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Mizuki Nana - Bright Stream

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Seto Kousuke
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, February 14, 2015 at 3:49:01 PM

Artist: Mizuki Nana
Title: Bright Stream
Source: Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha The Movie 2nd
Tags: Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha The Movie 2nd Mahou Shoujo
BPM: 158
Filesize: 4028kb
Play Time: 02:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.11 stars, 91 notes)
  2. Hard (4.13 stars, 448 notes)
  3. Insane (4.54 stars, 654 notes)
  4. Natcher (4.92 stars, 664 notes)
  5. Normal (1.8 stars, 139 notes)


Download: Mizuki Nana - Bright Stream
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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~WIP~

Inspired by one of aesopl19193's beatmaps that became one of my favorites in Osu!, now he is inactive so i decided to make a new beatmap of that song that i enjoy so much since the day i downloaded it.

Soon i'll work harder on normal/hard difficulties...but if someone can make them for me, I'll love you forever.

Changelog:
21/01/2015 - Created new diff Natcher and started planning hard and normal.
22/01/2015 - Natcher is finished and did improvements on sliders on Natcher and Insane.
23/01/2015 - Finished Normal and did improvements on Insane and Natcher mapping.
24/01/2015 - Better positioning on Insane and improvements on sliders.
25/01/2015 - Hitsound improvements on Insane and AR changed from 9 to 8.
26/01/2015 - Finished Easy and Hard diff. and Insane AR changed back to 9. (Hard still sucks)
Sora Momoiro
Ótimo map, continue assim :)

Recomendo considerar o uso de sliders em algumas patterns de triplet como por exemplo em 00:05:725 - e 00:06:105 -
Adicionaria algo a mais no flow~
Yuki Elison
Recomendo colocar HP6 no mapa, pois com esse BPM , são poucas notas para segurar o HP com o mod HR, assim sendo que precisa praticamente dar 99% de HR pra conseguir passar o map, eu testei com HP6 e da para passar de boa, nice map !
God Faelthas
Heey, im here to help you make better map. ^^

This is for Insane diff.

First BPM offset should be on 598, not -920.
From 00:03:635 - 00:05:154 - you don't need notes 3,4,6,7,9. They doesn't go with any sound, so it makes it sound kinda bad.
From 00:05:154 - 00:05:534 - I think that you don't need that stream, but for the hype, it's good.
From 00:09:522 - 00:09:711 - You got 3 circles stream there. But only 2 notes :D
From 00:48:825 - 00:49:111 - My personal thoughts are that it would be better just one longer slider then two smaller, it would make it better, and also you could slow it down SV to 0.75
From 01:31:737 - 01:32:876 - You could put in one more slider for 3rd voice that is on 01:32:117 - 01:32:402 - , it would just sound better i think.

This is for Natcher diff.
First BPM offset should be on 598 too. ^^
From 00:08:004 - 00:08:193 - You could put that strean, it would be better i think, same here 00:09:523 - 00:09:712 - , and here 00:24:523 - 00:24:807 -
On 01:33:066 - You could add one more circle to full that sound, but it's not needed, and here also 01:34:585 - and here 01:55:471 - and here 02:22:433 -
From 01:56:041 - 01:56:800 - I think that , that stream is just too much, also from 01:57:560 - 01:58:319 - is the same thought.

Overall this is my personal opinion, you might like it, you might not, other than this everything is good. Good map, i hope it gets ranked. :)
Anxient
hello, from #modreq. (more like you came to me but whatever. its a m4m :D)

  • Insane
    00:05:725 (6,8) - unsnapped slider (following 1/4 beatsnap)
    00:09:523 (1,2) - make a triple?
    00:52:624 (2) - ctrl+g?
    00:53:004 (3,4,5) - maybe have 3 start from the top, streaming to bottom. (ctrl+g)
    01:25:092 (1) - continue combo
    01:25:662 (7) - ^ if follow above mod, new combo
    01:26:042 (1) - ^ if follow above mod, new combo
    01:49:206 (5) - maybe replace with a triple?
    02:13:509 (1) - ctrl+g (not sure about this tho. for me its just to give flow)

02:26:516 (1) - end spinner in 02:29:459

Natcher
  • if this is going to be the hardest diff, please consider using AR 9 again.
    Also, that slidervelocity... so low.. like. Stuff it on 2.0.
    a remap is recommended. Theres a lot of things I have to say to this map is that the patterns are kinda stale. Add more variety!
    I noticed tons of back and forth jumps. Nothing wrong with that, but I guess its kinda overused.
    Timing points don't have to be the same.
    soo...
    02:26:516 - kiai time, make end in here 02:26:421.


