Kawaii Muffin wrote:

Hey

Easy
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00:28:235 (5,6,1,2) - Start NC on (5), not on (1) and dont change the pattern, make it like this: ok

00:31:372 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Start NC on (3) and you should make it so it is like an outline of a square, rather than a weird spiral, because it is must easier to execute, and in this case, it is kind of impossible to make it a spiral and make it appealing, Like this: fixed

I BSed this, you can make it nicer on your own lol

01:20:000 (5) - NC ok
01:24:705 (1) - Dont overlap the slider with the hitcircle I don't get it
02:11:764 (5,6) - NC ok
02:24:313 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same thing as before ok
02:40:000 (4) - Blanket better fixed

Hard
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00:21:960 (5) - NC ok
00:34:509 (7) - ^ ok
00:39:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I would DS these no
01:24:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make this have a jump with a pattern, or something huh?
02:27:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ huh?
02:35:686 (3) - NC ok
02:36:078 (5) - NC ok
02:36:470 (7) - NC ok
02:43:725 (2,3,4) - fix the spacing fixed
02:47:647 (4) - NC ok
03:05:882 (3,4,5) - Fix spacing fixed

Insane
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00:34:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - unnecessary corner of the stream I like it. I will fix this if some else will say this
01:07:647 (2,3,4,5) - Make this symmetrical fixed
01:16:862 (1,2,3) - Make this flow better I guess no

This works, and it flows nice, but its kind of boring, i guess

01:52:941 (1) - some slight unevenness I dunno, tried make it smoother
01:57:254 (2) - Ctrl +H ok
01:58:823 (4) - ^ ok
02:25:882 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I would advise something like this (NC and New order of hitcircles) fixed

the star pattern

The next three notes

02:41:372 (10) - NC ok
02:41:568 (1) - Remove NC ok
02:42:352 (6) - NC ok
03:07:058 (3) - ^ ok
03:07:450 (5) - ^ ok
03:07:843 (7) - ^ Reason being is that the follow points make the jumps look terrible ok

GL

Kawaii Muffin wrote:

Normal
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00:31:372 (3,4) - Dont overlap these fixed
00:38:039 (2) - Slider should go into the hitcircle, for easy and normal at least done
00:41:960 (3,4) - flows weird, going back to the previous point of where you started on that 00:41:176 (2) - slider pattern fixed
00:53:725 (1) - Dont like that sliders that cover up hitcircles fixed
01:01:176 (1) - Remove spinner done
-reason: note is visible while the spinner is still occurring which is unrankable.
02:40:392 (2,3) - Unnecessary Overlapping fixed
02:54:117 (1) - Remove spinner, like I said before done
03:02:745 (2,3) - Overlap fixed
03:05:882 (5,1) - Overlap fixed

ThiagoGabriel wrote:

Hi there i'm coming for mod request
Let do this (in part of course)
Eazy

SPOILER

1. 01:24:705 (1) - This is the only Slider out pattern → Snapping. fixed

Hard

SPOILER

1. 00:40:196 (6) - move to: x336 y176 ok
2. 00:42:156 (4) - this is confusing , i think ,you cant move this to : x236 y128 and change the localization of slider 00:41:568 (3) - what about? nice idea
3. 01:26:274 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern is irregular you can change the position tried to fix it. dunno if it gonna work
4. 02:25:490 (4) - move to x200 y256 ok
5. 02:35:294 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this pattern of Extra or Insane not Hard ! changed to sliders
6. 02:48:627 (6) - irregular part of star. I don't get it what you mean
7. 03:19:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern of extra diff, yeah... i think , you need change this , or you can put it in insane diffculty yeah I knew someone gonna say about that xD Scaled

Destruction

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1. 00:25:098 (1) - Slider different from others 00:25:490 (2,3,4) - fixed
2. 01:20:392 (2) - Ugly Slider. tried to make it better
3. 03:06:666 (1,2,1,2) - Ctrl+ C + ,Ctrl +V ,Ctrl+ H here : 03:07:450 - fixed
   I did not find more "imperfections" on your map, because it is good thank you x)
   but other moderators can find and tell you, anything send a message on my userpage

ThiagoGabriel wrote:

TheMefisto's Normal

1. 00:18:431 (5) - off distance fixed
2. 00:32:156 (4) - blanket. done
3. 00:38:039 (2) - first item. fixed
4. 01:04:313 (5,6) - this part is kinda ,confusing no have consistence. pattern fixed
5. 02:05:490 (3) - blanket . done
6. 02:46:666 (5) - first item. fixed
7. 03:17:843 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - much long single tap for a normal. fixed
8. your mapset is simple but confused because of these very circular sliders recommend you fixed these sliders for better performance on your map

comment, might just be my preference.
Recommended.
Highly Recommended.
Unrankable.

1. You don't have a storyboard, so you don't need widescreen support, disable it.
2. You have no hit additions! That's what makes a map fun to play! Please hitsound your map soon.

