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IKU - Chikaigoto ~Sukoshi Dake Mou Ichido~ (TV Size)

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Nakagawa-Kanon
wait..... You must recheck bpn plesae
GabrielRKF
BPM: 111,85
Offset: 2.428
I don't think it's perfect but at least it's better~

Easy
00:14:832(1) - End it at 00:16:709
00:19:929(5) - New Combo
00:32:537(7) - ^
00:51:584(6) - One (lvl 2) grid to the left
00:55:071(2) - Ends better at 00:56:144
01:10:094(6) - New Combo.
01:21:898(5,6) - The BPM gets all distorted here so or you find this broken BPM or I think it's better delet these 2 notes and make a spinner starting here and ending at... at... well, I'm kinda confused. Maybe end at 01:26:324, sounds nice here.

Hard
00:21:270(5) - It's just... not sounding cool. Make 2 notes here is better.
00:38:439(4) - Considering the Combo order from the rest of the song, here should have a New Combo.
00:59:900(spinner) - Sounds better ending at 01:02:046.
01:07:680(6) - Extend 1/2 longer (01:08:216)
01:21:898~End - The broken BPM part that I told you.

Insane
The best diff :]
00:08:661(5) - New Combo~
00:55:071(6) - ^
01:21:898~End - The broken BPM part that I told you.[2]

Nice map, ask for someone better to find the right BPM~
Star~~~~~~~~

Ps.: Can I try making a Hard for this?
Topic Starter
a2823282
Done~

Thanks :)

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Ps.: Can I try making a Hard for this?
OK~
GabrielRKF
I hope you like it >_<
Download: IKU - Chikaigoto ~Sukoshi Dake Mou Ichido~ (TV Size) (a2823282) [Rox's Hard].osu

No stream or jump stuff but I think that it can still be names as Hard~
banvi
Hello. :)

mod
SPOILER
General
Timing is wrong in last half?_? I don't have timing skill. Sorry.
Anyway , I think , you should ask timing help. :|
And the volume of hitsounds is a bit big overal , please turn down -1 or -2.
Easy
01:13:237 (4,5,6,7) 2 grid up?(grid lv3)
Hard
I think okay.
Rox's hard
00:10:742 (4) 1 grid down?
00:15:302 (3,4,6,8)I think , the volume of these finish hitsound is big for music volume.
00:33:004 (3) 1 grid right?
01:17:260 (1) nice
Insane
00:05:914 (11) new combo? and add jump (11,12,13)? (my suggesion)


Nice map , star & gl ;)
Topic Starter
a2823282

banvi wrote:

Hello. :)

mod
SPOILER
General
Timing is wrong in last half?_? I don't have timing skill. Sorry.
Anyway , I think , you should ask timing help. :|
And the volume of hitsounds is a bit big overal , please turn down -1 or -2.
Easy
01:13:237 (4,5,6,7) 2 grid up?(grid lv3)
Hard
I think okay.
Rox's hard
00:10:742 (4) 1 grid down?
00:15:302 (3,4,6,8)I think , the volume of these finish hitsound is big for music volume.
00:33:004 (3) 1 grid right?
01:17:260 (1) nice
Insane
00:05:914 (11) new combo? and add jump (11,12,13)? (my suggesion)


Nice map , star & gl ;)
fix
Thanks~

timing is a big problem for me :o
dvorak_old
Try bpm 111.838 / offset 2448
will go off at 81848 but It is impossible to handle after this timing cuz the change isn't flat.


To Aru > Toaru (source)

>To Aru is wrong to explain source, should be Toaru.

>On ly a few page are written as Toaru , and it was 1st uploader's fault who upload to youtube or torrent.
>If you feel nothing for "on ly" or "so me" , don't need to change.

>If I say more grammatically, Toaru is one word and rentaishi(連体詞) in lexical category.
>That doesn't exist in English. Toaru is new word, aru is used to rentaishi and bit different from toaru.
>This will be too long to write here, but I know native English speaker who can explain this problem.
>So talk with me in Japanese or let me get him to talk with.

>Well Number is Power? BATs are lazy to replace most of them? I welcome any grammatical rebuttal to this.
Topic Starter
a2823282

dvorak wrote:

Try bpm 111.838 / offset 2448
will go off at 81848 but It is impossible to handle after this timing cuz the change isn't flat.


To Aru > Toaru (source)

>To Aru is wrong to explain source, should be Toaru.

>On ly a few page are written as Toaru , and it was 1st uploader's fault who upload to youtube or torrent.
>If you feel nothing for "on ly" or "so me" , don't need to change.

