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-Nya-


Spacing in Normal has to be consistent. It's a requirement.
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

-Nya- wrote:



Spacing in Normal has to be consistent. It's a requirement.
moved right a little bit, should be fine now.
Also, as talked. decrease the volume in Easy and add some finish. Sorry for making you think I'm arrogant.
Thank you.
-Nya-
Lets give this map its bubble back.
To next BN: I guess just check hitsounding and spacing in lower diffs but it should be fine.
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

-Nya- wrote:

Lets give this map its bubble back.
To next BN: I guess just check hitsounding and spacing in lower diffs but it should be fine.
Thank you again.
Don't really mean to offense you, but ...

Anyway :3!
Fycho
[Normal]
  1. 用AR5?6真的太高,HR+DT会美丽。而且AR5的话四个难度ar分别是3,5,7,9,spread上多好
  2. 00:34:990 (6) –漏clap
  3. 00:39:578 (2) –我建议这个滑条尾和00:40:813 (3) –都加一个clap,像00:36:225 (2,3) –这里的一样。00:47:519 (3,4) –这些同理。
  4. 00:42:401 (1) –尾巴clap
  5. 00:44:519 (4) -^
  6. 00:55:459 (1) –转盘尾finish,虽然你说低难度节奏密度低不需要那么多finish,但是这个转盘加个finish听着会很舒服
  7. 00:57:576 (1,2,3,1) –根据几何关系你这要摆正三角形并兼顾每个物件间的距离(不是ds)肯定摆不来啊,等腰三角和斜三角又不好看。我建议你还是把00:57:576 (1) –放到(115,111),让00:57:576 (1,2,3) –保持直线。你这种虽然不明显但是会被dq的
  8. KIAI里我建议你加点clap,这样太blank看着太像一个unfinished的音效。虽然由于二四白线的关系加不满,但是也比空着好

[Insane]
  1. 00:37:107 (2) –加whistle
  2. 00:56:871 (1) –finish,因为是cymbal,而且这个应该是和00:59:694 (5) –一样的
  3. 01:15:223 (2) -20%的音量太低,考虑40~50%
改完告诉我
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
done
其实normal那个spacing应该已经修好了来着
Zero__wind
虽然不知道怎么回事然而我被叫过来reb 所以我们再过一遍
no kd

Normal
00:57:576 (1,2,3,1,2) - 把这里间距都调到1.2X
01:04:282 - 漏了clap
01:08:165 (1,2) - 把2的clap挪到1的尾巴上才合曲 然而01:09:576 (3) - 尾巴上clap

G's Hard
00:13:460 (1) - 滑条头20%音量soft是比较危险的 最好加到40%
00:56:518 (1) - 滑条尾巴5%消音我并不认为是安全的 请至少涨到10%
01:13:459 (1) - 去掉NC

Insane
00:58:282 (5) - 头上finish 和00:56:871 (1) - 00:59:694 (5) - 一样

以上
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
Done... Thanks all.

ps. 其实没发生什么,就是爆炸了一下而已
Zero__wind
Rebubbled.
kanpakyin
honeyworks大爺啊
Kodora
Talked to moe Luka via qq, fixed accidental CS change on Hard & Normal

Qualified! =3=/
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
=3=/
Adol Christin
Need to redl this i guess...
Gratz~
cmn_891127
大哥好帅气
tutuhaha

cmn_891127 wrote:

大哥好帅气
Irreversible
###DM

Hi Megurine Luka!

I'm here to pull this out of the qualified section for now, as for the following reasons:

Spread issues between N > H (main reason)

We strongly believe that the gap between N and H is not executed appropriately. While H has 1/4 and difficult patterns (such as 00:36:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -) a repeated slider can be found in N. We think that this should be improved, thus we'd like you to add a new diff between N and H - or nerf the Hard (pretty massively, not recommended), as you wish.

Aesthetics in Insane (we really think your map can benefit of that!)

Your map could look a lot more polished if you went over it once more and fixed little aesthetical problems! Let me point up a few, so you get the idea.

  1. 00:02:166 (3) - blanket
  2. 00:02:519 (4,5) - This actually does not make sense rhythmically, why do you put a jump from 3 to 4 (no strong beats), but no jump from 4 to 5 (where there actually is a strong beat?). Please reconsider.
  3. 00:03:401 (6) - blanekt
  4. 00:04:284 (1,2,3) - Make the spacing even
  5. 00:19:460 (5,6,7) - How comes the spacing drops so much here? 00:18:401 (1,2,3,4) - has been really jumpy.
  6. 00:22:637 (1) - Same, why no jump when there's something to emphasize?
tl;dr: 1) check blankets 2) check whether a jump makes sense or not (put a jump on strong sounds, keep it spaced on weak sounds), 3) check if the spacing is even, where it should be the same (for example: 00:04:284 (1,2,3) - )

Break in Easy

Why didn't you map the break in Easy? The player is certainly not exhausted by playing 13 seconds, and we don't really see why this part of the map should be left out. I do see that you wanted to follow the vocals explicitely, yet this is just boring for a player! Please at least place some objects (does not even have to be dense).

If you have any questions, just ask! BNs will handle this map from now on. Good luck!
cmn_891127
大哥不要哭/(ㄒoㄒ)/~~
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka


You guys win.
Lach
Hey you should have used the control panel to uninstall instead of deleting the folder since it removes the shortcuts.

Quite the pitiful way to act when you could just fix the mentioned points with a bit of work and it would be on its way to ranked again.
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
No more fix, thanks.

Password changed, last post here.

:) This community gives me a lot of fun this time.

祝武运昌隆,再见。
kiddly
:shock:
Karen
大哥啊...
TsuuShinE-RA
暖かくないんだなぁ
mintong89
:(
[Mahua]
这事让我想起一个事 "我能说脏话吗?" '不能' "那我无话可说 再见"
XII
Megurine ;(
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