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Demetori - Crazy Xenomorph

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Dragvon
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on terça-feira, 14 de dezembro de 2010 at 14:54:02

Artist: Demetori
Title: Crazy Xenomorph
Source: Touhou
Tags: heian alien 12 undefined fantastic object
BPM: 145
Filesize: 10466kb
Play Time: 03:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. Extra (4,9 stars, 576 notes)
  2. Hard (4,44 stars, 367 notes)
  3. Lunatic (4,85 stars, 441 notes)
  4. Normal (3,04 stars, 161 notes)
Download: Demetori - Crazy Xenomorph
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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For the Demetori - Nada Upasana Pundarika Project

Status
Normal: Standby.
Hard: Standby.
Lunatic: Fixed combos, i hope :D
Extra: Standby.
happy30's diff: Coming soon.

Last updates
-Combo fixes on lunatic
-Added extra 2 for now
Last edited by Dragvon , edited 95 times in total.
Lybydose
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Lybydose
Some parts of this song use a time signature that isn't supported in the editor. However, everything will snap properly at 145 BPM, so it's still mappable; the timeline and metronome will just look strange at some points.

BPM: 145 Offset: 23,844 <== this section's time signature will be wrong, but still mappable.
BPM: 145 Offset: 76,809 4/4 time. Metronome will go off at 01:30:050 but still mappable.
BPM: 145 Offset: 98,326 3/4 time.
BPM: 145 Offset: 109,498 4/4 time. Metronome goes off at 02:42:463 but still mappable.
BPM: 145 Offset: 181,704 3/4 time.
BPM: 145 Offset: 201,041 4/4 time.
Dragvon
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Thanks a lot <3.
I was able to find some 145's but i could never do it entirely =p
I'll update it as soon as i can. Probbly at weekend due to work :3
Ekaru
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Ekaru
This map plays weird.

The good news is that this will be extremely easy to make into a good map! See, the hit objects are already placed with the correct timing. Only two things you have to do (do in this order, seriously):

1. Increase the slider velocity! It's way too slow ATM. Try 1.8 to 2.0.

2. Once you find a slider velocity you like, respace the entire map. It will honestly only take you 10 to 20 minutes since the hit objects are already there.

Tell me when you've done this. Thanks!
Sonic Fumes
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Joined November 2009
Sonic Fumes
awesome map
Please make it more with the rhythm.
AdRon Zh3Ro
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AdRon Zh3Ro
Até agora muito bom... Continue assim.
fartownik
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fartownik
Don't know about this high OD at all. It's probably not a good idea.

[Lunatic]

00:30:050 (4,1) - Not a big spacing issue, but still confusing. |

Can't really find any severe issues. Keep on going. I still disagree with the OD, but you'll do how you want. +star
Dragvon
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fartownik wrote:

Don't know about this high OD at all. It's probably not a good idea.
Hmm a lot of ppl told me about that. I'll reduce it a bit =p
Thanks~
Lilly-chan_old
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boa musica ;) bom map ;)
Doomsday
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Doomsday
I just realized how repetitive this song is. Must be hard to map :o
That intro sounded like a bitch to time too.

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

  1. Timing looks fine for most of the song. the red timing section at 03:01.601 sounds a little off though. I would use Offset:181,612.
  2. The source should just be Touhou, Undefined Fantastic Object should go in the tags. Also, you only need Touhou in the source, so you should delete Touhou from the tags.
[LUNATIC]

Maybe you could map up to 03:54:144? It fits better to end the map there to me.

01:43:567 (3) - This note is unsnapped. AIMod doesn't pick it up for some reason. Just snap it back onto the blue tick.
02:42:049 (8) - Add an extra repeat to this slider?
03:01:704 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Im not too keen on this part. It feels pretty repetitive and doesn't look very appealing. There isn't much you could map to here though, So I guess you can keep this if you want.

Considering how repetitive of a song this is, you did a pretty good job. Gimme a ring when the other difficulties are done, and I'll have a look at those ;) .

Starred
Dragvon
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Dragvon

Doomsday93 wrote:

I just realized how repetitive this song is. Must be hard to map :o
That intro sounded like a bitch to time too.

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

  1. Timing looks fine for most of the song. the red timing section at 03:01.601 sounds a little off though. I would use Offset:181,612.
  2. The source should just be Touhou, Undefined Fantastic Object should go in the tags. Also, you only need Touhou in the source, so you should delete Touhou from the tags.
Fixed

[LUNATIC]

Maybe you could map up to 03:54:144? It fits better to end the map there to me. Since lunatic is now hard, i will end it here, maybe i'll extend to the full song in the new lunatic :), thanks