>If I say more grammatically, Toaru is one word and rentaishi(連体詞) in lexical category.
>That doesn't exist in English. Toaru is new word, aru is used to rentaishi and bit different from toaru.
>This will be too long to write here, but I know native English speaker who can explain this problem.
>So talk with me in Japanese or let me get him to talk with.

>Well Number is Power? BATs are lazy to replace most of them? I welcome any grammatical rebuttal to this.
fix
I learned a lot
Thanks~ :)
Neethime
:D IKU~这歌好听啊
Pink words:You should fix this
Black words:Just suggestions
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[General]
试着在一些起始音的地方加finish音效(easy和hard里有些少)

[Easy]
副歌后面的normal音效也用和副歌相同的音量吧
从开到42秒这段为什么不加hitsound呢?试着加些whistle上去(这段的音量也可以试着+10?)
00:46:976 (5,1,2) - spacing,你不能在easy里放跳啊...orz
01:21:848 (1) - 在01:26:408 结束

[Rox's Hard]
Fine~

[Hard]
00:12:373 (4) - 左一格,下一格
01:17:288 (1) - 同easy

[Insane]
00:17:201 (7) - new combo
00:40:270 (6) - ^
01:08:168 (7) - ^
01:21:848 (1) - 同easy

Nice map.
+Star :)
Frill
[General]

- index (4).jpg is resize 1024x768..As long as it see 1023x767
- Please unite all dif kiai time.

[Easy]

00:11:031 - I think that this green line is needless. (It is adjusted with offset. )
00:40:002 (5,6) - 1 grid down?

[Rox's Hard]

00:56:339 (1) - ah..remove new combo?
01:13:505 (1) - ^
01:21:820 (1) - Volume is Please make it to the lowered feeling.

[Insane]

00:18:006 (8) - new combo

good map!
Topic Starter
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Neethime wrote:

:D IKU~这歌好听啊
Pink words:You should fix this
Black words:Just suggestions
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[General]
试着在一些起始音的地方加finish音效(easy和hard里有些少)

[Easy]
副歌后面的normal音效也用和副歌相同的音量吧
从开到42秒这段为什么不加hitsound呢?试着加些whistle上去(这段的音量也可以试着+10?)暫時先不加 因為照banvi大的說法這裡hitsounds會太大聲
00:46:976 (5,1,2) - spacing,你不能在easy里放跳啊...orz~沒發現這裡有跳 :o
01:21:848 (1) - 在01:26:408 结束

[Rox's Hard]
Fine~

[Hard]
00:12:373 (4) - 左一格,下一格
01:17:288 (1) - 同easy

[Insane]
00:17:201 (7) - new combo
00:40:270 (6) - ^
01:08:168 (7) - ^
01:21:848 (1) - 同easy

Nice map.
+Star :)
修正
感謝~

Frill wrote:

[General]

- index (4).jpg is resize 1024x768..As long as it see 1023x767~fix
- Please unite all dif kiai time. ~fix

[Easy]

00:11:031 - I think that this green line is needless. (It is adjusted with offset. )~I changed the red line volume
00:40:002 (5,6) - 1 grid down?~fix

[Rox's Hard]

00:56:339 (1) - ah..remove new combo?~fix
01:13:505 (1) - ^~fix
01:21:820 (1) - Volume is Please make it to the lowered feeling. ~fix

[Insane]

00:18:006 (8) - new combo~I temporarily set the new combo at 00:17:201 (7)

good map!
thanks~
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
你用的video并没有分离掉音轨,请把video消音以减少文件大小,这是必须的。另外不确定中文字幕是否合适……
把roxkyuubiforever加进tags,其他如果你想加的话还可以参考若干电磁炮图的tags
offset:+12,不排除BPM有误的可能
kiai线和变换音量/音效不能用同一根绿线,请在kiai前加线来变更音效/音量然后以相同的音效进入kiai,以及之前Colin提过的音效绿线不要踩note的问题好像还没改掉。
don't change volume/hitsound sample and kiai time with the same timing point.

如果你愿意去要一套电磁炮皮肤效果应该更好。

[Easy]
1.4 Slider Velocity+ 0.8x Distance Spacing对Easy来讲高了(尤其对比你1.4+0.7x的Hard),另这个难度中也有不少的段落更像Normal
HP-1, OD-1
00:14:787 (1) - 不对称的很严重
00:37:856 (2,3) - 关掉grid snap左移到1正下方
00:41:075 (1) - 延长到00:44:294?(finish)

[Hard]
为什么不用grid level 3呢?很多小的spacing不等,不一一指出了,例:00:30:345 (3,4,5) - 这里最明显
00:33:296 (1) - spinner过短了
00:58:242 (3,4) - 这两个不能同形状就真的很违和。。
01:17:288 (1) - 这个spinner很没语言……至少等到最后变速段了再弄?转10秒这个压力很大啊

[Rox's Hard]
00:15:323 (3) - this slider is offscreen... should fix.
01:21:848 (1) - end this at 01:26:676?

