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Leorda
Recheck time

[General]
1) Delete "D.gray-man" in tags since that word in Source
2) Some preview point is diffrent on each diff, please set it

[Skin]
You need to add spinner-bg, and spinner-metre. Looks awful without that

[Timing]
Delete all of timing point and change Offset to 550, don't forget to resnap all notes

[Light]
There's some missing clap I gave it to you

[Dark]
There's some missing clap I gave it to you
01:11:633 (1) - Try delete the object at 01:11:442 (5), and then, move this spinner to 01:11:441 and extend this spinner 01:12:779

Well, good job ^u^
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
[Light]
There's some missing clap I gave it to you
O_o, where? I rechecked it, it's okey.
[Dark]
There's some missing clap I gave it to you
Oh, sorry, fixed.
Thanks a lot, Spinner BG and metre added! :3
KIA
Hello!
[Overall]
Не видно курсора во время спина D:
[Light]
Убери 1,2,3 countdown
Размеры кружков можно и самые большие поставить
Overall Difficulty где то на 4 сделай, а то с таким спейсингом ничо не понять.
1/2 биты (типа 00:39:329 (1,2) - ) лучше заменить на слайдеры.
00:42:960 (1,2,3,4) - сделай это ближе к центру.
00:25:008 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:27:110 (2) - ^
00:28:639 (6) - ^ ....
в общем проверь спейсинг.
[Dark]
00:15:836 (1) - spacing
00:21:569 (1) - mb new combo?
00:31:696 (2) - 1 вверх
00:32:843 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:42:970 (1) - add 1 more repeat
00:44:499 (1) - remove new combo
00:49:467 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - не спамь 1-комбами D:
00:56:346 (2,3,4,1) - spacing
[... tha last one]

00:47:174 (5) - unexpected x0.5
остальное гуд.
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
Hello!
[Overall]
Не видно курсора во время спина D: Поменяй его.
[Light]
Убери 1,2,3 countdown - no.
Размеры кружков можно и самые большие поставить - fixed
Overall Difficulty где то на 4 сделай, а то с таким спейсингом ничо не понять. fixed
1/2 биты (типа 00:39:329 (1,2) - ) лучше заменить на слайдеры. no.
00:42:960 (1,2,3,4) - сделай это ближе к центру. fixed
00:25:008 (1,2,3) - spacing fixed
00:27:110 (2) - ^ fixed
00:28:639 (6) - ^ .... fixed
в общем проверь спейсинг. fixed
[Dark]
00:15:836 (1) - spacing fixed
00:21:569 (1) - mb new combo? fixed
00:31:696 (2) - 1 вверх fixed
00:32:843 (1,2,3,4) - ^ fixed
00:42:970 (1) - add 1 more repeat fixed
00:44:499 (1) - remove new combo fixed
00:49:467 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - не спамь 1-комбами D: fixed D: XD
00:56:346 (2,3,4,1) - spacing fixed
[... tha last one]

00:47:174 (5) - unexpected x0.5 fixed
остальное гуд.
Спасибо огромное!))) Кудосу~
IceBeam

KIA wrote:

[... tha last one]

00:47:174 (5) - unexpected x0.5
остальное гуд.
Probably...

I'll think bout it,thank you.
wmfchris
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
thanks wmfchris :3

Moved to Pending
DJPop
- Why don't add MV?
- Hitcircles are hard to read.


~Light~
Add some Kiai times.
00:31:123 (1,2) - too far
00:37:237 (1,2,1) - too close

~Dark~
Add some Kiai times.