01:43:567 (3) - This note is unsnapped. AIMod doesn't pick it up for some reason. Just snap it back onto the blue tick.
02:42:049 (8) - Add an extra repeat to this slider?
03:01:704 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Im not too keen on this part. It feels pretty repetitive and doesn't look very appealing. There isn't much you could map to here though, So I guess you can keep this if you want. I'm not so sure about this too. I'll take a closer look
I think that's it, for now, thanks for the help <3!
K3nsh1n_H1mur4
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K3nsh1n_H1mur4
bom trabalho, dragrainha
Utena
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Utena
eu acho que vc poderia melhorar a dificuldade easy, está brega.
estrela, pro caminhão poder passar irc modding
Shinxyn
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Demetori... D:
Lyby's timing... okay...
You don't need the artist in tags, since its already in the artist -_-
People might ask you to cut the mp3, I don't really mind too much

Easy- No, this isn't Easy
The patterns are really hard to read with the lowest overall diff, there are lots of 1/4 notes that make it quite confusing the spacing.. D:
00:45:050 (3,4) - spacing! (its hard to read cuz of low overall diff)
00:53:844 (2) - ^
01:14:119 (1) - no, don't use 2x for easy
01:38:326 (1) to 01:47:015 (2) - .... 1/3? ... I think its more 1/4... (01:47:843 (3) is 1/3 though)
02:08:532 (5) - ehh, not for easy please (poorly overlapped over this slider)
02:24:256 (4,2) - doesn't sound like it ends on 1/4
02:30:877 (4,6) - ^
Needs work... less 1/2 sliders and probably get rid of all the 1/4 sliders... could be arranged better too D:
...Recheck spacing ><

Normal- :[ I think the Overall diff here is too slow too, makes it hard to read as well... better than Easy though
00:42:464 (3,4) - spacing~
00:47:326 (3,4,5) - ^
00:50:464 (2) - I'm not sure about this 1/3 note, that sound in the background does seem to start here... but the repeat doesn't fit.. just use 1/4 (like 00:51:775 (1)) instead?
01:38:326 (1) to 01:47:015 (4) - same as Easy
02:15:980 (1) - ... might as well stack this properly
@.@

Hard-
00:50:464 (2) - same as Normal!
01:38:326 (1) - same thing as the other two (the 1/3)
Much more playable than the other two ><!

Lunatic-... oh boy >_>
00:30:257 (8,9) - all notes before this follow a 1/2 mapped pace... then after this part, it follows the 1/4 notes that the other diffs have as well... the 1/2 parts before this are really confusing, and sound way too fast... imo, remap those parts ><
00:50:464 (7) - same as Normal ><!
01:14:119 (1,2,3) - umm, no, short non-repeating 1/8 sliders... please don't
01:38:326 (1) - same thing as the other three (the 1/3)??
02:57:463 (2,3) - why 1/3 >_<
Hmm...

All four maps could be arranged much better, it's really messy in most parts as it is :(
Your combo placement is all over the place...
Clean up your timing panels, there are lots of extra timing panels =| (the inherited ones)
Difficulty lengths are kinda iffy... Short Easy, Longer Normal, and same length Hard/Insane... mm, make Normal as long as Hard/Insane?
Why'd you have to pick such a hard song :|

Needs a lot more mods ><!
Dragvon
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Shinxyn wrote:

Demetori... D:
Lyby's timing... okay...
You don't need the artist in tags, since its already in the artist -_-
People might ask you to cut the mp3, I don't really mind too much

Easy- No, this isn't Easy
The patterns are really hard to read with the lowest overall diff, there are lots of 1/4 notes that make it quite confusing the spacing.. D:
00:45:050 (3,4) - spacing! (its hard to read cuz of low overall diff)
00:53:844 (2) - ^Bookmarked, i'll fix spacing later '-'
01:14:119 (1) - no, don't use 2x for easy Ops, forgot to fix that
01:38:326 (1) to 01:47:015 (2) - .... 1/3? ... I think its more 1/4... (01:47:843 (3) is 1/3 though) Fixed
02:08:532 (5) - ehh, not for easy please (poorly overlapped over this slider) Hmm didn't get this one right, could you explain ;-;?
02:24:256 (4,2) - doesn't sound like it ends on 1/4 Fixed both~
02:30:877 (4,6) - ^
Needs work... less 1/2 sliders and probably get rid of all the 1/4 sliders... could be arranged better too D:
...Recheck spacing ><

Normal- :[ I think the Overall diff here is too slow too, makes it hard to read as well... better than Easy though i'm increasing it to see if it gets better
00:42:464 (3,4) - spacing~
00:47:326 (3,4,5) - ^ Bookmarked, will fix spacing later '-'
00:50:464 (2) - I'm not sure about this 1/3 note, that sound in the background does seem to start here... but the repeat doesn't fit.. just use 1/4 (like 00:51:775 (1)) instead? You're right ^-^! Fixed
01:38:326 (1) to 01:47:015 (4) - same as Easy Done
02:15:980 (1) - ... might as well stack this properly Hmm, stack wich ones?
@.@

Hard-
00:50:464 (2) - same as Normal! Fixed !
01:38:326 (1) - same thing as the other two (the 1/3) Fixed
Much more playable than the other two ><!