That's it for me!
Topic Starter
Seto Kousuke

Anxient wrote:

hello, from #modreq. (more like you came to me but whatever. its a m4m :D)

  • Insane
    00:05:725 (6,8) - unsnapped slider (following 1/4 beatsnap)
    00:09:523 (1,2) - make a triple?
    00:52:624 (2) - ctrl+g?
    00:53:004 (3,4,5) - maybe have 3 start from the top, streaming to bottom. (ctrl+g)
    01:25:092 (1) - continue combo
    01:25:662 (7) - ^ if follow above mod, new combo
    01:26:042 (1) - ^ if follow above mod, new combo
    01:49:206 (5) - maybe replace with a triple?
    02:13:509 (1) - ctrl+g (not sure about this tho. for me its just to give flow)

02:26:516 (1) - end spinner in 02:29:459

Natcher
  • if this is going to be the hardest diff, please consider using AR 9 again.
    Also, that slidervelocity... so low.. like. Stuff it on 2.0.
    a remap is recommended. Theres a lot of things I have to say to this map is that the patterns are kinda stale. Add more variety!
    I noticed tons of back and forth jumps. Nothing wrong with that, but I guess its kinda overused.
    Timing points don't have to be the same.
    soo...
    02:26:516 - kiai time, make end in here 02:26:421.


That's it for me!
really nice, i think i did all the changes on insane, and now i finally understood why those sliders at the beginning were so weird lol! hahah xD thanks!

About Natcher i still want to make an ar8-9 with jumps and stacks, maybe i'll change some patterns but the jumps+stacks i will try to keep using, because it's a lot of fun with hidden mod, if a lot of people don't like it, i'll consider changing, but atm it will stay this way x]

thanks for the mod o/
Alheak
Hi, M4M

Color code :
Unrankable
Important
Suggestion

The wallpaper resolution is weird, not really that big of a problem but it triggered my OCD lol (and will probably triggers BATs' too).
It's useless to put in the tags what has already been put in the other fields (song's name, artist's, etc...)
00:16:548 (4,1,2) - Mirror and ctrl + g 00:16:548 (4) - , looks better:

00:27:181 (3) - ^ maybe
00:56:041 (2,3) - Stacked notes may be too hard to read for Normal.
01:40:092 (3) - Like earlier
02:00:503 (1) - Misplaced? (in time)
00:01:928 (1,1) - Don't really like how they look, maybe something like that would be better? :

00:10:282 (6,1,4) - Make them look the same, consistency is the key! :D This suggestion is valable for the rest of the diff (and maybe the mapset).
00:44:080 (1) - How about rotating it 90° clockwise? Feels better imo (flow):

00:52:624 (2) - How about ctrl + g for the same reason ^ ?
01:33:826 (6) - ^ :
01:00:978 (1,1,2) - How about mirroring 01:00:408 (1,1,1) - (while keeping 01:01:357 (2) - a single)? You'll have to recenter 01:01:547 (3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - and 01:03:066 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - though.
01:49:965 (7) - It looks a little ugly, if you want to keep where the start and end are, I suggest changing its shape to a wave or something along those lines.
01:51:864 (4) - Same, but not for the same reasons. Make the shape even :

02:21:484 (2) - Doesn't look like the others

I think that's it, be careful of how the sliders look, be consistent, otherwise fun mapset!

Good luck for ranking!
streeteelf
M4M :D

[General]

-Check AIMod to correct timing points.
-00:49:206 - Preview point here.
-Correct length of diffs to be the same.

[Insane]

- 00:05:725 (1,2,3,4) - I'd change them into triples instead of slider and circle.
- 00:19:206 (3,4) - These don't look very good for me, try to make the curve more in the middle, not close to end and maybe lighter than it is.
- 00:20:155 (2,3,4) - ^
- 00:22:434 (1,2,3,4) - ^
- Generally nearly all sliders look like made like L, try to make them smoother.
- 00:54:333 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Correct DS of 3 last notes of selected
- 00:57:940 (2,3) - Suggest triplet
- 01:06:674 (8) - Maybe something like this if you use 1/4 sliders?
- 01:27:370 (4,5) - Maybe blanket of 4 tail?
- 01:30:409 (2,3) - ^ but 2 tail?
- 01:33:826 (6) - Curve to the left to keep flow.
- 01:59:459 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest lower DS to stream long like that on Insane
- 02:07:244 (3,4) - Triplet?
- 02:25:471 (1,2,3,4) - Lower DS between them, like here: 01:00:409 (1,2,3,4,5)

[Natcher]

- AR9.2, OD8 I think is better
- Use higher SV for me, slider are really sloooow.
- 00:11:231 (2,3,4) - Correct placement.
- 00:27:750 (2,3,4) - Ctrl+H and maybe Ctrl+R to rotate by 30 degree and then move to x:188 y:140
- 00:41:991 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - Don't stack notes like this, it's too confusing with that AR to play, even 9.2 is too low to read this IMO.
- 01:09:142 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use the same DS between them and place vertically.
- 01:49:965 (7) - Curve it like circles are placed, it looks bad for me.

