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Teras

Shulin wrote:

General:



Killer Queen:

-- The 1/4 spacing here is too wide making it uncomfortable to play. You might want to consider reducing the spacing/distance snap on your streams etc. (example: 00:50:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and many more)

00:21:772 (7,8,9) - I get the impression that this stack was thrown into the stream just to fit a pattern. It doesn't play that well =/
00:25:359 (8,9) - Similar thing ^
00:25:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Things like this are really messy, the way it all overlaps.
00:27:424 (13,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Strange rhythm. I'd expect notes at 00:27:859 and 00:28:294
00:35:903 (5,6) - Stacking fail?
00:40:468 (8) - Random x0.5 =/
00:55:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - It's messy and is uncomfortable to play as a result. Try to avoid overlapping the same areas over and over, if you highlight some of your combo's you'll see that they tend to be clustered in the same place.
01:35:033 (10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Another example of cluster.

1/4 is too sparse, too clustered, too much overlapping makes it play badly (imo).

Keep working on it ^_^
Kay. Now I ragequit. Whatever I do with this damn diff people complain. Oyashiro. Delete my diffs. I won't even consider participate here. Seems like I can't map this song.

I give up mapping this. If people mod my diff and it's not deleted I won't care about it. So Oyashiro.. get someone else to make a guest diff. Because I will not remap this again. And when I do. I get even more complains. The diff plays perfectly. I can play through most of it. So I don't really find a problem with it. This is exactly why rules for ranked maps sucks. -.-
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

Teras wrote:

Kay. Now I ragequit. Whatever I do with this damn diff people complain. Oyashiro. Delete my diffs. I won't even consider participate here. Seems like I can't map this song.

I give up mapping this. If people mod my diff and it's not deleted I won't care about it. So Oyashiro.. get someone else to make a guest diff. Because I will not remap this again. And when I do. I get even more complains. The diff plays perfectly. I can play through most of it. So I don't really find a problem with it. This is exactly why rules for ranked maps sucks. -.-
I'll keep the diff since it seems good to me, even if you won't work on it you'll still be the maker of that beatmap...you should know by now that these people are picky on what goes on in a map. I'll keep it but I won't tell you to fix it anymore.
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- What is the bloody mess skin? If it's important include it with the map! If you look up the game you'll understand why...
-- .mp3 is pretty low quality, find a better one? Did once but the mp3 makes the map unable to load the song ;-;
-- Offset 16,996, though it's hard to tell with current quality. I'll fix it -.-
-- I think normal hitsounds work more. I like a mix of both ~~
-- Best sizes for BG ~ 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768. The game has a low following; hard to find decent sized BG's

Joker:
I thought I put these two to rest 3 pages ago?
-- Recheck your spacing on this difficulty, it's not constant and at times confusing.
-- Quite a lot of gaps between beats, consider using sliders instead.

01:07:426 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing~? Done?
01:08:948 (x) - Note. Placed
01:10:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Compare spacings. Seems ok to me
01:23:079 (3,4,5) - Spacing. Done
01:31:775 (4,1) - Stacking. If you knew how long I spent stacking them then you would know why I won't touch this
01:37:862 (3) - ^ *See above*

Ace:

-- End kiai in the same place as the others. Done

00:27:424 (6) - New combo. New combo for 2 notes?
00:49:598 (3) - Clap, following your pattern. Done
00:54:816 (6) - ^ ?
00:57:316 (5,6,7,8) - I'd avoid this in a normal. No one's complained about it being hard...
01:30:903 (4) - Put at the end of the slider like 01:32:642 (2,3) Done

Queen:

-- Overall difficulty +2-3 Fixed?
-- Add a spinner. Where?
-- Add some claps, all I hear is whistle and the occasional finish D: Wait...claps are in there. Either way I did this on purpose
-- Preferred skin isn't set to bloody mess... whatever that skin is. Fixeth

00:29:816 (7,8) - Stacking. Use x0.0 (look at it in game) Stacked ok
00:36:555 (5,6,7) - Stack this? Not 5 though
00:57:317 (6,7,8,9) - Spacing is confusing here due to low OD. Fixed
00:58:730 (1,2,3) - ^ Looks ok?
01:09:165 (6,7,8) - Stacking. It's stacked right...
01:13:948 (8,1) - ^ *See above*
01:15:687 (4,5) - ^ *See above...again*
01:21:992 (x) - Note. Added
01:24:818 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Sliders or something might be better here, the spacing is hard to read with the current OD. Is ok to me and everyone who's modded this map
01:40:471 (1) - Remove new combo. Dine

In general the patterns could do with a little more work, but it's okay.

