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mraihani
208 posts
Joined November 2014
mraihani
General
Don't forget to repair the background
Don't forget to change the bitrate (have you?)
delete the timing points at 01:42:435 and 01:43:983

Normal mode
00:52:112 (3,1,2) I think it's better to make this slider's reverse arrow at 00:52:402 then end this at 00:52:693 then add a slider at 00:52:886 and end it at 00:53:273 then add another slider at 00:53:660 and end it at 00:54:048

This beatmap is one step closer to be ranked and approved (Yes?)
Sylas
Elite Mapper
1,022 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Sylas

mraihani wrote:

General
Don't forget to repair the background Yeah just need to delete this one and make a new one that's the same
Don't forget to change the bitrate (have you?) took care of that a long time ago, should be fine now as it isn't mentioned in the AiMod
delete the timing points at 01:42:435 and 01:43:983 The music there is less powerful and in some of the diff I don't have anything mapped there (a short break) and it doesn't seem good to put kiai time in an area that isn't mapped and the song is less powerful

Normal mode
00:52:112 (3,1,2) I think it's better to make this slider's reverse arrow at 00:52:402 then end this at 00:52:693 then add a slider at 00:52:886 and end it at 00:53:273 then add another slider at 00:53:660 and end it at 00:54:048 Good idea

This beatmap is one step closer to be ranked and approved (Yes?) Yeah should be pretty close ^^ after I get a few more mods and raise the SP of this map to about 30 I might contact a BAT
Arlecchino
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Arlecchino
stop give kds for who already mod you map before
i'll try mod this map asap


EDIT : Mod coming

General


  1. remove .osb file since you dont have any Storyboard also uncheck Widescreen Support for same reason, if you add storyboard for this, where the png file?
  2. 00:03:338 - remove this green line and volume down in the timing point instead *pict

Normal

  1. 00:07:210 (3,4) - this is should be an slider imo
  2. 00:27:725 (4) - how about stacking? for solve the distance problem
  3. 00:22:693 (8) - the tail isn't stack properly
  4. 00:26:565 (3) - NC for consistent ?
  5. 00:34:307 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - so much circle, im suggest to change some note into slider since it's still an normal
  6. 00:35:854 (5) - also add NC here
  7. 00:40:499 - break should start here, maybe move it to white tick instead
  8. 00:52:886 (4) - NC ?
  9. 00:57:919 (2) - stack properly ?
  10. 01:26:951 - spinner start here ?
  11. 01:54:822 (1) - move 1 grid upper for better blanket

Adv

  1. 00:04:112 (2) - blanket can be improved
  2. 00:06:822 (2) - move this into x368 y168 for half overlap shape
  3. 00:07:596 (3) - are you purpose to blanketing ? is yes, try to improve the blanket
  4. 00:11:080 (2) - ^
  5. 00:17:660 (2) - this touching each other, move it a bit at least x78 y196
  6. 00:28:112 (1,2) - ^, try better flow for this part, i'll give some suggest maybe like this one?
  7. 00:38:564 (4) - ctrl+h and move it for repair the distance
  8. 01:05:273 (1) - ovelapped
  9. 01:15:338 (5) - ^
  10. 01:34:306 (3) - blanket can be improved
  11. 01:38:564 (2) - the tail isn't stacked properly, if you repaire it maybe you can make 01:38:951 (3) - stack properly with (4)
  12. 01:42:435 (3) - change into spinner? end spinner at 01:43:596 ?
  13. 01:46:693 (3) - tail isn't stacked properly
  14. 01:55:596 - add note here ?

Hard

  1. 00:16:499 (3) - stacking ?
  2. 00:52:499 (3) - change this into 1/4 slider reverse
  3. 00:57:144 (5) - not stacked properly
  4. 00:59:080 (1,2) - try this pattern *pict
  5. 00:59:854 (4,5) - ^
  6. 01:11:467 (1,2) - ^
  7. 01:55:596 - add note ?

Insane

  • im not thats good at modding insane, what's more it's stream diff, maybe i'll pointed some
  1. 00:24:822 (8) - stack properly
  2. 00:38:951 (7) - NC
  3. 00:50:564 (1) - remove NC here
  4. this diff can be more neat, the whole of the map is a lot of random jump, it's make confused some player (i'm modding this diff and i get headache XD)

this map still need improve, sorry i cant mod more than Insane
hope this helped and Good luck with your map~
Sylas
Elite Mapper
1,022 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Sylas

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

stop give kds for who already mod you map before
i'll try mod this map asap


EDIT : Mod coming

General


  1. remove .osb file since you dont have any Storyboard also uncheck Widescreen Support for same reason, if you add storyboard for this, where the png file?
  2. 00:03:338 - remove this green line and volume down in the timing point instead *pict

Normal

  1. 00:07:210 (3,4) - this is should be an slider imo
  2. 00:27:725 (4) - how about stacking? for solve the distance problem
  3. 00:22:693 (8) - the tail isn't stack properly
  4. 00:26:565 (3) - NC for consistent ?
  5. 00:34:307 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - so much circle, im suggest to change some note into slider since it's still an normal
  6. 00:35:854 (5) - also add NC here
  7. 00:40:499 - break should start here, maybe move it to white tick instead
  8. 00:52:886 (4) - NC ?
  9. 00:57:919 (2) - stack properly ?
  10. 01:26:951 - spinner start here ?
  11. 01:54:822 (1) - move 1 grid upper for better blanket

Adv

  1. 00:04:112 (2) - blanket can be improved
  2. 00:06:822 (2) - move this into x368 y168 for half overlap shape
  3. 00:07:596 (3) - are you purpose to blanketing ? is yes, try to improve the blanket
  4. 00:11:080 (2) - ^
  5. 00:17:660 (2) - this touching each other, move it a bit at least x78 y196
  6. 00:28:112 (1,2) - ^, try better flow for this part, i'll give some suggest maybe like this one?
  7. 00:38:564 (4) - ctrl+h and move it for repair the distance
  8. 01:05:273 (1) - ovelapped
  9. 01:15:338 (5) - ^
  10. 01:34:306 (3) - blanket can be improved
  11. 01:38:564 (2) - the tail isn't stacked properly, if you repaire it maybe you can make 01:38:951 (3) - stack properly with (4)
  12. 01:42:435 (3) - change into spinner? end spinner at 01:43:596 ?
  13. 01:46:693 (3) - tail isn't stacked properly
  14. 01:55:596 - add note here ?

Hard

  1. 00:16:499 (3) - stacking ?
  2. 00:52:499 (3) - change this into 1/4 slider reverse
  3. 00:57:144 (5) - not stacked properly
  4. 00:59:080 (1,2) - try this pattern *pict
  5. 00:59:854 (4,5) - ^
  6. 01:11:467 (1,2) - ^
  7. 01:55:596 - add note ?

Insane

  • im not thats good at modding insane, what's more it's stream diff, maybe i'll pointed some
  1. 00:24:822 (8) - stack properly
  2. 00:38:951 (7) - NC
  3. 00:50:564 (1) - remove NC here
  4. this diff can be more neat, the whole of the map is a lot of random jump, it's make confused some player (i'm modding this diff and i get headache XD)

this map still need improve, sorry i cant mod more than Insane
hope this helped and Good luck with your map~ Thank you for the mod ^^ I fixed pretty much everything you suggested
-Nya-
2,133 posts
Joined December 2011
-Nya-


Sorry for the delay >.< Please leave me a vote in my queue after applying my mod.
So let's get started~

Note: Everything in bold is highly suggested.
Everything in red is unrankable.

