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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年2月10日 at 17:18:58

Artist: WATANABE KAZUHIRO
Title: Are One
Source: 咎狗の血 True Blood
Tags: ed ending TV Size Togainu no chi bl yaoi boys love visual novel ed ps2 shiki akira [_Abhor_] Abhor Kyshiro
BPM: 64
Filesize: 2996kb
Play Time: 01:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. Abhoregraz's Collab Normal (1.52 stars, 94 notes)
  2. Hard (2.75 stars, 145 notes)
  3. Kyshiro's Insane (3.41 stars, 203 notes)
Download: WATANABE KAZUHIRO - Are One
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 7th ranked Map. Genre Suggestion: Video Game; English

Also the 5th map of my BL/Yaoi Beatmap Project.
As I promised, more BL and Yaoi maps are coming.

I keep the sentence by Konei in mind: "Pls never give up." This sentence makes me go on mapping for BL and yaoi.


Togainu no Chi PS2 ShikiXAkira Ending Theme Song.

But in your eyes, Your eyes ,The light still shines.
In your heart, Your heart, The love alive.
Even if everything fade to black,
Forever we are one.

其实我是Rin X Akia党, 但是官方又不给曲子,只好做这个啦。 >w<
其实Shiki X Akira也挺感人的 只是True End不爽啊,为什么不能修成正果[其实也算是修成正果了吧],呜呜呜。
我是真想把四喜放在BG里,但是一直没找到合适的啊呜呜

Bubbled by HabiHolic
Ranked by appleeaterx
Thank you!

From Togainu no Chi PS2 edition. Shiki X Akira True End.
Metadata from this page: http://www.togainu.com/tb/ A picture about mtadata: http://puu.sh/fzOW3/835518bd1c.png (from official website)
Also thanks for appleeaterx and Satellite for metadata assistance!

Abhoregraz's Collab Normal by me and [ Abhor ]
Hard by me
Kyshiro's Insane by Kyshiro
pro Kyshiro! xD
pkhg
as you request o/

[General]
I'm not sure if this is really a 192kbps .mp3 file, I can hear distortions or something during the chorus
Your BG needs to be 16:9 or 4:3

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Although 1366x768 (16:9) is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 or 16:9 should also work reasonably well (for example, 800x600 or 852x480). Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen) or upscaling (resized image to fill the whole screen).
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_criteria
02:09:840 - delete greenline

[Collab Normal]

00:52:965 (1) - whistle on tail to match the piano
00:58:121 (2,3) - move (2) to x472 y168, (3) to x430 y242 and move (3)'s last slider point to x293 y209
01:13:121 (1) - nc not need, remove
01:29:996 (1) - delete this because its too near to the previous spinner and thats unrankable -> t/241019
01:55:778 (1) - remove nc

[Hard]

00:43:590 (3) - make it more symmetric
185,310,43590,2,0,B|183:282|161:254|161:254|63:242,1,160.99999508667,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:06:090 (4) - ^
146,188,66090,2,0,B|201:160|256:190|256:190|311:160|366:188,1,230,4|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
01:07:965 (1) - symmetry ;w;
01:49:918 (2) - move to x48 y156
01:59:528 (5) - add nc
02:07:028 (2) - nc maybe?

