standard map, if i do something wrong please tell me so i can get better XD.
(2nd, my english sucks xD)
General:
I think the bpm is right, but in my oppinion, you should change the offset to EDIT: -34 is the right offset... i think,and start mapping it from the beggining, i see you are wasting good sections of the song , map it 100% :D
Normal:
00:11:992 (4,5) - how about one slider here ?
00:20:642 (1) - start spinner in the red tick 00:20:751 -
( imo, if u delete 00:25:788 (7) - and place circles here 00:25:678 - and here 00:26:007 - it will sound better.)

00:36:737 - circle
00:44:182 (5) - nc ?
00:51:627 (1) - remove nc
01:15:277 (5) - add slider starting here 01:15:277 - and end 01:15:715 -
01:15:934 - add circle
Hard:
00:14:401 (6) - Start new combo here
00:16:153 (1) - remove this nc
00:18:562 (1) - ^
( add circle here 00:25:678 (7) - and start the slider here 00:26:006 - and end here 00:26:225 - this will make it better)
00:52:503 (1) - why dont u finish it here 00:54:035 -

Insane:
00:17:029 - add circle
00:19:000 (8) - one slider here would look way better than circles imho
00:21:956 (1) - remove this nc
00:25:788 (7) - move this to the previous blue tick (it will sound better 00:25:678 - here )
00:26:883 (1) - remove this nc but be sure to keep it in 00:26:664 (1) -
00:33:890 - add circle
00:36:080 (1) - remove nc
00:36:518 (4) - add nc
00:53:489 (1) - remove nc
01:00:168 (6) - nc ?
01:06:080 - circle
01:15:277 (9) - start the combo here and delete nc from 01:15:387 (1) -
01:20:095 (4) - nc
01:20:532 (7) - ^
01:21:518 (1) - remove nc
01:22:065 (5) - add nc
01:26:007 (8) - ^

Sorry for this short and bad mod b-but... i tried my best , i hope it helps:(
Great song btw. :)
Topic Starter
walaowey

thehatedbr wrote:

Hello.
First of all, this is my first time modding osu! standard map, if i do something wrong please tell me so i can get better XD.
(2nd, my english sucks xD)
General:
I think the bpm is right, but in my oppinion, you should change the offset to EDIT: -34 is the right offset... i think,and start mapping it from the beggining, i see you are wasting good sections of the song , map it 100% :Di think i wont change the offset though but I will map it 100%
Normal:
00:11:992 (4,5) - how about one slider here ? fixed
00:20:642 (1) - start spinner in the red tick 00:20:751 -ok sorry for the mistake. Didnt realise the spinner is off
( imo, if u delete 00:25:788 (7) - and place circles here 00:25:678 - and here 00:26:007 - it will sound better.)fixed

00:36:737 - circle fixed
00:44:182 (5) - nc ?yes
00:51:627 (1) - remove ncyes
01:15:277 (5) - add slider starting here 01:15:277 - and end 01:15:715 - fixed
01:15:934 - add circlefixed
Hard:
00:14:401 (6) - Start new combo herefixed
00:16:153 (1) - remove this ncfixed
00:18:562 (1) - ^fixed
( add circle here 00:25:678 (7) - and start the slider here 00:26:006 - and end here 00:26:225 - this will make it better)thanks for the suggestion :D
00:52:503 (1) - why dont u finish it here 00:54:035 fixed-

Insane:
00:17:029 - add circle
00:19:000 (8) - one slider here would look way better than circles imho
00:21:956 (1) - remove this nc
00:25:788 (7) - move this to the previous blue tick (it will sound better 00:25:678 - here )
00:26:883 (1) - remove this nc but be sure to keep it in 00:26:664 (1) -
00:33:890 - add circle
00:36:080 (1) - remove nc
00:36:518 (4) - add nc
00:53:489 (1) - remove nc
01:00:168 (6) - nc ?
01:06:080 - circle
01:15:277 (9) - start the combo here and delete nc from 01:15:387 (1) -
01:20:095 (4) - nc
01:20:532 (7) - ^
01:21:518 (1) - remove nc
01:22:065 (5) - add nc
01:26:007 (8) - ^
Fixed everything :D