General:
  1. Why are you using the default colours? Try to spice up your map by using nice colours that fit with the background image.
  2. I’m not a pro when it comes to storyboarding but when you check AiMod there are a few issues there that looks like it seriously has to be fixed. I suggest that you ask a good storyboarder like Xgor to mod your storyboard.
  3. Add this soundfile into your songsfolder to silence that annoying sliderslide sound.
    http://puu.sh/fJruJ/5658c61812.wav

Normal:
  1. 00:09:532 (3) –New combo here? Since this spot has the same beat as here: 00:11:081 (1) –where you added a new combo.
  2. 00:12:628 (1,3) –There’s no need for an overlap like this. It looks ugly and just not fitting. Just stack the slider on 00:12:628 (1) –or avoid that circle completely.
  3. 00:14:757 (4) –Why not place this slider somewhere here?
    Picture
    It’s better flow and since this is your easiest diff, I think better flow is necessary. (I think I may be knit-picking when I’m saying this, but it’s only my opinion for a better easiest diff.) There are other places in this diff where you can improve the flow by placing the slider/circle nearer to the previous slider’s tail, but I’m not going to point them all out.
  4. 00:16:500 (2,1) –Flow like this is also pretty bad in my opinion. (For the easiest diff.) Try placing it somewhere here:
    Picture
    If you don’t feel like fixing these flow issues now, then just remember this for future maps.
  5. 00:21:532 (6) –Rather place this circle somewhere here to continue with that circle shape. It looks tidier in my opinion.
    Picture
  6. 00:23:466 (1,2,3,4) –Hm, forming a half-circle shape here will look much better in my opinion.
    Picture
  7. 00:38:565 (2) –Stack this circle on 00:37:016 (3) –to avoid that slight overlap.
  8. 00:51:725 (2,1) –Ugh, I’m never a fan of big and ugly overlaps like this. Always try your best to try and avoid them, since it makes your diff look quite messy. Do this:
    Picture
    You can then also make a nice blanket with 00:51:725 (2) –
  9. 00:53:660 (2) –Rather make this a normal straight slider. I’m not so sure if sliders with that kind of tail is allowed.
  10. 01:04:886 –Place a note here please.
  11. 01:10:306 (2,3) –Not at all a good placement for flow purposes. Like I said before, try to place it nearer to the tail of that slider for nice flow.
  12. 01:17:660 –Rather try to punctuate this strong beat with a circle. So remove the repeat of the slider and place a note here: 01:17:660 –
  13. 01:37:789 (1,2,3,4) –Weird shape; looks untidy. Try a half-circle pattern instead:
    Picture
  14. 01:45:531 (1,2,3,4) –Why this random placement? Try to place them in a sort of shape, like a square or half-circle.
  15. 01:50:564 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) –Too many consecutive circles in my opinion. Try to spice this rhythm up by using a mixture of circles and sliders; not just circles. It’s also too many circles in a row for the easiest diff in my opinion.
  16. 01:54:822 (1,2,3,4) –I really don’t suggest this rhythm pattern in the easiest diff, since it suddenly follows a different rhythm and may throw beginners off. Try this:
    Picture

Overall, I’d say it needs improvement regarding the design of the map (the placement of notes, the “look” of the diff, overlaps and patterns)

Advanced:
  1. 00:06:822 (2) –Stack this slider’s head on 00:05:660 (2) – It looks tidier.
  2. 00:09:531 –Always try to place a circle or the start of a slider on important beats like this. It will emphasize that beat more and make the diff more enjoyable.
  3. 00:17:273 (1,2) –Hm, I’m not a fan of this placement. Try this:
    Picture
    You can also rather make (2) a straight slider.
  4. 00:25:015 (1) –Make this a straight slider.
    Picture
    I also stacked the head of 00:25:402 (2) –on the tail of 00:25:015 (1) –
  5. 00:28:112 (1,2,3,4) –The distance between these notes are not the same. Please make sure they are.
  6. 00:34:306 (1,2,3,4) –^
  7. 00:51:725 (1,2,3,4,1) –Check the distance again please. It’s not the same.
  8. 01:04:499 (3) –Ctrl+H
  9. 01:11:467 (4) –Add new combo here and remove new combo here: 01:11:854 (1) –
  10. 01:27:338 (3) –Rather do this:
    Picture
    It’s to avoid the big overlap with 01:25:402 (1) –which is not advised.
  11. 01:47:854 (2,4) –What did you do here? Please avoid an unnecessary overlap like this. Try to make a pattern with the circles that are neat and not overlapping each other. Like a half-circle or something like that.

Like the Normal diff, improvement regarding the “look” of the diff is still needed. Neater patterns and try to avoid unnecessary overlaps that just ruin the look of your diff.

Hard:
  1. 00:04:886 (1,2,3,4) –Half-circle shape will look much better in my opinion and make the flow better as well.
    Picture
  2. 00:14:177 (1,2) –Rather stack them on top of each other? Will look neater in my opinion and play nicer.
  3. 00:15:144 (4,5) –^
  4. 00:28:886 (5) –Put in an extra repeat here? If you do this then remember to move 00:29:273 (6) –closer.
  5. 00:33:531 (3,4,5,6) –Rather half-circle shape like my first suggestion.
  6. 00:35:273 (6) –Maybe an extra repeat here as well?
  7. 00:46:693 (1,1,1) –I suggest stacking these three circles on top of each other.
  8. 00:52:499 (4) –Extra repeat?
  9. 00:59:854 (4) –Ctrl+H
  10. 01:14:564 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) –The placement of these circles look pretty random and make the diff look untidy. Try to form a shape with these circles to make it look more organised.

Overall, your hitsounding in my opinion require improvement. Unfortunately, I can’t really help you with that, so I request that you ask LordRaika for help with the hitsounding.
Every diff still needs more mods that will help you with better pattern suggestions and better placement of notes to make the map look neater.
Good Luck with this map~! :D
Cerulean Veyron
2,090 posts
Joined August 2012
Cerulean Veyron
Hello, M4M from my queue as a recheck! Sorry for the delay.

Well, you should've asked me directly instead of doing M4M just for a recheck :lol:
[> General <]
  1. - You have a few errors on what AiMod says. So go for a check on it.
  2. - You have two backgrounds on your beatmap's folder... Delete the small-size one.
  3. - The difficulty spread is unbalanced, like Insane and Hard, their gap is really close.
  4. - Your map got improved a little bit, but try to work more often~
[> Hard <]
  1. - CS4, the size is too big for a Hard diff.
  2. 00:08:757 (3,4,1) - Try to move circle (4) to x:272|y:284, and remake the parallel. Smoothen the flow...
  3. 00:10:306 (2,3,4) - The pattern here looks off the flow. Try curving one of the sliders or something.
  4. 00:16:499 (3,4,5,1) - Recorrect diamond formation? just move circle (1) approx x:128|y:64.
  5. 00:19:596 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - You might need a few remapping here...
  6. 00:21:338 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Too straightic, mind you curve?
  7. 00:28:112 (1,2,3,4,5) - This looks a bit Insane than Hard. It's better you make a 1/4 streaming slider at this part, like slider (5) for example.
  8. 00:32:757 (1,2) - Planning to make a perfect blanket or not?
  9. 00:34:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as 00:28:112 (1,2,3,4,5) -
  10. 00:37:015 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Same as 00:21:338 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) -
  11. 00:46:693 (1,1,1) - Replace from claps to finishes.
  12. 00:53:467 (4,5) - This pattern looks okay, i prefer making a symmetry here.
  13. 00:56:757 (3,4) - Ctrl + G on this.
  14. 00:57:531 (1,2) - Recorrect blanket?
  15. 01:05:273 (1,2,3,4) - You've make a weird flow here, what's the use of it?
  16. 01:12:822 (7) - Move this approx x:488|y:224 for a complete triangle formation.
  17. 01:16:306 (2,3,4,5) - This pattern could've ben better when it's a symmetry.
  18. - Can't mod further, 'cause the next tracks are likely the same as the ones i mentioned.
[> Insane <]
  1. 00:03:338 (1) - Well, you should know at first, putting a Finish would be a nice start.
  2. 00:06:435 (1,2,3,4,5) - The notes here are weirdly spaced, you should keep them active in some other placements than stacking.
  3. 00:09:531 (1,2,3) - Replace sliders as circles.
  4. 00:16:112 (2,3,4,5,6) - Recorrect this diamond? just move circle (6) approx x:212|y:248.
  5. 00:20:564 (2,4,5,6) - I don't mind this overlapping, but it's recommended to keep streams visible.
  6. 00:25:209 (2,3) - Ctrl + G, great playstyle.
  7. 00:28:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Kinda overmapped, i guess you should make some 1/4 slider jumps here for a bit, and stream all the way.
  8. 00:34:306 (1,2,3) - Long streams should start on 1/1, and this looks off.
  9. 00:36:241 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - Try to make a few jumps here, not just clearly spaced out just for flow.
  10. 00:46:693 (3,1,1) - Same reason as the previous diff.
  11. 00:52:112 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Why not making a Hexagon here? it might look more better.
  12. 00:55:983 (1,2,3,4) - Symmetry?
  13. 00:58:112 (4,7,2) - Move all notes to x:244.
  14. 01:01:402 (5,6) - You can possibly blanket here for a little bit.
  15. 01:09:531 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Notes here are in a serious weird placements, can this be remapped?
  16. 01:14:757 (2,3,4) - Too straight, might want to curve them? or make a symmetry.
  17. - I guess you need a few work here. You should utilize more of your overlaps and note placements. This affects spacings and patterns.