Killer Queen: Congratulations, u killed Teras.
Kurai
Hi :)

[Joker]

00:40:469 (4) - Remove whistle and add clap
00:53:513 (3,1) - Remove whitsle and add finish

[Ace]

00:33:946 (1) - Add clap and remove clap at 00:34:381 (2)

[Queen]
00:18:294 (4) - Add clap
00:18:729 (6) - Remove clap at the begin and add clap at the end.
00:20:903 (1) - Add clap
00:21:337 (3) - Remove clap at the begin and add clap at the end.
00:23:511 (1) - Add clap
00:23:946 (3) - Remove clap at the begin and add clap at the end.
00:26:120 (7) - Add clap
00:26:555 (9) - Remove clap at the begin and add clap at the end.
00:46:556 (4) - Spacing Error
00:51:773 (1) - ^
00:52:208 (2) - ^
01:09:165 (6) - ^
01:19:818 (6) - ^
01:21:992 (4) - ^

Star :)
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

KuraiPettan wrote:

Hi :)

[Joker]

00:40:469 (4) - Remove whistle and add clap Doneth
00:53:513 (3,1) - Remove whitsle and add finish Done

[Ace]

00:33:946 (1) - Add clap and remove clap at 00:34:381 (2) Done

[Queen] Did everything
00:18:294 (4) - Add clap
00:18:729 (6) - Remove clap at the begin and add clap at the end.
00:20:903 (1) - Add clap
00:21:337 (3) - Remove clap at the begin and add clap at the end.
00:23:511 (1) - Add clap
00:23:946 (3) - Remove clap at the begin and add clap at the end.
00:26:120 (7) - Add clap
00:26:555 (9) - Remove clap at the begin and add clap at the end.
00:46:556 (4) - Spacing Error
00:51:773 (1) - ^
00:52:208 (2) - ^
01:09:165 (6) - ^
01:19:818 (6) - ^
01:21:992 (4) - ^

Star :)
Blackiris
Just wanted to give this map a star. So here you go.
[item received : 1x ☆]
Catchy song, nicely done map and interesting game (Killer Queen > Secret Game, though it may be just me).
Nakagawa-Kanon
[Joker]
fine

[Ace]
00:36:120 (5) - add new combo
00:52:642 (2) - make like this

[Queen]
00:29:164 (6) - distance check please
01:09:165 (6,7,8) - △
01:20:035 (7) - This is unjump? I think delete unjump... make normally

[Killer Queen]
It seems fine

but I don't like high distance....



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good song
Musty
Can i create a GuestDiff? :p
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

Sweyax wrote:

Can i create a GuestDiff? :p
If you want to, sure....
Soaprman
General
arrrrggghpppbbbggfff flv video my poor computer *disables*

It appears to me that you're not using distance snap (or grid snap, even?). This isn't really a problem (in fact, it's kind of refreshing in a way) but you might want to at least consider using it on Easy since the people playing this might be tripped up by inconsistencies here and there.

Outsider's view on the difficulty names: I know nothing about the source of this song you're mapping but I tend to think of an ace as being higher than a queen. If there's a reason for Queen to be above Ace though then leave them, it's no big deal. :P

Joker
00:30:033 (4) - move a little closer to 3.
00:33:512 (3) - move a little farther from 2.
if there are any more cases of this do them too.

01:34:384 (3) - not sure how appropriate this is on Easy.

Ace

nothing here that I haven't said already in General.

Queen/Killer Queen

YOU HAVE TO ALIGN EVERYTHING TO THE GRID IN THE BACKGROUND PICTURE OMG

But seriously, the difficulty gap between these is kind of big. Maybe make Queen a little harder?

Not a bad mapset you got here. Starred.
Teras
I've said it once already. Oyashiro. Delete my iff cuz I won't change a thing in it. It's bad and overmapped <.<
Kiddo-Kun
[General]
Sometimes the soft clap don't sound to good. Consider replacing them with soft whistles?

[Joker]
00:30:033 (4) - Spacing: Make this closer to 3
00:34:381 (3) - Add finish at slider end
00:37:860 (1) - ^
01:23:948 (5) - Align with 3. Make it look better

[Ace]
00:16:990 (1) - Finish?

Not much wrong with this diff.

[Queen]
00:29:816 (7,8) - Stack properly
01:15:687 (4) - ^
01:23:296 (7) - This is really irritating. Consider moving it.