Good luck :D
tutuhaha
摸摸大_(:зゝ∠)_
22:08 Regraz: 2ha姐啊 qwq
22:08 tutuhaha: 啥_(:зゝ∠)_
22:08 Regraz: :3 可不可以帮我摸一个diff?
22:08 tutuhaha: 可以呀_(:зゝ∠)_
22:08 *Regraz is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/600551 Watanabekazuhiro - Are One]
22:09 Regraz: 那就多谢啦 xD
22:09 Regraz: Hard
22:09 Regraz: :3
22:10 tutuhaha: 哇哦BG赞!
22:10 Regraz: xD
22:10 Regraz: Shiki有点崩
22:16 tutuhaha: 介不介意我直接irc
22:16 tutuhaha: 你可以不用回就让我打个爽就行了
22:16 tutuhaha: 开个txtcopy复制n麻烦_(:зゝ∠)_..........
22:16 tutuhaha: 总而言之我现在开始了你不要管我!!不要管我!!!!!!!!
22:17 Regraz: 好!
22:17 tutuhaha: 首先你去查一下rule,在我还在做少年同盟的op的时候欧大力和我说20%没map是unrank的而你这张图是从
22:17 tutuhaha: 23.3%这里开始map的
22:17 tutuhaha: 最好去查一下
22:20 Regraz: 唔
22:20 Regraz: 好的
22:20 tutuhaha: 00:30:465 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 不知道是人声的问题还是什么的问题总而言之这段节奏肯定有问题
22:21 tutuhaha: 00:31:871 (2) - 00:35:621 (2) - 00:39:371 (2) - 最干脆利落的解决办法就是把这几个删了
22:21 tutuhaha: 00:43:121 (2) - 哦还有这个
22:22 tutuhaha: 00:30:465 (1) - 00:37:965 (1) - 然后这两个绝对不是1/4.....自己拉1/3啊1/6啊1/8啊调一下好了_(:зゝ∠)_..
22:23 Regraz: 那个人声是1/3 和3/4
22:23 Regraz: ;w;
22:23 tutuhaha: _(:зゝ∠)_总而言之我讨厌这种奇奇怪怪的人声简直丧病不能忍
22:24 Regraz: 那我试试删掉那几个
22:24 Regraz: \恩。。。
22:24 tutuhaha: 01:18:981 (5,1) - 单纯的不喜欢这种就碰一下下的摆法_(:зゝ∠)_
22:25 Regraz: 好
22:25 Regraz: 叠起来如何?、
22:26 tutuhaha: 01:41:715 (1,2,3) - 因为前面同样节奏的你都没跳然后这里突然这么一个大跳真的灰常奇怪
22:26 tutuhaha: 关键是还是个大跳
22:26 Regraz: 恩。。
22:28 tutuhaha: 01:44:528 (1) - flow的话我更喜欢这种
22:28 tutuhaha: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2543335
22:28 tutuhaha: 这个是乱拉的^
22:28 tutuhaha: 不过flow就差不多那样
22:29 Regraz: 好,我调节一下这里的flow
22:29 tutuhaha: 01:44:996 (3,1) - 就是这里尽量搞个大跳
22:30 Regraz: 恩
22:30 tutuhaha: 01:49:215 (1,2,3) - 这里不是搞了个跳么
22:30 tutuhaha: 01:56:715 (1,2,3) - 所以这里也搞个吧
22:30 tutuhaha: 02:02:340 (1,2,3) - 这个可以比前面的稍微大一点
22:31 Regraz: 好
22:31 tutuhaha: 02:02:574 (2,3) - 然后flow大概搞成这里ctrl+g这样
22:31 Regraz: dui
22:31 tutuhaha: 然后最后的那个绿线删掉
22:31 tutuhaha: 没啦!
ZZHBOY
[General]
  1. combo1的颜色好难看啊 而且combo2也是蓝色的可以考虑换个明亮一点的颜色
  2. bpm这么低 ar4感觉就可以了 hard的ar也可以适当弄低一点
[Normal]
  1. 00:31:871 (2,2) - 这两个圈感觉可以去掉啊 既没有琴音前一个滑条也没跟vocal感觉有点突兀 开头节奏可以稀疏一点
  2. 00:36:090 (3,1) - 移开点吧 滑条尾碰到了
  3. 01:13:121 (1) - 去掉nc 不要单物件一combo
  4. 01:29:996 (1) - 去掉 最低难度不要转盘后面马上就放note
  5. 01:30:465 - 怎么还变速orz
  6. 01:56:481 (2) - 位置有点不好 往下放点吧像这样 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2546107
  7. 02:09:840 - useless timepoint
[Hard]
  1. 01:17:340 (4) - 建议拆开把01:17:809 - 这个鼓声map到
  2. 01:20:856 - 最高难度了建议吧这里的音也map上
  3. 01:24:371 (3) - 感觉这个换成一个滑条更合曲
  4. 01:50:621 (4) - 怎么这里忽然又按ds摆了 建议也放远点和前面一样
  5. 01:53:199 - 这里的音也建议map出来
美丽
Crystal
Hi!