1. An easy must fall between 0-1.49 stars, this falls under the "Normal" difficulty (1.5-2.49). Consider remapping to make it easier and when I come back I'll do a full mod. For now I'll just point out things that are too hard.
2. 00:30:588 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Seriously needs some sliders, they're easier to hit.
3. 00:59:607 (4,5,6,7) - A repeating slider would fit there fine.
4. 02:11:764 (1,2) - Slider here pls.
5. 02:24:313 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Seriously needs some sliders, they're easier to hit.
6. 03:17:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
7. 03:20:784 (1) - This spinner is unnecessary, there is nothing in that song in that spot that compliments a spinner.

1. 00:16:862 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) -
   Instead of this:

   
   How about these? (They flow a LOT better):

   
   
2. 01:00:784 (3,4) - This may be too hard for a Normal diff, I'd just copy ther slider before and paste it there.
3. 02:21:960 (5,6,7) - Very confusing spacing, this makes this seem like these sliders are playing in triplets. Space them out like you've been doing before.
4. 02:36:862 (5) - Somewhat the same as what I said above^.

1. 00:48:431 (4,1) - This spacing is jacked up, it makes it seem as if the slider starts on the blue line, follow the spacing you were using before.
2. 00:54:705 (4,1) - ^
3. 01:11:176 (6,7) - This spacing doesn't match up with the rest of that section, just shorten the DS a bit.
4. 02:27:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A stream here using the same shape as this one wouldn't hurt a hard difficulty and would help build up the intensity for the kiai. What you did now is kinda bland and draws all the energy out of the buildup.
5. 02:40:000 (5) - Remove the NC from 02:40:392 (1) - and place it here instead. THe next bar starts here as well as the second melody.
6. 03:17:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A stream here using the same shape as this one wouldn't hurt a hard difficulty and would help build up the intensity. What you did now is kinda bland and draws all the energy out of the buildup.
7. 03:20:784 (1) - This spinner is unnecessary, there is nothing in that song in that spot that compliments a spinner.

1. You have no 1/8 anything in places where the map would call for it. Consider adding 1/8 repeated sliders in places where you hear it so the map is more enjoyable.
2. 00:24:117 (3) - [b]The stream in the music starts here, It'd make more sense if you started it here in the map.
3. 00:33:725 (5,6,7,8) - If you expand/turn this square, it adds more effect to the buildup.
4. 00:39:803 (4,5,6,7,8) - Very unnecessary jumps, this part would be funner if you mapped what the music gave you.
5. 00:41:372 (4) - This stack is very confusing, it can throw off players and make them think it's another triple. Try moving the note so it fits inbetween the two slider ends.
6. 00:50:980 (6,7,8,9) - Maybe a 5 note stream to compliment the music better?
7. 00:42:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Very unnecessary jumps, this part would be funner if you mapped what the music gave you.
8. 00:52:156 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
9. 01:24:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Oh god, the map isn't that intense at that spot to space out the notes like that. This is something that can really throw off a player, just use normal spacing there.
10. 02:33:333 (8,9,10) - This spinner is unnecessary, there is nothing in that song in that spot that compliments a spinner.

Spaghetti wrote:

comment, might just be my preference.
Recommended.
Highly Recommended.
Unrankable.

[General]

1. You don't have a storyboard, so you don't need widescreen support, disable it. fixed
2. You have no hit additions! That's what makes a map fun to play! Please hitsound your map soon. I have hitsounds at all diffs

[Easy]

1. An easy must fall between 0-1.49 stars, this falls under the "Normal" difficulty (1.5-2.49). Consider remapping to make it easier and when I come back I'll do a full mod. For now I'll just point out things that are too hard. I know that 1.5-2 easy can be ranked. Examples: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/461350 ; https://osu.ppy.sh/b/566372
2. 00:30:588 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Seriously needs some sliders, they're easier to hit. Will fix it if someone else will say about this
3. 00:59:607 (4,5,6,7) - A repeating slider would fit there fine. ok
4. 02:11:764 (1,2) - Slider here pls. ok
5. 02:24:313 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Seriously needs some sliders, they're easier to hit. same
6. 03:17:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ same
7. 03:20:784 (1) - This spinner is unnecessary, there is nothing in that song in that spot that compliments a spinner. deleted

[Hard]

1. 00:48:431 (4,1) - This spacing is jacked up, it makes it seem as if the slider starts on the blue line, follow the spacing you were using before. fixed
2. 00:54:705 (4,1) - ^ fixed
3. 01:11:176 (6,7) - This spacing doesn't match up with the rest of that section, just shorten the DS a bit. fixed
4. 02:27:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A stream here using the same shape as this one wouldn't hurt a hard difficulty and would help build up the intensity for the kiai. What you did now is kinda bland and draws all the energy out of the buildup. no, it's too hard
5. 02:40:000 (5) - Remove the NC from 02:40:392 (1) - and place it here instead. THe next bar starts here as well as the second melody. ok
6. 03:17:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A stream here using the same shape as this one wouldn't hurt a hard difficulty and would help build up the intensity. What you did now is kinda bland and draws all the energy out of the buildup. same
7. 03:20:784 (1) - This spinner is unnecessary, there is nothing in that song in that spot that compliments a spinner. deleted

[Destruction]

