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NIRGILIS - SNOW KISS (TV size)

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Louis Cyphre
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 28 апреля 2010 г. at 20:28:08

Artist: NIRGILIS
Title: SNOW KISS (TV size)
Source: D.Gray-Man
Tags: Allan Kanda SadKangaroo Ending wmfchris
BPM: 157
Filesize: 3981kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dark (4,06 stars, 130 notes)
  2. Light (2,15 stars, 103 notes)
  3. SadKangaroo's Flower (4,98 stars, 221 notes)
  4. Snowy taiko (4,89 stars, 447 notes)
Download: NIRGILIS - SNOW KISS (TV size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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D,Gray-Man first ending single Snow Kiss

Enjoy :3

Thanks to:
SadKangaroo ThunderStorm wmfchris Leorda KIA DJPop xxheroxx NatsumeRin orioncomet Starrodkirby86 Lizbeth
for modding :3


Special thanks to:
SadKangaroo and wmfchris
for guest difficults :3
Last edited by Louis Cyphre , edited 36 times in total.
IceBeam
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Please welcome my guest difficulty "SadKangaroo's Flower"

And it's going to be ~Insane

Starred~

Download: NIRGILIS - SNOW KISS (TV size) (Louis Cyphre) [SadKangaroo's Flower].osu
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
Thanks for diff and star :3

Kudosu~
IceBeam
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Some suggestions:

[Main]
  1. Delete .osb file.
  2. Add Preview Point to your difficulties.(Timing--> Set Current Position as Preview Point)
  3. Tag:I bet you can add the nicknames of guest diffs. beatmappers.(Don't forget that all the tags must be similar in each difficulty)
  4. Tag:Remove comas,and use spaces between words.
Some oppinions:

[Light]
  • Everything seems readable,but i see some little mistakes with New Combo.
  1. 00:21:946 (5) -
  2. 00:32:838 (5) -
  3. 00:45:068 (5) -
  4. 01:05:705 (1) - place it to (2)
  5. 01:07:234 (1) - ^
  6. 01:13:921 (2) -
  7. 01:20:036 (5) -
Dark
  • Same problems with NC as in the "Light" difficulty.
  1. 00:03:225 (3) - (probably)
  2. 00:15:837 (4) -
  3. 00:21:569 (6) -
  4. 00:26:155 (1) - You may continue or if you want a new combo,please follow the next suggestion.
  5. 00:26:729 (2) - ^ Here comes the New Combo.
  6. 00:29:786 (3) -
  7. 00:35:901 (4) -
  8. 00:37:238 (6) -
  9. 00:38:958 (7) -
  10. 00:39:913 (1) - Continue.
  11. 00:40:295 (2) - ^ Here comes the New Combo.
  12. 00:41:824 (6) - It starts here,not at 00:42:015 (1) -
  13. 00:42:971 (4) -
  14. 00:43:926 (1) - I have no idea about this one,but i'd continued it or put it in combo with 00:44:499 (1) -
  15. From 00:47:174 (5) to 00:49:085 (2) - It's ONE combo.
  16. 00:55:582 (5) - I'd choosed this one,but you could use it on 00:55:200 (3) -
  17. 00:59:786 (3) -
  18. 01:04:754 (3) -
  19. From 01:12:971 (1) - to 01:13:544 (1) - I believe it's one combo,and new starts at 01:13:926 (2) -
  20. 01:19:085 (1) - Continue.
  21. 01:20:041 (2) -


    You need to allign some sliders/circles,especially when they approaching at the same place:
  22. 00:03:225 (3) -
  23. 01:05:327 (4) -
  24. 01:17:557 (2) -
  25. 01:18:321 (1) -

    If you don't want to use auto-put,try to allign manually,by switching off distance/grid snap.

    I won't suggest about placement,but there are some doubtful circle locations.For example: Spacing between [00:07:429 (1) - 00:08:194 (2)] and [00:08:194 (2) - 00:09:722 (3)] is similar,although timing spaces are much different.
Anyway,this is just my opinion.I wish you good luck with this map.
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
Fixed.
thanks
Derfas13
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Derfas13
~star~
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
~star~
thanks~
Thunderstorm
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Thunderstorm
Ку
Строчку source перенеси в tags
Если над, могу скинуть видео, сунь ПМ если что

General - offset=12.762

[light]
00:32:634 (4) - нубы запнутся 100% если уж взял вокальную партию в изи, не делай там внезапных ВТФов))
00:34:545 - короткий для изи, закончи здесь - 00:36:838
00:40:660 - ^, 00:42:570
00:59:768 (1) - зачем тут новое комбо?
01:00:532 - замести чем-нибудь, пожалей нубов
01:07:220 (6) - новое комбо

