Lokovodo wrote:

Sorry but i can't help you with this, since the song is too slow and i have no creative motivation with something this slow.

xChangJo wrote:

Hi, From my modding Queue /o/

General:

- I think you need give more variety to slider in your beatmap,I recommend read this guide -> t/208596
(Try to get some ideas for your slider you only use 2 o 3 form to slider and is bored to play the same :c)
Thanks for the guide link! Going to add more slider shape.

- I think the kiai time is better to start in 01:26:649 and end in 02:03:359.
Will change it. The old kiai time was actually one of my favorite part.

- You need a background with 1366x768.
The old size was used to retain the original proportion, but I'll change it.

Storyboard:

- with widescreen support you need the imagen (Background) whit 960x540.

xChangJo wrote:

- You need a background with 1366x768.

The background should be 1366x768 or 960x540?

Easy:

- For this beatmap I recommend only use 1/1 beatsnap divisor and try avoid this thing 00:04:543 (1) -
But I think there are important notes that fall in the blue ticks in this song, so I still consider to use 1/4.
To compensate that in Easy difficulty, I make sure that notes on blue ticks have enough time distance from the previous and the next note.
Do you mean slider that ends in red ticks?
- 00:10:070 (3) - Add circle at this part for example, for make the rythm more enjoyable
Going to add this.
- 00:54:280 (1) - Move this slider to 00:55:070 (1) - and add circle in 00:54:280 (Avoid to hide the principal beat with the end of slider
Going to do this, but I want to keep the blue tick note in 00:56:451, so maybe the slider need to be extended to that note?
- 01:00:596 (1) - The same ^
Same.
- 01:09:083 (2) - Avoid the blue tick on easy mode, always this notes sound better in white tick or red if you think is necessary.
But there is no vocal at the adjacent red or white tick. I think the time distance from the previous note is far enough to compensate it.
- 01:12:241 (4) - The same ^
Same.
- 02:57:438 (3) - Avoid use the blue tick with slider too.
I think slider ending in a blue tick like that is fine because it is not too short, matches the vocal, and has enough time distance from the next note.

Normal:

- Use 1/2 beatsnap divisor but be careful with this slider or notes in red tick for example 00:45:596 (4) - this slider need to end in 00:47:175
Still consider to use 1/4 for the same reason, and compensating it for Normal difficulty in a similar way as in Easy difficulty.
But there's no vocal at 00:47:175.
- 01:00:596 (1) - don't hide the principal beat :c, move the slider to 01:01:385 (1) - and add circle in 01:00:596 and 01:00:991
Going to do this.
- 01:04:149 (3) - the same avoid this, in slow song the principal beat is very
Maybe splitting it into two notes, replacing the slider's start and end?
- 01:05:333 (4) - and use this notes (blue tick) if you thing is necessary
It won't match the vocal.
- 01:08:096 (2) - The same :c
The same with what?

Hard:

- The same in other difficulties
Is it about hiding the principal beats?
- 00:43:030 (3) - Avoid this thing if it not necessary, move this slider to 00:43:228 (3) - and make 1 snap more short
But it corresponds to a vocal, "tsukue no ue ni".
- 01:11:451 (7) - The same move this slider to 01:11:649 (7) - the rythm heard clearly if you use playback rate 25% and maybe add a note in 01:11:451,
if you want to map the blue tick
If it is moved, the vocal at 01:11:846 wouldn't get mapped. There's a rhythm at 01:11:649, but it's not a vocal.

Good Luck with your beatmap /o/
Wish me luck!

