1. Insane (3.62 stars, 272 notes)
2. Ky's Hard (2.96 stars, 225 notes)
3. Sc4's Normal (1.74 stars, 144 notes)

Thanks to these people for modding my map

] Faelthas [
Kyle Y
-TheHateD-
batwoman3
leminine
VINXIS
Sgord1
monstrata
BAldoTridentE
Avishay
pkhg
Kibbleru
EdamaMe411 for modding taiko difficulty >w</
Rakuen
imaikiseta
Jone for modding taiko difficulty >w</
game rock for modding taiko difficulty >w</
DahplA
Surono for modding taiko difficulty >w</
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Jason X for modding taiko difficulty >w</

] Faelthas [ wrote:

Hiii, i'm here to make your map look better.

Insane Diff.

From 00:49:876 - 00:50:314 - you should put slider with i think 0.80 SV. not so sure about it
Same here 01:02:795 - 01:03:233 - , but there is no need to be 0.80 SV, you can put it on 1.00.fixed
Put one more bpm ( bpm 137 / offset 0 )

Hard Diff.

From 01:22:065 - 01:22:284 - Add 3 circle stream, it should sound better.fixed
From 01:24:254 - 01:27:211 - I think that you should map that part, it's a waste or if you don't, move slider 01:27:320 - there.fixed
Same set one more bpm and offset ( bpm 137 / 0 )

Normal Diff.

From 00:44:182 - 00:44:401 - You should add 2 more circles for that voice and one more here 00:44:620 - , also here 00:54:474 - 00:54:693 - two more circles.fixed
Same goes for bpm/offset

This is my personal thoughts so, you can listen to me or not, your call, however you like , i just think that the map would be better with this changes. Map is pretty good tho, every diff.

thehatedbr wrote:

Hello.
First of all, this is my first time modding osu! standard map, if i do something wrong please tell me so i can get better XD.
(2nd, my english sucks xD)
General:
I think the bpm is right, but in my oppinion, you should change the offset to EDIT: -34 is the right offset... i think,and start mapping it from the beggining, i see you are wasting good sections of the song , map it 100% i think i wont change the offset though but I will map it 100%
Normal:

SPOILER

00:11:992 (4,5) - how about one slider here ? fixed
00:20:642 (1) - start spinner in the red tick 00:20:751 -ok sorry for the mistake. Didnt realise the spinner is off
( imo, if u delete 00:25:788 (7) - and place circles here 00:25:678 - and here 00:26:007 - it will sound better.)fixed

00:36:737 - circle fixed
00:44:182 (5) - nc ?yes
00:51:627 (1) - remove ncyes
01:15:277 (5) - add slider starting here 01:15:277 - and end 01:15:715 - fixed
01:15:934 - add circlefixed

Hard:

SPOILER

00:14:401 (6) - Start new combo herefixed
00:16:153 (1) - remove this ncfixed
00:18:562 (1) - ^fixed
( add circle here 00:25:678 (7) - and start the slider here 00:26:006 - and end here 00:26:225 - this will make it better)thanks for the suggestion
00:52:503 (1) - why dont u finish it here 00:54:035 fixed-

Insane:

SPOILER

00:17:029 - add circle
00:19:000 (8) - one slider here would look way better than circles imho
00:21:956 (1) - remove this nc
00:25:788 (7) - move this to the previous blue tick (it will sound better 00:25:678 - here )
00:26:883 (1) - remove this nc but be sure to keep it in 00:26:664 (1) -
00:33:890 - add circle
00:36:080 (1) - remove nc
00:36:518 (4) - add nc
00:53:489 (1) - remove nc
01:00:168 (6) - nc ?
01:06:080 - circle
01:15:277 (9) - start the combo here and delete nc from 01:15:387 (1) -
01:20:095 (4) - nc
01:20:532 (7) - ^
01:21:518 (1) - remove nc
01:22:065 (5) - add nc
01:26:007 (8) - ^
Fixed everything

