wait..... You must recheck bpn plesae
OK~roxkyuubiforever wrote:
Ps.: Can I try making a Hard for this?
fixbanvi wrote:
Hello.
modSPOILERGeneral
Timing is wrong in last half?_? I don't have timing skill. Sorry.
Anyway , I think , you should ask timing help.
And the volume of hitsounds is a bit big overal , please turn down -1 or -2.
Easy
01:13:237 (4,5,6,7) 2 grid up?(grid lv3)
Hard
I think okay.
Rox's hard
00:10:742 (4) 1 grid down?
00:15:302 (3,4,6,8)I think , the volume of these finish hitsound is big for music volume.
00:33:004 (3) 1 grid right?
01:17:260 (1) nice
Insane
00:05:914 (11) new combo?and add jump (11,12,13)? (my suggesion)
Nice map , star & gl
fixdvorak wrote:
Try bpm 111.838 / offset 2448
will go off at 81848 but It is impossible to handle after this timing cuz the change isn't flat.
To Aru > Toaru (source)
>To Aru is wrong to explain source, should be Toaru.
>On ly a few page are written as Toaru , and it was 1st uploader's fault who upload to youtube or torrent.
>If you feel nothing for "on ly" or "so me" , don't need to change.
>If I say more grammatically, Toaru is one word and rentaishi(連体詞) in lexical category.
>That doesn't exist in English. Toaru is new word, aru is used to rentaishi and bit different from toaru.
>This will be too long to write here, but I know native English speaker who can explain this problem.
>So talk with me in Japanese or let me get him to talk with.
>Well Number is Power? BATs are lazy to replace most of them? I welcome any grammatical rebuttal to this.
修正Neethime wrote:
:D IKU~这歌好听啊
Pink words:You should fix this
Black words:Just suggestions
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[General]
试着在一些起始音的地方加finish音效(easy和hard里有些少)
[Easy]
副歌后面的normal音效也用和副歌相同的音量吧
从开到42秒这段为什么不加hitsound呢?试着加些whistle上去(这段的音量也可以试着+10?)暫時先不加 因為照banvi大的說法這裡hitsounds會太大聲
00:46:976 (5,1,2) - spacing,你不能在easy里放跳啊...orz~沒發現這裡有跳
01:21:848 (1) - 在01:26:408 结束
[Rox's Hard]
Fine~
[Hard]
00:12:373 (4) - 左一格,下一格
01:17:288 (1) - 同easy
[Insane]
00:17:201 (7) - new combo
00:40:270 (6) - ^
01:08:168 (7) - ^
01:21:848 (1) - 同easy
Nice map.
+Star
thanks~Frill wrote:
[General]
- index (4).jpg is resize 1024x768..As long as it see 1023x767~fix
- Please unite all dif kiai time. ~fix
[Easy]
00:11:031 - I think that this green line is needless. (It is adjusted with offset. )~I changed the red line volume
00:40:002 (5,6) - 1 grid down?~fix
[Rox's Hard]
00:56:339 (1) - ah..remove new combo?~fix
01:13:505 (1) - ^~fix
01:21:820 (1) - Volume is Please make it to the lowered feeling. ~fix
[Insane]
00:18:006 (8) - new combo~I temporarily set the new combo at 00:17:201 (7)
good map!
已修改~NatsumeRin wrote:
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
[General]
你用的video并没有分离掉音轨,请把video消音以减少文件大小,这是必须的。另外不确定中文字幕是否合适…… ~消音
把roxkyuubiforever加进tags,其他如果你想加的话还可以参考若干电磁炮图的tags~OK
offset:+12,不排除BPM有误的可能~OK BPM我再問問其他人看看
kiai线和变换音量/音效不能用同一根绿线,请在kiai前加线来变更音效/音量然后以相同的音效进入kiai,以及之前Colin提过的音效绿线不要踩note的问题好像还没改掉。~OK 我以為是只有純改音量才不能踩 抱歉
don't change volume/hitsound sample and kiai time with the same timing point.