-Tochi wrote:

From my modding queue

• 
  General

1. Remember that all difficulties should have the same MetaData. Check AiMod for more information. OK

• 
  Hard

1. 00:05:135 (5) - NC. {1} The combo currently matches the lyrics, so for now, maybe not.
   (The combo currently is quite high though, maybe it will change in the future)
2. 00:07:701 (4) - Too close to 00:06:714 (3) - Use DS, and stack the end of this slider 00:07:701 (4) - with 00:09:280 (5) -
   {2}The DS is 0.73x, it is consistent with most notes in the song.
   Stacked it.
3. 00:11:451 (5) - NC. Same as {1}
4. 00:14:017 (8,9) - Do the same as you did here 00:07:701 (4,5) - OK
5. 00:17:767 (5) - NC. Same as {1}
6. 00:19:346 (7,8) - Use DS and stack this sliderend with 00:21:912 (9) - OK
7. 00:24:083 (5) - NC. Same as {1}
8. 00:26:649 (8,9) - Do the same as here 00:19:346 (7,8) - OK
9. Do the same thing above wit hall the other parts like that, but you don't need to stack the sliderend with the last circle. OK
10. 00:54:280 (1) - Shorten this slider to here 00:54:478 - and put a circle here 00:54:675 - It fits more with the vocal, also because u only map vocal.
    OK
11. 00:55:662 (4,5) - Too close to each other, use DS. Same as {2}
12. 00:57:833 (6) - NC. Same as {1}
13. 01:01:978 (4,5) - Too close to each other. Same as {2}
14. 01:14:609 (4,5) - Same as above ^ Same as {2}
15. 01:16:780 (6) - NC. Same as {1}
16. 01:28:622 (6) - Same as above ^ Same as {1}
17. 01:32:175 (1) - Shorten it to 1/1 and put a circle here 01:32:372 - OK
18. 01:37:109 (9,10,11) - Too close to 01:36:122 (8) - Use DS. Same as {2}
19. 01:41:253 (6) - NC. Same as {1}
20. Use DS here 01:48:360 (6,7,8) - & 01:49:741 (9,10,11) - Same as {2}
21. 01:53:491 (6) - NC. Same as {1}
22. 01:56:649 (14) - Use DS. Same as {2}
23. 02:18:162 (4) - Use DS here too, here 02:20:728 (8,9) - and here 02:19:741 (7) - Same as {2}
24. 02:40:859 - I suggest to add kiai time here. Tried that, but the total Kiai time exceeded 1/3 of the song, so it's not added, for now.

• 
  Feedback
  
  Not much to say than what i think; it's kinda boring to play when you only map the vocal, it would be good if you mapped the music too. You will probably get a mod where they point out places you should map. Added 15 notes for the non vocal.
  Good luck~ Thank you!

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

hi ~

metadate check request from my queue

Artist : ( ! ) 初音ミク → halyosy OK
Romanised Artist : (delete) OK
Title : ok
Romanised Title : ok
source : ( ! )Hatsune Miku: Project DIVA F 2nd → 初音ミク -Project DIVA- F 2nd OK
tag delete : japanese OK
tag add : hatsune miku vocaloid OK
bg : ( ! ) 1229×768 → 1366×768 (16:9) or 1024×768 (4:3) (16:9)

good lukc >w</ Thank you!

Euny wrote:

your request! came from my queue Thank you for deciding to mod my request!


Nice banner for the modding queue

• Easy

1. 00:41:663 (1) - place this note to x297y192 for better blanket? (you also changing other stuffs for distance) OK, but I'll move it to x:296 instead to align with the grid
2. 00:43:242 - add note here. listen and carefully for tempo I'm following the vocal and bass for this area, so maybe not for now
3. 00:44:031 (4) - remove this note and make a slider. ^
   
4. 01:19:952 (7,8) - how about changing 1/2 slider? Tried it, but the slider's start and the slider's end are overlapping, so it's not changed for now
5. 02:25:873 (4) - i think this slider's end timing is 02:28:242 But I think the back vocal is still singing until 02:28:636, but I will consider this
   
6. 03:12:452 (4) - NC! It's still the same sentence in the lyric
7. 03:32:189 ~ 03:41:663 - i think, you must fill the note to this place. I've tried that, I need to set the snap divisor to 1/16 to map it, which is not recommended. I'm not even sure if the BPM there is the same or not. So for now I'll make it as a break