Sorry for this short and bad mod b-but... i tried my best , i hope it helps:(
Great song btw. :)
Thanks for modding it xD
I've edit it.
batwoman3
pretty lively song. Like on a parade, many trumpets. By the way, here is my mod:

Normal

First off, don't use 1.4 slider velocity for normal. It's too fast. Under the timing section, reduce that.
use whistles and claps and finishes otherwise the song won't be ranked. Insane diff will explain it.
00:19:462 (9,10) - place these notes farther from each other. It might confuse because DS is not altered properly
00:56:031 - kiai time can start here

other than that, this one is great diff

Ky's Hard

needs better hitsounds. use whistles to make the song lively
00:11:797 (5) - make this like the first one, don't use reverse arrow
00:13:111 (1) - don't use slider here. it's doesn't follow the music
00:20:119 (5) - this tick doesn't sound like it needs a note.
00:20:556 (1) - start spinner here
00:27:783 (3) - this slider doesn't even sound to the music. change this
00:32:162 (2) - delete this.
00:35:009 (7) - I don't think this slider is allowed in ranked versions. Plus, make it 1/2 beat longer
00:37:856 (6) - if you want it, decrease the slider by 1 arrow, and add a note at the current time
00:39:936 (6) - start at the red tick. finish at where it is now, so edit the slider
00:56:031 - kiai time can start here
01:00:191 (4) - Ctrl + G
01:16:615 - add a note here
01:24:936 - shorten the slider to follow the song
01:26:907 (4) - the start of the slider is not where a note should be placed because the song is not like that. Change it.

Hard

overall might need whistles like 00:10:484 (1) - here and 00:11:797 (3) - here
00:22:308 - spinner can end here
00:29:097 (6) - move this note 1/4 beat to the right (closer to the (7) slider)
00:37:199 (4,5,6) - can DS this all closer to one another
00:40:922 (2) - Ctrl + G
00:56:031 - kiai time can start here
01:13:987 (2) - Ctrl + G
01:24:498 (2) - shorten the length by 1/4 beat

Insane

overall might need whistles like 00:10:921 (2) - here and 00:11:797 - here and so on. All hits sound boring for the song
00:21:870 (11) - set new NC here. I think it's too long for 19 notes at 1 combo
00:37:637 (6) - DS this closer.
00:54:060 (15) - can set to finish too here and whistle with it
00:56:031 - kiai time can start here instead
00:58:440 (7) - Ctrl + G
01:00:629 (1) - remove NC here
01:17:053 (1,2,3,4,5) - for insane, can be set further apart for more challenge
01:24:936 (5) - can delete this note
01:22:308 (2) - too far from 1, make this closer (DS this closer)
01:26:688 (4) - i suggest to follow the music and cut this to 2 sliders

To me, this map is still far from ranked (no offense), but great song, so I look forward to seeing this map ranked. Good luck

My pending map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/266181
Topic Starter
walaowey

batwoman3 wrote:

pretty lively song. Like on a parade, many trumpets. By the way, here is my mod:

Normal

First off, don't use 1.4 slider velocity for normal. It's too fast. Under the timing section, reduce that.
use whistles and claps and finishes otherwise the song won't be ranked. Insane diff will explain it.
00:19:462 (9,10) - place these notes farther from each other. It might confuse because DS is not altered properly
00:56:031 - kiai time can start hereDone with the SV and whistles+finishesbut I prefer my old kiai time