[Info]
  1. Red: Unrankable Issues
  2. Bold: Highly Recommended
  3. Black: Personal Suggestions

[General]
  1. 考虑把那个深蓝色的combo改掉 全黑bg之后啥也看不到了

[Hard]
  1. HP,OD 5.3 可能更好点 5.8接近于6了,有点中等bpm(120~180)的hard的感觉
  2. 00:41:715 (1,3) - 这两个好像没有对称? 我ctrl+g前面那个发现和后面的重合不了
  3. 01:07:496 (5) - 256|284? 之前这个没放在x=256也就是中线上
  4. 01:15:465 (1,2,3,4) - 会不会有点奇怪?间距问题.
  5. 01:38:903 (3,4) - 试试这样 http://puu.sh/eDOt9/ef6a99e519.jpg
  6. 01:41:246 (6,1) - 这样摆有点怪,因为你的排版太紧密了我也没有什么好的主意 可以试试这样 http://puu.sh/eDOCz/19afbddecc.jpg
  7. 01:42:418 (2) - 124|192? 这里突然变大间距是为什么? ;w;
  8. 01:49:215 (1,2) - blanket
  9. 02:07:028 (2,3,4,1) - 和前面的分开点比较好(或者stack1和2) 和你这图的style比较搭配

[Normal]
  1. OD3.7, AR4.4, HP3.5如果你想用小数的话.. 原先的对于这个bpm有点高了
  2. 00:41:715 (1,2,3) - 怎么突然不对称了;w; 还是和前面的一样比较好
  3. 01:13:121 (1) - 去掉NC
  4. 01:29:996 (1) - 可能你得去掉这个note,因为normal的转盘rule
  5. 01:31:637 (2,3) - 和前面的滑条搭配起来看不太organized,建议这样 http://puu.sh/eDPkL/ce35bd385b.jpg (2在244|172, 3在220|220) 不要忘记调整后面的物件
  6. 01:37:028 (5,6,1) - 这样是不是更好看一点? http://puu.sh/eDPuP/9afe0d1eee.jpg
  7. 01:56:715 (1,4) - 对调NC
  8. 02:07:731 (2) - normal节奏比hard密好像不太好;w; 可以去掉这个 或者在hard加上一个 (如果你去掉这里的 建议这么摆 http://puu.sh/eDPHx/7a96b1e65a.jpg&#41;

good luck!
Faan
Normal:
00:58:590 (3) - move to 430,242? if so 00:58:121 (2) - can move to 472,168
02:07:731 (2) - DS issue
00:31:871 (2) - 256,120 ish
00:35:621 (2) - 256 340 ish
00:39:371 (2) - 256, 145
01:00:465 (1) - starting here everything suddenly became 1.0x
01:24:840 (3,4) - OCD alert: blanket little off. 1:01:24:840 (3) - rotate Anti 2° round selection or 2: 01:26:246 (4) - move to around 171,288ish
01:29:996 (1) - move?
01:34:215 (1,2,3) - 2covers more of 1 than 3,
01:44:762 (5) - DS
01:52:965 (1) - move a little to the left if you want a somewhat better flowish thing, or just look better

btw since this is collab I think that is the reason why the first bit is 1.2x and later changes into 1.0x?

Hard:
00:48:746 (3) - 245,92
01:10:543 (5) - 256,81
01:16:871 (2,3,4) - somewhat uncomfortable about this :/
01:43:356 (4) - 282,312 or somwhere, it looks better considering distance between stuff
01:49:215 (1,2) - can make better blanket but OCD
02:01:871 (4) - 127,142 same reason as ^ before ^

01:58:590 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't look square to me but probably me or intentional :/
l1mi
Dont even consider giving kudosu for this. =)


Easy difficulty

Just some minor cosmetic..

00:32:340 (3) - Previous is 1.14 but I think you can adjust it to 1.2
00:36:090 (3) - -"-

01:52:965 (1) - Maybe move this slider slightly left? I think the curve feels better to play then.

Hard difficulty

Im "affraid" I cant find anything wrong at all.

Both diffs are nice and clean and it fit the players intended to play it. However, as you already know the highest difficulty isnt very high and it exclude alot of players. (just saying the obvious). Is it possible to make add a harder difficulty?
Lobelia

Faan wrote:

Normal:
00:58:590 (3) - move to 430,242? if so 00:58:121 (2) - can move to 472,168
02:07:731 (2) - DS issue
00:31:871 (2) - 256,120 ish
00:35:621 (2) - 256 340 ish
00:39:371 (2) - 256, 145
01:00:465 (1) - starting here everything suddenly became 1.0x
01:24:840 (3,4) - OCD alert: blanket little off. 1:01:24:840 (3) - rotate Anti 2° round selection or 2: 01:26:246 (4) - move to around 171,288ish
01:29:996 (1) - move?
01:34:215 (1,2,3) - 2covers more of 1 than 3,
01:44:762 (5) - DS
01:52:965 (1) - move a little to the left if you want a somewhat better flowish thing, or just look better

btw since this is collab I think that is the reason why the first bit is 1.2x and later changes into 1.0x?Thanks to your advice!!!I have forgotten change the DS,i will change and adjust.....
Lobelia
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scanter
hey. as your request