1. You have no 1/8 anything in places where the map would call for it. Consider adding 1/8 repeated sliders in places where you hear it so the map is more enjoyable.
2. 00:24:117 (3) - [b]The stream in the music starts here, It'd make more sense if you started it here in the map. no, I don't hear it like this
3. 00:33:725 (5,6,7,8) - If you expand/turn this square, it adds more effect to the buildup. changed
4. 00:39:803 (4,5,6,7,8) - Very unnecessary jumps, this part would be funner if you mapped what the music gave you. changed
5. 00:41:372 (4) - This stack is very confusing, it can throw off players and make them think it's another triple. Try moving the note so it fits inbetween the two slider ends. changed
6. 00:50:980 (6,7,8,9) - Maybe a 5 note stream to compliment the music better? no
7. 00:42:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Very unnecessary jumps, this part would be funner if you mapped what the music gave you. I don't wanna change this
8. 00:52:156 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ no
9. 01:24:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Oh god, the map isn't that intense at that spot to space out the notes like that. This is something that can really throw off a player, just use normal spacing there. I guess no
10. 02:33:333 (8,9,10) - This spinner is unnecessary, there is nothing in that song in that spot that compliments a spinner. I don't know what happens with your link, but spinner deleted

GL Thanks
I may or may not be considering doing a GD aylmao, PM me if you're interested.

Fantastica wrote:

yo :3~~~

from pm yesterday :3...

Diff Spread :
Easy to Normal => 0,56 Star[s]
Normal to Hard => 1,50 Star[s]
Hard to Insane(Destruction) => 1,34 Star[s]

[header]General[/header]

1. I think you can use custom combo colours. I suggest like this colours :
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 128,255,128
   Combo2 : 128,128,192
   Combo3 : 255,128,128
   Combo4 : 255,128,0

   I will try it
2. Easy diff have different tick rate with the other diffs fixed

Easy

1. 00:30:588 (1) - don't really get idea why NC here ? fixed
2. 00:31:372 (3,1) - switch NC ok
3. 00:34:117 (1,2) - switch NC ok
4. 00:35:294 (1) - remove NC ok
5. 00:47:058 (5) - NC here to make it consistent with 00:40:784 (1) - (NC in 8 beats) ok
6. 00:50:196 - I don't know why empty here. This part was just like the other parts around it. For 00:36:078 - , it's a perfect timing to make the notes empty because I hear the instrument was silence in this part. same to 01:15:294 - and 02:43:137 - I feek like it for easy
7. 00:56:470 (6,1) - switch NC ok
8. 01:05:882 (4) - add NC to make it consistent with 00:40:784 (1) - (NC in 8 beats) same to 01:12:156 (5) - and 03:14:509 (5) - ok
9. 01:01:176 - I highly recommend to not use any SV changes in Easy and Normal diff (same to 01:24:705)
   Pattern Looks fine. But you can avoid some overlap to make it easier to read for beginner player. I will keep it till someone else gonna say this

Hard

1. 00:09:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I Think people won't get this pattern. Since this is the song's opening using 3/2 spacing for the first combo was unreadable. Why ? Because we still don't know how much SV used in this diff. So the player will miss or get 100 in this beginning. I suggest to change the pattern to something like => http://puu.sh/hgqN8/e051030fdf.jpg nice idea. fixed
2. 00:58:627 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - I don't really get what pattern those circles use. Diamond Pattern ? This is diamond pattern => http://puu.sh/hgr8s/dd7607bf7c.jpg I don't see a difference
3. 02:35:294 (1,1,1,1) - Is it necessary to use NCs in every notes on it I dunno. Should I delete NCs?
4. 03:19:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - using this big spacing for 1/2 snap is more like Insane diff (or maybe more Insaner). Highly recommend to decrease the spacing. Scaled by 0.8x
   I didn't mod about stacks. If I mod the stacks, I would much say "Same as above" XD. Someone will mod it.

Destruction

1. 00:12:352 - Add note here. It feels weird if you ignore this since it used on 00:09:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - added slider
2. 00:37:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Since this diff supposed to insane diff(or maybe extra) I think ignoring that many part was not really good. Like 00:38:137 - . you ignore the instrument in the song here. For 00:37:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I suggest to make the pattern like http://puu.sh/hh5bO/9dc6fefe8f.jpg . I hope you found the other parts that you ignore too with this sample. But if you need help to found it, catch me in game we'll do IRC. I don't think that I'm gonna change the rhythm. Alot people like it as it is
3. 01:20:000 (1,2) - don't really get how it flowing. I tried making a blanket
4. 02:20:000 (2) - maybe ctrl+g here to make a CW flow nice idea
5. 02:46:862 (2) - don't really get how it flowing. And the overlap looks bad too changed
6. 03:18:725 (1,1,1) - unreasonable NCs placement. switch 03:18:431 (7,1) - , 03:19:215 (6,1) - , and 03:19:999 (5,1) - ok
   Like I said in the mod, you have ignored much of high effect part in the song. So you'll need more works for this diff

Sorry for my bad mod T.T
hope it help you... It helps for sure
And if you want to ask something, feel free to PM me or catch me in game.
Good Luck Thank you

Spaghetti wrote:

[TheMefisto's Normal]

1. 00:16:862 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) -
   Instead of this:

   
   How about these? (They flow a LOT better):

   
   
   nice idea, pattern changed
2. 01:00:784 (3,4) - This may be too hard for a Normal diff, I'd just copy ther slider before and paste it there. fixed
3. 02:21:960 (5,6,7) - Very confusing spacing, this makes this seem like these sliders are playing in triplets. Space them out like you've been doing before. fixed
4. 02:36:862 (5) - Somewhat the same as what I said above^. fixed

Kite wrote:

Heya, sorry for the delay!