Generally not bad mapset, but still has long way to become ranked. :) Even though, good luck~ :3
batwoman3
Here is my mod:

Insane

00:01:928 (1,1,1,2) - can make to 1 combo, remove unnecessary NC.
00:05:725 (6,8) - make to 1/4 beats instead of 1/6
00:09:143 (7) - can set to clap
00:12:370 (5) - can set to whistle
00:44:080 (1) - can set to clap
00:48:447 (1) - remove combo
00:49:206 (3) - move this closer to the end of slider (2)
00:54:522 (5,6) - can delete these 2 notes
01:00:598 (2) - delete this slider
01:06:294 (6,7,8,9) - don't overuse sliders here. Follow the music.
01:31:168 (4) - can add finish here
01:44:839 (6) - toggle direction (Ctrl + G)
01:50:345 (4) - can add finish here
02:12:750 (1) - can add finish here
02:14:269 (1) - can add finish here
02:20:345 (1) - can add finish here
02:20:915 (1) - no need of new combo here
02:21:105 (1) - can add finish here
02:21:864 (7) - can add finish here
02:23:383 (5) - can add finish here
02:26:421 (7) - can add finish here

Natcher

Overall you need better hitsound. Use claps,

00:36:674 (3) - can put the slider further away from (2)
01:42:370 (5) - same like above
02:05:535 (5) - put slider elsewhere, you won't be ranked with slider like this
02:20:724 (1,1) - remove new combo here... both of them

According to me, this beatmap is still far from ranked. What I can say is follow the music and put notes that suits the music best. I actually love the music and hope it gets ranked. Good luck
Necroluttah
Oii
pequeno mod ;w;
Primeiramente, sugiro que coloque 10% a mais nos hitsounds do kiai e deixar os spinners em 5%
00:01:928 Sugiro mudar a posição dos circulos pra algo como isso http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2605969, acho que daria uma melhorada no flow
00:03:636 (5) NC
00:05:725 (1, 2 ,3) Remova o NC, tambem acho que ficaria melhor se fosse um stack
00:07:624 Sugiro substituir o slider por 2 circulos, acho que o ritmo ficaria melhor
00:08:004 Remova o NC
00:08:193 NC
00:09:523 Remova o NC
00:09:724 NC
00:10:282 Acho que ficaria melhor uma triplet aqui, acho que ficaria mais no ritmo da musica
00:10:662 Remova o NC
00:11:231 NC
00:11:991 Remova o NC
00:12:750 NC
00:24:143 Acho que ficaria melhor se fosse 2 circulos ao invez de um slider
00:14:080 Remova o NC
00:14:269 NC
00:15:788 ^ + Ponha o slider um pouco mais pra baixo
00:16:358 Remova o NC
00:17:497 ^
00:18:636 ^
00:18:827 NC
00:24:523 Remova o NC + Sugiro que distancie um pouco o stream do slider, só pra melhorar na hora de ler
00:24:902 NC
00:25:282 Remova o NC
00:27:371 ^
00:27:940 NC
00:28:320 Remova o NC
00:30:029 (3, 4, 5) Acho que um stack aqui ficaria melhor
00:39:523 Remova o NC
00:40:092 NC
00:41:611 ^
00:41:991 Remova o NC
00:54:332 (1, 2, 3, 4) Acho que stacks ficariam melhores nessa parte (Mesmo para 01:06:484.)
00:57:940 Acho que trocar o slider e o circulo por um triplet daria uma melhorada no flow (Mesmo para 02:07:243.)
00:59:838 Substitue o slider por um triplet, ficara mais no ritmo da musica
01:01:452 (2) Remova esse circulo
01:01:737 Acho que se mudasse essa parte pra algo assim https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2606061 ficaria melhor
01:08:193 NC
01:08:383 Remova o NC
01:21:674 ^
01:22:433 ^
01:22:623 NC
01:22:718 Remova esse circulo
01:25:092 Acho que uma stream até aqui 01:25:661 ficaria mais no ritmo da musica
01:25:661 NC
01:26:041 Remova o NC
01:26:990 ^
01:27:180 NC
01:30:788 Sugiro substituir o slider por uma triplet
01:31:168 Sugiro trocar por um slider do tick vermelho até o outro. exemplo: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2606131
01:31:737 NC
01:40:281 Remova o NC
01:40:851 NC
01:43:699 Remova o NC
01:43:889 NC
01:45:218 Remova o NC
01:45:408 NC
01:46:737 Remova o NC
01:46:927 NC
02:00:788 Remova o NC
02:01:737 ^
02:02:117 NC
02:02:497 Remova o NC
02:13:509 (1, 1, 1, 1) Remova os NC
02:18:636 (2, 3) Acho que essa parte ficaria melhor se os circulos stackassem com o slider
Acho que é só isso, muito bom mapa, Tal <3
Boa sorte, espero que rankeie :)
não foi tão pequeno assim
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