other than that, this one is great diff

Ky's Hard

needs better hitsounds. use whistles to make the song lively
00:11:797 (5) - make this like the first one, don't use reverse arrow
00:13:111 (1) - don't use slider here. it's doesn't follow the music
00:20:119 (5) - this tick doesn't sound like it needs a note.
00:20:556 (1) - start spinner here
00:27:783 (3) - this slider doesn't even sound to the music. change this
00:32:162 (2) - delete this.
00:35:009 (7) - I don't think this slider is allowed in ranked versions. Plus, make it 1/2 beat longer
00:37:856 (6) - if you want it, decrease the slider by 1 arrow, and add a note at the current time
00:39:936 (6) - start at the red tick. finish at where it is now, so edit the slider
00:56:031 - kiai time can start here
01:00:191 (4) - Ctrl + G
01:16:615 - add a note here
01:24:936 - shorten the slider to follow the song
01:26:907 (4) - the start of the slider is not where a note should be placed because the song is not like that. Change it. Fixed some of them :D

Hard

overall might need whistles like 00:10:484 (1) - here and 00:11:797 (3) - here
00:22:308 - spinner can end here
00:29:097 (6) - move this note 1/4 beat to the right (closer to the (7) slider)
00:37:199 (4,5,6) - can DS this all closer to one another
00:40:922 (2) - Ctrl + G
00:56:031 - kiai time can start here
01:13:987 (2) - Ctrl + G
01:24:498 (2) - shorten the length by 1/4 beat
Fixed eveything :Dbut I prefer the old kiai time

Insane

overall might need whistles like 00:10:921 (2) - here and 00:11:797 - here and so on. All hits sound boring for the song
00:21:870 (11) - set new NC here. I think it's too long for 19 notes at 1 combo
00:37:637 (6) - DS this closer.
00:54:060 (15) - can set to finish too here and whistle with it
00:56:031 - kiai time can start here instead
00:58:440 (7) - Ctrl + G
01:00:629 (1) - remove NC here
01:17:053 (1,2,3,4,5) - for insane, can be set further apart for more challenge
01:24:936 (5) - can delete this note
01:22:308 (2) - too far from 1, make this closer (DS this closer)
01:26:688 (4) - i suggest to follow the music and cut this to 2 sliders
Fixed almost everything but I prefer the old kiai time though

To me, this map is still far from ranked (no offense), but great song, so I look forward to seeing this map ranked. Good luck

My pending map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/266181
Thanks for the mod xD
VINXIS
lmao m4m thingy thing thing

where's the easy lmao
tbh there shouldn't be any breaks fora tv size but yea
and since there shouldn't be any breaks take of letterbox lo l
btw u need another taiko diff
00:11:140 (2,3,4) - spacing problem br0, move (4) farther away
00:13:768 (2,3,4) - and here
00:17:272 (4,5,6) - and here
e.t.c.
yea you might have to remap those parts since you should be using 0.9 or 1.0 D.S. throughout ANY normal diff all the time. It's the golden rule lmaoo

00:23:184 (1) - dis SV is also kinda eh

other than that it's rhythmically fine lo l
kk just nc problems that aren't in sync with the song
00:13:111 (1) - remove nc
00:13:987 (4) - nc
00:15:520 (8) - nc
00:16:177 (1) - remove nc
00:18:586 (1) - remove nc
00:19:024 (2) - nc
00:24:498 (4) - nc
00:27:126 (2,3) - i'd consider remapping this cuz the second slider feels off, it should be a 1/2 slider to fit rhythmically imo (or make it start on the white tick)
00:27:783 (3) - nc
00:28:878 (1) - remove nc
00:29:754 (4) - nc
00:30:192 (1) - remove nc
00:33:257 (4) - nc
00:35:009 (7) - nc
00:37:856 (6) - delete a repeat and add a circle on the big white tick, it plays much better
00:39:170 (3,4,5,6) - you should use this pattern more or change it to teh same as the patterns later on for consistency throughout the map tbh
00:49:243 (6) - nc
01:01:943 (8) - add note 4 flow, sounds awkward without it tbh
01:21:870 (5) - breh 5% vol doesn't fit imo
01:27:345 (1) - add a note where teh spinner starts and start the spinner on the white tick
breh dis looks like a map from 2009
I don't like how it looks but it plays well so lol
don't have anything to say about it doe
00:14:644 (6,7,8) - stack 4 aesthetic
00:20:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the stream suc actually start at 00:21:213 (5) - lmao
00:58:440 (7) - end on white tick and add a note on the red tick after
01:13:549 (3,4,5) - make each slider bigger than the other and nc each
01:24:608 (2,3,4) - add a repeating slider instead it plays much better
01:25:155 (5) - blue tick
01:27:016 (5) - end on blue tick