[Hitsounds]
A bit disappointing that you havent hitsounded most of the claps in the song! (00:42:156 - 00:42:549 - 00:43:137 - for example) I can't hear those claps o.o

[Metadata]
TheMefisto to tags done

[Easy]
03:19:607 (6,7,8) - These overlaps look really ugly and might confuse players due to hitbursts covering the circles, you could re-arrange 03:19:215 (5,6,7,8) - these beats to void the overlaps changed

Uuuuuh, that's all!
Can't find any issues on the other difficulties and the mapset is pretty nice~
Timing seems fine, folder is clean!
Good luck!

Kite wrote:

[Normal]
00:23:921 (1) - I believe this slider doesn't leave enough room towards the next object for a Normal difficulty, thus making it unrankable. I would suggest just mapping out this spinner instead fixed
02:01:960 (1,2,3) - Ugly overlapping and overall weird flow on this section, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3069063 something like this seems better imo! fixed
02:08:627 (5) - New combo here instead of 02:09:411 (1) - done
02:44:705 (1,2,3) - Bad flow here, easy fix : 02:45:490 (2,3) - ctrl+g and place at x310 y317 fixed
02:49:411 (4) - New combo here instead of 02:49:803 (1) - done

Chamue wrote:

Привет,в общем,что смогла,то нашла)

General

SPOILER

Громкость везде 60%,думаю в некоторых местах лучше сделать тише или же громче,чтобы громкость не была везде одинакова. Попытался разнообразить. Вроде вышло неплохо

Easy

SPOILER

00:20:392 (4) - Слайдер накладывается на предыдущий слайдер 00:18:823 (1) - думаю можно этот слайдер 00:20:392 (4) - повернуть на 90 градусов против часовой стрелки или же просто нажать ctrl+<. Повернул

02:10:980 (3) - Круг накладывается на слайдер 02:11:764 (1) - ,желательно это слайдер тоже повернуть на 90 градусов против часовой стрелки или же нажать ctrl+< Поменял

02:51:372 (3) - По той же причине повернуть на 90 градусов по часовой стрелке или же ctrl+> Вот это пожалуй нет, оставлю как есть

Hard

SPOILER

00:57:843 (4) - Для харда сложновато,может стоит поставить на x:293 y:140 или на x:214 y:52,посмотри как лучше будет передвинул на х:303 у:52

02:40:784 (6,7,8) - Стоит передвинуть на x:249 y:185 Передвинул на х:243 у:194

Вроде больше придирок нет)

Классные хитсаунды ~*О*~ Спасибо :3

Chamue wrote:

Normal

00:52:156 (4) - Думаю новичкам будет трудно это сыграть,лучше переставить в x:324 y:188,ну и там поправить где надо (Исправлено)

00:58:431 (5) - По той же причине лучше переставить в x:260 y:160 (Исправлено)

01:10:196 (2,3,4,5) - Вот это точно будет сложно сыграть,лучше расставить круги так,чтобы они не накладывались друг на друга (Исправлено)

02:24:313 (1,2,3,4) - Здесь,в принципе,тоже самое,но можешь оставить,как есть. (Исправлено)

02:42:745 (1) - Переставить в x:300 y:284 (Исправлено)

02:46:274 (4) - Переставить в x:452 y:228 (Не увидел причины для переставления)

02:52:941 (2,3,4) - По той же причине расставить так,чтобы не накладывались друг на друга (Исправлено)

03:04:705 (3) - Переставить в x:188 y:116 (Исправлено)

Нормал получился сложноватым...Может стоит уменьшить скорость слайдеров? Примерно до 1,20. Но это просто предложение,можешь оставить как есть) (Пока не стал уменьшать, но возьму на заметку)

Marmowka wrote:

Удачи с картой :3

Destruction \o/ (IRC mod)

