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Brandy - The Festival of Ghost

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fartownik
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fartownik
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 20 listopada 2010 at 14:43:36

Artist: Brandy
Title: The Festival of Ghost
Source: O2Jam
Tags: Hanyuu DaRRi MIx darrihuka
BPM: 105
Filesize: 1852kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. DaRRi's Another (4,89 stars, 213 notes)
  2. Easy (2,46 stars, 83 notes)
  3. Hanyuu's Normal (3,6 stars, 123 notes)
  4. Hard (4,72 stars, 214 notes)
Download: Brandy - The Festival of Ghost
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal - Hanyuu
Another - DaRRi MIx
Last edited by fartownik , edited 27 times in total.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Deleted double copy due to a submission mistake.
Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
Hai fartownik :)
As your request

[General]
- Why still wip? waiting for another diff?
- Might as well reduced the lead-in to 1sc
- the .osb still there, if it not used don't forget to delete it

[Easy]
00:19:894 (3) - this is kinda offbeats imo, might as well replace it into a circle in the next white tick
00:26:180 (1) - ^
00:40:037 (2) - because of the previous repeat, this can be very confusing, try divide it into 2 repeat like this

00:48:037- it's better if you move this timing section backward

[Hanyuu's Normal]
how about lowering the hitsound to the same volume as other diff?

[Hard]
My favorite diff :) fun
00:26:180 (2) - this slider is hard to read cause of the invisible end point and also because 3 & 5 that didn't follow the music :o
00:44:322 (3) - delete this ?
01:01:608 (1) - ^
01:23:894 (1,2) - surprising but not that difficult if you know its coming

[SHD]
what I wrote in hard also applied here to I guess also
00:26:180 (2) - unsnapped slider's end

that's all I can find, hope it's help
Great map :)
Star~
fartownik
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Topic Starter
fartownik

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hai fartownik :)
As your request

[General]
- Why still wip? waiting for another diff?
- Might as well reduced the lead-in to 1sc
- the .osb still there, if it not used don't forget to delete it

[Easy]
00:19:894 (3) - this is kinda offbeats imo, might as well replace it into a circle in the next white tick
00:26:180 (1) - ^
00:40:037 (2) - because of the previous repeat, this can be very confusing, try divide it into 2 repeat like this

00:48:037- it's better if you move this timing section backward

[Hanyuu's Normal]
how about lowering the hitsound to the same volume as other diff?

[Hard]
My favorite diff :) fun
00:26:180 (2) - this slider is hard to read cause of the invisible end point and also because 3 & 5 that didn't follow the music :o
00:44:322 (3) - delete this ?
01:01:608 (1) - ^
01:23:894 (1,2) - surprising but not that difficult if you know its coming

[SHD]
what I wrote in hard also applied here to I guess also
00:26:180 (2) - unsnapped slider's end

that's all I can find, hope it's help
Great map :)
Star~
Thanks for your help!
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
my diff all volume level 8 thx
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
Nice~
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
[Easy]
You can make some notes instead of the break time.i think it's needn't.
[Normal]
01:06:465 like this .you can separate the notes .
[Hard]
many sliders coincide...but it's not bad
[SHD]
...it's too hard to me.. :?
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
volume 80% my diff @alace
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[SHD]
Spacing? maybe I always mod this one too strict >< I take 0:15:465 (1,2,3,4,5) as standard
0:27:894 (3) spacing, reduce 1 grid
0:29:037 (9,10) ^
0:30:180 (3) 1 grid right? Correspondingly (4) 2 grid right
0:31:037 (6,7,8,9,10) ^
0:33:751 (2) too close, right 1~2 grid
0:34:894 (5) right 1 grid?
0:36:465 (3,1) reduce 1 grid?
0:38:037 (2) make a rectangle, down 1 grid?
0:40:465 (1) Suggestion: hold the same spaing with (1,2,3)?

[hard]
0:08:037 (3,4) Suggestion: Make a rhombus, (3) right 1 grid, (4) up 1 and right 4 grid?
1:10:894 (1) spacing, reduce 1 grid?

[normal]
0:13:751 (1) Suggestion: down 1 grid?
1:08:894 (2) A bit close? down 2 grid?
1:14:322 (2) up 1 grid?
1:24:465 (1) The "bird sound" is at 1:26:608... extend this by 1/4 beat?

[Easy] Good

Star~
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
fartownik
Fixed some things. Thanks for your mod :)
Kecco
908 posts
Joined September 2009
Kecco
•Overall•
Offset : 2.319

•SHD•
00:13:176 (2) - Ugly jump.
00:38:176 (3,4) - Reverse Selection. (Select them>Edit>Reverse Selection)
00:45:176 (2) - Bug?
01:08:604 (1,2,3,4,5) - These sliders have a bad position.
01:21:604 (6,7) - Make these closer.

•Hard•
00:13:180 (1) - Ugly jump.
00:45:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - LoL. These sliders have a bad position.
00:48:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:48:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

•Hanyuu's Normal•
00:36:608 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Fix the spacing of these combo, it's different than the whole map.
01:24:465 (1) - Ewww, Awful.

