AKINO from bless4 - MIIRO · forum

Momochikun

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2015-02-04T18:57:23+00:00

Thanks, fixed that Ar and a lot of other things :3

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Kibbleru

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Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2015-02-04T23:47:47+00:00

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60,212,75235,5,6,0:0:0:0:
80,72,75389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,184,75543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,40,75697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,188,75851,2,0,L|260:356,1,155,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,264,76312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,116,76466,6,0,P|184:100|84:140,1,155,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,304,76928,2,0,P|156:252|148:204,1,77.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,116,77235,1,10,0:0:0:0:
240,116,77312,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,116,77389,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,128,77543,5,6,0:0:0:0:
408,144,77851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,296,78005,2,0,P|348:232|348:212,1,77.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,116,78312,2,0,L|248:208,1,77.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,320,78620,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,244,78774,1,8,0:0:0:0:
139,296,78928,6,0,P|170:272|208:265,1,77.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,296,79235,2,0,L|448:260,1,77.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,116,79543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,56,79697,1,0,1:0:0:0:
320,52,79774,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,60,79851,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,116,80005,5,6,0:0:0:0:
492,144,80466,6,0,B|460:128|460:128|324:144,2,155,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,240,81235,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,224,81389,6,0,P|276:192|280:80,1,155,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,140,81851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,200,82005,2,0,L|144:204,1,77.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,248,82312,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,64,82466,2,0,L|72:20,1,38.75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,80,82620,5,12,0:0:0:0:
156,76,82774,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,84,82928,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,88,83082,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,76,83235,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,72,83389,1,8,0:0:0:0:
163,81,83543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
154,83,83697,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,80,83851,6,0,L|260:88,2,77.5,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,84312,6,0,P|160:200|184:252,2,77.5,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,212,84774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,292,84928,6,0,P|208:252|296:252,1,155,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,240,85389,2,0,P|416:260|356:260,1,77.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,92,85697,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,144,85851,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,132,86005,2,0,L|152:128,1,77.5,8|0,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
92,240,86312,6,0,P|55:228|28:201,1,77.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,128,86620,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,260,86774,2,0,P|184:316|180:352,1,77.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,268,87082,2,0,P|319:229|313:191,1,77.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,308,87389,6,0,P|440:216|452:140,1,155,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,32,87851,2,0,L|368:120,1,77.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,144,88158,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,112,88312,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,232,88466,2,0,P|176:292|188:344,1,77.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,192,88774,5,2,0:0:0:0:
152,144,88928,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,248,89082,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,136,89235,2,0,P|176:80|172:32,1,77.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,152,89543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,232,89697,2,0,P|220:272|260:280,1,77.5,8|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
312,256,89928,1,2,1:2:0:0:
320,264,90005,6,0,L|424:260,1,77.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,128,90312,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,44,90466,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,148,90620,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,120,90774,2,0,L|208:128,1,77.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,216,91082,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,216,91158,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,216,91235,6,0,L|157:209,1,77.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,255,91543,2,0,P|296:291|264:310,1,77.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,120,91851,5,12,0:0:0:0:
140,292,92005,1,12,0:0:0:0:

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2015-02-05T02:01:59+00:00

Shurelia wrote:
おっす!やったよ!

~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~

[General]
- All Clear

[Rakuen's Insane]

So much insanes... ._.
00:34:466 (1,2) - I don't know but, i feel like this didn't fit with the song imo. It's 3/4 spacing in the diff, just a circle

That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!

Thanks for mods!

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-02-05T02:11:00+00:00

Shurelia wrote:
おっす!やったよ!

~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~

[General]
- All Clear

[Easy]
01:02:928 (1,2,3) - Would be better if you make (2) straight with (1). http://puu.sh/fswit.jpg okay , good catch !
01:15:235 (1,2) - These will be looks better if you make a blanket at here. I tried but it ruins the DS
01:22:620 (1,2) - ^^^^^^
00:06:312 (3) - This could have a better blanket.
I can't , I tried my best but due to DS I couldn't blanket it

[Insane]
00:42:005 (1,2) - This objects are a bit too far away, it may confuse the player because it looks like 1/1 jump.
Mhmm , maybe if other mods mention this.
01:16:158 (5) - CTRL + G This? Better flow imo.
No , its on purpose

That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!

Thanks for the mod

!!!

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2015-02-07T06:39:37+00:00

10/10 BG

DeletedUser_1574070

DeletedUser_1574070 2015-02-07T14:30:35+00:00

ok lemme begin

Guy's Extra

00:59:543 (1) - 0.05x あたりで十分いいと思います。ちょっとだけずらすのは？
いうことない譜面でした。楽しい。

Rakuen's Insane

00:09:697 (3,1) - itll be better if u keep consistency according to the soundloops on here. 00:08:774 (1,2) - its completely same so i think keeping consistency (i mean reverseslider)can be better idea.
00:20:774 (3) - this one. if u tried to express that vocal begins with this point, i think u'd better stack or semistack 00:21:082 (1) - here.
01:24:774 (5) - okay. 01:23:851 (1,2) - plz keep consistency here too. with the same reason for the first one.

nothing else. GL

Insane

00:16:774 (3,4) - ctrl G flows better imo
00:34:466 (1) - this one, too. and i'd like to stack those notes to make neater.
00:59:851 (1,1) - umm. if u tried to follow the vocal parts. i think the blue one should be half'd coz 'e' pronounciation begins with redticks.
01:23:235 (3,4,5) - atmosphere is going higher and higher and finally it goes on max at 5 but antijump'd. space more than 3and4

Gaia's Insane

actually, i've been depressed on the current mapping ground coz nothing impressive comes out qualified in these days. But this is quite impressive.
I know it's not ur 'masterpiece but just a guest stuff' but even though what this is, im impressed, which means the current mapping field is so terrible without any creativity but just 'trying to be like some pros eventhough they don't(or can't) understand what pro mappers have mapped'.
(exaggerated in some way. but its true.)
just IMO, plz don't cut in guys plz.

anyway, nice map.

Ill end my mod here. I think lower diffs are enough. Good Luck.

VINXIS

Featured Artist

3,161 posts

Joined April 2014

VINXIS 2015-02-07T16:49:21+00:00

pp

ShiraKai

534 posts

Joined September 2010

ShiraKai 2015-02-07T17:23:17+00:00

hi :3 from m4m queue!
just mod Insane diff~

[Insane]

00:06:774 (2) - move to x:227,y298? I want to align with 00:06:312 (1) -
00:22:312 (1) - ctrl + G? In 00:22:312 (1) - & 00:22:774 (2) - ,AS it is the same sound,I think the same movement is good.
00:26:005 (1) - stuck on 00:26:312 (2) - ? make sharp on placement
00:28:928 (3,4) - I feel cramped... please try this
image
00:33:082 (5) - up and down symmetry? flow will be better :3
sorry my English is bad;;
00:42:005 (1) - ctrl + G? feels good, imo
00:52:774 (4,5) - ...ctrl + G??? flow is so bad now
00:58:620 (3,4) - remove (4) and (3) extend to 00:58:928 -
01:00:082 (1) - extend to 01:00:389 - ? i like this pattern :3
My suggestion
01:09:851 (1) - remove NC for consistency
For example : 01:19:543 (3) -
01:31:774 (1,2) - add finish on slider end?

good luck

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2015-02-07T17:54:03+00:00

Kloyd wrote:
Guy's Extra
00:59:543 (1) - 0.05x あたりで十分いいと思います。ちょっとだけずらすのは？ - ちょうど右下に1grid動かした状態になってるんですよね・・・このままでいきたいのでno changeで！
いうことない譜面でした。楽しい。 - ありがとう！

Thank you for modding

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-02-07T18:00:34+00:00

Kloyd wrote:
ok lemme begin

Insane
00:16:774 (3,4) - ctrl G flows better imo
Okay CTRL + G !
00:34:466 (1) - this one, too. and i'd like to stack those notes to make neater.
If other mods mention this I'll change it , for now leaving it as it is
00:59:851 (1,1) - umm. if u tried to follow the vocal parts. i think the blue one should be half'd coz 'e' pronounciation begins with redticks.
Same thing , I might change it later on
01:23:235 (3,4,5) - atmosphere is going higher and higher and finally it goes on max at 5 but antijump'd. space more than 3and4
Increased spacing in 3 and 4 !

[/list][/notice]

Ill end my mod here. I think lower diffs are enough. Good Luck.

Thanks for the mod !!

ShiraKai wrote:
hi :3 from m4m queue!
just mod Insane diff~

[Insane]
00:06:774 (2) - move to x:227,y298? I want to align with 00:06:312 (1) -
Okay , but I moved the first one instead . http://puu.sh/fBexX/9fcb274dbd.jpg
00:22:312 (1) - ctrl + G? In 00:22:312 (1) - & 00:22:774 (2) - ,AS it is the same sound,I think the same movement is good.
No , I'll leave it as it is
00:26:005 (1) - stuck on 00:26:312 (2) - ? make sharp on placement
Changed it up just a bit
00:28:928 (3,4) - I feel cramped... please try this
No , should be okay.
image
00:33:082 (5) - up and down symmetry? flow will be better :3
Okay
sorry my English is bad;;
00:42:005 (1) - ctrl + G? feels good, imo
This pattern is on purpose
00:52:774 (4,5) - ...ctrl + G??? flow is so bad now
No its okay
00:58:620 (3,4) - remove (4) and (3) extend to 00:58:928 -
Okay :3
01:00:082 (1) - extend to 01:00:389 - ? i like this pattern :3
I'll leave it the same , and thanks :3
My suggestion
01:09:851 (1) - remove NC for consistency
Okay removed NC
For example : 01:19:543 (3) -
01:31:774 (1,2) - add finish on slider end?
No claps are good enough
good luck

Thanks for the mod

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2015-02-07T22:57:13+00:00

Hey ! We talked via IRC about Easy and Insane and general :