General
  1. BG size seems to unrankable factor. I highly recommend changing the BG size 4:3 or 16:9 ratio.
  2. what about to add muted sliderslide on? I think now slider noise isn't fit well about this song imo.
Collab Normal
  1. 00:36:090 (3) - eh. the distance?
  2. 01:13:121 (1) - I don't think it needs to NC. it doesn't have particular characteristic.
  3. 01:29:996 (1) - I highly recommend clear this note. interval of between next spinner and note is really short. I don't think players can playing well this.
  4. 01:54:840 (1,1) - same opinion as 01:13:121 (1)
  5. 01:56:481 (2) - it is much better to play if you change this to below
  6. 02:07:731 (2) - this circle one isn't supported by anything. like pattern and music itself.
  7. 02:09:840 - unused timing point.
Hard
  1. 00:45:465 (1,2) - what about just S curve? now isn't match up well song imo.
  2. 01:06:090 (4) - this blanket can improve more pro
  3. 01:26:715 - what about turn down volume like 15%? I'm sure it would be better to present this hush part.
  4. 01:49:918 (2) - same opinion as 01:06:090 (4)
  5. 02:01:871 (4) - I think change this 1/4 slider to just one circle much better to follow vocals.
  6. 02:09:840 - unused timing point
GL anyway ;)
Topic Starter
Mafumafu

Faan wrote:

Normal:
00:58:590 (3) - move to 430,242? if so 00:58:121 (2) - can move to 472,168
02:07:731 (2) - DS issue
00:31:871 (2) - 256,120 ish
00:35:621 (2) - 256 340 ish
00:39:371 (2) - 256, 145
01:00:465 (1) - starting here everything suddenly became 1.0x
01:24:840 (3,4) - OCD alert: blanket little off. 1:01:24:840 (3) - rotate Anti 2° round selection or 2: 01:26:246 (4) - move to around 171,288ish
01:29:996 (1) - move?
01:34:215 (1,2,3) - 2covers more of 1 than 3,
01:44:762 (5) - DS
01:52:965 (1) - move a little to the left if you want a somewhat better flowish thing, or just look better

btw since this is collab I think that is the reason why the first bit is 1.2x and later changes into 1.0x?

Hard:
00:48:746 (3) - 245,92
01:10:543 (5) - 256,81
01:16:871 (2,3,4) - somewhat uncomfortable about this :/
01:43:356 (4) - 282,312 or somwhere, it looks better considering distance between stuff
01:49:215 (1,2) - can make better blanket but OCD
02:01:871 (4) - 127,142 same reason as ^ before ^

01:58:590 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't look square to me but probably me or intentional :/
Adjusted all the snap and ds issue! :3 Re-arranged the notes, thank you!

pkhg wrote:

as you request o/

[General]
I'm not sure if this is really a 192kbps .mp3 file, I can hear distortions or something during the chorus I'll try to find a better one.
Your BG needs to be 16:9 or 4:3

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Although 1366x768 (16:9) is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 or 16:9 should also work reasonably well (for example, 800x600 or 852x480). Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen) or upscaling (resized image to fill the whole screen).
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_criteria
02:09:840 - delete greenline

[Hard]

00:43:590 (3) - make it more symmetric
185,310,43590,2,0,B|183:282|161:254|161:254|63:242,1,160.99999508667,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:06:090 (4) - ^
146,188,66090,2,0,B|201:160|256:190|256:190|311:160|366:188,1,230,4|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
01:07:965 (1) - symmetry ;w;
01:49:918 (2) - move to x48 y156
01:59:528 (5) - add nc I guess it doesnt hurt ;w;
02:07:028 (2) - nc maybe? ^

Good luck :D
Thank you! No reply=fixed

To ZZH, Crystal, scanter: ALL FIXED! Thank you!
AIR
hi
[Collab Normal]
  1. 00:49:215 (1) - 向外凸出的话看起来比较顺些:3
  2. 00:52:028 (2) - 比较轻,可以去掉whistle
  3. 00:58:121 (2) - whistle移到后面白线
  4. 01:11:715 (1,3) - 头部finish?
[Hard]
  1. 00:43:121 (2) - 可以围一下
  2. 02:06:559 (1,1) - 玩的时候怪怪的,试下两个1调位置
有点短;w;
gl
Topic Starter
Mafumafu