Lunatic-... oh boy >_>
00:30:257 (8,9) - all notes before this follow a 1/2 mapped pace... then after this part, it follows the 1/4 notes that the other diffs have as well... the 1/2 parts before this are really confusing, and sound way too fast... imo, remap those parts >< Hmm i kinda like the fast ones, i'll wait for an second opinion before remap
00:50:464 (7) - same as Normal ><! Fixed again
01:14:119 (1,2,3) - umm, no, short non-repeating 1/8 sliders... please don't Aww, okay then ;-;
01:38:326 (1) - same thing as the other three (the 1/3)?? Done
02:57:463 (2,3) - why 1/3 >_< Bookmarked, i'll take a look at this closely later
Hmm...

All four maps could be arranged much better, it's really messy in most parts as it is :(
Your combo placement is all over the place...
Clean up your timing panels, there are lots of extra timing panels =| (the inherited ones)
Difficulty lengths are kinda iffy... Short Easy, Longer Normal, and same length Hard/Insane... mm, make Normal as long as Hard/Insane? Will do it~
Why'd you have to pick such a hard song :| Cuz i like challenges ;-;

Needs a lot more mods ><!
Thanks a lot <3
Shinxyn
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Dragvon wrote:

Shinxyn wrote:

Demetori... D:

Easy-
02:08:532 (5) - ehh, not for easy please (poorly overlapped over this slider) Hmm didn't get this one right, could you explain ;-;?
I mean try not to place the slider under lapping the other notes while looking so clustered ><

Normal-
02:15:980 (1) - ... might as well stack this properly Hmm, stack wich ones?
these two~02:14:739 (5,1) - just put (1) on center of grid


Lunatic-... oh boy >_>
00:30:257 (8,9) - all notes before this follow a 1/2 mapped pace... then after this part, it follows the 1/4 notes that the other diffs have as well... the 1/2 parts before this are really confusing, and sound way too fast... imo, remap those parts >< Hmm i kinda like the fast ones, i'll wait for an second opinion before remap I don't mind it being fast either, but then... it slows down the same pace as what the other diffs are mapped to
Just replying ~ still think Easy should be easier
fabriciorby
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fabriciorby
Foda .

Sem mais palavras
Raikieou
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Raikieou
Good job!
It's amazing how you improved in this map :D
ファイト!
GabrielRKF
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GabrielRKF
gogogogogogogo~~~

SPOILER
Easy
Ugh. Diff estranha :/
Usando parcialmente o ritmo da música (que ja não é facil de pegar) faz com que essa diff fique com um som estranho, além de ser dificil de jogar. Se ela seguisse mais o ritmo da batida (1/1...) e não o da guitarra, talvez ela ficasse mais facil dse ler :/
ps.: Tbm tem algumas partes onde não tem um silencio q deixa o gameplay estranho... Tipo, 00:45:361 e 00:46:292. Não botei esses no mod por que isso esta pelo mapa todo :/

  1. 00:27:568(1) - Sem New Combo seria melhor~ obs.: Caso não queira tirar esse New Combo, então pelo menos bota um em
  2. 00:35:844~
  3. 00:31:912(1,2) - Inverte New Combo~
  4. 00:53:637(x) - Bota um hitcircle aqui~
  5. 01:02:119(x) - ^
  6. 01:52:808(4,5) - Nazi: Uma nível 3 grid pra baixo~ (se está perocupado com o spacing, então move tudo desde aqui até 02:01:498, num tem problema~)
  7. 02:15:980~02:19:911 - Esses sliders(02:15:980,02:17:635,...) não estão legais (nem faceis de ler) acabando em 1/2 D: É melhor acabar eles em no 1/1, erredondando pra mais (no caso do primeiro, acabando em 02:16:808,...)
  8. 02:24:256(4) - Hum... não gosto muito disso... Talvez adicionar um loop?
  9. 02:25:911(2) - ^

Shinxyn wrote:

Just replying ~ still think Easy should be easier
That's true~

Normal
Bem melhor <3
  1. 00:27:257(1) - Sem New Combo, por favor :3
  2. 00:27:568(1,2,3,1) - Ta deixando a seção de New Combos estranha... Talvez os 2 (1)s sem New Combo, e o (3) com...? (Meio que seguindo minha idéia do Easy)
  3. 00:31:912(1,2) - Troca New Combo~
  4. 00:33:464(1) - De acordo com o resto da música, aqui não deveria ter New Combo~
  5. 00:35:533(1) - ^
  6. 00:51:775(1) - Pra evitar confusão, direciona pra baixo~
  7. 02:11:842(1) - Reduz um loop... Acho que fica melhor '-'
Hum... Não gostei do final... :/