:3

15:02 ByBy_ChAn: hey
15:02 *Aerous is away: I'm going to be away , taking a small break. If you need me just message me through Osu! website. I can receive emails on my phone.
15:02 Aerous: hey lol i just came back
15:02 ByBy_ChAn: np
15:03 ByBy_ChAn: so would you like to make a IRC mod only for your diffs ?
15:03 Aerous: if you want lol
15:03 ByBy_ChAn: sure
15:03 *Aerous is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/626285 AKINO from bless4 - MIIRO]
15:03 *ByBy_ChAn is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/615815 AKINO from bless4 - MIIRO [Easy]]
15:04 Aerous: yup
15:06 ByBy_ChAn: 00:12:466 (3)- make this slider a little smoother
15:06 Aerous: okay , i'll try
15:07 ByBy_ChAn: use 1/4 Beat snap divisor
15:07 ByBy_ChAn: to make it smoother
15:07 Aerous: what
15:07 Aerous: wait
15:07 Aerous: or the rythem
15:07 Aerous: do you mean the shape
15:07 ByBy_ChAn: yeap shape
15:08 Aerous: idk , because this anime is about ships and stuff
15:08 Aerous: i might keep it
15:08 Aerous: lol
15:08 ByBy_ChAn: okay
15:08 Aerous: mhm i'll try to make it smoother
15:08 ByBy_ChAn: okay
15:09 ByBy_ChAn: how to make it : move the 2nd gap to x:334 y:63
15:09 Aerous: mhm
15:11 Aerous: anything else?
15:11 ByBy_ChAn: hmm
15:11 ByBy_ChAn: 00:06:312 (3,4)- blanket better
15:12 Aerous: thats the best i can do , without ruining the DS
15:12 ByBy_ChAn: don't worry
15:12 ByBy_ChAn: it will not ruining the DS
15:12 Aerous: can you take a pic of yours ?
15:12 Aerous: the blanket
15:12 ByBy_ChAn: yeap
15:15 ByBy_ChAn: here : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2713113
15:15 ByBy_ChAn: I just moved the middle gap to x:272 y:327
15:16 ByBy_ChAn: then I checked AiMod and no DS errors
15:17 Aerous: ok
15:17 Aerous: anything else in this diff?
15:17 ByBy_ChAn: wait a minute
15:18 ByBy_ChAn: 00:14:893 (3)- move the last gap to x:451 y:340 for a perfect slider shape and do not ruin the flow
15:19 Aerous: ok
15:20 ByBy_ChAn: 00:22:312 (3)- Remove this slider because it looks unnestetic and it can ruin the flow
15:21 ByBy_ChAn: instead make another slider shape maybe a curved slider
15:21 Aerous: i might change it if other people mention this , for now i'll keep
15:22 ByBy_ChAn: okay
15:22 ByBy_ChAn: 00:45:697 (1)- Check space
15:23 Aerous: o
15:23 Aerous: fixed
15:25 ByBy_ChAn: 00:51:852 (3,4)- at the first slider (3)- move the last gap to x:177 y:66 and the second slider (4)- move the last gap to x:360 y:46 for a better pattern
15:25 ByBy_ChAn: and flow
15:26 Aerous: okay
15:26 *ByBy_ChAn is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/611011 AKINO from bless4 - MIIRO [Insane]]
15:29 ByBy_ChAn: 00:43:235 (1,2)- Incosistent space is not like 00:42:466 (2,3)-
15:30 Aerous: fixed
15:31 ByBy_ChAn: 00:52:158 (2)- ctrl+g ? for a better flow
15:32 Aerous: no its fine as it is
15:32 ByBy_ChAn: ok
15:32 ByBy_ChAn: 00:53:389 (2)- ctrl+g . I tried and the flow is much better
15:33 Aerous: that stack on the tail is on purpose
15:33 ByBy_ChAn: hmm lemme try
15:34 ByBy_ChAn: well I made ctrl+g and the slider is stacked with (5)- well
15:35 ByBy_ChAn: maybe screenshot ?
15:35 Aerous: no i want the stack on the tail's end
15:35 ByBy_ChAn: why ?
15:36 ByBy_ChAn: ehh if you want ok
15:36 Aerous: its just a personal preference
15:36 Aerous: yea
15:36 ByBy_ChAn: ok
15:36 Aerous: 00:59:543 - like some people might not like this too
15:36 ByBy_ChAn: well I like this combination
15:37 Aerous: yup and its all personal preference , because i think one of the mods said they didnt like it lol
15:37 ByBy_ChAn: yes you're right 
15:37 ByBy_ChAn: all right let's get back
15:37 Aerous: kk
15:39 ByBy_ChAn: 01:05:389 (1)- move the last gap to x:120 y:89 because it's not straight well and it could be ruin the flow
15:39 Aerous: fixed
15:40 ByBy_ChAn: 01:17:103 (4,5)- the slider : move the last gap to x:429 y:170 do not ruin the flow 
15:41 Aerous: done
15:41 ByBy_ChAn: you stacked ?
15:41 Aerous: yea
15:41 ByBy_ChAn: good
15:43 ByBy_ChAn: 01:19:615 (3,4,5,6,7,8)- imo could you improve a little bit this combination ? for me it don't look nice and it could be ruin the flow
15:44 Aerous: thats the best i could do , before it was all DS'ed but the slider overlaps with the previous note
15:44 ByBy_ChAn: ah yes
15:44 ByBy_ChAn: now the general ( I forgot )
15:44 Aerous: metadata should be okay i beleive
15:45 ByBy_ChAn: yes is ok
15:45 Aerous: The spread , I doubled checked with pho
15:46 ByBy_ChAn: combo4 is grey and I think the player will not see the objects . I will post the code on thread
15:47 Aerous: grey is okay since Pho recommended , if another BNG recommends a new one then i'll go for it
15:47 Aerous: for now it SHOULD be okay
15:47 ByBy_ChAn: ok
15:47 ByBy_ChAn: lemme check the osu file and the song's folder
15:51 ByBy_ChAn: all seems good
15:51 Aerous: kk
15:51 Aerous: post this log on the forum
15:52 ByBy_ChAn: tags : hmm maybe add opening ?
15:52 Aerous: maybe later , before qualifying
15:52 ByBy_ChAn: okay
15:52 Aerous: I don't want to update it again  , since I just finished updating lol
15:52 ByBy_ChAn: now I'll post the log
15:52 ByBy_ChAn: ok

Good Luck o/

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-02-08T04:19:39+00:00

Hi.

[Easy]

00:08:774 (1,2) - this add hitsound please. piano sound flow imo.
00:18:005 - missing whistle
00:41:389 (1) - whistle
00:44:466 (1,2) - This 00:43:235 (4) - can you change into a rhythm.
00:46:928 (1,2) - same (^)
00:49:389 (4) - Change the slider shape. now is not good for the view.
SPOILER
00:52:466 (4) - head and tail clap batter. no whistle
00:55:235 - clap
00:58:005 (1) - this spiner end 00:59:082 - here. this part vocal finish.
00:59:543 - green line delete please.
01:01:082 - whistle
01:03:543 - same (^)
01:04:158 - same (^)
01:07:235 - I think this add clap and drum samplset batter imo
01:10:928 - whistle
01:11:543 - same (^)
01:12:774 - finish
01:13:389 - whistle
01:14:005 - same (^)
01:17:082 (4) - same 01:07:235 -this
01:26:928 - whistle
01:27:389 (1) - this change curve slider?
01:29:389 (4) - whistle
01:30:005 (1) - this spiner end 01:31:851 - here

[Mochi's Normal]

00:07:235 (6) - this note move (4) note parallel please
00:23:235 (5) - whistle
00:26:928 (3) - same (^)
00:36:928 (3) - change rhythm is 1/1 batter imo
00:44:466 (2) - whistle
00:49:851 (5) - your missing head drum sound. add clap and drum samplset.
00:55:082 (5) - don't use samplset please. same 00:52:620 (6) - this hitsounding batter
00:58:005 (1) - delete clap and add finish
00:58:005 (1) - green line delete please.
01:03:851 (3) - only white tick one note batter. now patten is harder..
01:05:235 (1) - why clap?
01:24:928 (1) - delete clap and add finish

[guineaQ's Hard]

00:05:389 (2) - 시작부분이랑 끝부분 휘슬 넣으시는게 좋을듯요
00:06:005 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 아무 힛사도 안넣으셨는데 넣어주세요
00:08:774 (1,2,1,1,1) - same (^)
00:20:620 (2) - 피니쉬만 빼보세요. 같이 들어가니 좀 어색하네요
00:22:005 - 노트 없으니까 이상해요 노트 추가해주세요
00:27:082 (1) - 여기는 뉴콤보가 필요 없어보여요.. 그냥 뉴콤보 지워주세요
00:27:543 - 노트 추가
00:28:774 - same (^)
00:32:620 (3) - 시작부분 휘슬 넣어주세요 클랩 빼시고
00:35:235 (3) - missing blanket
00:35:697 (4) - 클랩대신 휘슬
00:57:851 (1) - 클랩?
01:00:312 - 여기 노트 있어야 어색함을 좀 덜수 있을것같아요.. 너무 보컬에만 맞추시니..
01:00:928 (3) - 시작부분 클랩대신 휘슬 이제 이건 제가 (><) < 이렇게 표시할게요...
01:02:158 (3) - (><)
01:03:389 (2) - (><)
01:05:851 (3) - 휘슬넣으세요 클랩 빼시고
01:06:466 (5) - 드럼 셈플셋이랑 클랩 넣어주세요
01:10:005 - 드럼사운드 있으니까 노트 하나 추가하고 클랩 넣으시는게 좋을것 같아요
01:10:774 (4) - (><)
01:13:235 (2) - (><)
01:15:697 (3) - 휘슬넣으세요 클랩 빼시고
01:16:928 (2) - (><)
01:22:620 (1,2,3) - 지금도 표현을 잘하셨지만 강하게 들리는 드럼사운드는 되도록이면 셈플셋을 이용해주세요
01:23:851 - 기본 휘슬 넣어주세요 커스톰 휘슬 말고..