Sorry for this short and bad mod b-but... i tried my best , i hope it helps:(
Great song btw.

batwoman3 wrote:

pretty lively song. Like on a parade, many trumpets. By the way, here is my mod:

Normal

First off, don't use 1.4 slider velocity for normal. It's too fast. Under the timing section, reduce that.
use whistles and claps and finishes otherwise the song won't be ranked. Insane diff will explain it.
00:19:462 (9,10) - place these notes farther from each other. It might confuse because DS is not altered properly
00:56:031 - kiai time can start hereDone with the SV and whistles+finishesbut I prefer my old kiai time

other than that, this one is great diff

Ky's Hard

needs better hitsounds. use whistles to make the song lively
00:11:797 (5) - make this like the first one, don't use reverse arrow
00:13:111 (1) - don't use slider here. it's doesn't follow the music
00:20:119 (5) - this tick doesn't sound like it needs a note.
00:20:556 (1) - start spinner here
00:27:783 (3) - this slider doesn't even sound to the music. change this
00:32:162 (2) - delete this.
00:35:009 (7) - I don't think this slider is allowed in ranked versions. Plus, make it 1/2 beat longer
00:37:856 (6) - if you want it, decrease the slider by 1 arrow, and add a note at the current time
00:39:936 (6) - start at the red tick. finish at where it is now, so edit the slider
00:56:031 - kiai time can start here
01:00:191 (4) - Ctrl + G
01:16:615 - add a note here
01:24:936 - shorten the slider to follow the song
01:26:907 (4) - the start of the slider is not where a note should be placed because the song is not like that. Change it. Fixed some of them

Hard

overall might need whistles like 00:10:484 (1) - here and 00:11:797 (3) - here
00:22:308 - spinner can end here
00:29:097 (6) - move this note 1/4 beat to the right (closer to the (7) slider)
00:37:199 (4,5,6) - can DS this all closer to one another
00:40:922 (2) - Ctrl + G
00:56:031 - kiai time can start here
01:13:987 (2) - Ctrl + G
01:24:498 (2) - shorten the length by 1/4 beat
Fixed eveything but I prefer the old kiai time

Insane

overall might need whistles like 00:10:921 (2) - here and 00:11:797 - here and so on. All hits sound boring for the song
00:21:870 (11) - set new NC here. I think it's too long for 19 notes at 1 combo
00:37:637 (6) - DS this closer.
00:54:060 (15) - can set to finish too here and whistle with it
00:56:031 - kiai time can start here instead
00:58:440 (7) - Ctrl + G
01:00:629 (1) - remove NC here
01:17:053 (1,2,3,4,5) - for insane, can be set further apart for more challenge
01:24:936 (5) - can delete this note
01:22:308 (2) - too far from 1, make this closer (DS this closer)
01:26:688 (4) - i suggest to follow the music and cut this to 2 sliders
Fixed almost everything but I prefer the old kiai time though

To me, this map is still far from ranked (no offense), but great song, so I look forward to seeing this map ranked. Good luck

My pending map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/266181

VINXIS wrote:

lmao m4m thingy thing thing

general

where's the easy lmao
tbh there shouldn't be any breaks fora tv size but yea
and since there shouldn't be any breaks take of letterbox lo l
btw u need another taiko diff ok break has been removed

NM

00:11:140 (2,3,4) - spacing problem br0, move (4) farther away
00:13:768 (2,3,4) - and here
00:17:272 (4,5,6) - and here
e.t.c.
yea you might have to remap those parts since you should be using 0.9 or 1.0 D.S. throughout ANY normal diff all the time. It's the golden rule lmaoo