In Expert diff, it is most like the same issues as the diffs i've modded. Try finding more modders and see their opinions about your map~
If you don't understand one of my mods mentioned, or have a question. Please ask without hesitating.
Like i said on the first line of post, the map improved a little much better, but still needs a little work.
Good Luck once again, Koala!
Speed of Snail
548 posts
Joined March 2014
Speed of Snail
Hey, Your Mod as requested

NORMAL

The Timing and beats are pretty spot on, but some of the placement could be improved for sure. ofc that means everything here in the normal diff is a suggestion.

00:05:285 - This slider (Combo 2) Could be moved a touch to the left to reduce the harsh directional change there

00:17:285 - I'd recommend moving this slider slightly downwards to increase readability

00:21:931 - And this slider slightly up and to the right for readability

00:24:253 - I'd suggest rounding this slider out some, the angle is a tad too sharp for a Normal diff

00:37:608 - (Combo 1 - 4) I'd suggest changing this pattern so that the circle is at the end instead of the start, like 1,1,2,2,3,3,4,4,5 instead of 1,2,2,3,3,4,4,4. this would also remove the need for a repeating slider.

00:55:995 - I'd change this sliders shape so that the curve faces upwards instead of downwards. really just mirror the slider there.

00:57:156 - If you invert the slider as recommended, as a result lower this circle downwards.

01:30:834 - I'd suggest adding a break time in this gap here.

01:41:285 - This slider should be curved upwards a little to reduce the sudden increase in cursor speed required here

01:45:543 - (Combo 1 & 2) I'd suggest extending the Combo 1 slider to the first tick of the combo 2 slider and instead making combo 2 a circle where the slider tail of combo 2 is.

That's it for the Normal, generally quite clean, nice work on it so far.

HARD

Miscellaneous - The OD is surprisingly low, I'd recommend increasing this to 6

00:11:866 - (Combo 2 - 1) This segment seems a little much for a Hard, I'd suggest reducing the spacing slightly

00:17:092 - This circle right here (Combo 6) should be moved, this is very awkward to read, try placing it directly below where it is currently

00:32:189 - This slider is a tad high, try dragging it down a little bit

00:58:511 - (Combo 3 - 5) I don't like this pattern crossing over itself, swap the placements of the 4 and 5 combo circles here

01:02:963 - This slider is positions directly under the combo 1 circles, try offsetting it slightly to the left.

01:44:769 - This slider is too close to the edge, move it slightly to the left

Most of the issues with the Hard are to do with readability, just try straightening out patterns in general and reduce overlap as much as possible.

INSANE

Miscellaneous - CS is a touch smaller than I'd like to see, I'd suggest a reduction to 4.7

00:22:511 - Why is there no note here? I'd recommend adding a circle on this tick bridging the two sliders

00:28:124 - This little triplet section is awkward to tap, try making the first and third triple a 4 note stack and making a 4 tick repeating slider for the middle one.

00:34:318 - ^^^^^

01:17:285 - This slider is a little too low, consider raising it up a touch.

01:49:801 - (Combo 4 & 5) The fact that these single tap are on top of a stream can be confusing to read, try offsetting these two further back off the stream to make it easy to differentiate.

ANOTHER

Miscellaneous - CS is again a tad small, smaller circles are still fine but I'd suggest a reduction to 5 or 5.2

00:07:027 - I don't like the position of this circle, try making it slightly down and to the right of the combo 2 circle.

00:20:382 - This slider is a little too far outside of the grid at the tail, move it inwards slightly

00:34:318 - I really dislike this whole combo here, Just change the entire thing.

00:49:801 - There should not be a NC on this slider

01:29:963 - (combo 2 - 3) These two notes are difficult to read, try offsetting them slightly outwards.

01:31:995 - This circle is a tad too high, bring it downwards slightly

01:55:801 - Combo 5 and 6 are a tad too high, lower them slightly

EXTREME

Miscellaneous - Surprisingly the CS6 feels alright here, but the OD is quite strict, I'd recommend lowering it to an even 8

00:31:221 - Try increasing the spacing in this triplet

00:36:834 - ^^^^^

00:48:834 - Add a break time here

01:10:511 - This note is too high, lower it a tad

While there is probably a bit more you can do to clean this up, I myself quite like the extreme difficulty as it is, GL in ranking this map :D
Sylas
Elite Mapper
1,022 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Sylas

TheOnlyLeon wrote:

Hey, Your Mod as requested

NORMAL

The Timing and beats are pretty spot on, but some of the placement could be improved for sure. ofc that means everything here in the normal diff is a suggestion.

00:05:285 - This slider (Combo 2) Could be moved a touch to the left to reduce the harsh directional change there Changed pattern

00:17:285 - I'd recommend moving this slider slightly downwards to increase readability ^

00:21:931 - And this slider slightly up and to the right for readability ^

00:24:253 - I'd suggest rounding this slider out some, the angle is a tad too sharp for a Normal diff I wouldn't say so

00:37:608 - (Combo 1 - 4) I'd suggest changing this pattern so that the circle is at the end instead of the start, like 1,1,2,2,3,3,4,4,5 instead of 1,2,2,3,3,4,4,4. this would also remove the need for a repeating slider. Done

00:55:995 - I'd change this sliders shape so that the curve faces upwards instead of downwards. really just mirror the slider there. Done

00:57:156 - If you invert the slider as recommended, as a result lower this circle downwards. ^

01:30:834 - I'd suggest adding a break time in this gap here. Automatically deleted bc there's not enough space

01:41:285 - This slider should be curved upwards a little to reduce the sudden increase in cursor speed required here Done

01:45:543 - (Combo 1 & 2) I'd suggest extending the Combo 1 slider to the first tick of the combo 2 slider and instead making combo 2 a circle where the slider tail of combo 2 is.Done, made it a slider instead and replaced the next note with it's tail

That's it for the Normal, generally quite clean, nice work on it so far.

HARD

Miscellaneous - The OD is surprisingly low, I'd recommend increasing this to 6

00:11:866 - (Combo 2 - 1) This segment seems a little much for a Hard, I'd suggest reducing the spacing slightlyDone

00:17:092 - This circle right here (Combo 6) should be moved, this is very awkward to read, try placing it directly below where it is currently Changed that pattern a bit

00:32:189 - This slider is a tad high, try dragging it down a little bit Done

00:58:511 - (Combo 3 - 5) I don't like this pattern crossing over itself, swap the placements of the 4 and 5 combo circles here Changed pattern instead

01:02:963 - This slider is positions directly under the combo 1 circles, try offsetting it slightly to the left. Done

01:44:769 - This slider is too close to the edge, move it slightly to the left Done

Most of the issues with the Hard are to do with readability, just try straightening out patterns in general and reduce overlap as much as possible.

INSANE

Miscellaneous - CS is a touch smaller than I'd like to see, I'd suggest a reduction to 4.7

00:22:511 - Why is there no note here? I'd recommend adding a circle on this tick bridging the two sliders Done

00:28:124 - This little triplet section is awkward to tap, try making the first and third triple a 4 note stack and making a 4 tick repeating slider for the middle one. Done

00:34:318 - ^^^^^ ^

01:17:285 - This slider is a little too low, consider raising it up a touch. Changed pattern completely

01:49:801 - (Combo 4 & 5) The fact that these single tap are on top of a stream can be confusing to read, try offsetting these two further back off the stream to make it easy to differentiate. Done

ANOTHER

Miscellaneous - CS is again a tad small, smaller circles are still fine but I'd suggest a reduction to 5 or 5.2

00:07:027 - I don't like the position of this circle, try making it slightly down and to the right of the combo 2 circle.

00:20:382 - This slider is a little too far outside of the grid at the tail, move it inwards slightly

00:34:318 - I really dislike this whole combo here, Just change the entire thing.