[dark]
00:08:194 (2) - спэйсинг
00:20:996 (2,3,4,5) - ^
%) в общем всю сложность под респейсинг.
Можешь не делать одинаковым, но не меняй спейсинг мид-комбо и не делай огромных джампов, эт не инсэйн
Олсо, можешь поснимать половину новых комб, ток не рандомизируй сильно, просто такой спам на харде не нужен (а это не нормал уж точно)

[Flower]
Чисто
Louis Cyphre
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General - offset=12.762
Ты в этом точно уверен?
[light]
00:32:634 (4) - нубы запнутся 100% если уж взял вокальную партию в изи, не делай там внезапных ВТФов)) Fixed
00:34:545 - короткий для изи, закончи здесь - 00:36:838 Fixed
00:40:660 - ^, 00:42:570 Fixed
00:59:768 (1) - зачем тут новое комбо? Deleted
01:00:532 - замести чем-нибудь, пожалей нубов Fixed
01:07:220 (6) - новое комбо Fixed
[dark]
00:08:194 (2) - спэйсинг Fixed
00:20:996 (2,3,4,5) - ^ Fixed
%) в общем всю сложность под респейсинг.
Можешь не делать одинаковым, но не меняй спейсинг мид-комбо и не делай огромных джампов, эт не инсэйн
Олсо, можешь поснимать половину новых комб, ток не рандомизируй сильно, просто такой спам на харде не нужен (а это не нормал уж точно) Fixed
Спасибо за звезду и моддинг Получи кудосу :3
Thunderstorm
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Thunderstorm

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Ты в этом точно уверен?
НУ с твоим оффсетом у меня при игре расхождение ~25мс)
Louis Cyphre
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НУ с твоим оффсетом у меня при игре расхождение ~25мс)
У меня такого нету. Посмотрим что другие скажут.
wmfchris
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[general] Not suggested to use white since it's a bit confusing with the beautiful BG image.

[SadKan]
0:45:455 (4) spacing
1:14:117 (1,2) left 1 grid?

[Dark]
0:24:913 (4,5) spacing
0:57:111 (3) Pkacing mistake? Make back 1/4 beat.

[Light]
0:34:176 (1) Remove new combo
0:40:290 (1) ^
1:05:322 (1) Remove new combo and maybe new combo at (3)

Nice song. May I make a taiko diff?
star
Louis Cyphre
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[general] Not suggested to use white since it's a bit confusing with the beautiful BG image.
Special for that, i made chess style circles :3 I think it's not confusing =) If someone said the same, i'll change the color

[Dark]
0:24:913 (4,5) spacing Fixed
0:57:111 (3) Pkacing mistake? Make back 1/4 beat. Fixed
[Light]
0:34:176 (1) Remove new combo Fixed
0:40:290 (1) ^ Fixed
1:05:322 (1) Remove new combo and maybe new combo at (3) Fixed
[SadKan]
0:45:455 (4) spacing
1:14:117 (1,2) left 1 grid?
I'll tell him :3 It will be fixed soon.




Nice song. May I make a taiko diff?
Of course ^__^ I'll be glad)

Kudosu~
Thanks for modding and star :)
IceBeam
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wmfchris wrote:

[general] Not suggested to use white since it's a bit confusing with the beautiful BG image.

[SadKan]
0:45:455 (4) spacing
1:14:117 (1,2) left 1 grid?

0:45:455 (4) - it was purposely.As you can see,I'm moving them further one by one.If anyone else would mark it,then I'll fix.
1:14:117 (1,2) - i can't see any defect here.
misa_old
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GJ louic lol
wmfchris
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To SadKan : 1:14:117 should be no problem, sorry for that ;_;

So I'll put it in my taiko queue <3
IceBeam
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wmfchris wrote:

To SadKan : 1:14:117 should be no problem, sorry for that ;_;

So I'll put it in my taiko queue <3

No prob,we're waiting for your taiko difficulty.Good luck with it.
Louis Cyphre
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So I'll put it in my taiko queue
:3 Good luck with diff.


Thanks for star misa :3
Mastodonio
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Awesomeness ^^~
Star'd!
Leorda
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Privet!