Hard
  1. 00:23:844~00:28:188 - Única parte do início em que você usa New Combos de uma forma diferente do resto... Melhor botar New Combo em 00:24:878 e 00:26:947, tirando de 00:27:568, e botando em 00:28:499~
  2. 02:20:946(8) - New Combo~
Lunatic
Malz mas vo pular essa xD

Todas
O músiquinha dificil de ler D:
Apaga todas as timing sections que estão no mesmo lugar~
Acho a SB muito parecida com Jehnovah... :/

Estrela pá tú /o/

Obs.: Malz a demora, eu não tava conseguindo baixar de jeito nenhum o_O
Dragvon
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roxkyuubiforever wrote:

gogogogogogogo~~~

SPOILER
Easy
Ugh. Diff estranha :/
Usando parcialmente o ritmo da música (que ja não é facil de pegar) faz com que essa diff fique com um som estranho, além de ser dificil de jogar. Se ela seguisse mais o ritmo da batida (1/1...) e não o da guitarra, talvez ela ficasse mais facil dse ler :/
ps.: Tbm tem algumas partes onde não tem um silencio q deixa o gameplay estranho... Tipo, 00:45:361 e 00:46:292. Não botei esses no mod por que isso esta pelo mapa todo :/

  1. 00:27:568(1) - Sem New Combo seria melhor~ obs.: Caso não queira tirar esse New Combo, então pelo menos bota um em
  2. 00:35:844~
  3. 00:31:912(1,2) - Inverte New Combo~ Fiz ambos '-'
  4. 00:53:637(x) - Bota um hitcircle aqui~
  5. 01:02:119(x) - ^ Eu ja tinha esses antes, nao sei pq nao salvou D: thanks
  6. 01:52:808(4,5) - Nazi: Uma nível 3 grid pra baixo~ (se está perocupado com o spacing, então move tudo desde aqui até 02:01:498, num tem problema~) Thanks, tava uma reta torta aeae -q
  7. 02:15:980~02:19:911 - Esses sliders(02:15:980,02:17:635,...) não estão legais (nem faceis de ler) acabando em 1/2 D: É melhor acabar eles em no 1/1, erredondando pra mais (no caso do primeiro, acabando em 02:16:808,...) Hmm não vou mexer ainda nesses
  8. 02:24:256(4) - Hum... não gosto muito disso... Talvez adicionar um loop?
  9. 02:25:911(2) - ^ Não vejo loops caindo bem aqui :X

Shinxyn wrote:

Just replying ~ still think Easy should be easier
That's true~ Well, this is a hard song to map ;-;, and it's hard by itself too xD

Normal
Bem melhor <3
  1. 00:27:257(1) - Sem New Combo, por favor :3 Wtf como isso veio parar aqui suahshis thanks
  2. 00:27:568(1,2,3,1) - Ta deixando a seção de New Combos estranha... Talvez os 2 (1)s sem New Combo, e o (3) com...? (Meio que seguindo minha idéia do Easy) Dei um jeito
  3. 00:31:912(1,2) - Troca New Combo~ Done~
  4. 00:33:464(1) - De acordo com o resto da música, aqui não deveria ter New Combo~ e não tem mais '-'
  5. 00:35:533(1) - ^
  6. 00:51:775(1) - Pra evitar confusão, direciona pra baixo~ Okay
  7. 02:11:842(1) - Reduz um loop... Acho que fica melhor '-' Fica não :3


Hum... Não gostei do final... :/

Hard
  1. 00:23:844~00:28:188 - Única parte do início em que você usa New Combos de uma forma diferente do resto... Melhor botar New Combo em 00:24:878 e 00:26:947, tirando de 00:27:568, e botando em 00:28:499~
  2. 02:20:946(8) - New Combo~ Mexi em ambos, thanks/
Lunatic
Malz mas vo pular essa xD

Todas
O músiquinha dificil de ler D:
Apaga todas as timing sections que estão no mesmo lugar~
Acho a SB muito parecida com Jehnovah... :/

Estrela pá tú /o/

Obs.: Malz a demora, eu não tava conseguindo baixar de jeito nenhum o_O
Doomsday
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And Back again: ;)

  1. Offset: 23,832 (Yours looks a bit early to me)
[EASY]

Yeah. This does feels a bit too hard for an easy. since you've set it so the spacing is so close together, it can make it awkward to make it easier. the fact that its so close together makes it hard to read. To be honest, I would recommend that you remap the easy with a slightly higher slider velocity, to make it clearer to read. Also, try to keep beats at least 1/1 away from each other (aka, if you put a beat on a white tick, try not to put a beat down until after the next white tick, if that made sense). Thats what people generally do in good easy difficulties.

Besides, BAT's will call you out on if since the easiest difficulty is over 3 stars, and this easy is 3.48 stars. Not that that matters to me.

Apart from that, nothing else bothered me.