如果你愿意去要一套电磁炮皮肤效果应该更好。
[Easy]
1.4 Slider Velocity+ 0.8x Distance Spacing对Easy来讲高了(尤其对比你1.4+0.7x的Hard),另这个难度中也有不少的段落更像Normal~OK
HP-1, OD-1~OK
00:14:787 (1) - 不对称的很严重~OK
00:37:856 (2,3) - 关掉grid snap左移到1正下方~將排版改了一下
00:41:075 (1) - 延长到00:44:294?(finish)~OK
[Hard]
为什么不用grid level 3呢?很多小的spacing不等,不一一指出了,例:00:30:345 (3,4,5) - 这里最明显~OK
00:33:296 (1) - spinner过短了~OK
00:58:242 (3,4) - 这两个不能同形状就真的很违和。。~OK
01:17:288 (1) - 这个spinner很没语言……至少等到最后变速段了再弄?转10秒这个压力很大啊~OK
[Rox's Hard]
00:15:323 (3) - this slider is offscreen... should fix.
01:21:848 (1) - end this at 01:26:676?
[Insane]
除了难度设定外没有感到这是Insane其實是因為之前看到有人發3個難度最好是easy/normal和hard insane比較好 才把他從hard改成insane 想辦法把它改難中~
00:47:244 - 加一拍?~OK
01:21:848 (1) - 结束在01:26:676~OK
实话讲我觉得hitsounds mod还言之过早。。。尤其Hard和Insane的mapset是否有必要再考虑下。另外也请不要什么发言都给kud,我mod总感觉有点不爽= =……这个感觉具体化而言就是一种我把一个mod按从[General]到[Insane]拆5个贴发出来的冲动…… 知道了!!(有一個是不小心按到的) 抱歉>< 面壁反省中
感謝~kiddly wrote:
IKU的歌……不错呢
[Easy]
00:11:043 (1,2) - 我看了下整张图二分拍有spacing的地方就三个,你不如把他们全都stack了这样整张图整齐很多.~修正
[Hard]
改名叫normal,然后insane改名叫hard好了.~修正
关于mapset,作为hard OD感觉低了点作为normal HD又太高了……我建议降3格HD做normal好了.~修正
00:39:075 - 这线干吗用的,没看懂……
00:39:343 - ^ ~都刪掉了
如果上面两条线就是为了加一格音量的话那真没啥必要……都听不出来……
[Rox's Hard]
00:42:696 (1) - 在这放个note后面再接spinner会不会更好呢,前面也是这样做的.~修正
Just like 00:25:529 (4,1) .
其他挺好的.
[Insane]
OD-1,HD-1 or2.本来这首歌也不适合作难,没必要勉强做个insane的mapset.做hard就好了.~修正
节奏比较散的歌OD高了打起来非常非常非常不爽.~知道了!!
00:39:075 - 同hard.
00:39:343 - ^~都刪掉了
摆放方面说实话有些单调,可以参考你的guest diff,多用一些造型的slider.~好的
大概就这些.
thanks for your star~3kinnagi wrote:
star for IKU and the nice map
thank you~Shockwave wrote:
The second ending of Index :3
Star and good luck with your first beatmap
修正完畢Clare wrote:
來晚了 抱歉><"
[Easy]
恩..把Song setup-audio裡的lead-in 條到0
00:29:821 (5) - new combo
01:02:546 (1,2,3) - 怎麼突然間距變大了?(改間距後忘記改這邊 )
00:39:209 (T) - 這條音量線擺到Slider末端00:39:477 去是沒問題的爾且比較好,note把線放在前面是防止點早了但是slider不會有點早的問題 所以放上去沒問題=w=
我覺得easy難度note不要疊超過2個會比較好:3
[Normal]
00:29:821 (2) - 把這Slider改成一個note?然後00:30:357 (3) 放到00:30:089來,結尾00:31:430
00:47:525 (7) - 這個也是?改成一個note然後後面的00:48:061 放到00:47:793來 在這00:48:061折返,在00:48:329 結尾
01:08:716 (8) - 為什麼要用1/4拍呢?1/2拍不好嗎?
[Rox's Hard]
00:11:043 (T) - let the green line before the note
nice diff
[Hard]
很好,對我來說沒問題!
nice map!
star!
jericho2442 wrote:
[Easy]
00:38:941 (4) - new combo
[Normal]
00:05:678 (6) - new combo
00:43:769 (1,2,3,4) - this feels too blind for a normal diff, maybe make it so that it is easier to read
[Rox's hard]
00:25:663 (1) - start on red tick at 00:25:797
[hard]
fine
all fix~
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is this really your first map......my respect to ya and enjoy my star
thanks~
fixed~Kecco wrote:
Lol, this map is entirely good. It hasn't serious problems.
Offset : +4 ms = 2.464 ~ Resnap All Notes
+Star