[Gaia's Insane]

00:04:928 (1,2,3) - this change 1/6 rhythm batter
00:15:697 (4) - how about Ctrl+G? change is flow batter
00:50:543 (3) - stream is awkward. delete note

[Insane]

00:26:005 (1) - whistle
00:40:005 (3) - add finish on the head
00:40:774 - 00:45:697 - hitsound volume +10?
00:59:543 (1,1,1) - awkward patten. change please
01:23:235 (3,4,5) - bad spacing. can you fix this distance?
01:24:774 (3) - only vocal flow batter so this note delete please.
01:31:543 (1) - missing balnket.
01:31:928 (2) - Ctrl+G

[Guy's Extra]

My setting suggust AR 9.3 batter imo.

call me back

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2015-02-08T05:45:55+00:00

I want to keep my whistle pattern, also some claps are intentional. Finishes are too loud ><
Thanks !

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:海色
Artist:AKINO from bless4
ArtistUnicode:AKINO from bless4
Creator:Aerous
Version:Mochi's Normal
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags:kantai collection kancolle Guy guineaQ Rakuen Momochikun Gaia
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Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-02-08T05:46:57+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:

Hi. Hello :w: !

[Easy]

00:08:774 (1,2) - this add hitsound please. piano sound flow imo.
00:18:005 - missing whistle
00:41:389 (1) - whistle
00:44:466 (1,2) - This 00:43:235 (4) - can you change into a rhythm.
00:46:928 (1,2) - same (^)
00:49:389 (4) - Change the slider shape. now is not good for the view.
SPOILER
00:52:466 (4) - head and tail clap batter. no whistle
00:55:235 - clap
00:58:005 (1) - this spiner end 00:59:082 - here. this part vocal finish.
00:59:543 - green line delete please.
01:01:082 - whistle
01:03:543 - same (^)
01:04:158 - same (^)
01:07:235 - I think this add clap and drum samplset batter imo
01:10:928 - whistle
01:11:543 - same (^)
01:12:774 - finish
01:13:389 - whistle
01:14:005 - same (^)
01:17:082 (4) - same 01:07:235 -this
01:26:928 - whistle
01:27:389 (1) - this change curve slider?
01:29:389 (4) - whistle
01:30:005 (1) - this spiner end 01:31:851 - here

Added all hitsounds sounds from your mod !
Didn't change these though :
00:46:928 (1,2) - same (^)
01:07:235 - I think this add clap and drum samplset batter imo

[Insane]

00:26:005 (1) - whistle
Added
00:40:005 (3) - add finish on the head
Okay !
00:40:774 - 00:45:697 - hitsound volume +10?
Sure , but added 5+ instead of 10+
00:59:543 (1,1,1) - awkward patten. change please
~~No , this is fine. I doubled checked with other people in game.~~ Changed it a bit , http://puu.sh/fD2LR/380b0dc474.jpg
01:23:235 (3,4,5) - bad spacing. can you fix this distance?
Reduced it a bit
01:24:774 (3) - only vocal flow batter so this note delete please.
No , its the same as Guy's Extra.
01:31:543 (1) - missing balnket.
Nice catch , blanketed
01:31:928 (2) - Ctrl+G
~~Should be okay , it looked weird with CTRL + G~~ Actually I removed those two sliders and replaced it with circles instead
call me back

Thanks for the mod , waiting for Gaia , Guinea ,~~Guy~~ and Rakuen

Triple G

Last edited by Aerous 2015-02-08T06:58:06+00:00, edited 7 times in total.

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2015-02-08T05:47:07+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:

[Guy's Extra]

My setting suggust AR 9.3 batter imo. - not bad AR9,3. but I thought that AR9,2 is the best setting for this difficulty. 9,3 is a bit fast tho so i want to keep the AR.
call me back

Thank you for modding

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2015-02-08T06:35:34+00:00

나중에 시간되면 체크함
gonna check when I have time

LexiaLovesU

822 posts

Joined June 2012

LexiaLovesU 2015-02-08T07:05:08+00:00

Place Holder for a mod but still im not planning on ranking this x.x

Last edited by LexiaLovesU 2015-02-08T18:10:57+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2015-02-08T11:37:06+00:00

Kloyd wrote:
ok lemme begin

Rakuen's Insane
00:09:697 (3,1) - itll be better if u keep consistency according to the soundloops on here. 00:08:774 (1,2) - its completely same so i think keeping consistency (i mean reverseslider)can be better idea.
00:20:774 (3) - this one. if u tried to express that vocal begins with this point, i think u'd better stack or semistack 00:21:082 (1) - here. Works fine for now imo
01:24:774 (5) - okay. 01:23:851 (1,2) - plz keep consistency here too. with the same reason for the first one.

nothing else. GL

Ill end my mod here. I think lower diffs are enough. Good Luck.

No reply = fix, thanks for mods!

Updated my diff: http://puu.sh/fDrVF/345004a38a.osu

Go go KanColle!

Asphyxia

osu! Alumni

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Joined June 2012

Asphyxia 2015-02-08T12:07:27+00:00

M4M

[General]

The OD on every Insane is terribly low for no reason, the song is intense and so seem the Insanes be, so please Add at least +1 OD to every single on of them. A possible solution would be that Gaia's Insane used OD 7 -> Insane OD 7,5 -> Rakuen's Insane OD 8 -> Guy's Extra OD 8,5
but please don't leave them like that. Even the hard difficulty uses OD 6.. <.<

[Guy's Extra]

00:54:620 (3,4,5,6,7) - This stream isn't in the music, so I thought it'd be better to use something more appropriate for it, because current feels overmapped.
Rhythm + Placement example
00:58:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I am not really a fan of this overmap because as you can hear, there aren't beats to support this stream (you can even listen it with 25%). Even as a build-up to the chorus, it's not an excuse to a stream where the song doesn't really support it. But in the end, it's your choice whether you want to leave it or not.
01:17:543 (1) - The long slider is fine since it follows the vocals, but a more enjoyable rhythm would definitely be a 1/2 slider + note, since currently 01:17:851 - is sucked by 01:17:543 (1) - 's ending, so it misses an important beat.
Example
01:18:774 (1) - This, on the other hand, doesn't follow the vocals properly enough to be there, so could you consider a rhythm such as this?
Example
01:31:543 (2,3,4,5,6) - Move this a bit more down so 01:31:774 (5) - gets stacked perfectly with 01:31:082 (7) - ? Looks somewhat unclean now.

[Rakuen's Insane]

As stated in the general box, don't use OD6, it's an OD that Hard-difficulties use and this isn't one. Moreover, this is the hardest Insane difficulty in this mapset so there's absolutely no reason to use such low OD.
00:10:005 (1,2,3,4) - I find this pattern to not flow that well, so you could consider using this; it'd give it more structure too!
Example
00:10:774 (1) - Do not extend this to the blue tick, there's no sound to support it and the vocals end at 00:10:928 - , it feels way too forced now and that's not good.
00:20:774 (3) - Feels too forced again, because 00:20:466 (1,2) - are the two main notes that the music has, so this (3) feels unnecessary. Consider removing it?
01:11:235 (5,1) - Give it a lot more spacing, since you have such similar spacing with 01:11:543 (1,2) - , it's hard to read whether it's 1/2 or 1/4.
I didn't like this Insane, sorry. The reason for it is because the extensions feel way too forced and unnecessary when the song doesn't even support those, and the general structure seems to be missing. E.g 00:14:158 (3,4,5,6) - could be a proper square, but currently it's off a lot, 00:18:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - could be so many things but atm it's a triangle with an incorrect triangle at 00:18:774 (4,5,6) - and then there's incorrect blankets. The map itself could have so many shapes, cleaner patterns and that would make it a lot more structured. Everything I just said isn't meant to be taken as something rude, but as my personal opinion.
An example how 00:18:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - could be re-arranged to give the map more structured feeling

[Insane]

00:13:235 (4) - I tried to explain the flow issue here by a picture! (Orange color = ideal flow Black color = your current flow) The issue here is that since you decided to position 3 like that, which is nice, requires the next slider to be more to its right since 3's end is positioned that way. But currently, it's quite against it so it makes this awkward turn to the left instead, having a bad flow. Makes sense? Hope so rofl, you can arrange it accordingly.
Pic
00:16:005 (1,2) - Please do not use unnecessary overlaps when it's not needed, it just makes the map more clustered and unclean looking. A more appropriate (imo) placement for 2 would be;
Example
00:17:543 (2,3) - You can basically just CTRL + G these notes to give the pattern a MUCH more smoother flow, currently it has somewhat same issues like in the first suggestion.
00:18:928 (3,5) - If you ever do this, consider at least blanketing them properly so it doesn't look sloppy, or then do a fancy-looking overlap that I personally like!
Example
00:19:389 (5,1) - Like I told you earlier, please don't overlap them. It makes the map feel unclean and clustered where as it could feel a lot smoother with just a simple re-position.
Example
00:20:158 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make this a straight stream? The small, small curve looks and feels kind of odd. Maybe just me though..
00:32:466 (2,3,4,5) - Same, flow issues. You may want to consider something like this?
Example
00:34:312 (5) - Would place it at x:157 y:115 so the pattern itself doesn't feel too clustered and that would give the pattern also a smoother flow!
00:34:466 (1) - Looks very unclean because it's not stacked perfectly with 00:34:158 (4) - NOR 00:33:851 (2) -
01:02:158 (3,1,2,3) - Blanket
01:03:697 (5,6,7,8) - Again, it just feels really clustered and since you used a big spacing before, this jump pattern feels weird because its spacing is very, very small compared to the other ones. I'd re-arrange it to something similar to this
Example
01:18:005 (2,3,4,1,2) - These are really strong beats, yet the spacing doesn't reflect to that at all. Consider adding A LOT more spacing
01:31:851 (2,3) - Finishers, the most strong beats yet the spacing is barely noticeable. Could you consider this?
Example

[Gaia's Insane]

Because this Insane uses so many things I could never use in my maps, I can not really mod it. I'd end up making a 3 hour rant post about something personal and that's not really cool, sorry about that ,_,

[guineaQ's Hard]

00:05:082 (1,2) - Could be a neat looking blanket
00:27:082 (1) - This NC feels unnecessary, you probably should remove it!
00:35:235 (3,1,3) - If you ever do this, try to either blanket 00:35:235 (3) - properly enough or then just copy / use similar curves what the other sliders have. It looks very random. :f
00:51:851 (1,2) - If you can avoid such unnecessary overlaps, please do so. It makes the map look more unclean and that isn't nice.
There was a lot of blankets that were slightly off or totally off throughout the mapset, I'd recommend you to go over it few times and improve on them since it certainly doesn't take long.