Your diff needs more hitsound, all my mods are hitsound help

[Light]
00:12:775 (1) - Add a finish instead?
00:24:240 (5) - Allign with 4?
00:25:004 (1) - Add a finish instead?
00:27:679 (4) - Add a clap?
00:33:794 (4) - ^
00:39:908 (3) - ^
00:49:463 (1) - Add a finish instead?
00:55:577 (1) - ^
01:00:545 (1) - This spinner is waaaaaaay too short for beginner player, it's more difficult for begginer player. Try replace this spinner to slider?
01:00:545 (1) - Add a finish?
01:13:921 (1) - Add a finish at thes start of slider?
01:17:360 (2) - Add a clap?
01:20:036 (1) - Add a clap at repeating slider?
01:22:711 (1) - Add a clap?
01:23:476 (3) - ^

[Dark]
The Overall Difficulty is too high, decrease it?
00:12:780 (3) - Add a finish at the start of slider and add a clap at repeating slider?
00:15:264 (3) - Add a clap at end of slider?
00:15:837 (4) - New combo here?
00:18:512 (1) - Add a clap?
00:20:805 (1) - ^
00:21:569 (3) - Add a clap at the start of slider?
00:25:009 (5) - Move the new combo to 00:26:729 (1)?
00:33:799 (4) - Add a clap?
00:34:563 (2) - ^
00:36:474 (2) - Add a clap at the end of slider?
00:37:238 (1) - Add a finish at the start of slider?
00:38:958 (1) - Add a clap at the end of slider?
00:39:913 (3) - Add a clap?
00:40:678 (2) - ^
00:41:442 (4) - ^
00:44:499 (1) - ^
00:46:028 (3) - Add a clap at the start of slider?
00:49:467 (1) - Add a finish?
00:55:582 (1) - ^
01:00:550 (1) - ^
01:10:487 (2) - Add a clap?
01:11:251 (4) - ^
01:11:633 (1) - Add a finish?
01:13:544 (3) - ^
01:13:926 (1) - Add a finish at the start of slider?
01:16:983 (1) - Add a clap at the end of slider?
01:20:041 (1) - ^
01:22:716 (1) - Add a clap?
01:23:480 (4) - ^

[SadKangaroo's Flower]
Click the spoilerbox, it's too long
SPOILER
00:12:780 (1) - Add a finish?
00:13:162 (3) - Add a clap?
00:13:926 (6) - ^
00:14:499 (2) - Add a clap at the end of slider?
00:15:072 (5) - ^
00:16:219 (3) - Add a clap?
00:16:983 (6) - ^
00:17:557 (2) - Add a clap at the end of slider?
00:18:130 (5) - ^
00:19:276 (3) - Add a clap?
00:20:040 (6) - ^
00:20:614 (2) - Add a clap at the end of slider?
00:21:187 (5) - ^
00:22:334 (3) - Add a clap?
00:22:907 (7) - Add a clap at the end of slider?
00:25:009 (1) - Add a finish at the start of slider and add a clap at the end slider?
00:25:773 (4) - Add a clap at the end of slider?
00:27:302 (3) - ^
00:28:066 (2) - ^
00:28:830 (5) - Add a clap at repeating slider?
00:30:741 (4) - Add a clap?
00:31:123 (1) - Add a clap at the end of slider?
00:32:270 (4) - Add a clap at the start of slider?
00:33:416 (2) - Add a clap at the end of slider?
00:34:563 (4) - Add a clap?
00:35:327 (5) - Add a clap at the start of slider?
00:36:092 (2) - Add a clap at the start and end of slider?
00:37:238 (1) - Add a clap at the end of slider?
00:38:002 (4) - ^
00:39:531 (3) - ^
00:40:678 (2) - Add a clap?
00:41:442 (7) - ^
00:42:206 (3) - Add a clap at the start of slider?
00:42:971 (4) - Add a clap?
00:43:353 (1) - Add a clap at the end of slider?
00:44:499 (6) - Add a clap?
00:45:264 (3) - ^
00:45:646 (5) - Add a clap at repeating slider?
00:46:792 (2) - Add a clap?
00:48:321 (2) - ^
00:49:467 (5) - Add a finish at the start of slider?
00:51:378 (7) - Add a clap?
00:52:525 (3) - Add a clap at all repeating slider?
00:54:436 (5) - Add a clap?
00:55:009 (8) - ^
00:55:582 (3) - Add a finish at the start of slider?
00:58:066 (4) - Add a clap?
01:02:079 (2,5) - ^
01:03:225 (1) - Add a clap at repeating slider?
01:04:372 (3) - Add a clap?
01:04:754 (1) - Add a clap at the end of slider?
01:05:901 (5) - Add a clap at the start of slider?
01:07:429 (7) - Add a clap?
01:08:194 (2) - ^
01:08:576 (4) - Add a clap at repeating slider?
01:09:722 (6) - Add a clap?
01:10:487 (3) - ^
01:10:869 (5) - Add a clap at the end of slider?
01:12:779 (2) - Add a finish?
01:14:308 (2) - Add a clap?
01:14:690 (3) - Add a clap at the end of slider?
01:15:455 (1) - Add a clap at repeating slider?
01:16:601 (3) - Add a clap?
01:16:983 (1) - Add a clap at the end of slider?
01:18:130 (3) - Add a clap?
01:18:894 (5) - ^
01:20:041 (1) - Add a clap at the end of slider?
01:21:187 (3) - Add a clap at the start of slider?
01:22:716 (1) - Add a clap?
01:23:480 (5) - Add a clap at the start of slider?
01:24:244 (7) - Add a clap?
01:25:009 (2,5) - ^
01:26:537 (2,4) - ^