[Insane]
除了难度设定外没有感到这是Insane
00:47:244 - 加一拍?
01:21:848 (1) - 结束在01:26:676


实话讲我觉得hitsounds mod还言之过早。。。尤其Hard和Insane的mapset是否有必要再考虑下。另外也请不要什么发言都给kud,我mod总感觉有点不爽= =……这个感觉具体化而言就是一种我把一个mod按从[General]到[Insane]拆5个贴发出来的冲动……
NatsumeRin
orz double post.
Topic Starter
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NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
你用的video并没有分离掉音轨,请把video消音以减少文件大小,这是必须的。另外不确定中文字幕是否合适…… ~消音
把roxkyuubiforever加进tags,其他如果你想加的话还可以参考若干电磁炮图的tags~OK
offset:+12,不排除BPM有误的可能~OK BPM我再問問其他人看看
kiai线和变换音量/音效不能用同一根绿线,请在kiai前加线来变更音效/音量然后以相同的音效进入kiai,以及之前Colin提过的音效绿线不要踩note的问题好像还没改掉。~OK 我以為是只有純改音量才不能踩 抱歉
don't change volume/hitsound sample and kiai time with the same timing point.

如果你愿意去要一套电磁炮皮肤效果应该更好。

[Easy]
1.4 Slider Velocity+ 0.8x Distance Spacing对Easy来讲高了(尤其对比你1.4+0.7x的Hard),另这个难度中也有不少的段落更像Normal~OK
HP-1, OD-1~OK
00:14:787 (1) - 不对称的很严重~OK
00:37:856 (2,3) - 关掉grid snap左移到1正下方~將排版改了一下
00:41:075 (1) - 延长到00:44:294?(finish)~OK

[Hard]
为什么不用grid level 3呢?很多小的spacing不等,不一一指出了,例:00:30:345 (3,4,5) - 这里最明显~OK
00:33:296 (1) - spinner过短了~OK
00:58:242 (3,4) - 这两个不能同形状就真的很违和。。~OK
01:17:288 (1) - 这个spinner很没语言……至少等到最后变速段了再弄?转10秒这个压力很大啊~OK

[Rox's Hard]
00:15:323 (3) - this slider is offscreen... should fix.
01:21:848 (1) - end this at 01:26:676?

[Insane]
除了难度设定外没有感到这是Insane其實是因為之前看到有人發3個難度最好是easy/normal和hard insane比較好 才把他從hard改成insane :o 想辦法把它改難中~
00:47:244 - 加一拍?~OK
01:21:848 (1) - 结束在01:26:676~OK


实话讲我觉得hitsounds mod还言之过早。。。尤其Hard和Insane的mapset是否有必要再考虑下。另外也请不要什么发言都给kud,我mod总感觉有点不爽= =……这个感觉具体化而言就是一种我把一个mod按从[General]到[Insane]拆5个贴发出来的冲动……
知道了!!(有一個是不小心按到的) 抱歉>< 面壁反省中
已修改~
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[Easy]

  • • Slider Tick Rate: 1
    • 00:21:237 (2) - This slider sounds bad: delete it and do something different.
[Insane]

  • • 00:08:361 (9,1) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)

[Rox's Hard]


  • • Offset: 2460 (resnap all notes)
    • 01:21:848 (1) - End this spinner here 01:26:688
Armin
[Easy]

00:21:237 (2) - This doesn't fit the vocal voice, so I think you should make this 1/4 shorter. If you do this, add also a beat here: 00:23:383 - (x).
00:14:799 (1) - Spacing
00:51:012 (4) - This pattern can be a bit confusing for a newbie; also, here the spacing is not respected. I Strongly reccomend to fix it.

[Hard]

00:29:552 (1) - Random jump o_o'
00:43:769 (1,2,3,4,5) - Since the spacing is very low here, I suggest you to replace the "streams" like in this picture:

01:17:300 (x) - Add a hitcircle here

[Rox's Hard]

01:21:848 (1) - Silence this spinner (Adding an inherit-section)

Nice diff, no major problems found~

[Insane]

No problems found.