Overall: I dunno what to say about this map. It's okay, but the beat placements kinda tick me off.

Star
thekillerhjkhjk
[queen]
00:51:773 (1,2,3,4,5) - please space these evenly, your spacing here is just... weirdly off
00:56:121 (5) - move further from (4)
00:58:730 (1,2,3) - move 3 closer to 2
01:07:317 (2) - make this start on the main white tick then add a note on the (now empty) blue tick
01:10:904 (2,3,4,5,6) - these notes don't match the words at all if you were trying to make them do that...
01:11:231 (3) - move this note to the blue tick just before where it currently is
the ending of the song after the kiai is pretty badly spaced... the anti-jumps make no sense in relation to the music and should just be removed.

[ace]
the whistle hitsound WITH the clap sound in the beginning is unnecessary. remove whistle please, its just a bit of an eyesore... for the ears

[joker]
fine

starred
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka
Mods done and uploaded~
kanpakyin
Mod
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Blue=Just a suggestion
ReD=I think you should fix this

[Joker]
00:17:804(2)down 2 grid?
00:18:763(3)^
00:32:658(2)left 2 grid?

[Ace]
00:23:901(1)down 2 grid?
00:27:460(6)Please put the slider straight
00:42:654(4)use whistle to substitute the clap
10:13:051(5)left 1 grid?

[Queen]
00:27:442(1)spacing
00:28:679(4)^
00:29:779(7.8)gemination with (6)?
00:32:679(3)down 2 grid?
01:36:593(4)The spacing really close to(3)

[what my suggestion]
~surely,you need to use distance snap
~You need to do a Insane diff

anyway,it is a nice map
star~~
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

kanpakyin wrote:

Mod
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Blue=Just a suggestion
ReD=I think you should fix this

[Joker]
00:17:804(2)down 2 grid? Done
00:18:763(3)^ Done
00:32:658(2)left 2 grid? Doneth

[Ace]
00:23:901(1)down 2 grid?Done
00:27:460(6)Please put the slider straight Fixed
00:42:654(4)use whistle to substitute the clap Changed
10:13:051(5)left 1 grid? Moved

[Queen]
00:27:442(1)spacing Spaced
00:28:679(4)^ Done
00:29:779(7.8)gemination with (6)? Wat?
00:32:679(3)down 2 grid? Done
01:36:593(4)The spacing really close to(3) Fixed....I think?

[what my suggestion]
~surely,you need to use distance snap I did, that's why the map is so loopey ~~
~You need to do a Insane diff D:

anyway,it is a nice map
star~~
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka
Does anyone know a BAT that's takin requests?
eldnl
Hi ^^

[Joker]

This difficulty has several spacing errors, please use only one "beat snap divisor"

00:44:817 (7) Add new combo
00:45:686 (1) Remove new Combo
00:50:034 (6) Add new Combo
01:23:948 (5) This object is too close to the previous object
01:31:775 (4) Add new combo
01:32:862 (1) Remove new combo
01:35:688 (4) Add new combo
01:36:123 (1) Remove new combo


[Ace]

00:24:381 (2) Spacing
00:33:946 (4)^
00:48:729 (2) This object is too close to the previous object
00:50:033 (4) Spacing
01:35:250 (1~) from here until the end came down spacing, why?

[Queen]

This difficulty is quite easy to be the hardest, try to put more triple and jumps.

00:38:729 (3) Spacing
00:59:600 (4)^
01:24:601 ~ It sounds as if a note should go here
01:37:862 (7) This object is too close to the previous object

Good song, but I think still has a long way.

Star
Lizzehb
Joker~
I see nothing wrong with it.

Ace~
I feel horrible, but this is so well mapped I'm not seeing any issues!

Queen~
Only thing I didn't like about this was the clapping didn't continue through the song, other than that, it's prefect are really fun to play.

Sorry I'm not oh any help but so many people have looked at this!

If you wanna send me another map, please do so.
Disoy
[Joker]
00:17:859 (2,3) - these circle snap...
00:29:164 (3,4) - ^
00:32:642 (2,3) - ^
00:48:295 (5) - 1 grid left
00:52:643 (2,3) - these circle snap...
01:05:252 (4) - 1 grid down
01:34:384 (4,5) - remove this circle and become slider?

[Ace]
00:57:642 (6,7) - remove these circle become slider

[Queen]
00:29:816 (7,8) - not perfect stacked
00:50:034 (5,6) - spacing
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