AIR wrote:

hi hi! >w<
[Collab Normal]
  1. 00:49:215 (1) - 向外凸出的话看起来比较顺些:3
  2. 00:52:028 (2) - 比较轻,可以去掉whistle
  3. 00:58:121 (2) - whistle移到后面白线 这里想跟钢琴
  4. 01:11:715 (1,3) - 头部finish? 这段音效重做了一下
[Hard]
  1. 00:43:121 (2) - 可以围一下 还是保留现在的吧
  2. 02:06:559 (1,1) - 玩的时候怪怪的,试下两个1调位置 那我就叠起来好了
有点短;w;
gl
多谢啦! >w<
I also changed Abhor's part under his admission.
Nathan
From queue, not much to mod here :c

[Collab Normal]

  • Nothing here for me :c
[Hard]
  1. 00:51:090 (3) - NC?
  2. 01:33:278 (6,7) - Ctrl+J? May have to change 01:32:340 (5) though
  3. 01:44:996 (3) - Could change this to blanket the tail with 01:45:465 (1)
  4. 01:58:590 (1,2,3,4) - Could move this square to put 01:59:059 (3) on top of 02:00:231 (8)
  5. 01:59:528 (5) - NC?
Topic Starter
Mafumafu
OK all updated and changed the MP3.
Now ready for BAT!
SoGa
Sry Late , As Request
[General]

  1. 来个slider-slide怎样。。
  2. Naziziziziiii

[Collab Normal]
  1. 00:41:430 (3,3) - can we stack this ? 即使自己不是强迫症还是看不下去了
  2. 01:10:024 (3) - 倾斜点可能会顺点
  3. 01:14:242 我觉得这根绿线真的不怎么有用
  4. 01:17:055 (3,5) - 咱们能stack好这个吗 .-.
  5. 01:19:399 (1,2,3,4) - i would prefer this one instead,it is more smooth than the one u have right now ,Maybe..
  6. 01:43:774 (4,5,1) - 其实 后面那个(1)我不怎么建议这样摆
  7. 01:48:462 (5) - Ctrl G怎样?
  8. 01:53:149 Delete
  9. 01:53:383 Delete
  10. 01:11:899 (1,1) - 关于这个,可能低bpm的话大丈夫吧,嘉文好像说过nm后转盘要空一拍,你问问其他人
[Hard]
  1. 00:50:336 (2,3) - how about this
  2. 01:53:149 Delete
  3. 01:53:383 Delete
End.Nazi SoGa
Topic Starter
Mafumafu

SoGa wrote:

Sry Late , As Request
[General]

  1. 来个slider-slide怎样。。
  2. Naziziziziiii

[Collab Normal]
  1. 00:41:430 (3,3) - can we stack this ? 即使自己不是强迫症还是看不下去了
  2. 01:10:024 (3) - 倾斜点可能会顺点
  3. 01:14:242 我觉得这根绿线真的不怎么有用
  4. 01:17:055 (3,5) - 咱们能stack好这个吗 .-.
  5. 01:19:399 (1,2,3,4) - i would prefer this one instead,it is more smooth than the one u have right now ,Maybe.. 特意做的直slider,为了和后面的4相匹配
  6. 01:43:774 (4,5,1) - 其实 后面那个(1)我不怎么建议这样摆 改了下Nazi
  7. 01:48:462 (5) - Ctrl G怎样?
  8. 01:53:149 Delete 这两个删了的话喷泉就没了
  9. 01:53:383 Delete
  10. 01:11:899 (1,1) - 关于这个,可能低bpm的话大丈夫吧,嘉文好像说过nm后转盘要空一拍,你问问其他人
[Hard]
  1. 00:50:336 (2,3) - how about this
  2. 01:53:149 Delete 同Normal
  3. 01:53:383 Delete
其他的都改啦!
谢谢! :)