Good job, here you are a star
Topic Starter
a2823282
fix~

thanks a lot
kiddly
IKU的歌……不错呢 :)

[Easy]
00:11:043 (1,2) - 我看了下整张图二分拍有spacing的地方就三个,你不如把他们全都stack了这样整张图整齐很多.

[Hard]
改名叫normal,然后insane改名叫hard好了.
关于mapset,作为hard OD感觉低了点作为normal HD又太高了……我建议降3格HD做normal好了.
00:39:075 - 这线干吗用的,没看懂……
00:39:343 - ^
如果上面两条线就是为了加一格音量的话那真没啥必要……都听不出来……

[Rox's Hard]
00:42:696 (1) - 在这放个note后面再接spinner会不会更好呢,前面也是这样做的.
Just like 00:25:529 (4,1) .
其他挺好的.

[Insane]
OD-1,HD-1 or2.本来这首歌也不适合作难,没必要勉强做个insane的mapset.做hard就好了.
节奏比较散的歌OD高了打起来非常非常非常不爽.
00:39:075 - 同hard.
00:39:343 - ^
摆放方面说实话有些单调,可以参考你的guest diff,多用一些造型的slider.

大概就这些.
Topic Starter
a2823282

kiddly wrote:

IKU的歌……不错呢 :)

[Easy]
00:11:043 (1,2) - 我看了下整张图二分拍有spacing的地方就三个,你不如把他们全都stack了这样整张图整齐很多.~修正

[Hard]
改名叫normal,然后insane改名叫hard好了.~修正
关于mapset,作为hard OD感觉低了点作为normal HD又太高了……我建议降3格HD做normal好了.~修正
00:39:075 - 这线干吗用的,没看懂……
00:39:343 - ^ ~都刪掉了
如果上面两条线就是为了加一格音量的话那真没啥必要……都听不出来……

[Rox's Hard]
00:42:696 (1) - 在这放个note后面再接spinner会不会更好呢,前面也是这样做的.~修正
Just like 00:25:529 (4,1) .
其他挺好的.

[Insane]
OD-1,HD-1 or2.本来这首歌也不适合作难,没必要勉强做个insane的mapset.做hard就好了.~修正
节奏比较散的歌OD高了打起来非常非常非常不爽.~知道了!!
00:39:075 - 同hard.
00:39:343 - ^~都刪掉了
摆放方面说实话有些单调,可以参考你的guest diff,多用一些造型的slider.~好的

大概就这些.
感謝~
subarasikibuta
star for IKU and the nice map :)
Topic Starter
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3kinnagi wrote:

star for IKU and the nice map :)
thanks for your star~ :)
Shockwave
The second ending of Index :3

Star and good luck with your first beatmap :)
Topic Starter
a2823282

Shockwave wrote:

The second ending of Index :3

Star and good luck with your first beatmap :)
thank you~ :)
Clare
來晚了 抱歉><"

[Easy]
恩..把Song setup-audio裡的lead-in 條到0
00:29:821 (5) - new combo
01:02:546 (1,2,3) - 怎麼突然間距變大了?
00:39:209 (T) - 這條音量線擺到Slider末端00:39:477 去是沒問題的爾且比較好,note把線放在前面是防止點早了但是slider不會有點早的問題 所以放上去沒問題=w=
我覺得easy難度note不要疊超過2個會比較好:3

[Normal]
00:29:821 (2) - 把這Slider改成一個note?然後00:30:357 (3) 放到00:30:089來,結尾00:31:430
00:47:525 (7) - 這個也是?改成一個note然後後面的00:48:061 放到00:47:793來 在這00:48:061折返,在00:48:329 結尾
01:08:716 (8) - 為什麼要用1/4拍呢?1/2拍不好嗎?

[Rox's Hard]
00:11:043 (T) - let the green line before the note
nice diff

[Hard]
很好,對我來說沒問題!

nice map!
star!
Topic Starter
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Clare wrote:

來晚了 抱歉><"

[Easy]
恩..把Song setup-audio裡的lead-in 條到0
00:29:821 (5) - new combo
01:02:546 (1,2,3) - 怎麼突然間距變大了?(改間距後忘記改這邊 :o )
00:39:209 (T) - 這條音量線擺到Slider末端00:39:477 去是沒問題的爾且比較好,note把線放在前面是防止點早了但是slider不會有點早的問題 所以放上去沒問題=w=
我覺得easy難度note不要疊超過2個會比較好:3

[Normal]
00:29:821 (2) - 把這Slider改成一個note?然後00:30:357 (3) 放到00:30:089來,結尾00:31:430
00:47:525 (7) - 這個也是?改成一個note然後後面的00:48:061 放到00:47:793來 在這00:48:061折返,在00:48:329 結尾
01:08:716 (8) - 為什麼要用1/4拍呢?1/2拍不好嗎?