2015-05-16 14:21 Marmowka: Готов чат мод?
2015-05-16 14:22 Marmowka: Просто у меня в основном генерал вещи
2015-05-16 14:23 Rmdy: Давай
2015-05-16 14:24 Marmowka: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/675849 Aero Chord - Ctrl Alt Destruction (Original Mix) [Easy]]
2015-05-16 14:24 Marmowka: Я тут кушаю, так то буду притормаживать :D
2015-05-16 14:24 Marmowka: Общее
2015-05-16 14:24 Marmowka: 0 офсет
2015-05-16 14:24 Marmowka: Его тебе не проверяли?
2015-05-16 14:25 Marmowka: Ну просто поти не существует карт с 0 офсетом
2015-05-16 14:25 Rmdy: Все говорили, что по ритму норм
2015-05-16 14:25 Marmowka: я проверю
2015-05-16 14:25 Marmowka: не проьив?
2015-05-16 14:25 Rmdy: (Бакари, рюу, может ещё кто)
2015-05-16 14:25 Rmdy: Ок
2015-05-16 14:25 Marmowka: 1 мин
2015-05-16 14:26 Marmowka: офсет 3
2015-05-16 14:26 Marmowka: не ставь
2015-05-16 14:26 Marmowka: норм 
2015-05-16 14:26 Marmowka: да
2015-05-16 14:26 Marmowka: 0 
2015-05-16 14:26 Marmowka: и оставляй
2015-05-16 14:27 Rmdy: ._.
2015-05-16 14:27 Rmdy: оставить как есть то есть?
2015-05-16 14:27 Marmowka: LF
2015-05-16 14:27 Marmowka: Да
2015-05-16 14:28 Marmowka: 00:34:509 (1) -
2015-05-16 14:28 Marmowka: 00:35:686 (4) - 
2015-05-16 14:28 Marmowka: В этот промежуток спинер ?
2015-05-16 14:28 Marmowka: ну а то спам кружков
2015-05-16 14:28 Marmowka: нинаю даже
2015-05-16 14:28 Marmowka: 00:25:098 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 
2015-05-16 14:29 Marmowka: Сюда можно придумать другие элементы
2015-05-16 14:29 Marmowka: на 1\2
2015-05-16 14:29 Marmowka: слайдер
2015-05-16 14:29 Marmowka: туда - сюда
2015-05-16 14:29 Rmdy: со спиннером соглашусь
2015-05-16 14:30 Marmowka: 01:01:176 (6) -  вот тут идея норм со скоросью слайдера
2015-05-16 14:30 Marmowka: можно его загигулинкой сделать
2015-05-16 14:30 Marmowka: и будет шикардос
2015-05-16 14:31 Marmowka: и весь флоу на карте
2015-05-16 14:31 Rmdy: загигулиной?
2015-05-16 14:31 Marmowka: Зиг - заг
2015-05-16 14:31 Marmowka: Так понятне? :D
2015-05-16 14:32 Rmdy: Я подумаю
2015-05-16 14:32 Marmowka: 01:20:000 (1) - 
2015-05-16 14:32 Marmowka: 01:18:431 (4) - 
2015-05-16 14:32 Marmowka: Бланкед
2015-05-16 14:33 Marmowka: http://puu.sh/hPewu.jpg
2015-05-16 14:33 Marmowka: 01:24:705 (1) -  так же модно зигой
2015-05-16 14:33 Marmowka: :)
2015-05-16 14:34 Marmowka: 02:27:450 (1) - 
2015-05-16 14:34 Marmowka: аналогино про спинер
2015-05-16 14:35 Marmowka: 02:36:862 (1,2) -  тоже по желанию бланкед
2015-05-16 14:36 Rmdy: тут не
2015-05-16 14:36 Marmowka: 03:06:666 (5) -  
2015-05-16 14:36 Marmowka: Видишь как построен слайдер?
2015-05-16 14:37 Marmowka: Ну тоесть вот к таким вещям (неаккуратность) при ранкеде докапываються
2015-05-16 14:37 Marmowka: я заметил на всех диффах такое
2015-05-16 14:37 Marmowka: просто 
2015-05-16 14:37 Marmowka: поправить все это
2015-05-16 14:37 Marmowka: простая формальнось
2015-05-16 14:37 Rmdy: :/
2015-05-16 14:37 Marmowka: угу
2015-05-16 14:37 Marmowka: Ж(
2015-05-16 14:37 Rmdy: Ок
2015-05-16 14:38 Marmowka: Изик хороший
2015-05-16 14:39 Marmowka: Видно что его колупали и шлефовали
2015-05-16 14:40 Rmdy: http://puu.sh/hPeOb/7f91fa2063.jpg такая зига сойдет?
2015-05-16 14:41 Marmowka: Ну да , можешь с 2мя красными и 1 белой точчкой
2015-05-16 14:41 Marmowka: К-креатив
2015-05-16 14:42 Marmowka: Нормал я так понимаю гд?
2015-05-16 14:42 Rmdy: Да
2015-05-16 14:43 Marmowka: Так
2015-05-16 14:44 Marmowka: Почему на нормале спейсинг 0.8?
2015-05-16 14:44 Marmowka: а на изи 1
2015-05-16 14:44 Marmowka: ой
2015-05-16 14:44 Marmowka: о.7
2015-05-16 14:44 Marmowka: и самое что бросаеться в глаза
2015-05-16 14:44 Marmowka: большая скороть слайдеров
2015-05-16 14:45 Marmowka: 1.1 или 1.2
2015-05-16 14:45 Marmowka: Нормас было бы
2015-05-16 14:45 Marmowka: и спейсинг я бы 1.0 оставил
2015-05-16 14:45 Marmowka: как на изи