00:49:801 - There should not be a NC on this slider

01:29:963 - (combo 2 - 3) These two notes are difficult to read, try offsetting them slightly outwards.

01:31:995 - This circle is a tad too high, bring it downwards slightly

01:55:801 - Combo 5 and 6 are a tad too high, lower them slightly Fixed everything

EXTREME

Miscellaneous - Surprisingly the CS6 feels alright here, but the OD is quite strict, I'd recommend lowering it to an even 8

00:31:221 - Try increasing the spacing in this triplet Done

00:36:834 - ^^^^^ ^

00:48:834 - Add a break time here Done

01:10:511 - This note is too high, lower it a tad Done

While there is probably a bit more you can do to clean this up, I myself quite like the extreme difficulty as it is, GL in ranking this map :D
Thank you so much for the mod :D
Annabel
Beatmap Nominator
521 posts
Joined October 2013
Annabel
[Great song choice~]

Normal~

00:15:156 (2) - Change to circle
Spinner at 00:38:963 - till 00:40:511 -
Move spinner to 01:26:963 - and end at 01:30:060 -
Spinner at 01:56:382 -

Hard~

Spinner at 00:39:156 -
Circle at 01:07:414 -
Change spinner to circle at 01:27:931 - then reverse

slider at 01:28:124 - till 01:30:060 - (It just seems

weird to me to have that spinner here)
Spinner at 01:56:576 -

Insane~

Slider at 00:38:963 - till 00:40:318 - (SV change too.

Since it's a faster part)
Circle at 00:40:511 -
Move spinner to 01:28:318 - end at 01:30:156 -
Spinner at 01:56:576 -

Another~

Reverse slider at 00:39:156 - and 00:39:737 - and

slider at 00:40:318 -
No circle at 01:05:189 (8) -
Circle at 01:13:608 -
Spinner at 01:56:576 -

Extreme~

CS 6 is ugly imo
00:15:156 (3,4) - Change to slider
Move 01:39:156 (6,7,1) to x:240 y:256 because with

that sv and cs, it's currently too far. @-@
Spinner at 01:56:576 -
Sylas
Elite Mapper
1,022 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Sylas

Sukida Ahri wrote:

[Great song choice~]

Normal~

00:15:156 (2) - Change to circle done
Spinner at 00:38:963 - till 00:40:511 - prefer it like this
Move spinner to 01:26:963 - and end at 01:30:060 - done
Spinner at 01:56:382 - Would rather not

Hard~

Spinner at 00:39:156 - ^
Circle at 01:07:414 - Done
Change spinner to circle at 01:27:931 - then reverse Done

slider at 01:28:124 - till 01:30:060 - (It just seems

weird to me to have that spinner here) Seems better like this imo
Spinner at 01:56:576 - I dont like how it plays with a spinner at the end

Insane~

Slider at 00:38:963 - till 00:40:318 - (SV change too.

Since it's a faster part) Prefer it with nothing there
Circle at 00:40:511 - ^
Move spinner to 01:28:318 - end at 01:30:156 - Made it start at 01:27:834 instead
Spinner at 01:56:576 -

Another~

Reverse slider at 00:39:156 - and 00:39:737 - and

slider at 00:40:318 -
No circle at 01:05:189 (8) - Done
Circle at 01:13:608 - Doesn't really fit in
Spinner at 01:56:576 -

Extreme~

CS 6 is ugly imo Made it a BIT bigger
00:15:156 (3,4) - Change to slider I dont really see why
Move 01:39:156 (6,7,1) to x:240 y:256 because with

that sv and cs, it's currently too far. @-@I think its fine, should be alright now that cs is bigger
Spinner at 01:56:576 -
]
Thanks for the mod ^^
XiMerx
384 posts
Joined March 2014
XiMerx
Hello TheKoala! NM from my queue~
I like this song from Cytus ^^
Sorry if my mod is terrible :/

[General]
  1. Remove deemo from tags since this song isn't from deemo?
  2. AIMod: Fill missing:effects.png wot?
[Normal]
  1. 00:25:801 (3) - Place it at the left side of the screen to prevent small crossover with the sliders behind. While you're at it, re-DS 00:26:576 (1)
[Hard]
  1. 01:02:382 (1,3) - Stack?
[Another]
  1. 00:34:318 (1,2,3,4) - I would prefer straightening this
  2. 00:46:318 (1) - Ctrl+G and blanket with 00:46:705 (1)
  3. 00:57:543 (1) - Slider instead of hitcircle?
  4. 01:09:737 (6) - Stack with 01:09:156 (3)
[Extreme]
  1. 00:09:543 (1) - Why the whistle?
  2. 00:24:446 (6) - Stack with 00:24:640 (8) 's slider end?
  3. 01:45:543 (1,2,3) - Fix blanket
Sorry couldn't find much plz dont kill me
Sylas
Elite Mapper
1,022 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Sylas

XiMerx wrote:

Hello TheKoala! NM from my queue~
I like this song from Cytus ^^
Sorry if my mod is terrible :/

[General]
  1. Remove deemo from tags since this song isn't from deemo?it is actually in Deemo
  2. AIMod: Fill missing:effects.png wot?tried making a storyboard but i guess it didn't delete properly?
[Normal]
  1. 00:25:801 (3) - Place it at the left side of the screen to prevent small crossover with the sliders behind. While you're at it, re-DS 00:26:576 (1)Done
[Hard]
  1. 01:02:382 (1,3) - Stack?Done
[Another]
  1. 00:34:318 (1,2,3,4) - I would prefer straightening this Done
  2. 00:46:318 (1) - Ctrl+G and blanket with 00:46:705 (1) Not sure what you mean but i think i did it
  3. 00:57:543 (1) - Slider instead of hitcircle? Done
  4. 01:09:737 (6) - Stack with 01:09:156 (3)Done
[Extreme]
  1. 00:09:543 (1) - Why the whistle? Replaced it with a finish
  2. 00:24:446 (6) - Stack with 00:24:640 (8) 's slider end?dzone
  3. 01:45:543 (1,2,3) - Fix blanketi think it's fixed
Sorry couldn't find much plz dont kill meI'll try not to ehhehe
Thanks so much for the mod :)
haha5957
1,433 posts
Joined July 2010
haha5957
ohayo ouo/


[Extreme]

I'm sorry but I honestly have to say that insane another extreme feels pretty much the same except they just have high SV or high distance snap... i do think another is somehow different from insane and another looks pretty decent but this diff is just way too off as of now imo

What i feel is you mapped this just because you want to make it hard, CS6 , 9.5AR , unnecessarily high SV/DS combined honestly isnt my favor too (now this is just me but if you want to use CS6 just use AR9 please and extremely high SV and distance snap for CS6 map feels ehh to me)

Not trying to say you suck gtfo but just wanted to say that I do dislike this diff just so let you know.. no offense

[Another]

00:35:479 (5) - make this point right side of the screen(follow the stream flow)?
01:17:479 (6,1) - add a circle between and make it stacked triple?
01:47:092 (1) - delete next 2 and just repeat this? feels better for me
01:55:801 (5) - from here to 01:56:382 (1) - make it as 1/4 stream? I know it doesnt have 1/4 on the music but I personally think would be better to add some variety since the music(thus the map too) is pretty much full of 1/2s


[Hard]

00:55:801 (4,1,2,3,1,2) - rhythm here feels little weird?
Iceskulls
1,612 posts
Joined February 2012
Iceskulls
[general]
  1. is there any reason why you use 0.3 stack leniency ? if there are any patterns that require this low stack leniency pls tell me where ?
    but would be better to use stack leniency 0.7 imo
  2. uncheck widescreen support , it's for sb
[easy]
  • you can nc every 2 measure of beat (every 2 big white tick ) , it works
  1. 00:09:543 (1,2,1) - this overlap is a bit tricky for beginners
  2. 00:18:060 (2,3) - change to 1/1 slider ? would play better imo like 00:21:156 (2) -
  3. 01:53:285 (1) - curve like this ? so the flow here 01:53:285 (1,1) - will be better
    SPOILER
[normal]
  • you can nc every 2 measure of beat (every 2 big white tick ), it works
  1. 00:26:576 (1) - not really necessary to nc this , it would make the pattern easier to read if you delete nc here
  2. 01:14:576 (1,2) - this stack is a bit confuse for normal , try unstack them ?