~SadKangaroo's Flower~
00:41:060 (5,6,7) - too far
00:52:525 (3) - remove clap at middle note
00:58:448 (6) - add clap
01:05:901 (5) - add clap at last note
01:21:187 (3) - ^
01:27:684 (1) - silence it


+Star
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
- Why don't add MV?
is it necessary? =/
- Hitcircles are hard to read.
oke, the second person, who said it. I deleted chess style hitcircles :3
~Light~
Add some Kiai times. Added
00:31:123 (1,2) - too far fixed
00:37:237 (1,2,1) - too close fixed
~Dark~
Add some Kiai times. Added
~SadKangaroo's Flower~
00:41:060 (5,6,7) - too far
00:52:525 (3) - remove clap at middle note
00:58:448 (6) - add clap
01:05:901 (5) - add clap at last note
01:21:187 (3) - ^
01:27:684 (1) - silence it
I will tell him, it will be fixed soon!
Thanks a lot Kudosu~
IceBeam

DJPop wrote:

~SadKangaroo's Flower~
00:41:060 (5,6,7) - too far
00:52:525 (3) - remove clap at middle note
00:58:448 (6) - add clap
01:05:901 (5) - add clap at last note
01:21:187 (3) - ^
01:27:684 (1) - silence it



00:41:060 (5,6,7) - There're so many absolutely similar moments.I see no reason to change something here.

Thanks for hitsound suggestions.Fixed~
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

  • • Delete the osb file, then "Full Submission"
    • Move the preview point here 01:01:696

    • Why don't you add the video?

[Light]


  • • Slider Velocity: 0,80
    • Distance Spacing: 1,0x (and fix the spacing)

[Dark]


Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
• Delete the osb file, then "Full Submission" done.
• Move the preview point here 01:01:696 done
• Why don't you add the video?
Is it necessary? =/
• Slider Velocity: 0,80 fixed
• Distance Spacing: 1,0x (and fix the spacing) fixed too
Inherit Previous Timing changed in all diffs, fully snapped Light diff.

Thanks for modding and star, kudosu~
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[Light]
slider tick rate: 1 or 2
need more hitsounds imo.
use some sliders instead of 1/2 circles.
00:25:008 (1,2,3) - use a slider instead.
00:31:123 (1,2,3) - ^
01:05:327 (1) - remove new combo.
01:08:384 (4) - end 1/4 earlier.
01:13:161 (1,1) - spacing.
01:13:925 (1) - remove new combo.

[Dark]
...this diff is a Normal or a Hard? it's even harder than most of the hards.
make the circle size larger. HP drain Rate -2, Overall -1...
Slider velocity:1.4 Slider tick rate: 1 and fix spacing then
00:04:180 (4) - break after this note is too short, remove plz.
need more hitsounds imo.
00:52:524 (5) - new combo
00:55:199 (1) - remove new combo

[Snowy taiko]
fine. but... kiai?

[SadKangaroo's Flower]
00:38:958 (2,3) - mirror
00:44:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - i don't like them
00:48:703 (4) - remove.
00:59:786 (1) - remove new combo
01:15:455 (1) - 1 grid right.
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
[Light]
slider tick rate: 1 or 2 Agreed
need more hitsounds imo. X
use some sliders instead of 1/2 circles. I don't think that it is necessary :3
00:25:008 (1,2,3) - use a slider instead. ^
00:31:123 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:05:327 (1) - remove new combo. removed
01:08:384 (4) - end 1/4 earlier. O_O
01:13:161 (1,1) - spacing. fixed
01:13:925 (1) - remove new combo.removed
...this diff is a Normal or a Hard? it's even harder than most of the hards. <--- This is Dark LoL :3 It is in the middle of Hard and Insane.
make the circle size larger. HP drain Rate -2, Overall -1... If someone said the same, i'll down HP and Overall.
Slider velocity:1.4 Slider tick rate: 1 and fix spacing then. I think it's good :3
00:04:180 (4) - break after this note is too short, remove plz. No problem, removed!
need more hitsounds imo. =/
00:52:524 (5) - new combo oke
00:55:199 (1) - remove new combo why?
Thanks a lot, kudosu~
IceBeam

NatsumeRin wrote:


[SadKangaroo's Flower]
[color=#0000FF]00:38:958 (2,3) - mirror
fixed
00:44:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - i don't like them stood
00:48:703 (4) - remove. stood
00:59:786 (1) - remove new combo fixed
01:15:455 (1) - 1 grid right. fixed
Thank you
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
SadKangaroo and wmfchris Diffs, reupload.
anonymous_old
It's better than what was it.
orioncomet
[General]
- If you don't mind please add Audio Lead In at last 500.