2015-05-16 14:46 Rmdy: Я ему скинул
2015-05-16 14:47 Marmowka: 00:34:509 (1,2,3,4,5) -  Вот это можно переделать 
2015-05-16 14:47 Marmowka: а точнее слайдер
2015-05-16 14:47 Marmowka: сделать 2 слайдера
2015-05-16 14:47 Marmowka: 1\2
2015-05-16 14:47 Marmowka: и вуаля
2015-05-16 14:48 Marmowka: 01:02:745 (1,2,3,4) -  сделать ровненько
2015-05-16 14:49 Marmowka: 01:14:901 (4) -  надеюсь понял? ;)
2015-05-16 14:49 Rmdy: лел
2015-05-16 14:50 Marmowka: Ещё 
2015-05-16 14:50 Marmowka: много в треке хлопков
2015-05-16 14:51 Marmowka: у вас сделан акцент на сильные хлопки
2015-05-16 14:51 Marmowka: но можно найти приятный какой ни буть хитсауд
2015-05-16 14:51 Marmowka: и по спамить им
2015-05-16 14:51 Marmowka: будет здорово
2015-05-16 14:51 Marmowka: я к сожалению не элита ЖВ
2015-05-16 14:51 Rmdy: Попробую поискать
2015-05-16 14:51 Marmowka: так что надо поспрашивать у моддеров
2015-05-16 14:52 Marmowka: да
2015-05-16 14:52 Marmowka: тоже как совет
2015-05-16 14:52 Marmowka: ни больше
2015-05-16 14:53 Marmowka: 02:37:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -  5 и 2 можно застакать
2015-05-16 14:54 Marmowka: 03:17:647 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3) -  вместо этого (спама) в конце можно не придумать ничего а хороший спинер тудысь
2015-05-16 14:54 Marmowka: И игроку приятно, и тебе не геморно)
2015-05-16 14:55 Rmdy: Действительно)
2015-05-16 14:57 Marmowka: На счет ритма я не говорю на этих диффах
2015-05-16 14:57 Marmowka: ибо это трап
2015-05-16 14:57 Marmowka: пам пам пам пам пам
2015-05-16 14:57 Marmowka: это и ежу слышно
2015-05-16 14:57 Marmowka: хоть как его мапай
2015-05-16 14:57 Marmowka: он будет годен
2015-05-16 14:57 Marmowka: НА ИЗИ ДИФФАХ
2015-05-16 14:58 Rmdy: поэтому и взял его)
2015-05-16 14:58 Rmdy: Ах лол
2015-05-16 14:58 Marmowka: Ахм
2015-05-16 14:59 Marmowka: Хард
2015-05-16 15:00 Marmowka: Так же 
2015-05-16 15:00 Marmowka: спейсинг
2015-05-16 15:00 Marmowka: 0.8
2015-05-16 15:00 Marmowka: тут не уместен
2015-05-16 15:00 Marmowka: надо 1.2
2015-05-16 15:00 Marmowka: или 1.1
2015-05-16 15:00 Marmowka: скорость слайдеров
2015-05-16 15:00 Marmowka: я почекал
2015-05-16 15:00 Marmowka: 1.3 или 1.4
2015-05-16 15:00 Marmowka: в киае убери ускорение
2015-05-16 15:01 Marmowka: на 1.25
2015-05-16 15:01 Marmowka: если будешь менять эти характеристики
2015-05-16 15:01 Marmowka: отдельно сохрани новую диффу
2015-05-16 15:01 Marmowka: не вороши в этой
2015-05-16 15:01 Marmowka: и попробуешь
2015-05-16 15:01 Rmdy: ок
2015-05-16 15:02 Marmowka: Ну и соответственно если поменяешь , то многое измениться 
2015-05-16 15:02 Marmowka: Так то пробегусь тоже по элементам
2015-05-16 15:03 Rmdy: Ага
2015-05-16 15:03 Marmowka: 01:01:176 (1) -  вот такие вещи хорошо , думаю их в карте "в меру"
2015-05-16 15:04 Marmowka: 01:18:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -  полуил кайф
2015-05-16 15:04 Marmowka: получил
2015-05-16 15:04 Rmdy: лол
2015-05-16 15:04 Marmowka: 01:24:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
2015-05-16 15:04 Marmowka: вот тут
2015-05-16 15:04 Marmowka: щасъ
2015-05-16 15:04 Marmowka: скажу
2015-05-16 15:06 Marmowka: в 1\4 слайдеры
2015-05-16 15:06 Marmowka: http://puu.sh/hPg0L.jpg
2015-05-16 15:07 Marmowka: 01:24:705 (1) - 
2015-05-16 15:07 Marmowka: 01:25:490 (1) - до сюда
2015-05-16 15:07 Marmowka: два таких
2015-05-16 15:07 Marmowka: Это хард
2015-05-16 15:07 Marmowka: тут можно
2015-05-16 15:08 Marmowka: 02:27:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -  стрим 1\4
2015-05-16 15:09 Marmowka: на синие тики еще кружков
2015-05-16 15:09 Marmowka: и будет вкусно
2015-05-16 15:09 Marmowka: а спинер рядом лишний
2015-05-16 15:09 Marmowka: 02:35:294 (1,1,1,1) -  одно комбо
2015-05-16 15:10 Rmdy: Со стримами слишком сложно получалось
2015-05-16 15:10 Rmdy: хз даже