00:23:184 (1) - dis SV is also kinda eh

other than that it's rhythmically fine lo l
Fixed everything

Ky

kk just nc problems that aren't in sync with the song
00:13:111 (1) - remove nc
00:13:987 (4) - nc
00:15:520 (8) - nc
00:16:177 (1) - remove nc
00:18:586 (1) - remove nc
00:19:024 (2) - nc
00:24:498 (4) - nc
00:27:126 (2,3) - i'd consider remapping this cuz the second slider feels off, it should be a 1/2 slider to fit rhythmically imo (or make it start on the white tick)
00:27:783 (3) - nc
00:28:878 (1) - remove nc
00:29:754 (4) - nc
00:30:192 (1) - remove nc
00:33:257 (4) - nc
00:35:009 (7) - nc
00:37:856 (6) - delete a repeat and add a circle on the big white tick, it plays much better
00:39:170 (3,4,5,6) - you should use this pattern more or change it to teh same as the patterns later on for consistency throughout the map tbh
00:49:243 (6) - nc
01:01:943 (8) - add note 4 flow, sounds awkward without it tbh
01:21:870 (5) - breh 5% vol doesn't fit imo
01:27:345 (1) - add a note where teh spinner starts and start the spinner on the white tick

HD

breh dis looks like a map from 2009
I don't like how it looks but it plays well so lol
don't have anything to say about it doe Thanks for this

INS

00:14:644 (6,7,8) - stack 4 aesthetic
00:20:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the stream suc actually start at 00:21:213 (5) - lmao
00:58:440 (7) - end on white tick and add a note on the red tick after
01:13:549 (3,4,5) - make each slider bigger than the other and nc each
01:24:608 (2,3,4) - add a repeating slider instead it plays much better
01:25:155 (5) - blue tick
01:27:016 (5) - end on blue tick
Fixed some of them

gl m808

physx1 wrote:

Hi there! M4m...
Normal
Leave spacing the same on this difficulty
00:37:199 (8) - I would avoid such sliders as this because this is not really intuitive since this map is made for beginners (they are short)Fixed
00:44:206 (1) - above Fixed
00:59:535 (2,3,4) - wrong spacing imhoFixed
01:08:513 (5) - 2 lines above Fixed
01:12:235 (10) - above Fixed
01:24:498 (1) - above Fixed
01:29:316 finish spinner here Fixed
Hard
01:21:432 (4,5) - omg return hitsounds. It counfuses. Plays well however I cant quite get what you mean by this?
Insane
0:35:775 (8,9) - make this stream more straight let the slider continue direction of the stream flow Fixed
00:39:170 (3,4,5) - I think 2 notes is more logical Fixed
00:41:140 (4,5,6) - above (this repeats in your map) Fixed
00:53:513 (10,11) - 3 lines aboveFixed

Hope I helped. I like this song!

monstrata wrote:

Hi~ For M4M as we arranged . Good luck~

[Insane]

00:20:775 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Try adding a slider at 00:20:775 - and removing some notes. Begin the stream when the trumpet begins to play at 00:21:104 - .Fixed
00:26:031 (8) - Two circles please, 00:26:250 - is a strong note.Fixed
00:29:754 (3,4,5) - Make symmetrical?Fixed
00:34:133 (7,8,9) - I notice you tend to stack your triples right underneath the slider, maybe do that here too?Fixed
00:35:885 (9) - Not sure if this works... you miss a note at 00:36:213 - . How about using shorter sliders? or a repeat instead, at 00:36:213 - ?Fixed
00:38:732 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - There is a polarity shift here. The vocals are at 00:39:498 - and 00:39:717 - . Both blue ticks. Take out 5, and reorder the remaining circles. It could help to finish with a slider to return back to regular polarity for 00:39:827 - .I have fixed it according the vocals. Thanks for this
00:40:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^same idea. sam as above
00:44:863 (6,7,8) - Minor, but have the stack be part of the same curve? Fixed
00:45:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Doesn't follow the vocals at all here . I think its ok here
00:47:491 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ same as above
00:59:316 (2,3) - Don't overlap. Fixed
01:07:199 (5) - Ctrl+J and reposition: better flow. I think its ok here
01:11:797 (4,5,6,7) - Doesn't follow vocals. 01:12:126 - Is there the next note is sung. Fixed