•Easy•
Good.

Star~
fartownik
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Topic Starter
fartownik
Thanks for modding! Fixed some of your advices.
Colin Hou
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Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. Oh my favourite song in O2Jam...
  2. this mapset don't need lean-in imo.
[Easy]:
  1. 00:31:462 (4) - make this end at 00:31:748 and add a back.
  2. 00:38:605 (T) - add a note
  3. 00:43:177 (T) - ^
  4. 01:22:050 (T) - ^
[Hanyuu's Normal]:
  1. OD is kind of low.
  2. 00:15:462 (2) - make length 1/2 as it used to be and add 2 back.
  3. 00:26:034 (2) - start at 00:26:177 is better, and end at 00:26:605
  4. 00:28:462 (3) - put this on the white line
  5. 00:30:748 (3) - ^
  6. 00:33:034 (3) - ^
  7. 00:37:605 (3) - ^
  8. ......
  9. consider map it like this?
    SPOILER
    or
  10. 00:54:891~01:01:748 (T) - using sliders may be better than circles.
  11. 01:22:320 (1) - Ctrl+J it and put it to the original place.
  12. 01:24:462 (1) - silent the end and let it end at 01:26:748.
[Hard]:
  1. 00:22:748 (T) - add a circle
  2. 00:25:034 (T) - ^
  3. 00:27:177 (5) - remove
  4. 00:41:034 (9) - ^
  5. 00:33:748 (5) - make it like this:
    SPOILER
  6. 00:44:320 (3) - little hard to read, consider this: remove this and add a back at (2)
  7. 01:23:891 (1) - start at 01:24:034 is better
  8. 01:24:319 (2) - start at 01:24:462?
[SHD]:
  1. 00:25:034 (T) - add a circle? or make 00:25:177 (1) a slider start here end at 00:25:177
  2. 00:17:462 (T) - a circle here?
  3. 00:22:748 (T) - how about adding a circle here and making this 3 and 00:22:891 (1) a stream?
  4. 00:45:177 (2) - oh...what's this?
  5. very crazy diff :3
Star~ Good luck and hope this get ranked soon XD
fartownik
2,189 posts
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Topic Starter
fartownik

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. Oh my favourite song in O2Jam...
  2. this mapset don't need lean-in imo.
[Easy]:
  1. 00:31:462 (4) - make this end at 00:31:748 and add a back.
  2. 00:38:605 (T) - add a note
  3. 00:43:177 (T) - ^
  4. 01:22:050 (T) - ^
[Hanyuu's Normal]:
  1. OD is kind of low.
  2. 00:15:462 (2) - make length 1/2 as it used to be and add 2 back.
  3. 00:26:034 (2) - start at 00:26:177 is better, and end at 00:26:605
  4. 00:28:462 (3) - put this on the white line
  5. 00:30:748 (3) - ^
  6. 00:33:034 (3) - ^
  7. 00:37:605 (3) - ^
  8. ......
  9. consider map it like this?
    SPOILER
    or
  10. 00:54:891~01:01:748 (T) - using sliders may be better than circles.
  11. 01:22:320 (1) - Ctrl+J it and put it to the original place.
  12. 01:24:462 (1) - silent the end and let it end at 01:26:748.
[Hard]:
  1. 00:22:748 (T) - add a circle
  2. 00:25:034 (T) - ^
  3. 00:27:177 (5) - remove
  4. 00:41:034 (9) - ^
  5. 00:33:748 (5) - make it like this:
    SPOILER
  6. 00:44:320 (3) - little hard to read, consider this: remove this and add a back at (2)
  7. 01:23:891 (1) - start at 01:24:034 is better
  8. 01:24:319 (2) - start at 01:24:462?
[SHD]:
  1. 00:25:034 (T) - add a circle? or make 00:25:177 (1) a slider start here end at 00:25:177
  2. 00:17:462 (T) - a circle here?
  3. 00:22:748 (T) - how about adding a circle here and making this 3 and 00:22:891 (1) a stream?
  4. 00:45:177 (2) - oh...what's this?
  5. very crazy diff :3
Star~ Good luck and hope this get ranked soon XD
Thanks for modding. Fixed some of this.
DaRRi
267 posts
Joined January 2009
DaRRi
here is the bg 4 u

btw can i add an easy diff?
:D



Download: Brandy - The Festival of Ghost (fartownik) [DaRRi's Another].osu
Last edited by DaRRi , edited 2 times in total.
fartownik
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fartownik
Wow, thanks DaRRi! :) Your difficulty is awesome :)
Also thanks for the bg, it's much in better quality.
DaRRi
267 posts
Joined January 2009
DaRRi
np~

00:45:177 (4) in SHD is broken here :?

also my updated

Download: Brandy - The Festival of Ghost (fartownik) [DaRRi's Another].osu
fartownik
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fartownik

DaRRi MIx wrote:

np~

00:45:177 (4) in SHD is broken here :?

also my updated
updated thx
Bass
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Joined January 2009
Bass
[Easy]
00:26:177 (1) - brzydkie zastąp to jedną notką na 00:26:319 -