[Mochi's Normal]

00:19:235 - Please consider adding a note here, since it's rather powerful and without it, it makes 00:18:620 (1,2) - feel off.
00:29:697 (1,2) - Again, a note could be added here to continue the vocals from 00:55:082 (5) - , feels rather empty now.
01:20:774 (2,3,4) - Could be a slightly better triangle, move 01:21:389 (4) - to x:146 y:122?
Nice!

[Easy]

00:48:158 (3,4) - If you ever do this, you might as well give them both a similar curve so they would fit the map better overall.
Example
01:11:543 (3,1,3) - It just looks messy when there's 3 different shaped sliders then they could be something similar. It'd overall look better again if you would give them a similar curve
Wasn't really a fan of the red point sliders but I guess they're fine

The mapset isn't bad, don't get me wrong, but it definitely needs a lot more work, it's nowhere near to be ready for a qualification, not to mention a bubble. The Insanes seem to lack structure which makes them unclean looking and sometimes it messes up the flow. They aren't bad, at all, but with more work and more mods, they could be soooooo much better. I feel like if you guys are pushing this to qualified right away, it's like wasted potential.

The mod wasn't meant to be taken as something rude, so please do not take it that way. I just tried to break it down to you guys why I think it needs a lot more improvements. Please don't be hesitant to ask me for elaboration on some suggestions, comments, anything, I am more than happy to do so. (pref if you contact in-game)

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2015-02-08T12:53:15+00:00

Asphyxia wrote:
[Guy's Extra]
00:54:620 (3,4,5,6,7) - This stream isn't in the music, so I thought it'd be better to use something more appropriate for it, because current feels overmapped. - fixed
Rhythm + Placement example

00:58:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I am not really a fan of this overmap because as you can hear, there aren't beats to support this stream (you can even listen it with 25%). Even as a build-up to the chorus, it's not an excuse to a stream where the song doesn't really support it. But in the end, it's your choice whether you want to leave it or not. - ok
01:17:543 (1) - The long slider is fine since it follows the vocals, but a more enjoyable rhythm would definitely be a 1/2 slider + note, since currently 01:17:851 - is sucked by 01:17:543 (1) - 's ending, so it misses an important beat. - sorry i prefer that current one.
Example
01:18:774 (1) - This, on the other hand, doesn't follow the vocals properly enough to be there, so could you consider a rhythm such as this? - i want to put the slider in strongly sounding place :<
Example
01:31:543 (2,3,4,5,6) - Move this a bit more down so 01:31:774 (5) - gets stacked perfectly with 01:31:082 (7) - ? Looks somewhat unclean now. - ok fixed

also changed to OD8,5.
Thank you for modding

http://puu.sh/fDzir/1de89c3039.zip

Leeham

48 posts

Joined October 2013

Leeham 2015-02-08T14:07:15+00:00

[General]
As Asphyxia said, increase OD on Insanes
I'm going to try avoid things that Asphyxia pointed out
If I sounded a bit mean in some of these I'm sorry!

[Gaia's Insane]
00:04:928 - Triple
00:23:235 (3) - Straighten this
00:25:389 - You have a lot of these 'downtimes', where the user is just doing nothing, yes it can be used for effect but it makes the map feel fragmented when you use it without a significant reason
00:39:158 (4,5) - Don't do this, put it closer to the slider at least, or stack it underneath the end
00:40:389 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - This isn't nice to play or look at
00:41:082 (2,3) - Move this further away from the stream
01:08:466 (3,4) - If you're going to make anti jumps just stack the two notes together, it both looks and plays better. The player doesn't have to move at all which creates a good effect with the music. More examples are 00:34:928 (2,3) - 01:09:389 (2,3) - 01:17:851 (2) -
01:09:851 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Doesn't look good
01:14:851 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^
01:19:543 (3,4,5,6,1) - This direction switch is weird, consider: (if you change this, please revise the following sliders to adjust to the change)

Example

01:22:620 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Don't... just stack them normally or create a pattern out of it
01:29:235 (4) - Stack under the 2

I'm not really a fan of the slider doubles like this 01:29:697 (6,7,1) -
Please change the streams in this map, they're perfectly playable but they're just weird and stick out from the rest of the map. I feel like you're just trying to create interesting patterns like at 01:22:620 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - but consider how this will actually look to others.

[Rakuen's Insane]
I'm sorry but I don't like the use of the extended sliders that end on blue ticks, such as 01:00:466 (1,2) - 01:04:158 (1,2) - 01:15:235 (1,2)
Most of them could end on 1/2 ticks, it feels a little bit disconnecting to switch fingers often (and the beat would sit better)
Also, when you make jumps you don't need to stack them so much on notes that don't matter, focus more on flow

00:04:928 - Triple
00:08:774 (1,2,3,1) - This kind of thing would fit better:

Example

00:10:005 (1,2,3,4) - Make this jump wider by moving the 2 down for better flow

Example

00:10:620 (1) - Move the slider closer to the centre of the jump and stack the first note

Example

00:15:235 (3) - Reverse this, it breaks flow to move back to the left on the slider
00:20:774 (3) - Remove this
00:31:235 (2,3,4,5) - Change this pattern (you might want a wider triangle than my example shows)

Example

00:32:466 (2,3,4,5,6) - Hmmm I don't like this, something like this?

Example

00:34:466 (1) - End this on the previous white tick
00:41:389 (1) - Triple for vocals
00:53:697 (4,5) - Put the slider on the white tick like so:

Example

I'd point out more pattern issues but I don't wanna go on too long ><
I think there's too many abrupt direction switches which are unnecessary, try to sort these out and align more of the notes with the end of sliders!
Although I do admit the map was quite fun

[Guy's Extra]
00:04:928 - Triple
00:08:774 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Reverse the 2s and 3s on the triangles, flows better
01:14:696 (5) - Remove this, the stream starts too soon
...I dunno I liked this difficulty a lot, short mod!

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2015-02-08T15:55:32+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:

Hi.

[guineaQ's Hard]

00:05:389 (2) - 시작부분이랑 끝부분 휘슬 넣으시는게 좋을듯요
00:06:005 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 아무 힛사도 안넣으셨는데 넣어주세요
00:08:774 (1,2,1,1,1) - same (^)
00:20:620 (2) - 피니쉬만 빼보세요. 같이 들어가니 좀 어색하네요
00:22:005 - 노트 없으니까 이상해요 노트 추가해주세요
00:27:082 (1) - 여기는 뉴콤보가 필요 없어보여요.. 그냥 뉴콤보 지워주세요
00:27:543 - 노트 추가 이거는 보컬 따라하는거라 안 추가할게요
00:28:774 - same (^) ^^
00:32:620 (3) - 시작부분 휘슬 넣어주세요 클랩 빼시고
00:35:235 (3) - missing blanket 이거는 일부러 안한 건데 ㅇㅅㅇ
00:35:697 (4) - 클랩대신 휘슬
00:57:851 (1) - 클랩?
01:00:312 - 여기 노트 있어야 어색함을 좀 덜수 있을것같아요.. 너무 보컬에만 맞추시니..
01:00:928 (3) - 시작부분 클랩대신 휘슬 이제 이건 제가 (><) < 이렇게 표시할게요...
01:02:158 (3) - (><)
01:03:389 (2) - (><)
01:05:851 (3) - 휘슬넣으세요 클랩 빼시고
01:06:466 (5) - 드럼 셈플셋이랑 클랩 넣어주세요
01:10:005 - 드럼사운드 있으니까 노트 하나 추가하고 클랩 넣으시는게 좋을것 같아요 배치 상황 때문에 여기는 그냥 놔둘께요, 안그래도 계속 일관성 있게 보컬을 따르고 있으니 문제는 없을 듯
01:10:774 (4) - (><)
01:13:235 (2) - (><)
01:15:697 (3) - 휘슬넣으세요 클랩 빼시고
01:16:928 (2) - (><)
01:22:620 (1,2,3) - 지금도 표현을 잘하셨지만 강하게 들리는 드럼사운드는 되도록이면 셈플셋을 이용해주세요
01:23:851 - 기본 휘슬 넣어주세요 커스톰 휘슬 말고..
call me back

Asphyxia wrote:
M4M

[guineaQ's Hard]
00:05:082 (1,2) - Could be a neat looking blanket t-r-i-a-n-g-l-e desu
00:27:082 (1) - This NC feels unnecessary, you probably should remove it! Already did from habi's mod :3
00:35:235 (3,1,3) - If you ever do this, try to either blanket 00:35:235 (3) - properly enough or then just copy / use similar curves what the other sliders have. It looks very random. :f again, triangles
00:51:851 (1,2) - If you can avoid such unnecessary overlaps, please do so. It makes the map look more unclean and that isn't nice. Ok I surrender
There was a lot of blankets that were slightly off or totally off throughout the mapset, I'd recommend you to go over it few times and improve on them since it certainly doesn't take long. brb checking them all
The mapset isn't bad, don't get me wrong, but it definitely needs a lot more work every mapu can use improvement, it's nowhere near to be ready for a qualification, not to mention a bubble. The Insanes seem to lack structure which makes them unclean looking and sometimes it messes up the flow. I personally didn't take a look at this set's insanes LOL They aren't bad, at all, but with more work and more mods, they could be sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much better. I feel like if you guys are pushing this to qualified right away, it's like wasted potential.