[Hard]

00:12:892 (3,4) - Make this a slider instead and Fixed
00:13:768 (7) - Make this slider two circles Fixed
00:16:177 (6,7) - Blanket is off.Fixed. Thanks for the mod
00:23:184 (1) - Try Ctrl+G this, also do this for 3. Fixed
00:27:564 (3,4) - Check blankets.Fixed
00:45:739 (1,2) - Stack properly.Fixed
00:48:148 (4,5) - Nothing really suggests a jump here .Fixed
01:02:819 (4,5) - Blanket.Fixed
01:05:228 (9,10) - ^Fixed
01:06:323 (1,2,3) - ^Fixed
01:08:951 (7,8) - ^Fixed
01:10:046 (10,1) - ^Fixed
01:17:053 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing between 1, 2 is misleading for 3, and 4. Make them evenly spaced?Fixed
Thanks for the blanket check lol
[Ky's Hard]

00:18:148 (4,1) - Blanket?
00:19:024 (2,3) - Fix blanket. Use two control points on the slider.
00:25:374 (6,7) - How about taking out 7, and extending the slider to 00:25:702 - .
00:27:126 (2,3) - Doesn't really follow vocals. You should always try to have your sliders begin on white-ticks because that is the main melody.
00:33:038 - Note here? to follow the pattern? Since you have a note here 00:32:162 (2) - .
00:46:177 (2,3) - This is really bad flow too, you would only expect to see this on Insane/Extra because it is difficult to read (which one is a circle, which is a slider? is what beginners will ask)
00:46:834 (4) - ^That said, don't stack this 4 underneath the sliderhead of 3 either, makes it even more confusing.
00:50:556 (1,2) - ^
00:55:592 (2,3) - This is unrankable because the repeats of a slider must be visible. Highly recommend taking out this pattern anyways, because it is both difficult to read, and contributes to poor flow.
01:07:637 (4,6) - Stack the tails better.
01:25:812 (1,2,3,4) - Idk about this kind of overlap... especially when you put a circle at 01:26:797 (3) - on a blue tick too...

[Normal]

00:17:272 (4) - NC Fixed
00:23:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ... Make them longer sliders please...Fixed
00:25:374 (6,7,8) - Make this a repeat. Repeat should be at 00:25:921 - Change a bit but different from your mod
00:31:505 (1,2,3,4) - Could make these two sliders instead.Fixed
00:36:761 - Add note here.Fixed
01:11:140 (7) - NCFixed
01:14:425 (3,4,5) - Space evenly.Fixed

[GraveChaos] wrote:

Hi walaowey

Seems like there's 2 modes in your mapset. Regarding to my GD i will not do it couz' having too many modes in a mapset will take too long to get rank. I will just give you star instead >w<)/

Good luck!~

M4M~ AKINO with Bless4 - EXTRA MAGIC HOUR

BAldoTridentE wrote:

M4M~ AKINO with Bless4 - EXTRA MAGIC HOUR

Normal

00:37:199 (6,7,8) - replace it better trying to not overlapfixed
00:37:856 (8,1) - ^fixed
01:00:192 (3,4,5) - Same combo same timing distance but they have a different distance in the mapfixed
01:12:454 (4) - move to red tick and resize to same pointfixed
01:22:965 (3,1) - overlapfixed
01:26:031 (3) - start at the blue tick little back and finish at the same pointfixed

Ky's Hard

00:26:907 (1) - overlap under 00:26:031 (4) better
00:32:381 (2) - try to do it more similar as 1
01:09:827 (4) - ... add a circle at 01:09:827 and make a slider from here 01:10:046 to here 01:10:484

Hard

00:46:396 (3) - overlap this above 00:45:520 (4) No I think, there will be a great spacing if i overlap it there.
00:48:805 (6) - ^fixed