[Hanyuu's Normal]
00:26:891 (3) - czemu tu nagle taki jump jest?
01:14:320 (2) - nie overlapuj sliderow
01:22:320 (1) - to samo

[Hard]
01:16:034 (6) - nowe combo


[DaRRi's Another]
Fine

[SHD]
Fine

Star~
fartownik
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fartownik

Bassmaster wrote:

[Easy]
00:26:177 (1) - brzydkie zastąp to jedną notką na 00:26:319 -


[Hanyuu's Normal]
00:26:891 (3) - czemu tu nagle taki jump jest?
01:14:320 (2) - nie overlapuj sliderow
01:22:320 (1) - to samo

[Hard]
01:16:034 (6) - nowe combo


[DaRRi's Another]
Fine

[SHD]
Fine

Star~
Fixed some of this. Thx
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

  • • Delete the osb
    • If you could get an mp3 that is not cut off at the end, that would be awesome D:

[Hanyuu's Normal]

  • • 01:24:462 (1) - Delete this slider and add a spinner
fartownik
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Topic Starter
fartownik

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

  • • Delete the osb
    • If you could get an mp3 that is not cut off at the end, that would be awesome D:

[Hanyuu's Normal]

  • • 01:24:462 (1) - Delete this slider and add a spinner
Sadly, it's really hard to find better mp3 :roll:
Deleted the osb; waiting for Hanyuu check this suggestion.
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
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Nakagawa-Kanon
[Easy]
01:15:462 (5) - add new combo

[Hanyuu's Normal]
00:20:605 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - it seems to hard
01:24:462 (1) - remove slider and add the note [suggestion]

[Hard]
00:43:462 (1,2,3,4) - too dizzy

[DaRRi's Another]
fine.

[SHD]
HP drain rate +1


+stat

good map~

EDIT:Brandy → BRANDY
fartownik
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fartownik

dksslqj wrote:

[Easy]
01:15:462 (5) - add new combo

[Hanyuu's Normal]
00:20:605 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - it seems to hard
01:24:462 (1) - remove slider and add the note [suggestion]

[Hard]
00:43:462 (1,2,3,4) - too dizzy

[DaRRi's Another]
fine.

[SHD]
HP drain rate +1


+stat

good map~

EDIT:Brandy → BRANDY
Fixed some of this. Thanks for modding.
DaRRi
267 posts
Joined January 2009
DaRRi
i changed some rhythm again, maybe this' the final version :o

Download: Brandy - The Festival of Ghost (fartownik) [DaRRi's Another].osu
fartownik
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fartownik
Updated.
Furawa
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Furawa
awesome :P
fartownik
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fartownik
Thanks for the star, SOGASOGAMO :)
yeahyeahyeahhh
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yeahyeahyeahhh
* :)
fartownik
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fartownik
Oh yeah 8-)
yeahyeahyeahhh
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yeahyeahyeahhh

fartownik wrote:

Oh yeah 8-)
<3
Beuchi
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Beuchi
Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Could you fade the end of the mp3? It ends so suddenly x.x

~Easy~
00:42:319 (3) - This slider looks so ugly, just make it linear? xD
01:01:605 (1) - Move to the white tick, sounds offbeat to me :<

~Hanyuu's Normal~
01:24:462 (1) - I don't like this slider at all... :/

~Hard~
00:52:605 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Use the original spacing here, not the halved one, it makes this hard to follow~
01:21:177 (3,4,5,6,7) - Just stack them? >:

~DaRRi's Another~
DARRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII~ <3333333333333333333333333333333333 *insert fangirl screams here*

~Insane~
00:24:319 (2,3) - D: so evil!
00:40:462 (1,1) - What. Just fix spacing, this makes no sense ;___;
01:08:605 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmmm... I'm not really sure about this... xD
01:21:177 (3,4,5,6,7) - @____@;

Nice map, Insane is a bit overmapped with all those weird jumps but oh well~
fartownik
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fartownik

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Could you fade the end of the mp3? It ends so suddenly x.x

~Easy~
00:42:319 (3) - This slider looks so ugly, just make it linear? xD
01:01:605 (1) - Move to the white tick, sounds offbeat to me :<

~Hanyuu's Normal~
01:24:462 (1) - I don't like this slider at all... :/

~Hard~
00:52:605 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Use the original spacing here, not the halved one, it makes this hard to follow~
01:21:177 (3,4,5,6,7) - Just stack them? >:

~DaRRi's Another~
DARRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII~ <3333333333333333333333333333333333 *insert fangirl screams here*

~Insane~
00:24:319 (2,3) - D: so evil!
00:40:462 (1,1) - What. Just fix spacing, this makes no sense ;___;
01:08:605 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmmm... I'm not really sure about this... xD
01:21:177 (3,4,5,6,7) - @____@;

Nice map, Insane is a bit overmapped with all those weird jumps but oh well~
Thanks for your mod, Beuchi-chan, fixed some of your advices.
Yuji Tokaji
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Yuji Tokaji
='o

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