[Dark]

[Snowy taiko]

[SadKangaroo's Flower]
- +1 overall difficulty please.

Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
[General]
- If you don't mind please add Audio Lead In at last 500.
I'm sorry for stupid question... but... what is it? =/

Dark and Snowy Taiko fixed

About SadKangaroo's Diff, i'll fix it, if he want :3

Thanks for modding <3
IceBeam

Louis Cyphre wrote:

About SadKangaroo's Diff, i'll fix it, if he want :3

Thanks for modding <3
Of course,i don't mind.You may increase.
Stake
Хорошая мапа.
Звездец. :3
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
Of course,i don't mind.You may increase.
Increased.

Stake

Спасибо браТец :3
uranuss8600
;)
mengjian1998
star
Sumeragi Amane
star~
OoAiroO_old
star~
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
Oh Guys thank you very much <3
Starrodkirby86
~

[Dark]:
Add an audio lead-in of about 1-2 seconds.
00:14:116 (x) - Make a note here? The combo underspacing is a bit odd.
00:20:804 (1,2,1) - I'm not going to be really harsh on this, but to me, it doesn't feel very...smooth. You have a large jump, yeah. I like that. But then we're going into the next (1), and the gap between the time, not to mention the close spacing makes it feel...kind of weird. Its not wrong, but it just feels funny.
00:25:008 (5) - Nazi: Move 1 Grid Level Right on Level 3? XD
00:53:289 (2) - Suggestion: Horizontal Flip?
01:06:091 (1,2) - The spacing is here too close. ): They're spaced like 1/2 notes, but they are actually 1/1.

[Snowy taiko]:
(Maybe it's best to ask Chris about what to do here, if you are unsure)
Perhaps capitalize the t in "taiko"?
Maybe lower the Slider Velocity by .1 or .2? If everyone can read it fine and all, then all right, you don't need to. This is only a mere suggestion. XD

[SadKangaroo's Flower]:
01:12:588 (1,2,3) - Somehow I don't feel a slowdown fits in an action-filled area here. It's a bit unexpected. XD What do you think? :s

Pretty good, pretty good. Lovely spinner, as well; it plays just nicely. Star.
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
[Dark]:
Add an audio lead-in of about 1-2 seconds. Added
00:14:116 (x) - Make a note here? The combo underspacing is a bit odd. Added
00:20:804 (1,2,1) - I'm not going to be really harsh on this, but to me, it doesn't feel very...smooth. You have a large jump, yeah. I like that. But then we're going into the next (1), and the gap between the time, not to mention the close spacing makes it feel...kind of weird. Its not wrong, but it just feels funny. Fixed.
00:25:008 (5) - Nazi: Move 1 Grid Level Right on Level 3? XD Moved
00:53:289 (2) - Suggestion: Horizontal Flip? You are wright
01:06:091 (1,2) - The spacing is here too close. ): They're spaced like 1/2 notes, but they are actually 1/1. Fixed
[Snowy taiko]:
(Maybe it's best to ask Chris about what to do here, if you are unsure)
Perhaps capitalize the t in "taiko"?
Maybe lower the Slider Velocity by .1 or .2? If everyone can read it fine and all, then all right, you don't need to. This is only a mere suggestion. XD

[SadKangaroo's Flower]:
01:12:588 (1,2,3) - Somehow I don't feel a slowdown fits in an action-filled area here. It's a bit unexpected. XD What do you think? :s
I'll tell them. It will be fixed soon! :D

Pretty good, pretty good. Lovely spinner, as well; it plays just nicely. Star.
Kudosu~ Thanks a lot man ; )
Lizbeth
Hi =)

Timing
Use same offset for all diffs

Song Setup
White combo color is a bit hard to see ;_;

SadKangaroo's Flower
Nice map.. there s some change in spacing in the first part of the song, some ppl my complain, but in game play it turn easy to read for me.. so i guess is fine
these spots are: 00:18:894 (1,2) - 00:23:671 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 00:34:945 (3,4) - 00:41:251 (6,7)

Dark
there's a couple of objects unsnapped acording to Aimod, please resnap all notes..
00:20:996 (2,1) - these two are too close in the chart, make it proportional with timeline
00:26:155 (6,1) - same
01:07:620 (3,4,5) - should have the same distance between circle, cuz that is what timeline reflect
theres a few more problems in spacing like this, try to recheck spacing with distance snap.