The mod wasn't meant to be taken as something rude, so please do not take it that way. never take mods personal I just tried to break it down to you guys why I think it needs a lot more improvements. Please don't be hesitant to ask me for elaboration on some suggestions, comments, anything, I am more than happy to do so. (pref if you contact in-game)

uppu daieeto

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sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2015-02-08T16:19:47+00:00

I put my placeholder for the mod, in case it gets bubbled.

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

4,315 posts

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2015-02-08T16:58:07+00:00

Hey Aerous!

I think we've talked about your maps some time ago (rather, some months), and I'd like to drop some words about this mapset. I've taken a look at it, and well, the quality.. as Asphyxia said, it's not bad, but could be a lot better. He has also pointed out a lot of stuff, which you should consider.

What I wanted to tell you is, that you definitely shouldn't rush the ranks that much with your current mapping skill; I honestly believe that there is unused potential, which will stay unused if you continue like this; how about taking some more time to think about your mapping? Try to check other maps, try improving yourself. But honestly, aiming for rank like this will in the end only end up in an unrank for missing quality.

I'm not trying to demotivate you ranking maps, you can obviously continue doing it, but seeing almost no improvement the more ranks you get, is quite sad to see.

We can have a chat in game again, concerning your maps, where I'll certainly help you further (because I know, this comment doesn't help you getting a better map).

See you!

mrturtle99

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mrturtle99 2015-02-08T18:11:08+00:00

Hi from my modding que~

Easy
Just being a little nitpicky with sliders here, everything else seems alright to me

00:22:312 (3) - this slider looks really weird to me, what I suggest is taking the the 2nd red sliderpoint and making it a regular sliderpoint so it curves better
Something like this
01:06:620 (3) - this slider also looks weird, I think it would be better as just a standard curve slider

Mochi's Normal

00:28:620 (7) - maybe put a NC here
00:35:235 (5) - ^
00:44:466 (2) - NC here to keep with the pattern of 00:42:005 (3,1) -
00:49:389 (4) - NC
00:56:928 (4) - the slider endpoint here can be much shorter while still maintaining the same slider shape

guineaQ's Hard

00:18:466 (6) - maybe put the NC here and not on 00:18:620 (1) -
01:02:774 (5,1) - ^
01:04:005 (1,1) - should be distance snapped further apart
01:12:620 (5,1) - maybe put the NC on the HC and not the slider
01:13:851 (1) -
Slider change for symmetry

Gaia's Insane

00:18:466 (5,1) - consider putting the NC on the HC and not the slider
00:26:005 (1) - don't really see why there is a NC here
00:38:928 (3,4,5) - here I would recommend making the HC's touching or be closer to the slider, so the player knows that they are 1/8th beats connected to the slider
00:43:082 (2,1) - consider putting the NC on the HC and not the slider
00:50:466 (2,1) - I think the NC should start on the first HC of the triplet, not the last
00:59:082 (1) - I don't think there needs to be a NC here, also maybe make it closer to 00:59:005 (5) -
01:02:774 (6,1) - consider putting the NC on the HC and not the slider
01:12:620 (7,1) - ^
01:31:082 (6,1) - ^

Insane

00:14:774 (5,1) - consider putting the NC on the HC and not the slider
00:40:774 (1,2) - I don't think the stream should end in a NC, and that the slider should be the NC
00:51:697 (4,1) - consider putting the NC on the HC and not the slider
00:59:543 (1,1,1) - I think these should all be one combo
01:31:543 (1,2) - I think the NC should be taken off the slider here and put on the HC

guineaQ

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guineaQ 2015-02-08T19:24:32+00:00

mrturtle99 wrote:
Hi from my modding que~
guineaQ's Hard
00:18:466 (6) - maybe put the NC here and not on 00:18:620 (1) - fine as it is
01:02:774 (5,1) - ^ ^
01:04:005 (1,1) - should be distance snapped further apart intentional anti jump
01:12:620 (5,1) - maybe put the NC on the HC and not the slider its fine
01:13:851 (1) - Intended to make it like this for turret shape
Slider change for symmetry

Aerous

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Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-02-08T19:46:31+00:00

Asphyxia wrote:
M4M

[General]
The OD on every Insane is terribly low for no reason, the song is intense and so seem the Insanes be, so please Add at least +1 OD to every single on of them. A possible solution would be that Gaia's Insane used OD 7 -> Insane OD 7,5 -> Rakuen's Insane OD 8 -> Guy's Extra OD 8,5
but please don't leave them like that. Even the hard difficulty uses OD 6.. <.<
Yea , I'll take a look again.
[Insane]
00:13:235 (4) - I tried to explain the flow issue here by a picture! (Orange color = ideal flow Black color = your current flow) The issue here is that since you decided to position 3 like that, which is nice, requires the next slider to be more to its right since 3's end is positioned that way. But currently, it's quite against it so it makes this awkward turn to the left instead, having a bad flow. Makes sense? Hope so rofl, you can arrange it accordingly.
Pic
Yup , fixed the flow issues.
00:16:005 (1,2) - Please do not use unnecessary overlaps when it's not needed, it just makes the map more clustered and unclean looking. A more appropriate (imo) placement for 2 would be;
Example
Fixed the overlaps , yea it does look ugly and unclean
00:17:543 (2,3) - You can basically just CTRL + G these notes to give the pattern a MUCH more smoother flow, currently it has somewhat same issues like in the first suggestion.
CTRL + G
00:18:928 (3,5) - If you ever do this, consider at least blanketing them properly so it doesn't look sloppy, or then do a fancy-looking overlap that I personally like!
Example
No I left this part unchanged because slider 5 , blankets with the stream after slider 1. I might change it though , if other mods mention this
00:19:389 (5,1) - Like I told you earlier, please don't overlap them. It makes the map feel unclean and clustered where as it could feel a lot smoother with just a simple re-position.
Example
Yup , changed
00:20:158 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make this a straight stream? The small, small curve looks and feels kind of odd. Maybe just me though..
Its fine , I think
00:32:466 (2,3,4,5) - Same, flow issues. You may want to consider something like this?
Example
Okay fixed the flow
00:34:312 (5) - Would place it at x:157 y:115 so the pattern itself doesn't feel too clustered and that would give the pattern also a smoother flow!
Yup , its too clustered. Moved to x:156 y:112
00:34:466 (1) - Looks very unclean because it's not stacked perfectly with 00:34:158 (4) - NOR 00:33:851 (2) -
Fixed , right now it overlaps with 00:34:158 (4) - & 00:33:851 (2) -
01:02:158 (3,1,2,3) - Blanket
Okay , fixed
01:03:697 (5,6,7,8) - Again, it just feels really clustered and since you used a big spacing before, this jump pattern feels weird because its spacing is very, very small compared to the other ones. I'd re-arrange it to something similar to this
Example
Added the suggestion that you gave me
01:18:005 (2,3,4,1,2) - These are really strong beats, yet the spacing doesn't reflect to that at all. Consider adding A LOT more spacing
Increased spacing
01:31:851 (2,3) - Finishers, the most strong beats yet the spacing is barely noticeable. Could you consider this?
Example

Yup , but I kinda changed it up a bit. http://puu.sh/fErB3/e1e79584be.jpg
]

[Easy]
00:48:158 (3,4) - If you ever do this, you might as well give them both a similar curve so they would fit the map better overall.
Example
Curved but not that much
01:11:543 (3,1,3) - It just looks messy when there's 3 different shaped sliders then they could be something similar. It'd overall look better again if you would give them a similar curve
Yea , changed to similar shape
Wasn't really a fan of the red point sliders but I guess they're fine
Since the anime for this is about ships , I tried to make the slider kinda differently than normal
The mapset isn't bad, don't get me wrong, but it definitely needs a lot more work, it's nowhere near to be ready for a qualification, not to mention a bubble. The Insanes seem to lack structure which makes them unclean looking and sometimes it messes up the flow. They aren't bad, at all, but with more work and more mods, they could be soooooo much better. I feel like if you guys are pushing this to qualified right away, it's like wasted potential.

The mod wasn't meant to be taken as something rude, so please do not take it that way. I just tried to break it down to you guys why I think it needs a lot more improvements. Please don't be hesitant to ask me for elaboration on some suggestions, comments, anything, I am more than happy to do so. (pref if you contact in-game)

Yup thanks for the mod , really helped me ! I'll look out for more mods now

mrturtle99 wrote:
Hi from my modding que~

Easy
Just being a little nitpicky with sliders here, everything else seems alright to me
00:22:312 (3) - this slider looks really weird to me, what I suggest is taking the the 2nd red sliderpoint and making it a regular sliderpoint so it curves better
Something like this
No change , its on purpose
01:06:620 (3) - this slider also looks weird, I think it would be better as just a standard curve slider
Its on purpose
/list]

Insane
00:14:774 (5,1) - consider putting the NC on the HC and not the slider
No , I NC on the big white tick
00:40:774 (1,2) - I don't think the stream should end in a NC, and that the slider should be the NC
New measure started , needed the NC
00:51:697 (4,1) - consider putting the NC on the HC and not the slider
Same as earlier , no need to change here
00:59:543 (1,1,1) - I think these should all be one combo
No , because in each slider , the slider velocity is different. Needed the nC
01:31:543 (1,2) - I think the NC should be taken off the slider here and put on the HC
No , its fine as it is

Thanks for the mod !

UPDATED !

@Rakuen , you should change your OD to 7 instead of 6.

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2015-02-08T23:36:36+00:00

Recheck

[Easy]

00:43:235 (4,1) - smaill missing blanket.
01:30:005 (1) - this spiner end 01:31:851 - here ( this not Fixed?)