gl m808
Topic Starter
walaowey

VINXIS wrote:

lmao m4m thingy thing thing

where's the easy lmao
tbh there shouldn't be any breaks fora tv size but yea
and since there shouldn't be any breaks take of letterbox lo l
btw u need another taiko diff ok break has been removed
00:11:140 (2,3,4) - spacing problem br0, move (4) farther away
00:13:768 (2,3,4) - and here
00:17:272 (4,5,6) - and here
e.t.c.
yea you might have to remap those parts since you should be using 0.9 or 1.0 D.S. throughout ANY normal diff all the time. It's the golden rule lmaoo

00:23:184 (1) - dis SV is also kinda eh

other than that it's rhythmically fine lo l
Fixed everything :D
kk just nc problems that aren't in sync with the song
00:13:111 (1) - remove nc
00:13:987 (4) - nc
00:15:520 (8) - nc
00:16:177 (1) - remove nc
00:18:586 (1) - remove nc
00:19:024 (2) - nc
00:24:498 (4) - nc
00:27:126 (2,3) - i'd consider remapping this cuz the second slider feels off, it should be a 1/2 slider to fit rhythmically imo (or make it start on the white tick)
00:27:783 (3) - nc
00:28:878 (1) - remove nc
00:29:754 (4) - nc
00:30:192 (1) - remove nc
00:33:257 (4) - nc
00:35:009 (7) - nc
00:37:856 (6) - delete a repeat and add a circle on the big white tick, it plays much better
00:39:170 (3,4,5,6) - you should use this pattern more or change it to teh same as the patterns later on for consistency throughout the map tbh
00:49:243 (6) - nc
01:01:943 (8) - add note 4 flow, sounds awkward without it tbh
01:21:870 (5) - breh 5% vol doesn't fit imo
01:27:345 (1) - add a note where teh spinner starts and start the spinner on the white tick
breh dis looks like a map from 2009
I don't like how it looks but it plays well so lol
don't have anything to say about it doe Thanks for this :)
00:14:644 (6,7,8) - stack 4 aesthetic
00:20:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the stream suc actually start at 00:21:213 (5) - lmao
00:58:440 (7) - end on white tick and add a note on the red tick after
01:13:549 (3,4,5) - make each slider bigger than the other and nc each
01:24:608 (2,3,4) - add a repeating slider instead it plays much better
01:25:155 (5) - blue tick
01:27:016 (5) - end on blue tick
Fixed some of them :D

gl m808
Thanks for the mod :D
Sgord1
Hi there! M4m...
Normal
Leave spacing the same on this difficulty
00:37:199 (8) - I would avoid such sliders as this because this is not really intuitive since this map is made for beginners (they are short)
00:44:206 (1) - above
00:59:535 (2,3,4) - wrong spacing imho
01:08:513 (5) - 2 lines above
01:12:235 (10) - above
01:24:498 (1) - above
01:29:316 finish spinner here
Hard
01:21:432 (4,5) - omg return hitsounds. It counfuses. Plays well however
Insane
0:35:775 (8,9) - make this stream more straight let the slider continue direction of the stream flow
00:39:170 (3,4,5) - I think 2 notes is more logical
00:41:140 (4,5,6) - above (this repeats in your map)
00:53:513 (10,11) - 3 lines above

Hope I helped. I like this song!
Kyle Y
To map creator


I have already follow the suggestion given by the 2 modders, but for the hitting sound problem, I am not familiar with it. If you can further explain it, then it is easier for me to improve my beatmap. Now I just set all of them are whistle, maybe because of my laziness.
Monstrata
Hi~ For M4M as we arranged :D. Good luck~