Light
01:00:549 (4) - shorten this slid by 1/2 beat, and start it at 01:00:741. Then add note at 01:00:549.

Nice work, have a star =)
IceBeam

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

[SadKangaroo's Flower]:
01:12:588 (1,2,3) - Somehow I don't feel a slowdown fits in an action-filled area here. It's a bit unexpected. XD What do you think? :s
Maybe,but that's how I'm feeling this part of song.Anyway,don't you find that 00:47:174 (5) is much harder to expect?
IceBeam

Lizbeth wrote:

SadKangaroo's Flower
Nice map.. there s some change in spacing in the first part of the song, some ppl my complain, but in game play it turn easy to read for me.. so i guess is fine
these spots are: 00:18:894 (1,2) - 00:23:671 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 00:34:945 (3,4) - 00:41:251 (6,7)
Hi Lizbeth.I think it's Insane,so it's used to be hard to read,imo =p

If there're no spacing mistakes or completely cruel moments,i'd like to hold it,as it's now.It's also up to Starrodkirby86,am I need to change smth or not.

Anyway,thanks for opinion.
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
Hi Lizbeth :3
Dark
there's a couple of objects unsnapped acording to Aimod, please resnap all notes..
O_o

Use same offset for all diffs
Fixed
Song Setup
White combo color is a bit hard to see ;_;
changed to blue

00:20:996 (2,1) - these two are too close in the chart, make it proportional with timeline Fixed
00:26:155 (6,1) - same Fixed
01:07:620 (3,4,5) - should have the same distance between circle, cuz that is what timeline reflect Fixed
theres a few more problems in spacing like this, try to recheck spacing with distance snap. for example?
Thanks for modding and star. Kudosu!~
Starrodkirby86
Yeah, when I played it, there were barely any problems.

Anyway, with all that taken care of...
Clare
nice map~
star :D
Real1
Real1 modding as requested... except it's bubbled. And I don't think I will find any errors since Sir Starrodkirby86 has bubbled this. :)
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre

Real1 wrote:

Real1 modding as requested... except it's bubbled. And I don't think I will find any errors since Sir Starrodkirby86 has bubbled this. :)
Oh man, you are too late ; )
Thanks for star :D

To Clare
Thanks for star =)
deepsea
Sorry but I have to pop bubble.<_<

Light

Overall nothing wrong but ahhhh...The map with this overall difficulty and this note distance is really hard to read and first player hit 100s.

I suggest to rearrange them.

Dark/Snowy

Notes aren't all snapped, also what's 2nd red line for?

Starred.
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
Sorry but I have to pop bubble.<_<
Т__Т You killed my mood

Overall nothing wrong but ahhhh...The map with this overall difficulty and this note distance is really hard to read and first player hit 100s.
Are you kidding? =_=

Don't say, that i'm not "first player" in osu!.
Notes aren't all snapped, also what's 2nd red line for?
Nah... resnapped some unsnapped notes, check it =_=
And fixed 2nd red line.
deepsea

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Т__Т You killed my mood

James wrote:

I aim my maps to be the best one submitted upon ranking.
Not because of "I submit maps just for it to get ranked."
Think as this way and be happy.


Louis Cyphre wrote:

Are you kidding? =_=
SPOILER
[attachment=0:f3d93]screenshot087.png[/attachment:f3d93]
Don't say, that i'm not "first player" in osu!.
Oh I am serious, as talked in osu pm.

Nvm, this isn't unrankable stuff, just make a map newer friendly.

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Nah... resnapped some unsnapped notes, check it =_=
And fixed 2nd red line.
You forgot [Snowy taiko] one. >_>
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