[Rox's Hard]
00:11:043 (T) - let the green line before the note
nice diff

[Hard]
很好,對我來說沒問題!

nice map!
star!
修正完畢
感謝~ :)
IceBeam
Hi.

[Timing Points]
They must start and end at currently notes.
00:11:043 (x),00:43:769 (x) and etc.

[Easy]
01:05:229 - Add a note?

[Normal]
00:19:895 (1) - Better fix spacing here.It's a Normal tbh.

[Rox's Hard]
Fine.

[Hard]
00:04:740 (6) - Adding a note here will make it more rhytmy imo.
00:49:939 (4) - 1 grid right?

Good luck,star~
Louis Cyphre
[Easy]
00:11:848 - don't stack
01:21:324 - ^

[Normal]
00:43:769 - That's not hard difficulty. Please replace it as repeat slider.
01:02:412 - remove this timing section

Very nice map. Star~
Vikon
[Easy]
00:10:77 remove this timing section and make this changes on 00:02:46 (the red timing section)
00:11:848 (2,3,4,1) 檢查spacing ?
01:21:860 (1) 把這個spinner調至靜音 ?
00:39:47 這個timing section的音量可以再調右一格(再按一下方向鍵, 因為現在玩家難以清楚聽到音量有變化)

[Normal]
一般來說,normal很少使用1/4連打 (例如 00:31:966 (5,6,7) )
在00:44:105 加一個timing section (soft audio), 使00:44:306 (2,3,4) 能夠變成soft-finish? (因為連續的normal-finish實在太吵了)
01:21:860 (1) 把這個spinner調至靜音 ?

[Rox's Hard]
00:09:970 (2) add clap ?
00:10:507 (3,4) ^
00:45:379 (1,2) remove clap?
01:03:083 (2) ^
01:21:860 (1) slience this spinner?

[Hard]
00:02:460 (1) 取消finish? (個人問題,不太喜歡一開始就被歌的音量嚇住了)
00:44:574 (6,7) 把normal finish改成soft-finish ?
00:46:988 (5) 你漏了加clap ?
01:21:860 (1) 把這個spinner調至靜音?

不錯的first map, 星~!
Topic Starter
a2823282
修正

感謝~
jericho2442
[Easy]
00:38:941 (4) - new combo

[Normal]
00:05:678 (6) - new combo
00:43:769 (1,2,3,4) - this feels too blind for a normal diff, maybe make it so that it is easier to read

[Rox's hard]
00:25:663 (1) - start on red tick at 00:25:797

[hard]
fine

_________________

is this really your first map......my respect to ya and enjoy my star ;)
Topic Starter
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jericho2442 wrote:

[Easy]
00:38:941 (4) - new combo

[Normal]
00:05:678 (6) - new combo
00:43:769 (1,2,3,4) - this feels too blind for a normal diff, maybe make it so that it is easier to read

[Rox's hard]
00:25:663 (1) - start on red tick at 00:25:797

[hard]
fine

all fix~
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is this really your first map......my respect to ya and enjoy my star ;)

thanks~ :)
twallen2813380
star~
kino77
Star~
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thanks~ :)
KEMONO_old
STAR :)
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謝謝~
Kecco
Lol, this map is entirely good. It hasn't serious problems.

Offset : +4 ms = 2.464 ~ Resnap All Notes

+Star
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Kecco wrote:

Lol, this map is entirely good. It hasn't serious problems.

Offset : +4 ms = 2.464 ~ Resnap All Notes

+Star
fixed~

Thanks
Mystearica
[Hard]

00:57:454 (1) - This spinner feels like it should be mapped normally?
01:14:621 (1) - This one too
01:21:864 (1) - How about starting this spinner at 01:21:059 and finishing it on 01:23:205 then map the ending normally? You can use decreasing volume to fade out your notes ;)

[Rox's Hard]

00:25:801 (1) - 00:27:142 vocals start here again so either remove the spinner and start mapping here or end it earlier or on this place and add a couple notes to match up
01:21:864 (1) - Same suggestion on this spinner as Hard

[Normal]

00:44:176 - Switch to soft here is a little sudden imo, since you've got that 5 hit there, so maybe change to soft on 00:44:578 (3) - ?
01:21:864 (1) - Spinner same as above

[Easy]

01:21:864 (1) - same :p

整体挺好的, 加油. 第一张做到这样不容易了.
soulfear
加油加油
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