• Normal

1. i recommend cs3.5! Tried that, but the AiMod recognized the Normal difficulty as Easy when the CS is lowered from 4.5
2. 00:38:899 (7,8) - spacing error (Easy and Normal diffs are need to precise distance) OK
3. 02:25:873 (9,10) - ^ ^
4. 02:29:031 (10,11) - ^ ^
5. 03:25:873 (3,4) - ^ I need the jump here to increase the star difficulty to reach 1.50
6. 03:26:465 (4,5) - ^ ^
7. 03:26:860 (5,6) - ^ ^
8. 03:27:452 (6,7) - ^ ^
9. 03:27:847 (7,8) - ^ ^

• Hard

1. 00:07:715 (8) - NC OK
2. 00:14:031 (8) - ^ ^
3. 00:20:347 (8) - ^ ^
4. 00:26:663 (8) - ^ ^
5. 00:32:978 (8) - ^ ^
6. 00:40:873 (9) - ^and, move to x38y158 for better blanket and flow? NC at 00:39:294 (8) - and blanketed 00:40:873 (9)
   
7. 00:45:610 (8) - NC OK
8. 00:51:926 (11) - ^ ^
9. 00:55:084 (4) - ^ NC at 00:57:847 (7) - instead
10. 00:58:242 (9) - ^ ^
11. 01:01:399 (4) - ^ NC at 01:04:163 (7) - instead
12. 01:04:557 (9) - ^ ^
13. 01:06:136 (12) - ^ ^
14. 01:10:873 (6) - ^ NC at 01:10:478 (4) - instead
15. 01:14:031 (4) - ^ NC at 01:16:794 (7) - instead
16. 01:17:189 (9) - ^ ^
17. 01:26:663 (3) - ^ NC at 01:28:636 (6) - instead
18. 01:32:978 (4) - ^ NC at 01:35:742 (7) - instead
19. 01:36:136 (9) - ^ ^
20. 01:39:294 (3) - ^ NC at 01:41:268 (6) - instead
21. 01:45:610 (4) - ^ NC at 01:48:373 (7) - instead
22. 01:48:768 (9) - ^ ^
23. 01:51:926 (3) - NC changing! 01:51:531 (1) - is the beginning of a new sentence in the lyric
24. 01:53:505 (6) - NC OK
25. 01:55:084 (10) - ^ ^
26. 01:56:663 (14) - ^ It's still the same sentence in the lyric
27. 01:58:242 (3) - NC changing 01:57:847 (1) - is the beginning of a new sentence in the lyric
28. 01:59:821 (5) - NC I want to keep this for now
29. 02:24:294 (6) - ^ ^
30. 02:47:978 (9) - ^ NC at 02:47:584 (7) - instead
31. 02:57:452 (5) - ^ NC at 03:00:215 (8) - instead
32. 03:00:610 (10) - ^ ^
33. 03:03:768 (3) - NC changing 03:03:373 (1) - is the beginning of a new sentence in the lyric
34. 03:06:926 (10) - NC OK
35. 03:08:505 (14) - ^ It's still the same sentence in the lyric
36. 03:10:084 (3) - NC changing 03:09:689 (1) - is the beginning of a new sentence in the lyric
37. 03:11:663 (5) - NC I want to keep this for now
38. 03:17:978 (8) - ^ OK
39. 03:19:557 (13) - ^ ^
40. 03:21:136 (18) - ^ NC I want to keep this for now

• 
  I went through the diffs, here is my thoughts:
  in the easy diff, you did alot of things like 00:41:663 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) -
  it just random rhythm and random notes flying around
  are player really going to like that?
  and the rhythm is weird too,
  you put a note every 2 beats in 76 bpm.... not even fitting the music
  thats easier than a easy....
  we can see alot of easies that map like one note per beats in bpm like 170 or 180,
  and new players can fc them no problem
  this is like no challenge ,and isn't fun at all
  there is a lot of problem, and you need to improve on your pattern skill too
  the quality isn't enough for rank
  same as the normal and hard diffs, but the patterns are much better than the Easy diff
  but still, the rhythm is not right
  for example like in normal 01:42:847 (5,6,7,1,2) -
  i know you followed the vocal but do you think people going to hit accurately on something on the blue trick?
  and in hard diff
  02:25:873 (11,12) -
  these sliders feels bad when you actually playing it even it looks great in the editor
  02:35:742 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this is the reason why i said the bpm is 152
  and many problems like that
  if you want your map ranked, take my mod seriously and fix your diff
  if no, then ignore my mod