End.Nazi SoGa
Kyouren
Wow, fast :o
Topic Starter
Mafumafu

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Wow, fast :o
haha
Kyshiro
My somewhat easy insane
Kyshiro's Insane
osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 74711
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4
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Title:Are One
TitleUnicode:Are One
Artist:5
ArtistUnicode:5
Creator:Regraz
Version:Kyshiro's Insane
Source:咎狗の血 True Blood
Tags:ed TV Size Togainu no chi bl yaoi boys love visual novel ed ps2 shiki akira [_Abhor_] Abhor
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OverallDifficulty:8
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247,233,87602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
361,189,87836,2,0,L|459:201,1,87.7500003347397
189,295,88305,2,0,L|91:283,1,87.7500003347397
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305,196,89477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,82,89711,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,144,89945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,258,90179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,371,90414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
339,314,90649,6,0,P|367:232|332:146,1,175.500000669479
450,335,91352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,232,91586,2,0,L|151:223,1,87.7500003347397
17,337,92055,2,0,L|104:328,1,87.7500003347397
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321,308,93695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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93,47,95336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
129,164,95570,1,0,0:0:0:0:
7,141,95805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
211,77,96039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
129,164,96274,6,0,L|121:257,1,87.7500003347397
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196,328,97211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,161,97445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,253,97680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
439,107,97914,1,0,0:0:0:0:
439,107,98031,1,0,0:0:0:0:
439,107,98149,6,0,P|385:57|277:65,1,175.500000669479
157,240,98852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
66,157,99086,2,0,P|53:105|59:68,1,87.7500003347397
257,207,99555,2,0,P|261:250|248:292,1,87.7500003347397
175,121,100024,5,0,0:0:0:0:
168,325,100258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,230,100492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,221,100727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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211,175,104242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,53,104477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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300,241,104945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,280,105179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,313,105414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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49,181,109399,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,109633,12,0,111742,0:0:0:0:
289,295,112211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,255,112445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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364,192,113149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Mafumafu
Updated! Thank u Kyshiro
smallboat
Check your diff by Regraz's In-game

[Kyshiro's Insane]

Green line crooked off (1ms) :01:14:242 and 01:14:711

01:22:680 (6) - Use a ctrl+g will flow better I think.
01:53:149 (5) - Sounds like is a normal-finish default hitsound,also the sampleset can remove drum to "Auto" ?
Narcissu
腐的不行……

01:14:477 - 建議的音樂預覽位置,保證聽清楚人聲

[insane]

00:30:473 - delete blue link ……

00:53:149 (1,2) - blanket better

Kyshiro
Fixed all except the CTRL+G, the sudden change in flow fits the music here
Nozhomi
Heyo~ finally here, but quick mod because I can't find much problems on these diffs ^^'

- Normal Collab :
  1. Check AiMod some spacing are off. It should be constant !
  2. 00:26:899 (1,2,3) - Maybe try to align then, it looks better.
    00:56:899 (1) - Move slider end to 336:96 to get a real symetric one (do same for 00:58:774 (3) - ).
  3. 01:39:321 (2,3,4) - Maybe try to align them for a better look.
- Hard
  1. 01:32:289 (4,5) - Blanket a little off.
- Kyshiro's Insane :
  1. 00:29:008 (2) - Maybe this jump is a little too big (3.50x fit better imo but you can ignore this if you want.

GL o/
Mukyu~
Topic Starter
Mafumafu

Nozhomi wrote:

Heyo~ finally here, but quick mod because I can't find much problems on these diffs ^^'

[notice]- Normal Collab :
  1. Check AiMod some spacing are off. It should be constant !
  2. 00:26:899 (1,2,3) - Maybe try to align then, it looks better.
    00:56:899 (1) - Move slider end to 336:96 to get a real symetric one (do same for 00:58:774 (3) - ). Trying to do t..Ah I am poor at nazi issues :3
  3. 01:39:321 (2,3,4) - Maybe try to align them for a better look.
- Hard
  1. 01:32:289 (4,5) - Blanket a little off.
GL o/
Mukyu~
Others are all fixed!
Starfy
As Regraz's request :3

[Kyshiro's Insane]
01:00:649 (1,2) - blanket can be better
01:21:274 (1,2,3,4) - the pattern is a bit of weird in this melody imo
01:31:352 (2) - humm look so far
01:42:602 (2,3,4) - as well, not really feeling good when playing here
HabiHolic
Hi :3

[Collab Normal]

  1. 00:39:086 - add whistle please.
  2. 00:47:993 (3) - this note don't need imo. delete here
  3. 01:19:399 (1) - why this another spacing? Fixed please
[Hard]

  1. 00:51:274 (4) - this is very high jump so Ctrl+G please.
  2. 01:26:899 (1) - add finish on the head.
[Kyshiro's Insane]

  1. 01:53:149 (5) - i think this only finish sound batter. so delete clap please.
nice map. call me back
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