    you can add some more 1/2 at the beginning 00:03:350 - to 00:38:963 - , it's ok imo
    or you can delete some 1/2 at the last part I see you bomb with 1/2 pattern a lots there and it might make the structure consistency in this diff not good imo
[hard]
  • why use same sv as normal , at least make them a bit diffrent , hard should have higher sv than normal
  1. 00:11:866 (2,3,4,5,1) - this kinda a bit hard for hard diff you can convert some circles here to slider instead , I'd use this rhythm
    SPOILER
  2. 00:16:705 (4,5,6,1) - this overlap might be too hard for hard diff
  3. 00:25:027 (1,2) - not a really good overlap , try this ?
    SPOILER
  4. 00:35:479 (4,1) - rhythm here is not that good , this 00:35:866 - can be emphasized more , try this?
    SPOILER
  5. 01:02:382 (1,2) - this jumps might be a bit big for hard diff , suggest lower spacing a bit
  6. 01:14:576 (1,2) - try move (1) around for better overlap
    SPOILER
  7. 01:15:931 (3,1,2) - this is a bit hard for hard diff , try this?
    SPOILER
  8. 01:33:156 (1,2,3,4) - this overlap might be too hard for hard diff
  9. 01:44:769 (4,5) - this is not really necessary to jumps , try make spacing consistent here 01:44:769 (4,5,6) -

    I think this diff can be improved a bit at rhythm , spacing and flow
[insane]
  1. 00:53:285 (2) - ctrl+g would make the flow here 00:53:285 (2,3,4) - better
  2. 00:51:737 (2,3,4) - try to make spacing consistent for better flow
  3. 00:58:318 (2,3,1) - try to make spacing consistent for better flow

    similiar problem to normal , the structure consistency ,I don't understand why you just bomb with jumps in the last part but the beginning which also good to include some more jumps but you don't also note density can be increased here
[another]
  1. 00:03:350 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try this rhythm ?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:08:576 (2) - ctrl+g this so it would make flow here 00:07:995 (1,2,3) - a bit better
  3. 00:11:092 - this beat can be emphasized more , try this rhythm ?
    SPOILER
  4. 00:18:834 (1,2) - this anti-jumps doesn't play that good , I would prefer make jumps or use consistent spacing here

    maybe you can use some 1/4 to make some instresting rhythm would make this diff more instresting imo
good luck :)
Sylas
Elite Mapper
1,022 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Sylas

CelsiusLK wrote:

[general]
  1. is there any reason why you use 0.3 stack leniency ? if there are any patterns that require this low stack leniency pls tell me where ?
    but would be better to use stack leniency 0.7 imo Its mostly bc I prefer stacking the notes manually rather than osu doing it automatically bc I get more control over their placement
  2. uncheck widescreen support , it's for sb
[easy]
  • you can nc every 2 measure of beat (every 2 big white tick ) , it works
  1. 00:09:543 (1,2,1) - this overlap is a bit tricky for beginners
  2. 00:18:060 (2,3) - change to 1/1 slider ? would play better imo like 00:21:156 (2) -
  3. 01:53:285 (1) - curve like this ? so the flow here 01:53:285 (1,1) - will be better
    SPOILER
    fixed all
[normal]
  • you can nc every 2 measure of beat (every 2 big white tick ), it works
  1. 00:26:576 (1) - not really necessary to nc this , it would make the pattern easier to read if you delete nc here
  2. 01:14:576 (1,2) - this stack is a bit confuse for normal , try unstack them ?

    you can add some more 1/2 at the beginning 00:03:350 - to 00:38:963 - , it's ok imo
    or you can delete some 1/2 at the last part I see you bomb with 1/2 pattern a lots there and it might make the structure consistency in this diff not good imofixed all
[hard]
  • why use same sv as normal , at least make them a bit diffrent , hard should have higher sv than normal
  1. 00:11:866 (2,3,4,5,1) - this kinda a bit hard for hard diff you can convert some circles here to slider instead , I'd use this rhythm
    SPOILER
  2. 00:16:705 (4,5,6,1) - this overlap might be too hard for hard diff
  3. 00:25:027 (1,2) - not a really good overlap , try this ?
    SPOILER
  4. 00:35:479 (4,1) - rhythm here is not that good , this 00:35:866 - can be emphasized more , try this?
    SPOILER
  5. 01:02:382 (1,2) - this jumps might be a bit big for hard diff , suggest lower spacing a bit
  6. 01:14:576 (1,2) - try move (1) around for better overlap
    SPOILER
  7. 01:15:931 (3,1,2) - this is a bit hard for hard diff , try this?
    SPOILER
  8. 01:33:156 (1,2,3,4) - this overlap might be too hard for hard diff
  9. 01:44:769 (4,5) - this is not really necessary to jumps , try make spacing consistent here 01:44:769 (4,5,6) - fixed all

    I think this diff can be improved a bit at rhythm , spacing and flow
[insane]
  1. 00:53:285 (2) - ctrl+g would make the flow here 00:53:285 (2,3,4) - better
  2. 00:51:737 (2,3,4) - try to make spacing consistent for better flow
  3. 00:58:318 (2,3,1) - try to make spacing consistent for better flow

    similiar problem to normal , the structure consistency ,I don't understand why you just bomb with jumps in the last part but the beginning which also good to include some more jumps but you don't also note density can be increased herefixed all
[another]
  1. 00:03:350 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try this rhythm ?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:08:576 (2) - ctrl+g this so it would make flow here 00:07:995 (1,2,3) - a bit better
  3. 00:11:092 - this beat can be emphasized more , try this rhythm ?
    SPOILER
  4. 00:18:834 (1,2) - this anti-jumps doesn't play that good , I would prefer make jumps or use consistent spacing here

    maybe you can use some 1/4 to make some instresting rhythm would make this diff more instresting imofixed all
good luck :)
Thank you so much for the mod :D
mraihani
208 posts
Joined November 2014
mraihani
[Title]
the title is not D.R.G
Use D R G
(use space between letters D, R, and G instead using a ".")
here is the proof

[Tags]
add Claire Wang

[Normal]
00:52:124 (5,6) More like this:
change
Replace
280,92,52124,2,0,P|320:84|348:64,1,60,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,80,52511,2,0,L|440:140,1,60,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
to
268,92,52124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,60,52414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,124,52705,1,0,0:0:0:0:

01:04:511
add note at 01:04:898
add note
Repace
256,240,64511,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,240,65285,6,0,P|336:224|376:176,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
to
256,240,64511,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,256,64898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,240,65285,6,0,P|336:224|376:176,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Hard]
01:26:769 (2) Remove note.
01:27:834 move spinner start to 01:27:931

[Insane]
00:52:124
00:52:124
264,44,52124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,60,52414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,100,52705,1,0,0:0:0:0:

01:43:608
328,216,103608,2,0,L|296:264,3,52.5000020027161,4|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

if you want to use these mods, please do not overwrite the old ones, just in case if I made a mistake on modding.
edited normal
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Cytus OST - D.R.G by Ani.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 52898
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 48194,49743,50517,51291
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:D.R.G
TitleUnicode:D.R.G
Artist:Ani
ArtistUnicode:Ani
Creator:TheKoala
Version:Normal:edit
Source:Cytus
Tags:drg Testimony Operators Chapter 1 Onoken axsword Progressive trance Deemo
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"drg.png",0,0
//Break Periods
2,40511,48601
2,77872,85763
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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15737,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
52898,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
64705,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
65285,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
77672,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
91608,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
102447,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
103995,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
116382,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,83,83
Combo2 : 128,128,192
Combo3 : 229,229,229
Combo4 : 45,45,45

