Gray Veyron wrote:

Hello, sorry for a huge delay from some weeks, but ticket is now used here~

: I gave this a star icon because i can see great potential on this set, with good quality too, great job!

[> General <]

1. - I think there's a gap between Hard and Insane, 2.78 stars > 4 stars. Maybe you should make the Insane a little easier. The stars among the three diffs are 1.11 and 1.22,I think it's no problem
2. - On what i see, the background is a little low quality. I've modified the pixels and some strokes, so this might fit your map a little better. Fixed,thank you very much
   
   Modified "BG.jpg"

   
3. - Really fine!

[> Normal <]

1. 00:10:384 (2) - Since this is the easiest diff in the set, i guess this kind of slider is not allowed. Because it overlaps small part of the body, might be a little complex for beginners.
2. 00:56:636 (1) - Almost the same reason as above.
3. 01:18:242 (1,2) - I'm not sure, but this overlap would also count.
4. - Sorry for being a little picky on few overlaps, but quite a great diff!
   All fixed

[> Hard <]

1. 00:14:669 (4,1) - Would sound better if you Ctrl + G this rhythm, this might emphasize much more with the song track. I prefer the original
2. 00:22:351 (4,5) - Ehh, i think this jump looks quite too big for a Hard diff... i guess... I think it's fine,not very hard because the speed is slow
3. 00:49:494 (3) - I don't think this 1/4 reverse arrow follows anything on the song track, you may remake this slider as 1/2 or either add some notes for a better rhythm. Really?I think it follows well
4. - Some rhythms, btw this diff looks nice to play imo~

[> Insane <]

1. 00:23:243 (4) - Kinda the same reason as Hard, a little off-beat imo. Fixed
2. 00:32:350 (1,2,3) - Idk, but this anti-jump is a little awkward... How about moving one of these sliders? to keep the player's cursor active in Insane diffs. I want to keep these
3. 00:38:422 (5) - Likely minor, but curve this slider above instead of below? Reduced the radians of 00:37:350 (3,4,5) -,they look better now
4. 00:40:565 (4) - Ctrl + G? might improve playstyle performance. Tried but no change,don't like this flow
5. 01:07:707 (6,1) - The spacing here looks a little sudden, since you've used bigger spacings previously. Maybe you should balance this one a little more. I want to keep these
6. - Well, above mods are just suggestions... GJ with this diff!

Nice map~ get me back when you're done~

Gray Veyron wrote:

I guess this is ready-to-go! I'm feeling anxious about the gap between Hard and Insane, i hope your reasons are acceptable. Have this bubble ~

Next BN: Try to check as deep as possible before qualifying/popping. The mapping is great, but it's probably a worrisome to me.

Okoratu wrote:

i don't think the metronomes are 100% accurate (yeah i know we can't have /8th) but i think
00:07:350 - should be 5/4 Fixed
00:09:492 - should be removed Fixed
..?
no idea https://musescore.com/user/1285146/scores/632126 is pretty weird and sometimes conflicting what's in this set. Does anyone even care..?

Desperate-kun wrote:

Rebubbled :3
Try to call Veyron for heart icon.. I hope for you that he will be available (but please don't let the mapset die again ;w;)

1. Let's refrain from using using pure white combo colors. This is to prevent strobing issues during the kiai section.
2. "√A" might not be needed in the tags, since it is already in the source.
3. Any proof for the metadata? What I've found is http://marv.jp/special/tokyoghoul/music.html and the artist should be "österreich". Not sure about the title though, but I think it should be without (TV edit).

1. 01:22:884 - Useless greenline above the redline, while have a conflicting volume.

Sonnyc wrote:

[General]

1. Let's refrain from using using pure white combo colors. This is to prevent strobing issues during the kiai section.
2. "√A" might not be needed in the tags, since it is already in the source.
3. Any proof for the metadata? What I've found is http://marv.jp/special/tokyoghoul/music.html and the artist should be "österreich". Not sure about the title though, but I think it should be without (TV edit).

[Hard & Insane]

1. 01:22:884 - Useless greenline above the redline, while have a conflicting volume.

Haven't actually checked the whole set, but popping the bubble for now due to these issues. Contact the original nominator for further moving.

SPOILER

Sonnyc wrote:

Nominated.

pishifat wrote:

hey can i rank this map

pishifat wrote:

nice

Citrus wrote:

pishifat wrote:

nice

Thank you very much~