[Insane]

00:20:775 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Try adding a slider at 00:20:775 - and removing some notes. Begin the stream when the trumpet begins to play at 00:21:104 - .
00:26:031 (8) - Two circles please, 00:26:250 - is a strong note.
00:29:754 (3,4,5) - Make symmetrical?
00:34:133 (7,8,9) - I notice you tend to stack your triples right underneath the slider, maybe do that here too?
00:35:885 (9) - Not sure if this works... you miss a note at 00:36:213 - . How about using shorter sliders? or a repeat instead, at 00:36:213 - ?
00:38:732 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - There is a polarity shift here. The vocals are at 00:39:498 - and 00:39:717 - . Both blue ticks. Take out 5, and reorder the remaining circles. It could help to finish with a slider to return back to regular polarity for 00:39:827 - .
00:40:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^same idea.
00:44:863 (6,7,8) - Minor, but have the stack be part of the same curve?
00:45:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Doesn't follow the vocals at all here :P.
00:47:491 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:59:316 (2,3) - Don't overlap.
01:07:199 (5) - Ctrl+J and reposition: better flow.
01:11:797 (4,5,6,7) - Doesn't follow vocals. 01:12:126 - Is there the next note is sung.

[Hard]

00:12:892 (3,4) - Make this a slider instead and
00:13:768 (7) - Make this slider two circles
00:16:177 (6,7) - Blanket is off.
00:23:184 (1) - Try Ctrl+G this, also do this for 3.
00:27:564 (3,4) - Check blankets.
00:45:739 (1,2) - Stack properly.
00:48:148 (4,5) - Nothing really suggests a jump here :P.
01:02:819 (4,5) - Blanket.
01:05:228 (9,10) - ^
01:06:323 (1,2,3) - ^
01:08:951 (7,8) - ^
01:10:046 (10,1) - ^
01:17:053 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing between 1, 2 is misleading for 3, and 4. Make them evenly spaced?

[Ky's Hard]

00:18:148 (4,1) - Blanket?
00:19:024 (2,3) - Fix blanket. Use two control points on the slider.
00:25:374 (6,7) - How about taking out 7, and extending the slider to 00:25:702 - .
00:27:126 (2,3) - Doesn't really follow vocals. You should always try to have your sliders begin on white-ticks because that is the main melody.
00:33:038 - Note here? to follow the pattern? Since you have a note here 00:32:162 (2) - .
00:46:177 (2,3) - This is really bad flow too, you would only expect to see this on Insane/Extra because it is difficult to read (which one is a circle, which is a slider? is what beginners will ask)
00:46:834 (4) - ^That said, don't stack this 4 underneath the sliderhead of 3 either, makes it even more confusing.
00:50:556 (1,2) - ^
00:55:592 (2,3) - This is unrankable because the repeats of a slider must be visible. Highly recommend taking out this pattern anyways, because it is both difficult to read, and contributes to poor flow.
01:07:637 (4,6) - Stack the tails better.
01:25:812 (1,2,3,4) - Idk about this kind of overlap... especially when you put a circle at 01:26:797 (3) - on a blue tick too...

[Normal]

00:17:272 (4) - NC
00:23:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ... Make them longer sliders please...
00:25:374 (6,7,8) - Make this a repeat. Repeat should be at 00:25:921 -
00:31:505 (1,2,3,4) - Could make these two sliders instead.
00:36:761 - Add note here.
01:11:140 (7) - NC
01:14:425 (3,4,5) - Space evenly.
Topic Starter
walaowey

physx1 wrote:

Hi there! M4m...
Normal
Leave spacing the same on this difficulty
00:37:199 (8) - I would avoid such sliders as this because this is not really intuitive since this map is made for beginners (they are short)Fixed
00:44:206 (1) - above Fixed
00:59:535 (2,3,4) - wrong spacing imhoFixed
01:08:513 (5) - 2 lines above Fixed
01:12:235 (10) - above Fixed
01:24:498 (1) - above Fixed
01:29:316 finish spinner here Fixed
Hard
01:21:432 (4,5) - omg return hitsounds. It counfuses. Plays well however I cant quite get what you mean by this?
Insane
0:35:775 (8,9) - make this stream more straight let the slider continue direction of the stream flow Fixed
00:39:170 (3,4,5) - I think 2 notes is more logical Fixed
00:41:140 (4,5,6) - above (this repeats in your map) Fixed
00:53:513 (10,11) - 3 lines aboveFixed

Hope I helped. I like this song!
Thanks for the mod..Glad you like the song :)
Topic Starter
walaowey

monstrata wrote:

Hi~ For M4M as we arranged :D. Good luck~

[Insane]

00:20:775 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Try adding a slider at 00:20:775 - and removing some notes. Begin the stream when the trumpet begins to play at 00:21:104 - .Fixed
00:26:031 (8) - Two circles please, 00:26:250 - is a strong note.Fixed
00:29:754 (3,4,5) - Make symmetrical?Fixed
00:34:133 (7,8,9) - I notice you tend to stack your triples right underneath the slider, maybe do that here too?Fixed
00:35:885 (9) - Not sure if this works... you miss a note at 00:36:213 - . How about using shorter sliders? or a repeat instead, at 00:36:213 - ?Fixed
00:38:732 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - There is a polarity shift here. The vocals are at 00:39:498 - and 00:39:717 - . Both blue ticks. Take out 5, and reorder the remaining circles. It could help to finish with a slider to return back to regular polarity for 00:39:827 - .I have fixed it according the vocals. Thanks for this :D
00:40:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^same idea. sam as above
00:44:863 (6,7,8) - Minor, but have the stack be part of the same curve? Fixed
00:45:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Doesn't follow the vocals at all here :P. I think its ok here :D
00:47:491 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ same as above :D
00:59:316 (2,3) - Don't overlap. Fixed
01:07:199 (5) - Ctrl+J and reposition: better flow. I think its ok here
01:11:797 (4,5,6,7) - Doesn't follow vocals. 01:12:126 - Is there the next note is sung. Fixed

[Hard]

00:12:892 (3,4) - Make this a slider instead and Fixed
00:13:768 (7) - Make this slider two circles Fixed
00:16:177 (6,7) - Blanket is off.Fixed. Thanks for the mod
00:23:184 (1) - Try Ctrl+G this, also do this for 3. Fixed
00:27:564 (3,4) - Check blankets.Fixed
00:45:739 (1,2) - Stack properly.Fixed
00:48:148 (4,5) - Nothing really suggests a jump here :P.Fixed
01:02:819 (4,5) - Blanket.Fixed
01:05:228 (9,10) - ^Fixed
01:06:323 (1,2,3) - ^Fixed
01:08:951 (7,8) - ^Fixed
01:10:046 (10,1) - ^Fixed
01:17:053 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing between 1, 2 is misleading for 3, and 4. Make them evenly spaced?Fixed
Thanks for the blanket check lol ;)
[Ky's Hard]

00:18:148 (4,1) - Blanket?
00:19:024 (2,3) - Fix blanket. Use two control points on the slider.
00:25:374 (6,7) - How about taking out 7, and extending the slider to 00:25:702 - .
00:27:126 (2,3) - Doesn't really follow vocals. You should always try to have your sliders begin on white-ticks because that is the main melody.
00:33:038 - Note here? to follow the pattern? Since you have a note here 00:32:162 (2) - .
00:46:177 (2,3) - This is really bad flow too, you would only expect to see this on Insane/Extra because it is difficult to read (which one is a circle, which is a slider? is what beginners will ask)
00:46:834 (4) - ^That said, don't stack this 4 underneath the sliderhead of 3 either, makes it even more confusing.
00:50:556 (1,2) - ^
00:55:592 (2,3) - This is unrankable because the repeats of a slider must be visible. Highly recommend taking out this pattern anyways, because it is both difficult to read, and contributes to poor flow.
01:07:637 (4,6) - Stack the tails better.
01:25:812 (1,2,3,4) - Idk about this kind of overlap... especially when you put a circle at 01:26:797 (3) - on a blue tick too...