[HitObjects]
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388,200,4511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,156,4898,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,244,5285,2,0,B|116:280|116:280|88:268|32:280,1,120
0,156,6060,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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184,264,62963,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,76,63156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,63350,2,0,P|112:232|112:288,1,105.000004005432
254,342,63737,6,2,L|184:264,1,105.000004005432
276,136,64124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,24,64318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,224,64511,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,144,64705,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,144,64801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,144,64898,2,0,P|64:200|88:256,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,272,65285,6,0,P|200:240|176:192,1,105.000004005432,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,244,65672,2,0,L|472:316,1,105.000004005432
264,348,66060,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,152,66253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,48,66447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,208,66640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,160,66834,6,0,P|392:216|320:320,1,210.000008010865,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,320,67414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,176,67608,2,0,P|128:144|208:144,1,105.000004005432,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,236,67995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,320,68189,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,136,68382,6,0,L|88:40,1,105.000004005432,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,252,68769,2,0,P|196:316|172:364,1,105.000004005432
412,348,69156,2,0,L|313:310,1,105.000004005432,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,132,69543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
65,140,69737,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,216,69931,6,0,L|65:140,1,105.000004005432,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,240,70318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,80,70511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,320,70705,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,320,71092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,160,71285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,308,71479,6,0,L|-4:268,1,105.000004005432,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,128,71866,2,0,L|216:160,1,105.000004005432
400,128,72253,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,72,72447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,248,72640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,28,72834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,256,73027,6,0,P|400:256|440:200,1,105.000004005432,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,172,73414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,340,73608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,176,73801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,104,73995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,272,74189,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,56,74382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,296,74576,6,0,P|248:272|216:160,1,210.000008010865,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,56,75156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,171,75350,2,0,B|275:259|275:259|323:235|411:243,1,210.000008010865,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,344,75931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,64,76318,5,4,0:0:0:0:
232,84,76608,1,4,0:0:0:0:
440,168,76898,5,4,0:0:0:0:
324,256,77092,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,164,77285,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,200,77479,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,328,77672,5,4,0:0:0:0:
176,176,83866,5,2,0:0:0:0:
176,176,83963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,176,84060,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,176,84156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,176,84253,2,0,P|240:160|144:256,1,420,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,270,86769,6,0,L|115:206,1,70,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,136,87156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,112,87350,2,0,L|216:24,2,70
256,192,87834,12,0,90060,0:0:0:0:
344,128,91608,6,0,P|392:64|400:8,1,105.000004005432,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,172,91995,2,0,L|432:276,1,105.000004005432
320,232,92382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,308,92576,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,308,92672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,308,92769,2,0,P|104:324|64:300,1,105.000004005432
120,176,93156,5,2,0:0:0:0:
68,48,93350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,176,93543,2,0,L|224:184,1,105.000004005432
172,56,93931,2,0,L|68:48,1,105.000004005432
36,56,94221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
12,64,94318,2,0,P|-4:120|20:160,1,105.000004005432
88,272,94705,5,2,0:0:0:0:
216,200,94898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,95092,2,0,P|340:220|376:288,1,105.000004005432
216,200,95479,2,0,L|176:80,1,105.000004005432
176,80,95769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,64,95866,2,0,P|120:40|72:96,1,105.000004005432
64,88,96156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,116,96253,6,0,L|40:228,1,105.000004005432,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,316,96640,2,0,P|204:324|252:292,1,105.000004005432
308,172,97027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,172,97124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,172,97221,2,0,L|332:52,1,105.000004005432
484,32,97608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,32,97705,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,32,97801,6,0,L|460:152,1,105.000004005432,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,280,98189,2,0,P|412:292|472:228,1,105.000004005432
396,168,98576,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,92,98769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,92,98866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,92,98963,2,0,P|220:136|216:192,1,105.000004005432
152,252,99350,5,2,0:0:0:0:
28,292,99543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,188,99737,2,0,L|28:292,1,105.000004005432
128,140,100124,2,0,P|104:92|40:68,1,105.000004005432
40,68,100414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,72,100511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,76,100705,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,76,100801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,76,100898,6,0,P|256:76|304:60,1,105.000004005432,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,124,101285,2,0,P|432:124|384:108,1,105.000004005432
212,176,101672,2,0,P|268:176|316:160,1,105.000004005432
496,224,102059,2,0,P|440:224|392:208,1,105.000004005432
260,100,102447,5,6,0:0:0:0:
408,328,103221,6,0,P|420:268|344:208,1,157.500006008148
328,216,103608,2,0,L|296:264,3,52.5000020027161,4|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,200,103995,6,0,P|328:148|236:96,1,112,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,104382,2,0,L|243:186,1,112
108,240,104769,2,0,P|44:192|52:132,1,112,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,28,105156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,88,105350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,236,105543,6,0,P|416:200|472:224,1,112,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,56,105931,2,0,P|276:92|220:68,1,112
160,188,106318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,352,106511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,248,106705,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,140,106898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,348,107092,6,0,P|436:348|496:280,1,112,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,176,107479,2,0,P|429:145|374:147,1,112
216,352,107866,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,128,108060,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,168,108253,2,0,P|52:224|52:296,1,112
148,128,108640,6,0,L|204:20,1,112,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,109027,2,0,P|388:104|436:48,1,112
200,28,109414,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,328,109801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,220,109995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,260,110189,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,264,110285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,268,110382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,272,110479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,276,110576,2,0,P|460:232|464:160,1,112,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,110963,2,0,P|208:216|204:288,1,112,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,144,111350,2,0,L|296:56,1,112,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,312,111737,6,0,L|368:400,1,112,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,112124,1,4,0:0:0:0:
132,328,112318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,112511,2,0,P|344:116|276:96,1,112,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,212,112898,2,0,L|257:172,1,112,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,116,113285,5,4,0:0:0:0:
344,57,113479,2,0,L|440:116,1,112,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,288,113866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
385,197,114060,2,0,L|320:288,1,112,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,92,114447,1,4,0:0:0:0:
228,186,114640,2,0,L|168:92,1,112,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,252,115027,6,0,P|228:280|276:264,1,112,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,32,115414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,115608,1,4,0:0:0:0:
472,120,115801,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,68,115995,2,0,B|244:96|208:88|208:88|176:100|152:148,1,112,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,212,116382,5,4,0:0:0:0:
Starfall9908
663 posts
Joined November 2013
Starfall9908
Sorry for making you waiting. Thank you for your mod

[Newbie]
  1. 00:23:479 (3) - make this more shaped to be a blanket to 00:24:640 (4)
  2. 00:29:672 (3) - ^
  3. 00:34:318 (1) - blanket
  4. 00:37:414 (1) - there's no need for a NC like that in an easy diff
  5. 01:13:801 (1) - ^
  6. 01:28:511 (1) - End the slider here 01:29:963
  7. 01:43:995 (1) - blanket
[beginner]
  1. I think this is a bit too hard to call "beginner" please call this diff "Normal"
  2. 00:28:124 (1) - I would bake this parallel to 00:28:898 (2) like the pic
    SPOILER
    http://puu.sh/hWoZp/265053b411.jpg
  3. 00:48:253 (1,1) - unneccessary NC
  4. 01:25:414 (1,1) - The first note after a spinner needs to be at least 2 beats away from the end of the slider.
  5. 01:28:511 (1) - ENd the spinner here 01:29:963
[Intermeditate (did I spell it right?)]
  1. 00:10:318 (2,1,2) - distance snap. The distance between (2) and (1) is smaller than (1) and (2)
  2. 00:15:156 (2,1) - the stack is a bit off

This is all the time I had. It's a nice song and a well made mapset

Goos luck with ranking :D
Sylas
Elite Mapper
1,022 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Sylas

nadapan wrote:

Sorry for making you waiting. Thank you for your mod

[Newbie]
  1. 00:23:479 (3) - make this more shaped to be a blanket to 00:24:640 (4)
  2. 00:29:672 (3) - ^
  3. 00:34:318 (1) - blanket
  4. 00:37:414 (1) - there's no need for a NC like that in an easy diff
  5. 01:13:801 (1) - ^
  6. 01:28:511 (1) - End the slider here 01:29:963
  7. 01:43:995 (1) - blanket
[beginner]
  1. I think this is a bit too hard to call "beginner" please call this diff "Normal"
  2. 00:28:124 (1) - I would bake this parallel to 00:28:898 (2) like the pic
    SPOILER
    http://puu.sh/hWoZp/265053b411.jpg
  3. 00:48:253 (1,1) - unneccessary NC
  4. 01:25:414 (1,1) - The first note after a spinner needs to be at least 2 beats away from the end of the slider.
  5. 01:28:511 (1) - ENd the spinner here 01:29:963
[Intermeditate (did I spell it right?)]
  1. 00:10:318 (2,1,2) - distance snap. The distance between (2) and (1) is smaller than (1) and (2)
  2. 00:15:156 (2,1) - the stack is a bit off

This is all the time I had. It's a nice song and a well made mapset

Goos luck with ranking :D
Thanks for the mod! Fixed everything
NVAN
268 posts
Joined November 2013
NVAN
Hi, From M4M :3