2015-05-16 15:10 Marmowka: Думай конечно
2015-05-16 15:11 Marmowka: В саунд настройках к харду все норм выставленно
2015-05-16 15:12 Marmowka: 03:10:392 (6,7) -  не прячь их так, это вроде даже как анранкед
2015-05-16 15:13 Marmowka: 03:17:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -  Тут тоже стрим напрашиваеться (но ты пока в раздумиях)
2015-05-16 15:13 Marmowka: ну либо как я тебе предлогал
2015-05-16 15:13 Marmowka: со слайдерами мелкими
2015-05-16 15:13 Marmowka: тоже альтернатива
2015-05-16 15:14 Rmdy: Ага
2015-05-16 15:14 Marmowka: Пойду на сложную самую диффочку
2015-05-16 15:15 Marmowka: 00:34:705 (3,4,5,6,7) - 
2015-05-16 15:15 Marmowka: Не вверх а вних попробуй вот тут стрим построить
2015-05-16 15:15 Marmowka: Он крут
2015-05-16 15:16 Rmdy: типа зигагулину сделать?
2015-05-16 15:18 Marmowka: Как бы сказать то...
2015-05-16 15:18 Marmowka: Округлить вниз
2015-05-16 15:18 Marmowka: волной если получиться
2015-05-16 15:18 Marmowka: ну либо оставляй
2015-05-16 15:18 Marmowka: он и так и так заипись
2015-05-16 15:19 Marmowka:  00:42:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -  чуууууууууууууууууууууууууууууууууууууууууууууууууууууточку по ближе их
2015-05-16 15:19 Marmowka: молясик
2015-05-16 15:19 Marmowka: :D
2015-05-16 15:19 Marmowka: 00:54:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -  за такое меня ругали
2015-05-16 15:20 Marmowka: их разьедини
2015-05-16 15:20 Marmowka: либо застакать тупо
2015-05-16 15:20 Rmdy: http://puu.sh/hPgEp/c76b1e3c8d.png ;D
2015-05-16 15:20 Marmowka: :3
2015-05-16 15:21 Marmowka: 01:20:392 (2,3) -  переделай
2015-05-16 15:21 Marmowka: вероятнось на такой скорости слайдербрейка
2015-05-16 15:21 Marmowka: + ТАМ еще и спряталась тлоичка
2015-05-16 15:22 Marmowka: 01:26:274 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
2015-05-16 15:23 Marmowka: блин
2015-05-16 15:23 Marmowka: ща
2015-05-16 15:24 Marmowka: Попробуй так же http://puu.sh/hPgRn.jpg
2015-05-16 15:25 Marmowka: Со скрина потом перемаппай
2015-05-16 15:25 Marmowka: и так оно круто читаеться и играеться
2015-05-16 15:25 Rmdy: Хорошая идея
2015-05-16 15:25 Marmowka: У меня пуш дурак
2015-05-16 15:25 Marmowka: скринит в ахеренном формате
2015-05-16 15:25 Marmowka: идиот
2015-05-16 15:25 Marmowka: :<
2015-05-16 15:27 Marmowka: 02:23:137 (2,3) - тоже риск такое делать
2015-05-16 15:27 Marmowka: бны ноют
2015-05-16 15:27 Marmowka: так нильзя бла бла бла 
2015-05-16 15:29 Marmowka: 03:06:666 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -  вот тут то у тебя норм сделан этот элемент
2015-05-16 15:29 Marmowka: ;)
2015-05-16 15:31 Marmowka: 02:39:705 (6) -  тут не удобно немножко
2015-05-16 15:31 Marmowka: 02:39:411 (5) -  не стакать думаю
2015-05-16 15:31 Rmdy: угол?
2015-05-16 15:31 Marmowka: а рядом с комбиной
2015-05-16 15:31 Marmowka: поставить
2015-05-16 15:31 Marmowka: чтобы не скрывало
2015-05-16 15:32 Marmowka: 02:41:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -  если ты уж делаешь триплены длизкие , то их тоже сделать ближе к себе
2015-05-16 15:32 Marmowka: ты понял меня
2015-05-16 15:32 Rmdy: http://puu.sh/hPhey/75b78105b9.jpg ?
2015-05-16 15:33 Marmowka: и само комбо вертикальне еще само вниз двигани и нормально
2015-05-16 15:35 Marmowka: 00:36:078 (1) -  гоу сюда поставим вот это? (момент начала превью) http://puu.sh/hPhmN.png
2015-05-16 15:36 Marmowka: Это пожеланию
2015-05-16 15:36 Rmdy: хм, вай нот
2015-05-16 15:39 Marmowka: Фух :| Карта хорошая , проработай все слайдеры если поменяешь скорости (а я думаю это нужно делать). Так же чуточку на легких диффах по разнообразние флоу. Мало видел карт трап (да их и не маппабт почему то). Будешь первенец ;3
2015-05-16 15:40 Marmowka: С моей стороны пожалуй все тот я хотел сказать
2015-05-16 15:40 Marmowka: Надеюсь я хоть что то полезное сказал
2015-05-16 15:40 Rmdy: :3 Спасибо за мод)