CelsiusLK wrote:

[Hard]

1. 01:04:557 (3,4,5) - How about this ? somehow it plays better imo OK
2. 01:30:413 (5,6,7) - How about this ? OK
3. 01:43:044 (5,6,7) - ^ OK
4. 02:05:939 (4,5) - Convert to slider , I think it plays better imo Changed most of the slider conversion, but can't remember which ones that weren't changed
5. 02:12:255 (4,5) - ^ ^
6. 02:42:255 (5,6,7) - Same as 01:30:413 (5,6,7) - OK
7. 03:00:610 (3,4) - Convert to slider , I think it plays better imo ^^
8. 03:21:136 (6,7) - The overlap is not pretty good since (6) cover (7) 's head make it a bit hard to read OK
   
   The spacing between each notes is pretty low imo , try increase spacing a bit ? Increased on some parts

[Normal]

1. 00:04:557 (3,4) - Convert to slider , I think it plays better imo Changed most of the slider conversion, but can't remember which ones that weren't changed
2. 00:10:873 (3,4) - ^ ^
3. 00:17:189 (3,4) - ^ ^
4. 00:23:505 (3,4) - ^ ^
5. 00:55:084 (3,4) - ^ ^
6. 00:58:636 (8,9) - ^ ^
7. 01:01:399 (3,4) - ^ ^
8. 01:53:110 (3,4) - Blanket ? OK
   
   I find that the usage of sliders in normal is a bit low so consider use more sliders ? OK (but haven't changed it)
   

[Easy]

1. 00:07:715 (2) - Ctrl+G ? flow a bit better imo OK
   

The way you map the vocal actually can make the mapset somehow boring if you lack some intresting pattern and flow so you might need to consider that Added some patterns

Good luck Thank you

Alex Li wrote:

from my q
[General]

1. offset should be around 1412 OK
2. kiai time should be around 02:04:569 to 02:38:517 , your kiai time now is like the bridge of the song Changed it
3. there is a down beat changing in 02:25:885 , add a red line plz OK
4. bpm should be 152 (in the kiai time it have a down beat every two beat, and there is not many song uses 76 bpm today) But the source listed it as 76 BPM
5. just use sv x 0.5 and you dont have to remap ^

[sry if i hurt you QAQ]

• 
  I went through the diffs, here is my thoughts:
  in the easy diff, you did alot of things like 00:41:663 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) -
  it just random rhythm and random notes flying around
  are player really going to like that? No
  and the rhythm is weird too,
  you put a note every 2 beats in 76 bpm.... not even fitting the music
  thats easier than a easy.... True
  we can see alot of easies that map like one note per beats in bpm like 170 or 180, True
  and new players can fc them no problem
  this is like no challenge ,and isn't fun at all True
  there is a lot of problem, and you need to improve on your pattern skill too
  the quality isn't enough for rank
  same as the normal and hard diffs, but the patterns are much better than the Easy diff
  but still, the rhythm is not right
  for example like in normal 01:42:847 (5,6,7,1,2) -
  i know you followed the vocal but do you think people going to hit accurately on something on the blue trick? Why not? If the BPM is 152 it would be at red ticks
  and in hard diff
  02:25:873 (11,12) -
  these sliders feels bad when you actually playing it even it looks great in the editor Will change them
  02:35:742 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this is the reason why i said the bpm is 152 The source listed it as 76 BPM
  and many problems like that
  if you want your map ranked, take my mod seriously and fix your diff Fixing it
  if no, then ignore my mod

thats it, curse me if you want orz Why? You're pointing out mistakes in an appropriate way, so you deserved a kudosu, not a curse