[Beginner]

  • Nothing To Say :D
[Intermediate]
  1. 00:08:769 (6,7,1) - Try to make the each of them look like a straight line (For Short, Move the 7 to x:128 y:284)
  2. 00:30:447 (4,5,1) - ^
  3. 01:04:124 (4) - Use the same slider as 01:03:737 (3)
  4. 01:27:834 (1) - Spinner end should be at 01:30:060
[Advanced]
  1. 00:04:124 (3) - Use the same slider as 00:04:898 (1) -
  2. 01:27:834 (1) - Spinner end should be at 01:30:060

[Expert]
  1. 01:00:253 (4) - Put it in the tail of 00:59:092 (1)
  2. 01:01:414 (4) - Make this has the same rotation as 01:01:027 (3)
  3. 01:27:834 (1) - Spinner end should be at 01:30:060
  4. 01:35:769 (6) - Move it to x:168 y:72
[Master]
  1. 00:39:060 - Use spinner from here to 00:40:511
  2. 00:49:027 (3,4,5,6) - Give spacing because it'll be confusing when to decide to jump if the previous jump is like 00:48:253 (1,2)
  3. 01:04:705 (4,5,6) - Please make it like this http://puu.sh/i2cvi/5d315658b7.jpg . This will be invisible in normal skin type
  4. 01:16:511 (1) - Use the same slider as 01:16:705 (2)
  5. 01:27:834 (1) - Spinner end should be at 01:30:060
That's all. Good luck :)
Sylas
Elite Mapper
1,022 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Sylas

XeroiZi HD wrote:

Hi, From M4M :3

[Beginner]

  • Nothing To Say :D
[Intermediate]
  1. 00:08:769 (6,7,1) - Try to make the each of them look like a straight line (For Short, Move the 7 to x:128 y:284) That wouldn't be good for the flow
  2. 00:30:447 (4,5,1) - ^
  3. 01:04:124 (4) - Use the same slider as 01:03:737 (3) I prefer it like this
  4. 01:27:834 (1) - Spinner end should be at 01:30:060 It's fine like this i think (previous modder suggested it)
[Advanced]
  1. 00:04:124 (3) - Use the same slider as 00:04:898 (1) - I don't really see why
  2. 01:27:834 (1) - Spinner end should be at 01:30:060

[Expert]
  1. 01:00:253 (4) - Put it in the tail of 00:59:092 (1) Done
  2. 01:01:414 (4) - Make this has the same rotation as 01:01:027 (3) [color=FF0000]The flow is better like this imo[/color]
  3. 01:27:834 (1) - Spinner end should be at 01:30:060
  4. 01:35:769 (6) - Move it to x:168 y:72 Done
[Master]
  1. 00:39:060 - Use spinner from here to 00:40:511 [color=FF0000]I prefer it without one[/color]
  2. 00:49:027 (3,4,5,6) - Give spacing because it'll be confusing when to decide to jump if the previous jump is like 00:48:253 (1,2) That's the point of it, but I might change it if more ppl point it out
  3. 01:04:705 (4,5,6) - Please make it like this http://puu.sh/i2cvi/5d315658b7.jpg . This will be invisible in normal skin type Done
  4. 01:16:511 (1) - Use the same slider as 01:16:705 (2) Done
  5. 01:27:834 (1) - Spinner end should be at 01:30:060
That's all. Good luck :)
Thanks for the mod! c': Will mod your map as soon as I have time
aigoh
398 posts
Joined February 2014
aigoh
Hello, I like your username. And what the…this map set’s good
I’ll shoot a star o/
[general]
  1. wow, awesome set :) just remember to not end a slider tail on the parts that should have emphasis (e.g. large cymbal sound on white ticks).
  2. and for the same reason, try not to end you slider tail on the big white tick. In most of the cases, doing so will make the rhythm better. (Sure, there are big white ticks that don’t have significant sounds, so ending the slider tail there, or not mapping out that part, will work.)


[Expert]
  1. Change the difficulty name to “Insane,” as stated in the ranking criteria.
  2. I would say that this is a lighter insane, since patterns are simpler with small jumps, and scarce amount of streams? OD determines how easy or hard it will be to achieve accuracy, or the harshness it puts on a player when doing spinners. Because of this, OD increases as the difficulty gets higher. However, OD 6.7 is not at all used. You could do 6.5 instead—there are ranked maps that use this value. Keep in mind that OD of 6.5 is used on relaxing songs (in which players are supposed to be not stressed about being accurate), light insanes in a mapset with harder insane (for the sake of better difficulty spread), and harder hards. Try searching beatmaps with “OD=6.5” on osu playscreen for better examples—you’ll get what I mean
  3. 00:08:769 (3) - try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/i3V7N.jpg
  4. 00:09:350 (4) – try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/i3vHw.jpg ending this slider on an important point of this song does not give good feedback (nor fun).
  5. 00:30:834 (5) –again, it is not good to end the slider tail on the big white tick. Shorten the slider and then place a note at 00:31:221 –
  6. 00:33:350 –add note? I don’t see why there is a pause, since the music is still going on, nor is there a vocal pause. I think using the longer slider beforehand like 00:32:769 (1) –gave a pretty good amount of pause.
  7. 01:10:898 – this pause is okay since there is change in music, imo
  8. 00:57:350 (5) – try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/i3V8d.jpg
  9. 01:02:769 (2,3) –ctrl+ G for better and consistent rhythm, as used in 00:59:672 (2,3) -. Don’t forget to change the hitsounds if you apply this mod!
  10. 01:26:769 (1,2) –ctrl+G for better rhythm
  11. 01:27:350 (3) – this rhytm works, but felt weird when I was playing it. So try this rhythm intead: http://puu.sh/i3V8B.jpg
  12. 01:37:221 (5) –change into stream?
  13. 01:53:479 (2,3) –01:54:447 (5,6) - 01:55:027 (1,2) - ctrl+G


[Master]
  1. rhythms were generally confusing, especially the parts with kick sliders.
  2. 00:03:350 (1,2,3) – the kick sliders start on weird beats, so how about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/i3V95.jpg
  3. 00:04:898 (1,2,3) -00:09:543 (1,2,3) - ^
  4. 00:14:382 (2,3,4,5,6) –not a rhythm. Delete 00:14:866 (3) – since there is no significant sound, and try this: http://puu.sh/i3V9S.jpg
  5. 00:22:898 (7,8) –00:29:285 (9,10) - ctrl+G for better rhythm
  6. 00:23:769 (2) –move to 00:23:866 – and place a note on 00:23:769 -
  7. 00:29:866 (2,3,4,5,6,7) – try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/i3VaB.jpg
  8. 00:37:414 (1,2,3,4) – I think triplets would work better for better emphasis
  9. 00:38:092 –add note?
  10. 00:38:189 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - http://puu.sh/i3Vb7.jpg
  11. 01:36:253 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/i3Vc4.jpg
  12. I’ll stop here with the kick sliders. Keep in mind it feels weird to start them on blue ticks, and it does not provide good feedback.
  13. 01:50:963 (1,2,3,4) -01:51:737 (1,2,3,4) –I like these :D


[Hard]
  1. spacing does not look good overall. Try to keep DS consistent, and then use ctrl+G on sliders whenever jump is needed.
  2. 00:10:318 (2) -00:13:414 (3) -00:23:092 (6) - 00:57:156 (3) - http://puu.sh/i3Vco.jpg again, try not to end sliders on big white ticks.
  3. 00:14:189 (4) –00:24:834 - add note
  4. 00:56:576 (2) –not a good flow. http://puu.sh/i3VdV.jpg
  5. 01:06:834 (1,4) –overlap does not look nice. http://puu.sh/i3Vef.jpg
  6. 01:46:318 (3) –ctrl G twice for neater stacking
  7. 01:50:576 (2,3,4,1) - not a good flow. I think you were going for the oval flow? http://puu.sh/i3VeC.jpg


[Easy, Normal]
  1. these need remapping. Keep in mind the stuff I mentioned about the white ticks when re-mapping—the current rhythm is awkward. I think it’s good, but not the best either.
  2. In terms of neatness, it’s not good. Try to utilize the ctrl C or J options, or Rotating 30/45/60 degrees.
  3. DS should be consistent—Base DS +/- 0.03. For example, in Normal, 00:52:511 (6) –is a bit off.
  4. 01:06:834 (5,1) –In Normal, this will confuse the newbies. I suggest moving (1) to somewhere more visible and apparent.
  5. 01:31:608 –I like the rhythms you use from here, very simple and nice for the newbies!
Grrum
886 posts
Joined November 2011
Grrum
Hi. Got a little lazy in the middle of my mod, so didn't mod Intermediate or Advanced, and it would explain why the mods are bad. But hey, figured it'd be better to post than not. Hope this helps!