[NORMAL]

Kinda like Easy, this feels pretty tough for a Normal. Again, through most of the map, the spacing is pretty cramped, which is awkward, and again, it makes some parts hard to read. I can't suggest much here unless you want to remap this too. You could always call it Normal+ if you really want to keep this.

02:11:842 (1,2) - having on slider after another like this can be tough to read for an inexperienced player (the kind that play normal difficulties). Maybe you could remove a repeat from both of these sliders? (And maybe you could put a beat down at 02:12:670. sounds like it would fit in well.)

[HARD]

Increase circle size by 1? Insane having a bigger circle size than Hard doesn't make that much sense :o

00:50:533 (2) - Make this slider shorter? It sounds like you made it a bit too long by accident.
03:47:523 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I found that this part was pretty odd. First up, I think this would work better if it used the spacing the rest of the map used. It can be awkward to read when its all bunched up like it is. Also, perhaps you could close the jump that comes in just after this bit? Its the only jump here, and it doesn't seem to be mapped to anything.

[INSANE]

Everything before 00:30:257 (8) - I see that you mapped 1/4 in this bit. Im not quite sure how to explain it actually, but it definately feels veeeery odd here. the rest of the intro after this bit works fine though. Maybe you could do something like that in the bit after this for the intro as well?

Some rough looking sliders, but nothing else bothered me too much.

Overall, its not too bad. Hard/Insane are generally fine, but Easy/Normal are a bit dodgy, mainly in the difficulty area. I would recommend remapping them with a slightly higher slider velocity to make them look cleaner for a start.
Diasios
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Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

  • • Delete "Demetori - Crazy Xenomorph (Dragvon) [Lunatic.osb"
    • The easiest difficulty must be below a 3-star difficulty level.
    • The mp3 you are using is a lot longer than the part which is mapped. Consider cropping it to reduce filesize.
[Easy]

  • • 02:15:980 (1) - End this slider here 02:16:808
    • 02:17:635 (3) - End this slider here 02:18:463
    • 02:19:291 (2) - End this slider here 02:20:118
[Lunatic]

  • • 00:23:637 (1) - Delete this slider and add a circle here 00:23:844
Nelsonjd
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Nelsonjd
Star for you =3 Nice beatmap <3
Hamuko
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Hamuko
sempre esqueço de dar star..q
depois eu talvez faça uma dificuldade pro map se vc qusier :3
rairiai dorgas manolo
Dragvon
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Dragvon
Okay, Mod Comments:

Doom:
SPOILER

Doomsday93 wrote:

And Back again: ;)

  1. Offset: 23,832 (Yours looks a bit early to me)I liked it, Thanks xD
[EASY]

Yeah. This does feels a bit too hard for an easy. since you've set it so the spacing is so close together, it can make it awkward to make it easier. the fact that its so close together makes it hard to read. To be honest, I would recommend that you remap the easy with a slightly higher slider velocity, to make it clearer to read. Also, try to keep beats at least 1/1 away from each other (aka, if you put a beat on a white tick, try not to put a beat down until after the next white tick, if that made sense). Thats what people generally do in good easy difficulties.

Besides, BAT's will call you out on if since the easiest difficulty is over 3 stars, and this easy is 3.48 stars. Not that that matters to me.

Apart from that, nothing else bothered me.

Okay, Will remap with a bit higher speed!

[NORMAL]

Kinda like Easy, this feels pretty tough for a Normal. Again, through most of the map, the spacing is pretty cramped, which is awkward, and again, it makes some parts hard to read. I can't suggest much here unless you want to remap this too. You could always call it Normal+ if you really want to keep this. Okay, i'll probably rename this later.

02:11:842 (1,2) - having on slider after another like this can be tough to read for an inexperienced player (the kind that play normal difficulties). Maybe you could remove a repeat from both of these sliders? (And maybe you could put a beat down at 02:12:670. sounds like it would fit in well.) Fixed

[HARD]

Increase circle size by 1? Insane having a bigger circle size than Hard doesn't make that much sense :o
Done.

00:50:533 (2) - Make this slider shorter? It sounds like you made it a bit too long by accident. Hmm i don't think so, recheck with your new offset if it still sounds weird
03:47:523 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I found that this part was pretty odd. First up, I think this would work better if it used the spacing the rest of the map used. It can be awkward to read when its all bunched up like it is. Also, perhaps you could close the jump that comes in just after this bit? Its the only jump here, and it doesn't seem to be mapped to anything.
Distance Snap was kinda weird here, i'll fix those close notes

[INSANE]

Everything before 00:30:257 (8) - I see that you mapped 1/4 in this bit. Im not quite sure how to explain it actually, but it definately feels veeeery odd here. the rest of the intro after this bit works fine though. Maybe you could do something like that in the bit after this for the intro as well?
Bookmarked, will remap this later, thanks :D!

Some rough looking sliders, but nothing else bothered me too much.