[Normal]

00:17:272 (4) - NC Fixed
00:23:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ... Make them longer sliders please...Fixed
00:25:374 (6,7,8) - Make this a repeat. Repeat should be at 00:25:921 - Change a bit but different from your mod
00:31:505 (1,2,3,4) - Could make these two sliders instead.Fixed
00:36:761 - Add note here.Fixed
01:11:140 (7) - NCFixed
01:14:425 (3,4,5) - Space evenly.Fixed
Thanks for the detailed mod..
And those detail blanket slider mod lol :D

Honestly, I make a big changes referring to your mod.
Gravey-
Hi walaowey :)

Seems like there's 2 modes in your mapset. Regarding to my GD i will not do it couz' having too many modes in a mapset will take too long to get rank. I will just give you star instead >w<)/

Good luck!~
Topic Starter
walaowey

[GraveChaos] wrote:

Hi walaowey :)

Seems like there's 2 modes in your mapset. Regarding to my GD i will not do it couz' having too many modes in a mapset will take too long to get rank. I will just give you star instead >w<)/

Good luck!~
Thanks for your :)

Hope you can GD for my next map :D
BAldoTridentE
M4M~ AKINO with Bless4 - EXTRA MAGIC HOUR


Normal

00:37:199 (6,7,8) - replace it better trying to not overlap
00:37:856 (8,1) - ^
01:00:192 (3,4,5) - Same combo same timing distance but they have a different distance in the map
01:12:454 (4) - move to red tick and resize to same point
01:22:965 (3,1) - overlap
01:26:031 (3) - start at the blue tick little back and finish at the same point

Ky's Hard

00:26:907 (1) - overlap under 00:26:031 (4) better
00:32:381 (2) - try to do it more similar as 1
01:09:827 (4) - ... add a circle at 01:09:827 and make a slider from here 01:10:046 to here 01:10:484

Hard

00:46:396 (3) - overlap this above 00:45:520 (4)
00:48:805 (6) - ^

Insane

00:15:301 (2) - ^
00:22:308 (9) - after this try to map this part to follow the song
00:35:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is not very nice a stream here
00:43:768 (1,2,3,4,5) - do this star better :( (do it as you write a star, across, from side to side)
00:52:527 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same as previous
01:15:301 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:26:031 (1,2,3,4,5) - do a stream here xD

Note!: in part you're right too on those streams, the insane is very easy :/

Good Luck with the map! Ciaooo :D
Topic Starter
walaowey

BAldoTridentE wrote:

M4M~ AKINO with Bless4 - EXTRA MAGIC HOUR


Normal

00:37:199 (6,7,8) - replace it better trying to not overlapfixed
00:37:856 (8,1) - ^fixed
01:00:192 (3,4,5) - Same combo same timing distance but they have a different distance in the mapfixed
01:12:454 (4) - move to red tick and resize to same pointfixed
01:22:965 (3,1) - overlapfixed
01:26:031 (3) - start at the blue tick little back and finish at the same pointfixed

Ky's Hard

00:26:907 (1) - overlap under 00:26:031 (4) better
00:32:381 (2) - try to do it more similar as 1
01:09:827 (4) - ... add a circle at 01:09:827 and make a slider from here 01:10:046 to here 01:10:484

Hard

00:46:396 (3) - overlap this above 00:45:520 (4) No I think, there will be a great spacing if i overlap it there.
00:48:805 (6) - ^fixed

Insane

00:15:301 (2) - ^fixed
00:22:308 (9) - after this try to map this part to follow the songfixed
00:35:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is not very nice a stream here do you mean the stream was not nice or it is not suitable to be in this part? I think its ok here :D
00:43:768 (1,2,3,4,5) - do this star better :( (do it as you write a star, across, from side to side) fixed
00:52:527 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same as previous I think its ok here too :)
01:15:301 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^fixed but with a different style >w<
01:26:031 (1,2,3,4,5) - do a stream here xDnope, i think its ok here :D

Note!: in part you're right too on those streams, the insane is very easy :/

Good Luck with the map! Ciaooo :D
Thanks for the mod :D
Avishay
Hey, as promised!