[guineaQ's Hard]

01:06:466 (5) - 이건 제 실수인것 같은데 이곳 셈플셋 빼시고 01:07:389 - 여기에 넣어주세요 물론 클랩도 넣으시구

ok. that all call me back

Aerous

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Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-02-08T23:53:37+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
Recheck

[Easy]

00:43:235 (4,1) - smaill missing blanket.
Fixed
01:30:005 (1) - this spiner end 01:31:851 - here ( this not Fixed?)
I didn't fix it because all the other diff. end on 01:32:005

ok. that all call me back

Hold up Habi , just wait for Rakuen , Gaia and Mochi to reply to their mods ! I'll call you back when I feel ready. Maybe 1-2 more mods

guineaQ

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Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2015-02-09T20:01:47+00:00

Throwing a mod at insane since I feel like it could be easily improved with some keystrokes really.

Insane

00:05:697 (3) - ctrl+g works
00:06:312 (1,2) - why aren't this exactly the same shape i do not know
00:07:543 (1) - i would have added some kind of red node at 00:08:005 - due to vocals
00:10:620 (1,1) - fix blanket gg
00:35:235 (3) - yo stack the slider end of this to 00:34:466 (1) -
00:41:389 (2,1) - ?!?!??#@? The vocals definitely suggest OPPOSITE direction movement for these sliders I would personally make slider 2 go downwards
00:45:697 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I kinda find this part too click intensive despite the song being relatively silent
00:50:620 (1,2) - now this part should have circles instead :c just convert slider 1 to two circles or something
00:59:543 (1,1,1) - this part is still troll
01:05:389 (1) - i would ctrl+g
01:18:928 (1) - hmm i would have done something like this
SPOILER
01:20:466 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - a bit overspaced

Aerous

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Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-02-10T00:02:25+00:00

guineaQ wrote:
Throwing a mod at insane since I feel like it could be easily improved with some keystrokes really.

Insane
00:05:697 (3) - ctrl+g works no its fine , but I kinda like it . IDK IF I WANT TO CHANGE IT UHHHHUHUU
00:06:312 (1,2) - why aren't this exactly the same shape i do not know
It is the same shape O-o ? If not I'll redo it againnnn
00:07:543 (1) - i would have added some kind of red node at 00:08:005 - due to vocals
I like this shape , I know what you mean.
00:10:620 (1,1) - fix blanket gg
gg
00:35:235 (3) - yo stack the slider end of this to 00:34:466 (1) -
okayy
00:41:389 (2,1) - ?!?!??#@? The vocals definitely suggest OPPOSITE direction movement for these sliders I would personally make slider 2 go downwards
downnnn
00:45:697 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I kinda find this part too click intensive despite the song being relatively silent
i like this , its okayy
00:50:620 (1,2) - now this part should have circles instead :c just convert slider 1 to two circles or something
i like slidersss
00:59:543 (1,1,1) - this part is still troll
trolling is my specialty
01:05:389 (1) - i would ctrl+g
i hate ctrl + g
01:18:928 (1) - hmm i would have done something like this
SPOILER
maybe later ? idk its fine as it is
01:20:466 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - a bit overspaced
i think its okayy

Thank youuu !! Still waiting for Mochi , Rakuen and Gaia !

sheela

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Joined October 2011

sheela 2015-02-10T01:00:52+00:00

Hey Aerous!

General

The background is 1336 x 768, while the recommended is 1366 x 768. Here's a PNG and JPG (because the PNG file is 1.4mb). I upscaled it and chopped the up and down border.

Easy

00:07:544 (4) - Move this above of 00:08:774 (1) -, like x:250 y:179, so it could shoot to the next slider "better", instead of having the head of the slider (5) next and a little up to the head of the previous slider? This suggestion would need 00:05:082 (1,2,3) to be change.
00:14:928 (3) - I don't see a link between the long length and the music to be honest. I would do something like this, but the 3/4 gap between (4) and (1) would seem confusing for the beginner players (I think it's called polarity?).
00:31:543 - I wouldn't skip that beat. Even if the slider (2) follows the vocal, I wouldn't let a 3/2 gap here in easy. And I don't think it fits with the music in my opinion. The new rhythm starts on 00:31:543 which is kind of "more intense". You can do a rhythm like this:
SPOILER
00:43:235 to 00:50:620 - I get lost a bit with the new combo. To keep the new combo consistent, you should add the new combo to 00:43:235 (4,3) and remove it from 00:44:466 (1,1) .
00:50:621 (1,2) - Make a blanket pattern with those two? The curved slider would make a circular flow with the previous slider.
01:07:774 to 01:15:158 - The flow are round and round, but I would break the circular flow on 01:10:312 . It looks a bit boring and repeating. And breaking the flow on that tick seems to fit well, because it has a new rhythm in the music.
01:28:774 (3) - Extend this to 01:29:235 then add a repeat? To be honest, 01:29:389 (4,5) sounds weird, because of the beats that are on the red ticks (01:29:235 - 01:29:543 - ). The instrument of those beats is the main, so we can clearly hear them, as they're on the top layer.

Mochi's Normal

00:26:312 to 00:29:389 - Follow the beats instead of the vocals. Starting from 00:21:082 -, you mapped the beats, but after, it's vocals. So you should keep the consistency in the rhythm.
01:16:928 (4) - Remove this slider so you could let a circle on 01:17:082 ? The 1/2 slider doesn't make sense to me, so it sounds weird to me.
01:23:082 (2) - Flip this horizontally. The flow of 01:23:082 (2,3) seems unnatural for me when I play that part. Flipping it will make a direction to the next slider, instead of nothing.

guineaQ's Hard

01:05:082 (2) - I would unstack this slider from the previous slider. It makes a weird movement when the slider shoots, but the next slider is on the tail. You can make a pattern like this:
SPOILER
01:09:697 (1) - Why not a repeat slider? You can move the tail to x:161 y:77. The repeat slider will avoid the short distance created between this and the next circle with a gap of a beat. It makes a weird movement in my opinion.
01:13:851 (1) - To be honest, this looks like the old pattern in the 2009 maps. You can use a random shape I made:
SPOILER
```
201,262,73851,2,0,B|239:226|293:242|293:242|252:183|252:183|281:138|246:93,1,262.5
```
Same thing to 00:25:235 (2) . It looks like the old curves. Maybe like this?
[spoilerbox]
01:19:697 - Maybe a triplet here? You make them to the previous part, like 01:10:158 (1,2,3) .

Gaia's Insane

00:25:389 - The 3/2 gap in the rhythm feels weird to me, and it should be mapped. It decided to follow the vocals, but that previous section follows the beats. So you could either add a 1/1 slider on 00:25:389 and a following circle on the red tick.
There's also 00:27:851 which can be done with a 1/1 slider.
00:39:158 (4) - I'm not good with hitsounds, but replace the clap by a whistle? The clap sounds weird on the blue tick.
00:40:774 - Turn the two circles by a 1/1 slider? The slider velocity changes, so I think two circles with a small distance won't fit, since it makes a kind of weird and sudden movement. Plus, the slider would introduce the section where the slider velocity is low.
00:49:389 (1) - Move this more to the right to avoid the ugly overlap?
01:00:466 - It seems there's no kiai time. The kiai time should start here.
01:13:235 (2) - Move this more down, like x:191 y:214? To avoid the overlap and make the distance from this to the previous object larger.
01:18:312 - On this section, the rhythm is different from the similar previous section, 01:07:697 . There should be a gap on 01:18:466 and on 01:19:389 .
01:23:389 (6,7,8) - Rotate these circle by some degrees, like around 60, because the circle (6) doesn't make the triangle pattern go. Like, that circle is closer to the previous circle.
01:24:312 (1) - Remove the second node so it could be straight? It would be the same as the previous slider, and the curve facing to the previous slider seems to make a weird flow.

Rakuen's Insane

00:09:697 (3) - Make this slider straight, like you did to the two previous repeat sliders?
00:12:158 (6) - Add more distance between this and the previous circle. The short distance makes a little weird movement for the cursor.
00:27:697 (3) - Extend this slider to hit the full vocal. It seems to sound weird.
00:58:005 (1) - Flip this vertically? It seems to make a better flow to the next slider.

Insane

00:05:082 (1) - Move this further from the following slider? It starts with a small distance, but the distance for the next rhythm is suddenly bigger, which visually doesn't make sense with the music in my opinion. I would also make the distance between each of them smaller, since the background doesn't seem intense.
00:09:235 (1,2,1,2) - You don't have to apply this since it fits with the music, but flip these horizontally? It just makes some variation.
00:14:928 (1) - Remove the finish? It feels out of place.
00:30:517 (2,3) - How about switching places for them (Ctrl + G)? So the circle (2) doesn't have to return to where the previous slider finished.
00:38:620 (2,2) - Move them closer to their previous objects, like you did to 00:36:158 (2) -, so they could be the same and it won't get confusing. Or the opposite.
00:52:774 (4) - Move this so the distance between his previous and following objects is the same. The distance should be consistent between 00:52:620 (3,4,5) . And it's the opportunity to make a better triangle pattern.
00:56:158 (3) - Move this further from the previous slider? It would fit very well with the hitsounds.
01:15:081 (7,8,1) - Make the distance between them the same as the distance between 01:14:774 (3,4,5,6) . To be honest, it looks a bit ugly, and I don't really see a link with the music. There's also 01:19:543 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) .
01:23:389 (4,5) - Make the distance between them consistent to 01:22:928 (2,3) .

Guy's Extra

00:24:774 (1) - Stack this with the next slider? You did this to the previous patterns, and a greater distance would seem funner since you hear another beat.
01:12:620 (7,8,1) - Move this more up. They seem a bit off-screen.

This is only the things I could say. Nice job!

This should it! I really like the mapset: I can completed the insane difficulties with an accuracy of 98%, so free PP. yay. But I wonder why three insanes...
Anyways, here's a star! Good luck with the ranking process, and don't hesitate asking question to me if they're concerned with the mod!

Aerous

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Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-02-10T04:28:50+00:00

I'll call Habi after everyone replied to their mods !