Overall, its not too bad. Hard/Insane are generally fine, but Easy/Normal are a bit dodgy, mainly in the difficulty area. I would recommend remapping them with a slightly higher slider velocity to make them look cleaner for a start.

xxxheroxxx:
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xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

  • • Delete "Demetori - Crazy Xenomorph (Dragvon) [Lunatic.osb" Fixed
    • The easiest difficulty must be below a 3-star difficulty level.     Oh boy, i'm trying to xD
    • The mp3 you are using is a lot longer than the part which is mapped. Consider cropping it to reduce filesize.
[Easy]

  • • 02:15:980 (1) - End this slider here 02:16:808
    • 02:17:635 (3) - End this slider here 02:18:463
    • 02:19:291 (2) - End this slider here 02:20:118
I've decided to stick with those sliders for now, i'll may change it after a full check on easy

[Lunatic]

  • • 00:23:637 (1) - Delete this slider and add a circle here 00:23:844
Hmm sorry, won't change this one x)
anonymous_old
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Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
Easy
No, no, no. You know what's retarded? Fat, stubby, slow kick sliders in an Easy difficulty. This isn't Easy. This is I can't map outside of Insane difficulty.

(I stopped playing half way through. Too many 1/2's. Too much clutter.)

I don't think this song really needs an easier difficulty than your current Normal.

Normal
Mess of notes. I really don't like this.

Make this shorter, please. Maybe two minutes long.

Hard
See points 2, 4, and 5 under Lunatic.

02:15:980 (1,5) - I like these sliders.
03:11:014 - Horrible. Bah. Don't make it so quiet, at least.
03:49:178 (1,2) - Nasty overlap. Move (1) over to the right. Yes, I noticed this while playing. Yes, it affected my playing. No, I'm not being a nazi. If I was being a nazi, I would point out that 03:52:075 (2,3,4) isn't evenly spaced.

Lunatic
Several things I disliked about this map:
  1. It's hard to read.
  2. The combo markers are all wrong.
  3. It's hard to read.
  4. It's not mapped to the end.
  5. The combo markers are all wrong.
You can fix both 1 and 3 at the same time by setting the OD to 9. 2 and 5 will take a while; 4 should be relatively easy.

00:47:832 (8,9,10) - This is REALLY ugly.

Other than that, I see no problems with this map, really.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Oi

[File]
Your file size is unrankable, the maximum file of your beatmap is 10MB (current 10,8MB)

[Easy]
*) This diff is very hard for new player
*) Place the object at blue tick is makes confusing for new player

00:27:763 (6) - Too short for easy diff
00:36:038 (5) - ^
00:45:556 (5) - ^
01:02:314 (4) - ^
01:15:969 (1) - ^
01:18:464 (5) - New combo?
01:18:877 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:20:119 (4) - New combo?
01:20:946 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:28:395 (1) - Move 1 grid up?
01:28:912 (1) - I think this is not fit to song, replace with slider? Maybe?
01:51:153 (5) - New combo?
01:51:566 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:52:808 (4) - New combo?
01:53:635 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:01:601 (1) - I think this is not fit to song, replace with slider? Maybe?
02:08:532 (5) - Make symetric?
02:15:153 (5) - Too short for easy diff
02:37:498 (5) - New combo, too long for easy diff

[Normal]
You better to check AIMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) right now) Because it's so many spacing error, jump are not suitable for Normal diff

00:24:038 (2) - Snap it to blue tick, it's really confuse
00:25:073 (6) - ^
00:26:107 (4) - ^
00:27:142 (8) - ^
00:28:383 (1) - ^
00:29:418 (5) - ^
00:30:452 (1) - ^
00:31:487 (5) - ^
00:33:349 (3) - ^
00:34:383 (1) - ^
00:35:418 (3) - ^
01:14:314 (2) - ^
01:18:877 (1) - Move new combo to 01:19:705 (3)?
01:20:946 (1) - Move new combo to 01:20:119 (4)?
03:47:523 (3) - New combo?

[Hard]
So FUN!!!!!

01:54:877 (3) - Stack with 01:54:049 (1)?
03:46:282 (1) - Remove new combo?
03:47:523 (3) - New combo?

[Lunatic]
The HP Drain, Overall Difficulty, and Circle Size is same as [Hard], make it diffrent?

01:52:808 (8) - New combo?
03:47:523 (5) - ^

Not bad
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Dragvon
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strager

strager wrote:

Easy
No, no, no. You know what's retarded? Fat, stubby, slow kick sliders in an Easy difficulty. This isn't Easy. This is I can't map outside of Insane difficulty.

(I stopped playing half way through. Too many 1/2's. Too much clutter.)

I don't think this song really needs an easier difficulty than your current Normal.
Indeed, the song itself don't "wanna be easy", i've asked for a guest easy difficult, i'll keep it for now while i'll fix it

Normal
Mess of notes. I really don't like this. Will fix the spacing later then

Make this shorter, please. Maybe two minutes long. Would the end of the easy fit?