[Beginner]

00:16:898 (2) – I don't quite like this rhythm. I sense that you want to use this to add a little diversity to the rhythm since the rhythm at 00:21:931 (1,2,3) – dominates the map. Maybe instead of 00:16:898 (2) – being a slider, make it two circles? Apply to the rest of this section?

01:00:640 (3,1) – On one of these two sliders, you need to break the counterclockwise flow, it just feels stale after the fourth time.

[Expert]

00:16:898 (5) – has a distance spacing of 1.66x. This sets the bar for how energetic that popping sound is. So at 00:18:447 (5) - , it feels odd that it goes down in dist spacing to 1.31x. I think it needs to be at least what it was at 00:16:898 (5) –

00:21:156 (4) – feels odd. I think the reason is that the change in circle flow is too similar to 00:19:608 (4) - . Try having 384, 16 (not exactly, probably make the slider end a triangle)

Consider 00:21:931 (1) – being Ctrl + G.
Consider 00:23:672 (2) - being at 93, 281

00:29:479 – The reason why I think there should be something here is that the stream in this combo increases the interest level on your pacing curve. By stopping where you do, you dramatically cut that energy off instead of rolling with it, so the pacing of the map feels off. Since I think either a slider end or a circle should be here, you probably want to make 00:29:285 – a clickable note since it has a strong beat. I like changing 00:29:092 (8) – to a circle and making the next two non blue ticks also a circle. Same thing with the next stream.

00:38:963 (1) – The green break seems a little odd to me. Consider using a long slow slider or a spinner here.

00:52:898 (1,2) – and 00:54:060 (5,1) – feel too similar. Try making 00:52:898 (1) – a copy of 2 and move it to ~320, 100 like so http://puu.sh/i456K/ab864ff72f.jpg. I didn't quite like this version, so try changing 00:54:447 (1) – instead. I think with the upbeat wants a change in flow, and if that's the case you're gonna have to change 00:54:834 (2) - . Maybe try 00:54:060 (5,1) – like this http://puu.sh/i470P/7794fc68ef.jpg ?

00:55:995 (1) – Ctrl + G and rotate

It's possible you may want to have 01:02:769 (2) – on the other side of 1, but I tried around with that and it doesn't actually improve it all that much, just an idea.

01:06:834 (1) – Ctrl + G

01:46:318 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) – Right now, this goes in a mostly counterclockwise circle, which I like because the melody has a slightly repetitive nature as the pitch slowly decreases. But when the pitch increases at 01:49:414 (4) - , I think it'd better to break that clockwise flow by doing Ctrl + H. Doing so makes the flow at 01:49:995 (5,1) – awkward, so maybe just Ctrl + H the rest of the map at 1.

[Master]

00:38:963 (1) – The green break seems a little odd to me. Consider using a long slow slider or a spinner here.

00:49:027 (3,4,5) – I do not recommend using the same distance when you halve the rhythm. If you want to keep this distance, you have to change the flow to something other than the same square. I would recommend both shortening the distance and changing the flow.

01:01:027 (3) – Consider making this a ¼ slider and having a circle at 01:01:221 -

01:51:737 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – Make the overall flow of this go clockwise to contrast with the previous combos.
Clevercav
10 posts
Joined June 2013
Clevercav
Hi. Just wanted to add a little detail to the master difficulty. :)

01:16:898 - Maybe add a circle to (3), (4) (creating a triple) to smooth things a bit up. The small break between (2) and (3)
might confuse som as the beatmap in general is pretty smooth in relative to the other circles. Of course, this is just a suggestion.

Other than that, I think the beatmap is pretty neat and hopefully you will get it approved soon :D
blooming tea
107 posts
Joined August 2014
blooming tea
I hear Sandstorm here 00:03:253 :D
Lami
1,756 posts
Joined June 2011
Lami
[Beginner]

00:04:511 (2) - around x336 y268 better flow.
and check DS
00:26:576 (2,3) - not recommend to use stack in lowest diff.
01:25:414 (1,1) - lack of recovery time. remove 01:27:737 (1) -
01:27:834 (1) - check snap

[Standard]

00:12:640 (1) - not recommend to use long slider
maybe 00:13:414 - clickable nice?
00:14:382 (5,6,1) - kinda hard to reading rhythm for beginner player.
00:29:672 (1) - remove nc

[Advanced]

00:32:382 (5) - more good flow if you placed it below
00:40:511 (2) - add note? quitely strong beat

[Expert]

00:15:156 (4) - same highest diff
00:47:479 (3,1) - more DS better for emphasis
00:50:963 (5,6) - unexpected partten despite of similar sound. stacking better by 00:50:189 (2,3) -
00:53:672 (5,6) - make more DS here 00:54:060 (6) - pretty strong beat
01:30:060 (1,1) - maybe remove some NC

[X]

00:15:156 (4) - add nc, there have many rhythm change much in same NC cycle.
00:16:705 (6,2) - stack?
00:40:511 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 1/8 slider doesn't good choice, for here.
also, music don't enough to support that. + pretty weird playing.
i already saw similar failed situation at ranked map...
01:37:705 (5,1) - kinda huge DS
Sylas
Elite Mapper
1,022 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Sylas

Lami wrote:

[Beginner]

00:04:511 (2) - around x336 y268 better flow.
and check DS
00:26:576 (2,3) - not recommend to use stack in lowest diff.
01:25:414 (1,1) - lack of recovery time. remove 01:27:737 (1) -
01:27:834 (1) - check snap

[Standard]

00:12:640 (1) - not recommend to use long slider
maybe 00:13:414 - clickable nice?
00:14:382 (5,6,1) - kinda hard to reading rhythm for beginner player.
00:29:672 (1) - remove nc

[Advanced]

00:32:382 (5) - more good flow if you placed it below
00:40:511 (2) - add note? quitely strong beat pref not

[Expert]

00:15:156 (4) - same highest diff
00:47:479 (3,1) - more DS better for emphasis
00:50:963 (5,6) - unexpected partten despite of similar sound. stacking better by 00:50:189 (2,3) -
00:53:672 (5,6) - make more DS here 00:54:060 (6) - pretty strong beat
01:30:060 (1,1) - maybe remove some NC

[X]

00:15:156 (4) - add nc, there have many rhythm change much in same NC cycle.
00:16:705 (6,2) - stack?
00:40:511 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 1/8 slider doesn't good choice, for here.
also, music don't enough to support that. + pretty weird playing.
i already saw similar failed situation at ranked map... not sure, ill keep it for now and get more suggestions
01:37:705 (5,1) - kinda huge DS
Fixed everything else
Thanks for the mod!
]hamham[
22 posts
Joined August 2015
]hamham[
[GENERAL]

Remove the metric ton of inherited timing sections from 00:40:560 in all difficulties except DEATH; in that map, they serve a purpose, but in all others that space is occupied by a break time, so they are not exactly needed

[ADVANCED]

You should probably raise the HP to 5, it's a bit low compared to the actual difficulty of the map

00:22:705 (3,4,5,6) - These diamond segments are a pet peeve of mine; they have been in the Traumatized Hard difficulty of Inferno as well, and felt out of place there, too, due to the difficulty spike they present compared to everything else
They are basically 155BPM singletapping periods with a pattern to follow as an added bonus, which could maybe fit into the kiais (especially the third), but definitely not here IMO
Change it to basically any other 4 circle formation you can think of and it will play better

00:46:705 (1,1,2,3,4) - I'd either fill in the empty part after the first circle, or remove the notes after the second; as it stands, it's a bit unexpected and awkward to play

[DEATH]

Unsure about this one because I can't playtest this monstrosity, but maybe reduce the HP drain to something like 6.5 or even 6
HP7 is basically "miss 3 notes in a row and you're out", which is a bit excessive for a 5.6 star map

Rest is cool beans
Good luck with the mapset :)
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