Aerous

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Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-02-10T05:38:01+00:00

sheela901 wrote:

Hey Aerous!
General
The background is 1336 x 768, while the recommended is 1366 x 768. Here's a PNG and JPG (because the PNG file is 1.4mb). I upscaled it and chopped the up and down border.
Easy
00:07:544 (4) - Move this above of 00:08:774 (1) -, like x:250 y:179, so it could shoot to the next slider "better", instead of having the head of the slider (5) next and a little up to the head of the previous slider? This suggestion would need 00:05:082 (1,2,3) to be change.
00:14:928 (3) - I don't see a link between the long length and the music to be honest. I would do something like this, but the 3/4 gap between (4) and (1) would seem confusing for the beginner players (I think it's called polarity?).
00:31:543 - I wouldn't skip that beat. Even if the slider (2) follows the vocal, I wouldn't let a 3/2 gap here in easy. And I don't think it fits with the music in my opinion. The new rhythm starts on 00:31:543 which is kind of "more intense". You can do a rhythm like this:
SPOILER
00:43:235 to 00:50:620 - I get lost a bit with the new combo. To keep the new combo consistent, you should add the new combo to 00:43:235 (4,3) and remove it from 00:44:466 (1,1) .
00:50:621 (1,2) - Make a blanket pattern with those two? The curved slider would make a circular flow with the previous slider.
01:07:774 to 01:15:158 - The flow are round and round, but I would break the circular flow on 01:10:312 . It looks a bit boring and repeating. And breaking the flow on that tick seems to fit well, because it has a new rhythm in the music.
01:28:774 (3) - Extend this to 01:29:235 then add a repeat? To be honest, 01:29:389 (4,5) sounds weird, because of the beats that are on the red ticks (01:29:235 - 01:29:543 - ). The instrument of those beats is the main, so we can clearly hear them, as they're on the top layer.

Insane
00:05:082 (1) - Move this further from the following slider? It starts with a small distance, but the distance for the next rhythm is suddenly bigger, which visually doesn't make sense with the music in my opinion. I would also make the distance between each of them smaller, since the background doesn't seem intense.
Fixed
00:09:235 (1,2,1,2) - You don't have to apply this since it fits with the music, but flip these horizontally? It just makes some variation.
I like the way is it
00:14:928 (1) - Remove the finish? It feels out of place.
Okay , nice catch !
00:30:517 (2,3) - How about switching places for them (Ctrl + G)? So the circle (2) doesn't have to return to where the previous slider finished.
CTRL + G
00:38:620 (2,2) - Move them closer to their previous objects, like you did to 00:36:158 (2) -, so they could be the same and it won't get confusing. Or the opposite.
Yea okay
00:52:774 (4) - Move this so the distance between his previous and following objects is the same. The distance should be consistent between 00:52:620 (3,4,5) . And it's the opportunity to make a better triangle pattern.
triangleee !!
00:56:158 (3) - Move this further from the previous slider? It would fit very well with the hitsounds.
increased distance just a bit
01:15:081 (7,8,1) - Make the distance between them the same as the distance between 01:14:774 (3,4,5,6) . To be honest, it looks a bit ugly, and I don't really see a link with the music. There's also 01:19:543 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) .
Changed the distance , but not on 01:19:543 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) . The overlap on the slider is super ugly
01:23:389 (4,5) - Make the distance between them consistent to 01:22:928 (2,3) .
no this is fine , i think

This should it! I really like the mapset: I can completed the insane difficulties with an accuracy of 98%, so free PP. yay. But I wonder why three insanes...
Anyways, here's a star! Good luck with the ranking process, and don't hesitate asking question to me if they're concerned with the mod!

Thanks for the mod and the star , I'll reply for Easy tmrw after school

After Guy , Mochi and Guinea have replied to mods , I'll update the BG and ask Habi to check it out again

Last edited by Aerous 2015-02-10T05:51:51+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Rakuen

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Rakuen 2015-02-10T05:42:41+00:00

Asphyxia wrote:
M4M

[General]
The OD on every Insane is terribly low for no reason, the song is intense and so seem the Insanes be, so please Add at least +1 OD to every single on of them. A possible solution would be that Gaia's Insane used OD 7 -> Insane OD 7,5 -> Rakuen's Insane OD 8 -> Guy's Extra OD 8,5
but please don't leave them like that. Even the hard difficulty uses OD 6.. <.<
[Rakuen's Insane]
As stated in the general box, don't use OD6, it's an OD that Hard-difficulties use and this isn't one. Moreover, this is the hardest Insane difficulty in this mapset so there's absolutely no reason to use such low OD. Fixed
00:10:005 (1,2,3,4) - I find this pattern to not flow that well, so you could consider using this; it'd give it more structure too! Can't understand the structure here...pointed out 4 notes but 5-6 notes in the picture. So far the flow looks fine imo
Example
00:10:774 (1) - Do not extend this to the blue tick, there's no sound to support it and the vocals end at 00:10:928 - , it feels way too forced now and that's not good. Ending at white tick sounds a lot annoying for me, and the vocal doesn't really end there. If you start playing from the tick you can still hear a slight drag. Plus, I've considered the jump distance too, not to make it too big on 3/4
00:20:774 (3) - Feels too forced again, because 00:20:466 (1,2) - are the two main notes that the music has, so this (3) feels unnecessary. Consider removing it? Don't wanna ignore the vocal, it's important for me. Vocal at 3 = "ko", then next is "toba" > "kotoba"
01:11:235 (5,1) - Give it a lot more spacing, since you have such similar spacing with 01:11:543 (1,2) - , it's hard to read whether it's 1/2 or 1/4. Agree with this
I didn't like this Insane, sorry. The reason for it is because the extensions feel way too forced and unnecessary when the song doesn't even support those, and the general structure seems to be missing. E.g 00:14:158 (3,4,5,6) - could be a proper square, but currently it's off a lot, 00:18:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - could be so many things but atm it's a triangle with an incorrect triangle at 00:18:774 (4,5,6) - and then there's incorrect blankets. The map itself could have so many shapes, cleaner patterns and that would make it a lot more structured. Everything I just said isn't meant to be taken as something rude, but as my personal opinion.
An example how 00:18:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - could be re-arranged to give the map more structured feeling

I get what you mean, but we all have different point in mapping.

For me I don't get why we have to use a perfect square for jumps, sometimes it makes me harder to play for well arranged shapes

As long as it's clear to read, not too hard for the jump, I'm fine with it.

And, I personally like this style of gameplay, and would like to see more of them (this kind of pattern) on osu!

Thanks for yours mods!

sheela901 wrote:

Hey Aerous!

Rakuen's Insane
00:09:697 (3) - Make this slider straight, like you did to the two previous repeat sliders?
00:12:158 (6) - Add more distance between this and the previous circle. The short distance makes a little weird movement for the cursor. Looks fine,decrease little jump
00:27:697 (3) - Extend this slider to hit the full vocal. It seems to sound weird. Looks okay, same as 00:26:312 (2,3,4) - have some blanks, nth weird imo
00:58:005 (1) - Flip this vertically? It seems to make a better flow to the next slider.Current flow is better imo

This should it! I really like the mapset: I can completed the insane difficulties with an accuracy of 98%, so free PP. yay. But I wonder why three insanes...
Anyways, here's a star! Good luck with the ranking process, and don't hesitate asking question to me if they're concerned with the mod!

No reply = Fixed. Thanks for mods!

My update: http://puu.sh/fIHnh/631e61850f.osu

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2015-02-10T08:59:26+00:00

sheela901 wrote:

Hey A~~erous~~dmiral!
General
The background is 1336 x 768, while the recommended is 1366 x 768. Here's a PNG and JPG (because the PNG file is 1.4mb). I upscaled it and chopped the up and down border.
guineaQ's Hard
01:05:082 (2) - I would unstack this slider from the previous slider. It makes a weird movement when the slider shoots, but the next slider is on the tail. You can make a pattern like this: I'm basing majority of my movement on vocals for this hard. For me I feel that having a stacked slider head fits what vocal is suggesting.
SPOILER
01:09:697 (1) - Why not a repeat slider? You can move the tail to x:161 y:77. The repeat slider will avoid the short distance created between this and the next circle with a gap of a beat. It makes a weird movement in my opinion. vocal 1/1 gap is what im trying to capture here
01:13:851 (1) - To be honest, this looks like the old pattern in the 2009 maps. You can use a random shape I made: 01:13:851 (1,1,2) - supposed to make naval dual turret shape XD
what some of the slider shapes were meant to represent
00:09:235 (1,1,1) - ship propeller
00:15:389 (4) - sea wave
00:23:543 (1,2) - ^
00:35:851 (1,3,1) - mini anchor :>
00:41:389 (2,4,2,2) - ship hull cross section
00:52:158 (2,3,1,3,2,3) - anchor :s
01:10:312 (3,1) - waves /o/
01:13:851 (1,1,2) - naval gun :s
01:16:466 (1,2,1,3,1,2) - ship hull :s
01:21:389 (1,2) - shell cross section
01:22:620 (1,2,3) - propeller
SPOILER
201,262,73851,2,0,B|239:226|293:242|293:242|252:183|252:183|281:138|246:93,1,262.5
Same thing to 00:25:235 (2) . It looks like the old curves. Maybe like this?
[spoilerbox]
01:19:697 - Maybe a triplet here? You make them to the previous part, like 01:10:158 (1,2,3) . There isn't anything in the 1/4 for the part you are suggesting to place the triplet on :c (there are in midst the slider thou :s)
This should it! I really like the mapset: I can completed the insane difficulties with an accuracy of 98%, so free PP. yay. But I wonder why three insanes...
Anyways, here's a star! Good luck with the ranking process, and don't hesitate asking question to me if they're concerned with the mod!

Ranger

939 posts

Joined June 2011

Ranger 2015-02-10T12:01:16+00:00

~~lol so many diff~~

[Easy]

00:20:158 (3) - add finish at the end. it`s good to hear me
00:50:620 (1) - ^ at front
01:23:851 (2) - set the watch accurate to 01:24:466 (3).
Box

[Mochi's Normal]

00:13:082 (6) - move to 00:12:312. it`s proper the music.