Insane

00:15:301 (2) - ^fixed
00:22:308 (9) - after this try to map this part to follow the songfixed
00:35:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is not very nice a stream here do you mean the stream was not nice or it is not suitable to be in this part? I think its ok here
00:43:768 (1,2,3,4,5) - do this star better (do it as you write a star, across, from side to side) fixed
00:52:527 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same as previous I think its ok here too
01:15:301 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^fixed but with a different style >w<
01:26:031 (1,2,3,4,5) - do a stream here xDnope, i think its ok here

Note!: in part you're right too on those streams, the insane is very easy :/

Good Luck with the map! Ciaooo :D

Thanks for the mod

1. Try to be consistent with Distance Snapping, unless you want to make a jump or irregular pattern. This way your patterns will look much neater and won't feel weird to play.

1. 00:10:484 (1,2,3) - It is a bit hard to explain, but the vocals make me want to not stay static, means I think the stack doesn't fit with the pattern and the vocals. Make the player move, it will be much more enjoyable, an example:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:12:016 (5,6,7,8) - This pattern is really pale, the song doesn't feel like you should stop on slider ends, be free, make flow, make fun! I'll note that it feels weird because the sliders start on red ticks, and try to be more creative with the slliders, they are really pale and you can improve the pattern a lot.
3. 00:12:892 (8) - I suggest you delete this slider and place just one circle, it will follow the vocals and you can place a jump from here, it will feel nicer.
4. 00:14:754 (7) - Unnecessary overmap.
5. 00:14:863 (7) - Delete, like before ^
6. 00:15:082 (1,2,3,4) - This looks really bad, clumped up really hard and doesn't feel natural at all. Why did you stack the first 2 notes? Instead of slider you should place 2 circles because it feels odd when the slider starts on a red tick. Why the DS between 3 and 4 is 0.29x, while the DS from 4 and 5 is 2.28x? The song doesn't even ask for a jump, it feels really awkward.
7. 00:15:082 - If you tried to follow the trumpet in the background and didn't manage to, I did the timing for you, you need to use 1/12 Beat Snap Divisor here and here's how I got it:
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:17:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Rework this pattern.
9. 00:21:104 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - It is not timed correctly, listen to the song on 25% Playback rate, if you need help with that, tell me.
10. 00:27:345 (3,4) - Improve blanket.
11. 00:27:564 (4,5) - They're not stacked properly.
12. 00:28:987 (7,8,1) - Delete 7, 8 and place 1 at 00:29:206.
13. 00:29:535 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Really weird spacing, really weird pattern, redo it.
14. 00:35:009 (1) - One note in this stream is unnecessary, also I redone it and it feels much more fun to play like this:
    SPOILER

    
15. 00:37:637 (6) - You're following the vocals in this section, and this note follows the beat, so you should delete it because it feels weird now.
16. 00:39:498 (5,6) - This pattern will sound a bit better:
    SPOILER

    
17. 00:42:235 (1) - Follow the vocals and beat properly here, like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
18. 00:45:739 (1) - Same ^ Like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
19. 00:49:024 (7) - NC with new stanza, remove NC at 00:50:556 (1) -
20. 00:58:221 (6,7) - Stack properly.
21. 00:59:535 (3,4,5,6) - Why the low spacing for no reason? Make it consistent!
22. 01:03:476 (5,6,7,8) - Pale and uncosistent.
23. 01:05:885 (8) - There's a triplet, and while I am here this pattern can be improved to be more active, like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
24. 01:06:980 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Really weird spacing, stop with the straight lines and same curves, make some interesting stuff!
25. 01:23:513 - Add a note here.
26. 01:24:060 (1) - I've timed this section as well, using 1/6 BSP:
    
    SPOILER

    
27. 01:27:126 - Why the 5% hitsound audio here? Remove it.
28. 01:25:812 (1) - I've timed this section for you as well, using 1/6 and 1/8
    
    SPOILER

    
29. 01:23:732 (9) - Remove this note.