Hard
See points 2, 4, and 5 under Lunatic.

02:15:980 (1,5) - I like these sliders. Heh i like them too :3 they look like neckties Dx
03:11:014 - Horrible. Bah. Don't make it so quiet, at least. I'm not so sure about this part, nothing to map >.>. Fixed volume.
03:49:178 (1,2) - Nasty overlap. Move (1) over to the right. Yes, I noticed this while playing. Yes, it affected my playing. No, I'm not being a nazi. If I was being a nazi, I would point out that 03:52:075 (2,3,4) isn't evenly spaced. Fixed~

Lunatic
Several things I disliked about this map:
  1. It's hard to read.
  2. The combo markers are all wrong.
  3. It's hard to read.
  4. It's not mapped to the end.
  5. The combo markers are all wrong.
You can fix both 1 and 3 at the same time by setting the OD to 9. 2 and 5 will take a while; 4 should be relatively easy. Hmm fixed OD, but if i extend it won't the score get too much high? Also, i'll try to fix the combo markers

00:47:832 (8,9,10) - This is REALLY ugly. Stacked them

Other than that, I see no problems with this map, really.

Leorda

Leorda wrote:

Oi

[File]
Your file size is unrankable, the maximum file of your beatmap is 10MB (current 10,8MB)
Hmm would that really be necessary? It's only 0,8 :3 i'll wait for an second opinion on this ^-^ (Btw, topic says: Filesize: 10466kb)
[Easy]*Done*
*) This diff is very hard for new player Yes, i'm trying to reduce the difficult >.<! I've even asked for a guest easy
*) Place the object at blue tick is makes confusing for new player As Lybydose said, "some parts of this song use a time signature that isn't supported in the editor" Some blue ticks sounds strange but they are supposed to fit x)

00:27:763 (6) - Too short for easy diff
00:36:038 (5) - ^
00:45:556 (5) - ^
01:02:314 (4) - ^
01:15:969 (1) - ^Fixed them, they were weird due to offset change
01:18:464 (5) - New combo?
01:18:877 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:20:119 (4) - New combo?
01:20:946 (1) - Remove new combo? Combos fixed
01:28:395 (1) - Move 1 grid up? Reallocated some notes
01:28:912 (1) - I think this is not fit to song, replace with slider? Maybe? It was supposed to be at 01:29:222, i extended it here to make it easier :3
01:51:153 (5) - New combo?
01:51:566 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:52:808 (4) - New combo?
01:53:635 (1) - Remove new combo?Combos fixed
02:01:601 (1) - I think this is not fit to song, replace with slider? Maybe? Similar to the last one :P
02:08:532 (5) - Make symetric?Is it better now?
02:15:153 (5) - Too short for easy diff Fixed
02:37:498 (5) - New combo, too long for easy diffdone

[Normal]*Done*
You better to check AIMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) right now) Because it's so many spacing error, jump are not suitable for Normal diff
I've recheck it

00:24:038 (2) - Snap it to blue tick, it's really confuse
00:25:073 (6) - ^
00:26:107 (4) - ^
00:27:142 (8) - ^
00:28:383 (1) - ^
00:29:418 (5) - ^
00:30:452 (1) - ^
00:31:487 (5) - ^
00:33:349 (3) - ^
00:34:383 (1) - ^
00:35:418 (3) - ^
01:14:314 (2) - ^ I've checked those, when i've changed the offset forgot to fix, thanks xD
01:18:877 (1) - Move new combo to 01:19:705 (3)?
01:20:946 (1) - Move new combo to 01:20:119 (4)?
03:47:523 (3) - New combo? Fixed those combos

[Hard]*Done*
So FUN!!!!!

01:54:877 (3) - Stack with 01:54:049 (1)? Hmm nice, thanks xD
03:46:282 (1) - Remove new combo?
03:47:523 (3) - New combo? Fits better, thanks!

[Lunatic] *Done*
The HP Drain, Overall Difficulty, and Circle Size is same as [Hard], make it diffrent? Circle Size was different, but Doom said it woulb be better this way, as for the HP Drain and OD, i'll change them =p

01:52:808 (8) - New combo?
03:47:523 (5) - ^
Both fixed!
Not bad
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Bittersweet
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Bittersweet
só umas coisitchas do easy~

Easy:
Eu colocaria isso como Easy+, pelo menos :o
(Frescura~) Deleta os timing section que são inúteis nessa diff (eles vem depois do mapa acabar) (eu disse que era frescura :o)
02:01:601 (1) - acho que esse spinner vai confundir os nubs~


Normal tá legal e o hard tá sexy pra cacete, cara *o* acho que não passo no lunatic nem com auto LOL

o fabb tinha razão, o mapa é foda, tu fez um trabalho legal pacas *o* /tia bitter orgulhosa do dragbibinha <3 *o*