ItsTrydamere wrote:

Easy.

00:46:274 (4) - I feel like this slider should be lower down.
01:05:882 (1,2) - Placement is too close.
01:20:000 (1,2,3) - Check placement of 2.
01:27:843 (5,1) - The 5 should be the start of the slider
03:17:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I just can't hear the pattern with these notes with the song.

Hard.

00:54:117 (3) - Check placement.
01:06:470 (2) - Off beat?
02:03:529 (4) - ^
03:02:745 (3) - ^
03:15:098 (2,3,4,5,6) - Placements.
03:19:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Nice pattern, but maybe rethink the order (confusising)

Destruction.

00:26:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Space these out?
00:40:784 (1,2,3) - Too bunched up
01:07:254 (9,10,1) - i can hear 2 notes here, not three
01:22:352 (4,5,6) - reverse order maybe?
02:16:470 (1) - I wouldn't put this spinner here...
02:20:588 (4,6) - Off beat?
02:29:019 (1) - Ends too quick
02:30:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too bunched
02:32:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:38:235 (7,8,1) - Placement, I know its a new combo, but its too far apart
02:39:705 (6,7,8) - Off beat?
02:53:823 (7) - I cant hear beat in the song

Thats all that I thought was wrong with the map.
Overall its a really good mapset

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Destruction

Hard

Arooma wrote:

Hello~

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Destruction

1. 00:19:607 (4) fixed
   
   Propose

   
2. 00:35:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) I like it as it is
   
   Propose

   
3. 00:42:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - In my opinion, it is Overmapping. Distance Down It's not
   
4. 00:47:843 (5) changed
   
   Propose

   
5. 00:54:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - In my opinion, distance up no, it's antijumps
   
6. 00:58:823 (4,5,6,7) wow, nice idea
   
   Propose

   
7. 01:15:294 (1,2,3) fixed
   
   Clean

   
8. 01:16:862 (1) no
   
   ^

   
9. 01:20:000 (1,2) fixed
   
   Propose

   
10. 01:22:352 (4,5) - Change timing no
    
11. 01:24:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) no
    
    Propose

    
12. 01:55:294 (2) - X:124 Y:288 no
    
13. 02:08:627 (1) - Ctrl + G no
    
14. 03:12:549 (5,1) - This slider is not pretty changed

Hard

1. This map is a overmapping.
   
2. 00:11:372 (6,7,8) fixed
   
   Clean

   
3. 00:27:843 (6,1) changed
   
   Blanket

   
4. 00:39:215 (1,2) - In my opinion, same distance no
   
5. 00:42:352 (1,2,3,4,5) - This Overmapping This diff is a 'Hard'. it can be jumps in hard diffs
   
6. 00:49:803 (4) - X:256 Y:168 changed
   
7. 00:56:470 (1,2,3) - I do not recommend. changed
   
8. 02:27:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This Overmapping This diff is a 'Hard'. no
   
9. 02:40:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ no
   
10. 02:47:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ no
    
11. 03:02:745 (3) no
    
    Clean

    
12. 03:19:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This Overmapping no

That's it
This is good map
However, you can modify the placement more in my opinion.
My mod is hoping you can help
(p.s: I do not speak English well )
Good luck~

1. Во-первый, низкий, даже очень, спейсинг для инсейна, который должен по задумке быть более или менее сложным. Я не предлагаю делать джампы на пол-экрана, а говорю как раз об обычном спейсинге, например, здесь: 00:11:764 (8,9,1). 1.5 или 1.6 подошёл бы больше.
2. Вторая проблема — это то, что ты постоянно отправляешь меня, то есть игрока, гулять в одном и том же направлении, либо по часовой стрелке, либо против. Выглядит это так: 00:11:764 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) и ему подобные паттерны, то есть одна и та же линия движения, без каких-либо изменений и разнообразий. Это утомляет. Посмотри на другие карты, в них практически никогда нет такого хождения кругу, а тем более — по линии, а если есть, то оно меняется, скрашивается регулярными сменами направления.
3. Третья проблема — это то, что у тебя карта выглядит составленной из отдельных кусков. Например, есть кусок А: 00:14:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6), и есть кусок Б: 00:15:686 (1,2,3,4,5,6). Между собой они стилистически никак не связаны, между ними нет никакого перехода, нет какого-то промежуточного слайдера, который выглядел и/или был бы расположен так, чтобы казался принадлежащим сразу двум частям, ты просто идёшь по тому же месту, с которого только что ушёл, и ставишь там паттерн, разительно отличающийся от прошлого. Это некрасиво, карта должна выглядеть единым целым, между частями должны быть хоть какие-то логические переходы.
4. Не стоит класть рядом несколько одинаковых объектов, если не получается их аккуратно расставить. 00:17:254 (1,2,3,4) - слайдеры торчат в разные стороны, поставлены под разными углами, между ними опять нет никакой общности, никакого порядка. Такие паттерны надо заменять на что-то более приятное на глаз, возможно, для этого понадобится поменять форму слайдеров.
5. Карта не очень хорошо отражает музыку. Изменения спейсинга (чаще всего в сторону падения) никак не связаны с тем, что происходит в песне. 00:26:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - почему-то упал, 00:54:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - и опять, и тому подобное.