[guineaQ's Hard]

00:14:620 (4) - how about make this slider to straight? associate to 00:14:928 (1,2,3)
01:10:235 (2) - remove clap here. it`s not proper in music i think

[Gaia's Insane]

00:29:697 (1) - how about make same shape about 00:30:312 (2)?

[Insane]

00:10:620 (1) - hm...fast speed? i think that part associate low speed, but it`s your mind
00:45:389 (3) - how about set the x:340 y:168? well, that just suggestion

well...can`t found something in other diff
this map already fine

Good luck for Rank~

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2015-02-10T12:43:16+00:00

sheela901 wrote:
Guy's Extra
00:24:774 (1) - Stack this with the next slider? You did this to the previous patterns, and a greater distance would seem funner since you hear another beat. - i prefer that current one.
01:12:620 (7,8,1) - Move this more up. They seem a bit off-screen. - but actually it's not offscreen. so i can keep the placement of here. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2734477
This is only the things I could say. Nice job!

Thank you for modding

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2015-02-10T13:15:19+00:00

Ranger wrote:
~~lol so many diff~~

[guineaQ's Hard]

00:14:620 (4) - how about make this slider to straight? associate to 00:14:928 (1,2,3) 담요 땜시..
01:10:235 (2) - remove clap here. it`s not proper in music i think 그곳에 강한 드럼 소리가 있어서;;
well...can`t found something in other diff
this map already fine
Good luck for Rank~

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2015-02-11T00:54:54+00:00

SPOILER

00:59 Aerous: o can you test play this :
00:59 *Aerous is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/611011 AKINO from bless4 - MIIRO]
00:59 Pho: that's how you should've learned mapping anyway: using DS, even in Insanes lawl
00:59 Aerous: my insane only

??
00:59 Aerous: I need to mod more ;_;
01:00 Aerous: oh yea cna you post this log
01:00 Pho: i saw asphyxia and irre posting
01:00 Aerous: on the forum
01:00 Pho: uhh, allright, but that doesn't really need Kds lol
01:00 Aerous: it should be okay now
01:00 Aerous: idk
01:01 Pho: idk how QAT measure quality so orz
01:01 Aerous: yea idk it looks okay now my insane for miiro
01:01 Aerous: LOL
01:01 Aerous: Rakuen messaged me saying he didn't like Asphyxia's mod , forcing him to map in a dif. way
01:03 Pho: yea, that's why i actually don't like giving you these suggestions LOL. but i guess they want to see more like this
01:03 Pho: the kiai
01:03 Pho: is slightly weaker than the rest before
01:04 Pho: that start is perfect
01:05 Pho: 00:05:082 (1,2,3,4) - But space these equal
01:05 Aerous: yea , but i made the first one have a bit bigger spacing
01:06 Pho:

why
01:07 Aerous: idk i just think that the rythem after this suddenly gets bigger
01:07 Pho: do you mean 00:06:005 (4,1) - ?
01:07 Aerous: yea
01:07 Pho: yea, that's fine, i only spoke of the orange combo xD
01:08 Aerous: OO
01:08 Pho: within the combo, keeping DS at 1.9x/2.0xDS would make it look more balanced
01:09 Aerous: mhm i'll think about it , i might change it up
01:09 Pho: 00:25:235 (2,3,1) - why spacing this so high
01:10 Pho: at 00:24:312 (3,1,2) - i understand because of the e-guitar
01:10 Aerous: the vocal got a bit higher
01:10 Aerous: so i thought it would be better to increase just a bit
01:11 Pho: it takes up a lot of room :s
01:11 Pho: at least 00:25:235 (2,3) - lowering spacing here would make sense
01:11 Pho: since the vocal goes down here
01:11 Aerous: oh tru
01:12 Pho: 00:25:697 (3,1) - jump is fine, but arrange it somehow that it's not too close to the next object
01:12 Pho: like http://puu.sh/fKJAp/2051982501.jpg . since this is somewhat uncomfortable to play for many players
01:13 Aerous: oh yea i changed right before you said it
01:13 Aerous: loll
01:13 Pho: good

01:13 Aerous:

01:14 Pho: 00:28:928 (3,4,1) - a technique many mappers like to use is to make things like this look like they are visually off the same distance
01:14 Pho: http://puu.sh/fKJR7/363e6879c6.jpg
01:15 Aerous: ookk changed it up
01:15 Pho: 00:35:235 (3,4,1) - get rekt by QAT for this
01:16 Aerous: ;_;
01:16 Pho: jk, but this flows bad xD
01:16 Aerous: mhmm
01:17 Aerous: changed it up like this : http://puu.sh/fKKfd/830529b5bb.jpg
01:17 Aerous:

what do you think?
01:17 Pho: works
01:18 Pho: 00:38:005 (4,5,6,7,1) - eh, dis is ugly
01:18 Aerous: teach me how to put makeup on it

?
01:19 Pho: smoother pls: http://puu.sh/fKKrH/2ab7fb5ee7.jpg . makeup wat
01:20 Aerous: Pho's makeup supplies = mods
01:20 Aerous: make dem pretty
01:20 Pho: lol pls
01:20 Aerous: fixed

01:20 Aerous: wow you play league ?!?!?
01:21 Pho: rip lol since 2014
01:21 Pho: it still there for some reason
01:21 Aerous: are you lvl 30 tho

?
01:22 Pho: yes, but i don't play anymore :p
01:22 Aerous:

01:22 Aerous: I play sometimes , but not as much as before now
01:25 Pho: i should be in plastic XV by now or something. allright, moving on
01:25 Pho: 00:58:005 (1) - you built up pretty well up to here, but suddenly, this got less dense
01:25 Aerous: mhm kk

01:26 Aerous: ill increase the distance
01:27 Pho: neat
01:28 Pho: 01:08:005 (2) - move dis down
01:28 Pho: http://puu.sh/fKLIp/42c32a177c.jpg
01:28 Aerous: and the note stacked with it?
01:28 Aerous: o
01:28 Aerous: k
01:28 Pho: doesn't matter, it still looks nice

01:29 Pho: 01:09:082 (1,2,3) - make these look visually the same distance
01:29 Pho: http://puu.sh/fKLQn/e19260ac00.jpg
01:30 Pho: 01:12:005 (3) - how about spacing this a bit less
01:30 Pho: like 1.4x or something
01:30 Pho: 01:12:005 (3) -
01:30 Pho: oops
01:31 Pho: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2739087
01:31 Pho: 01:14:774 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - better blanket for aesthetics
01:32 Pho: http://puu.sh/fKMdD/93cfc925ed.jpg
01:33 Pho: 01:15:235 (1,2,3,4) - something new for you to try out, mb you like zigzag motion: http://puu.sh/fKMjv/808ace8e30.jpg
01:34 Pho: 01:22:928 (2,3,4,5) - rip spacing
01:34 Aerous: oh yea kylod told me to do that lol
01:34 Aerous: 3 and 4 should have bigger spacing since the music is a bit tense
01:34 Aerous: and then the anti jump afterwards
01:35 Pho: no
01:35 Pho: i think you misunderstood lol
01:36 Pho: he means 4-5 needs stronger spacing than 3-4
01:36 Pho: because the music gets stronger still
01:36 Pho: it builds up until 01:23:697 - , so they antijump makes practically no sense
01:36 Pho: unless you like trolling
01:36 Aerous: o
01:36 Aerous: 01:23:235 (3,4,5) - atmosphere is going higher and higher and finally it goes on max at 5 but antijump'd. space more than 3and4
01:37 Aerous: oh
01:37 Aerous: wait
01:37 Aerous: LMAO
01:37 Pho:

01:37 Aerous: can i just leave 3 - 4 with the current spacing
01:37 Aerous: and increase 5
01:38 Pho: that'd be too much
01:38 Pho: try 1.4 -> 1.8 -> 2.2
01:38 Pho: between 01:22:928 (2,3,4,5) -
01:38 Pho: http://puu.sh/fKN5J/8f5303e68e.jpg
01:39 Pho: 01:27:851 (5,6,7,8,1) - i showed you something similar in the let me hear map right
01:39 Pho: http://puu.sh/fKNfJ/0b3eda015f.jpg
01:41 Aerous: ctrl + g 6 and 7?
01:41 Pho: kind of, but can still make it look neat by positioning it a bit
01:42 Pho: 01:30:005 (3,4,5,6) - i like clean patterns, so maybe tidy this up: http://puu.sh/fKNBL/77536e2231.jpg
01:43 Aerous: kk
01:43 Pho: 01:18:620 (4,1,2) - you should find a way yourself to clean this up, this still looks unpolished i think
01:44 Pho: 01:19:543 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - what's with the spacing at the beginning lol
01:44 Aerous: oh yea i changed it because if i left it with same DS
01:44 Aerous: the slider would overlap
01:44 Aerous: so i split the stream in half
01:44 Aerous: one of the half gets a big lower DS
01:44 Aerous: and the other half + 0.2
01:46 Pho: that doesn't really make sense musically lol
01:46 Pho: 01:26:620 (7,1,2,3,4) - duude, the spacing lol
01:47 Aerous: changed it
01:47 Pho: 01:31:851 - i missed the sliders here :c
01:48 Aerous: QAT said its unrankable

01:48 Aerous: so i had to remove it and replace it with circles
01:48 Aerous: shouldn't start it on blue tick ;_;
01:49 Pho: qwfwewqa allright
01:49 Aerous: i had those sliders on those blue ticks
01:49 Aerous: q-q
01:49 Pho: ah that explains it lol
01:49 Pho: well, if they're really that nitpicky about it, don't change
01:49 Aerous: yea
01:50 Pho: though i don't feel anything wrong with stuff like this[http://puu.sh/fKOub/6f96bc5d18.jpg here] to be honest orz. it goes well with the trumpets
01:50 Aerous: plz post on let me hear and miiro
01:51 Aerous: should be okay
01:51 Aerous: ty pho

01:51 Pho: meh
01:51 Pho: was really mod
01:51 Pho: but k

Did some makeup for aerous' map i think.
I'm thinking of making a 2015 extra map out of that song lol

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sheela901 wrote:

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