(post zuado rlz)
Kurai
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Kurai
Hi~ Sorry for the late ...
And sory again, but I like the map but I that's not fun to map an easy on. :(

[Easy]
01:29:222 (1) - Move 3/4 later and reduce by 3/4
02:01:601 (1) - ^

If you want to have 3.00 star, I advice you to do all of that :<
00:35:831 (4) - Remove and move 00:36:038 (5) 1/2 earlier and add 2 reverse
00:45:349 (2) - ^ with 00:45:556 (3)
00:53:625 (2) - ^ with 00:53:832 (3)
00:49:383 (2) - Remove
00:55:900 (2) - Remove and move 00:56:107 (3) 1/2 earlier and add a reverse
00:57:969 (2) - ^ with 00:58:176 (3)
01:00:038 (2) - ^ with 01:00:245 (3)
01:02:107 (2) - Remove and move 01:02:314 (3) 1/2 earlier and add 2 reverse
00:50:935 (3) - Remove 1 reverse
01:23:429 (1) - Remove 1 reverse
01:24:257 (2) - ^
01:26:740 (1) - ^
01:27:567 (2) - ^
01:39:567 (3) - Remove and add circle
01:40:808 (2) - ^
01:42:360 (2) - Remove
01:43:601 (3) - ^
01:44:843 (2) - ^
01:46:084 (4) - ^
01:56:118 (1) - Remove 1 reverse
01:56:946 (2) - ^
01:59:429 (1) - ^
02:00:256 (2) - ^
02:09:360 (1) - ^
02:10:187 (2) - ^
02:11:015 (3) - ^
02:20:946 (4) - Reduce by 1/2
02:27:566 (2) - ^
02:34:187 (2) - ^
02:39:153 (1) - Remove 1 reverse
02:39:980 (1) - ^
02:40:808 (1) - ^
02:41:635 (1) - Remove and add circle


If you do all of that, 3.00 Star o/

[Normal]
00:46:176 (1) - Move 1/2 later and reduce by 1/2

[Hard]
01:38:636 (2) - Move on the blue tick
01:39:843 (7) - ^
01:41:084 (5) - ^
01:47:291 (5) - ^

[Lunatic]
Fine, I Think...

[General]
I Think you must change The Name of Easy to Normal, Normal to Hard, Hard to Lunatic, Lunatic to Extra
Dragvon
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Kurai

Kurai_ wrote:

Hi~ Sorry for the late ...
And sory again, but I like the map but I that's not fun to map an easy on. :( Yea i know xD!

[Easy]
01:29:222 (1) - Move 3/4 later and reduce by 3/4
02:01:601 (1) - ^ Both fixed

If you want to have 3.00 star, I advice you to do all of that :<
00:35:831 (4) - Remove and move 00:36:038 (5) 1/2 earlier and add 2 reverse
00:45:349 (2) - ^ with 00:45:556 (3)
00:53:625 (2) - ^ with 00:53:832 (3) Done all
00:49:383 (2) - Remove Done
00:55:900 (2) - Remove and move 00:56:107 (3) 1/2 earlier and add a reverse
00:57:969 (2) - ^ with 00:58:176 (3)
01:00:038 (2) - ^ with 01:00:245 (3) Done all
01:02:107 (2) - Remove and move 01:02:314 (3) 1/2 earlier and add 2 reverse Fixed
00:50:935 (3) - Remove 1 reverse Fixed
01:23:429 (1) - Remove 1 reverse
01:24:257 (2) - ^
01:26:740 (1) - ^
01:27:567 (2) - ^ All fixed
01:39:567 (3) - Remove and add circle
01:40:808 (2) - ^ Fixed
01:42:360 (2) - Remove
01:43:601 (3) - ^
01:44:843 (2) - ^
01:46:084 (4) - ^ All done
01:56:118 (1) - Remove 1 reverse
01:56:946 (2) - ^
01:59:429 (1) - ^
02:00:256 (2) - ^
02:09:360 (1) - ^
02:10:187 (2) - ^
02:11:015 (3) - ^All done
02:20:946 (4) - Reduce by 1/2
02:27:566 (2) - ^
02:34:187 (2) - ^ Done
02:39:153 (1) - Remove 1 reverse
02:39:980 (1) - ^
02:40:808 (1) - ^
02:41:635 (1) - Remove and add circle All done! Thanks a lot xD!


If you do all of that, 3.00 Star o/ WOOT love ya <3

[Normal]
00:46:176 (1) - Move 1/2 later and reduce by 1/2 Fixed

[Hard]
01:38:636 (2) - Move on the blue tick
01:39:843 (7) - ^
01:41:084 (5) - ^
01:47:291 (5) - ^ All done

[Lunatic]
Fine, I Think...

[General]
I Think you must change The Name of Easy to Normal, Normal to Hard, Hard to Lunatic, Lunatic to Extra Done
Yay! Thanks xD
Kurai
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No problem ^____^
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