[General]
  1. Try to be consistent with Distance Snapping, unless you want to make a jump or irregular pattern. This way your patterns will look much neater and won't feel weird to play.


[Insane]
  1. 00:10:484 (1,2,3) - It is a bit hard to explain, but the vocals make me want to not stay static, means I think the stack doesn't fit with the pattern and the vocals. Make the player move, it will be much more enjoyable, an example:
  2. 00:12:016 (5,6,7,8) - This pattern is really pale, the song doesn't feel like you should stop on slider ends, be free, make flow, make fun! I'll note that it feels weird because the sliders start on red ticks, and try to be more creative with the slliders, they are really pale and you can improve the pattern a lot.
  3. 00:12:892 (8) - I suggest you delete this slider and place just one circle, it will follow the vocals and you can place a jump from here, it will feel nicer.
  4. 00:14:754 (7) - Unnecessary overmap.
  5. 00:14:863 (7) - Delete, like before ^
  6. 00:15:082 (1,2,3,4) - This looks really bad, clumped up really hard and doesn't feel natural at all. Why did you stack the first 2 notes? Instead of slider you should place 2 circles because it feels odd when the slider starts on a red tick. Why the DS between 3 and 4 is 0.29x, while the DS from 4 and 5 is 2.28x? The song doesn't even ask for a jump, it feels really awkward.
  7. 00:15:082 - If you tried to follow the trumpet in the background and didn't manage to, I did the timing for you, you need to use 1/12 Beat Snap Divisor here and here's how I got it:
  8. 00:17:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Rework this pattern.
  9. 00:21:104 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - It is not timed correctly, listen to the song on 25% Playback rate, if you need help with that, tell me.
  10. 00:27:345 (3,4) - Improve blanket.
  11. 00:27:564 (4,5) - They're not stacked properly.
  12. 00:28:987 (7,8,1) - Delete 7, 8 and place 1 at 00:29:206.
  13. 00:29:535 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Really weird spacing, really weird pattern, redo it.
  14. 00:35:009 (1) - One note in this stream is unnecessary, also I redone it and it feels much more fun to play like this:
  15. 00:37:637 (6) - You're following the vocals in this section, and this note follows the beat, so you should delete it because it feels weird now.
  16. 00:39:498 (5,6) - This pattern will sound a bit better:
  17. 00:42:235 (1) - Follow the vocals and beat properly here, like this:
  18. 00:45:739 (1) - Same ^ Like this:
  19. 00:49:024 (7) - NC with new stanza, remove NC at 00:50:556 (1) -
  20. 00:58:221 (6,7) - Stack properly.
  21. 00:59:535 (3,4,5,6) - Why the low spacing for no reason? Make it consistent!
  22. 01:03:476 (5,6,7,8) - Pale and uncosistent.
  23. 01:05:885 (8) - There's a triplet, and while I am here this pattern can be improved to be more active, like this:
  24. 01:06:980 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Really weird spacing, stop with the straight lines and same curves, make some interesting stuff!
  25. 01:23:513 - Add a note here.
  26. 01:24:060 (1) - I've timed this section as well, using 1/6 BSP:
  27. 01:27:126 - Why the 5% hitsound audio here? Remove it.
  28. 01:25:812 (1) - I've timed this section for you as well, using 1/6 and 1/8
  29. 01:23:732 (9) - Remove this note.



Overall, there are a lot of flow and pattern problems, I could go over all of them but it will take time, you need to go over your map and realise why those stuff are wrong and detect them to change them. You can go to the newest maps and look at them, try to 'copy' them into your way, circle placement, spacing, shapes and such. Feel free to ask me stuff anytime.
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