I will recheck if you already fix all of them. Remember, fix all of them, or i'll be mad at you
Nice song
STAR
IceBeam
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Thanks for suggestions.Actually,it was purposely not to put hitsounds in my map.

But maybe i'll change my mind,thanks anyway.
Louis Cyphre
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Привет Привет))

[Light]
00:12:775 (1) - Add a finish instead? Fixed
00:24:240 (5) - Allign with 4? Fixed
00:25:004 (1) - Add a finish instead? Fixed
00:27:679 (4) - Add a clap? Fixed
00:33:794 (4) - ^ Fixed
00:39:908 (3) - ^ Fixed
00:49:463 (1) - Add a finish instead? Fixed
00:55:577 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:00:545 (1) - This spinner is waaaaaaay too short for beginner player, it's more difficult for begginer player. Try replace this spinner to slider? Fixed
01:00:545 (1) - Add a finish? Fixed
01:13:921 (1) - Add a finish at thes start of slider? Fixed
01:17:360 (2) - Add a clap? Fixed
01:20:036 (1) - Add a clap at repeating slider? Fixed
01:22:711 (1) - Add a clap? Fixed
01:23:476 (3) - ^ Fixed

[Dark]
The Overall Difficulty is too high, decrease it? Fixed
00:12:780 (3) - Add a finish at the start of slider and add a clap at repeating slider? Fixed
00:15:264 (3) - Add a clap at end of slider? Fixed
00:15:837 (4) - New combo here? Fixed
00:18:512 (1) - Add a clap? Fixed
00:20:805 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:21:569 (3) - Add a clap at the start of slider? Fixed
00:25:009 (5) - Move the new combo to 00:26:729 (1)? Fixed
00:33:799 (4) - Add a clap? Fixed
00:34:563 (2) - ^ Fixed
00:36:474 (2) - Add a clap at the end of slider? Fixed
00:37:238 (1) - Add a finish at the start of slider? Fixed
00:38:958 (1) - Add a clap at the end of slider? Fixed
00:39:913 (3) - Add a clap? Fixed
00:40:678 (2) - ^ Fixed
00:41:442 (4) - ^ Fixed
00:44:499 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:46:028 (3) - Add a clap at the start of slider? Fixed
00:49:467 (1) - Add a finish? Fixed
00:55:582 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:00:550 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:10:487 (2) - Add a clap? Fixed
01:11:251 (4) - ^ Fixed
01:11:633 (1) - Add a finish? Fixed
01:13:544 (3) - ^ Fixed
01:13:926 (1) - Add a finish at the start of slider? Fixed
01:16:983 (1) - Add a clap at the end of slider? Fixed
01:20:041 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:22:716 (1) - Add a clap? Fixed
01:23:480 (4) - ^ Fixed
Thanks a lot. Kudosu~
IceBeam
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Leorda,I've used your suggestions.
Clapping rhytm knocks down sometimes,but in general it looks pretty normal.

Here's fixed version:

Download: NIRGILIS - SNOW KISS (TV size) (Louis Cyphre) [SadKangaroo's Flower].osu
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
All fixed, diff reuploaded.
Leorda
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Leorda
Recheck time

[General]
1) Delete "D.gray-man" in tags since that word in Source
2) Some preview point is diffrent on each diff, please set it

[Skin]
You need to add spinner-bg, and spinner-metre. Looks awful without that

[Timing]
Delete all of timing point and change Offset to 550, don't forget to resnap all notes

[Light]
There's some missing clap I gave it to you

[Dark]
There's some missing clap I gave it to you
01:11:633 (1) - Try delete the object at 01:11:442 (5), and then, move this spinner to 01:11:441 and extend this spinner 01:12:779

Well, good job ^u^
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